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Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1465992
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

I'm very concerned about that GPS chip in Victoria.  Is there no way to detect it?

Everyone thinks the action will be at Edward's but James has the ability to find Victoria.  HTe question is will he use it?  Will he even think that B is with V?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

Well, I guess we know where James, or Laurent, or both are!

How did they get here?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

I'm REALLY hoping Heidi releases the girls & all 3 beat the s**t out of him

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24

I hope Aro can be useful in tracking them down.  I'm still hoping Heidi will free the  girls & the 3 of them will kick James' *ss

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

YES! 
I'm so happy you made James drop his phone

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

I am glad Bella was the one who took James out.

Silence by Pange Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

The last time someone’s blood tempted me this much, I left her body in a cold, dirty alley behind a music store. My entry for the Darkward Vampfic contest, because who doesn't love a bad boy? ExB, AU, Rated M for dark themes and a lemon.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9571 Read Count: 611
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice

Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 427]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53326
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Just found this story & love it. Please continue.  

Life In The Balance by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 51]
Summary:

Bella’s hopes, dreams, life and future were violently ripped away. She finally finds the strength to do what it takes to save her sanity but at what price? Can the man hired to help her remain professional long enough to save her life?

Warning:  This story contains violence, abuse and death. If you are sensitive to those issues, this isn’t the story for you.

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Awesome banner made by Rosalynn (Rosalynn7885)

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 266053 Read Count: 13956
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2010 Updated: 31 Aug 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Bonded In Truth

Just found this yesterday. What a story. I wonder if Victoria was hired by James family to kill Bella before trial

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself?  AH/AU

 

A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47212
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

How did James manage to switch Bella's  & Tanya's samples?

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

If Renee is honest the answer to that question will be James flew me in the paparazzi can see how my daughter behaves with me

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella suffers after the sudden death of her mother, which changes her life completely. Charlie hope she can adjust to life in Forks. It's just going to take some time... and maybe some supernatural friends.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72219 Read Count: 14863
[Report This] Published: 21 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 May 2011
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I like this better than the original 

Summary:

 

 

Emmett drags Bella along to find the perfect anniversary gift for Rose, only nothing goes as planned. Cannon couples. o/s


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Emmett/Rose
Genre: Humor, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5381 Read Count: 500
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2012 Updated: 09 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice

Bar Room Angel by vodkavamp76 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 87]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A night out leaves Bella terrified at the hands of a predator. The devil will try to make her pay for daring to turn him down, while an angel will capture her heart in ways she never imagined. Bella finds her own piece of heaven with the man who saved her, but has she truly escaped the clutches of the man who preyed on her?

All Human, Bella & Edward.  Rated NC17 for language/lemons/some violence. Expansion of a one shot I posted on Fanfiction.net but then expanded due to reviewer request.

Reviews on Fanfiction - 138 so far!

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 168665 Read Count: 27368
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 03 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Here's hoping she has some hand to hand skills



Author's Response:

Hold tight because the next chapter is going up tonight!

Lou xx

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Really  would  love the Denali reaction to Edward's  speech



Author's Response:

That will be coming in the next chapter.  It's already written, and I'm hoping people feel that it's how Edward would have handled it.

Lou xx

Summary:

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After The Volturi left at the end of Breaking Dawn; Bella, Edward and Renesmee were free to be a normal family. This is my account of the day Bella and Edward bring their daughter to the place it all began. The Meadow. Written in 3rd person. please R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4299 Read Count: 237
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story.

A Motherīs Advice by maymay74 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 249]
Summary:

Bella met Edward. Then, after a few dates, she got pregnant and married him. But now they re fighting against their family and more people who just don't want them together. Bella feels she's repeating her parents story. Would a package from the past be the help she needs?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116319 Read Count: 37411
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 15 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Glad we're getting somewhere on Osorio

 



Author's Response:

Yep, we're about to find and confront the culprit. 

Thanks :)

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Don't hide. Just post the next chapter asap



Author's Response:

It'll be up in a few hours :) :)

Thanks.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Both evil and misunderstood. Glad she seems to have feelings for her husband.



Author's Response:

She had to have at least one redeeming quality :)

Thanks and sorry for taking so long to answer. I'm recovering from a cold.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Interesting. Does Carlisle know about Bella's project & is he trying to sabotage her? I'm assuming Stefan called Carlisle



Author's Response:

Hi! No, Carlisle isn't aware of Bella's project. He's just selfish thinking she's at his beck and call, completely ignoring she's still trying to finish college. 

About Stefan... it's a bit more complicated, you'll see ;)

Thanks.

Crocodile Rock by dazzleglo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

croc

 

Banner Designer Name:  Melissa Condor

 

Summary: Bella shows up wearing a gift from Renee which sets Edward, Emmett and Jasper into a tailspin. They need to remove all traces of the item, including its scent before Alice gets home to find the fashion nightmare coming back to haunt her. Why couldn’t this item go the way of the Member’s Only jacket! Oh and there might be a bit of revenge from Bella on Alice because of her controlling fashion ways.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9983 Read Count: 440
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2012 Updated: 27 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a blast. Thanks for the laughs.

