Reviews by acw1
Was Every by jol27 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 101]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Was Every Banner


 

Was every smile I gave him a lie?

 

Was every look a lie?

 

My name is Bella Swan and I have a secret. For 25 years I have been in love with my best friend.

 

When Edward returns home he also has a secret that will change their lives, "guys, I'm getting married!"

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84116 Read Count: 24053
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 10 Jun 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

ok there has to be some happiness soon or i will have to stop reading. You are just killing me with the heartbreak and sadness.  Just when I think this is when they will make that realization and connection she is hurt once more.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

hope she doesn't go although i am sure all she wants to do is run.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

that secret was so not worth the misery it has caused for bella and edward. hope he can get to her in time.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

eagerly waiting for more and hoping it will be a happy chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

great chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

i hope this is the big reunion and beginning of their admissions of love and wanting each other forever.  Cause you know, that isn't asking too much, right?

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

how exciting!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

good first chapter. Like the characters

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

aw, no kiss and now 6 weeks apart will not a happy bella or edward make.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

hope she chooses him even if she thinks she shouldn't

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

yay!! glad they are together.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

glad to see charlie warming up to him.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

great chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

good chapter. somehow i think tanya will cause trouble for them.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

good chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

expensive evasion tactic. good chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

great chapter. sounds like a good plan just hope it actually works. i think jealousy will feature big that night.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

maybe rose will accept him too.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

rose took it well.  Interesting to think that in the span of a few weeks of dating one could go from strangers to essentially planning their future together.  Nice to think it could happen.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

nice date. he's a keeper.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

sweet chapter. look forward to more family bonding.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

great chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

great chapter. new tanya would be a thorn in their side. hope she gets what she deserves eventually.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

enjoyed it.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

with emmett at her side I think some shenanigans will be unavoidable.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

what a surprise ending to the chapter. hope they do!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

good chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

moving is a bit drastic but if there really is nothing holding them there then why not.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

good chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

great chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

so sweet

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

sounds like a great honeymoon so far. look forward to more.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

great chapter. So I can understand Z 's unrequited love but still think she overreacted to the news.  She knew he would never be hers and while i can see where she would still have hope this is the best for her and her unhealthy love of him.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

good chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

hope he isn't her brother that renee gave up and kept secret.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

thinking jane is up to something, now i am paranoid!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

so exciting. change is good!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

glad she got rid of spoiled brat jane.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

good chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

good chapter. Charlie sure is being kind.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

glad she is awake.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

look forward to more of the story. hoping they are on the right track now, it seems that way.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

good chapter. glad to see them getting back to a form of normalcy.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

great chapter

Summary:

stories/15495/images/MyBannerMaker_Banner.jpgEdward isn't The only one lusting for Bella's blood!

Carlisle has a few DIRTY secrets ,involving how he creatively quenches his thirst.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Carlisle/None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1980 Read Count: 3799
[Report This] Published: 20 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Apr 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Making Sense Of It All

entertaining story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Glad you enjoyed it:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True

good chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Morning After

great story

Summary:

stories/8916/images/MyBannerMaker_Banner[2].jpg

 

Sequel to Bella’s Revenge.  Bella has been abducted by Edward’s brother.  Edward wages war on anyone who stands in his way of finding his one true love.  Brother against brother.  Can he save her before she’s killed?  Before she’s turned?  Or before she falls in love?  How can Edward ever forgive his brother?  The one he trusts.  The one known as…Jasper.   

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81658 Read Count: 24568
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 07 Nov 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

:)



Author's Response:

:)  Back at ya!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am with Bella's line of thinking...what is going on?  good first chapter. looking forward to more of the story.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

a very confusing yet still hot and desirable jasper. look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  I hope you are enjoying the story.  Here is your preview of an upcoming chapter:

 

“I can’t see anything past you, dog,” Alice said condescendingly to Jacob.  Jacob just growled at her.  I pinched the bridge of my nose.  We were supposed to be finding Bella and they could not stop fighting. 

“Stop,” I said.  They looked at me.  “Your constant bickering is not helping in the least to find Bella and Jasper.  We need to work together.  If you can’t do that,” I said looking at the wolf in front of me, “then you will have to leave.”

Okay, Jacob’s thoughts said.  I sighed.  I couldn’t believe we had the wolves helping us.  You know Jacob is in love with her.  He probably figures that if he can find her before you do, he can prove to be the better competitor for her affections.  I’m sure he would love to fight me, to fight all of us, but that would have to come later.  Right now, the woman I loved more than anything was missing and my backstabbing brother had her. 

When we find her, I will make that slut pay for stealing Jazz.  I growled at Alice.  She turned to me, eyes wide.  She hadn’t meant for that thought to slip out.  “I’m sorry, Edward.”  I narrowed my eyes at her.  “Bella is not a slut.  She had a rocky past, yes, but that does not make her a bad person.  And I don’t know what happened that made Jasper betray us like this, but there has to be an explanation.  He loved you, Alice.  He was loyal to the family.  Why would he suddenly turn?”

She shrugged.  “It doesn’t surprise me, Edward.  I mean, really, she slept with that…thing,” she pointed at Jacob.  He growled again.  “I’m surprised she didn’t go after the whole family as soon as we came back.  You know, in retaliation?”

I lunged at Alice and knocked her to the ground.  She kicked me off and jumped up.  I started to run at her and she held her hand up.  “You see?  This is what she wants, what Jazz wants.  They want us fighting so that we won’t find them.”  I stopped.  It made sense.  Running my hand through my hair, I looked down at the ground.

