Hi

Your story is really sad.  But you can see that Edward is changing..  Someone needs to do something with Carlisle..  is a ass.. 

Bella is so strong.  my heart goes out to her. 

I have to admit..  I love this story.  I love that Edward is trying and Bella is trying. Together their love will  make it.  they are soulmate....... 

I just want to let you know I have spent the last few days reading your story..  I even put my other stories I have been reading aside just for this.. 

I can't come up with the words that I feel about your story..  It toldly blew me away..   I know I would love see  what their life is after a few years of marriagie.  how many kids they have.  and so on. 

every emotion was on high..  I cried and laughed, was anger at them all.. 

And was totally amazed that Bella and Edward separted to heal but stayed true to each other..  that is what true soulmate do.. 

Total amazing...   You are a fantastic author.. 

Merry Christmas and happy New Year..

<3 Leona :)

Aww.. I will send my Guardian Angle to help look over your husband.. and my prayers go out that everything works out in one go.. 

The story is turning out to be a excellent mystery and when you get time for the next chapter I will be here with bells on..  don't worry, I won't dispear.. 

Your reader friend <3 Leona ;)

That was beyond words fantastic chapter............  I can not wait for the next chapter to see how she is being hunted.. 

I love that the beast will not hurt her he just wants to claim her has his.. 

You almost feel the pain that he is going thou to do ths.. 

awesome!

thank you I have donate to tex wildfire's .  I just have not read any stories yet.. 

Maybe you can help me donated to another fanfic which you have to use a password..  But I changed internet servers and lost the pass code..  do no how I can get the code.  I have the files.  it so fustating..  I understand why they did it.   so please and thank you..  this is the (  F4SAA Compilation )

Thank you again. 

Ps.  I am gland that I am right about the venom. lol

That was hot!   excellent done..   :)Leona

That is a wonderful chapter..  I know why their doing this..  she need help to control her antixetys.    I can lots of punishment..  hehehe. 

Will alice every learn..  NOT!..

Love this chapter..  

Wow I love the way Bella stood up to Alice..  But never refused her when she said sorry..  

I wonder what Edward will try and have put in their d/s life to help Bella.  I think she has have some rules to help her..  I know she like the 24/7 but Edward does not..  But he still needs to be strong and have rules with punishment..   Because Bella needs this.  to compromize.  I like that.. 

beautiful chapter has always..    see you next week.. 

first-  I love what the uncles did...  I would have loved her to have to apoligise to the girls..  but I will take this..  skank will never touch or see the family again. 

I love their anver.  it was beautifull  the children are wonderful. 

This whole chapter was amazing..  150% A+

I can't wait for their teenage children to give them a run for their money.  I one and somedays I want to luck him away for 3 more yrs. hehe. 

Thank you so much..

<3 Leona :)

ps..  please let fioella know I send her all the best and happiness for her nieces.  so sweet.  and happy she is home and healthy. 

Hi

I finally finished reading up to this chapter.  I 'm sad that I 'm done and now have to wait.  I love your story it is awesome.  you hit all emotions.  You make me feel like I am right there.  Your a fabulous writer.  Thanks

Have a great day Smiles Leona

Hi

That was perfect to the T.  That is who they are. the momment was awesome.  Smiles Leona

hi

I was  to not going to review until I was caught up to your last chapter.  I have been reading on and off for 4 days now.  Sorry I still had to  stay up with my other storys I'm reading too.  But I saw yours and love it.    A+ in my books.  some of it is a little overwhelming.  your not so far off with the d/s relationship.    But Edward is helding Bella with all love and care and you can see it.  I can say he is still a little soft on her.   Yes this time was a little hash, but her and ali needed it.     Carlisle is upset because of her abannamit  Issue and thought it was to hard her.  But she has to learn.  Well I have to give the computer to my son.  so have he gone to school I hope to finish reading.   Have a great day

Smiles Leona

Wow.  that was a fantastic chapter.  the Cliffhanger wow..  Kind thought that when Carlisle was talking to Esme at the beginning of the chapter or wishing. 

