Reviews by LaPumuckl
Summary: Past Featured Story

Neglected and abused; can Bella find the strength to keep going or will she give in to her darker side.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286221 Read Count: 96556
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2014 Updated: 31 Oct 2015
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Luck isn't on her side, is it:(

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

So sweet, these two;)

I'm very happy she can go to college as well now, but im curious if they can stay together at one or will have to part ways for that time

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Renee is an evil person, im glad Bella got the chance to tell her off

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

So the" forgotten" condoms were a planned thing on your side, guess the lovebirds wont stay a pair for too long....

Lets see how daddy dearest and momma bear take the news, because I'm sure both know what coukd be up;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

At least Alice figured out what he problem is...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Yeah, an unplanned pregnancy can be scary and for sure bring tension into a room.... 

I wouldn't be surprised if Esme did try to spy on them after that coming home

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Again, things went very well for these two, tthat's nice

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Tanya did need another appearance huh, keeps us on our toes

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Alice needed to take a lot here, but I'm proud of her for not making too much of a fuzz about it;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Its great that they fund a doctor who didnt give them any hell to pay about being so young and havung forgotten some contraception

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Alice has a bit of a jealous side, with her pushy way I can see that being trouble to find a nice apartment...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hm... inteesting start, but sadly you forgot she wore shades to school, so why could he look into her eyes:(

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This was very sad

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I loved how Edward put Tanya in her place, but doubt she'll get it anytime soon

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

He should tell her, this can't end well otherwise

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yeah, its so much easier to believe something you get told daily, than if out ofthe blue people start to tell you otherwise. 

It cantake even more years to rebuild her self esteem than it took to destroy. ..

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm glad he's aware "Anthony" can't be a secret for too long.

Their date was very sweet

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This could've gone much worse, but im glad it didn't

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Damn, that was a day full of exciting things to do

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm glad Edward took her to the hospital, and Carlisle probably put 2+2 together as well...

As sweet as it was from Edward to drive Bella home, won't Phil not notice her missing car in their driveway (or even on the street) and how will she get to school the next day?!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Slowly shes making new friends, but I like that the "old ones" still have her back too. I'm just very curious why they allowed her to slip away so much

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Aw.... how sweet is that :)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So Carlisle at least suspects there's more go Bella's story, that's good. 

Nice, a birthday away from the 'rents

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

She shouldn't have to hide this...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I think Edward is wrong abut Bella being stubborn, its probably more not knowing where to go and not be a burden.

And she might be thinking like, better the devil you know, than the unknown as well

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

He has his heart at the right place, but he should think more about how its affecting her before he says things like that

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Seeing that they're both 18, shouldn't college become a topic for them soon, too?

I'm glad they both had a good experience with their first time

Summary: Past Featured Story

What happens when Bella is attacked and her mob family find out she's pregnant? How does a protective family act when one of their own is attacked? No one knows for certain, the only thing they do know is they will kill anyone in their way to protecting her.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5222 Read Count: 100405
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2014 Updated: 15 Oct 2015
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2015 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Hey,

Thanks for an amazing story, I cried, laughed and feaed with them - and enjoyed every minute :)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

It was great 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Detective Cullen has been married to his job for a very long time, and he doesn’t ever plan to change.  Bella Swan the overweight girl who gets used and tossed aside is his favorite waitress.  Can they make more out of this than friendship with benefits, or will she send him away when she decides she wants more?

(The use of the word steaks vs. stakes is a play on words - just FYI)


Banner by: Deebelle OneFic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 159774
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2014 Updated: 16 Mar 2014
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Fuck me sideways... I had a feeling that Bella might fall for him, I just didn't thought he would allow her to walk away like that!

There wouldn't be a Ben Cheney be involved with the break ins, now would there?!

What happened that this story was removed from ff.net?

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I'm glad the bad guys are behind bars and hopefully stay that way until court...


 


Aw... I'm sure the weddin will be very special 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I don't think she knew about the baby before, because she wouldn't just not tell him - even if he said he doesn't want kids before... I'm not sure she's going to say yes to his wanting to marry her right away though, especially if he tells her about the pregnancy right away;)

Shes very proud and stubborn, which I love about her, but after all his talks about being married to his job and not even wanting a girlfriend... I doubt she's ready to accept his proposal...

