Reviews by Gelsa
Summary:




Banner by: Caiteexx Graphics

SUMMARY: This is a companion piece to Family Business, all in Tanya's point of view. Let's take a look at this woman's life, and see what led her down the road she traveled.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4302 Read Count: 1504
[Report This] Published: 12 Sep 2014 Updated: 12 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well done. What a nasty piece of work.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

Banner courtsey of Mina Rivera

 

Edward & Bella may have had some difficulties in the beginning of their relationship but as they move forward, they will find that it will take even more work to stay together. In order to make her future work with Edward, Bella has to search out her past. It just may take this journey for Edward and Bella to learn the true definition of love. Continuation of Lottery of Life.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80982 Read Count: 22997
[Report This] Published: 13 Sep 2014 Updated: 07 Jul 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I hope you let us hear Cherry's reaction to her story

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Glad we got to hear from Cherry

 

Burn Notice by ifyouweremine Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The last days of summer. Two weeks of freedom. One lie. What could possibly go wrong? BxE, canon couples, AH-OOC. M-RATING for lemons

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25364 Read Count: 13462
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2014 Updated: 07 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Nice going Bella. What was Lauren thinking? Did she want 'Tony' to get beaten or was she hoping he'd beat Sam?

Savage by honeyandholywater Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Bella's parents never split up, Renee never followed her dreams and escaped Forks. Thus, Bella has grown up in a constantly overcast small town with a police chief father and a mother who's checked out emotionally.  She's still the straight A student whose never met a boy who peaked her interest but she did find other ways to escape her suffocating life. 

Edward and the Cullens move back to Forks as they did previous to the first novel, only Bella is already there.  Edward is still a vampire with an Edwardian man's sensibilities, and he's still drawn inexorably to Bella, despite her pasttimes. 

 

for images related to this go to my tumblr: honeyandholywater.tumblr.com


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19563 Read Count: 13534
[Report This] Published: 25 Sep 2014 Updated: 06 Aug 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Can't wait for Edward's reaction

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Sad to see B using. I hope E will be good for her

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Pop Religion tour has paired sexy pop star, Issa Swan, with the leading Christian rock band Pure Religion. After watching sexy but chaste lead singer Edward Cullen perform night after night and really getting to know him, she can't take it anymore. Tonight, she intends to make him hers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122122 Read Count: 16292
[Report This] Published: 15 Oct 2014 Updated: 30 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Payback and Yes

I think Edward should propose on stage at the end of the last performance



Author's Response:

Hmmm... that would have been super sweet. Hopefully you will enjoy the way things go. ;) Thanks so much for reading and for the review. If you celebrate it, I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving! Here is a small teaser for the next chapter. XOXO, Lissa

After a long, slow kiss, I drag her over to my bed and push her down to take a seat.
 
“So …” I start. “I was, uh, thinkin’ …” I’m a bumbling mess. Scared to just go on and spit out what I wanna say. “I was thinkin’.”

“Yeah? About what?” she asks.
 
“Well I was thinking weshouldgetmarriedinAtlanta,” I say, too fast for her to possibly understand me. But I got it out once, maybe the second time I can actually say it so she can hear me.

“Huh?”

I force myself to slow it down and say sincerely, “Bella, I want us to get married in Atlanta … next week.”

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Dearly Beloved

Even better than a public proposal



Author's Response:

Yayyyy!! I am so glad to hear you liked it, although a public proposal would have been great too. No they have to get through tonight and then face the friends and family they left out. Stay tuned to see how that turns out :) Thanks so much for leaving us your thoughts, e love reading every single one.

Fyre

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

A serial killer’s on the loose. The victims are all 5’ to 5’7, brown eyes, long brown hair. To make matters worse four friends are being stalked. With letters, photos, phones calls and threats, will the stalker get too close? Is the stalker and the killer one in the same? What happens when tragedy strikes and the girls pay the ultimate price? Annual Halloween story, all human.

Banner By: CaiteexxGraphics

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41521 Read Count: 12414
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2014 Updated: 25 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I still like Sam for the caller & wouldn't put it past him to injure himself

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ok. You've confused me. Edward left early. He could have done the apartment. Then again, Sam could be paying someone to make calls. Either way  she needs to dump Sam. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I think Sam is stalking her. In the last chapter he mentions something about ending up with guys they didn't know, but I don't recall Bella telling him.

Summary:

 

It's been 60 years since the Cullens heard that Bella died, and 60 years since Edward ran off. They don't know where he's been or what he's been doing. Perhaps a small lead will help the family find him.