But Why did not Charlie tell Bella?   Or did he get preg someone else and did not know and Renee faked or lost hers and the other lady gave Bella to her?  that would give why she hates Bella.   I know I grasping at straws but the only thing I could think of..  or hope she did not hurt the other lady?  

awesome. can't wait for the next chapter.  :)Leona

It was a very trimadtic chapter.  very sad..  it was wonderful done! I 'm worried about Bella.. 

and for the playroom I would love to see her tied up to the cross and flogged and slowly teased with all the naughty toys..  I think it would be fun.  haha.  me bad.. 

I would not want her 24/7.  but I would love her to be more submissive in attitude........  and may be go 3 out of 4 days. row tate.  or a week long streach.  and they both need more training.  but there coming to there own.  it awesome to see their relationship has d/s and edward/bella grow.   Well can't wait for the next.  I think this would make a great series.  awesome. 

:)Leona

I love this chapter..  You showed Bella has grown so much..  and how Edward still able to come her down even across the lawn..  that was so sweet. 

I have admit it was about the strippers.  nice detail.  hahaha.  and the guys were right if the girls would have found out.  ALL HELL WOULD PAY!! 

Can't wait to see them go down the isle.   so beauitful.  I really do hope you keep writing this into there marriage life..  I hate to see it end.   :)Leona

have a great weekend

God I hope this story never stops.........  it wonderful..  I actual like the length of the story..  You had put it together. 

I am excited that their preg.   it going to be hide from hell but that them..  True love. 

:)Leona

Hi

Wow!.  I really think you out did yourself?  lot of different pov.  but it was not confusing.  actually fit Bautifuly.  I 'm so happy about C&E.  I can't wait to see the changes.  I really do hope she go to talk to someone.. 

E&B true love always. 

The family is back together and stonger..  I was so scared that Carl was going to be Ill.  That was mean but a good I eye wakerner to Esma and the him.   I love you and Please never stop writing them.  This is a Beautiful story..    :)Leona

actually I'am not happy..  This is been one of my favor it stories..  But can honestly say, I will wait a few chapter before I read  it..  I trying really hard not to read upseting stories..  Because they effect my mood..   

I had tears and really mad at Edward..  I know in fanfic you can make it all right..  but in the realworld it don't.   

I 'm sorry.  I was cheated by ex husband.  then my ex bestfriend/boyfriend. left me for another women. came back but now  I 've been single over 7yrs..   

It gets too me when I read..    But has always..  fantastic chapter..

You are the best..  and I hope you never stop writing this story.  heheh 

I have tears..................

This was BEAUTIFUL ending...  scary and sad,  But a happy ending.. 

I will be watch out for the squeal.. 

what is Hope and spring's about I must of miss this somewhere.. 

Hope to see you soon.

hugs your reader friend <3 Leona:)

HI   I just started reading this story today..  I know its done so I've ranked each chapter so far..  it is Beautiful.  This chapter brought tears to my eyes.  Cancer is evil.  I have lost so many family members because of it.   But the reason I am reviewing this time is becasue you can't stop love.  Who says you can't fall in love one day and marry the nexted.  My sister is been married for 20yrs and 3 lovly childern and 2 grandchildern..  and Now her husband is fighting cancer.   So why not marry him.  they love each other. 

you story has a soul and heart to it.    I cana't wait to finish the rest. 

Have a great night..  :)lLeona

That is way to kewl!.  Charlie went to Bella and Renee went to Edward.  Awesome!.. :)Leona

this looks awesome..   I can't wait to read the rest of your story..  I did have this on my favort it for a while.  God I glade I final reading it. 

awesome.. 

I just want to let you know I have spent the last few days reading your story..  I have cried, laughed, was anger..  all the emotions were intense..  I felt like I was a ghost watching Edward and Bella and the family.. .

You did a wonderfull job on this story..  I have seen and been close to what your story is..    You have done a amazing job..   