 

I really think that what's going on at ff is more than ridiculous now! If you aren't even allowed to decide which reviews you want to keep and get pulled for protecting your work... What good do they to protect their authors?!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm glad that I was wrong about her reaction, but I wasn't too far away;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I loved their talk! And it's a very good thing Edward allowed her to see some of his own insecurities, because so far he was showing nothing of that side to her. And with all the new feelings and the pregnancy I'm sure it's getting a rock off her heart to know he isn't above feeling his own insecurities;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Beautiful!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Congrats to the new parents:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

As with every other story you wrote, and I'm sure are going to write, I'm leaving these two with a smiling and crying eye;)

 

Ah, the first weeks with an infant... Good am I'm glad they're way behind me;) I'm glad that they have these amazing friends that are helping all through the way but are doing so good as a couple on their own too

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

That was such a wonderful story, I'm so grateful to be able to read so many great things written by you!

If I had to choose a chapter as my favorite, it would be this, because I think it's so beautiful to see her fight Jake! I'm sure that dumb ass didn't knew what hit him;)

Haystack by AstridGreenEyes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 51]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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At the beginning, I didn’t know what was happening; I thought that it has to be a bad joke. Now, the only thing I know is that I have to be quiet. There are too many of them out in the alley. If they heard me, it could be my end. My mind started to wander to my friends. Poor Felix… I can’t even think about him without feeling sick. Those things ate him alive in front of me! I only could hope that this nightmare won’t reach my home town.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25481 Read Count: 12258
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2014 Updated: 10 Mar 2015
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm not that much into Zombies as you seem to be, but your summary has had me very intrigued;)

the first chapter sounds great as well, I think I'm staying to the end of it, to see what you'll come up with

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm curious why he changed his treatment of her so drastically and if the next meeting will be more pleasurable for her than this...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

At least she has had the upper have this time...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm glad he knows how bad he fucked up, but I'm not sure he's going to get out of it as easy as he hopes...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Just in case... That's not sounding to good... And these guys just leave her fighting for herself? How nice if them:(

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I honestly can't blame the towns people for trying to run, but as most movies have shown us, most strength lies in numbers... And so I think, I would have stayed and tried my best with the Quileute;)

Hm... I'm not sure that his welcome to Bella, if he can find her will be a pleasant one in the beginning...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

See, strength in numbers;)

And with both Alice and Jasper, if they can keep their hands to themselves for now, they should have a good chance to get the golf cart. And maybe even to get to Bella's apartment for her car...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yay! He made it there safe and sound;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This was a very brave - and stupid - thing if her to do...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

And so their group gets bigger;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478895
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 08 May 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I so enjoy this! And I think this is such a funny James, a very welcome change of the usual things;)

Im pretty sure the Volturi won't know what hits them, with the Stark-Army marching in their hide out!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 May 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I'm curious who of them has heard enough of his BS and shot him... I'm not sure it was a wise move yet either, because it seems he could have more information to get them:(

OMG! I'm glad the blacks are almost all out, it's sad that Bill has had to allow his son to be killed, but I guess the son he knew died a long time ago...

Will Bella led it slide that someone has had a loose finger?!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I'm so glad that Edward could make her stay! But I fear that if she thinks it's really not safe for the kids to be around her, she's not holding to that promise...

Now I'm really curious whom you put into the Volturi, as all the original leaders are in the "good" team here...

who could be able to break into Bella's condo with all her security, and will chaos be safe?!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I always love to see something new from you in my inbox, this is nothing else;)

Interesting...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like that Edward is so dedicated to his kids, especially with his working backgrounds I'm sure that's not always an easy task...

 

Bella sure knows how to pick her battles;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I already voted for you;)

I'm amazed again at his great daddy skills!

She surely sounds pissed off now, can she keep her temper at bay?!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm quite interested why Bella knows that about Edward as she does... And what's with the name Stark? 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I already voted for you;)

hm... This is really interesting. Since she told Edward she lived in there before, she must know that swan has to come up with her time line when Jasper starts his research...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I agree with Bella, this next meeting won't go over well! I have a feeling she's not going to take anything he's going to dish out...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Damn, she's good!

Im so glad that Jasper got out of his funk that fast, and hope that Peter can keep up with his son on this part;)

Both of them, are doing a great job with protecting. I'm sure now that they work together again and with all the little gadgets Bella is giving them, they will be unstoppable!

