Reviews by Gelsa
Caledonia by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 601]
Summary:

caldonia

 

Edward moves back to Seattle after working under his father’s shadow for five years. Wanting to make a name for himself, he uses his mother’s surname to establish himself. What happens when his father, and a friend call in a favor, and need him to first help a struggling restaurant. Will he want to when the owner let it fall to pieces while she vacationed and what other secrets will unfold along the way?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 195622 Read Count: 56991
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2020 Updated: 15 Jun 2023
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

All she has to tell Jasper is she doesn't  have a good relationship with Charlie 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 20 May 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Alice being the babysitter make sense especially if Grand hired her to watch Bella at the restaurant. Looks like Charlie wasn't terribly involved. I'm beginning to wonder if Jasper's Mom isn't his only baby mama and if there is in fact an older  Isabella somewhere. I wonder if Charlie insisted on naming his younger child the same so he wouldn't get confused or if Bella's mother just really love the name and insisted. I also think that with the near-death experience an appendectomy maybe Gran insisted that they'll go to Scotland because she couldn't look after her and Charlie wasn't . If I'm right about an older Isabella,  I'm guessing Bella and ir Liz found out about her

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 20 May 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Alice being the babysitter make sense especially if Grand hired her to watch Bella at the restaurant. Looks like Charlie wasn't terribly involved. I'm beginning to wonder if Jasper's Mom isn't his only baby mama and if there is in fact an older  Isabella somewhere. I wonder if Charlie insisted on naming his younger child the same so he wouldn't get confused or if Bella's mother just really love the name and insisted. I also think that with the near-death experience an appendectomy maybe Gran insisted that they'll go to Scotland because she couldn't look after her and Charlie wasn't . If I'm right about an older Isabella,  I'm guessing Bella and ir Liz found out about her

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

While I agree Jasper needs to make his own mind up about Charlie, I still think Its ok for Bella to simply say that  she doesn't have a good relationship with him and Jasper must meet with Charlie on his own

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm going to guess that Bella's anger towards Jasper is more about Bella's anger towards her dad for having an affair.

I think we'd need to know about  Bella's mother and Jasper's mother. Also need to know more about Bella's relationship with Charlie 

 

I'm 99% sure Bella baked the cakes herself. If she did, I have no idea why she thinks keeping it a secret is to her advantage. 

 

The meeting has potential to go well if Bella is brutally honest about the restaurant's current situation 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Did Taylor & Eric actually graduate from culinary school or did Mike just help them fake their credentials?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I think that Charlie may have intercepted Jasper's letter to her and altered it, hoping her response would scare Jasper off.  Instead it backfired causing her to leave Charlie.

 

At any rate I'm sure that her reaction to Jasper is a result of what Charlie told her about him

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 May 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Love it. Hate Charlie. Did Bella even get Jasper's letter? What sent her to Scotland?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 May 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I hope I can add

 

This raises more questions.   How old is Alice?  If she & Bella are the same age, how did they not know B is 18?

If Alice is older, how did they become friends? Does Alice know Bella's age?

 

Who was Charlie's bratty teenager? Does he have another child floating around?

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 May 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

He should definitely come clean with  Alice. 

I really  want to know more about how Alice's and Bella's friendship came about. Alice just celebrated her 25th birthday  so that makes  her 7 years older .  That's  quite an age gap 17 year old to 10 year old friendships don't seem common to me

Summary:

Banner

 

***This story has been pulled to be published under Lara Norman as Bloody Halo*** When notorious criminal mastermind Edward Cullen came back to town, Bella was blindsided by old feelings of infatuation. She knew better than to dance with the devil... but she did it anyway.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Fallen Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2502 Read Count: 76832
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2020 Updated: 27 Apr 2021
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2020 Title: Fallen Angel

He really has to explain his feelings to Bella and she needs to let him



Author's Response:

That would be best.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2020 Title: Fallen Angel

Edward,  you fool!  Tell bella how you feel about her 



Author's Response:

He needs to!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2020 Title: Fallen Angel

Great chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2020 Title: Fallen Angel

I like Angela. I think between her & Rose, they'll get Bella where she needs to be



Author's Response:

She really needs friends.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2020 Title: Fallen Angel

Nice



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2020 Title: Fallen Angel

I really hope it's Edward



Author's Response:

We'll find out today. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 May 2020 Title: Fallen Angel

Absolutely 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Summary:

iv bag

Bella and Edward don't speak to each other after the van incident, yet their paths still converge. When Bella is attacked by James' coven in her own home, she is rescued by the Cullen family in the nick of time. Now, Bella must come to terms with her new life as a vampire and her growing attraction to Edward. AU.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90206 Read Count: 6456
[Report This] Published: 15 Apr 2020 Updated: 01 Jun 2020
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Gentle & Rigid

The conversation with the tribe should be interesting 

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Rigor Mortis

Looks like Bella instinctively knows Edward can help.