~ Written for the Halloween one shot request over on BetterinTexasFiction. Warning - Character death, language.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Drama, Horror, Mystery, One-Shot, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5448 Read Count: 998
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2014 Updated: 25 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Tell-Tale Heart

Extremely freaky



Author's Response:

Thanks! I was going for creepy and freaky without being graphic.

Thanks for reading!

 

Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench

Summary:

Edward is from old money. Bella is not.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33054 Read Count: 32552
[Report This] Published: 26 Oct 2014 Updated: 26 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh Edward. You were doing so well. You should have come clean about the bj

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

if Audrey knew about the abortion before she went to Bella's office then she is the best witch in the world

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I hope we get a Vicky POV. I also hope Edward learned from his mistake and is honest with Bella.  Why on earth do people in fan fiction never password protect their cell phones?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Kate rocks & I misjudged James. Thanks for the pleasant surprise

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm amazed that Victoria doesn't see how this could blow up in her face.  The only reason James isn't pursuing Bella is because she's with Edward.  I can just picture James swooping in to comfort Bella as she takes time away from Edward

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I can understand Bella being upset, but she has to realize Edward was in no condition to give consent. What Victoria did was essentially rape.

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Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I really hope that it isn't Edward's.  I was very proud of Bella, and very surprised his parents thought it was classy to say those things to Bella's face

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Bella is pregnant & there will be a grandchild born a Cullen. Good for Edward for standing by Bella

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

SO neither of them are showing yet?



Author's Response:

Very slightly in Bels's case, but not enough for it to be obvious.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I hope Bella will soon realize it's not her fault

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Good for Bella. I hope they do go to FL

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Way to go, Edward!!!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I wonder if V will come clean.  On a side note, since Edward's family made such a big deal of Bella wanting the Cullen name, I think he should become a Swan after the wedding 

Summary:

New probee officer Bella Swan is put on the Molten, Washington Detective squad. Once her probation period is over she gets assigned to pull duty with the narcotics squad. Will her direct supervisor Edward Cullen treat her like all other detectives, or will she have a lot to prove? What kind of trouble will happen when Edward's own life is in her hands. All Human.

BANNER BY: CaiteexxGraphics


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20896 Read Count: 44718
[Report This] Published: 26 Oct 2014 Updated: 14 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Are they just planning to take out as many cops as possible?  Good thing Bella is able to tell J what's really going on

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

No hidden gps tracker for Bella?

Summary:

From the day she was born Bella was fascinated by Edward until,slowly,deeply she starts to fall in love with him. They Swan's are birds that fall in love once and then it is for a life time, so why did she fell for the most arrogant unfeeling stubborn mule of a boy, Life is so unfair...............stories/23407/images/large_2.jpg


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6542 Read Count: 7817
[Report This] Published: 10 Nov 2014 Updated: 22 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-wish mommy would come.....

Looks like Edward didn't approve of those girls making Bella feel bad



Author's Response:

You caught that didn't you? I thought you missed his sneaky ass sitting alone minding his own business....

Aria.

Regardless by Ray Ryan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 135]
Summary:

 

When Bella Swan signed away her life to a man nineteen years her senior, she never once imagined that she would win his heart. Never once did she think that she would be the only woman that could truly say she won the heart of the billionaire, Edward Anthony Masen Cullen. She gave him everything she had, regardless of his lies, his callousness and his vindictiveness. She loved him for he was but more importantly she loved him for who he wasn't. Regardless of his imperfections and coldness, she broke down every wall. She showed him that even he could be loved.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10091 Read Count: 15519
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2014 Updated: 10 Jan 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Can't wait to see who or what got shot

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Always happy to see an update. Good to see the background on Edward. Can't wait for more

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Mafia man Edward, has closed his heart off to everyone outside his family. He gets injured, and is helped by a young woman who seems to not like him. He then meets a young girl that tugs at his heart and he soon finds himself wanting to be something else so he can be worthy of them both.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74517 Read Count: 91259
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2014 Updated: 27 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am guessing that Bella & Mike are step sibs & Sasha is their half sib.  The drugs from James are probably needed for a medical reason & they don't have the money to go through a doctor for a scrip

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great story. Thanks

Soul Quest by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 160]
Summary:

Edward Masen does all he can to protect his little sister. When he gets involved with the wrong people, will the most least likely person he knows be his saving grace? Will Edward be able to find his way back into his body? Will he be able to be there for his little sister and Bella, or will he be too late to save anyone?

