Reviews by LaPumuckl
Buying Love by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2001]
Summary:

Buying Love

Edward Masen is the most popular escort working for Esme Platt. He’s the best at what he does and no woman ever goes unsatisfied. He’s smooth, sexy, dangerous and in control. In many ways. His employer holds him to this job due to the debt he needs to repay her. He’s a slave to the job in more ways than one. He lives in the best apartments, dresses in the nicest clothes and drives the best cars. All of it, though, can disappear in a moment’s notice all because Esme knows Edward’s secret. 

Isabella Swan is an heiress to the Swan fortune. Her father, Charlie Swan, owns a string of high end hotels and resorts all over the world. Bella, as her friends call her, is also going through a nasty divorce from her husband, Riley. He cheated on Bella with the limo driver, the gardener, the pool boy and Bella’s assistant, Maggie. She’s bitter and angry, hating all men and abhorring her soon-to-be ex-husband. 

Charlie is having a grand opening for his newest hotel in Seattle, Swan Towers. Bella is expected there, with a date for the lavish party. Rose, Bella’s best friend, suggested that she use a male escort, handing her Esme Platt’s card. Bella calls and asks for the best. Edward arrives, all suave and debonair, but detached and cold. However, the attraction between the two is palpable. 

 

Will they succumb to their attraction? Will Edward pull Bella down the dark path in his need for control? Or will Bella be his light? Or is all of this a ploy for Buying Love?

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Spicy
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 101 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196696 Read Count: 307438
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2015 Updated: 30 Sep 2016
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

This surely was a change for him, as he's only used in giving pleasure to women... I'm glad Bella could make him "see" it's okay to accept pleasure as well ;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Oh this really sucks....

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Where I can see Bella would have come to some conclusions of her own, I doubt the time and place she used to get some answers from Edward was the best timing... Good thing - and I hate to say that - he was trained to keep his own emotions in check, perfectly. Things could get very bad otherwuse there, I'm sure :(

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 57

I knew you wouldn't let this chance slip, but it's still not making the sting any easier... Poor Edward, I can't imagine how he must be feeling already - topped off with guilt...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38

I sure hope they'll get things clear up and Edward away from Bitchme sooner than later 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 81

Merry Christmas indeed

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71

Guess Charlie is in for a good kick in the nuts not too far from now;)

 

I knew Esme played a role in the state Elizabeth was in!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43

I really hope from here on out, things will get better and the police / FBI will take Esme into custody just to loose the key and let her rot in hell forever!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

A whole month? And only now she really gets nervous about him not calling her back or anything? 

Honestly I'm starting to doubt her feelings were as deep as she thought - because even pissed off at a person I wouldn't allow a person to suffer that long if I could’ve done something... and as little as it seems, this phone call might be the key to get him to safety :(

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 04 May 2016 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 63

After all they had to endure already you're hurting them even more? That's really evil; )

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 78

It's so bitter that Jared did, though I have no doubt Carlisle will be able - and wanted - to fill the space he left in Edwards heart...

I'm glad Bella offered to take charge for the furneral and am sure Edward will feel better about it, too.

What did everything mean? I'm sure I'm having a good guess, that only shows even more how deeply Jared cared for Edward....

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 94

Im glad Edward felt abl o face Charlie and go through with it, that was probably the biggest ego boost he could get; )

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 62

It was sweet that Bella recognized Edward, or better the memories about his father before and with the accident. Maybe this will help them really do their best, especially given their own experiences with human trafficking :(

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 51

I hate that he's so full of self hate, but this is a natural reaction for a victim at his age I guess... and he's not alone anymore and that should help him get over it all at some point in the future; )

 

Knowing you, I'd guess Bella met an unwanted visitor in her kitchen...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

Poor, brave Jasper....

Having to relive his life with Esme in therapy probably is bad enough, but on his own to help out a friend? That must be so much worse...

Not sure if I was in Alice shoes if I could sit by and "allow" him to get through that hell even once more than necessary to get better :(

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 30 May 2016 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70

If anyone other than Bella (or Carlisle) can make him see the truth about him I'm sure its Rose;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Every so often, I like some darker plots, and this one called to me from the first lines of the summary  ; )

It reminds me of a two part story I read a few years ago and im sure you heard that before... But I doubt this will only be a copy kind, so im curious how you're going to turn it.