 

I appreciate the frequent updates 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Rebirth

Nice

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Mindset

Glad to see them talking 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Rain Sows a Promise

Loving this

Summary:

If the Boughs Break

 

Edward Cullen, son to Carlisle Cullen the mafia Boss of New York and New Jersey has been off to college in Boston. Hiding under his alias Anthony Masen, he has led a normal existence except for the ever-present security guard. Going out to his favorite club, to find someone to scratch his itch, however, he finds someone unlike anyone else.


Bella Swan, daughter of Pentecostal Preacher Charlie Swan, defines her father’s wishes and goes to school in Boston. In his eyes, she has already shamed her family. One night her roommates talk her into putting away the books and going out with them. The moment he asked her to dance, she knew her life would forever be changed.

 

Will they find love in the end or will blood be spilled?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63910 Read Count: 68145
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2020 Updated: 06 Apr 2021
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family

Grisly but fitting ending 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow

Nicely done.  What did they do with  Irina?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody

Glad Esme overheard that conversation.  She should also somehow get word to Eleazer about Carmen and the guards. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Glad Esme & Carlisle were there.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

YES!  He's got some explaining to do

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River

Glad they got her out of there

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen ~ Cold Blooded Deception

That's interesting.   So Charlie all Charlie wants is sons

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

My money is on Royce for the mole

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

My money is on Royce for the mole

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two ~ Low Blood Pressure

Saw that coming. I'm assuming "Tony" lives in the penthouse 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 14 May 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four ~ Blood Bonds

If Edward is attending it's going to be a very interesting gala

Summary: Past Featured Story

TPWCH

 

Providence and destiny. Elizabeth Masen raised her boy on those principles, and though all of life’s hardships, he’s remembered her words. When Miss Bella Swan steps off the train at the Denver Depot, she’s a pleasant surprise and some much-needed help. As they work to build a life for themselves, they’ll face hardships neither one expected, but together they will weather the coming storm.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Western
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69173 Read Count: 21588
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2020 Updated: 27 Mar 2021
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four

Charlie is despicable 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four

Charlie is despicable 

Summary:

Sewing Beauty

AH, AU, Very mature. Jasper and Bella had been living together for several years, enjoying a causal relationship with no strings attached. All that changes one evening, with one phone call from Bella's mythological ex—Edward Cullen. Edward asks for a rescue, but will he end up saving Bella and Jasper, instead? Includes poly & slash.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36554 Read Count: 6902
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2020 Updated: 20 Jun 2020
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 12 May 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Looks interesting 

Someday by TheBlueScarf Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

 

"I've been chasing Edward Cullen since I was four years old and in all those years, it always felt farfetched. A dream that will never come true." Bella Swan has loved Edward since both were kids. She endlessly pursues Edward even when there is no hope. But when her dream comes true, her heart gets broken. Someday, they will find their way back again. BellaxEdward.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23278 Read Count: 10889
[Report This] Published: 22 May 2020 Updated: 18 Jun 2020
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wow.  I hope you'll give us more than a glimpse in to Esme's death. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Need more information about Carlisle.  He "owns" Edward's life?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Edward needs to chill out

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I hope Edward is not surprised by her lack of trust in him

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I hope Edward is not surprised by her lack of trust in him

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm thinking that subtlety will be lost on Jake. If Bella really doesn't want him as a boyfriend should probably give him a gift subscription to an online dating service

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm thinking that subtlety will be lost on Jake. If Bella really doesn't want him as a boyfriend should probably give him a gift subscription to an online dating service

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Nice story.  Thank you 

Summary:

Bella unearths a long buried truth that sends her halfway across the world to reclaim her heart. New moon alternate ending.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7879 Read Count: 4048
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2020 Updated: 24 Jun 2020
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Waiting

Glad she made it safely back

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Preparations

Glad Alice is helping 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Nothing Left

Well done 

Summary:

Falling for a Dark Soul

 

Isabella Swan moved away from the world she’s known, trying to move on from the loss of her parents and raising her baby sister, Katie. She’s always seen the best in the world, but she’s struggling in coping with all of the changes in her life. A new start was needed and she packed up, moving from the small town of Forks to Chicago to work as an advertising junior executive at Masen Advertising Corporation.

Edward Cullen, CEO of Masen Advertising Corporation, is a cold-hearted, uncaring, hateful asshole. An orphan and living in foster care until he turned fifteen, he was adopted by Carlisle and Esme Cullen. Edward struggled with forming relationships. All he wanted was a partner, a friend, a lover, a wife, a mother to his children. He lost his wife, Tanya, when she was found screwing his partner, Jacob Black, on his desk. She also shattered his heart, ending several pregnancies, even though Edward had pleaded to start a family.

What happens when Edward bumps into Bella in the hallways of Masen Advertising Corporation? Will she be the chink in his armor, shattering his carefully constructed walls? Or will he bring her into the darkness, shattering her optimistic view of the world? It’s uncertain, but she’s Falling for a Dark Soul.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 250672 Read Count: 73636
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2020 Updated: 17 Apr 2021
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I had a feeling you were going to go down  this road. I really wish you hadn't 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Glad Edward came out to WA. Bummed about the near death experience.   As eager as i am for E & B to make up, I can't wait to hear Emmett's news about James

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Glad Edward came out to WA. Bummed about the near death experience.   As eager as i am for E & B to make up, I can't wait to hear Emmett's news about James

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Glad they resolved things

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great chapter.  Glad she's not intimidated 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Very nice

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Somehow I knew it was Tanya from Victoria's description 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Somehow I knew it was Tanya from Victoria's description 

Summary:

R&R

 

Bella arrives in Forks, 20 years after the Cullens leave, for Charlie's funeral. The mansion is up for sale at long last and she gets roped into being part of the cleaning crew by Charlie's estate agent widow, Amanda. How is it she finds what no one else ever saw or heard?

