Reviews by MDtwiwriter
Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 90989
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice start!

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I really like these two and it is interesting to see a story with a actress and talk show host in love.  The separation will be interesting.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Yes, the separation will be quite interesting.

Summary:

Outtakes and missing scenes from my story, Parachute. Rated M for possible strong language and lemons later in the story.    

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29004 Read Count: 14798
[Report This] Published: 25 Jul 2010 Updated: 12 May 2011
Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: In The End : VictoriaPOV

She did so many things wrong in her life until the end.   Saving Bella so that her son could have "the mother he deserved," says it all.  RIP Victoria.

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Gosh I love these two. If know thing else it brought them together as a family. The Skanky twins accosting Bella is so not cool. To physically attack her in her own home is a sad testiment to the mindset of this town and the jealousy of those girls. I hope they remember this for the positives that came out of it and not the negative reaction of a few.  They are not biological siblings.  People need to get their heads around that.

Wild as the West by lfcpam Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 513]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and James Swan move out west after their parents death. Moving to Wyoming, they both come to work on the ranch of Edward Cullen. See what happens when your life and love are as wild as the west.

Banner by:Ange de l'aube

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132021 Read Count: 48540
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 May 2012
Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Their first fight as a couple. So everyone loves Bella. Poor Edward, he better work hard to keep her happy or the whole ranch will come after him. I look forward to your update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! Gotta love the first fight and then of course the make up kiss was nice too! Should be updating tomorrow.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I loved the update. It looks like cupid has been visiting the Cullen ranch.  Everybody is starting to "court."



Author's Response:

Love is in the air...cant have anyone alone, now I just need to find a woman for James!

Summary:

Social reject Bella Swan finds her whole life changing before her eyes after her first encounter with the cute boy at the Concrete Canal. Three years later, she shows her uppity classmates that she's so much more than they ever thought possible.

Written for the A Picture Says It All Anonymous contest. Based on picture prompt 29.

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I actually won Kharizzmatic's Pick in the A Picture Says It All Contest! I'm so honored and excited. This was my prize, make my Khar herself!
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7251 Read Count: 4258
[Report This] Published: 16 Oct 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Someday

I really enjoyed this coming of age story.  High School can be either heaven or hell.  I think it was hell for most people.  It was wonderful how Edward help her to see how beautiful she is and leave the haters behind.

Simply Promised by mmsinful Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella, best friends since kids, have promised to have each other's baby someday. Now, Edward is married and Bella has a Fiance. Edward reminds Bella of their simple promise, when he learns that his wife is unable to conceive. HEA E/B Lemons. Drabble

Banner created by: Mina Rivera

Beta: HollBeth

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28014 Read Count: 105611
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 26 Jun 2012
Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I read this on FF and loved it, so I'm taking this ride again.  I love you writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks for coming back to read. I really love to hear from people who have read my stuff before. You guys humble me. Thank you.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I read this once and loved it so much I'm following their journey again.



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks so much. I can't really put into words what it means to read you write that. Thank you and welcome back. 

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Now the real fun begins...actually being pregnant.



Author's Response:

I don't know about you but being pregnant was never fun. We'll see for Bella. Thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I LMAO when she said Edward went animalistic.  Ed's short talk with Emmett is the first time he said anything about why he stayed with Tanya.  I just thought he was still in love with her and pussy whipped.

So it took Bella getting pregnant for him to see her as a girl and her to realize her feeling were more than friendly.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Wow, I just read your A/N, now I'm depressed for you :(

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Now that made me smile.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

The baby is finally here.  Ed has gone through a lot to have this baby.

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661137
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 175: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

I loved it!  I've missed Sarge and the gang.  Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 157: Chapter 158: Edward

Bella is just one of the boys.  Nice job with all the shooting range action.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 46: Edward

I didn't realize that I was teary until I wiped my eyes.  Even though I knew he was alright that was scary.  You guys are doing a great job.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 22: Edward

OMG, I absolutely ADORE this Edward.  I have a family member serving.  He just finished his third deployment.  He is currently back in the states.  So that fear that Bella has, I know.  Love this story.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 34: Edward

I finally caught up!  Love this story.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 43: Bella

Awwwww, that was extra sweet of Sarge.  Who knew Mikey could act human.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 42: Edward

Emmett is a genius.  That should put Mikey in check without Edwar lifting a finger.  