 



Author's Response:

Love is Strange by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 232]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan and Edward Cullen live in the small town of Ligonier in Pennsylvania. They've been best friends since they were six years old, and not much can keep them apart. Bella wants to leave small-town life behind, while Edward is fine with whatever, but that's not the only complication in their relationship. What happens when they fall in love ... with each other?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 80825 Read Count: 71961
[Report This] Published: 02 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Jun 2020
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 Seemingly Out of Nowhere

Great chapter.   I hope your grandfather will be ok

Summary: Past Featured Story

They survived falling in love and having four children. Now, Geekward and Nerdella are parents of teenagers. Say a prayer for them for they are in for a bumpy ride. But, a ghost from the past is rearing his ugly head. Follow along as Geekward and Nerdella deal with having teens, battle with the blast from the past and why is Demetri hugging a cow? ANSOL/TGGTP Sequel. ExB AH/AU

STTD

Thanks to Evilnat for the amazing banner! You are the bomb, girl


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , A Nerd Story of Love Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 269577 Read Count: 85054
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2012 Updated: 26 Jul 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 18 May 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Rising Action

Hugs & prayers heading your way.

You are a great writer & I enjoy all of your stories

Summary: Past Featured Story

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*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story October 2013*

"I thought that I was alone and lost in the world. I was a wanderer heading nowhere, but you've become the compass I needed in my life."

AH, BPOV, EPOV.

Special thanks to my friend Ineke for the amazing banner. I'd also like to thank Chase Corin and Dinkadot for being my betas.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40091 Read Count: 21874
[Report This] Published: 05 Dec 2012 Updated: 06 May 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 22:
Chapter 22

I'm glad there is still some hope for Edward  Maybe you can getBella to tell him everything while he is comatose & it will be a case where Edward hears it all



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I'm currently working on chapter 23, something's definitely going to happen between Bella and Edward. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

She's lost her muse. He's missing inspiration. When Bella and Edward meet, will they be able to heal the tattered pieces of their hearts? Or will they forever be alone?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131985 Read Count: 89700
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2013 Updated: 30 Jan 2018
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I hope you & the kids are feeling better

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Love it

Summary: Past Featured Story

What happens when dysfunction meets dysfunction? Neither Edward nor Bella are prepared when fate brings them together. Will they be able to overcome the odds and find happiness? Or will the ghosts of their past keep them apart? Canon coupling, but non-canon families. Dark themes, high emotion, and standing tissue alert. AH

 

silent wishes


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed, to read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142814 Read Count: 96323
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2013 Updated: 04 May 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I'd love to see a miracle cure or 3

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Wow. I hope you will be well soon.  The story is great, and I'd love to read the rest, but taking care of yourself is more important than any story ever could be.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 266676
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57 - time for jungle cake

Loved it. Surprised Kate thinks Bella is out for cash. Doesn't she know about the bakery?

Way to go Anthony

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60 - apple harlot

Wonderful story. Thank you

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading Sweet Temptations and sticking with me all the way.  I have really enjoyed writing this story and am glad others have enjoyed it too.

take care and happy reading,

LB

Summary:

Edward Masen is a normal 17-year-old boy who dreams of becoming a soldier, but when tradegy strikes his family, his entire life changes. Edward is introduced to the supernatural world he had no idea even existed, and he certainly doesn't want to live in it.

It was during the month of March in the year of 1918 that the first signs of the influenza was revealed to the public, although no one ever imagined the damages this historic event would have on the American people.
One citizen in particular faces an irrevocable change that cause a chain of e...vents to unfold through the twentieth century. The price was to give up his old life, but he would later gain more than he ever thought he would.

A Pre-Twilight Canon story about the life of Edward Cullen


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/None
Genre: Angst, Family, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116673 Read Count: 13987
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 20 Aug 2019
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35, Aug 28 1963 - April 4 1968

Nicely done

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 313503
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter.  Why on earth doesn't Phil call when he is alone?  Is Renee permanently attached to his hip in the off season?



Author's Response:

The overwhelming response to the chapters so far have far exceeded what Nikky and I thought this story would generate.  We are both very proud of this story and humbled by your responses.  In lieu of the ‘boycott’ at FFN everyone will be getting Meeting Her Needs in their inbox later today.  We hope that you all will still take the time to leave us your thoughts, especially since this coming chapter is super wonderful, (Well we think so anyway!)  Thanks for trusting in us, and no worries things are really shaping up at the end we’re working on that will leave you all satisfied—we hope.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:
I put on my tuxedo trying hard not to turn and watch Bella get dressed or look in the mirror.

“Edward ...” comes Bella’s voice as I tie my laces and answer her.

“Yes, Beautiful?”

“Two things, is it wrong to go to these balls ... things without under garments on, and could you zip me up, please?” I run through what Bella has said again and turn to her.

“Wh ...” I try to talk, but I’m unable to complete what I’m saying as I look at Bella, whose sheer beauty takes my breath away. The dress only adds to her natural beauty and I feel stupefied as I stare at my beautiful girl.

I look Bella up and down, taking in every part of her body. I slowly look her up, starting at her feet. My eyes trail up how the dress sits on her body like a second skin. I look at how it makes her already large breasts look fuller. I look at her neck that still displays my mark. My eyes go to her lips and I see that they are moving.

I close my eyes and shake my head. “Sorry, I spaced out there, can you say that again, Beautiful?”

Bella chuckles shaking her head at me. “You look really hot, like my own secret agent man. I was asking, because this dress shows every line, so I should I take off my panties, right? I couldn’t squeeze my bra into the bust area; the girls can hardly breathe as it is.”

I look back down her body and see that she's right, she has a panty line. “Remove your panties, Beautiful, no one will know,” I say. I watch intently as Bella wiggles out of her panties and comes over to me and turns around. My eyes trail down her body again and I start to kiss her back. I feel Bella shake and laugh and I look to her.

