Reviews by Gelsa
Summary:

Two men who couldn't be more opposite and one woman. Her growth, happiness and sorrow.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5686 Read Count: 2496
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2018 Updated: 05 Aug 2018
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Don't leave us hanging

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Bella who arrives to live with Charlie is nothing like people expected. She's anything but shy, she's graceful, stylish and outgoing. Her looks could stop traffic. How will the Cullens react to being last week's news?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Garrett
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53333 Read Count: 12690
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2018 Updated: 05 Aug 2018
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Dance Monkey, Dance

Loved Bella throwing Demitri



Author's Response:

Thanks,

yes, one of my favourite bits too xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Fun, Fun, Fun

Jasper rocks



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Love a strong Major xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 28 May 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Creep

Love this Esme

 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I like a strong Esme now and again, myself lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 May 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Homecoming

This looks like fun



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So glad you're reading it, new chap for tomorrow as it's the 2nd anniversary of posting my first ever story,

hope it's a surprise to you xx

Alexis

Summary:

ADITLOAOG

Why was it always me? Why couldn't I be normal? Did I have a tattoo on my forehead saying Tasty Meal, Feel Free to Kill Me'?


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Contests & Competitions
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12024 Read Count: 2155
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2018 Updated: 01 Mar 2019
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Human days

Your stories always leave me conflicted. They're very entertaining and I like the way you write. The conflict comes that evil Edward and evil Alice along with a clueless Carlisle and Esme always make me sad. However you're really good writer and I enjoy your stories anyway 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I'm sorry about that, but they are not my fav characters, as you can tell and they can be portrayed evil so easily  xx

Alexis

The Collection by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 365]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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In Volterra, the Crown Prince chooses his future queen from the Collection. 35 young women from every province of the country, open to members of all castes, given the opportunity to be the newest chapter in the country's fairy tale. But Isabella Swan didn't want to be part of the Collection, all she wanted was to love a boy and have him love her in return. And Edward Masen was not that boy.

 

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The Collection: A Twilight/The Selection Crossover

For those of you who have read The Selection Series, you will recognize the world of this story and some of the character types, but most of the plot will blend elements of the two series with original ideas, so it won't simply be The Selection plot with Edward and Bella. There will be things that will completely take you by surprise, I hope, and keep you entertained. This idea overtook me while reading the last book, which is the first time a series has done this since Twilight, so I wanted to play with it. Also, it felt right to post this the day before my 9th anniversary in fanfic. Thank you to all my readers, new and old, and my team, past and present, for sticking with me on this journey. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed, Wanna read
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118372 Read Count: 63740
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2018 Updated: 17 Jun 2020
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44

So glad about the Whitlocks

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 46: Epilogue

I really enjoyed this. Looking forward to the sequel

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 46: Epilogue

Nice ending.   I hope Rose's husband isn't as evil as he was in canon

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 46: Epilogue

Nice ending.   I hope Rose's husband isn't as evil as he was in canon

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43

Carlisle rocks!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42

I'm not sure what makes me happier  the king bing beyond saving or Teddy and Bella together

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42

I'm not sure what makes me happier  the king bing beyond saving or Teddy and Bella together

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42

I'm not sure what makes me happier  the king bing beyond saving or Teddy and Bella together

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42

I'm not sure what makes me happier  the king bing beyond saving or Teddy and Bella together

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41

Wow.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 31 May 2020 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37

Angela is part of the set up. Probably the king too

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 25 May 2020 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

Glad Bella moved up in the polls. I hope Edward isn't in for another whipping

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

I hope Bella will realize that Edward did the best he could for Alice & Jasper.

 

I'm afraid Tanya Willey to frame Bella & Jacob

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

I hope Bella will realize that Edward did the best he could for Alice & Jasper.