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 48: Edward

The thing I like most about these two is their honesty.  The don't have the time to play games or be coy.  E erything is out there on the line.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 54: Edward

Three fingers Edward?  Stop bragging bb. ;)

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 58: Edward

Yahoooo!  The guys a coming home!  Well not all the way home, but close enough.  I think the girls will be busy planning a proper welcome home. 

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 60: Edward

I'm thinking the girls need a little time in sunny Florida.  Those boys have to have some down time.  At least I'm hoping Edward and Bella will get to old each other real soon.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 62: Edward

Doing a happy dance for the boys on the Fourth of July!

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 63: Bella

Wow!  Where did that come from?  I think Edward will be just as confused as I am.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 64: Edward

I just fell in love with Sarge again.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 65: Bella

That was good and so needed.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 67: Bella

Even more than being disappointed that it won't be as convent for Bella to get to Edward, but she doesn't try to see her only child.  I don't get that.  It has to hurt.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 70: Edward

The care package was extremely sweet.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 84: Edward

I'm so excited, especially for Sarge.  It feels like he needs that connection even more than Bella.  She at least has a father and her friends.  Can't wait until tomorrow.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 94: Edward

That's how to have a Happy Birthday/ :D

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 96: Edward

Sarge must be in heaven..hot sex and home made meals, pluse love.  Yeah, he is being spoiled.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 97: Bella

Sarge does not play around.:)

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 132: Edward

Love Sarge!

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 142: Edward

Thank you for not making us suffer with this goodbye.  But each one is rough.  Bella cannot complain about her birthday because it has been perfect.  Until tomorrow.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 144: Edward

I'm ready for you to be home too Sarge.  Emmett is like the bad child in their group.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 150: Edward

You ladies rocked these last few chapters!

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Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 152: Edward

I see Tanya has moved on, which obviously she wanted any way since she sent the Dear John letter. :)  Adjusting to everyday life is good.  Love this story.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 173: Bella

So good!  I'm going to miss daily updates on Sarge and the gang.  *Huge sigh*  Thanks for sharing their story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

What does Jason Taylor think when he meets 23 year old Christian Grey? After four years of working for him, what does Taylor think when he meets little Miss Steele?

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166683 Read Count: 57776
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2012
Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Love, love, love this update.  This marks the start of a lot of action.  Taylor's little snarky remarks and internal thoughts are priceless.  I don't know how you come up with them.  In the books Taylor is this shadowy entity who executes Mr. Gray's every whim.  I love that in this story Taylor is center stage and full of personality.  Thanks for updating.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Endgame

It is interesting to watch events take place from another perspective.  Good job with this.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I sort of stumbled on to this story.  Of course I've read the trilogy and MOTU, so I wasn't sure what I would find in this story.  It is really, really good.  I don't know why I never considered what Taylor would think of Christian and his life style.  You seem to have captured the feel of those characters.  I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

When you think about it this must be a lot to take in...and at 23. Wow.  I can't tell if Taylor is impressed or just shocked.  Probably both.  But Christian seems kind.



Author's Response:

No wonder Christian is so emotionally at sea - it's just work, work, work with him. That's his coping mechanism for life.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Mia is funny!  The fact that she flirts with Taylor is hilarious.  I absolutely HATE Mrs. Lincoln...enough said.  Taylor is very smart.  I don't know how he keeps a neutral face with some othe things he is discovering.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I like Mrs. Jones.  I'm not sure I would have stayed.  Christian is a lot to take in.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I always wondered how Taylor did the things he did at a moments notice.  I have now idea how much he is paid but he is worth every penny.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

It's nice to think that Taylor and Mrs. Jones were just as "busy" as Ana and Christian.



Author's Response:

Yes, Gail is a lucky, lucky woman!

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - The Well of Loneliness

All I can say is excellent, excellent, excellent.   I love how you have captured the story from the perspective of two important players, Taylor and Gail.  They know more about Christen then his own family...they are his family.  You are doing an excellent job with this.  I think E.L. James would be proud.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - The Long Weekend

I love this look into Gray's life but through Taylor.  I always wondered about Taylor's daughter.  Something else that has not come up yet that I wondered about...how did Mrs Lincoln get Ana's e-mail address when she sends her a message at SIP?  Think about is, this was never answered.  The message just appears in her inbox.  I look forward to the Charity Event through Taylor's eyes.



