Reviews by acw1
Gloaming by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 176]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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AU of Twilight. What if the Cullens located to Forks 18 years later than originally planned? She said she would have been happy with Jake. She would have married him and had kids and she would have been happy. But she's not complete. Bella/Edward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98939 Read Count: 16035
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 37: CH28.5 EPOV OUTTAKE

avoided reading the last few chapters for a few days as I but enjoyed being able to read them all at once.   good story. hope to see more from you.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I am working on my next one now and should start posting within a month.

Summary:

 

Arrogant, crooked CEO Edward Cullen meets a mysterious, beautiful stranger at his company Christmas party. Things are not what they appear. A one-shot for The Official SmutVent Calendar 2008 and a brutally honest attempt at a chauvinistic alpha-male mind. Proceed with caution; this even makes me blush. OOC/AH/AU. EPOV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7882 Read Count: 943
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Feb 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

liked it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing. 

Defying Gravity by jenny0719 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen moves to Seattle when he takes a position as a trauma doctor in the local ER.  But fate has plans.  In walks Bella Swan, the woman literally of his dreams.  It's love at first sight, and after a whirlwind romance, Edward leaves his life and his love behind to travel around the world and help his parents give medical attention to those in need.  But he comes back to something completely unexpected, changing his life and his future forever....

WARNING:  This story has some adult language and will have some explicit sexual content.  Hence the NC-17 rating...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166492 Read Count: 64124
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Aug 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

like the story

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

hope she agrees to the date. Really enjoying the story. Well written.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I can just imagine him with a goofy grin.  great chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

crazy man for calling at 2am. very lucky she was awake. was a little scared she would be one of the accident patients brought in to him.  whew!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

oh they are so sweet! love it.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

pretty good second date. wish life for everyone was that great. Oh well, I am satisfied just reading about them.  look forward to more.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

everyone is so happy. hope it lasts a while.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

finally!  amazed they held out as long as they did.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

another great chapter!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Aw, now I have tears in my eyes too. Everything was falling in to place for them so nicely I kind of forgot that he would eventually leave to do this.  Hope they make it.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

great chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

love the story.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

great chapter.

Tempting Bella by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 191]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella tells herself being with Edward is wrong because he's to young for her though it doesn't stop her from wanting him in every way including her biological clock picturing green eyed babies. And if it is wrong why does he feel so right?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48225 Read Count: 35965
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

wonderful story. I think all will be ok in the long run. 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Angela was not very smart or loyal to Bella. I wonder how the other will fare.  Hopefully she will be gone as well.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Epilogue

great story!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Outtake 1: The Day Emmett Got Snipped

funny chapter. liked it!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?

enjoyed it. they forget, it happens. I have been with my husband for 23 years and he forgot my birthday last year. Sometimes they are just stupidly forgetfull.

Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53868
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: The Best Is Yet To Come

LOVED IT

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Beginning

Looking forward to your chapters being caught up to FF. Love they story.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Edward Cullen

good chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Prove It

look forward to more.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Revelations

great chapter. I hope jacob backs off soon and that edward doesn't fall back into old habits and ruin what is starting with bella.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: I'd Rather Be With You

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I've Got You Under My Skin

yay! finally..

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Everything

great chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Element of Surprise

good chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

good chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Emmett

great chapter, glad to see emmett.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, see you next time. Aurora

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108986
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 19

aw he is a keeper.

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195558
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Have You Seen My Innocence?

great story. like the pic of jacob on the description I just can't help but still see a little sharkboy in him.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Demon Comes Out to Play

always good

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: What Is Normal Anyway?

great chapter. well written story.

Lost and Found by nitareality Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Frustrated student Bella has a big problem. She lost BOB and he's being held in the lost and found, in RA Edward's room. Can Allice and Rose help Bella recover her BOB without sacrificing her dignity?

Comic Smut

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6775 Read Count: 1681
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 24 Feb 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Found

that was great!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

great chapter.



Author's Response:

thanks

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

great chapter



Author's Response:

thanks so much

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great first chapter. looking forward to reading more of the story.



