Reviews by TheSavage
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: TheSavage Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

*sigh* I love your stories, especially this one. Can't wait for the next update :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it.

Summary:

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: TheSavage Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

When I first started reading your story I was a little iffy about it, but now I've fallen in love with it! Edward is amazing in this story as well :) I hope the next update is soon because that is a wicked cliffhanger.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for giving this story a chance. I'm happy that you're enjoying it. =)

lol sorry about that evil cliffy. I'll post more asap.

Thanks again,

~Jells

Reviewer: TheSavage Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

There are no words to describe how much I love this story. Can't wait for the next update and keep up the good work :)



Author's Response:

Omg thank you so much. Sorry for the late reply. RL is crazy, but I'm combining two chapters to make up for it. lol

Thanks again, I really appreciate it!!!

~Jells

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: TheSavage Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Armpits & Coffee Stains

Ok I've only read up to chapter 53 but this has to be the sweetest story I've ever read in my entire life. It reminds me of my family a lot lol I don't want to get to personal or what not but my boyfriend and I broke up recently after dating 2 years so I've had a very depressing view of the world and love. Especially since he was almost a carbon copy of Robert Pattinson and acted like the Edward in your story *sigh* This is going to sound awfully cheesy, but your story has made me hopeful of the future which helps get my ass out of bed every morning so I don't fail out of college lol I hope Bella doesn't get kidnapped or anything, I think I'd have a heart attack. Can't wait to see what happens :)



Author's Response:

It makes me so happy that you feel that way about my story.  Thanks so much!  A lot more to come...just posted the new one.

Summary:

In a world of vices, wrongs and rights everyone will put those aside to fight for the right to live. Edward Cullen is a twenty five year old single father of a four month old baby girl named Katie. He lived with his older brother and sister in law in Hayward CA. Bella is a twenty two year old single female that has been living on an island for the last six months. They come with baggage, emotional struggles and a common goal. Strangers becoming family and fighting for a little slice of peace. Can personalities that clash survive the zombie attacks that are taking over the world? What is Salvation House and who will make it there alive?

 Rated NC-17 for language, limes and lemons in future chapters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93057 Read Count: 22392
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2010 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
Reviewer: TheSavage Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

FINALLY!! a zombie story with twilight. This story is fantastic, I love it :) can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: TheSavage Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Can't wait to see what happens next and how they handle the break in :) maybe stupid Paul will get what he deserves, same goes for victor.



Author's Response:

Thank you Savage for your review. It is always nice to see new readers enjoy our story. Thanks for the review. The next chapter will be posted some time next week.

IP28 and Shawney

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella pretends to be a coma patient's fiancee just to be able to keep seeing him. What happens when he wakes up from coma? What will she do when his brother begins to suspect she's lying? AH, AU, OOC, Cannon, E/B

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52812 Read Count: 15309
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2011
Reviewer: TheSavage Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: At Last

Loved your story :) Can't wait to read the new one you come up with

Summary:

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Edward Cullen is a hematologist by day and a serial killer by night. Because of mysterious circumstances surrounding the death of his mother, Edward is raised by Carlisle Cullen, legendary former F.B.I. agent. Sensing his dark tendencies at an early age, Carlisle molds Edward into a weapon for justice. Edward believes he is unfeeling and emotionless, so he hides behind the facade of a happy-go-lucky family man. Bella, a recovering alcoholic with a dark past, wants to know the real Edward. Can she ever face the monster within in him without being devoured herself? Will a new serial killer in town give Edward the most exciting game of his life?

 


 

Thanks to my beta Twimarti for her superb help in getting this fic ready! This story is a slight Dexter crossover, in storyline and character behaviors. No characters from Dexter will appear. All pairings are canon. Story genre is Horror/Romance/Mystery  Warning This story is going to be very violent, and in a later chapter will have a non-sensational depiction of rape. NC-17 for a reason, but will have a HEA.

Banner by me and the awesome blinkie is by Betti Gefecht

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42561 Read Count: 6949
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2011
Reviewer: TheSavage Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Obsession

Finally an update lol i love this story :) i think bella will be fine with Edward touching her in order to save her. as for newton, he just needs to die i hate him lol cant wait for the next update

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself?  AH/AU

 

A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47585
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: TheSavage Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow, that was intense......Can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you :)  I'll try to update soon.  Hubby and I are going away for a romantic weekend for Valentine's.  Not sure I can get myself into Edward's head if I'm trying to be all lovey-dovey this weekend lol.

Summary: Past Featured Story

When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath. Post-Eclipse, AU.

