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Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

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Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1082143
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

Perfect

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Loved it 

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Date: 10 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

I'm curious what Edward and his colleagues will think when hearing that Laurent was the one found in his home

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Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

Again, Bella seems to know better what could happen next...

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Date: 24 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

I'm sure it's pure agony Bella is feeling right now, and I can't even start to get an idea how Edward must be feeling! 

The decision to go to his parents house was probably the best for all of them...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

This is not looking too good right now, but im glad she called him back...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

I had a feeling she wouldn't go home to Edward... But I'm very relieved that she went to Charlie and not in the Lions den like I feared she would;

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133

Even if the situation at home is anything but safe at home I hope its positive; )

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Date: 17 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

Poor Bella I'd stressing out... but I think even these known irrational thoughts are normal with her history.and she knows he wouldn't do that already,  which is very good

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 137

I'm sorry that RL is a bitch to you and your family. But more I feel the need to apologize for people not understanding that you're spending a lot of your private time to entertain us all for nothing more than a few kind words as a thank you!

I wish all the best to you and your mum, take the time away that you need to take care of her and forget the ungrateful air heads;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 02 May 2015 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

Youre evil always ending with some sort of a cliff here;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 05 May 2015 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

I doubt you would kill Edward, but think he's in a bad condition now... At least James got hit good too, and hopefully he'll die from the scissor wound!

I'm unsure about Renee though, because even if she didn't show any remorse other than falling victim to James...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 May 2015 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

I can't believe you allowed James to get away, he must be injured at least...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 09 May 2015 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 142

Shouldnt she be on bed rest or something too?

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

That was a nice surprise - and the name after your mom is very beautiful :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113975
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 13 part 7

Uh.... Someone didnt want to wait to stake his/her claim,  lol ;)

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Date: 17 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 13 part 3

Fuck.... 

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Date: 04 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 20 part 2

Okay, now I'm sure both are quite happy with the wake up call;)

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Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 15 part 4

Where I get that Edward feels the need to try to reconnect with Tanya for Charlie, I would question first why shes still so reluctant toncare for her baby at home.... Hopefully this date opens Edwards eyes some more, or something happens that they have to reschedule; )

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 15 part 5

I think it would've been"better" for Bella to know about this date as early as possible,  because if they plan to stay away overnight - whom would care for Charlie - if not her...

Rosalie gets ddisturbing messages and her "first guess" is Emmett? Not sure whom should be more pissed

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Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 13 Part 4

Both dresses look beautiful - but knowing Alice did hers "herself" it's just that titbit better;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 17 Part 10

I'm glad Charlie is better and they got discharged fast.

Edward trying to protect Bella from the press attention for now is sweet, I hope she really understands its just that.

Tanya will probably give out a sob story why she wasn't at the hosital....

 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 13 Part 6

I have no doubt, Tanya believes Edward dedicted this award to her, and if im not completely wrong, Bella misunderstood as well. And why would she not, he doesnt make a move to either break things off with Tanya nor to getting to more with her...

Aw... Maybe Elizabeth can help him open his eyes for whats real and which changes should be made sooner tan later;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 13 Part 5

Gld to have you back; )

Yeah, I bet Edward would prefer it to be at home with Bells - I have a ffeeling this will come up again between him and Emmett "later" ;)

But I hope, things between him and Tanya will clean up soon, this is surely hard on him and Bella. Tanya seems to be fully in her favorite element:(

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 13 part 2

What the hell is he waiting for than? Kick out the troll and get to the angel;)

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Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Its unbelievable that Tanya really seems to believe Edward would want to "work things out" between them after what happened with James... seeing its only the cherry on top of everything else

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 13 part 1

I think I get why Tanya and Zafrina get a log that we'll,  but Zafrina at least is openly interested in "the little prince". But to think about taking Charlie to he Oscars is really something I can't understand either. 