Author's Response:

Elena probably knew where Ana was working. All she'd have to do is phone up and ask for it, I guess. Yes, we need some Sophie and Taylor interaction. I'll make sure I do that soon.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25, Masquerade

Thanks for doing one of my favorite scenes.  Little Miss Gray is beyond annoying.  Poor Taylor.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Mia is something else. Poor Taylor - I guess everyone has a weak spot:)

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Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Saturday Night, Sunday Morning

That was exciting. It was pretty amazing how Leila was able to get pass Taylor for all that time.  This was good.



Author's Response:

Yes, and he's REALLY pissed off about it!

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I do like you writing so I will give it a try.  

This was good.  The view of things from Taylor's POV is fascinating.  Even he, as pissed and as skrewed up as he thinks Gray is, fells sorry for him.  He also fears that Ana will get damaged by Gray.  That comes through in your story.



Author's Response:

Thank yoiu - twice. I appreciate that.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Excellent update.  It is interesting that although I know what happens next from Ana's POV the story still seems fresh when it comes from Taylor.  You should be applauded for that.You might want to go back and change the name of the beauty salon where Mrs. Lincoln works and manages...you call it Escala (their home). 

Author's Response:

Rats! I HATE making mistakes like that! Noted - thank you ! jx

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39, The Perfect Storm

I knew what was coming and still I was on he edge of my seat.  Loved it!



Author's Response:

That is the best THE BEST comment! Thank you!!! jx

Dinner with Elena by sunandsurf Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

How did Elena persuade Christian to visit Anastasia in Savannah? What was her motivation? How ‘happy’ did she want Christian to be? Read on…


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3352 Read Count: 911
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Jun 2012
Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You captured the manipulative evil of the Mrs. Lincoln in my mind.  Based on her showdown with Ana both at the fundraiser and Christian's birthday, I felt she underestimated Ana and was trying to push her away.  I'm sorry I keep repeating myself but I really HATE this woman.  I hope that Mrs. Gray destroys her socially.  As a mother I know just sending her away would not be enough.  She wouldn't press charges because of the publicity and Christian is now of age.  That would not mean I would let it go...just saying.  Something else I never understood.  How did she get Ana's email address?  I've read the story twice and it was never explained.

Loved this!



Author's Response:

I'm sure Grace cutting Elena socially would have an effect but not as much as we might hope. Elena is a successful businesswoman but I can't help thinking that her prediliction for young men will end up catching her out at some point. There's a 3 year cut off date for the statue of limitations on this but because of the extreme nature of her relationship with Christian, I think the law might work differently. But by this point, Christian would be the bigger loser. Wouldn't you just want to go and slash her tyres?!

Wild Child by FluffyLiz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 756]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Just months away from inheriting a fortune and the family business, 17 year old orphan, Bella,  is out of control – a wild child with a platinum card and a killer bod.  Can Edward, as her legal guardian and CEO of Swan Publishing, rein her in and prevent her from ruining everything he’s worked for?  AH.  Rated M for a reason.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212285 Read Count: 153181
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Oct 2012
Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

This last chapter was especially lovely.  I adored the re-proposal at the end.  A new start to the rest of there life.  I love that.  After all the rough times these two have endured this was a hard fought for HEA.  Although, it really feels like a new and much happier beginning.  Thanks for sharing this story.

Summary:

How ‘wild’ was their first night? Christian isn’t the only naughty boy in the Grey family.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Elliot Grey/Kate Kavanagh
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3099 Read Count: 1131
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2012 Updated: 01 Jul 2012
Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Kate is interesting.  She judges Chruistian but had no problem screwing Elliott within an hour after meeting him for the first time.

I Vow To Thee by sunandsurf Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

The three nights when Christian fretted over the marriage vows. What was he thinking and what changed his mind?


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5236 Read Count: 948
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2012 Updated: 04 Oct 2012
Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The workings of this man's mind is amazing.  Ana is stronger than most people reading he books give her credit for.  It takes a strong and loving person to stand up and stand by Christian.  I would have caves when he put on the jeans. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113975
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 16 Part 5

Please, please, please let Edward rip Tanya a new ass.  The woman is horrible.  Charlie has been sick with a cold and she has him on a cold set with no cloths.  Is she crazy!  Poor Charlie.