 

I'm afraid Tanya Willey to frame Bella & Jacob

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

The king is evil

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

The king is evil

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 03 May 2020 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

Glad she's thinking of a way out

Summary:

 

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Summary: At eighteen Edward was sent to prison for a crime he didn’t commit. It’s now six years later, and he has been released four years early. His bail conditions have been set. He has to find somewhere to live and get a full-time job, both things he has found in a small sleepy town. All he wants to do is keep out of everyone's way and move on with his life. Will this sleepy town of Forks, Washington let him, especially when they find out why he was in prison?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 229926 Read Count: 52300
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2018 Updated: 16 Nov 2019
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Edward is doing the right thing. As for Cheney, great actor or is Jaspers alternative correct? Can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 20 May 2019 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I Wonder is Cheney is enlisting Tanya's help to discredit Edward and there's somehow forcing Lauren to do this.. I also wonder if that series of texts about not sleeping well was somehow from Lauren 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 25 May 2019 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Scissors? I'm guessing someone tried to stab someone else. Can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Nice.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner done by Britt Lexington

Bella Cullen was about to have everything she had worked toward until she lost the two most important things in her life. Vice president of the legal department in her family's business, she tries to bury her pain in work. All of that changes the day she meets a man that has obviously suffered from a serious trauma. Edward Swan is more than shy; he's scared of everything. Bella doesn't know what happened to the endearing man, but she vows to help him and his young daughter in any way she can, starting with hiring him as her personal assistant. Little does she know they'll soon become the driving force in her life.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36710 Read Count: 31583
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2018 Updated: 21 Mar 2019
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great story. Thanks

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Interesting family dynamic. Is Jacob faithful to Leah?



Author's Response:

I guess only time will tell. Thank You for reading and reviewing! 

Summary:

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Prince Edward travels abroad to find adventure, experiences but more importantly himself. Agreeing to be father to Bella's baby is the only the beginning. He thought his biggest challenge would be to get the royal court to believe he is the biological father. It takes a baby to show Edward the man he truly is; the man he could be. In honor of my DS community.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137118 Read Count: 24876
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2018 Updated: 07 Nov 2018
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Looking forward to that conversation 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Looking forward to that conversation 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Nice. I am surprised Renee didn't cause more trouble

Summary:

MOTMFFF

Edward "The Boss" Cullen and his wife, Bella, survived hell and back. They are looking toward the future, which included a new path for the Cullen Consortium and impending parenthood. Edward and Bella are very excited for their new roles in their lives as Mommy and Daddy. 

 

In the wings, there's a new enemy waiting. A man determined to bring down the Consortium and specifically, Edward Cullen. He was going to stop at nothing to put "The Boss" behind bars for the rest of his life. He partners with an unlikely ally, a woman who wants what she deserved. What she is owed, by her only family. 

 

Will Edward, Bella and the family be able to move past this latest threat? One thing is for certain, they are Married to the Mob: Fighting for Freedom. 

 

Banner by Clo Rodeffer


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 194528 Read Count: 41076
[Report This] Published: 02 Sep 2018 Updated: 07 Jul 2020
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

Nice

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

I really hope Bella gets out of this without being raped

Summary:

MDTMDR

Forks Washington, Chief of Police, Charlie Swan has just made one of the hardest choices of his life and now he's beyond pissed off.

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Contests & Competitions
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8174 Read Count: 1185
[Report This] Published: 02 Oct 2018 Updated: 28 May 2019
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 28 May 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Repercussions & Surprises

Love this



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Glad you enjoyed it xx

Alexis

Summary:

Story cover

 

Emmett Brian McCarty never had much in life, but growing up poor didn't stop him from enjoying life and all its pleasures.