Good thing Edward nipped that right away😉

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 19 Part 15

:)

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Date: 26 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 19 Part 12

I just hope nothing is going to disturb them now,  or their might be murder committed; )

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Date: 26 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 19 Part 13

Yay, no interruptions :)

Merry Christmas to you and your beloved ones 

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Date: 24 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 19 Part 10

That word vomit was so worth the "trouble" finding an outfit I'd say :-D

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Date: 24 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 19 Part 11

Damn, you had me there for a moment ;)

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Date: 11 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 17 Part 9

I wouldn't have minded if Edward and Bella would've given a bit more time with Charlie alone, but I guess it was bound to happen sooner or later....

Good thing no one was upset about their closeness but concentrated on the more obvious situation - the missing of Tanya:)

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Date: 18 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 15 part 3

I was pretty sure Tanya wouldn't really change, and the way she behaves around Charlie or bella for that matter shows how right I am :( 

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Date: 29 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 19 Part 14

There really was a big surprise again for Edward, lol. I'm sure this night won't be long enough for them though ;)

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Date: 25 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 12 part 6

I love that they really had a good talk there. And I really like how her thoughts are going just now:)

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Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 17 Part 11

This is really interesting... 

Could Tanya be really that stuoid and get herself in even mre heat with the press - and probably her fans - by doing more than not going to the hospital where her son is?! And what has her manager to do with it....

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Date: 26 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

I'm pretty sure as much as Edward wants to be home, he wouldn't like to hear this convo;)

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Date: 12 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 12 Part 2

Bella thinks Jasper is much too old for Alice? Hm... im not sure you mentioned his age before, so that has me curious. But I'm glad she's still up to help her enjoy it fully;)

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Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 12 Part 3

This must be so terribly hard on Edward, feeling all torn between past feelings and the new ones concerning his son... not to forget th attraction he feels toward Bella...

I'm sure there would be a few people breaking things up right away, but as I see it, that part happened already. They just didn't acknowledge it and live in the routine that is their normal now:(

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 14 Part 1

Wise words Esme

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Date: 11 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 15 Part 2

I'm glad things are that well between Edward and Bella. Alice and Jasper seem to be a few steps ahead still, but hopefully not too much longer anymore ;)

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Date: 23 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 20 Part 6

Nice safe, Alice; )

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Date: 30 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 14 part 4

Im not sorry that Tanya isnt around much, she was never a mother to poor Charlie

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Date: 18 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 13 part 8

Well,  kids and drunk people will always tell you the truth;)

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Date: 01 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 15 Part 1

Loved this chapter:)

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Date: 02 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 11 part 5

I'm not sure which comment by Tanya pisses me off more, "It shit on me" or "I liked him better as he didn't eat"! How can a mother be that heartless about her own kid? Things like an overflowing diaper happen... what will she do as he gets ill or worse starts toothing?!

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Date: 26 May 2015 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 11 Part 4

Oh my... I really hope Bella was out of hearing range for this topic of their discussion, because which woman who enjoys breast feeding would want be compared like that? And Edward telling Tanya that they werent looking bad but great might be well for her self esteem, but not so much for her crush... Add to that the accusations that Edward is "fucking" her, would surely pull her down and make all this so much more awkward. 

I think the way Tanya is still talking about Charlie, and worse holding him, shows that she's so not the right person to be his mother:(

Hopefully she'll be out of the picture and their life's for good soon;)

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Date: 27 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 14 part 3

Lol, I'm glad I wasn't completely wrong about Bella not seeing Edwards dedication to her right from the beginning; )

Now he just needs to kick the wicked witch to the curb and get the woman he wants...

 

Maybe I should overthink reading your current book, this teaser surely was pretty hot :)

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Date: 20 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 12 Part 4

Oh tanya is such a bitch...

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Date: 20 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 12 Part 5

Seems like Edward starts to think things through about his and Charlies future around tanya...

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Date: 09 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 19 part 16

Seems they're feeling perfectly well right now - I'm sure that won't change in the future (at least for "bedroom" activities)

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Date: 30 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Life seems to go well for Bella and Elizabeth,  but my gut fears, too good... I hope I'm wrong though

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Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 11 Part 3

I think its safe to say introduction couldn't be any more awkward if you tried;)

Tanya really doesnt get what motherhood means or feels like... this is not going to be eash for any of them, right?!

