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The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 59899
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41. Epilogue

Well, it's been 9 years since this story completed so I'm not sure you're even around now to read this.  Anyway, I saw from the comments that you really stirred up a hornets next with the rabid E/B fanbase LMAO! Two things for them: 1) this is FICTION, people! 2) stop takin' everything so seriously LOL!  

It was actually quite an excitin' story with lots of unexpected twists and turns. I enjoyed it very much so thanks for writin' it and keepin' it up for us to find!

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 666]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 232176
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

What a relief to have Bella and the girls safe! I'm most lookin' forward to Einarr's reaction to this entire turn of events when he gets home LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

What a relief to have Bella and the girls safe! I'm most lookin' forward to Einarr's reaction to this entire turn of events when he gets home LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Heart poundin' relief to finally have Bella and the girls safe! Aside from Bella and Edvard's weddin', I'm most lookin' forward to Einarr's reaction to this entire turn of events when he gets home LOL!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Nikky and I wrote a oneshot for this Awesome banner that was made
by, Caitlin Beresford in a contest, where it was awarded 3rd place.
Here is the contest info: http://battleofthebannerartist.blogspot.com/

 

 

Bella learns after her mother's death that she is not a legal citizen.  Needing to find a way to stay in the USA, she asks her childhood, best friend's, brother, to be her husband.  What starts as a proposal of need, quickly changes. What happens when those changes cause ripples in the lives of Bella and Edward?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18021 Read Count: 9185
[Report This] Published: 05 Apr 2014 Updated: 05 Apr 2014
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thoroughly enjoyed this story! Bella and Edward were, of course, wonderful to watch fall in love so quickly. Alice's attitude was completely different. I swear that girl has a screw loose, otherwise you'd never know she came from such a lovin' home! Very glad Jasper saw the real Alice in time LOL!

Summary:

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Dancing with the Devil cost Bella a piece of her soul. Will she earn her redemption? Or be lost forever. Sequel to Carlisle's Gift.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48344 Read Count: 27651
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2015 Updated: 17 Dec 2019
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Garrett's story is so heartbreakin', especially as I'm sure it happens in RL all too often...fuckin' drug addicts!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Garrett's story is so heartbreakin', especially as I'm sure it happens in RL all too often...fuckin' drug addicts!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Garrett's story is so heartbreakin', especially as I'm sure it happens in RL all too often...fuckin' drug addicts!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Garrett's story is so heartbreakin', especially as I'm sure it happens in RL all too often...fuckin' drug addicts!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Well, Jasper and Garrett wanted Bella to help find their mole...she bloody well did, more's the pity!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

This group needs a staff psychiatrist 'cause Bella needs help and none of them is qualified! At least they are safe for the moment...I hope!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Bella was probably right to confront Leah by herself, knowin' death was the only way out for her poor, deluded, former best friend *sigh!* Hopefully, Edward gets to her before her shoulder bleeds out!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Carlisle's legacy is gonna haunt Bella for the rest of her life, damn his soul to hell! The best therapist in the world would have a hard time soothin' her soul so I don't hold out much hope for Leah when they find her *sigh!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh, I like this Garrett character! Any chance we'll see some of his story?



Author's Response:

For sure! 

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Aw, hell! There's not enough bleach in the world to wipe those movie scenes out of the guys' heads...especially Edward's! And I hope they find and shut down that rat real soon!

Summary:

Bound and United

 

Bound and United is the third installment of the Bound Series.  It continues the story of Don Edward and Donna Bella as they fight with their most evil villian yet.  Will they be able to fight death and be joined once more or will they be forever torn apart from each other?

 

Part 3 in the Bound Series

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76085 Read Count: 157268
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Jan 2017
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Just what they both needed after goin' without for so long *woo hoo!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Damn shame that little video couldn't be put up on YouTube...that woulda been fuckin' epic LMAO!

ps: who the hell is that hunk you used for the Dakota Mills, the crane operator *woooeeeee!*



Author's Response:

Joshua Sarri is my Dakota Mills.  I would love to see it as well.  It was a fun chapter to write. 

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The power of love is undeniably strong between Edward and Bella! Got all my fingers and toes crossed they get out of this mess!

