Reviews by Gelsa
Wanted by fyrebyrd89 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 217]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Wanted

When outlaw Edward Cullen is wounded in a gunfight, he never expected to wake up with a double barrel shotgun nestled under his chin.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Western
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7527 Read Count: 20656
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2016 Updated: 10 Mar 2017
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2016 Title: Wanted

Love it.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2016 Title: Wanted

Meanie! Leaving us like this til Tuesday 

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2016 Title: Wanted

Thank you. I really enjoyed this 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to read it! I am so happy you enjoyed it :)

Fyre

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Blood has been spilled on both sides and the only way to ensure loyalty is also through blood.

Edward/Bella; Mafia; HEA

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131996 Read Count: 177471
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2016 Updated: 07 Apr 2019
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - no trucking way

Great meeting. Loved Claire as PA

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence

Can't  wait to see Bella take on Jacob. I hope Claire & her kid get out ok

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 chink in my armour

5%brave 95% stupid. She knows Jacob is violent. Going there without backup was stupid. That said, Jane or someone should teach Bella &Lizzie choke release and wrist release techniques

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 down to business

I hope Sheila gets away clean

Awakening by Ren68 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Book 4

Life isn't always what it seems, something I had learned in the past few years. Thinking life was cut and dry... turns out, it wasn't. Astonishing me was the twist and turns life takes, unexpectedly.  

Edward Cullen  

 

This book is were I go off the rails from Twilight. This is the book I was disappointed with when I read the series and also the one that forced me to write the story in the first place.

I warn all who read, I will not follow BD, this is the story as I saw it happen. Some may like it. Some may not, but this is what starting me on my journey of writing and I wouldn't have it any other way. At the present time I have four chapters of this story written and will try my hardest to keep at it and finish it within a reasonable time frame.

Hope you enjoy!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Man Of Faith
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12079 Read Count: 542
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2016 Updated: 01 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - A Wedding

You seriously killed Bella?  Yikes!



Author's Response:

Yep! She had to go. LOL. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-LONG NIGHT

Loved the talk with Carlisle



Author's Response:

I really wanted to show the family as a family in the true sense of the word. Glad it came off that way.

Cullenworth Manor by phillips Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 235]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward is promiscuous and totally self absorbed. He is the eldest child, the heir to  his father the Duke of Bedford title. Because of this his parents turn a blind eye to his ways. They belief once he's married he will settle down.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44693 Read Count: 47841
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 13 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Glad Edward found her. He will make sure she is taken care of

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

So glad you went this way.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Very nicely done 

Summary:

Bound and United

 

Bound and United is the third installment of the Bound Series.  It continues the story of Don Edward and Donna Bella as they fight with their most evil villian yet.  Will they be able to fight death and be joined once more or will they be forever torn apart from each other?

 

Part 3 in the Bound Series

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76085 Read Count: 183825
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Jan 2017
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved the dream E&B conversation.  Happy that  Edward  isn't  D O A and that Bella and the baby haven't  been hurt too badly yet

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Not a bad plan as long as Sean can refrain from saying the F word

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So happy Bella stabbed the ass

Summary: Past Featured Story

TOTGA

Bella Swan was dreading going back to her ten year high school reunion, over Valentine’s Day Weekend, for Hillsborough High School. Her time in high school in Tampa, Florida was not high on her list of pleasant experiences. She was quiet, unassuming and secretly in love with Edward Cullen. It was that unrequited love that forced her to move away to Seattle, as far from Tampa as possible. He never knew she existed. Or so she thought.

Edward was looking forward to his high school reunion because he was anxious to see the one that got away. Bella Swan was the quiet girl who never really interacted with anyone, but Edward saw that she was something special. But as ruler of the school, he had certain expectations to maintain. It was one of his biggest regrets. His life would have been easier if he had followed his heart. Now, he was a divorced father of two. His ex-wife, Tanya, who was his high school girlfriend, left him for a younger man and abandoned her children.