 

 

 

The pics you found for this story are incredibly cute

 

 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 11 Part 6

Oh my.... this woman is so deep shit crazy, it hurts;)

But I'm glad that she's helping Edward to acknowledge for real now, that she's not the right person for him to be happy!

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Date: 09 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 12 part 1

Alice will surely have a great time now;)

So Bella heard everything... I'm glad she's happy with everything Edward said - it was very positive ;)

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Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 18 Part 8

Maybe there's something to start dating in private;)

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Date: 09 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 17 Part 7

Finally he's on the same page with us;)

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Date: 09 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 17 Part 8

*swoon* speechless ;)

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Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 17 Part 4

Well, that wasn't the big "kicking her to the curb" I wished for, but I can see why Edward would want to let her go, nicely. He's just too much of a good guy, still:(

Hopefully who ever is there at the door - please let it be Em and Rose - make him see through her false play though ;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 15 Part 6

I'm glad Rosalie didnt think Emmett was behind these notes but wants him to protect her, I'm sure not everyonr was that trusting though...

If I had to guess right know, who's behind those letters to Rosalie, I would guess Tanya. She never liked her as we heard from herself and its easier to "hit" on Rose first and than Bella fom her position...

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Date: 22 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 15 part 7

Yay, Alice got another dream come true;) I think to get this chance is, what we're all waiting for, with big dreams...

Edward starts to think about a possible future without Tanya, good. But if he's really honest with himself I'm sure he'll know Charlie wouldn't have to be without a mother;)

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Date: 11 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 20 Part 3

They're one of the cutest big family I can think of ;)

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Date: 24 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 16 Part 1

They might be only teasing thevother, but im surecit wont be too long until its beijg honest;)

 

Wondering what this encounter would have been like has it been Tanya meeting Rose at the fridge....

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Date: 25 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 16 Part 2

Maybe this is what we needed to help the date with Tanya to not happen, because I doubt even with charlie getting better edward would want to leave him for it;)

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Date: 27 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 16 Part 3

Bella is such a smart woman, and subconsciously she see's through Tanya's play, now she only needs to trust her instinct....

 

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Date: 27 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 16 Part 4

I can't understand how Tanya could be that careless... It's not the end of the world to reschedule a Foto shoot appointment, but putting your child at risk:(

Hopefully the little guy isn't off too bad after this outing

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Date: 29 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 16 Part 5

This seems to be exactly what I feared for the little man:(

Let's see if Daddys is ready now to get rid of the garbage; )

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Date: 30 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

I really have to fight the urge to sing and do a happy dance, but Tanya is in deep shit now, I think;)

Hm... if Edward registered there were photos taken with him, charlie, bella, and Elizabeth?! And that the photographer spoke about those as the best ones for this session....

I get that Bella doesn't want to stay with Charlie in that condition, but I doubt it would make a difference to her even if he was doing well. This talk isnt for the ears of the group tanya had to take with her....

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Date: 01 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 16 Part 7

I doubt this will go over well:(

I hope Edward was only at the hotel with Tanya to finally break things off with her, because if not I fear what he'll say to Bella for "misleading" him with Charlies health.... 

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Date: 01 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 16 Part 8

 I can't believe Tanya would still be so uncaring about her son and ignorant to the whole situation. Even to tell Jasper there will be more pictures taken in the morning... If Edward will be just as "cool" with that decision that Tanya made there will be seen though;)

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Date: 02 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 17 part 1

I hoped to either find out how Charlie is doing now or - maybe even better - where Edward is and why he would still go to the hotel with Tanya... 

At least knowing his thoughts about Elizabeth calling him Daddy was helping to make me smile ;)

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Date: 03 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

After the discussion on FB about this, I was pretty sure, something like this was what's going to happen...

