Reviews by alices911turbo
Fourth Quarter by MBella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 24]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Fourth Quarter

Edward is the star quarterback, Bella is the coach's daughter.  Falling in love can be bittersweet, but what happens when tragedy tears them apart and fate throws them back together years later?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 146742 Read Count: 17966
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Feb 2010
Reviewer: alices911turbo Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Epi

i loved this story, i love football and twilight and for you  to combine the two was great

Summary:

 

 

Summary: He believes he is a modern day Prince Charming, and that true love exists. If you can find the right pair of feet…..


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Emmett/Rose
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3614 Read Count: 324
[Report This] Published: 15 Dec 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: alices911turbo Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was to cute, it was just what i needed

Summary: Past Featured Story

bsnnr

 

Banner by Readergoof...she even found a white bikini!  Thank you!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57546 Read Count: 31126
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2011
Reviewer: alices911turbo Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini

i love this so orginal keep going i need more

Summary:

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People can't eat people alive, and frozen men don't exist. Bella's secret knowledge of vampires is inadvertently brought to surface when she & her friends are all thrown in the path of fate.

Banner by the awesome LunarEclipse1

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90817 Read Count: 20308
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2012
Reviewer: alices911turbo Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I let me just say that I love your stories. You make laugh, have great lemons I truly hope that one day this story will be finalized 

Reviewer: alices911turbo Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I let me just say that I love your stories. You make laugh, have great lemons I truly hope that one day this story will be finalized 

Reviewer: alices911turbo Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I let me just say that I love your stories. You make laugh, have great lemons I truly hope that one day this story will be finalized 

The Cellar by iambeagle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Boy meets Girl. Girl's friend throws up on Boy's shoes. A story about wannabe hipsters, awkward moments and soul mates.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36044 Read Count: 14303
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2011 Updated: 09 Jan 2012
Reviewer: alices911turbo Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 28: December 13 8:46 a.m.

This chapter had me rolling on the floor laughing. Thank uoi

The Rinse Cycle by Shahula Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

College senior Bella Swan is trying to put her past behind her and be a responsible adult. Her plans get tossed aside when dirty boy Edward Cullen appears at her local Laundromat. It's time to get dirty and come clean. AH/AU, drabble 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 79 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34578 Read Count: 73705
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 10 Jun 2012
Reviewer: alices911turbo Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

i love this story so far cant wait for the update



Author's Response:

Always happy to hear it! I hope you enjoyed it; outtakes will be up next weekend. :)

Summary:

Bella has always lived in the shadow of her twin brother, Edward. But on a graduation trip with their friends to a secluded cabin, she starts to develop feelings for his roommate Jasper. How long can they explore their feelings while keeping Edward in the dark? Non-canon pairing.

 

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Banner featuring pictures of the cosplay group, The Olympic Coven, used with permission. Photo credit for Rose and Emmett photo to @andywryly

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25705 Read Count: 13721
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2012 Updated: 04 Jul 2012
Reviewer: alices911turbo Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i love your writing i cant wait for the next chapter

Summary:

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Edward overhears Bella complaining about her lack of ‘O’ at a party and he offers to help.  Too bad Bella’s never thought of him as being anything but her geeky lab partner.

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8082 Read Count: 2606
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2012 Updated: 30 Jul 2012
Reviewer: alices911turbo Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i loved this story is there anyway you would make it longer



Author's Response:

It probably won't be any time soon, but I am definitely thinking about expanding this.  Thanks for the review!  I am glad you liked it!

Bases Loaded by JessAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Spending summer vacation traveling with the St. Louis Cardinals isn’t every teen girls idea of fun.  What happens when the teen daughter of the team doc falls for one of the players?  Can they find love or will life get in the way?  AH/Cannon and Non-Cannon Pairings/Rated NC-17

Wonderful Banner made by: Stephenie Masen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115192 Read Count: 87326
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
Reviewer: alices911turbo Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

there is something about this story that i love reading it makes so excited to read a new chapter i cant wait for an update



Author's Response:

Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22.  First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing.  The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her.  Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing.  Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows.  If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable.  Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it.  Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice.  Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice.  Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control.  It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon. 
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups:  Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~

TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”

“You talked to Es?”

“Yeah, she calls me every day.  How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”

“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once.  He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier.  I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”

“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks.  “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”

“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.

“Yep,” she says popping the p. 

“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt.  Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”

“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.

Summary:

Bella gets more than she bargains for when she tries to save the Mariner's new outfielder from a skanky groupie. E/B AH. (Secret Santa fic for ATaletobeTold) 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3970 Read Count: 2321
[Report This] Published: 28 Dec 2012 Updated: 28 Dec 2012
Reviewer: alices911turbo Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i love that story please tell me you may expand it i would love to read more of it

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a figure skater competing at the Olympics. She is performing her long program. Both she and Edward have agreed to put their relationship on hold until she competes. They have had a secret relationship throughout the years relying on phone conversations and text messages to get them through.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12403 Read Count: 3951
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2014 Updated: 23 Jan 2014
Reviewer: alices911turbo Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story 

Famous by Ruthlessly Yours Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 44]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Isabella Swan is one of the most famous celebrities in the world….But she’s hiding an even bigger secret.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8529 Read Count: 11584
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2014 Updated: 02 Jun 2014
Reviewer: alices911turbo Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really great