Will Bella be happy to see Edward or will she stay hidden amongst her classmates? Will Edward finally break the mold that was expected of him and open up his heart to the beautiful and shy Bella Swan? Will he be able to win back the one that got away?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196828 Read Count: 280569
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2016 Updated: 23 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Glad we'll  be seeing what Tanya is up to

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Did Tanya's sugar daddy just agree to her having Bella killed?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I suppose it would be too easy for him to show the email to Edward and just talk about it. I imagine Tanya paid the PI to send it since I don't think she'd  be computer savvy enough to send it without it bring traced back to her.   Does Charlie know about Bella's  books?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I suppose it would be too easy for him to show the email to Edward and just talk about it. I imagine Tanya paid the PI to send it since I don't think she'd  be computer savvy enough to send it without it bring traced back to her.   Does Charlie know about Bella's  books?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I suppose it would be too easy for him to show the email to Edward and just talk about it. I imagine Tanya paid the PI to send it since I don't think she'd  be computer savvy enough to send it without it bring traced back to her.   Does Charlie know about Bella's  books?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Emails are either directly from T or sent at her direction.

So glad you had Carlisle do the right thing

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Glad Quill has somewhat of a conscience. I really want to see Tanya  go in flames

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I'm guessing Tanya was the bathroom lady 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Yes! OK Reynold. Is Jenks Edward's lawyer too?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Yes! OK Reynold. Is Jenks Edward's lawyer too?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

She is a absolutely going to try to take the kids. I really hope you have her caught in the act. I'd rather not read about kid trauma 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Tanya living  near where Bella teaches, what can possibly go wrong?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Jacob is ridiculously stupid to trust Tanya with money.  I hope you are writing this so Tanya gets caught before she snatches the kids.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Sorry that Bella was injured but glad that she didn't take either kid. I wonder was Tanya lying about the officer or did the officer just betray her?

Summary:

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Bella has her life planned out. Her business is sucssesful and she is surrounded by people she cares about, so why is she so lonely. Fate changes her life but will she follow the righ path.

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76583 Read Count: 526941
[Report This] Published: 23 May 2016 Updated: 17 Oct 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Jacob sounds like a restraining order waiting to happen

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Can't wait to hear Bella explain this

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I guess being hospitalized is a good reason for being a no show. I hope he'll  recover quickly & that Bella will reach out to Emmett 



Author's Response:

Bella to the rescue again x

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Nice that Caius seems to have a conscious 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Really enjoy the story



Author's Response:

Thank you x

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Can't wait to find out what happened 6 years  ago 



Author's Response:

All will be revealed x

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Glad Jacob hasn't turned violent yet.  I still think it was insane for Bella not to leave the apartment. I hope Jasper turns up with reinforcements before Jacob hurts someone.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Great story. Thanks 

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Very interesting 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 37

I'm not sure if it was Rose or Bella who spoke at the end. It is good that they know it's a smear campaign against Edward. I'm almost expecting that Jacob and Company were the rapists. I wonder if when they were beating up the homeless dude if they saw their scapegoat or they've even made the connection between the two

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

So glad  Jacob is going  down  for  beating  Edward 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I'm interested if Edward will see Jake & co at the gym & if he recognizes them as his attackers

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I hope before she leaves  the diner you have her take put her cell, call (or pretend to call)  someone and ask how one gets a restraining order.

 

Either that or have her order 2 burittos

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

So glad E got to hear the truth 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I knew it was Jake & co that attacked him

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

In a way it's better this way. Bella can have Emmett tell Edward she believes the allegations are unfounded & wants to hear his side of things as soon as he is ready to tell her.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

So glad he asked her 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I hope Bella can dial 911 or she should just walk out of her apartment and to the doorman

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Loved Emmett's reaction. 

Jake is insane. Do people  like him really  exist?