 

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Gelesen
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40458 Read Count: 8268
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2020 Updated: 22 Aug 2020
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 6: What Goes Around, Comes Around

Love Esme 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yes, she needs to toughen up, also with Felix as a mate she has to be seen and heard xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Found At Last

Glad to hear Jasper's pov



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I'm going to flip back and forward, glad you like it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Hiding In Plain Sight

Interesting.   Is Aro in on it or have all 6 developed some defense against his gift? 20 years is a long time to avoid a handshake



Author's Response:

Thanks,

He's not in on it and they have used other means to control him,

glad you like it xx

Alexis

Summary:

BCGCover

Edward is a young British actor on the rise. His problem? He's absolutely clueless, about everything. Bella is a kick-ass legal assistant at a glamourous London law firm. They hop on and off planes all the time. Will their paths ever cross?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 229572 Read Count: 21945
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2020 Updated: 04 Jul 2021
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Glad Jacob is getting what he deserves. I hope whoever the "insider" was doesn't come to grief for it

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I want to know more about that blind item Alice was talking  about. I'm  hoping the embattled rising star  on the way out means trouble for Jacob

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Love the t shirt idea.  Of course he has to meet Renee yet as Bella's boyfriend 



Author's Response:

Because Renee wasn't Bella's mom at the time ;-) [aka, when he met her first]

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Really  glad they talked. Did Alice know about  Renee's gift?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Loved how B handled Aro

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I hope she takes this well, otherwise it's going to be a very uncomfortable flight

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Love it!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Looking forward to Bella kicking James' butt

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Love it

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Loved it. Looking forward to meeting the admiral

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I want a Jasper

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 May 2021 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Looking forward to the surprise 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Nice. I can't wait for Alice & Jasper to meet

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Wow. Cant wait to heat what Dad has to say. I'm going to assume he's team Jake 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Looking forward to B & A meeting 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Can't wait to find I out what Rose did.  I'm  guessing  she outed B & E to Jake

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Emmett!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Nice.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Love Bella's description of Alice  makes coffee nervous and quicksilver dull and slow

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Looking forward to seeing Bella handle Marcus

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Glad she told  Marcys off.  I knew it was his playlist

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Very nice 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Loved it

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Like how they are progressing 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Interested to see how  you will write B taking down Marcus.   Will the readers see it as it happens or just get the retelling to Edward  & Jasper? I'm greedy so I'd like to see both  but I'm sure it will be great however you present it

Summary:

Story cover

Summary: Edward Cullen, the Grand Duke and second son of the King, must find a bride. Isabella Sinclair, daughter of Countess Catherine and Duke Charles, was born out of wedlock and has neither titles nor land to her name. Could she be the bride Edward's looking for? But how is Isabella to marry a man of the royal family without a proper dowry? Plot adopted from the Twi-Fic Plot Bunny Farm on Facebook and credit goes to Nicole M Santiago


To give you some context, this story takes place in an imaginary country and the titles (royal, noble, gentle) are a mix of different monarchies.

This is the rank of title for this story:

Royalty

King/Queen - His/Her Majesty

Crown Prince/Princess - His/Her Royal Highness

Prince/Princess - His/Her Royal Highness

Grand Duke/Duchess - His/Her Royal Highness

Grand Prince/Princess - His/Her Royal Highness

Duke/Duchess - His/Her Grace

Nobility

Marquess/Marchioness - His/Her Grace

Earl/Countess - His/Her Excellency

Viscount/Viscountess - Lord/Lady

Baron/Baroness - Lord/Lady

Gentry

Lord/Lady

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70918 Read Count: 31271
[Report This] Published: 13 Sep 2020 Updated: 21 Oct 2021
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Very nice

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I can't wait for Bella's response 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I hope the truth is kept from the swans for as long as possible as Edward works things out with his family 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm thinking stuff, formal, and awkward 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm thinking stuff, formal, and awkward 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Very nice. Isabella has her sister's support in marrying "lord Masen".

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

YES!!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Glad Edward was clever enough so that mo one else would  learn muvh

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Very nice. Looking forward to the reaction at Swanshelm

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

James & Catherine married in spite of Charles so legally James is her father?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Yes you are evil.  A great beginning,though 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Looking forward to the Swans getting what they deserve

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

A very unpleasant thing to go through. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2021 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Glad Jacob came clean. I hope Edward or the king will furnish him with a parish

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh no!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

A Cinderella moment would be lovely.  Why on earth would the Duke

 Keep incriminating documents?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Looking forward to see how she finds the documents