 

However, always seeking thrills most often means it will end badly, and one day, while hunting for game in the mountains, Emmett meets his destiny. Canon. ExR


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Emmett/Rose
Genre: Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Twilight Origins
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73191 Read Count: 1655
[Report This] Published: 21 Nov 2018 Updated: 14 May 2019
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 14 May 2019 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue November 21st 2008

This was fun. Thanks 

Summary:

DOD

 

Easy breezy Bella goes to work at The Cullen Conglomerate believing she is there due to her unfortunate circumstances. Everything went according to Edward's plan except one tiny snafu. Both have secrets they must keep. Both must lie in order to keep their relationship. Dishonesty may be what gets them killed. AH HEA.Cannon. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138996 Read Count: 29208
[Report This] Published: 15 Dec 2018 Updated: 21 Apr 2019
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I thought he might have known. Looking forward to the next chapter 

Summary:

Words to Die By

I.M. Swan a best-selling author is on top of the literary world. After coming off her book tour for her latest book, she has begun her research for the next, a book on the Chicago Mafia. Spending hours in the library and courthouse, she is surprised to find out a most curious piece of information about the Don of the largest crime family. He is not the rightful heir to the family.

Aro Volturi planned and executed the complete destruction of the Cullen family. Wiping away any documentation or body of any evidence of the family from the face of the earth, or he thought so.

Edward Cullen was smuggled away with the aid of his faithful nanny, who kept him safe until it was time for him to take revenge for his family's death. Training and building a new, stronger family to take back what is rightfully his and executing the man who took his family from him.

One evening, as Edward is following one of Aro’s hitman, he witnesses him a young woman in the alley. Coming to her aid, he is mesmerized by her beauty and when he gets to know her, he is in awe of her intellect.

            Will Bella be able to survive with Edward’s help or will Aro get to her and silence her forever? E&B

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62607 Read Count: 65884
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2019 Updated: 27 May 2020
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good beginning

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - July 18, 2017

Wow!

Summary:

Bella has everything. Perfect husband, perfect kids, perfect life. Until one day, her world changes, and the perfection she thought she had is shattered. Will she be able to pull her life together and survive on her own? AU, AH, Rated M for eventual lemon


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44376 Read Count: 10216
[Report This] Published: 06 Jan 2019 Updated: 06 Jan 2019
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue

Nice story thanks for writing it

Summary:

Banner

Struggling through tragedy and betrayal, Edward believes he’s living in a cold and loveless world with no choice but to harden his heart. He’s only living a numb half-life as his sole focus becomes revenge. If he forgets his true reason for living, is there anyone who can get through to him?


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21 Read Count: 19536
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2019 Updated: 03 Jan 2021
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2019 Title: Heart of Stone

Ben?



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2019 Title: Heart of Stone

I'm still with you. Poor Edward



Author's Response:

That's a good thing! Thank you!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2019 Title: Heart of Stone

I admit, I thought she was dead. I'm glad she's not



Author's Response:

I'm also glad!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 May 2019 Title: Heart of Stone

Ben should be locked up for idiocy. You stop the bleeding and check for a pulse.



Author's Response:

At the vey least, plus more. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Fighting Temptation Banner

 

High school classmates Bella, Edward, Mike, and Tyler are invited to a basketball clinic in Seattle for 2 weeks. Bella is sharing a hotel room with the guys. Between truth or dare, streaking, jealousy, and a growing attraction between Edward and Bella ... what could possibly go wrong? ExB. AH.

(Banner made by Mehek18) 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58045 Read Count: 5569
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2019 Updated: 20 Apr 2019
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Cookie Jar

Coach Clapp should  be fired for this. 

The Loser by IBACULLEN Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 243]
Summary:

loser

 

Bella struggled with her weight throughout her life. Her problems are enhanced by the pressures society and her family place on her. How could someone like her ever find a decent husband? Her childhood best friend might have the answer to all her problems. A fake marriage. A rise in station for Bella and with the marriage, Edward stands to gain his full inheritance. How can anyone believe that a Cullen would ever want someone like Bella? Who is the real loser here? AU. Cannon. HEA.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94730 Read Count: 19531
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2019 Updated: 30 Jul 2019
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 May 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I totally agree with Bella about this world

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 May 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'd like to find out why this world thinks working for a living is a drain on society 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 May 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Really loving this. Can't wait for Jessica's reaction

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 May 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