Edward sseems to be in bad trouble to have chosen this career, but it always sounds like good money earned fast and "easy". Let's see, if it is true for him as well

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Father's are loving their little girls to the moon and back, no matter what we do. But if the shit hits the fan, most dont shy away from rubbing our sins in the face... Seems Charlie is giving out some tough love at the moment too:(

Bella will book a date with Edward for this party? I'm curious which "package" she'll choose ;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I like that Bella is a smart and tough young woman. She'll get whats she wants at the end of the day for sure

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Damn, she's truly not holding anything back....

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Edward breaking the rules already gives me a bad feeling, I hope he knows what he's doing there... But it surely was what Bella needed to hear; )

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

That was a very good first meeting I'd say ;)

Let's hope no one of the guests will know him from previous dates and blow their cover...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

It's a shame how Esme treats him... And I'm pretty sure everyone in the BDSM lifestyle would agree, that almost everything she does is not about being a domme, but an abuser! I'm sorry for being a smart-ass here, but like I said, I like some darker themes and BDSM really is one of those ;)

And damn, Edward really knows how to push his boundaries, hopefully Esme never gets aware of this cell phone

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I'm happy both of them feel the connection, that will help with the audience, but probably even more when they're on their alone time ;-P

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Now this chapter is why I love your stories, it has all I need in it; )

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

He sure knows how to distract her

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

He's just as perceptive as her, but I'd bet not as easily distracted...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Esme knows quite well how to punish and leave permanent reminders with the damage she did:(

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

The realization hit Bella pretty hard, one would think she had thought about all this BEFORE the decision to get a date by an escort service... 

But I'm sure it doesn't matter how much you think this through, what happened between them, wasn't something you take into consideration

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Very smart, Ms. Swan ;)

I'm glad that even after freaking out for a moment, Bella did make arrangements for Edward to be with her exclusively. And Bella did put the pieces together very well, too. I'm sure she isnt too far off with hr suspicions :(

But I'm worried what that will mean for Edward, as Esme really wasn't a "happy camper" about this turn of events...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Yay,  good riddance ; )

Charlie owning up and apologizing to Bella was well deserved, I like it even better that he told her he was wrong! But his interest in Edward could get difficult, I'm sure...

Who is Carlisle to him, though? He mentioned him before, but I somehow doubt he's in need of a bodyguard/assassin

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Sounds like the "good times" for both of these two are about to begin :)

But I'm really not looking forward to his first pov after this, because I'm sure Esme didn't take kindly to this news....

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Thanks for not leaving us with a major cliffie over this time, and good luck - or is it break a leg? - for your production...

I'm not sure if a female therapist is really the best choice for Edward, maybe he can't be more open with males, seeing he feels more at ease with Carlisle and Dr. Banner...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Being a witness on trial with a jury isn't fun, and this woman who dared to be evil to both Edward and Bella should think a lot more before opening her mouth again..

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 52

Well, as happy as I am, that it wasn't Esme waiting for Bella in the kitchen, as still worried I feel over her being on the run

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 53

I get that you needed to loosen up the tension, and Carlisle doesn't strike me as a person without humor, I'm sure he'll gladly take a few jokes to see Edward grin;)

Bella's bad feeling is something I hope will be the most wrong thing ever. Why would a judge allow Edward's ex employer to stay guardian for his mother if his fiance could be there?!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

It would be much easier to male a real decision how to proceed if we knew a bit more about him and how he came to work for Esme. Not to mention if SHE is still alive...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Was it on purpose Esme that Esme spilled about his mother? Because I was almost sure it was her, that Edward took this fateful decision back in the day...

Things arent looking to well for him at "home", and it seems to me each time he gets back to Esme it's only getting worse :(

I hope he can enjoy his time away with Bella, I have a feeling both of them need it...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

I was surprised Jared spoke up to Edward but it wasn't a bad surprise. He'll need everyone in his corner IF he ever decides to get out of Esme's evil clutches!