I didn't want to be in the shoes of one of Edwards "victims" before, but now? I would start to piss my pants if I were one of the guys being held in the warehouse;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love the nick names! It's really cool to see which one are guessed correctly and where I was way over board thinking;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Now this will be interesting for sure;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I think her calling him out as a racist was pretty good, at least she didn't went without a fight;)

Cullen and Cassie are too cute! He really did good with them;)

How is the bet going? Is love to know who believes in Edward to stay away the longest...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love how great the kids are reacting to Brlla and  of course Edward too;)

Thr nicknames are awesome! I love that she has one for almost everyone and can't wait to find out if she'll get one from them too!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'm not sure how Edward really thinks about Bella's fast reflexes... But I'm sure as long as she uses it to protect his kids he's fine with that;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm curious how much Edward heard of the kitchen talk between Bella and Donkey... Even if he didn't hear her swear infront of the kids I'm sure she's not going to stay much longer on his payroll!

The kids really are too sweet! I loved their random rambling as soon as they found Bella in Edwards bed...

And Bella. She's great

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh sweet Jesus!

I was impressed how he handled things with the guys, I'm sure it wasn't an easy decision to let them alive with the way they behaved infront of him...

The day at the zoo must have been really great! I love how much he cares for his kids and even Bella at this point in their story;)

Damn, Bella really is one hot girl! I so appreciate how she dealt with Donkey infront of the kids but even more with Edward being there!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I guess Edward has some real thinking to do now;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I loved that Edward got a bit if shower fun of his own;) And of course he has some stalking done on her sleeping form... Can't blame him!

 

Its sweet that he has no problem with Bella getting the kids from school and I'm glad she starts letting him in! She really sounds like she could use a friend, and I'm sure he wants to be that - and more;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I'm so glad they can get things out of the way in their own style too;)

Its cute to watch them get to know each other and I'm pretty curious how much both will give of the truth to the other and when the first veto is called and by whom...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Hm... I like that Rose worried enough about Bella to tell Edward, but is it more about her or him?!

Esme is great, she has a really fast brain and I think Molly is a great name for her and a big compliment as well;)

Mike... He might have an idea about Edward, but I'm sure he's clueless about Bella!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I'm very curious how Bella has such prior knowledge about security than Jasper, as she calls her new bought items shit when Edward thinks it's great stuff...

Also I start the guess that maybe Ms. Honey and Guido are Dora, as you hinted out before Dora hasn't have to be one person only... And it would fit with Bella knowing Aro wasn't behind the hit to her father or him getting info about her too...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Thanks for the bonus;)

Hm... I think IM is either a vibrator or just I'm, but I'd guess it would be the first one;)

 

They had a great time out, I think. I'm impressed that she didn't freak as he called her his girlfriend infront of the kids! But I can understand that him telling her she's perfect for him, that she couldn't stand it without getting spooked;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm glad that Edward takes the "public" eye mostly off of Bella. Especially after what Esme shared with her over lunch...

 

Happy Easter to you too:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I guess Jake has a death wish he's not aware about;)

Well, Bella needing training in fighting... With Emmett - I'm sure that's going to be interesting for more persons than just the ones fighting...

 

Everytging you have on your to-do list sounds great! I was so hooked up by the first version of YOH, I'm curious what changes you have in mind

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Poor Edward... I'm sure he's pretty upset with himself for loosing control over his body with Sasha! But seeing Bella make a run for it, that's bad...

chaos... I wasn't sure if it's a person or her computer programm - like Siri on the iPhone. After all with her computer knowledge that was a possibility, right? But as you discovered now that it's indeed a person, I don't have a clue who you have in mind:(

Bella's dream, if it's always like that for her I'm really sorry

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'm so glad he didn't let her get away like this:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I love the new nicknames! They're really great everytime you introduce one:)

 

Sasha really can't take a hint... And poor Emmett, I'm sure just like Edward he thought this was going to be a hard lesson to teach;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I never saw the whole space balls movie, only snippets here and there;)

Hm... The reaction from Yin and Cinna was really interesting! I'm pretty curious if my gut is right with them, too!

So, she couldn't do much in the kitchen with the girls, I'm curious if they'll get more bonding time.

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

My heartbeat was increased from another story I read before this, but damn if this wasn't going to give it just another rush!

I sure hope, that she's wrong in her guess that Sookie or worse the twins fear her presence, but I couldn't stand it if Edward would too...