And I'm so pleased you were gently coerced to continue this wonderful trilogy, Clo darlin'!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

No rest for the wicked LOL! And Edward is deliciously wicked where Bella's concerned. Nice to have the cocky bastard back in action!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

OMG! I FLUV Esme's customized '57 Chevy golf cart...I WANT one, too!!!

As for Edward's sudden drought, I can't believe neither he nor Bella can think of a safe alternative! Oral ain't gonna tear any stitches, now, is it? And What about reverse cowgirl? Edward won't be reachin' UP to grab her boobs for that one LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Dayum! Carlisle is a beast when he's pissed, as Roberto found out to his detriment *wicked evil witchy cackle!* So glad to have the girls back with their mates where they belong!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

If anyone deserves a chance at true love, it's Maria! So happy she got it! And how gorgeous is that house Edward and Bella gave Alec and Maggie?!?! My kinda house LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 01 May 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Huge sigh of relief havin' Edward awake, havin' escaped from the claws of the devil himself LOL! And for our heroes finally puttin' two and two together to find Bella and Elizabeth *fist bump!* Now to go get 'em and make Roberto pay in blood!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Whoa, Nelly! Carlisle just went up a notch or two on my hotness meter LOL! I'm so ready for Roberto to get his ass handed to him...literally!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OMG! That manip of Edward in the hospital bed had me snotsobbin'! Good news is that Edward made it through the surgery...bad news is Roberto has Bella and Elizabeth so I hope someone remembers their trackers ASAP!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm proud of Edward for realizin' his limitations and trustin' Carlisle and Sean to bring back the love of his life...oh, yeah, and Sean's, too LOL!

Loved the big, bad mafia don whinin' 'cause his mommy is treatin' him like a baby *gigglesnort!*

And how awesome is Bella for playin' Roberto against Carlos...one bad guy down *fist pump!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Woo hoo! Domward had to come out to play or stitches would have burst and that wouldn't be a good thing! 

While Edward might get hard fantasizin' about Bella spankin' him, I don't see it actually comin' about. Might fuck up the family dynamics and they're perfect just as they are!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Like Edward, most of us have trouble askin' for help but, boy, are we grateful when we get it *phew!* Love the damn golf carts *gigglesnort!*

Oh, and thanks for puttin' up the notification of The No Rules Twilight fan fic Recs Club...not gettin' anything from TWCS nowadays for some unknown reason *sigh!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

LOL'd at Edward expectin' to see Baby Cullen's little dick at this stage, if there even is one! And for someone who's not aware the doctor has given Edward the all clear to have sex, Bella certainly dressed to kill her poor mate LOL! I'm so lookin' forward to his surprise for her and I'm not just talkin' about dinner and dancin' *wink!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh, yeah! Roberto got what was comin' to him from Bella first! Can't wait to see what Sean and Carlisle have in store for the sick fucker!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Edward wouldn't let a little thing like bein' wounded near death stop him from makin' some kind of love to his woman LOL! And I could hear Esme squealin' about her grandbaby from here! All's well that ends with some good good lovin'!



Author's Response:

Thanks Rita.  Glad you liked it.  It was fun to write.

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 15 May 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Roberto has no idea who he's dealin' with but he's gonna find out...soon! His humiliation will be complete when he finds out two mere women outsmarted him *gigglesnort!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Gorgeous dresses, by the way! Charlie's about to get more than he bargained for and we're not talkin' profitable LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Well, Edward could always play the sympathy card for his poor, overworked peen! A little hissin' and grittin' of the teeth and when Bella asks what's wrong, play dumb and ask her to check it for him. She'll see how irritated it is and give him a break...well, not his tongue, or his fingers, or his toys, of course LMAO!

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Date: 24 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Holy crap! Carlisle and Esme are BAD ASS! Of course, Edward trumps them both, as would Bella have done had she not been protectin' their little peanut!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

What a hilarious story about poor Sean's dick but ooooh, what a cuuute story about Elizabeth bein' the little red head he fell in love with at the picnic when they were young kids *dawwww!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Baby boy Cullen takes after his daddy who takes after his daddy who takes after HIS daddy! That dick is gonna be passed down through eternity...lucky women who find themselves married to a Cullen man LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Awww, welcome to the world, baby Trey! Your mom and dad are awesome, as are the rest of your family!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Short but sweet epilogue *sniff!* Thanks for three amazin' stories, Clo darlin'! 

