Reviews by Gelsa
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Detective Cullen has been married to his job for a very long time, and he doesn’t ever plan to change.  Bella Swan the overweight girl who gets used and tossed aside is his favorite waitress.  Can they make more out of this than friendship with benefits, or will she send him away when she decides she wants more?

(The use of the word steaks vs. stakes is a play on words - just FYI)


Banner by: Deebelle OneFic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 159720
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2014 Updated: 16 Mar 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Loved how she put Jacob in his place

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478599
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

If you're going to get a kid ice cream why on earth wouldn't you as them what flavor they want?

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Seattle pharmacist Bella Swan thinks her chance at a fairy tale love story is over when her parents push her towards an arranged marriage. For Doctor Edward Cullen, love was never in the radar. Will the arrangement mean a love-less marriage? Or will love find them along the way? AH, OOC, Canon Couples. Rated mainly for language but may contain adult situations in later chapters.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206585 Read Count: 201887
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2014 Updated: 15 Feb 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter- 42: New Year, New Beginning

Loved how they handled Jake

 



Author's Response:

LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

Thanks for the review.

The next chapter should be up on Friday.

Take care.

Ann

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner courtsey of Fallingsnow Winter

Bella has been blessed with the finer things in life. She has always been focused on what she has and never understanding that money doesn't buy you everything. It will take one stupid bet and a homeless man to teach her what really is important in life. Can Edward get through to snobby Bella Swan and show her what she has been missing? AH HEA Mature.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113417 Read Count: 56681
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2014 Updated: 08 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Loved both speeches

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great chapter. Very proud of Michael

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by:CaiteexxGraphics

SUMMARY: Edward, fresh out of veterinary school moves to the small town his grandfather was from, after his sudden death. There he inherits his veterinary clinic and ranch. He finds himself intrigued by the young Isabella who tries to runaway with her brother several times. What will Edward do when he finds a journal his grandfather kept and realizes that his own grandfather was trying to help her and her brother get away?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76586 Read Count: 117708
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2014 Updated: 29 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow.  I'm so glad Edward found the journal

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 30 May 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Okay, I understand why Anthony was waiting on Edward.  No one in the town believed him.  This leads me to question what made the towns folk decide Charlie was more credible than Anthony.

 

I wish Edward had asked Rose if she spanks her own kids & why she thinks spanking would work

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 24 May 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Rather surprised they didn't table their conversation until the kids were gone

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Glad they are safe with Edward. I hope he can keep them that way

Summary:

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A ruthless criminal detached from all emotions brought to Las Vegas on a job. A young woman trying to move on after escaping an abusive relationship.

 

One drunken night brings them together. Can they survive in a world filled with lies and deception? Mobward/Mafia.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136341 Read Count: 126055
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2014 Updated: 04 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Edward really needs to shoot his 'father'.  I hope Bella tells him as well as Carlisle & Ago so they can protect the girls

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 26 May 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Looking forward to dinner at the parents.  

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 May 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Please explain why Bella was so at ease with Edward's Dad

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

How did Jasper not know this?

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by Marie Carro

 

TFFA Banner

 

 

Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146714
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

I would love it if the next time Carlisle talks about the colon surname Edward would say that's okay the baby and I will take bella's name.

I also wonder how far he will go. Will he arranged for Bella to be attacked so she either loses the baby or her life.?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors

Really loving this



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Ambush

Please let this separation be short lived



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I promise, by the end of next chapter, things will look a lot better ;). See you then.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 May 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 - We Are Family

I'm guessing Renee & Charlie



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review. As it seems, I'm getting rather predictable since almost all reviewers guessed that the surprise visitors are Bella's parents. We'll see about that ;). Until next chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

CITF

 

Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1081949
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 11 May 2015 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

So glad she's going home with Carlisle & Esme.

