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Oh Let me Ponder this a bit
Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)
NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48850
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Shield you from pain
Wow, other than some grammaratical issues, and some structural misses,
I'm floored...Execellent Story
One of my favorites, actually it's a stand alone work of art.
My only wish is that it hadn't ended, I'm left longing for more
Thanks
3D
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Leave me alone
Really nice work on this chapter!!!
I know I had few critical things to say last time, but I'm loving this one.
YOu did an excellent job on the angst, and I really love your work on the conversations.
I almost cried a few times, and chuckled at those funny times
I'm liking it!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Late for Class
I'd like to start by saying that I really like the concept of this story.
It's direction seems very interesting.
I'd also like to draw your attention, I hope I'm not offending you, but...
Too many of the same words are used close to each other.
If you'd like I could point them out, and a few sentences need to be reworded, as window is used twice in the same sentence.
With just a little shuffling, the sentence could be a work of art..just a little nudge and only one use of window.
I'll keep reading and will review as I go.
Keep in mind I have no idea how long this story has been out...
Once again, lovely direction