Rogue by Robshandmonkey Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 268]
Summary:

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Meet Masen.

He is not just any thug growing up in a family of organized crime. He is a man who has changed the way families do business.

Masen is in line to be the next "Boss" for his well connected family, and in one night there is a massacre and all his rivals and their families are wiped out leaving no one left behind. The authorities have no clues as to who, why or how someone could pull off a mass murder of this scale. 

Meet Charlie.

A soldier turned businessman who will stop at nothing to give his little girl whatever her heart desires, and what she wants is something no mafia family has ever been able to stake a claim on...the city of Angels.  

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42527 Read Count: 21579
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2016 Updated: 16 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 11 May 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Dashed over here for visuals...I FLUV that you give us visuals *THUD!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 27 May 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I was totally lookin' for a pic of the shit green VW LMAO! Edward's not on his home turf so it's understandable he's susceptible to teasin', although Garrett ought not to push all his buttons...just sayin'!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wouldn't mind a vacation home like that one *drool!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Rambo made archery sexy...and super effective LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 15 May 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Keep 'em comin', Andrea darlin' *high five!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 19 May 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Lookin' forward to watchin' these two dance around each other on this trip LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 21 May 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Don't all parents want a safe world for their children to grow up in? If it's in Charlie's power to do something about it, I say go for it, dude!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 24 May 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

It might go against everything Edward has been taught about never takin' out women and children but Bella has a very valid point about girl gangs! They are more viscious than the men because they have to constantly prove themselves! That and they really will be pissed off when their men start dyin'! They seem to draw the line at children and I agree but they'd best not discount them in future!

Summary:

The Mother

The prophecy of the blood dragons was about to come true, but the future mother of the blood dragons needs to find her mate and the mate must be a blood drinker.  Will the future mother only use him for what she needs, or will he capture her heart?  E&B/HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8683 Read Count: 8550
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2016 Updated: 07 Oct 2016
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Leavin' your home for the scary world outside is always fraught with danger so it's a good thing Bella has Jasper and Rosalie with her! At least they now have some knowledge of what to expect...they just need to be extremely careful *nail bitin' already!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So, they were in the Library of Congress and that was the Lincoln statue so the long black wall must have been the Viet Nam wall of the fallen. Washington DC is on my bucket list *sigh!*

So, didn't take long for at least one of the three to meet their mate LOL! Well, the more protectin' Bella, the better!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hook, line and sinker! You got me again, Clo darlin'!

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Date: 14 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm thinkin' we might be about to meet Rose's mate! Can't be havin' Bella's mate appear on the scene too soon LOL!

Bella's entourage is growin' leaps and bounds with two more added after Alice and Alec! She'll need everyone she can get to get where she needs to be in one piece!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh, my! Well, since Emmett pretty much "imprinted" on Angelica, I'm goin' out on a limb and surmise Rose's enchantment with Evelyn's animal, which sounds like a beautiful white horse, is indicative of a deeper connection!

Summary:

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Banner by CloRodeffer

Photographer Bella Swan loves everything about living in Hawaii. The beach, the surf, the warmth. Everything but the two weeks when Professional Beach Volleyball takes over. Now, she's been cast with the joy of capturing every moment with her camera. Only, a tall, auburn haired player isn't making it easy for her to stay professional. Cannon Couples. UA and MA


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 43885 Read Count: 24690
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2016 Updated: 16 Aug 2019
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Even paradise has its snakes, or so it would seem!

Summary:

Defiance

 

Carlisle Cullen is ruthless Don of the Cullen Crime Family, but his wife Esme doesn't want this life for their son Edward.  Running away and starting a new life and new identity, will they have a happy, safe life or will Carlisle find them?  E&B HEA


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42347 Read Count: 55699
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2017 Updated: 29 Apr 2018
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Making a Run for It

So much for waitin' for you to hit the complete button LOL! I love the idea of Esme escapin' her life in the mafia and takin' Edward...um, Tony with her! Glad she picked Forks!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath

Here's hopin' it takes years and years before Carlisle gets wind of where Esme and Edward live...that way, he'll be out of men to send after them *snickers!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future

Art will be a wonderful outlet for Esme/Marie but only if she doesn't let herself get pushed into goin' public with it! *shudder!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?

