Reviews by acw1
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
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Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Life

looking forward to more of the story.

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Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Blessings

what the heck is she marrying in to??  don't have a good feeling about Phil and his family.

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Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Promises

on no Carlisle is one of the bad guys too!  I am worried for her. love the story though.

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Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Sins of a Mother

look forward to next chapter...hoping to know what they are doing to her.

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Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

great chapter.  very interesting story

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Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace

great chapter

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Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

great chapter

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

good chapter

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Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

good chapter

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Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

great chapter

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Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

great chapter

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Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

interesting chapter.

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Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

great chapter. glad I could finally access it on the website. I kept getting notices of chapters updating and then the site was down. :(

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Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

great chapter.

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Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

I hope if she manages to get out edward goes with her and possibly even esme carlisle jasper and alice.

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Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much..

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

:)

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

good chapter.

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Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling

GREAT CHAPTER

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Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

i still have hope that aro will get his just desserts at the hands of Edward Bella and Charlie as well as others.  I REALLY hope that some of these people get out alive.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning

great chapter. glad he is questioning. hope they can all get away.

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Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

:) well at least they are still alive....for now.

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Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

hoping whoever it is is there to help her

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

:)

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Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

great chapter.

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Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption

hope they don't get there too late for bella...and edward.

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Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

good to see a new chapter. hope they all make it out, the sooner the better.

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Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Exodus

:)

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624767
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39

so happy to have found the rest of your story. love it all. great chapter.

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Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

wonderful chapter. look forward to more of your story although scared of what Carlisle has in store for them.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

wonderful chapter. might be kind of nice for them to have a baby.



Author's Response:

Time will tell

Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

good chapter

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Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

good chapter.

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Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I was nervous about that one. 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

great chapter

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

17 year old Bella is fascinated by the elusive and mysterious Edward Cullen. Will he be all she dreamed of? Or more than she bargained for? And will she still want him when one night changes everything? A/U Cannon pairings


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74283 Read Count: 29128
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue

good story

The Letter by changedbyEdward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Letter Banner

Edward Cullen is superstar EC Velvet.  Bella Swan, professor of English Lit in Seattle, hears his velvety voice one day and it changes her life. She leaves her abusive fiance, Mike Newton, and writes a fan letter to EC Velvet.  Little did she know that fate was going to intervene and bring her together with this uber-famous hip-hop/rap star and turn her life upside down... or maybe it's right side up.  

fs

Disclaimer:  Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.  I'm simply taking the universe she created and turning it inside out.  :)  All references to real people, real songs, or real anything else are for entertainment purposes only and only because if I mention it, it means I love it.  I'm not making any money off this story or any of the characters, names, songs, or anything else I might mention.  I'll leave the money making to the experts.  I'm only here to play.

AH/AU/VERY OOC - Rated for excessive language, mature themes, and lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148606 Read Count: 47777
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Paroxysm

can't believe he said those things to her. look forward to more of the story.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Completion

enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue

:)

Last Wish by lindseyfair Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Three men... One had her. One has her. One wants her. What happens when the one who has everything he could want and more loses it? Can she over come her grief and confusion about wanting someone else? Will she give way to the man that gave her pleasure in the past or find out what she can have with someone new?

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This is AU/AH. There is both Canon and Non-Canon couples in this story. Multiple POV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50741 Read Count: 5743
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Very Merry

I do love it! looking forward to more of their relationship.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Old and New

:)

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Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Making Up

loved it.

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Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Forward

well damn she just has rotten luck. please don't let it last too long.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Rescue

great chapter. glad the truth is out,.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116427
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looks interesting.

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Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love the dominant Edward. More please!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

like him just the way he is, don't change a thing about him!

look forward to more.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

wonderfully written story

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

great chatper. poor emmett he never had a chance.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

great chapter. Although her brother may have no moral right to complain about his baby sister with edward I bet he will anyway. Look forward to more. Love your story.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

good chapter. I thought they already were in love, or are they just not admitting it to each other or acknowledging it themselves.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i would hope that in a matter of minutes everyone will know edward is her boyfriend. I hope at least.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I think emmett took it well, considering it is his sister.  look forward to more.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

of course every one would like quicker updates since they love the story however I think once a week is great. many authors take more time than that. I am just happy to see every new chapter you produce. don't change for anyone. do what works for you.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

great chapter.

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Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

:)

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Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

great story, enjoyed the chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

he is being a bit of an ass with the double standard



Author's Response:

Oh dear, isn't he always? LOL. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

yes he was wrong in not telling her about the unportected sex and then having sex with her. no question on that.  the possible pregnancy I can see where he would be scared to death to tell her however he should have. 

hope she isn;t pregnant, but that would probably be too easy. 

circumstances/consequences suck for them all right now.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

hope first that she isn;t pregnant at all, second that if she is it isn't his and that bella and edward manage to make it long enough to figure that out.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing my story. All kinds are fuckery is on its way for B/E...and a whole lot of Tanya :P

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

not fair..update soon!

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Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

time to confess to  Mom and Dad.  hope they make it through it still together.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Always can count on Emmett for a little humor in the end.  look forward to more.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

great chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

oh please, edward would marry immediately even if she weren't pregnant. Bella is the stubborn one.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

great chapter

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Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

great chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

good chapter.

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171429
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

great chapter. feeling sorry for Rose and Bella.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

look forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review :0)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

good chapter. more please.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

i hope the beautiful boy does. :)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

hilarious - poor Jasper!  great chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315694
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone

great chapter

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Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw

good chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108579
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

was reading on FF, look forward to more of the story. Love your writing.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

good chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

good chapter. glad to see the story going again.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

good chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

:)

Gloaming by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 176]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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AU of Twilight. What if the Cullens located to Forks 18 years later than originally planned? She said she would have been happy with Jake. She would have married him and had kids and she would have been happy. But she's not complete. Bella/Edward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98939 Read Count: 16035
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

really enjoying the story. like the developing friendship between bella and edward. hope at least one of their families will be accepting of it.



Author's Response:

True. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

great chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

good chapter. glad they saw each other again.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

great story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

great story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

uh oh - double imprintee!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I have had a bit of confusion already about this. Christopher was dating Claire, he did NOT imprint on her. The only imprinting that happened before this was John and Rebecca.

 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/Chapter 1

ohh!!! I think we are so used to the name of Claire be imprinted upon from the book (and it was even someone else not Christopher) that I just made the assumption. thanks for the clarification.



Author's Response:

No worries. And yes I thought it would be nice that even though the original Quil isn't alive anymore that this Quil could imprint on her.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

stupid angry boy! I feel sorry for him.



Author's Response:

LOL, thanks, I appreciate the comment.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

great chapters. john should get his ass kicked.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

don't like where quill is taking this. so sad.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, and yes things are going to get worse.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

sad chapter for all that is happening but doesn't have to.



Author's Response:

So true.

 

Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 35: BPOV EPI

good chapter, surprised by her daughters request and more by what I think is her answer to it.  look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thanks!