“I’m sorry, Alice.”

She smiled.  “I’m sorry, too.  I shouldn’t be blaming Bella, my sister, for Jazz’s actions.  He’s perfectly capable of saying ‘no.’”

I still had a hard time believing that she was gone and that Jasper was responsible.  Why would he do it?  He was a Cullen as much as the rest of us.  Why would he betray those that loved him?  It made no sense!

As if Jacob could hear me, his thoughts invaded my mind.  Maybe he doesn’t know you’re alive.  Maybe he thinks you’re dead and he feels like he is the only one who can protect Bella.  I hadn’t thought about that.

“That’s a good point, Jacob,” I said patting his furry head.  He licked my hand.  I laughed.

“What’s a good point?” Alice asked.  I explained what Jacob was thinking.  She cocked her head to the side for a moment in thought.  “That would make sense.  But why would he suddenly want to sleep with her?  Or her with him?  They have never shown interest like that before.  Besides,” she stopped for a second and glanced at Jacob.  “You and I both know he wasn’t very good with his control.”

It was true.  The whole reason I had left in the first place was because Jazz had tried attacking her at her birthday party when she got a paper cut.  Could he really have gained that much control?

“Stranger things have happened,” I said.

We came upon a run-down building that Alice had seen in a vision.  I took a deep breath and froze.

“Smell that?” I asked, turning to her.  Her nose wrinkled.  “Yes.  Like a dying vampire.”

Suddenly we heard maniacal laughter.  Victoria, I thought.  We ran towards the front door, Jacob breaking away and heading for the back.

It was unlocked.  We walked in and were assaulted by two scents.  One was definitely Victoria.  The other was still that dying vampire smell.  We followed it until we found some steps leading to a basement.  There was a steel door at the bottom. 

I charged the door.  It didn’t budge.  I charged again.  Nothing.  After the fourth time, the door fell off.  I somersaulted across it and immediately sprang into my crouching position.  It was the one used when on the defense. 

Alice drew in a sharp breath.  I followed her gaze.  My jaw dropped when I saw it.   

 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

hmm..confusing still but eager for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  All will be answered.  :)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

God I have no idea what is going on with jasper now. thoroughly confused as to his motives. 



Author's Response:

Good.  Her plan is working. 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I have now accepted the confusion and will no longer try to guess what the hell is going on. I will just accept each chapter as they cme and hope they bring with them a little more clarity each time.  look forward to more.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

hmmm

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

:) good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I hope you stick around; the best is yet to come.  :)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

uh oh...I am so confused about whether it really is jasper or not and now this happens. very anxious here.



Author's Response:

Hi!  Remember chapter 6?  That is from Jasper's POV; it should give some insight.  :)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  The plot thickens even more, huh?

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

great chatper.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

:)



Author's Response:

Hi!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!  :)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

glad they found him.



Author's Response:

Me too!  Let's just hope it's not too late!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

good chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks!  :)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

i hope he isn't too late as well.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that would suck.  All of his hard work in finding her and for nothing.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

uh oh ! hope edward gets there in time.



Author's Response:

I hope so too! 

I should have the next chapter up in a day or so.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Hope to have the next chapter up soon.  :)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

must be jasper outside he wouldn't let alice go off on her own even in his weakened state he would fight.  look forward to more.



Author's Response:

You seem to know Jasper's mind.  ;)

The answer will be revealed in chapter 23. 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

good chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks!  The next one will hopefully answer everyone's questions. 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

good chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I hope you enjoy the rest of it.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

aww poor jasper and alice are really getting the worst of the situation.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I know.  Luckily it'll all be over soon.  :)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

good chapter. curious to read wha comes next.



Author's Response:

Riley's demise and a long-overdue lemon.  I may get the chapter up tonight. 

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106344
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

if feels like so much is stacked against them right now.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

good chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

so fucked up. hope she gets back to them soon.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

whew!  good chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

great chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

good chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

hope this passes.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

good chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

great story.

Collide by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 129]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Collide Banner

We alone, a little flock,
The few who still remain,
Are exiles wandering through the land
In sorrow and in pain...
We wander in the forests dark,
With dogs upon our track;
And like the captive, silent lamb
Men bring us, prisoners, back.
They point to us, amid the throng,
And with their taunts offend,
And long to let the sharpened ax
On heretics descend

 

 

Two lost souls trying to figure out where they belong, collide. What happens when Isabella wants out of the plain life she leads that Edward wants to be accepted into? Will Edward face what he is running from to leave with Bella? Or will Bella surrender and embrace her culture?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57683 Read Count: 11066
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 04 Sep 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

so sad

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

great chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

interesting story so far

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

great chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

enjoying the story. Hate to think it really is like that when the young adults start rumspringa. I am clueless to the life of the amish however find it very interesting.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

suprised they have kept what they have under wraps so far.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

hope charlie encourages edward to court his daughter at some point.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

kind of sad an anxious about what is happening.  really hoping edward doesn't forget about bella and get involved with sarah.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

hope they are reunited soon.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

thank goodness he is going after her. look forward to them being togehter again.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

so stupid!!!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

i hope that somehow bella and edward do end up back together.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

great chapter. he really never should have even gotten involved with sarah. I am still a little pissed at him over that.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

great chapter. so sad for edward and bella right now though as they have many decisions to make and seemingly no real idea what direction they want to go in.