I truly hope James bled out

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 18 May 2015 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

If James is alive I think he'll try to take out Bella's house next since Renee was all that was stopping him before

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

James set it.  Not sure about the big guy. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

I wonder if Phil actually backed up James' alibi

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

What happend to Phil?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

I hope she goes for that restraining order

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

Is Laurant working for James or is he a disguised James?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

Too lazy to go back and reread chapters. I wonder if the victim is the photographer Bella hired

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

very glad Peter got away.  I hope this means that Bella will be safe in Orlando

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133

Of course she is

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 137

I'm sorry to hear about your mom. I hope all will go well

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 May 2015 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

James better be dead in an alley somewhere

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 May 2015 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146

He's going to be ecstatic about the baby and get overly protective

Summary:

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Summary: After her parents are murdered, Bella and her brothers flee to the protection of their Godfather. When Bella discovers information that puts her life at risk, her only choice is to marry a man that she hates. Edward is a hard man, one that wants nothing to do with his reluctant bride. Can this pair ever learn to love each other...before their enemies destroy them? AH E/B


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25286 Read Count: 66591
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2014 Updated: 22 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I think Edward was the over-reactor here. Dude needs to chill

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

A nice start to their marriage

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Loving this story. Please let Bella land a knock out puncn on Alec at one point in the story

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Big kiss? Or Alec exploding?

Summary:

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To see the world; the damage, the truth, the pain, the beauty, you have to open your eyes. To be able to help others and be a better person, you have to open your eyes.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31055 Read Count: 40478
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2014 Updated: 06 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Very interesting. I love Jasper

 

Summary:

Dove medium

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Are you trying to be funny, Alice? I wanted to kill her." Strawberry. Lavender. Freesia. The earth after it rains. Ambrosia. The blood the blood the blood the blood the blood... 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 348935 Read Count: 33097
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2011 Updated: 26 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Radar

I am really enjoying this story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by FemmeCullen

 

Summary: Edward’s grandfather’s business has been closed because of his investment partner died and his daughter, who he calls the viper, wants more than just money to reopen. The viper makes life hard for the Cullens when Edward refuses her ‘offer.’ When an angry Edward meets another poor little rich girl that needs some tutoring, will she be the one to teach him a thing or two?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69931 Read Count: 84922
[Report This] Published: 20 Jul 2014 Updated: 25 Aug 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I hope you have Edward & Bella tell their stories to each other sooner rather than later

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I wonder was Eleazer Charlie's friend?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I knew that was what Tanya wanted.   I really want to know more about Swan's company.  I think she shoukd just hire all the Cullens now.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

If Tanya follows through, I imagine Casa Swan will be filling up soon

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I do have faith in you, but I really was hoping that this would be a story where Edward levelled with Bella & didn't make decisions for her.  I'm hoping you don't make Bella suffer too much & I'm looking forward to seeing how you give the viper what she deserves

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Thank you for not making us wait for this.  

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Nice twist. I didn't expect Charlie & Eleazer to be the same person. I did assume that Bella was Jasper's cluent at ghe first mention

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm glad she's not falling I  to his arms right away.  I'd like to know how Marcus &Debbie died. Fire? Robbery gone wrong? 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So glad they finally talked

40 Something by phillips Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 267]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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This is about a older Edward and Bella 40 somethings. The story starts with a very unhappy Bella and her husband Jacob . Edward and Bella have yet to meet so bare with me for a while.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jacob
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 70470 Read Count: 57329
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2014 Updated: 13 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 31

I really hope you get E to take some deep breaths and be at his most rational in hes next encounter with T & K

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 47

I'm hoping if Kate smells as badly as she thinks that Bella will smell her when she walks in.  I also hope Bella will catch Kate still sleeping

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Alex sounds like he takes aftdr dad.

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 21

This situation is truly messed up. I don't suppose you'd consider having Tanya have a fatal car accident before the family meeting tonight?

 

 

 



Author's Response:

That would be the easy and best option for most involved. Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 49

I'm hoping that the parcel the neighbor was bringing was nother thing Kate ordered in Bella's name.  I also hope the doctors realize that Kate was high.