Author's Response:

glad you are enjoying it!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

hooked!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

it is only a matter of time...i hope.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

loving the story. very funny chapter with the girls so drunk and disobedient.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Hope Rose at least gets a verbal smackdown from bella if nothing else.  great chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

great chapter



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

great chapter.  look forward to more. He is definitely patient with her.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

great chapter however you had angela moving in with lauren in the beginning and then you said it was tanya. confused about that.  hope she embraces her role she has asked for and stops being so darn stubborn about everything.  look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Hi there,

 

Thanks for the heads up! I have corrected it and reposted. So sorry - I need a beta!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

great chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

enjoyed the chapter.



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

he better fix this.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

enjoyed the chapter. she seems to be doing quite well during his absence.



Author's Response:

yeah she does - for now!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

edward needs to convince her to get the hell out of dodge, and quick!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

why did she have to wear the collar if the ribbon kept the others away? 



Author's Response:

thanks for the review and the question - she had to wear a collar because she is a sub and the ribbon is to show that she is taken and off limits. (It made sense to me...)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

great chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

good chapter. i think the story has gotten so long that i have forgotten some of the beginning or am just confusing it with another story. I thought carlisle was a director or producer or something not a doctor.



Author's Response:

ahem! *clears throat*  Different story, Angel!  Is this your way of saying it's time to call it quits??  Thanks so much for the review :)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

great chapter. somewhat interested in an jasper and alice outtake.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Great chapter. Now they will have no chance at privacy. :(



Author's Response:

thanks for the review - you know Edward will always find a way...

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TEASER FOR CHAPTER 29

“P-pardon?”  Bella felt faint.  This is bad! This is really, really bad!

Mona looked at her as if she was in awe, “Sit down Bella, you don’t look so well.’’

Bella groped her way to one of the chairs in front of Mona’s desk.

Riley cleared his throat, “Your face says it all. When I went outside to ask the photographers what they were doing here, one of the guys that I have become sort of friendly with informed me that they were not here for me, but for you.  It seems that your secret is out.” He raised an eyebrow.

Bella felt her stomach heave. She put a hand over her mouth and ran to the little bathroom adjacent to Mona’s office.

 She made it just in time as her stomach was emptied of it’s contents.   Bella sat sweating on the floor for a moment with her head leaning against the toilet bowl.

My secret is out? Oh my god! Do they know about what Edward and I are? Have I ruined his career? His life? 

Her jumbled thoughts were racing around in her head.

What had she done?

Her phone vibrated as she was rinsing out her mouth. She answered it with a shaking hand.

“y-yes?” she whispered.

“Bella?”

“Edward…” she closed her eyes as she heard his voice. She could feel the tears well up in her eyes and she felt the hot trail down her cheeks.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

great chapter



Author's Response:

thank you!!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

great chapter



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

wonderful



Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

so i am hoping esme was crying because she was happy bella felt at home enough to make breakfast for everyone.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review xoxo

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

great cchapter



Author's Response:

thank you :)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

:)



Author's Response:

thank you ;)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

great chapter



Author's Response:

thank you :)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

good chaptetr.



Author's Response:

thanks :)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

anxiety now, want to see what is next but a bit scared.



Author's Response:

it'll all be over soon! thanks for the review

Michele 

xoxo

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

good chapter.



Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

great, scarym suspenseful chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

great chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

great chapter



Author's Response:

thank you!!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

great chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

good chapter.



Author's Response:

thanks so much

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

:)



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

great chapter



Author's Response:

thank so much

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

great chapter. Everything seems good and right again. Hope it lasts for a while.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

great chapter. If it is possible to really charge her with that after what he did then i have lost even more faith in the system.



Author's Response:

Well I did some reading up on the laws of USA and in fact pretty much world wide - and while it is UNLIKELY to make such charges stick - there would have to be investigation to deturmine that she was in fact in danger or that she FELT that she was in danger or that the people that she was with was in danger - the actually charge would be or could be involentry manslaughter/self defense.  One of my readers over on FF said that she knows someone who served 3 years for defending herself against a car jacking and the person died as a result thereof!!!  scary stuff - BUT YOU KNOW ME...I am the eternal optimist - even though it doesn't always seem that way.

 

Now here is my little bit of love and thanks for you.

 

 

PEOPLE LIKE US - OUTTAKE # 6

OUTTAKE - CONVERSATION BETWEEN JASPER AND ALICE

"Guys, I've got to go - Jazz please give this some serious thought and Alice, you need to stop being so fucking stubborn. I love you, Squirt!"