With the right help and caring people like Mrs E..  and Charlie and the Cullen family..    Most people can come out of situtions like that if want too..       I know one thing just like Edward and Bella you can get it if you want it ..  You have fight hard and it will hurt.. but in the end  is always happiness and pride of yourself..    while I am rambling on.  

But your story was true and Beautiful..  

Hugs Hugs Leona

Hi

It took me a bit because I had the update of other story's that I'm reading.  But I love your story.  True Love or your soul mate  is very powerful.  You might not like each other at first.  or no each other.  But some where down the line you finial meet.  and sparks fly.  and that what happen in your story.  I can't expess how wonderful you story is.  I love it.   Have a great night.  I m off to read your squeals.  I can't wait.  Smiles Leona

I just want to let you know I skip the last half..  I don't like domix..  She is a bitch..  You just provied it right again.  He stop when she asked.  but no bella keeps going..   don't do anything for me but get me mad.. that why I don't read them..     But I am only one reader.  and Like I said I skimmed it..    The rest was awonderful.. 

Your a great writter and I have had fun reading your story for the last few days..   

that was hot!.. 

It was like their soul knew they needed each other..  

awesome story..

Awesome chapter.  Leah is strong will, prego, and very protective of her sister.  you can see why she acted the way she did.  and Bella always hide what james did to her on tell the ended when she excscaped.  I think Leah will come around to at least except Bella and Edward for their relationship. 

Paul what a goof.  and of course charlie ingnore it.  I 'm a mom of a 15 yr old who is at this present time hanging out with 4 girls.  So has long has I know where he is.  I happy.  don't want to go there. hahahah

That was a awesome chapter..  and the Cliff hanger is shocking!..  I think her dreams are telling her to stay near Edward don't go to far away.  They can't hurt her when she is protected by him..   And I actual think it is Edward or the dog she hears or she still in a dream.  awesome thou..  :) Leona

Does Jane get in trouble for talking to bella whan she don't have promision.?   What are her punishment.  and with the Death of their son did it effected her when they play?  is her limits less now that they our older? 

awesome story!.  I just started reading it.  I love it!..  I did cheat and readed your last chapter.  Me bad.  But thank you..  Smiles Leona

Hi :)

First of all.  I love your story.  Your a awesome write. I followed and my imagition went into whirl pool of emotions..  I just join last week to this sight to read one of my favorit authors on twlighted.  and saw yours.  I love the D/S between Edward and Bella.  So I sign up and add it to my Favoits and then on Thursday go a message their was a new chapter.  So I had to read.  between all the activity of the weekend I finally got it finished.  Second of all, I would like to comment on the way ppl are trying to rush you and to say that it is too mush.  What the hect!! That what makes this a great story..  and if they don't like it.  WHY ARE THEY READING IT?  Third of all, I don't think either Edward or Bella are over dramitizing.  What they have gone though and Edward want to protect Bella is true Love and devortion.  Has wierd has it is. I can't get my mind off of Aro!  I think is him.  I hope I'm wrong.  Or it is Mike. that give it to the women.  which could be Tanya or Heather.  My thought on what Sally and Dana said is write one.  even when she was in the van she lied. I pick that up right away.  She is untruth worthy.  sound very Dangous.  I truly can't anwsear if she will get fed or not.  she is so naughty.  but there is a 50/50 chance.  But Edward loves to tease Bella and push her limits.  hhahah.    Have great day.  Smiles Leona

Awesome Chapter.. Edward did push her limits she did fantistic.  It was sad she had to be punished. But she needs to learn..  Can't wait tell next week..  :) Leona

Ps. When they take their holidays, does Jane get free rein.? 

Love the chapter.  she is diffently coming out of her shell.  I think because she was think about the dog collar and leash and Edward had got one, she is thinking it for her.  I don't think he would do that.  it not him.  He bought it for seth.  I can't wait for the next chapter to find out.  this will be exciting chapter for sure.    have a great weekend.  Smiles Leona

I actual love your story.  And poor Edward and Charlie.  knowing your might be having sex and someone out right say it is two different stories..  Can't wait to see what happens with these two.  hahah. 

and yes I can see some of Leah point.  their is pro and con with every sister relationship.  I should know.  My sister and I were preg. at the same time so it was hell.  we fought continesly.   and cried and huged each other.  he kides are like sibling to my son then a cousin. 