I wonder, is Alex going to show up? If so how will he behave?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 50

Does the detective really expect Kate to admit to anything? I hope they took some blood so they can see the drugs in her system

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 32

I really hope Bella didn't just kill Tanya

 

 

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 43

Wasn't Lauren Jane last chapter?

So glad Edward went to see her. She needs to tell someone about the recent weirdness

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 42

The scratches around the lock & pizza sound like Kate. Ordering things on mom's card sounds like Alex. Have they teamed up?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 30

Ouch!  Things just got very interesting.  Can;t wait to hear this conversation

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 40

She needs to get the restraining order. She also needs to tell Anthony

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

First thought Jake has another soman. 2nd thought she's at the door. Re Jake's death good riddance to bad rubbish

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 19

Wow. I never saw that coming

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Odd that the kids don't know Bella was supporting the family when they were young, while dad was getting through law school and working his way up.  When Bella does find out where the money went I hope she lets her sons know



Author's Response:

Jake always played down the amount of time she worked always made out he was the one doing all the hard work at law school. Plus put down the job she did do and when children are told from a young age there mother does little at work and daddys the one putting the real work in they tend to believe what they are told.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

From what Leah said I wonder if Jake said something to Leah about divorcing Bella

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love Anthony. I hope J didn't give B an std.  I understand B wanting to protect her sons, but I'd be tempted to send the whole mess to Leah

 



Author's Response:

That's another issue STD's she hasn't even got that far in her thinking. More humiliation to come I think.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Glad she's being proactive about the std. 



Author's Response:

Yes she needed to sort it sooner rather than later. Thanks for review

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Good for you Bella. There's  nothing wrong with seeking help

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 12

I hope Bella tells Leah the truth. I also hope she tells Alex to do his own damn laundry.  Jasper needs to be her therapist if she is to have a relationship with Edward

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 13

I'd be very surprised if Leah and Alex have a legal leg to stand on

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 14

Really happy that Bella is moving on the house and making progress in therapy

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 26

Okay how about a fatal crash with both Tanya & Kate?

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 28

Love it. Bella is great with Angela

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 27

Angela is awesome.  Kate is ridiculus & Tanya is horrible for chosing Kate over her daughter.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 33

Glad Bella didn't kill her. I hope Kate doesn't go to Bella

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 34

Great. Now Bella has to deal with a vindictive Kate, who doesn't seem to realize Tanya struck first

 



Author's Response:

Kate doesn't care, she needs to blame someone. Tanya hit her head because Bella pushed her, that's all Kate is interested in. Thanks for reviews.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 35

I imagine Kate will meet up with Leah soon.  

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 36

I'm assuming Kate was around to see 2 allies in her campaign against Bella

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 37

Glad Leah is believing the truth. I really don't think Bella shoukd hesitate to get that restrainig order. She should also tell Anthony everything asap.

I ssuppose it's too much to ask that they spot Kate tailing them.

Summary:

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Bella is a Drama Student in UCLA. Edward Cullen is an up and coming actor. When these two meet on the set of his new movie, sparks begin to fly. What does this mean for their current boyfriend and girlfriend back home? E/B pairing eventually. Rated M for Language and Lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56387 Read Count: 34698
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2014 Updated: 09 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I suppose Jacob would be too obvious

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I suppose talking like that could be a real turn on if the couple were alone or knew that no one else could understand them.  Tanya knew Esme would understand. Who talks like that in front of parents? Is this how she'd speak in front of her own parents?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Is Rose setting Bella up? I don't  think  Bella should  tell  Rose's  story, unless wonders aloud in her presence what Tanya has on Rose.  I think Edward suspected  Tanya  had a hold on her a while  back.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Authors note

Merry Christmas  and Happy  New year  to you too. Looking forward to reading more

Summary:

Charlie Swan made a deal with the devil. Owing a debt he couldn't repay, he took the cowardly way out and offered his daughter's services to pay off his tab. The rich and powerful Carlisle Cullen greedily accepts, and Bella finds herself at the mercy of a dark and violent man. Will she survive? Or will he beat the life out of her? Dark themes. NC-17 for violence and language. AU.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39293 Read Count: 72875
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2014 Updated: 19 May 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Glad she got Alice out