Banner by: CaiteexxGraphics

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41159 Read Count: 23152
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I wonder if James is Bella's brother or knew Bella's brother

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I really hope E is having an out of body experience while doctors are working on him

 

Summary:

bannner

All of Bella's memories have been erased. She knows nothing about herself or the two men that are holding her captive. The only thing she can recall is a feeling of urgency ... Danger. She knows that she needs to escape ... Run ... While she still can. ***DRABBLE***


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Sci-Fi, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23513 Read Count: 41755
[Report This] Published: 20 Dec 2014 Updated: 06 Feb 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Really hoping Edmund's hybridness gives him the ability to save himself

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

A ballerina figurine and a pair of sad brown eyes change Christmas for Edward in ways he never imagined.

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14186 Read Count: 46989
[Report This] Published: 23 Dec 2014 Updated: 25 Jan 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I sure wasn't. If the big man is Emmett is he husband or brother here?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I don't think Royce is Charlie's father. I think Charlie is Edward's half brother

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 25 May 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Really curious about what that so called father did to him



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks for saying hello!  Edward seemed willing to tell Bella about what happened to him, so hopefully we'll find out more next chapter.  ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113790
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 15 part 5

Real threats or Tanya?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 9 Part 1

Not sure why Jasper thinks E would automatically be the bad guy in the press. After all when he thought Alice was Tanya's messenge he pointed out how bad T would look if word got out that she wwas at the spa while her son wasn't keeping his formula down.  

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 20 Part 3

Nice to see them interacting with others again

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 17 Part 11

Can't wait for next chapter

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 15 part 3

I hope The photoshoot beginning of the end for Tania. I t would be great if Bella had school and either had to leave early or couldn't go at all. I'd love for Tanya's nonrelationship with her son gets caught on camera

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

I'm thinking the politest way to spin this is to say that T isn't ready to be a parent at this point in her life & E is. They part amicably and go on with the rest of their lives.

Is T so oblivious that she hasn't yet received alized Rose has moved in?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 13 part 8

Out of the mouths of babes. Edward should start wearing a wire & recording everything she says about her son

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 13 Part 6

Very clever, Edward. I'm as curious  as he is  to see if Tanya will figure out what he meant

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 13 part 7

I can't believe it wasn't immediately obvious that Jasper was doing the walk of shame

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 15 Part 1

Rose sounds great

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 17 Part 4

I really hope that knock is someone to tell Edward what's going on

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 17 Part 5

At long last.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 16 Part 1

Rose & Tanya living in close proximity? This ought to be good

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 16 Part 2

I'm guessing Tanya will have a fit if Charlie isn't well enough for the photo shoot. Is she living there at all?  I noticed we didn't hear anything from her about Charlies illness

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 16 Part 4

I had a feeling Tanya would take Charlie no matter what.  I'd like to see an Alice and Tanya pov on this

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 16 Part 7

We really need an Edward pov. I'm having a hard time believing he still went through with the weekend plans.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 16 Part 8

Thanks for the quick update. Of course I still want more. I'd love to hear how Tanya convince him to go to the photo shoot if he's even there. I'm guessing she destroy this phone and maybe receive him

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 17 part 1

Glad to see EPOV. Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

Wow. She knows just how to manipulate him. 

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 17 Part 13

I hope you go with Jasper coming up with a way to spin T & E going their separate ways with E as the custodial parent that makes them both look good. I don't want to see T manipulating him by using Charlie

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 18 Part 1

As much as I would enjoy destroying T in the press over this, someone has to think long term. Any press generated from this will be on the internet forever. Charlie will one day be able to read and do internet searches about his egg donor. How many details  about her indifference to him does he need to know? Or have his peers knows?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 18 part 3

I really  hope James advised her to take it and that they make provisions so James won't  have any rights

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 20 Part 1

I'm glad Tanya is gone freeing E & B to have a relationship. I am probably an anomaly since I read NC17 stories in spite of the "lemons" not because of them. So, I get it. Their physical compatibility exceeds their elections. Can we get back to the rest of their relationship? Is Tanya really gone? Will she make trouble? Will B have a rough time when they go public?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 20 Part 10

Great to see updates again. I really  enjoy this one

Summary:

Side shots of Bella and Edward's POV from our Christmas story called Momma Santa's Christmas Plan.