Bella's lost of dates for them has an amazing count of possibilities and I'm very curious to see how much of EDDIE she'll be able to reawaken 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

I'm glad their time together went over so well. Of course Bella would "see" that Edward isn't all happy. I think that deep sadness can't be hidden perfectly by anyone:(

Esme came to get him herself? Why don't I believe it's to only visit his mother?!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

I'm not going to lie and say I am not happy don't follow Edward into the chamber, but I still hope next chapter he won't be in too bad shape....

His mom isnt in a good place, neither for her soul not bodily. I doubt Carmen is able to watch out for her 24/7...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 60

Of course you wouldn't allow them to hear Bella runimg from the hotel... I didn't expect anything else; )

But I'm glad Edward finally felt he could do something again, he'll need that feeling to notgett stir crazy about the situation 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Well, I honestly don't doubt Carlisle wont be discreet, but I have a feeling this "digging in the dirt" won't go over unnoticed....

I hope Jasper will still be willing to help bring Esme down

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Things are truly overwhelming poor Edward here... but like Bella I don't doubt he's going to be fine as long as he's staying close to her for both their comfort ;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

It's a joy to read how welcoming everyone is of Edward. Even better they don't really compare him to Riley, just telling him to be good to Bella -which he's trying so hard to be ;)

Esme.... this woman is going on my last nerve, why doesn't she leave him be while he's "on the clock" with Bella? I doubt it was really something important she called him for, probably only spewing some more of her poison!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

That was so sweet! I hope it will give him some courage to share more of his story with her ;)

 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

The shop owner was a true romantic, for giving Edward that necklace for an apple and egg, I'd say... But I'm very grateful for that, especially knowing he doesn't experience that nice treatment often;)

Bella brought a very dangerous topic up there, but I'm glad he didn't freak only softly declined. I hope with the help of his friends, he'll trust them enough to leave Esme for good soon 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

I hate to see their time coming to an end already again....

So the bitch troll really had a good reason to call at the wedding? Problem is, I have trouble believing her stories about his mom getting sick again and the health care cost being that much :(

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39

I hope someone will be interrupting Bitchme before Felix can get his plans accomplished. ..

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40

I was quite sure, Bitchme would have at least one doctor on her side, but didn't expect him to be that deep in shit with her too...

The only good thing in this chapter to me, was Felix not being able to follow through his threat about claiming Edward fully.. . 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41

I was wondering why Felix drove Edward to his appointment with Rose, but I didn't think it was because someone tried to get rid of him - the old way...

Each time the Volturi get involved my gut thinks it's better to stay cautious 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42

It was sweet of Bella to visit Edward's mom, I'm sure up until she asked for Edward senior she loved talking about her boy... 

Let's hope she'll be able to get Elizabeth some better care now

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44

I was really worried at the beginning of this chapter, Edward is in such bad shape.... At least Esme did care enough to see he was in need of a doctor here - thank god she called him!

And Carlisle seems to be a man of many talents here! I just wish he had found a way to take Edward away from them right away...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

Looks like the first step of freeing Edward was a success, I just have a feeling in my gut it was too easy....

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

I don't know whom will have the harder time getting over this...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37

I'm glad he/you again didn't went into too much detail about everything Esme did to him... 

At the beginning I wasn't sure if things could be safed between them, because Edward didn't cope too well... but now I'm hoping they can get rid of Bitchme for sure ;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 87

I'm glad Edward got to feel better after his break down, it's very good Bella did agree to stay at Jared 's house over the trial; )

Hm... the verdict. I'm not a too big fan of the death penalty, though I think this Esme does deserve to be grilled on the chair!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 88

Looks like Edwards time on the stand is only needed to put the last nail into Esme's coffin as her lawyer only pisses the judge off; )

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 89

Im glad that meting Mr. Molina did give Edward a bit of his self esteem back, that was a very good surprise at a cemetery; )

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 95

So Charlie really tried to get Bella angry at Edward? Stupid fool... 