I love rocks I used to collected them all the time when I went traveling. even my son has a plaque that my dad made for him. (with the frist rock he picked up to take home from how trip to Pr rupert and gave it to my dad.  He was 2yrs old My dad still has it).   

That was a awesome chapter.  lots of thinks are coming to ahead.  Edward is final figuring out Bella inner beginning.  sister are getting their shit final sorta out.  Bella is facing one of her fears.  It awesome..  Can't wait for nect chapter.   :) Leona

Yes they have become very obvious.  I can of thought that in the first place.  it takes everything that Edward has to pull stuff out of Bella.  So don't think anyone could do that.  She is so stubborn.  But is submissive to other people.    You can never break that..  it is who you are.  I should now.  I 'm that way.  It sucks.  hahahah.    Beauitful story..  I would think if you did not  go down memory lane you would not have a great stoy.  You have to understand them and why they are who they are..   :)Leona

PS>  awesome!  Have a great day..

Hi

I do you agree that Edward and Leah need to talk..  She love Bella and you can't take that away.  She has scean to much hut to her sister to not worry..

Jake is forgiven now.  Bella just toying with him.  Payback is a bitch.  haha. 

Love this chapter.  :)Leona

woo that not good!   I like to know will Bella not doing somthing because of the pack?   that is interesting.  their adults know, they have to live their own lives..    awesome chapter..   good night..  :)Leona

I think it was hot chapter..  and funny has Hell..   it was kind of sad at the end.  So Bella does have a chance to get preg?  or not.   like 95% no but there can be a mirical.    :)Leona

That was awesome.  I like the floating fairy. that was a nice touch at the end. 

I can wait for Edward to talk to Jasper.  He might not like what going on.  But he can step in like that.  Would he like Edward how to run his life.  I dout it. 

I knew he won't be to mad.  But had to give a punishment..  because she could do that so easily.  She actually kind of submiss to everyone. 

love the chapter.  baseball was awesome.  give vinny a high five.  hahaha

see your next chapter.  :)Leona

okay you just made me sad saying this story is almost done.  even if there are outtakes.  that not funny..  Love this story.. 

and yes bella was funny about the underwear..  Somtimes  I wonder what makes her do stuff..   hahah.. 

I don't think anyone she be upset with Edward on his decion not to become a doctor..  It his life not theirs..  he has a great job he likes so leave him a lone.. 

and for Jasper.  he has a little understanding..  But unless your in that life style you can't even imagin..    I know I 'm not.  I like to read it and stuff.  I have a like kink side.  but the pain stuff.  not sure.  Ochy.. 

awesome chapter..  :)Leona

Ps.  have a great trip and be safe. Please.. 

Hi first of all..  I could not help the tears I felt of Bella..  though the whole night if she would not of been stubborn..  she had the answear..   she said in so many different ways..    

I 'm not mad it was a fantastic chapter..  A hard lesson but a while worth lesson learned..

I felt sorry for Edward too he must of been is sad that he had to do this to her..   But she was pushing him away and if he did not stop it know.  it would only get worse this is not healthy for either and it would not just destory their D/S relationship but their vanilla relationship in the end..

I loved how you wrote it out.  awesome..   You felt you were right there with her.. 

I have to admit I see Jaspher and Alice in a different light..  oh my god that was to funny.. 

well have a great night day <3 Leona :)

I wish I had the music your talking about.  I love Mof U.  so sad it was gone..  and it not quite the same when you read it with another names.  Well i hope some has it for you. 

So she finally total him everything or missed out about Jessica and Tanya? 

And yes to some it seem she doesn't have her own thoughts..  But this is a D/S relationship..  she has given over her body soul and mind..  he can not trusted her or what he does if she does not..  bella could get hurt in the end..  

She is growing leaps and bounds, but still has lots to learn..  and her going to Jane is going to get Jane in trouble sooner or later.. 