“I need you to zip me up. I mean, you can carry on doing that, but I think we’ll be late if you do.” I smile giving her one last kiss, open mouthed, at the base of her lovely neck, before pulling the zipper up. With the zipper up it makes the tight dress even more molded to her curves. It fits her like a glove, and I make a mental note to thank my mom.

“Come on, Beautiful, let’s get this over and done with so I can bring you back here and kiss you some more,” I say holding my arm out for her to take.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Glad she didn't go with Renee.  She seems to be making progress.  Loved the Vicky & James bit



Author's Response:

Well a lot of you still want Renee to die a slow and painful death, but many of you are just glad she is gone.  Renee will be heard from again in future chapters, however we don’t want to give away too much by telling you how, when or why.  We think the next chapter will be the second most popular chapter to date when it posts.  Christmas and preparations for it, is a very fun time for Edward and Bella and will hopefully be well received by our readers. 
On a side note, please check out the wonderful little story that Nikky, Jess2002 and I are writing for Savannavansmutsmut.  It is called If I Die Young and it is posting under the author name: WeeJessAndTAT. 
Nikky and I would love to thank whoever the people were that nominated us in so many catagories for the Twi-Fic Awards.  We are nominated on four different stories: His Cimmerian View, Meeting Her Needs, Diamond Dolls Kitty Cave and Crabs And Cream.  We were also nominated in the veteran author section.  The link to vote can be found on our profile, and if you don’t vote for us, vote for someone.  There are some AMAZING writers, stories, banner makers and readers all nominated for awards. 
Be sure to check out our spook-tackular — Halloween 2013 One-Shot (This is our 3rd year in a row doing a one-shot for Halloween,) it is called: Crushes, Canines & Clowns. 
Can’t wait to see what you all think of the two stories listed above, and please go vote.   
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser: 

I lead her back to my car and we drive to another place where I can pick up the things that I need. I watch as Bella blushes and chuckles at the joke gifts the store has. I frown when I see that she has a bag, having bought something without showing me.

“What’s in the bag, Little Girl?” I ask trying to get the bag from her. But she’s quicker and hides it behind her back.

“It’s one of your Christmas gifts, Sir, and you can’t see it until Christmas morning.”

I chuckle shaking my head at her, knowing this will be fun for both of us in the long run.  “Oh, is that a fact, Little Girl? I could order you to show me, you know?”

Bella shakes her head at me. “Then your girl will tell tales to her Sir’s mom.”

My mouth drops open and I look at her, smiling internally, because she is willing to stroke the lion and play. “Is that so, Little Girl?”

Bella nods at me, but bites her lip.

“Well then, Little Girl, I may need to give you a spanking,” I say playfully to her.

“Your girl will take the spanking, Sir. Your girl really wants this present to be a surprise for her Sir.”

“Fair enough, let’s finish shopping.” I shake my head, watching her walk away from me. She looks over her shoulder and flicks her skirt a little showing her ass.  “Spanking it is then,” I say to myself before walking after her.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great wedding.  Poor Eleazer.  Love how Bella stood up to her egg donoe & Esme's "witch" experiment



Author's Response:

Wow, I dropped the ball, normally I have the review reply all written out before now.  So all Nikky has to do is send it to all the reviewers at FFN, and I do TWCS and I post one in the comments FicPad.  I dropped the ball this week.  Between personal stuff and the holidays and other drama things, I just flat out missed the bus.  I am so sorry for the delay in you getting this from us.  There were not a lot of questions at all, but you all seem to LOVE Esme, and how could we blame you.  I FLOVE her myself.  This is short but sweet, but hey you’re going to get an extra long teaser …   Thanks everyone for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:  As Bella’s face pales, I look to see who she’s looking at.  I see Sue walking in with a crying Leah clutching her arm.  When I turn my head I catch James rolling his eyes at the display that Leah is putting on.

“I will go back and take my seat, I hope you like my last surprise,” James says getting up and walking away.  I watch him trying to work out what he’s talking about, but chatting brings my eyes to the dock. I watch as two officers bring in Paul and Jacob.  I frown at them seeing that their heads seem to have been shaved and they both have those scalp molding scarfs on their heads.

“Please rise for the Honorable Judge Varner,” the court bailiff speaks out loud before anyone can say anything. 

The judge enters the room and sits in his chair, and tells us to be seated as he calls the court to order.  The judge reads over some paperwork and looks up at the defendant's table. 

“This is a court room, remove those head scarves,” the judge says bluntly.

I kiss Bella’s head, but the loud gasps make me turn my head.  I look around the room seeing everyone’s looking at Paul and Jacob.  As they move around at the reactions, I can see they have ‘rapist’ tattooed across their foreheads.

I turn to look at James who is smirking away.

“What did you do to him?” Leah screams as she stands up making her way toward Bella and I.

“Young woman, sit down!  No, in fact get out of my court room and don’t come back until you put some clothing on.  Bailiff remove this person, and do not let her back in here unless she’s dressed more appropriately.”

Leah’s mouth drops open as she looks at the judge with rage in her eyes. Two of the eight bailiffs in the room escort her out of the room with Sue running out of the room behind them.

I smile a little and turn back to pay attention to the judge.

“Are the defendants, still pleading not guilty?” the judge asks.

“Ernest Berty, for the defense, your honor,” the defense attorney stands and says.  “I’m representing both Mr. Lahote and Mr. Black and they both plead not guilty.  At this time, your honor, we are petitioning the court to have the trial moved due to bias and news coverage in this matter.”

