Reviews by Evelyne-raconte
Summary:

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A ruthless criminal detached from all emotions brought to Las Vegas on a job. A young woman trying to move on after escaping an abusive relationship.

 

One drunken night brings them together. Can they survive in a world filled with lies and deception? Mobward/Mafia.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136341 Read Count: 126173
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2014 Updated: 04 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start, I always like some good Mobward. I will follow your fiction with pleasure. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I enjoy this second chapter a lot. It's funny and light. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

A lot of humour in this chapter, it's a good one, thank you for sharing.

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Date: 06 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great chapter, Edward's father have to wait, but sooner or later, he has it come to him. Trying to rape his son's wife, he must have some death wish, or he is insane.

Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

And I think that he is in love with her too, but he has to tell her now. Excellent chapter, as always. Thank you for sharing.

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Date: 28 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

WOWOWOW ! Impressive chapter, I so like it ! Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

You are so welcome back, thank you for this great chapter. Happy Thanksgiving !

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Excellent chapter, thank you for sharing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Edward’s grandfather’s business has been closed because of his investment partner died and his daughter, who he calls the viper, wants more than just money to reopen. The viper makes life hard for the Cullens when Edward refuses her ‘offer.’ When an angry Edward meets another poor little rich girl that needs some tutoring, will she be the one to teach him a thing or two?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69931 Read Count: 84922
[Report This] Published: 20 Jul 2014 Updated: 25 Aug 2014
Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Very good ending, I love it.

You are very imaginative people, thank you for sharing this fiction with us, and the ones to come this year or later.

Take care of youse, girls !

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That Mike guy is really a piece of shit, I'm glad it is away now.

Thank you for this good chapter.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great end, you make me LOL at Alice's wedding. Thank you for sharing !

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SUMMARY: This is a companion piece to Family Business, all in Tanya's point of view. Let's take a look at this woman's life, and see what led her down the road she traveled.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4302 Read Count: 1504
[Report This] Published: 12 Sep 2014 Updated: 12 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

She was rotten to the core from the beginning. Thank you for sharing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113973
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 8 part 4

Ok, Bella IN, Alice IN, Elisabeth IN... Tanya OUT !!!

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 9 Part 2

AHAHAHAHA ! Some humour, thank you.

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Date: 11 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 10 Part 4

Thank you for the updates. I hope everything is under control now for you. And congratulations for your new book.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 8 part 5

Well, if Tanya won't like it, she can suck it up. hank you for the update.

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Date: 09 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 5 (part 5)

WOW, I would like to have a tour of his house too.  The master bedroom is dreamlike.

Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 20 part 8

Bella and Edward on Ellen's, that will be great.

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Date: 17 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 9 Part 1

Jasper's POV is interesting too, he has an outside idea of what happen there.

Thank you for the update.

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Date: 30 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Adorable moment with Charlie. Lovely family, exception done of Tanya, what a terrible mother. Thank yo for the update.

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Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 13 part 2

Tanya is a prick and not a mother at all. Great chapter, thank you.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 8 part 10

Jasper has it bad for Alice, and he don't even know it. Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 17 Part 10

I'm so glad for the release of your book. I wish you the best success.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Great chapter, BTW !

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 13 Part 6

Thank you for the great update. The hell will be out when Tanya comes back home.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 13 Part 5

Thank you for the update, i enjoyed it a lot. Till next time.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 4 (Part 5)

Always a pleasure to read more of MM. Thank you.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 5 (Part 4)

Nice chapter, as always. I like following you.

And for the excerpts, you can put them where and when you want.  It's not a problem for me.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 5 (Part 3)

Did he count that she has a daughter ? If Bella come to live at his mansion, her daughter is surely part of the package. Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 19 Part 13

Yes, plenty of sex action now. Excellent ! Thank you.

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Date: 24 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 19 Part 11

Excellent, and 2 for Christmas : Great ! Thank you.

Have a great Christmas time.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 13 part 1

Thank you for the update.

