Reviews by crystanroten
Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob?  Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi?  canon

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101 Sam

i  hate that your TWCS was down i was wanderin if you were ok since we usually get updates in the moring....good chapter bella seems to be a natural at fitting in with the cullens and the stories they have to tell...and sam poor emily sam is just being an ass and i cant believe he is still acting like that....



Author's Response:

Sam is just going to keep geting himself into trouble!  thanks for reviewing, sorry about not updating this morning!

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Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102 Consequences

poor emily because of sa,ms hatred and not trustin in her she is now very hurt.  hope she pulls through. and i knew edward would accept an apology if sam really ment it. thats the type of man he is in this story. but what to do with sam hmm i have no idea cant wait to see what you come p with!!



Author's Response:

A fitting punishment for Sam is a REAL challenge!  lol

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Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103 Reunions

glad edward and bella had some time to reconnect! and i bet edward will be willing to let her have another baby! yay! now renee...hmmm not sure what will happen there!



Author's Response:

Renee is going to be an interesting problem - one we will have to endure!  lol

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Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106 Realizations

loved it! and im sure the family was shocked to hear edward wantin another baby! as always cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

The idea of bella over his shoulder heading upstairs just cracks me up!

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Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107 Patients & Patience

good chapter! glad jacob talked with bree and loved hearing from esme and carlisle! cant wait for more as ususal!



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed the Esme /Carlisle time!

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Date: 03 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115 Renee

aww mason is just soo cute! aesome getting inside his head for a while! and hopefully renee accepts everything while in wurope and behaves herself! cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

I look forward to developing Masen a little more - it should be fun!

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Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116 Flight

whew so hott! i think edward would love bella with a brazillian! cant wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

Ha!  he might not like it!  Some guys don't, and he likes to play with those curls!  We'll see - if he doesn't she beter grow it back fast, nothing grows once she is a vampire!

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Date: 09 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117 Landed

loved it! and mason is so smart! cant wait to see more of him! and to find out if bella will be pregnant again and when...and tanya...



Author's Response:

I know, I'm getting pretty excited about it all myself!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122 Reactions

poor edward is in soo much trouble with bella! he should have ust asked bella about it! man....and edward drunk from bellas milk..too funny! cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

They are going to have quite a time sorting this one out!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124 Orient Express

so glad they are working everyhting out! i knew they would! cant wait for more!!



Author's Response:

More coming up!  Glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125 Scenery

loved the beautiful pics!! and hee hee renee is just so fun!! she is keeping edward and bella on their toes!



Author's Response:

Yes, but I think it's time for renee to leave . . .

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Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126 Venice

oh wow! loved it and yea i agree with you its time for renee to go she is becomming to nosy! and tanya hmm hope she behaves but would be interesting for bella to tell her off! haha cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

Tnya will be interesting - at least I think so!

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Date: 13 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127 Unexpected

loved it! and bella handeld tanya perfectly! but i have a feeling it isnt  the last of her....



Author's Response:

No, Tanya is not that easily dissuaded!

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Date: 17 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions

im glad that kate and irina agree that tanya was int he wrong treating edward and bella like she did but like i said last chapter im sure she will be back!



Author's Response:

The Tanya;s POV in the next chapter will be somewhat enlightening!

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Date: 22 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129 Leaving

wow what a chapter. glad renee is gone but that tanya will never learn! mason better tell edward what all he read in tanyas mind!!



Author's Response:

I think Edward is going to blow a gasket when he finds out the whold story!

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Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131 Verona

poor bella freaking out over mason! but wow mason is just an awesome little boy! i wish you could find a pic or manip of what u think mason looks like! wonderful and cant wait for more!!

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Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 132: Chapter 132 Back Home

glad bella and edward got some family time with just the 3 of them...and poor emily i hope jacob comes back soon to help her out and charlie is to funny i bet he does try and go to where bella and edward are! haha cant wait for more!!