“Well Mr. Berty, since both your clients are facing charges in four states including the great state of Washington, I doubt you’ll find anyone who hasn’t currently heard something of the case.  You have had your chance to question and discredit members of the jury, so therefore your request is not applicable.  Your request to move the hearing is denied, and further more future stalling tactics such as this will not happen in this court.”

I chuckle silently as the defense attorney tucks his tail and sits down.  The judge has the bailiff bring in the jury and they are seated.  We listen as both sides give their opening arguments.  I’m glad that as soon as the opening arguments are done, the judge breaks for lunch.

“How are you feeling, Love?” I ask Bella, as I lean close to her ear so our conversation is private.

“I’m all right, but I think I may head home soon, if that’s okay?”

I kiss her head.  “Of course it is, my love.”

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What are Jacob & Charlie hoping to accomplish?  Charlie threw her out of his home & hos life, why does he still torment her?  I'm assuming Jake couldn't make the grade at his previous college so he had to transfer back.

I don't know how he got past Jenks unless he was working on putting the case together against Paul & family & just ignored Jacob.

 



Author's Response:

Well now seems like the major majority of you are all kinds of happy with Bella and Edward and how their progressing together.  We love it, Bella is finding her strength in Edward, but Edward is gaining and coming into a deeper strength too.  Many of you want redemption right away against Charlie and Jacob and the rest of the bad apples, and it will come, it’s still simmering and the dish of revenge is not quite ready to be served.  Next two chapters we will be given the honor of meeting Renee.  The way the story is going on our side there will be no more than 25 chapters total.  We have 18 written, and working on 19 and 20 now.  As soon as we are done, we will start posting faster.  I assure you that wrapping this story is one of our top priorities.   Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser:  Vicky smiles at me and then looks at Bella. “If you get tired of his old ass, call me,” she says as she hands her number to my girl.

I glare at Vicky.

“Oh, don’t pout, Edward. I will see your girl every Thursday from now on.”

I shake my head at Vicky, who is grinning widely.

I guide Bella out of the office, but then hear Vicky calling out for me. I turn and look at her.

“Tell James I’m ready for my second shot.”

I tilt my head and Vicky wiggles her eyebrows at me.

I smirk, shaking my head. “Will do, Vicky. Have good day.” I walk Bella out and see she’s still holding in her laughter.  “It’s okay, Little Girl, you can laugh. What did you think of Vicky, Little Girl?”

Bella smiles at me. “Sir, your girl thinks she is nice, but she seems like she walks to the beat of her own drum.”

I chuckle. “Little girl, Vicky has her own orchestra.  Let’s go to lunch.”

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Phil seems like a nice guy.  What on earth is he doing with Renee?

 



Author's Response:

Well so far everyone is pretty much at the same conclusion, that Renee is a POS when it comes to being a mother.  With the way Bella has been raised and the way that she acts, this is not a big surprise.  Some of you have asked why Edward has not yet stepped in to protect her and that as her Dom he should.  Edward has been very clear all along that he wants her to grow and be confident on her own as well.  Now you will see that he is giving her the power to stand up for herself, and as her Dom he is telling her that he expects her to stand up for herself.  Bella is much stronger than most think, including Edward, but have no fear he will see her strengths.  I think that you all will be shocked to see how far Renee will go to maintain her own importance. 

A lot of you mention or talk about earlier authors notes and review replies where I have spoken candidly about my own upbringing.  Not every bad thing that happened or happens to Bella in this story happened to me growing up, but the neglect and the being pushing away and having parents who think only of them was a very prominent part of my childhood.  Both my parents are now gone, and I miss them.  I know that is not easy to understand for some, but even though they treated me like a second class citizen most of the time, they still were my parents.  This is why I maintain that you never know how you’d react in this situation, because unless you’re raised in it, you don’t know. 

As always we will see you next Sunday night — Monday morning with an update.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  (Nikky) & Kasi~

Teaser:
I smile and look to Renee who looks angry and pissed off, but thankfully, she has finally shut up.

“Edward, can I talk to you?” I turn and look at Phil, and I nod. I take one last look at my girl, before following him away from the kitchen area.

“What can I help you with, Phil?” I ask directing him into my office.

Phil sighs and looks at me. “I love Renee very much, and she’s not always like this.  Normally, at home she’s sweet, loving, and kind. I have only seen her this way a few times, but not too often. I think being here in Washington is bringing this more to the front. I think Charlie did a number on Bella, but he also hurt Renee, too. She has low self-esteem, and some issue with being around younger girls. The whole forgetful memory thing, I think it’s a medical problem.”

I chuckle shaking my head at him. “I’m not really sure I believe that, unless only forgetting a thing concerning your only child is a medical condition.”

“No, she forgets more than things about Bella. I swear it’s gotten to be a medical thing, she really just forgets things,” Phil says.

“He’s right, Edward,” I frown and look at my open office door and see my father standing there.

“What’s that then?” I ask harshly.