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MT came in at #5 on the top ten stories completed in March 2020 as voted by visitors of www.twifanfictionrecs.com. Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186548 Read Count: 51167
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2011 Updated: 31 Mar 2020
Reviewer: TheSavage Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I like the idea  of the story so far, the power of healing with love. I just hope that this isn't going to be one of these kind of stories where Bella doesnt tell Edward what happened and keeps  dragging it out. I'm sorry but those stories kind of put me out. I know how Bella's personality is with the protectiveness and selflessness, but even Bella wouldn't be that stupid. I really don't want to hear about her being continually raped by Jacob because she doesn't tell Edward.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, this story won't be like that at all. I have addressed your concerns in more detail in the author's note of the next chapter (which I have just posted) because I know that many people have the same concerns. 

Reviewer: TheSavage Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

That last sentence is very foreboding. Can't wait until the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

Ha, ha, yeah, I know. I couldn't resist adding in that last line :-)

 

Reviewer: TheSavage Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Not to be mean or anything lol but when is Jacob finally going to learn his lesson? Wonderfully loving yet sad story though. Keep up the good work :)



Author's Response:

no problem. I forgot to add my note at the end. If you go back and read it, it should answer your question.

Reviewer: TheSavage Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

ugh how could you be so evil for that cliffhanger! love the story though :)



Author's Response:

Ha, ha, sorry. I'm posting the next chapter now! So glad you're enjoying! Thanks so much for reviewing! 

Reviewer: TheSavage Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

You're torturing me with these chapter endings! lolBella isn't going to get kidnapped or hurt or anything? Same goes for Edward lol It'd kill me a little bit on the inside because your story is amazing :)



Author's Response:

LOL, sorry. But it's not too bad because the updates are coming fast right now. Thank you for your kind words. It means so much. And don't worry, I'm all for the happy endings. I'm posting the next chapter now

Reviewer: TheSavage Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

FINALLY JACOB'S DEAD!!! and tanya being destroyed is an added bonus. good work :)



Author's Response:

LOL, love that reaction. Thanks! 

Reviewer: TheSavage Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Was super excited to finally get an update! Such a strong story



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you haven't forgotten about this story! 

Reviewer: TheSavage Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Glad to see you're back :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68253
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: TheSavage Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This story is just amazing! I definitely cannot wait for the next update :)



Author's Response:

I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Here is a teaser.

Bella sat in a tiny room with what she assumed was a two way mirror on one wall, and a coffee machine on the other. The table was wide enough that when the police officers sat down on the other side one wouldn’t be able to reach them unless they stood up and leaned over.

She hadn’t seen Edward since they had carted him away. He had shouted and struggled, and if there hadn’t have been three cops there to hold him down, he would have easily made his way over to the panicked girl.  Bella held the Styrofoam cup of water in her hands, making indents on it with her fingernails.

“We need you to fill out some paperwork,” Detective Banner said.

“Uh, what kind of paperwork?” she asked.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: TheSavage Signed
Date: 13 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Your story is just plain AMAZINGLY AWESOME!!! At first I thought Bella should have just went and lived in the woods with Edward, but it'll be interesting to see how the test week goes. Can't wait for the next update :)



Author's Response:

I love that you are The Savage, reviewing Savageward. It's the simple things that amuse me.

 

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter, I think you all will enjoy. *winks*

 

Bella felt herself lean into Edward even though she made no conscious effort to do so. He was like a planet, having his own separate gravity that pulled her in whenever she got too close. Edward began to lean in, too, bending his head down to meet hers. She waited, holding her breath for his kiss, but he moved unbearably slow. So just before he finally reached her lips, Bella gasped in a quick breath for lack of oxygen, and then her mouth was covered with his.

Edward was pressed up against her and Bella could feel his hardness on her stomach. What normally would have embarrassed her, made her moan, and that made Edward push his lips harder to hers. Bella lightened the kiss, so she could playfully peck at his lips a couple of times before bringing her tongue out to sweep it across his lower lip.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: TheSavage Signed
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I want Savagedward :(......I love your story, keep up the kick ass work!



Author's Response:

 

I feel like a broken record, but you’ve all been so amazing, thank you!

 

Here is your teaser.

Bella nearly turned around but Edward’s anxiety seemed to drop a little once they reached the open grassy area.  They’d kept their hands locked together the entire walk, but once the open space was in front of him, he let go of it and took off running. A couple people took notice of him, not because it was that odd to see a man running through the opening, but because he had dropped down onto his hands to do it, galloping like a wild horse. Or in this case, a wolf.

Bella took off after him, not shouting out as to not draw any more attention to the odd situation.  She found it surprising that she couldn’t catch up to Edward on her feet, just assuming there was no way he could run faster than her that way.  He turned abruptly and Bella skidded to a stop as he approached her.

“You’re very fast,” she said, huffing.

Edward made a noise Bella could only classify as laughing, and she scowled at him. “Oh you think it’s funny to make me chase after you?”

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)