 

banner by: tonks1865 / Tiffany Kennedy


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21090 Read Count: 6937
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2015 Updated: 28 Jan 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Poor Bethany.  I hope Tanya can help her

Summary: Past Featured Story

The One and Only

 

What would it be like to know at first sight your one and only love? What if this was given to you as a gift to be passed down thru your generations? Follow the story of how an Angel from heaven gave this gift to the Clan Cullen in 1314 Scottish Highlands and how the gift is passed thru out the generations to present time. Will the Cullen Men find their One and Only?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: Stories I've read, Read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83342 Read Count: 134459
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2015 Updated: 28 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Back to Work

I'm assumng mystery POV is the part timer from the hospital.  I hopt you won't do theobvious thing and have Tanya make a play for Edward.  I wonder if she is working with mystery POV

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

I knew Tanya was working with the stalker

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart

But was Tanya working with Mike?

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Finding His Reason for Living

WAy to go Bella!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

BTTF

A Mafia/BDSM story.  A Don who is a Dom; two powerful personalities bound together in one body.  Will it be too much for one woman to handle, or is she exactly what is needed to balance this man. 

top ten

Bound To The Family was awarded one of the Top Ten Favourite Completed Fics for the month of August

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129501 Read Count: 601592
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2015 Updated: 08 Aug 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Loved how they set up the hit

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 31 May 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great chapter. Having a hard time with  Francis being the featured saint. I tend to think of caring for God's  creatures when I  think of him. I'd  think the mob would go for a more martial saint



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.  And I wanted you to know that when I was doing my research for the ceremony it had that St. Francis picture was used.  Though the ceremony varies from family to family, it usually involves the pricking of the trigger finger of the inductee, then dripping blood onto a picture of a Saint, typically St. Francis of Assisi or the Virgin Mary, which is then set alight in his hand and kept burning until the inductee has sworn the oath of loyalty to his new "family," e.g., "As this card burns, may my soul burn in Hell if I betray the oath of Omertà," or "As burns this saint, so will burn my soul. I enter alive and I will have to get out dead. 

I hope this answers the question why I used St. Francis.  I hope I get the Italian Wedding correct and please let me know it you have any other concerns.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 24 May 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'm hoping James will get taken out before Michael does

I miss you by louanne61 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 198]
Summary: Past Featured Story

When geek medical student Edward meets geek student/librarian Bella. They fall in love in the library. Lies are told and secrets are kept soon rip them apart. Can they endure the events that follow to find each other again.

This story has a happy ever after.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 174321 Read Count: 53443
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2015 Updated: 14 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 11 May 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Glad the snake is coming clean. There's a lot of Blank Space in the post. Was it supposed to end with Esme telling Carlisle with a ruined his son's life?



Author's Response:

I wanted to answer before I go and pick up my Granddaughter. Part 2 of this chapter explains in details what the backmail is all about. It is a bit of a long explanation as it involves indirectly his sister Claire, that's why I split the chapter into 2.

Where was the blank spaces? I'll see if I can answer any questions you have.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

What did Emmett do? Was that soda doctored? 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading the chapter and leaving a review. Yes, the soda was doctored, some people think you have to get drunk to have a good time. I think it would of been better to stop after the bowling. You find out what Emmett has done to Edward in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope the place where Bella put the ring for safekeeping  was missed by the cops and Tanya doesn't have it



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving me your thoughts.

I'm hoping you will be pleased with the next chapter.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I have a bad feeling about this spa. It also doesn't make sense that B would just go without calling E & thanking him first



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. You can breathe, the spa treat is from Edward. Bella is with Rose and Angela, that is the reason she went so easily. Neither of the girls would put her in danger.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Sounds about right for Emmett. I'm worrying that Carlisle and Alice have something up their sleeves to disrupt the wedding



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving me a review. I think what Emmett and Liam did was really horrible. My husbands friends did the same thing to him the night before our wedding. I walked down the aisle to see my new husband to be with bright yellow hair they had also put perm solution in. It looked like a hay stack. I couldn't stop laughing.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

What a way to reunite!. I'm curious about something the nurse said. Does Edward have a picture of Bella & Katie?



Author's Response:

Hi thank you for leaving a review. So glad you like this story. Yes Edward has a picture of Bella, but not Katie. He doesn't know anything about the children. Finding out Bella was Katie's guardian came as a shock to him. He already thinks she could have moved on.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 May 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

This has to be the most despicable Carlisle ever. Staging an accident & risking his son's life to stop the wedding? What on Earth does Eleazer have on him that he would go to such lengths?

And Bella I get that she is insecure but I don't understand why she would believe anything Carlisle or Alices would tell her about Edward



Author's Response:

Hi thanks for leaving me your thoughts. Carlisle is a bit of a snake. The next 3 chapters will hold a lot of answers, hope you will stick with me.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Glad they're together & that Tanya got detained. Can't wait for the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a review. Most people are happy they are together and hope you like what I have install for them ;)

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Sorry to hear of your hospital  stay. I hope that you're in good health now.