 



Author's Response:

Oh he does and he is going to get so much worse x

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I hope Edward is still there. I bet that Jacob & Co were his attackers 



Author's Response:

He is safe now 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wow

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

She's  insane. She should just leave him a message via the restaurant.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I guess he blew all his money on flowers. Either that or he expensed them to his job. What a jerk. I'm  glad she made it through the date without being  raped

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I initially thought Jacob was behind the videos but I don't think he's smart enough. I think it is Esme's ex

Summary: Past Featured Story

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For once Bella takes a stand and doesn't let Alice and Edward trample all over the top of her.  

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3275 Read Count: 954
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2016 Updated: 28 May 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like your universe. Please keep on correcting

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I will do my best xx

AAP

Summary:

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The moment Bella wakes up and see's Edward pulling away from her, as he prepares to leave.. No abandon her. One-shot. Twilight AU


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1353 Read Count: 601
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2016 Updated: 31 May 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 31 May 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story 



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it x

AAP

Bewitched by TwiAddictAnne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 102]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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She was his only friend. She was the laughter of his childhood. And then she was gone. Will he ever find the love that was lost? Or was it all for naught? A love story as old as the times. 18th Century DukeWard. All Human. Canon couples. Rated for language and adult situations.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11225 Read Count: 18248
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2016 Updated: 15 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter-14

Lovely

Summary:

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Bella and the Cullen's prepare themselves for an impromptu visit from The Denali's. When she realises Tanya will not back off even with knowing Edward's ring is on Bella's finger, she decides to fight dirty for once.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1071 Read Count: 1689
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2016 Updated: 01 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, happy you enjoyed it xx

AAP

Summary:

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Bella has had enough of being ignored, talked over and treated like a child. Enough is enough. Pity Edward's too wrapped up in running her life for her, to see it coming.     


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Visibility
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1624 Read Count: 1520
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2016 Updated: 02 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bella at least gets a happy ever after.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Glad you liked it xx

AAP

Summary: Past Featured Story

Leaving behind a misserable childhood Bella trades one type of misery for another kind.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Gelesen
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64876 Read Count: 46224
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2016 Updated: 20 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Very impressed with Jasper 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

How can any father want his daughter to marry that?

Summary:

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The moment Bella see's "The Cullen's" she knows they are something more. She also knows she does not like Edward, not one little bit.    


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Gone
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2029 Read Count: 771
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2016 Updated: 04 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice



Author's Response:

Thanks xx

AAP

Summary:

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She's different, smart, intuitive and best of all she seems to hates Eddie-boy on sight.      


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Gone
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2094 Read Count: 796
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2016 Updated: 06 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cool



Author's Response:

Thanks xx

AAp

Summary:

 

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AfTer they return from Volterra. Bella realizes nothing is going to change - unless she changes herself first.      


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10391 Read Count: 3494
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2016 Updated: 07 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 4: What's Alice's Game

I like this one the best of your others. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you liked it xx

AAP

Summary:

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Bella has had enough of being treated like a child. Who the hell does he think he is ... Her father.    


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1853 Read Count: 963
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2016 Updated: 12 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I always  love an independent  Bella. I prefer  stories like this when Edward  is given a chance to change instead of being immature  and getting (deservedly)kicked to the curb



Author's Response:

Thanks, yes he sometimes needs a gentle guiding hand lol

AAP

Summary:

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Bella ignores Edwards' proposal, mortified that he would use it as a bargaining chip. Held against her for Sex and him to Change her! Who can she turn to for comfort? 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3743 Read Count: 684
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2016 Updated: 14 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very well done



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you liked it xx

AAP

Summary:

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Bella puts her foot down, for once. She's having her wedding, her way, and Alice can go to hell.     


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wedding
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1082 Read Count: 932
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2016 Updated: 16 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Looking forward to the follow-up.



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you liked it xx

AAP

Summary:

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Just how did Edward convince Bree to come home with him, from Seattle?  