“Selfish bitch syndrome,” my father says with a straight face. I look to Phil who just frowns.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I truly hope Bella sees this as a way to get away from Renee for good



Author's Response:

Well without a doubt I think it is a clean sweep, everyone wants to either: kill, beat or maim Renee.  Nikky and I both want to thank you all for telling us all of this.  To us it means more knowing we were able to evoke those kinds of feelings in our readers, than any of you can know. 
There have been a few people laying threats about bring charges or else I will walk from the story.  I want to address that by saying, Bella is not as weak as she used to be, and trust that the cards will fall exactly as they should.  Renee’s story is set in stone for us, and we will not deviate from how we planned it.  Neither of us wants to say, Renee will go to jail and Renee will suffer this and that way ... What we want is for this story to unfold as it was and is intended to do so.  All we can say is trust in us enough to know that we will not let a story go with things unfinished. 
Now we do need to address the several comments about how Edward needed to step up and be the Dom and take control at the hospital and how Renee wouldn’t have been allowed to do what she did.  Sadly if a person is an adult and is unmarried and doesn’t have a power of attorney signed over to someone else, medical choices fall to your nearest blood relative.  Edward trying to control things would’ve most likely gotten him removed from the premises, and we’re sure you’ll appreciate how well he brings out the Dom soon.  Some questioned if the hospital would’ve kept Renee out being it was her fault, but unless the police were involved the hospital is in a hard situation. 
Finally we want to say again that we will continue to post every Sunday night/Monday morning, until the story is fully written.  Once the story is fully finished we will post twice a week until it is completely posted.  Thank you so very much for reading our story, reviewing our story and loving our story so much.
Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser: 
“I love you Mom, and want you in my life,” Bella says.

I feel my heart start to race, but I hold back the yelp that wants to come out. I’ll beg her if I have to; I need her in my life. I can’t live without this girl. She may’ve only been in my life over a short period of time, but she has quickly become everything to me.

“And I hope one day you can forgive me,” Bella says looking to me as she speaks. “But I need Edward more, a lot more. I know that I will never be enough for you or for him, no matter what I do. I know that Edward deserves so much more than what I can give him.” 

I shake my head and walk in. “Not true,” I say with a smile.

“But, here’s the thing, he’s a good man, Mom. He has such a big heart and he would never hurt me physically in any way. When—and I know it will be when—he leaves me, he will make sure that I am still okay. He makes me happy. He makes me want to live.  He’s the reason I’m still alive.” Bella’s eyes fall to my feet.

“Don’t start that silliness again, Isabella.” Renee starts chastising my girl. 

I walk right up to Renee and glare at her. “Quit treating her like a pet; she’s your daughter.”

“Say your goodbyes, Isabella. You’re coming home with Phil and me.”

Bella shakes her head. “No! I can’t and won’t leave with you. I love you Mom and I will be here when you forgive me, but I’m staying with Edward, if he’ll still have me.”

I move quickly to Bella and look into her eyes. “You’re more than enough for me. You’re so much more than I ever dreamed of. I’ll always have a place for you in my life.” I lean my forehead against Bella's.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I hope Bella doesn't take the news too badly.  Really curious as to why Jake & Charlie want to hurt her.

Overjoyed that Phil is kicking Renee to the curb. 

Can't wait to find out what a "cleaning party" is



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for reading and review Meeting Her Needs.  Nikky and I are very happy with the amount of pleasure most of you are finding in this story, so THANK YOU SO MUCH.  There haven’t been very many questions or things to touch base on this week, so I’ll try to do it all here.  Someone wanted to know why the lemon wasn’t longer and more detailed.  The lemon was written the way it was because we want this story to be more about the story and less about the lemons themselves.  We had questions and comments regarding the BDSM in this fic too.  The BDSM in this fic and the actions within this fic of the lifestyle in and of itself have come from many conversations with people from the lifestyle.  Not everything is intense tie you up, spank you, kneel and crawl.  It is a matter of respect, choices and trust.  Please don’t ever think that we would want to write a story just for the sole purpose of making someone another person’s punching bag or pet (in the term of treating someone as if they are not human.)  We will continue to post once a week until the story is completely written.  Nikky is currently working on chapter 20 and there are five more after that to write.  If you ever have additional questions, you can find us on FACEBOOK look for the group called TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  You can also email us at our screen name all lower case at gmail.  Thanks and see you Sunday with the update.

Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser:  “I–I need ... I can’t sit here. I just need time ...” Bella gets up quickly and almost runs out of the room. 

I sigh looking at Phil. “She’ll be fine—she has to be—we just need to be there for her when she needs us.”

I nod and get up to start looking around for her. I looked throughout the house first, which takes me almost a half hour to do. I was starting to panic that she actually left our home. I open the back patio door and I see her, and instantly I feel myself calm.

“Beautiful,” I say when I approach her, as she works in the dirt of the flower bed she started with my mother. She stops and turns to me and I give her time, knowing she is going to talk to me now.

“Dr. Banner thinks I have been suppressing and curtailing my anger. I’m starting to think that he’s right. I’m just so angry right now, but mainly I’m mad at myself.”

I frown and tilt my head in question at her.

“Edward, I let them—I let them treat me that way. I was always trying to please them. I never asked for anything other than their time. I would always say it was fine, when they forgot my birthday, or anything that was connected to me. I let Charlie push me out of his life. I would always sit back and pretend that didn’t kill me to see him call Leah his princess, or listen to him tell her he was proud of her and loved her. I would say it was me that was to blame for that. I was the broken one. That there must be something wrong with me, and I wasn’t worthy of their love. It’s kind of pathetic when you think about it, huh?”

I shake my head and move to her. “It’s not pathetic to want and desire to be loved.”