I like how you're  handling their separation.

It seems  that Alice takes after Peter in many  ways.  I wonder with Charlotte  being from Texas if there is a connection with Jasper. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I have 2 more surgerys and hopefully all the cancer will be gone and they can repair the damage it has left behind. It's been a long 2 years. But my daughter is having another baby in April so I have something to look forward to.

I'm glad you liked the way the separation bit of this story. I just hope you like the next chapter will Bella. Both these chapters took me a while to write.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow! Good thing you started out with an old, married E & B.



Author's Response:

Hi

Thank you for leaving me a review, I really apprieciate it.

I think I would of been lynched by now if people didn't know it had a hea :)

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

So glad Tanya didn't  get her hands on the ring. Also glad that B &E are communicating again



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review. It is good to see Bella and Edward back together again. I think everyone is glad Tanya hasn't got the ring.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Good for Bella. Edward must be some kind of savant. Smart in school stuff and completely clueless  anything else 



Author's Response:

Hi thank you for leaving me this review. Bella has been smart for once and followed her head and not her heart. We will see what Edward explaniation is in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Excellent chapter.

 

I hope you are feeling better soon



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Glad Emmett  talked some sense into hi . 

I hope you  have a quick recovery 



Author's Response:

Thanks as always for the review. I love what Emmett had done for them both.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 18 May 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I never imagined that. Peter is Pond scum. I noticed he didn't admit to setting up Edwards accident before the wedding. Is that because Edward and Max attacked him before he before he got there? I refuse to believe that accident wasn't a setup since they were people who knew Dr Cullen nearby in Scrubs



Author's Response:

Hi thank you for leaving me a review. I think the twist took everyone by surprise. I'm glad your enjoying the story :)

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 25 May 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

The internet to the rescue. So glad she knows the truth.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. She certainly has learnt a lot in this chapter ;)

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Well worth waiting for. 



Author's Response:

Thank you as always for the review. Happy New Year.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Glad to see them moving forward and getting settled in their lives



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I hope you will like the next two chapters.q

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Perfect wedding. Glad Peter had enough sense to keep Alice away



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving me a review. The wedding was a nice, and personal. Peter can be a really decent person. He must feel bad about hurting Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Thank you. I really  enjoyed it



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing the story. I appreciate your support through out the story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella is an English woman, trying to escape a marriage she doesn't want. Edward is a Scottish Laird, with a soft spot for a damsel in distress and a hate for the English Redcoats that pursue her, but what does he do with her now that he has saved her? He has no choice, other than to bring her home, but he wasn't counting on falling for the lass on the journey to Castle Menzies.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32098 Read Count: 136771
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2015 Updated: 07 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 30 May 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I think it's a trick

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 May 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Surprised Edward didn't think to hold Tiffany and let the real assailant believe he stopped looking. 

 



Author's Response:

Hello! I just wanted to say a huge thank you for all your wonderful reviews on my story. I  read and treasure every single one of them. x x

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I'm glad B was able to defend herself.

Eclipse Island by maymay74 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 85]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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People came to Eclipse Island to leave their troubles behind, at least that was Jasper thought. Too bad for him the other guests have other plans on mind. Drugs, sex, blackmail, murder... this wasn't the paradise they promised him. A story narrated by Jasper. AH, OOC, HEA.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45931 Read Count: 5889
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2015 Updated: 13 Oct 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 May 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Well Duh Jasper!1



Author's Response:

Hi!

Yeah, he really didn't want to see it :)

Thanks

May

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I think Bella knew about the DEA looking in to Mike

 



Author's Response:

Hi!

Sorry for taking so long to answer. 

Bella is an enigma, and with the next chapter you will think she knows more than she admit.

Thanks for reading and commenting, I appreciate it.

May

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Heavy is the head that wears the crown, noble the ill-prepared to turn it down. Bella is no one, a lady's maid at a girl's school until the princess she serves changes her life with a choice she would never make herself. Now she sets off into a world she doesn't know, betrothed to a man who will never know her.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 123897 Read Count: 109561
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2015 Updated: 26 Dec 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 May 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Loved the letter. They should  be careful that James' gloating  isn't  misdirection 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Bella rocks!

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

OK. In a country where women ride astride on horseback how valid a measure of 'virtue' is blood at first intercourse? The hymen could have been broken from riding

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I hope her time alone is not interrupted. I can picture James stopping in or Tanya starting rumors. Won't Tanya be surprised to learn that Edward isn't free to marry her

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

So Bella and Alice are twins?

 

Great news about your mom.