And usually I would be cheering for Edward to try doing the "right" thing instead of following his heart, because Charlie didnt ask to be born into their "family", it was their decision. But I would be lying through my teeth here, because Tanya seems to me like the most self concentrated person on this planet;)

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Date: 04 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 17 Part 3

I knew there was more to it than met the eye abot him not asking about Charlie! 

Now I hope, the break up will be as smooth as can be, with one unwilling party...

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Date: 31 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 18 Part 9

Yay,  finally they get some private time;)

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Date: 01 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 18 Part 10

Damn Emmett, worst time ever... but its good to know he is doing his job thoroughly; )

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Date: 31 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 18 Part 8

Good think, we already know that Rosalie is trustworthy, otherwise I would have been nervous about it;)

Edward comes knocking on her door?!

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Date: 17 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 18 Part 1

This is really heartbreaking....

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Date: 18 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 18 Part 2

Its such a bad place to leave.... I'm ready to burst for more;)

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Date: 19 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 18 part 3

Damn, this cliffie is so cruel! Please give us one more today, im beggjng you, on my knees

I'm so glad Edward was very much controlled while talking to Tanya. Hell, I expected him to punch James after his glaring at Bella and that comment... But it was very good he didn't; )

 

 

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Date: 21 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 18 Part 4

Hell yes, this was so great!

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Date: 23 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 18 Part 5

Yay! They got rid of the wicket witch and can get a break from the drama, at least for a while they should be able to enjoy their new life; )

Because I have a feeling we won't hear from Tanya before he will be a toddler, there's going to be thrown their way:( 

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Date: 26 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 18 Part 6

At least they got to kiss - and boy was that fun

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Date: 16 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 17 Part 13

I understand that Edward is so upset about the risk of loosing his baby boy.

There was already so mich going on before this last fact was announced, I don't know how hr could keep it together that long and" just" leabe through the back door... You have one mean kind of humor sometimes, btw - letting him go like all this was set in motion;)

Finally Bella got to bitchslap the tramp, I hope it felt good for her too;) And hot damn, her little speech for James was very impressive! 

What has me worried now, is a) will Charlie really be Edward's son, b) can he get full custody (even if hes not his biological father) c) who's going to try to throw the gang under the bus first Tanya or James? Because I have no doubt about there being a tried lawsuit against Bella for hitting her and or some confessions to the press by a "close friend" who talks about Bella' s true feelings about Edward:( 

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Date: 01 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 20 Part 1

Yay! Thank you for the update - I was wondering how they would feel in the morning... I'd say at least Bella is more than happy right now;)

And what a nice wake up call for Edward ;-P

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Date: 25 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 20 part 5

Thats a great advice Jasper gave there;)

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Date: 03 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 19 Part 2

Lol, I know of a few Edwards that did just that;)

Its so very sweet that Rosalie tries to help Edward find a good way to start the relationship with Bella

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Date: 03 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 19 part 1

I'm sure that shower was exactly what he needed; )

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Date: 09 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 19 Part 3

That was brilliant; )

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Date: 18 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 19 Part 4

Youre back; )

I dont know how they gets trength to stop from getting further while being so turned on, im sure I would combust...

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Date: 18 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 19 Part 5

Oh this is such a nice offer!

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Date: 18 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 19 Part 6

That's so sweet

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Date: 25 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 19 Part 7

Gotta love their undisturbed alone time ;)

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Date: 30 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 19 Part 8

Hot damn... I think I'll need a cold shower now ;)

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Date: 08 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 132: Chapter 19 Part 9

Aw, more Sexy times coming their way ;)

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Date: 31 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 19 Part 17

Talk about a topic change "well done" ;)

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Date: 31 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 19 Part 18

So sweet cam be a shared tub;)

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Date: 29 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 20 part 8

I get that they still need to keep things on the "down low" between them, but I'm glad Edward wants to take Bella fto the show with him anyways;)

 

Rosalie wanting to move out, willl that mean Emmett might as well?! ;)

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Date: 23 May 2016 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 20 Part 4

Cute;)

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Date: 26 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 20 Part 7

What a nice step to get the family growing together even further :)