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Very proud of Bella.  I'm hoping Phil's Benjamon will do a better job than Jenks about locating those scoundrals



Author's Response:

Well Nikky and I both want to thank you for reading and reviewing.  All of the questions, compliments, anger (at the characters), love and kindness in the reviews is what keeps us going so strong.  SO, thank you, for reading, reviewing, sharing your stories and most of all for loving the characters—the characters who may not belong to us in name, but who we’ve taken and made into something completely different.  It is very cool to take a loved character, change them and make them different and still have people love them so much or fall in love with them all over again.   There were lots of reviews filled with questions about the newspapers and what Charlie told them.  First in regards to the newspapers, just like when Renee went all press goddess on them, the news already knows Edward.  Edward has made no secret of his lifestyle, how else would Charlie so easily have found out about Edward.  Therefore there was really nothing to put in the press, Charlie could try but it would not be front page news anyway.  Also if you remember right, Edward doesn’t really put a lot of stock into the media reports.  There are a lot of great things to come yet, so have patience and trust.  No stones will be left unturned.   Thanks again for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER: Phil and I walk into Jenks’ office. I decided that I no longer want any of this shit spoken about at the club. Bella loves the club and I didn’t want any additional bad feelings in it for her.

“Jenks, Benjamin,” I say taking a seat; Phil nods at them.

“We’ve found the last of the girls and even another case that was not dropped.” I look at them and they hand me a picture of a girl I have actually met and I’m in shock. 

“They have DNA from a brutal attack and rape of her,” Jenks says as I look over the paperwork behind the picture.

“You’ve got to be kidding me?” I say and they both shake their heads.

“Now you really need to look at this,” Jenks says handing me another stack of paperwork.

I read the papers and frown. “How the hell did he make Chief of Police?” I ask rhetorically, not really asking anyone.

“I’m really not sure on that one, but he will lose his job with all of this.”

I sigh rubbing my face. “Make it happen,” I say and stand up, walking out the door.

“Edward?” Phil yells after me.

“Phil, just let me calm myself. I’m really close to losing all of my control. The more I find out about Charlie Swan, the angrier I become with him.”

Phil nods in understanding. “There’s a boxing ring a few blocks from here, how about we get padded up and go for a few rounds?”

I sigh and look at him, but I stop myself from speaking. I can see he’s clearly as angry as I am. “Sounds good, just watch my face,” I say and I hear him chuckle.

“Yeah, Bella will kick my ass if I hurt your pretty face. Do you think she’s ready for Saturday?”

I shrug my shoulders. “We’ll work together to get her ready, and then we’ll all be there for her on the other side. No matter what, I know she needs to do this, even if I hate the idea of it.”

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great timing on serving the papers.

Love this.


I would sti like details on how the college kids are being tortured



Author's Response:

Wow, you all just blow us away with the response for each and every chapter, so on behalf of Nikky and I, THANK YOU ALL so very much.  There are a lot of questions about what all happened to the evil witches at the college, well that is coming to you soon.  There really weren’t any questions asked that we could answer without giving away the ending of what they all have coming.  We are currently working on chapter 22, but it’s going well and there should be no waiting for it to post, it should post on time.  Most of the story wraps up in 21 and 22, but there will still be chapter 23 and for sure chapter 24 and maybe a chapter 25.  The ending is almost writing its self and it all is going really smoothly.  We hope you enjoy the way this wraps up.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Hope you all like this teaser ... Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER: 

I get out of my car and walk toward the club. I can’t help but walk with a skip in my step, knowing very soon my girl will be meeting me here.

“Edward,” someone calls from behind me. I turn around and my mouth drops open.  Standing there is a much disheveled-looking Tanya. I look down at her as she rambles on, but I don’t listen. She’s wearing dingy, yellow slacks that are at least two sizes too big. The gray t-shirt she is wearing has what looks like coffee stains all over it. Partially covering her crusty, dirty looking shirt is a rather ugly purple, ripped-up, fake leather jacket. Her hair is very frizzy and looks like a huge afro on top of her head. To top it all off, she has no makeup on and looks ghastly pale. I hold back my laugh and just look at her.

“Are you listening to me? I said, ‘Do you see this?’ Look at me, please, you need to let me have my life back,” she whines out at me. “I need proper clothes, and a salon.  Alistair would freak if he saw how horrid this is. Please help before I have to have it all cut off,” Tanya says as she pulls at her hair.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Love it.  It's nice to have James & Vicky as allies/  I hope Tanya hasn't found Phil.  After all he was taken in by Renee, so he could be taken by Tanya.

Will you tell us what charges were brought against Charlie?

What if any fall out di the elder LaHote suffer from the public serving of the papers?



Author's Response:

WOW ... what great reviews we got.  There is still redemption to come, and Karma is a dish best served cold and wet in some cases.  To settle all bad thoughts, Phil would never invite Renee or Tanya to Bella and Edward’s wedding.  Some suggested Vicky, but Vicky and James sort of have a love/hate/power-struggle of their own.  He hasn’t quite told us yet, but Vicky is more of the Domme, than submissive and James just doesn’t come across like a switch to me.  Nikky and I will give James and Vicky both closure before the end, we promise.   Some of our favorite reviews made comments about not wanting to ever piss us off, because our thoughts scare them—have to say this had us both laughing.  I’ve always said that Nikky is one of the most diabolical minded people ever, and I was once told that I am good at writing three things: crazy/dysfunctional, fighting and f*ck*ng.  With that said, there wasn’t a lot of questions we could touch on too much, but we hope after reading the next couple of chapters you’ll understand why.  Thank you as always for being such a loyal reader and for taking the time to leave us a message/review/comment—they all mean the world to us.
Nikky & Kasi~

TEASER:  “Do you think we should ask what we are having?” Bella asks looking at me.

I kiss her head.  “Do you want to know?”

“Why are you answering my question with a question?”

“You think I’m answering your question with a question, but yet you do it, too.”

I chuckle and Bella frowns rolling her eyes. I quickly flick her leg and shake my finger, no, to her.

“I am happy either way, so you can choose if we know or not,” Bella huffs and then smirks at me. “Master, your girl would like you to take control and tell your girl what you want to do.”