I'm glad the judge decided on a "hard" verdict for Esme, though the brawl at jail came at an interesting timing... I hope she's really that bad hurt and didn't use it to flee!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 96

I'm impressed how "easy" Jasper took to the news of Edward moving away... Though I'm happy he doesn't have any I'll wishes for him, I would feel pissed off. He went through so much with Alice to get them.to move to Seattle and now his best friend switches places without second thoughts of him:(

It's great knowing Edward did come around so well. I love seeing him so happy with his mom and the adopted family he grew into and of course his relationship with Bella. Let's hope they'll be able to get back "home" without any set backs 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 97

Things are going in great directions for these love birds, I hope Charlie can man-up now...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 98

I'm glad things are getting better between Bella and Charlie, hopefully it'll happen for Edward soon too ;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 99

It's great everyone is back home and little Ava is probably going to get spoiled by the family ;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 101: Epilogue

I'm glad they found their HEA

 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72

I'm glad Bella gave Charlie a piece of her mind, because even if I understand where hes coming from as a mother, its still no way to behave! 

Yes, being stuck in a hospital bed is troubling, its natural that Bella gets annoyed and feels ugly and useless... But I loved how Edward took care of the situation; )

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73

I'm glad it appears as thngs are getting better for both of them ;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

This was a nice date ;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 80

I loved how Carlisle put Edward in his place by just calling him out on his being 'a punk' - that was a very good thing to do; )

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 15 May 2016 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 66

I hoped that Elizabeth would be better after her time at that "hospital"... That she's been magically cured though is quite the surprise, and I can only explain it that the shock of being taken hostage by Esme was the reason for it. Still it leaves a bitter aftertaste, that shes all better as soon as they're away from the scene in La Push:(

Edward being angry at her for being so mothery now seems quite natural to me though, as well as his want for Bella. Not only because he starts to realize his love his "for real" but because she was his rock so far, too...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 17 May 2016 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67

This isnt news I didnt expect; )

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 21 May 2016 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68

I doubt Charlie will be too happy, about Bella's condition at the moment. But he knows his daughter, so he'll know no one could've held her back from her "mission"...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 24 May 2016 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69

As a father I think it was natural for Charlie to explode, and a bit of that worry and anger was rightly directed at Edward BUT that's not about Bella's condition but fear to loose his daughter in general... 

Edward being brave enough to go with Charlie in the first place though shows he's neither weak nor a coward! And after all he was through already the reaction to Charlie getting innhis face like that - who could blame him?!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 84

I guess Edward taking a moment for himself at the furneral was to be expected. He needed that time to say his "goodbye", I'm sure no one is holding it against him.

Him wanting to surprise Bella with the additional tats is sweet, but I think he could have gotten those with her as well. If only having her with him at the shop and staying for his family crest. That was a bit selfish in my eyes.

Jasper. Calling out to Edward was an impeccable step. Even telling Alice how important it feels to him to stay in Settle was a big step, though I'm sad it ended in the destruction of their hotel rooms :( And thinking they wouldn't need to pay for the repairing because of the friendship to Edward was too forward. 

But I'm proud Edward rejected that right away and told him it was "his mess to clean up". Seeing he felt strong enough to eat at the hotel restaurant as well shows its very much helping him having his friend close by. 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 82

I loved the surprise, but agree with both Edward and bella, that Jake and Seth will make great parents! 

This was a very nice Christmas - exactly what they all needed;)

Hm... Sex is a no go for Bella at the moment, I hope she'll be able to accept her body again soon and without professional help. Because at the moment it doesn't look like it

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 83

Of course its a lot to wrap your head around, but so ar Edward does very well hold on;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 86

I guess it was about time he broke down from realisation what happened to him by the hands of "a woman"... And knowing how long it took Jasper to fight back, I'm glad Edward got to it quite fast. 

I get why Bella wants to stay with him, though I'm not sure she's the right person for it. This would be the perfect moment for Elizabeth to step up to her mother role again. Because the last time he was hee savior too.

 

Shhh... by Robshandmonkey Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 61]
Summary:

 

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Alyssa Jordan is about to enter a world she has only read about in books, but longs to experience. Her naive curiosity lands her in the wrong BDSM club, snaring the attention of the clubs owner.