The way you've written Bella I doubt she will ask Edward to be open and honest with her about his reaction to Jacob. I'm curious about that too. Is Edward jealous that Bella might be attracted to Jacob? I wonder why he doesn't ask her does it have to be Jake or would she be ok with a trainer he picks?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 May 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm looking forward to learn more about this world. I'm wondering about Edward and if his concern is that Jacob has a reputation of hitting his clients or that is just afraid that fella might be attracted to him

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 May 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loved the "fight" they had with the floor stuff. I hate Mrs Swan

Really glad that Edward is going with her to see  Bree

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 May 2019 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

It seems like they may finally be on the same page

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Too bad Bella couldn't just tell Edward that him having lovers will hurt her.  I think she would have if he hadn't agreed.

 

This is a very strange world you've built. I want to learn more about it

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Glad that they had an honest conversation.   I find it interesting that in this world they think God cares more about premarital sex than about trampling all over the 4th commandment.  I guess you don't have to honor your father and mother once you marry into a higher Social station then they are

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm glad her first time was a good experience.  

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I hope you gave her tell Edward that since she refused Jacob and stopped working with him she thought she'd handled it & didn't need to bother him.

 

I think in the coming unrest, I see Bella as a social justice warrior, on the side of the people

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Glad he figured it out

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

(Sigh) I suppose if they were mature enough to actually talk to each other we wouldn't  have a story 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow!  I'm looking forward to finding out more about the resistance

Summary:

HMD

As Carlisle & Bella grow steadily closer to leaving for their forever. Esme gets 4 chances to reflect on her mistakes. Esme's P.O.V  Pt 4 of Celebrations. Carlisle/Bella

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Holiday
Series: Celebrations
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3079 Read Count: 323
[Report This] Published: 12 May 2019 Updated: 12 May 2019
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 12 May 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Be It Feb, Mar Or May

I like this esme 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

She's finally being the woman she should have been xx

Alexis

Summary:

Fool Me Once

Summary:  I awake to my Father knocking on my door. He's alive? What did he say? First day of school, how is that possible? Thank God that's possible, this time I won't be fooled!

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55814 Read Count: 13627
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2019 Updated: 31 Aug 2019
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 7: The Truth Will Set You Free

Nice



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So happy you're liking it xx

Alexis

The Lesser by IBACULLEN Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 209]
Summary:

lesser

PART TWO. PLEASE READ PART ONE THE LOSER FIRST

Edward's been taken. Bella is about to have her baby. With the lessers revolting and holding the power in the North, Bella realizes that no one is going to save her. When she learns of Edward's whereabouts, she decides that she can no longer wait around. It will be up to Bella to save Edward. All those years she was called a loser are about to pay off when she has to blend in and become a lesser. Set in an alternate futuristic reality. HEA. AH.

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94052 Read Count: 14580
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2019 Updated: 14 Nov 2019
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21:The Beginning

Loved this story 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: My New Order of Business

When the establishment threatened and then kill the children and Emily I thought the Newtons were involved but only in the defense against the uprising. It's looking like Michael is playing both sides and trying to emerge in a situation where the Newton's rule the world

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: The Red Ward

Wow. Timing is everything.  Glad they got out

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: The Red Ward

Wow. Timing is everything.  Glad they got out

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: A Sweet Summer

I'm hoping Em knows of a secret passage. I wonder if the wifi use tipped the resistance off

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: A Weighty Decision

Wow. That is a tough decision 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: The Last Good Man

Wow. I hope she's just scraped and bruised

 

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Into The Woods

Please update quickly

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: N.S.R.

Great story. I wonder why the resistance didn't look into who was in the white and released people like Jacob his only crime was offending a diamond. I do hope Emily makes it out alive as well as Bella and Edward

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: A Woman's Place

Edward & Bella both have issues  with thinking before they act Bella, at least, is improving 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Friend or Foe

Sam was on my list of possible leaders. I'm glad Bella got the baby to safety. It makes her rescue mission more believable 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Day One

You have me a little worried. Every other time bella used the GPS you mentioned that she turned it off. This last time you didn't mention that she turned it off. I hope that she did and this isn't going to lead to capture.