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Date: 09 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133 Surprises

always like to seee the parents POV a nice change. eleazar had a point though how long wil they be able to hide mason from aro they will need to bee verry careful with who sees him...cant wait for more!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134 Bolzano, Italy

loved it! and edward is just a great dad!!

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Date: 11 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136 Content

loved it and yay bella pregnant with twins!! cant wait to see what happends next!!!

Back to Boston by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 390]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella decided to leave her college life when she was twenty one to tend to her family and matters she was forced to deal with head on.  Four years later, she goes back to finish her degree.  She is a very serious student and wants to focus on her degree adn the mystery she is hiding.

Once back in Boston, she meets a kind stranger at her work who seems interested in her.  Her lousy teacher's assistant is hot, but seems to be a bit conceited.  What roll will each of these men play in her life?

Secrest are dealt with in Boston head on and feelings are explored.  Follow Bella as she finishes her degree and tries to learn how to with  living a life once her secrets are reveled.

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Thank you Mehek18 for another awesome banner!  Check out her site at Mehek18.tumblr.com


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 261540 Read Count: 63795
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2012
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

i knew esme was edwards mom! and hmm bet carlisle is the dad lol wonder how bella will take that when she finds out that she flirts with father and son!

Summary:

A compilation of Quiet Storm outtakes. Most outtakes will be in the secondary character's points of view. Read Quiet Storm first. 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41126 Read Count: 18107
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2011 Updated: 02 Aug 2011
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Hunt Part One Starring Aro

love being able to get the other characters perspectives on things!! and LOVE the pics on the banner! those actors fit the character rolls perfectly esp. marcus and aro! hope to see more pics from you on your stories!!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Bay Ridge Avenue - An Edward Flashback

loved diving into edwards past some/.....u should do more like this!!

Mr. Cullen by Annieb Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 304]
Summary: Past Featured Story

mr cullen

 

Edward's life is changed when he and his family move to the small town of Forks, Washington. Being a teacher as a vampire proves to be a bit more difficult than he'd once imagined. Join Edward and the gang as they move to this new town and meet the chief of police's lovely daughter that will forever affect their lives. 

 

Disclaimer: I Do not own Twilight or it's Characters. 

 

Beta'ed by RAH70890

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107008 Read Count: 67301
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2011 Updated: 27 Oct 2011
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

oh wow! thats awesome carlisle preserved hisbirth place like that and WOW his human daughter thts now a vamp is there! cant wait to see wha happends next!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

wow poor edward and bella! i cant believe charlie caught them! but atlest alice says everything works out! cant wait for more!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

love this story!!!! cant wait for dinner at the swans no telling what bella will try and do! and that sub....hmm i hope he wont be aproblem....

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

glad they finally did it!!!  hope james doesnt try and cause a problem noticing that bella isnt in class and edward is out as well......

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Date: 26 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

poor edward and bella they need some alone time! and that creep james i knew hewould be a problem. glad jake and edward seem to get along i knew they would since they both love bella. cant wait for more!!

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Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

great chapter..i thought it would have been emmett that walked up on edward and bella in the woods...tanya is such a bitch. good fro edward for being able to taste bellas blood so easily. i have a feeling we havent seen the last of tanya..... cant wait for more!!

Summary:

Bella is a Master's student who is forced to take a freshman class because her counselor "forgot" to make sure she took it. Edward is a last minute teacher added to the class Bella needs to take. The relationship between the two quickly transform to something more than just teacher and student. Photobucket 23-1 Backgrounds_zpsb05b9cc0


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55188 Read Count: 49806
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2011 Updated: 16 Apr 2017
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

just found this story and read all 7 chaps...i really hope u continue and update soon! i love it!!

Summary:

 

 

Banner by lovely and talented  Mehek18!