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 18 May 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Hot DAMN!  I trust you'll make sure Bella doesn't serve any jail time for this

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 09 May 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Didn't expect this.  Awesome twist

Summary: Past Featured Story

Twenty five years ago the quiet town of Forks witnessed the massacre of the Cullen's cult. Now the FBI has a new lead, and rookie agent Isabella Swan comes to investigate. What will she find?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Mysteries & Thrillers
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46161 Read Count: 21802
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2014 Updated: 24 Feb 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I guess Jacob has started to phase?



Author's Response:

Hi! Yes, he's starting; but he's not a Quileutte so he's not aware of the change; and he won't change into a wolf. 

Thanks for reviewing, I love to hear your comment.

May

Masquerade by Ray Ryan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

It's only human that we build our shields up to protect us from those who wish to harm us but soon that shield becomes a mask hiding our scars from the world. If we are lucky though, we'll find the one who will see through the mask and see us for who we are, scars and all. Until then, it's just one big masquerade. 


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18980 Read Count: 4384
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2014 Updated: 04 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Were they sitting outside Edward's bedroom?  I can't wait until Esme can speak for herself and attempt to explain her actions

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So happy to see an update. I hope all is well with you.

Great chapter. I love that Charlie & Renee are so supportive

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow!  I love your Edward and am looking forward to seeing him destroy those people

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Go Edward! 

 

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Glad Esme can still communicate.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Love it. Marcus rocks. Looking forward to seeing Bella's parents.  Good idea to discover cause of brothers' hatred. I would guess it's because Edward is successful and they are not.

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Really loving Charlie & Renee.  Like Edward, I want to know why Esme did what she did

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love that he told her. I hope they can come to some agreement

Summary:

I wanted the truth...I needed to know the truth and he was going to help me. Mostly human, canon couples. Rated for language and adult themes.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70277 Read Count: 10397
[Report This] Published: 22 Aug 2014 Updated: 09 Jan 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter-19: Epilogue: The Best Kind of Perfection

This was fun. Thank you

Summary:

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When an amazing opportunity finally comes up to have everything they want, will they take it? Can they remain professional for the sake of success? Celebrating never felt so good.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56096 Read Count: 22641
[Report This] Published: 29 Aug 2014 Updated: 28 Aug 2018
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 ~ Opportunity Knocking

I do hope you give us detailed descriptions of the of the firm's reactions to B&E going off on their own

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Aysy (Bella) and The Moon    

While sulking in his "woe is me" attitude concerning his lack of a love life, Edward ends up waking a centuries old wolf (Bella) from slumber who has no memory of her past life; the only thing she knows is Edward is hers. Looks like some legends are more than what they seem.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101749 Read Count: 20286
[Report This] Published: 04 Sep 2014 Updated: 07 Nov 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25-First day on school

Love it

 

Reassuring Bella by O2Shea Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Sequel to "Convincing Edward". Edward has some bridges to mend with Bella... but it may not be as easy as he assumes.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1359 Read Count: 279
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2014 Updated: 07 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Love it

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Going on horrible dates was something that Bella always did well at. Nothing made her happier then to see the back of a man as he fled to get away from her. She was having so much fun until she ended up on a date with the most chauvinistic man in New York. How could one date have gone so wrong? Now her little tricks maybe the reason she is forced to stay with a man she loathes.    

THANK YOU TO IPSITA CHAUDHURI FOR HER AMAZING BANNER!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81908 Read Count: 36614
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2014 Updated: 19 Dec 2018
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Edward really should have known better than to send her out alone without a cover story.  He really has very little right to be angry with her. I hope he spends more time working with her on how to spin this than reprimanding her.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm really hoping there's a note on the table saying he took her out grocery shopping

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Nice twist

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Love it!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I knew they'd be outed once he rescued the boy, but I never saw Michael as a traitor

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great story