Edward almost crushed her in a hug. He slapped Jasper on the shoulder as he ran out the door.

 

"So... you talk about the size of my schlong?"  Jasper said.

Alice looked up at him with mounting excitement, "Well, it's quite impressive..." she said huskily.

Jasper smiled at her.  "Can we talk? I mean really talk; I've missed you Tink..."

Alice smiled through her tears. "I've missed you too Jazzy...."

Jasper looked uncomfortable for a moment and it bothered Alice.  She was used to Jasper Whitlock being decisive and in control.  Seeing him looking ill at ease was new.  There had been many disagreements in the Whitlock/Cullen home since Alice had moved in with Jasper two year before.

She had never lived alone, besides when she had gone to college and even then, she had attended Berkley, so that she was close to her family and Jasper.

Although over the years, they had learned to deal with Jasper's travelling for work and Alice's part time job as Edward's PA which had taken her away from time to time, through everything, including Alice's training as a submissive, their lines of communication had always been open and honest.

Alice had grown up in a house hold that was opinionated and not scared of voicing their points of view.  Esme and Carlisle had encouraged their children to have their own opinions and to share them.  They had also taught them to stick to their guns.

This was one of the many things that had attracted Jasper to Alice in the first place.  Although she was much younger than him when they met; he had always found Alice to be interesting to talk to and inevitably to argue with.  She was a spirited and enthusiastic young woman, with a warmth and energy that seemed to draw him in from the first moment.

Jasper on the other hand had grown up in a large family with two parents that had stuck together over the years because there was no other alternative for either one of them.  They were hardened by life, worn down by reality and for a reason that Jasper had never been able to fathom; they had decided to have three children of which Jasper was the youngest.  Eventually Jasper's father had strayed and a few years later, when Jasper was about twelve, he had suddenly come back to the trailer park where they lived with three small children in tow!

He had told Jasper's mother that they were his dead sister's kids, but after awhile he had confessed that they were his.  Jasper felt sorry for the three youngest children and when he had begun to make money from modeling and small acting jobs, he had made a decision to see that they would have an opportunity to further their education, go to college and make a proper life for themselves.  Although none of the children were really close or affectionate with each other, Jasper had stuck to his word and the three younger children had gone on to college.

Jasper couldn't believe that Ricky, the youngest of his stepsiblings had taken advantage of Jasper's generosity the way that he had!  Jasper had never asked for any compensation or payment for the money that he had given to his siblings or parents over the years; the only stipulation he had for continuing to support his mother and father was that the house that he had purchased for them remain in his mother's name.  Jasper was not close to his father and the distance had only grown when the man had abandoned his young family, leaving his wife to work three jobs to feed and clothe their three children.

Jasper had always thought that he would never find anyone to settle down with.  He didn't ever want the life that his parents had; tired, sad, disillusioned and settling for something because there was no time or money for dreams of something or someone else.  Someone better.

So the first step that Jasper had taken at the age of sixteen was to have himself emancipated.  He had tried to live in Los Angeles and he had hated every moment of it but as he begun earning good money, he decided to take classes at the local community college.  The first one was on finances.  Jasper wanted to know how to look after his money and how to make it grow.

He trusted few people and although people liked his quiet charm and whit; Jasper had a way of standing to one side and observing people that he found made him a good judge of character.  Jasper had come to rely on that instinct over the years.

It was an instinct that he could no longer rely on.  He had never thought for a million years that his younger brother would ever turn out to be the low life, perverted bastard that he was!  Every time Jasper thought of what Ricky had done, how Richard had betrayed his own brother by lusting, perving, salivating over his Alice!  His Alice!  Jasper wanted to kill Rick with a cold fury that he had never felt before.

How he had touched her, fucking forced himself on her when Jasper had been careless enough to leave her alone with him... FUCK!

Alice gasped as Jasper jumped to his feet.  His face was a cold, furious mask.

"Jasper please!  If you want to talk to me, then you need to calm the fuck down!  I can't reach you when you are like this!  If you are angry with me then just say so and let's get it out there!  If you think that I did anything to encourage your brother..." Alice cringed away as Jasper was suddenly in front of her with his hand clasped over her lips.

"Never - NEVER, EVER call that fucking piece of low down shit my brother!  I will kill him if I ever see him anywhere near you again!"  Jasper spat out as he held her.