Checkout her awesome work: Mehek18.tumblr.com -

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Summary: 33 yr old billionaire tycoon, Edward Cullen is engaged to his childhood sweetheart and Chicago´s cutthroat DA, Isabella Swan; it would appear they were the perfect power couple, but everyone has secrets, some a little darker than others.  Enter 17 yr old Jasper Whitlock, recently orphaned and emotionally troubled he leaves his home in Texas and moves in with his cousin Rosalie and her husband Emmett McCarty, he too has a few skeletons in his closet.  As a favor to his friends; Edward hires Jasper to be his yard boy for the summer. What happens when just after two weeks more than just the hedges are being trimmed at the Cullen/Swan Esate?  And just how does DA Swan fit into all of this? Poly/Slash/Kink, OOC, E/B, E/J, E/BJ

http://www.krazi4twisaga-thegrassisalwaysgreener.blogspot.com/


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45044 Read Count: 36393
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

loved it! wonder what bella walked in on hmm cant wait to find out!!!



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

whew! wow heading for a cold shower now......esp looking at the pics for this chapter! cant wait for more...



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Two´s Company... Three´s So Much Better...

continue!!!!!! please!! need more than them just watching each other...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  Be sure to check out the blog for teasers and picspiration!

http://www.krazi4twisaga-thegrassisalwaysgreener.blogspot.com/


Krazi

xoxo

 

Summary:


Cocky young Edward Cullen makes a promise to his best friend, James to keep Bella safe.

Will that include marrying her? Written by myself and Lynzi whose idea it was!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109789 Read Count: 37578
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2011 Updated: 08 Sep 2011
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67 Duty

so im guessing tyler beat jessica and she better wake up and set it straight! and good for edward he should let everyone know he never slept with jessica and when the baby is born and paternity test are done then everyone will know what a liar that woman is!!!

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Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51 Somewhere in a bar . . .

dang so is jessica pregnant with her ex's child then? hmm interesting!

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Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 Shopping

if edward is swearing it isnt his baby well then its not his baby. jessica is going down with all her lies!!..i hope...heehee

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82 James Masen & Charles Edward

hmm hope charlie is alright!

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

A Kingdom Reborn Banner 1

Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding

oh wow. loved the chapter but just cnnot help but hate how uncaring and not gentle at all the sex ws for bella. mn glad that wsnt me and i do not think i would hve survived those times ....



Author's Response:

I wanted to be more realistic of how it would have been in those times. I've read on a few occasions that it was unknown by some that women could gain pleasure at all from the act of coupling. Our King Edward will learn his lesson soon enough. Glad you liked the chapter. Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Dying

i love this story! i am in the middle of watching season 3 of the tutors and love the early ways of this time!! cant wait for more

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427887
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
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Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Dinner

yes we need to know what tanya said to bella!!!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532964
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Voices Carry Part Two

loved it!!! hmm hope we get details'on how edqard clips esme and will he tell bella....cant wait for more!!

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Date: 12 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 29: To Be Announced

funny!! loved the kick ball game!!!! 

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Date: 22 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Wag the Dog

wow loved it! i prob would have done the same as bella had i  seen a child that looked like edwards like anthony does! and carlisle needs to fess up to esme so bella doesnt have to. cant wait for more!!

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Date: 28 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 27: NuMb

wow!! i thoght for sure carlisle was gonna kill esme but loved how it turned out. liked hearung calisle pov!!

 

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Date: 26 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Voices Carry Part One

poor  bella glad she got a name. and glad aro broought up thentopicof the boys being made guys i always wondered if bella even realy thought about that..like would sonny take over for edward....

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Date: 06 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 44: The Cupid Shuffle Part One

they are like teenagers!! lol but i love it! and cant wait for more!!! lol poor nunz having to hear the skip get head lmao....

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Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Fork Me

first  i was super excited about the an.!!! cause you know sonny is going to be just like edward. loved the chapter and cant wait for more and yesssss a sonny pov would be awesome!!!!!

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Date: 12 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 45: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two

loved hearing from alex and c. and mauro is trouble the skip needs to know what all he did to alex and his little threat. hope she tells carlisle or bella. cant wait for more!!!!