Donkey and Roscoe... They aren't only stupid as hell, but disgusting as well;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 01 May 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

It's very interesting what you give out about her past and the Volturi... I'm still very much curious who is behind this big name;)

Oh the ring... I'm sure it's beautiful looking!

Ah, poor peter. Giving up protecting your children to another person is always hard, and I'm sure he sees Bella as his daughter after everything they went through together... And with Edwards line of work and age I can understand the he doesn't see him as her best option, but the heart wants whom it wants... And every good father only wants the best for his daughter. I'm sure he's going to see soon that Edward is just that;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

That scene in the shower... That was so very sweet, and im pretty sure just what Bella needed to get really over the scene at the warehouse!

Gotta love Cassie and Cullen though:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 04 May 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I loved Bella going all momma bear! And of course her training the guys is very fascinating;) Maybe she should have a training session with Scorpia as well, could be healthy for both of them...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 05 May 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

For what it's worth, I'm willing to believe Bill - for now...

I have the real bad feeling, that the kids got a new version of the serum the other fighters of the Volturi got. Maybe something like Renee did to Bella, but again with a new/better version... And I hope that I'm completely wrong with this...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 06 May 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

That went way better than I expected;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 11 May 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Having all these knowledge and a super computer in their side really paid there;)

glad that Charlie was agreeable so fast

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 11 May 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

So very cute

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 11 May 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I can't believe chaos would put a pregnancy into the category of a parasite... It's multiplies huh?!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I liked the change you made for Tanya, it's always a pleasure to see some friends in former evil characters;)

Oh I'm pretty sure the babies are so cute! It's very sweet to see Cullen and Cassie with their new siblings, ad I loved that they got them the soft toys to have something from them as well

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Thank you for taking us on another great ride! It's never getting boring to read the stuff you come up with, so as long as you're writing you can be sure I'm reading;)

This was such a sweet ending again and I'm sure there will be lovely outtakes from you, but it's a great time to leave them as a happy end:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella, America's young sweetheart on screen, is starring in her first R-rated film. Her co-star is Edward Cullen, Hollywood's reputed playboy, and he won't give her the time of day. Will they fizzle onscreen as Bella attempts to turn up the heat in her first erotic scene, or can she cause a reaction powerful enough to burn through his arrogant, impassive facade?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39631 Read Count: 6257
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2014 Updated: 04 Apr 2014
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This should be interesting, as I doubt she's able to fool him;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I really hope you'll continue this little gem, because I couldn't stop reading it right from the moment I started!

They really have a great chemistry and I have a feeling Angela is right with her observation, especially after knowing whom stayed the night at Edwards on Friday... AFTER he saw her with Demitri that is:(



Author's Response:

Thanks SO much for leaving feedback!  I really appreciate it.  I'm happy to say that the story is 99% finished over on FFN, minus an epi.  I've been so busy writing that I haven't had time to post the complete story on TWCS yet.  If you'd like to check it out, you can search under my winterhorses author name.  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

fertile

 

 

Summary: Almost over the hill--in her own mind--Bella wants a family, so she chooses in vitro. Tainted by playboy father, Charlie's need to date barely legal girls, causes her to push away a younger Edward. AH/Rated M

Edited for content on FFN. Unedited will post on TWCS and FicPad.

Banner by: Beffers87

Birthday story for: Bobbi Wordsmith aka: AWayWithWords


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20562 Read Count: 56106
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2014 Updated: 13 Apr 2014
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Happy birthday;)

 

Thats an interesting plot you girls put out there - again something I didn't see coming;)

So Bella is pregnant already... Cute! I love that women can make those decisions on their own! But I would like to have another set of helping hands with a baby... I'm sure it's not easy to be on your own with everything...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Not the best way to start for him...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Not her best day, that's for sure...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

He's quite persistent, but that's what you need to be like if you want something bad;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Very smooth

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think Mr. Newton is an ass and not to inform Bella about a call and hiding a case file is just lowest behavior!

 

Charlie is an ass as well, only caring about himself:(

 

Edward... I'm sad she was giving him the cold shoulder - even as he changed his ways. But from what we know about Bella, she's a bit scared of what could/would happen when the baby comes. And with her upbringing, well, I'm not surprised...

Did she faint?!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm pretty curious how long it's going to take her to ask him out;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Charlie won't win "father of the year" in this story...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Timing isn't on their side...

I hope little one and Bella get out there okay:-S

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Sigh... Such a sweet little family:)