I tilt my head at her. “Firstly, don’t switch into Dom and Sub time without my approval.  Second of all, I think we should wait, I like being surprised.”

Bella nods at me. “Thank you,” she says while kissing my cheek.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Glad things are comingtogether.  I'd bet on Charlie or Leah killing Harry  Did you ever say what the charges against Charlie were?



Author's Response:

We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply.  I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it.  Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta.  Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time.  Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours.  Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out.  Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate.  There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete.  Kasi~

TEASER:  Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth.  Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.

Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.

Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

The summer of 2005 was the summer that changed Bella Swan's life forever. Sent to Ohio by her mother to attend a school for debutante girls not quite up to par, she meets Edward Masen, an apprentice. But is that really all he is? AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94846 Read Count: 107694
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 28 May 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 Confrontation

I'm guessing not CIA otherwise why Platt not Masen. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 28 May 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 Confrontation

I'm guessing not CIA otherwise why Platt not Masen. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2014 Title: The Perfect Partner Program

Glad Bella is on the road home. Good for Charlie. I wonder how much time Edward can give Bella before Esme discovers she's fled?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2014 Title: The Perfect Partner Program

I really like Carlisle. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: The Perfect Partner Program

Awesome. So glad he came clean & so vlad she left. I hope she shows up on Becca's doorstep

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 30 May 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 Discomfort

I hope we get to learn why Agent Platt works under an alias 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 30 May 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 Discomfort

I hope we get to learn why Agent Platt works under an alias 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 Answers

So glad they are talking

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2014 Title: The Perfect Partner Program

Just found this today. Very interesting.  Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 16 May 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 Broken Hearts and Dreams

I'm glad Renee realizes that breaking her daughter's heart won't necessarily lead her back to George 

 

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 19 May 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 Going back Home

Please let George show his true colors quickly enough so she doesn't get back with him

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 May 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 The Truth

Nice! I was so proud of Bella when she told George off. I'm happg she knows the truth & that Charlie has her back

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 May 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 In Order to Heal

The chapter went through the 13 years well

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 May 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 Sweet Words and Promises

I'm surprised esme would want Edward to do anything sexual with her

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 14 May 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 The Beginning of The End

Can't wait for the aftermath. I'm looking forward to Edward despising himself

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 Introductions

Shy Edward is suprising. I'd love to hear how Leah ended up at the acadrmy

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 May 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 Jealous

Even if Edward does break her heart  I can't imagine Bella going back to George. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 May 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 Dancing with Him

I think that Edward's job is to brainwash Bella to be Renee's idea of a perfect daughter. I think that Edward has discovered he likes Bella as she is.  The text was to remind him he's supposed to be turning her into George's perfect partner, not his

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER BY: DeeBelle1 fanfic.

SUMMARY:  Bella is in the wrong place at the wrong time.  What happens when Edward, a mob man decides to keep her, rather than kill her when she witnesses a murder he commits?  Will she ever willingly love him?  Will he ever trust her?  Birthday story for WeeKitty.  AH/M

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40121 Read Count: 95079
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I enjoyed the story.  I was very glad to see Edward grow up

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm glad B had a god day with her mom.  I was reallyhoping Edward would do some thinking after her drunken honesty & they could have an honest talk about their relationship

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'm floored by the fact that Edward is open to her working outside the home after children

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I actually thought Alice was a Fed.  I'm amused that 3 offspring of a police chief are going to rescue one mobster from another

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Edward just doesn't get it.  He loves Bella and is not giving her a chance to love him back.  What is Carliles's & Esme's life like? How does he treat her in front of them? Des he talk to her in front of his family as he does in front of hers?  If so do they approve?

 

In earlier chapters esme said she wouldn't plan the wedding if B didn't want it.  Does she know how B & E met?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

okay Alice

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 686]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 237279
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Awesome

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Nice!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Welcome back

Summary: Past Featured Story

A change in the past makes an early intervention necessary for the Cullens. This story is complete and I will upload one or two chapters each week.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253021 Read Count: 126583
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2013 Updated: 06 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

I really enjoyed that. Thanks for writing it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

A pediatric oncology department is the last place you expect to find: the child you want to adopt, a childhood television star borne famous singer turned love of your life, a selfless guy and his polar opposite or see someone you become attached to die.  This is a road that Dr. Edward Cullen finds himself on, how will it all unfold?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73863 Read Count: 32729
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2013 Updated: 19 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loved th epress conference.  Can we have a Jacob POV when he has to go before the judge?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great wedding.  I'm guessing the leaker is Jess and  / or Lauren.

I'm taking it as given that Jake will try something at the awards show.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Loved how Bree threw out the wolf!

Will you share with us the "goodbye gift" the staff gave the nurses?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

PoorAngela.  Still I think she gave her family the best exit she could.

On the other hand, good news about the judge's reaction to Jacob.  Can't wait to see if he complys or digs himself deeper

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Glad they got Jacob on tape.  Since you've given us snippets of the bad press Jacob caused for Bella, I'd love to hear how the press handled the reaction to jacob's crime & sentence.

 

I notice that this Jake seems similar to the jake of Diamond Doll's Kitty Cave.  They both had 20 men lined up for Bella

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

What a great story.  Thank you

Summary:

“Wait”, I said confused “Your telling me vampire's exist and that I am one?”