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Date: 18 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Thanksgiving

loved it. and carlisle'did the right thing. skip should have layed nunzio out for toucjing alex but i get he believed she was trouble. i wish alex would tell someone what all mauro did'to her and his threats. cant wait for more!!

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Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 42: The Light

liled hearing from carlisle and alex.hope they can work shit out. lol giess carlisle can resist what bella calls the pussy spell when lex thrusted her wet fingers in his mouth..ool skip cant reist anything when bella does that...

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Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Days Like This

loved how long this was!!! so much went on but im glad they are back together. lou .....someone alays starting something. cant wait for more!

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Date: 23 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Trick or Treat Part Two

loved it. hmm mauro will he caise trouble or let ir go bc skip said so....bellas family seemed nice hope she calls soon to meet them. cant wait for more!!!

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Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two

loved it! but dont most italian fmilys drink wine with meals? and i know of several who let children sip the wine.....so no biggie! hope C is all right and looks like edward and aro wont be too bored for long!

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Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: In Like Flynn

love it! cant wiat to see where this goes...

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Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Thou Mayest

wow! did not see that comming. but i think aro needs to let lauren go and bella beat down on her for the way she was tlaking about sonny and carlisle should just go ahead and leave esme and be with candy he and esme have has some major problems...now aro and esme i do not see how that could ever work out without carlisle trying to kill him and edward  gettin involved. how would he choose between the 2 peopl he is closest to besides bella? cant wait for mroe and to se what happends

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Date: 29 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Indemnity

i know that sucked for bella having 3 sick kids and then herself sick..thank god edward didnt get sick! and wonder if carlisle will tell esme and how will she react...and lauren was actin weird...hmm...love sexy time with edward and bella!

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Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: This Time Around

love it as uasual!! ohh damn bella is gonna tell esme hmm wonder what will happen!!

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Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chasing Regret

wow!!! what a great chapter and bella held it together well!! poor sonny just tried to be so tough....and another fbi agent wow its about to get crazy these next few!! cant wait!!! and wow lauren not hardly reacting about aro yup bella needs to beat her down even if she doesnt love him thats still the kids father...

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Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Bucked Up

first let me comment on the A/N people need to get a life and leave you alone! there is nothing wrong with this story!! i have read way more graphic fics on this site so they better not take u down. this is my fav story so if it does get pulled i really hope u can get out to us  where u are gonna post.....now wow what a chapter!! cant wait to find out what goes on and hmm those italian cousins make bela un easy i hope she teles edward.... and hopefully carlisle and candace  are ok!! cant wait for the next up date and the outtake!!

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Date: 09 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Bitter Fruit Part One

first THANK YOU!!!  loved the second chapter in a day!! awesome! and go bella go bella first poppin a guy then breakin esmes finger.... poor carlisle and wow realllly hope aro can remember soon and be back to normal it wont be the same without him.....as usual cant wait for more!!!

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Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: A Tight Fit

loved it and goo bella edward needed to et his head outta his ass about having sex with her.. cant wait for more!!

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Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Too Many Movies

holy shit!! so esme wanted candace dead so that she and carlisle could raise anthony together and thought she could get away with it bc of jersey...ohh i hope edward tells bella...bella should get to kick esme ass bc that little boy ost his mom then i think carlisle will end up killin her but maybe not though bc of the kids...hmmmm cant wait to find out!!!!!

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Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Weather the Storm

loved it...hmm glad edward told carlisle what esme did cant wwait to find out what the outcome of that is....and edwards other cousin hmm is he trouble?and poor aro...i wish it would go back to hm being bellas friend and edwards buddy not all this fighting...and hmmm leah wonder if she willbe back in the picture....  and sonny just like a lil edward...!!

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Date: 30 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 23: The Twilight Zone

yay! so excited when i saw the updates...loved finding out about what when on when edward found the blond wig in esme house...and esme hmm she could be trouble wonder if she will try and get edward taken out...and poor bella glad her and edward finally are reconnecting!! cant wait for more!!!

