Reviews by LillianBrookes
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself?  AH/AU

 

A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47585
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: LillianBrookes Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I have loved this story from the start! Whenever I think I know what is going to happen next you change something or add drama or create tension...anyway I do love it...one suggestion though the little flashback thing was a bit drawn out...we want the juicy stuff =) but overall a great story and one the I recommend to others! Keep up the amazing work!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"There are times in our lives when we have to take a step back and evaluate where we are and how we got where we are. How events in our lives shape who we are and how we see the world" This is a story of sadness and strength. More importantly it's a story of survival. Four women are trapped by their choices and their situations. When all hope seems lost will they find salvation or will they be burnt by the flames of their own personal hells?

 

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Thanks to FrozenSoldier for the beautiful banner.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10727 Read Count: 2771
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2011 Updated: 08 May 2013
Reviewer: LillianBrookes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Part One: Alice Brandon

You're writing is pure poetry.  You draw attention to detail without interupting the flow of the writing.  Including the song lyrics was genius, I hope you continue with that style for the rest of you're story.  You had a great hook with the prologue and I am intrigued to see where you take this story! Thank you for the gift of you're writing!



Author's Response:

I have to say that I've never recieved such an amazing review. Thank you so much. I hope that the rest of the story lives up to your expectations. I'm working on it now, but I have to focus on it in doses or it gets to overwhelming for me. Thank you again.

much love,

katiecav

Summary:

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Just a taste : "Control, sweetheart. I like it. I won't have mercy on you when I want it. I want you to learn how to endure it for me. I promise you will be rewarded for your efforts. When I see fit, of course."


Categories: Original Fiction, Drama
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 243560 Read Count: 35216
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2011 Updated: 03 Feb 2014
Reviewer: LillianBrookes Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Plans and Interpretations

Please don't leave this story unfinished! I know you have other stories that you are working on, but this is one of my favorites of yours so please please please finish it!



Author's Response:

I know I haven't posted a new chapter for months, but I promise you that won't happen. I'm working on it now, and may even have the next piece finished by tomorrow. I can't promise I will, but that's my hope. Thank you so much for being patient with the slow-to-come posts, I think most everyone else has given up on me, and it means a lot to see that there's someone who hasn't. xo