Nicholas Anthony is a notorious bad boy and the owner of Taboo. 

One night, he spots a new face in the middle of his members only club. He is forced to confront her and find out how she managed to get in. He is blindsided by the attraction he has for the girl with a razor sharp tongue and defiant streak. 

His Dominant persona is about to be tested, and for once, he may be the one that ends up on his knees.

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Erotica, Romance, Supernatural
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16023 Read Count: 5824
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2016 Updated: 13 Feb 2016
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 How did I get here?

You know, I really loved your original version of Shh.... missed it dearly as well as I hoped for a new update of "Dom and Gent"

But I can tell you made quite some changes to this already from the beginning! It is as well written as anything I know of your work! 

The decision about it being published is a tough one... the egoistic part of my advices to tell you not to publish it, in hope you'll upload "my version" again;) But I'm pretty sure that won't happen either way:(

So I think it's more depending on the storyline, will you stay with the Vampire theme, because I think that's what would be the most difficult part to accept a change in....



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review... Yes he is still our Dominant vampire purrward...the story line will be the only differences...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Is that virgin blood?

I think it is a no-brainer to him having Alyssa and Destiny removed from the club, I just doubt it'll really be that easy ;)



Author's Response:

Yeah that ain't happening! lol

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 What the hell is wrong with her instincts?

I loved that she didnt back down with either Evan or Nicholas (boy it is hard to use these names), and her little act of defensive behavior in "redirecting" his art on the way out;)

But that wasnt your question to begin with.... so after reading all three new chapters I'd say, I'm still as fascinated as I was reading the twilight version for the first time. I'm not gonna lie here, I'm going to miss this story like crazy, and even being able to own a paperback version isn't going to be the same instead of reading on my tab....

I'll always prefer the "original" story over a published verson, even if I have read the original more times than once, it'll always be closer to my heart, I experienced that sadly with each published story I read. Mostly I felt disappointed with the changes starting from the characters names to their appearance, or the lack of change to the plot - worse if it's getting "all censored" as it happened with EP it was with almost no changes besides names as in MotU.

I think each woman more than deserved to get publish, and I think the same for you, but I hate to loose my favorites to a more covilized version that lacks he magic I first felt reading that same plot...



Author's Response:

I couldn't agree with you more. I really battled with changing any of it and leaving it alone...

I also feel the same way about the published versions of famous fanfics....never felt the same way about the characters...especially EP...

I can promise you that there is no way Nicholas is not going to show you just how much he loves Alyssa. That I promise...because I felt the love loss in Sempre it just wasnt the same..

I am hoping that I have learned from other authors and their pull to publish versions. I am hoping my story comes out a little better but I cant say that Shhhh.....wont always be my favorite.

Purrward will never be topped.

Comfortably Numb by mathisson Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 222]
Summary:

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Bella Swan enjoys helping people. It doesn't matter if it's the customers she pours a cup of coffee for, or the man who just drop money on a New York sidewalk. But when the kindness she shows is turned against her, how far will she continue to go to protect her family? Will she sacrifice her happiness? Or let her only relative lose everything? Angst! CC rated M for adult content.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48864 Read Count: 35377
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2016 Updated: 27 Nov 2017
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Carlisle is a "bad boy" here? Well, that's interesting; )

 

The whole idea sounds very intriguing and im happy to see you are back in a writing mood. Cant wait to read more from you:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Dr. Edward Masen is in for a surprise when his best friend and fellow colleague Dr. Carlisle Cullen invites him out to spend an evening with him at an exclusive member's only club. What Edward does not know, is that the club caters to a select few who share in a unique fetish within a certain lifestyle choice. He meets a brave little girl named Bella Swan who is more than happy to pull him into her world and introduce him to the wonderful lifestyle of Bondage, Discipline, Sadism, and Masochism.

 

It is a story about two consenting adults who venture into the relationship of a Dominant Daddy/little girl.  

 

If you do not fully understand the dynamics of this type of lifestyle I can only inform you that this story has nothing to do with incest, nor are the characters role playing / age playing in any way. It is a relationship where they practice total power exchange in and out of the bedroom on a 24/7 basis.  