Edward and Bella have been joined at the hip since they were mere months old so it was inevitable deep and lastin' feelin's would arise...along with something else, I'm thinkin' LOL! But I'm very anxious about the art show *nail bite!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions

Ah, hell! You're gonna give me a heart attack, aren't you! Edward's too young to have his whole world turned upside down *whimper!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise

Oh, noooo! The only thing standin' between Esme and Edward and complete doom is Charlie, even if he doesn't know it...yet! I suspect he's gonna need to know very soon!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes

Bloody hell! Esme never got the chance to tell Charlie or Renee about the damn DVD! Hope Bella finds it somehow *sigh!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Confessions

Edward and Esme have a hard row to hoe before they have any chance at all of takin' Carlisle down but I know they'll persevere!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Saying Goodbye to Your Heart

Here's hopin' Carlisle gets more than he bargained for and doesn't get off any lighter than Johnny did...hell'n that bullet between the eyes was a mercy!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Wandering Heart

If Bella has landed up in Chicago, she might be in for the shock of her life!

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Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Cold Black Heart

Heheheheh! Boy, is Edward gonna be surprised! Gonna be damned hard not to give the game away the instant they meet!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Revelations

The hell Esme's been livin' doesn't bear thinkin' about, especially as nothin' can be done until Carlisle breathes his last breath! Dang, I'm excited for Edward and Bella to see each other again...but I'm wonderin' if Alice doesn't twig first!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 It Must be a Dream

Well, that went well *snickers!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid

These two broken hearts are gonna need time to mend but at least a start has been made!

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Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Finding Their Way Back to Each Other

Carlisle will sniff out this change in Edward's demeanor before he can even blink...unless he's distracted by business, preferably business trouble that requires his entire attention for a while!

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Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown

Woohoo! It's game on, baby!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Preparing for Battle

Oooh! Just because Edward isn't Carlisle doesn't mean he can't be a hard ass when the occasion arises...as they will all soon learn!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream

Aw, crap! Some bodyguard Malcolm is...NOT!!! And now Edward has revealed his only ace before he was ready!

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Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future

Not surprised Charlie busted Edward sweet ass LOL! But he's not gonna be happy with what he's about to learn, I'm afraid!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker

Very subtle way of takin' Carlisle out for the night leavin' Bella safe...well, there' still that fucker, Bobby B! Hopefully, he's not stupid enough to try to take her before Carlisle gets a taste *shudder!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose

Dang, Clo darlin'! I can't believe I just blew through all 21 chapters! Sure am lookin' forward to the next update!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Blood Payment

If anyone deserved to lose their dick, it was Carlisle! And Charlie takin' Bobby B's nose was just icin' on the cake! Hell'n Carlisle should be proud at the way Edward turned out...the baddest ass in the whole damn town LMAO!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Now that all the darkness is behind them, Edward and Bella can look forward to a bright future! Very enjoyable read!!!

Summary:

Testing Faith Cover

 

Summary:  Edward Cullen thought his life in the playroom was over, when his leg was amputated from the knee down due to an car accident. Could a submissive with her own ghosts be the one to show him that he is more than enough to take complete control of her body and her heart?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53532 Read Count: 59526
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2017 Updated: 26 Nov 2019
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 ~ Passion

Edward and Bella came together so naturally, despite his leg! It can only get better from here! Well, if Aro doesn't get his slimy hands on her *shudder!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn

As surprisin' as it was to hear Bella saw submission as a kind of security blanket from her past, it was pretty understandable!

So, first Jasper and now Edward...the community might even get more Cullen men before all is said and done LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected

Okay, for a minute there, I thought Marcus was gonna assign a man to mentor Edward, which would have been quite awkward, I think! I'm glad Edward is comfortable with Angela, but doesn't he need to learn submission first? In any case, I'm lookin' forward to seein' him blossom into the magnificant Dom we know he has in him!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and taking the time to review.  He will be sitting in several scenes and will have classes on all the tools and equipment in a playroom.  I hope you will enjoy the journey of both Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare

These self-proclaimed prophets, like Aro, are sick, fuckin' pedophiles! How anyone can buy into their bullshit is a mystery to me! But, Charlie certainly did the right thing gettin' Bella out of his evil clutches before it was too late!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Nightmare or actual memory...or both, what a horrible experience!