Great chapter all in all

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Enlightenment

I think Bella is right in telling Boyce about his son

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Romanik

I'm hoping the crowd will revolt when they see Sam 

Summary:

family

Bella has the love of her life with Edward. They have their seven kids, Happily Ever After feels real, but what if when it begins to rain it pours. Can they handle the stress as a family or is going to tear them apart.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48017 Read Count: 16024
[Report This] Published: 08 Aug 2019 Updated: 01 Oct 2020
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Interesting that he wants to see Jake 

Summary:

time changer

Edward has the gift of traveling to adjust the past to ensure the future of humanity. Passed on from generation to generation, he makes small changes to ensure humanity's survival. In order for him to pass on his gift, he must find the one who will carry his child so that he may retire one day. Bella is the last person he would have chosen but she is destined to be the one. How hard will he have to work to make what he has seen in the future a reality? AH HEA


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Historical, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 73008 Read Count: 8949
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2019 Updated: 02 Feb 2022
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Didn't see that coming

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Didn't see that coming

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope you and your family have a complete recovery from Covid.

 

It was really good to see this chapter 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope you and your family have a complete recovery from Covid.

 

It was really good to see this chapter 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope you and your family have a complete recovery from Covid.

 

It was really good to see this chapter 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope you and your family have a complete recovery from Covid.

 

It was really good to see this chapter 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope you and your family have a complete recovery from Covid.

 

It was really good to see this chapter 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope you and your family have a complete recovery from Covid.

 

It was really good to see this chapter 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope you and your family have a complete recovery from Covid.

 

It was really good to see this chapter 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope you and your family have a complete recovery from Covid.

 

It was really good to see this chapter 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope you and your family have a complete recovery from Covid.

 

It was really good to see this chapter 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope you and your family have a complete recovery from Covid.

 

It was really good to see this chapter 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope you and your family have a complete recovery from Covid.

 

It was really good to see this chapter 

Caledonia by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 601]
Summary:

caldonia

 

Edward moves back to Seattle after working under his father’s shadow for five years. Wanting to make a name for himself, he uses his mother’s surname to establish himself. What happens when his father, and a friend call in a favor, and need him to first help a struggling restaurant. Will he want to when the owner let it fall to pieces while she vacationed and what other secrets will unfold along the way?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 195622 Read Count: 56991
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2020 Updated: 15 Jun 2023
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I want to be Vicky  when I grow  up

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Jasper needs to be told that having  Charlie as a dad wouldn't have been sunshine and rainbows.  I still want to know who the bratty teenager he said he was raising was. I am looking forward to Charlie being brought up on fraud charges at least

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I wish someone in Bellas life had the maturity to say it's okay to tell Jasper that you have a bad relationship with Charlie  and he is on his own in pursuing a relationship with him. She also needs to press charges for assault and robbery.   Again, even though she is young, her friends should be able to make her see that Charlie won't go away if she ignores him

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Kate is Tanya's daughter.  I figured Charlie was the reviewer and I'm assuming he had Jessica mess stuff up in the kitchen 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow. What I want to know is does the teenager Charlie said he was raising when Jasper first made co tact actually exist? Who received Jaspers letter and who replied?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm assuming she's yelling at Charlie. I'm also sure that Jasper will be the one to out Edward as Anthony Masen

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 May 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Your leaving us HERE!

 

It's going to be a long week. 

I missed the dyslexia thing. I just couldn't picture a 10 year old writing the you're not and never will be her brother 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great chapter. Looking forward to seeing Charlie get what's coming to him

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Glad Jessica was only being used by Mike and not a willing accomplice 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I'm a little put off that Jasper is accepting of Charlie dating younger girls considering Alice would have been a teenager at the time. I wish Edward had answered no Alice didn't but Esme did

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

All she has to tell Jasper is she doesn't  have a good relationship with Charlie