Reviews by helikesitheymikey
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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 76225
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: helikesitheymikey Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Returning Home

cullens meet Bella in college and she's E's mate. E just returns and finds the cullens are trying to keep Bella alive but can't connect with her enough

Reviewer: helikesitheymikey Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Learning What's Wrong

oh gosh...if you saw a weird review from me I was trying to fav your story and that was the blurb I was writing to identify which story it was. SORRY!

 

I absolutely LOVE this story though!

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: helikesitheymikey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

methinks the officer needed a list of everyone to keep away from Bella and the girls.

 

SO...I'd totally vote for Rose to end Tanya if I didn't think she'd get in trouble for it...and if I didn't want Bella to end Tanya herself after she becomes a gifted hybrid and has control over herself.

 

also...is Angela pregnant? I mean I doubt she was taking vampire strength birth control pills before she met Ben and vampires are really fertile right?

 

was SO happy to see this story was updated! I love it so much that after you had updated with ch16 I decided to work my way through the story again to try to hold off any story withdrawals I might start suffering.

 

SO...since they're cutting back on the amount are they gonna find out the hard way just how much birth control she needs to take to not get pregnant? also if a human did become pregnant could she be safely changed so as to have a better chance of carrying the child to term*and surviving herself*? what would happen to the child I wonder...would it still be half vampire and half human or would its mother being changed effect what it is...

 

also somehow I'm thinking someone might have overheard Edward's  joke about her being pregnant...or maybe security cameras hearing/seeing what he said. I mean if I was in Aro's shoes*thank god I'm not* I'd want to keep track of any threat there might be against me by constant surveylence at least through technology.

 

I would not be surprised if Edward will grow more yet...totally like that he has a better sense of those who would pose a threat to his bond with his mate.

 

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

 

btw, we gonna eventually see Bella and Edward pregnant? if he's this possessive/protective NOW I'd love to see how he'd be with his mate expecting...methinks he'll want a whole house/mansion/palace-hold of children



Author's Response:

Hiya *waves*

Thank you so much for reading and the awesome comment. It made my day when I saw it!! But I'm  Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH.

You'll see soon if Angela is pregnant ;)

Love all your questions. Carlisle will have to be careful, he will need to give her a dose high enough for Bella not to become pregnant. As for Bella having a baby if she is changed before giving birth and/or conception, the baby would still be considred a hybrid.More powerful than a hybrid who has a human mother, but a hybrid nonetheless. But you'll find out in future chapters that human women can carry vampire offspring and survive...it is a risky birth tho, very gory if the baby doesn't get out of the mother's womb when it's time or gets stuck. They'd chew their way out to survive. My baby vamps and hybrids are born with two tiny fangs, the teeth will come later like human babies. I'd say it would be recommended for a human to be changed first before having a baby by a vamp, but since changing humans is forbidden by Aro, most human women are forced to give birth as humans. And even that is risky b/c the chance of dying can be high if the baby can't leave the womb and havingbaby hybrids is also forbidden. So much isn't allowed. lol

Yup you're right. Aro could be listening or any one for that matter.  But Edward isn't worried. Not yet...anyway ;)

And yup, you never know if he'll grow more. If his mate is trouble, he may grow a bit more. =) it's like a natural reaction he has to her. That is why The change hit him so early.

Pregnancy for Bella will come much later unfortunately. But I hope you'll like it and i can keep you entertained til then

Thank you soooooooo much. Love your comments and questions.

Thansk again,

XxOo

jells

Reviewer: helikesitheymikey Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

one thing I keep thinking about is I doubt Angela ever got vampire birth control before she and Ben first were active. aren't vampires very prolific? methinks Angela will get pregnant and that'll help jump start Edward and Bella to their path of becoming King and Queen...along with whatever foolishness Aro tries.

 

anyway LOVE THIS STORY!

 

the cops? seriously!? what are they gonna do go arrest Mother Nature for a human having her period?*snickers*

wonder if their lil period stuff helped create any lil vampires from the bystanders...ya know getting both males and females more hormonal or something...o.O



Author's Response:

All I can say is I love the way you think. ;)

Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you're enjoying the story!

LOL. IKR?  Bella caused quite a reaction. lol

Thank you again, I loved hearing you thoughts and thanks so much for reading!

~Jells

Reviewer: helikesitheymikey Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

OMG! is Aro putting crap into the human food supply to get them to produce more blood or something? kinda like how most food nowadays has folic acid to try to prevent birth defects in pregnant women? methinks they should get their own cattle, chickens and crops so they have things that can't be as easily tainted...

or am I completely off base in what's wrong with Bella?

 

so Edward's probably one of the biggest vampires ever then? man is that kinda funny...biggest vampire in history listening to his tiny human mate.*snickers*

 

totally LOVE this story and was SO HAPPY when I saw that you updated...and I just LOVE your long chapters! oh and how possessive Edward is but he still is gentle with Bella.

 

I hope that you'll update soon! I'm seriously addicted to this story I think!



Author's Response:

Hiya!

Love your theories =)  You'll see soon.

Yeah, Edward's the biggest vamp. And he listens to his tiny mate. LOL  The male vamps in this story may be dominant but they cherish their mates. So glad you like. =)

Thank you so much =)

I should have the next chapter posted very soon.

Thanks again, love hearing from you. I appreciate it.

XxOo

Jells

Summary:

Unable to handle being the only unmated vampire in the family any longer, Edward takes off on one of his 'rebellious' streaks.

What happens when he meets his mate in the most unlikely of places? A place of death…

AU, angst, drama, romance.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6572 Read Count: 866
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 23 Mar 2011
Reviewer: helikesitheymikey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: All I Need

awww...this is SO GOOD!

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! I bet Bella will blow Edward away with how she accepts her new life