 

If any of what you have read so far freaks you out in any way, then I must warn you now...this story may not be for you.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35176 Read Count: 172220
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2016 Updated: 28 May 2016
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was an awesome surprise! I really liked this story as well, and am soooooo happy you chose this as your next project - even better news is that the next ADAG is close;)

Xoxo

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I can only imagine how this must have felt like, but overwhelming sure comes to mind...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So.... they met;)

I think its awesome how much chemistry they have right from the start

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This lady knows what she wants, but does she know "who" gets a trial run, too?!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a probation officer. He is used to handling some of the toughest hardened criminals out there. That is until he meets his new proby...Isabella Swan.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54473 Read Count: 43905
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Apr 2016
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Seems like this is going to be another really interesting story, especially as I didn't know it the first time ;)

Summary:

Bound and United

 

Bound and United is the third installment of the Bound Series.  It continues the story of Don Edward and Donna Bella as they fight with their most evil villian yet.  Will they be able to fight death and be joined once more or will they be forever torn apart from each other?

 

Part 3 in the Bound Series

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76085 Read Count: 184315
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Jan 2017
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 01 May 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Things are going on quite well, I hope it'll be the same for the girls...

Oh no... I think finding out its Bella that's pregnant not Elizabeth will be very hard on Sean :(

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I might be a little naive here, but shouldn't the hit Aro put out for Edward be null and void after his death? I mean, Roberto could have let it go unnoticed as he got the money already and Aro is out as well... Taking Bella of course still makes sense, seeing how much of a reaction he showed to her picture only tthough. 

But why take Elizabeth as well? She's another unknown factor for them...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I guess Roberto will be in for a rude awakening if he hinks Bella will be full compliant to his advances; )

And I have a feeling he wont be the only one...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I doubt Edward will be very happy, but hope Carlisle is going to be right at the end of it...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh boy....

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Damn that must hurt;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 14 May 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I totally agree with Elizabeth, Roberto has to take A LOT of his own drugs thinking a few slaps to the face and about 30 minutes are enough to magically "cure" the women of their rebellious behavior!

Rogue by Robshandmonkey Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary:

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Meet Masen.

He is not just any thug growing up in a family of organized crime. He is a man who has changed the way families do business.

Masen is in line to be the next "Boss" for his well connected family, and in one night there is a massacre and all his rivals and their families are wiped out leaving no one left behind. The authorities have no clues as to who, why or how someone could pull off a mass murder of this scale. 

Meet Charlie.

A soldier turned businessman who will stop at nothing to give his little girl whatever her heart desires, and what she wants is something no mafia family has ever been able to stake a claim on...the city of Angels.  

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42527 Read Count: 22447
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2016 Updated: 16 Jun 2016
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 08 May 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is really something else from you, but I don't mind trying your hand in something new, let's see where it'll take us; )

Summary:

Words to Die By

I.M. Swan a best-selling author is on top of the literary world. After coming off her book tour for her latest book, she has begun her research for the next, a book on the Chicago Mafia. Spending hours in the library and courthouse, she is surprised to find out a most curious piece of information about the Don of the largest crime family. He is not the rightful heir to the family.

Aro Volturi planned and executed the complete destruction of the Cullen family. Wiping away any documentation or body of any evidence of the family from the face of the earth, or he thought so.

Edward Cullen was smuggled away with the aid of his faithful nanny, who kept him safe until it was time for him to take revenge for his family's death. Training and building a new, stronger family to take back what is rightfully his and executing the man who took his family from him.

One evening, as Edward is following one of Aro’s hitman, he witnesses him a young woman in the alley. Coming to her aid, he is mesmerized by her beauty and when he gets to know her, he is in awe of her intellect.

            Will Bella be able to survive with Edward’s help or will Aro get to her and silence her forever? E&B

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62607 Read Count: 66008
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2019 Updated: 27 May 2020
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What an interesting way to meet, I think it beats even how your Charlie and Renee met here;)

 

Though I'm curious to see what Edward knows about her and what his intentions are, because I doubt his appearance was just fluke...