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/OC
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1680 Read Count: 209
[Report This] Published: 17 Jun 2016 Updated: 17 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love seeing an Edward  who can mature and learn from his mistakes



Author's Response:

Thank you, yes thought I would let him be happy xx

AAP

Summary:

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Bella is hurt by Alice and really confused by Edward's reaction. But she soon sees the reason why.  Twilight Saga AU


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4785 Read Count: 2789
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2016 Updated: 21 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 4: The Mind Charmer

Nice



Author's Response:

Thanks, just trying something different xx

AAP

Summary:

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Esme reflects on all that has happened to her family over the years, bringing them to this the end of an era.    


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Gone
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1428 Read Count: 414
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2016 Updated: 23 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love Esme



Author's Response:

Thank you, poor Esme is always missed out xx

AAP

Clarity by maymay74 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

When you're the son of an ex-boyband member, certain benefits come with the title: A privileged upbringing, money, fame... Some are wanted, some cause more trouble, especially when people wants to be with you to become famous by association. What if you find the one person who wants you for being you? What if, unknowingly, she has more in common with you that you know about?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42983 Read Count: 9842
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2016 Updated: 11 Dec 2017
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 May 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Looking forward to the next chapter. What a place to leave us!

Summary:

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Jacob doesn't get it! What can vampire Edward give human Bella that he couldn't?  Eclipse AU.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2478 Read Count: 1367
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2016 Updated: 27 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Power Struggle

I love your take on Jake.



Author's Response:

Thanks, thought we'ed give him the benefit of the doubt in this one xx

AAP

Summary:

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Having put her foot down, for once. Bella now has to tackle Alice, She's putting up with no nonsense. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wedding
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2848 Read Count: 882
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2016 Updated: 29 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loving the strong Bella and hating the mean Alice



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you like them so far xx

AAP

Summary:

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Bella is hurt, Jake's a moron and Charlie finally opens his eyes. Eclipse AU


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1562 Read Count: 1355
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2016 Updated: 01 Jul 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is awesome. Charile's reaction to that kiss in the book always bothered me.  I like your Charlie better



Author's Response:

Thanks, yes never sat well with me either, no loving father

would say nothing or laugh in your face, if your hand was broken!

It's sick at best, depraved at worst!

AAP

Sunrise by flamingpen18 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 203]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan has always "sensed" that she was meant for something more. When she moves to Forks, Wa., she finds out that she is more a part of the supernatural world than her dreams could have ever prepared her for. With help from the Cullens, Bella will embrace her destiny.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45225 Read Count: 27010
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2016 Updated: 15 Oct 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I really  love this version.  Thank you 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Please continue posting

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Can't wait for the biology project

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I like that your Bella is able to be direct with mic. I also like that you're not having Edward fight bloodlust and the whole singer thing. Please continue 

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love it

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Sounds like Jacob's already  phased

Summary:

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Well now that's sorted, what about the future? This is what's on Bella's mind.   Breaking Dawn Pt 1 AU


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wedding
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3515 Read Count: 1347
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2016 Updated: 03 Jul 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Nice Day, For A White Wedding

Love it. Glad Alice can learn



Author's Response:

Thanks yes she not bad,

just used to getting her own way all the time xx

AAP

Six by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 371]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sixth sense: a special ability to know something that cannot be learned by using the five senses. Humans use 10% of their brain, but it's been proven that those with a sixth sense use more. Some wish to harness that power. With a target on us, sixxers are hunted as we try to stay hidden, blending in with the average world around us...when we are anything but average.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 151831 Read Count: 40946
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2016 Updated: 23 Aug 2017
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Edward was all kinds of awesome as was Bella

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

How did Renee know about Bella's talent & Volterra?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Epilogue

Great story

Summary:

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 Bella is really annoyed when Edward ignores her after the van incident. But she can play games too, then suddenly it's over. Will she  stand her ground and demand answers!   Set in 2004, Twilight AU,


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6415 Read Count: 984
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2016 Updated: 11 Jul 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Trust and Truth

I love this Edward  and Bella



Author's Response:

Thank you xx

AAP

Summary:

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So it wasn't Delhi Belly after all, well how was I to know. He said it couldn't happen, that should have been my first clue.