 

 

What would have happened if Edward did go to Biology the day they did Blood typing? What changes would have been made? Would Bella have met Jacob? What if they did whilst she was a vampire and him a werewolf? 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17424 Read Count: 2874
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2013 Updated: 30 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 May 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Celebrations

I just found this today and I really enjoyed it.  Thank you

Summary: Past Featured Story

TCOACG Banner by Mina

 

(Banner by Mina)

 

A perfect cafe au lait was all it took for Hollywood's most eligible bachelor to fall in love with me...the coffee girl.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93585 Read Count: 138271
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-Four

I actually prefer stories to "lemons".  Perhaps I am old, but honestly after a while they all read alike

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Ten

I'm guessing the phone calls he didn't take have to do with him & Em playing tug of war last chapter.

 

Loved Em, Rose, & Charlie

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve

Loed how she handled Aloce.  Can't wait for the Christmas plans

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen

Great chapter.  It will be interesting to see how her internship goes.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Noce proposal

Mismatched Love by WeeAndJess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 234]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary: 

Zany Bella is the maid of honor of her sister’s wedding. She has to deal with Charlie, her soon to be brother in law and his uptight rich family who don't like her. To top it all off, Charlie's brother Edward is back and they seemed to be pushed together in everything they do. They are a mismatched pair that can't seem to tell each other how they feel.

BANNER BY Deebelle1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67590 Read Count: 38628
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2013 Updated: 21 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I was afraid you were going to have Rielly tell him.  I'm glad it didn't lead to an angry Edward

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Thank you for not killing Edward.

I am appalled at Carlisle's, Rose's, & Tanya's behavior

Summary:

everythingIneeded_zps20a89799

 

Bella had been lucky to land the job as the nanny to Esme and Carlisle's two girls, but when Carlisle's younger brother arrives in New York in need of a fresh start and some help with his own brood, Bella's world is quickly turned upside down. It was just supposed to be a job, but they quickly became everything she needed. 

 

Check out Edward's POV, Everything I Wanted.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99082 Read Count: 85363
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Apr 2018
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Not liking Esme.

Summary: Past Featured Story

everythingIwanted_zps9dd57a41

 

A failed marriage and long divorce left Edward with a lot on his hands. Moving his kids closer to his family in New York was the fresh start he needed so that his family could thrive. Not knowing how he would juggle work and caring for his kids, he jumped at the chance to hire his brother's nanny to care for his own kids. But the moment Bella walked into his house everything changed. She started out as the nanny, but she quickly became everything he wanted.  

 

Bella's POV of this story is posted as Everything I Needed.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101886 Read Count: 87580
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Apr 2018
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 28 May 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I hope Carlisle & Esme wake up

Summary: Past Featured Story

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I was having a really bad day. Boys are persistent, and Edward Cullen is laughing at me. A little daydreaming never hurt anybody. AU BPOV


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 192783 Read Count: 69023
[Report This] Published: 29 Dec 2013 Updated: 03 Sep 2018
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 20 May 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 ~ How to ask a vampire if you're dating

fun

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Summary: He's a coldhearted businessman who's set in his ways. He wants perfection, but doesn't see it from anyone, ever. What if he tastes the other life, will he go back and if he does will he change? AH/Rated M

Amazing banner by Deebelle1 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36855 Read Count: 9474
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2013 Updated: 13 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great story.  Thank you.

Reign by Ruthlessly Yours Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 688]
Summary:

Be gentle, be sweet, speak of womanly things, but above all else give your king everything he desires, Lady Isabella Swan of Devonshire does none of these things..."

 

"It was the reign of life, it was the reign of death, of love, of hate, of gold, of dust, it was the era of kings, it was the era of the common man, of truth, of deception, of war, of peace. It was the Reign of Edward and Isabella. #Kingward #Royalward"

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107093 Read Count: 106449
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2014 Updated: 09 Jan 2015
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Really loving this

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Healing can only begin where forgiveness ends… Bella is single, a virgin, and a high school teacher who is completely content with her life. Edward, a former solider in the Irish mafia turned family lawyer, is completely withdrawn and cares only for himself. Both are forced into an arranged marriage. Can they get it together long to survive a clash between the Irish Mob and a vicious Mexican Cartel?


Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 209615 Read Count: 114399
[Report This] Published: 18 Jan 2014 Updated: 17 May 2018
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I'm a little upset that Bella is in Damsel in Distress mode ( Edward don't let him take me)I hope when she calms down she'll begin to rescue herself. I'm glad the Carmen will be with her and I hope Carmen is a smart as she thinks

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Congratulations  on your wedding

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Before the sorrow, a Prequel to Where forgiveness ends.

Great chapter.

I'm sorry for your loss

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Glad to see Bella has some fight in her. I hope she can team up with Carmen ASAP 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Glad Carlisle outfitted Gregory. I'm hoping her panic attack saves her. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 15 May 2018 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Justice was served 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 11 May 2018 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Sorry for your loss 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 03 May 2018 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Go Leah!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Detective Cullen has been married to his job for a very long time, and he doesn’t ever plan to change.  Bella Swan the overweight girl who gets used and tossed aside is his favorite waitress.  Can they make more out of this than friendship with benefits, or will she send him away when she decides she wants more?

(The use of the word steaks vs. stakes is a play on words - just FYI)


Banner by: Deebelle OneFic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 151340
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2014 Updated: 16 Mar 2014
Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope she wasn't hurt too badly & I hope Edward follows up with a proposal

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Glad she stood up to Jake.

I hope Edward doesn't do a "new moon" on her.  I really hope that someone asks Edward what he thinks the difference is between being married & what he & Bella are doing now.  I mean, aside from the fact that he still has an apartment he occasionally goes to, they are living like they're married

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Glad he owned up to reading