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Date: 06 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 5 (part 2)

I know it's a drabble, but every time you post a chapter, it's never enough, I would like to read more. Thank you for sharing. I'm looking for tomorrow and the next chapter.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 13 Part 4

Great chapter, i enjoyed it a lot. Thank you for the update.

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Date: 11 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 17 Part 9

YESSS, hell is coming on Tanya soon. Great part, thank you.

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Date: 18 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 15 part 3

Thank you for the update. When will Edward really open his eyes about Tanya ?

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Date: 20 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 12 Part 5

Great chapter, thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 17 Part 11

Excellent part. Thank you for the update.

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Date: 30 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 14 part 4

Tanya doesn't even know how to take care of a baby. She has no interest in her own child. So sad. Good chapter, thank you.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

HAHAHAHA ! Emmett always the same, thank you for the update.

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Date: 23 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 20 Part 6

Welcome back, it's always a pleasure to read more of Milk Money.

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 8 part 3

Yeah, I bet they looked like the happy ideal family. I wish Tanya out of the lanscape definitely soon. Thank you for sharing this nice chapter.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 14 Part 1

Lovely chapter, I like it. Thx.

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Date: 18 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 13 part 8

Excellent, and the pictures at the end of the chapters are lovely. Thank you for sharing.

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Date: 01 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 15 Part 1

WOW, not so friendly to Emmett, The Rosalie. She will get along eventually. Thank you for sharing.

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Date: 26 May 2015 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 11 Part 4

NOt yet (fucking the nanny), but soon. THank you for sharing.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 11 part 5

Thank you for the update

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 3 (part 1)

LOLLL ! Sometime you have to change the diapers !

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 8 Part 1

Slowly, he takes his place near Bella. Sweet chapter, thank you.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 (part 1)

Jake is a moron, and Bella was really naive.



Author's Response:

Yeah he is and she is. Think of how many college age girls believe anything a guy says.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 (part 2)

That's the solution, for both Bella and Edward. And as a wet nurse, she will have to live with Edward, so yes, 2 birds with one  stone, a paid job and no more rent. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2 (part 3)

Nice story, I wonder if there is still some wet nurses, actually.  They were a lot in the past, in the noble families, but now ? I have no idea.

Thank you for sharing, great chapter.



Author's Response:

I don't think there are so many "wet nurses" but there really are babies that struggle to eat and women do sell and donate breast milk, especially for premies. The difficult thing is some diseases, including HIV can be transmitted through the milk, so it's a lot harder to just "donate"

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 2 (part 4)

I thought Tanya has moved out, that she no longer was Edward's girlfriend.

Bella is very suspicious and don't trust easily, but who could blame her.

Thank you for this chapter.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 2 (part 5)

So, contact : Done !  They met and now theY learn to know each other.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 2 (part 6)

YEAH, Thank you for the update !

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 3 (part 3)

Bella is the savior here. So glad to read 2 chapters today, thank you.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 3 (part 4)

Thank you for the update. I wish Edward would try to know Bella better.



Author's Response:

He's just focused on his son. His feeings for her will come out of no where for him.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 3 (part 5)

Sometimes the end of a relationship leads to something much better. Thank you for sharing.

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Date: 30 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 3 (part 6)

Oh He takes charges and become adventurous and curious to know more about Bella, like where she works. Thank you for the update.

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Date: 31 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 3 (Part 7)

Emmett is right, it would be less weird, if it were soup.

Certainly some costumers in the pub have taken out their iPhone to take a picture or ten of Edward, and there will be plenty on blogs within the hour.

Thank you for the update.



Author's Response:

You are very good.. and yes.. there will be quite the scandal

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 4 (part 1)

Thank you for the update.

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Date: 02 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 4 (part 2)

Bella really is a good person. The manip is amazing. Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 4 (part 3)

You try it, You keep it !  LOL ! Thank you for the update. I appreciate it. And the manip is great too.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 4 (part 4)

It's a lovely chapter, and as always, the manip is amazing. Thank you.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 5 (part 6)

Welcome Jasper ! But shut the fuck up !



Author's Response:

lol!