This is the last part of the series. (Wedding Series part 5) Short-Story (6 Chaps). Twilight Saga AU

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wedding
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8031 Read Count: 2835
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2016 Updated: 25 Jul 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: When In Rome!

So glad you decided to continue with  the pregnancy 



Author's Response:

Thanks, yeah thought I better finish it off completely xx

AAP

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 6: The Countdown Begins!

Very well done. Thank you for nixing Renesme



Author's Response:

Thank you, yes even as a middle name it would have been okay,

but not as a first name xx

AAP

Summary:

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The battle with the newborns was about to begin, The Wolves and Vampires were working together to protect Bella, but it was  coming at a price. Eclipse AU Sequel to 'When Did I Become Invisible?' Short Story (4 Chaps) Again published 2 chaps at a time.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Visibility
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6870 Read Count: 3175
[Report This] Published: 29 Jul 2016 Updated: 31 Jul 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Grand Central Station

I prefer the stories where Edward is capable of learning and growing, but this looks like it will be fun



Author's Response:

Thanks, Edward too  controlling for me, I like the strong silent type better lol xx

AAP

Chimera by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1017]
Summary: Past Featured Story

chimera

 

Summary: Bella Swan has lived a sheltered life, and chooses to go to college as far from home as her strict parents will allow. She runs into Edward Cullen, a gorgeous law student. They become friends and one night cross the line of friendship in a way that will alter the life of both of them more than anyone can ever believe. When DNA doesn't tell the same story Bella tells, how will her young life be altered?
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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256985 Read Count: 332882
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2016 Updated: 30 Mar 2017
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Is Alice really pregnant? 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Lots of progress. I think I'd like to see an outtake in either Alice or Angela''s pov

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I heard it wasEmmet who was  shot I had a feeling Charlie did it. I didn't think he would have killed Renee, though. Did Alice set Emmet up by telling him Charlie raped her?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Our Edward isn't the brightest bulb in the chandelier. Did he not know that Bella is short for Isabella?  It's not that common a name that there would be more than one waitress called that at a diner.

I wonder if Ed really knows Ethan is his great grandson. He looks so much like Edward & Elizabeth did say Edward would be separated from his girl for a time if he didn't  give her what  she needs.  Can't  wait to find out the identity of the camera operator. 

 

I think I'd also like to see a Jasper POV in this 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Really confused about the timeline. I am under the impression that Lauren & Jess took her to the Dr within days of that party. If that is correct then Edward is definitely the father

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

So glad they are talking.

I don't  understand  why she was giving Alice money for the dorm. It's been 30 years since I've been in college, but I'm pretty sure the RA never  collected dorm fees

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Loving Jess & Lauren. It's a nice change to see them written   as supportive friends

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

It was most certainly a setup. How on Earth does Alice know Bella's due date anyway? Why on Earth is Alice smoking if she's pregnant?   

I'm ready to start a free Jasper campaign 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Bella was obviously roofied possibly raped definitely sexually assaulted. And I'm sure Alex has pictures documenting it. We want Alice to burn in hell right next to Charlie and Renee

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Esme & Carlisle handled Alice well.  I wonder how Alice managed to get to the receipts? Edward needs to get Bella to her own place ASAP or throw Jasper out.  I imagine Alice will be at the apartment all the while Bella is there. It looks like Angela and Alice have this good cop bad cop thing going on. I'm guessing so Angela can make herself look good 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Please take care of yourself and your family first. Everything else takes a backseat.

I am thrilled that Bella Smacked Alice I only wish she'd d smacked her father as well. Interesting choice of words on Charlie's part that he heard she tried to sleep with a professor. Does that mean that Uley didn't rape her or he  just didn't have the guts to tell his friend that he did?