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Date: 02 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Unraveling a Mystery

Sounds like it was actually not cool for Alice to out Jasper, even accidentally! Can't wait to see what he says when confronted by his curious brothers LOL!

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Date: 25 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 ~ When The Nightmares Come True

Wow! Charlie was the very last person I would have expected to show up just in the nick of time! Does this mean Renee's alive, too? Bella would be over the moon if she is!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

God does work in mysterious ways! Unfortunately, that doesn't necessarily mean someone won't get hurt or die *sigh!* In any case, the boys are lucky to have Carmen, especially Edward!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 ~ Texas Sizzle

Alex shoulda fired Paul ages ago if that's how he treats customers! Bella's probably the first one to slap the shit out of him thus bringin' it to the attention of management!

Aside from that little incident, as well as Edward havin' a "hard" time keepin' his hands off Bella, their dinner sounded magnificant LOL!

Don't like the looks of that black sedan...it has Aro written all over it!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Edward in date mode is a joy to everyone around him, especially his family! And it looks like he chose the right flowers...they match Bella's dress! Lookin' forward to Tonya (Tanya?) makin' a complete ass out of herself LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Sore but Satisfied

Well, dang! Garrett got to her first *poutyface!*

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Date: 14 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 ~ Not as it Seems

There's not a hot enough corner in Hell to accommodate people like Aro! And snakes like him always manage to cover their tracks! Charlie's right! The bastard ain't dead!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 Life Changing

Damn! Now Edward will never be rid of Psycho Jessica! Maybe not physically but mentally, poor guy!

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Date: 01 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 Confessions

I would imagine it's a huge relief to Jasper for his brothers to accept his lifestyle and even become part of it! That bein' said, he might need to rethink Alice's punishment now that she has a second strike against her for outtin' him to his own brother!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future

Oh, boy! Bella just ran into her future Dominant and didn't know it, nor was Edward aware he'd just met his future submissive! Instant chemistry with so few words? Hell to the yeah!!!

Gorgeous Edward manip, Clo darlin'! *sexy beast!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - And So it Begins

Dang! Looks like Edward and Bella won't be crossin' paths for a while! Garrett wouldn't be allowed if he was a bad guy so I'm hopeful he and Bella will make a good team for as long as it lasts!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 ~ Lost and Found

Mike's not gonna have that job very long once the complaints start rollin' in...asshole!

While Edward's lucky to be alive, I don't think he's gonna agree for a looong time!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Damn on two counts: Edward losin' his leg and Bella losin' her parents! It never seems to end well for people who get caught in the snare of a crazy ass cult!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Obviously, there's a difference in knowin' ahead of time you're gonna love a limb, usually for medical reasons, and wakin' up missin' a valuable part of your body!  Yeah, I'd freak the fuck out, too! Edward might not think so right this minute but he's very lucky to have such an extensive and dedicated support system!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

It is appallin' how gullible people are! Worst to date is Scientology because it still exists and even flourishes! The more people who speak out, the better!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Oh, I just want to cry for him! On top of losin' his leg, he's gonna live with the nightmare of that accident for the rest of his life *sigh!*



Author's Response:

He is going to have a hard time, but a beutiful submissive is going to make it easier for him. Bella is his saving grace. Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

It's so touchin' for Bella to carry her parents with her through their weddin' rings hangin' from her gold chain *sniff!* Really hopin' they find Aro and plant him six feet under in an unmarked grave, preferably on a landfill/garbage dump...no point wastin' taxpayer dollars on a trial, right?

Edward has a lot of good people pullin' for him and helpin' him deal with his mental as well as physical crisis but it's still gonna take months of hard work on his part to get where he needs to be. I have faith in him, as does Bella!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Well, everyone was havin' a grand ol' time, what with Carmen and Max's engagement, Edward's positive attitude adjustment and Bella's dress shoppin' for their date now that she's no longer his nurse. Evil bein' harder to kill than crab grass, I suspect Aro has risen from the ashes, so to speak!

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Date: 27 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Three ~ Faith For The Future

I'm so glad Charlie and Renee were able to hide from Aro but it's a damn shame they were unable to warn the others...not that they would have listened, probably *sigh!*

Very much lookin' forward to followin' Testing Limits as I'm nowhere near ready to least Edward and Bella!