Alice whimpered and she closed her eyes.  "Jazzy, you are scaring me..." 

This wild man wasn't her Jasper...

Alice felt the tears running down her cheeks and over Jasper's fingers.

Suddenly she was free.

Alice pushed a fist into her mouth to keep the sobs as quiet as she could.  Her whole body was trembling.

"Alice... sweet Jesus, I'm sorry... I didn't mean to scare you... Ali..."  Jasper choked out as he sat crouched clear across the room from where Alice sat.

Alice could see the anguish clearly on Jasper's face and she felt even worse than she had in the past few days.

This was all her fault!

"Come to me..."  Alice said, but Jasper just shook his head.

Alice slid off the sofa onto her knees and she crawled slowly across to where Jasper had slumped down against the wall.

Jasper could feel the intensity of Alice's gaze as he watched her moving slowly towards him.

"Ali..." he said in a half pleading, half warning.

"No.  You've spoken and now it is my turn..." Alice said when she was inches away from his face.

Her eyes searched his intensely.  The remorse and sorrow that Alice saw gave her the courage to move closer until her lips met his.

Jasper's head jerked backwards, but with nowhere to go, he hit the wall.

He cursed and rubbed his head.

Alice grinned at him, "Maybe that'll knock some sense into your thick skull!"  She quipped as she arranged herself between his outstretched legs; her thighs straddled his open ones so that he could feel her heated core through her jeans.

Jasper shut his eyes tightly and moaned as he tried to adjust himself.  Alice giggled and winked at him.

"We can get to that later, but first let's please resolve this ‘thing' once and for all!"  She said with determination.

"Gladly, Darlin'."

"Okay, I'm going first.  I need to tell you why I didn't tell you about... what was happening in the first place, but you cannot freak out on me!  Do you promise?"

Jasper could see how anxious Alice was and once again he was filled with remorse at his earlier behavior.

"I promise."

Alice took a deep breath, "I know that this might sound crazy to you, but when it happened the first time; I tried to just shrug it off.  I thought that perhaps I had imagined it or misread his signals in some way.  The next time it happened, your... well your father was in the room.  He, Rick grabbed my ass as I walked passed him.  I turned around as saw them looking at each other and Rick just winked at me and they burst out laughing... Jasper... you promised..." Alice broke off as she watched Jasper's eyes become dark and wild again.

Jasper felt as if he was ready to explode!  That no good, low fucking, good for nothing... BASTARD!  I. will. Kill. Him.

Jasper felt Alice's tiny hand stroking his cheek and he refocused on her anxious face.

He kissed her quickly, "I'm okay, Ali, I promise.  I won't freak out on you again."

Alice nodded slowly, "He apologized to me later - your father, I mean.  The next day he told me that he had too much to drink and that he had made Rick promise never to touch me again.  He begged me not to tell you and then he said that... some girls just have an ‘air' about them..."

SON OF A BITCH!

Jasper opened his mouth to speak but Alice put her fingers over his lips.

She continued. "I know better than that, Jazz!  I know better!  I was raised to know better than that!  With all their bullshitting and nonsense, my brothers have never, ever treated any woman including me with anything than the utmost respect.  You have never treated me like a whore, but at that moment, I felt dirty.  And I felt like a two bit whore, who didn't deserve anything better.  Rick kept touching me, stupid little insignificant ‘slip-ups'.  Every time he was around me, sometimes you were in the next room or you had your back to us... He would graze my breasts by pushing past me in a doorway, or he would rub himself against me if he were standing behind us..." Alice shuddered in revulsion and Jasper couldn't take it any longer.

His arms wrapped Alice in a vice like grip. "Never, never, never..." He said over and over again against her neck as he pulled her closer.

"Jazz..."

"No - it's my turn now... never, ever again, Mary Alice Cullen.  Promise me that you will never let anyone ever make you feel like that again.  Especially not me!  God, Ali, I love you so much!  Just the thought of another man touching you... Fuck!  It's too much to even contemplate!  Do you know how I felt when I found out that Rick was... forcing himself on you?  When we forced Bella to tell us and we did force her - she didn't have a choice really, I wanted to fucking kill someone there and then!  As you know, I sat up all night just thinking about what could have happened to you!  And about how I was going to take care of you this time!  I couldn't help you last time, Darlin'.  I wasn't able to stop that animal putting his hands on you... but I was going to make sure that Rick never ever touched you again."