I wonder if Jane tells Aro? mmmm

I do think Jane steps over her the line but she only doing it to help bella..  but she learns that Bella needs to grow on her own..  you can only guide that what a mentor is..  (no matter what they help someone with, my son had a mentor for everyday life. But he talks to me and he does go over the line, other then really caring for my son..  which he needs)

This was a great chapter..  can't wait to see what happens next chapter on her training and punishment..  mmmm. 

<3 Leona :)

J/A - I would like past Before they married..  How they fooled around him watching her in a tut tut.  hahaha.  that would be cool to see..  I honestly think Jasper is a little dom and Ali is a little submissive.  Even if they don't agree..  What do you think?

This was a awesome chapter..  I know Ed told Em about Bella.  But it made him understand that it was great that they bond together.. 

Awesome chapter. 

<3 Leona :)

I think Jess is not very bright and she deseves everything that is coming to you. 

Karen is dangous and Edward should but bella on lockdown for her own good.  she does not think before she acts..  she is too kind..  I can see her trying to help karen.. 

there are a thousand things that karen wants from her or to make her pay..  the money, maybe dipshit said if he gets the money she would get lots more money.    to wanting to to feel what she felt from him..  if karen only knew.  to lots more..  she is not all there, so it can be only anything.  I do know she out to hurt bella that is for sure. 

awesome chapter.. 

Wow..  this with out words, the best chapter you have written..  Or I liked, because there was so much Bella had learn and let go of her fears and enjoyed herself..  Plus Edward was total proud that people got to see Bella, has he see her and his family.. 

She learn lots from going into the corner..   she learn her master did not want to put her there, but had too,  to teach the lesson..  plus she learn, not moving to comply, made more people watch her..  and She learn how to say sorry and mean it..  It is not the word that you say,  but what it repersents. 

I know I auto matically say sorry, even if it not my fault.  But I do know 50% of the time I don't mean it,  but when I do  I follow up what I am sorry about.. 

actually Dougie remindes me of the guy off the show ( Iam terrible for names so I going to descripe the show a little)  (where a long dark hair girl lives with a gay guy..  and it is his friend that, dougie reminds me of..  right down to the perscription of him..  short skinney and funnier then heal.   The gay guy is a lawer..  awesome show..  I don't think it on anymore.  maybe reruns.. 

Well I hope you had a great Christmas Holiday with your family and friends.. 

Hugs <3 Leona :)

I would Have to agree  with you on the last statement..  When aboused you might get over it.  But there is always a trigger that can send you back..  and like bella found out.  Edward grabing her was her trigger.. 

But the fight was 50/50 with the being mean part.  Edward did go a little more..    But Like I say..   Just because your ready to quick fighting doesn't mean the other person is. 

It sucks.  My sister wants she starts your can't stop her.  Even if you say nothing and agree..  Until it runs it course.   It who she is..  and would never change her..

Oh and Bella hits the kids is just has if Edward does.  But has mom we protected even from their dads..     Has far has I'm concerned.  they should not touch the kids..  find other  means.. 

and why is it okay for a women to smacke the husband and it not wrong?  I really like to know.    But I hate vilence and what everyone writes is funny with the girls smacking the guys..  But that me.    I have to admit..  some of it funny..  But most is just wrong.  But I have my own personal reason for my reactions.. 

But the main reason I 'm leaving you a review it that your a fantastisc writer.. 

hi 

I did not know you started your outtakes, sorry that I missed them.   I will catch up. thank you. your a great author.

That was a awesome interview...    Don't worry..  Your husband loves you...  he would not lock you up..  Yet! hahaha..

awesome..

thank you for the visual ..

wow.  I love this chapter..  this goes great with chapter 75/76.  sad how she forgot what her goal was............  I am so happy their back on track..  IT hurt both of them.. 

That was interesting...   I notice that some of the ones where tried and liked.   But Edward would never do the O.   he knows he would lose Bella trust forever and maybe set her back emotionally.. 

awesome.