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 5 (part 8)

MOUAHAHAHA ! Very hard to understand for Jasper, LOL ! Thank you for the update.

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Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 5 (Part 9)

Jasper named Tanya right, QB is particularly appropriate for such a person. Great update, thank you.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 5 (Part 10)

Yes, the FUCKING paparazzis, indeed. Best way to destroy lives, being caught be paps.

Thank you for the update.

Happy Valentine's Day to you too.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 6 Part 1

Thank you this nice update. Great photos too.

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Date: 17 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 6 (part 2)

The crazyness is launched. I hope Elisabeth could stay out of it, but vampirespaps are out for the hunt. So sad. Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 6 (Part 3)

Alice is a little crazy on the good side. Thank you for the update.

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Date: 19 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 6 (Part 4)

Thank you for this nice chapter.

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Date: 20 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 7 (Part 1)

Thank you for this lovely chapter.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 7 Part 2

So we have here anotner quiproquo. It's probably Jasper who is talking. Let's get thing clearly in the next chapter. Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 7 part 3

So, they have the hots for each other, it will be easier for Jasper and Alice than it could be for Edward and Bella (if Jasper is single). Thank you for the update. Enjoy your day !

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Date: 23 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 7 (Part 4)

It sparkles everywhere, with Edward and Bella and with Alice and Jasper. Thank you for the update.

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Date: 25 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 7 part 5

I appreciate this chapter. Thank you.

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Date: 27 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 7 Part 6

Edward was quick to get the hint about Elisabeth's father, even if he was heavy in his questioning. Thank you for the update.

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Date: 02 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 8 Part 2

Ohhh ! It's so sweet. I enjoy it a lot, thank you for the nice chapter.

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Date: 08 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 8 part 6

HAPPY WOMEN'S DAY !

And thank you for this nice update. Esme gives Edward good advices regarding his son and Tanya.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 8 part 7

I wish you the best birthday ever. Enjoy your special day and your cake !

Thank you for this great update.

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Date: 11 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 8 Part 8

Thank you for this good chapter.

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Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 8 Part 9

You make me smile with that one. The dream fantasie is cool. Thank you.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 9 Part 3

That was fun, great chapter. Thank you.

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Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 10 Part 1

Nice chapter, thank you for the update. At first, I thought Bella was falling for Edward, but I was mystaken, it was for Charlie.

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Date: 18 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 10 part 7

Thank you for the update.

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Date: 26 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 11 Part 1

Now Tanya is back and Edward feels she isn't at her place. I'm curious to know how he will work on that. Thank you for the update..

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 11 Part 2

Great chapter, thank you.

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Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 11 Part 3

Well, it looks that the bitch is in the place, let's just hope that it's not for too long. Thank you for the update.

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Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 11 Part 6

Great chapter, Edward had an epiphanie. Thank you for sharing.

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Date: 09 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 12 part 1

Great part, thank you for the update.

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Date: 01 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 18 Part 10

I don't want that to end too. This part is cool with Emmett's appearence. LOL ! THX !

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Date: 07 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 17 Part 6

Excellent part, thank you for sharing. Til next time.

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Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 17 Part 4

Tanya behaves like a whore, but for fame, not money. Now Edward sees her exactly for what she is. Thank you for sharing.

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Date: 06 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 17 Part 5

FINALLY !!!!! Great part, thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 15 Part 6

3 parts the same day, you spoil us. I'm glad to read more of MM. It's a pleasure to read your fiction. Thank you.

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Date: 22 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 15 part 7

One more try and it's over with Tanya. Thank you for the update.

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Date: 24 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 16 Part 1

Thank you for the update. Nice to see Rosalie and Emmett together.

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Date: 27 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 16 Part 3

Edward is really blind to Tanya's tricks.

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Date: 29 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 16 Part 5

Poor baby, he is sick and this Tanya makes him freeze in only a diaper on the set. She is crazy. Will Edward open his eyes ???

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Date: 30 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

So, next chapter, Edward will grow a pair and tell Tanya to go to hell ? Cool !!!

Great chapter, thank you for the update.