Alice brushed the tears of Jaspers cheeks.

"I love you so fucking much, Mary Alice Cullen-Whitlock.  You own me mind, body and soul.  If I lost you, my life would be so empty... please forgive me for hurting you and dragging this shit out.  Please, please don't ever put me through this again, Tink, my heart can't stand it."  Jasper whispered as they held each other's faces and gazed with longing into each other's eyes.

"I love you, Cowboy; you are my everything... my lover, my best friend, my Dom, my love.  I am sorry too.  No more secrets."

Their kiss was a relief.  For the first time in almost two weeks, their lips were soft and forgiving.  Lips touched, brushed, nibbled.  Tongues dueled and teased.  Eventually they couldn't take it any longer and Jasper held Alice to him as he tipped her onto the floor and loomed over her, his knees pushing her thighs apart.

Alice panted into his mouth.  "Can I get my clothes back?"

Jasper smiled against her lips, "yeah, especially the underwear..."

Alice giggled, "can I get my car back?"

Jasper shook his head, "sorry, you will be driven around for a while..."

Alice groaned, "but I can see my Bestie?"

Jasper rocked back on his knees as he looked at the bright twinkle in Alice's eyes. "Mary Alice..." He said with narrowed eyes.

Fuck! He is so sexy when he does that... now I need to change my panties! Damn Cowboy!

"Hmmm... take me upstairs Jazz... I've missed you..." Alice uttered the magic words.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

An hour later, Alice lay sprawled across Jasper's bare chest.  Her eyes were closed but she was humming as Jasper played with her hair.

"Alice?"

"Yeah?"

"Supervised visits only..."  Jasper kissed her forehead.

"I know - but that's only for now..." Alice smiled to herself.

She wondered what Kate, Bella and Rosalie were doing on Saturday after the therapy session?  She had heard that Gap was having a sale....

Everything was right with the world after all.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

I hope that you liked it!

Love

Michele

 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

good chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

good chapter



Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

great chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

good chap but wondering what was the reason riley was so insistent to see bella in person?



Author's Response:

good question - it will come out in another chapter, but he was going to offer her the gallery as a franchise type arrangement.  nothing sinister  - but the outtake will be up in the week. thank you so much for your support and comments.

xoxo

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

great chapter.



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

good chapter



Author's Response:

thank you so much!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

good chapter



Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

:)



Author's Response:

thanks darling!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

:)



Author's Response:

thanks - glad you enjoyed it xoxo

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

:)

Summary:

SEQUEL to "Dance with Me." Bella & Edward have found their happily ever after, but life still isn't easy as the two try to start a family around Bella's medical history. Will the stress of it & Edward's career be too much for them? And what does life have in store for our favorite couple.  AH/AU/Canon*LEMONS*

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101525 Read Count: 19465
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2013
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Better Together

GREAT CHAPTER!  TWO!!!

Friends in Love by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is desperate to move out of his apartment with Alice and lands in the only campus housing available, a co-ed apartment with Bella Swan. Both have feelings for the other but are unable to voice them and find themselves in separate relationships. As the friendship grows in spite of deeper feelings trouble brews and Edward finds himself being pushed to his limits while Bella deals with some of her issues. So what can you do when you love your friend...read to find out! Be warned that this story deals with the subject rape and abuse.

 

FriendsinLove

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119515 Read Count: 36671
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2011
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Confidence Found

great chapter



Author's Response:

thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

Was Every by jol27 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 101]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Was Every Banner


 

Was every smile I gave him a lie?

 

Was every look a lie?

 

My name is Bella Swan and I have a secret. For 25 years I have been in love with my best friend.

 

When Edward returns home he also has a secret that will change their lives, "guys, I'm getting married!"

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84116 Read Count: 24053
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 10 Jun 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

so sad. i cried. hope they find their way to each other.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

still so sad.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

this story is killing me but I can't stop reading.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i still have hope for edward and bella.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

so she just practically told him she loved him and he had no clue what she was really saying about not sharing him if it were her. still crying.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

ok I hope she just finds some excuse not to spend time with them and hopefully he will wise up.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

how heartbreaking.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

now i am really thinking he spilled something on his shirt and nothing else. one more lost opportunity and missunderstanding to keep them apart i fear.