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Date: 13 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Intricate Dance

go bella! i knew she would blow up at esme but thought lauren would be first! haha! glad emse gotpopped in the mouth..cant wait for more!!

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Date: 20 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Breaking Dawn

whoo!! soooo hott!! edward needed that kill...and the sex after....whew *fannin face* cant wait for more!!!

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Date: 19 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Great Adventure

loved the button ceremony!! hmmm and will we find out who bellas dad really is....hope so!!! cannot wait for more!!!!

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Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Requiem for a Dream

loved it!! i hate when bellq and edward fight but they awwys reconnect..and good esme is gone...ready to see what the skip is going to do to brandon swan

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Date: 21 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Trick or Treat Part One

damn skip and that dirty talk! lol so hott even if he startslaughing. ready for more!!! 

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Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Beach Blanket Bingo Part One

poor hanah i hate that she misses her mom but esme'does need to go...and hmm i gotta go reread i didnt even realize lexi was dead i just thought she took off...loved it and cant wait for more...

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Date: 26 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 48: End of the Day

lovd it..hmm dereke jr not good!! ugh......mauro  well edward should handle that. loved it and glad edward and bella had sexy time!

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Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two

hmm... carlisle is just determined to get with alex and bella is going to worry the whole time her and edward are out about them....cant qait for more....maybe one more chapter at the shore....hmm wish we could split it some time with bella and edward out and then sme time with carlislealex and the kids lets see if carlisle makes his move or not....

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Date: 07 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Love and Happiness

wow!! loved it. hmm i wonder if that is really boe edward feels that bella is a sloppy drunk and he gets'embarrased....and cant wait to find'out what happends'to esme.

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Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 46: That Thing You Do

omg! im dying! this was awesome and sonny is a little pimkp. lol cant wait for more!!!

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Date: 03 May 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Craft of the Father

this chappie mase me bawl!! poor sonny....i hope they get those fuckers soon. please let bella just fuck them up!!! cxant wait for more.'and i know sonny will be ok i trust you!!  on fb i am known as (rpattz luvor)

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Date: 08 May 2012 Title: Chapter 50: This Woman's Work

loved it...poor skip and bella the preassure and stress they are under. i have faith in you ans cant wait for more!!! (rpattz luvor)

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Date: 15 May 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Riders of the Storm Part One

wow!! poor edward i have faith in you i know they will get through it. i hope bella loses her shit on dj. her " brother"  i hope she kills him and doesnt regret it at all...

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Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Riders of the Storm Part Two

i hate bella and edward fighting. they will get through it ....and damn gooo bella!! im glad she sot that little prick. hope it doesnt haunt her. cant wait for more!!!!

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Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Logic

yay! back to normal. and i hope alex talka to carlisle befor doing anything....lol kylie the little copy catt is too cute! (rpattz luvor)

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Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Day-to-Day

wow!!! carlisle is somethng else! i hope alex sticks with him and he doesnt get a broken heart outta that mess. as always loved it!!! (rpattz luvor)

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Well Enough

go bella!! renee had it comming and damn i am glad she finally got lauren she really had it comming!! loved it!

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Now and Then

aww loved this chapter!!! elena seems a little fishy though....(rpattz luvor)

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

yay for kylie!! now she neea to tell bella or edward about joe and carlie that fuck needs his ass whooped!

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Loved it"!! Im going to iss this story so much when it is done. The skip ks my fav edward out there!(rpattz luvor)

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Wow! Lol i wish bella would find out lauren stole her sons virginity at 14 she would beat that bitch down cant wait for more to see whats going to happen next!!

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Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Loved it! Dame is a little freak, reminds me so much of skip! Lol bella and the hose i can totally see that.

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Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Aww poorr kylie. Skip was mad as hell. Bella is to funny telling to the kids how her and skip met! Ha cant wait for more!

Summary: Past Featured Story

bsnnr

 

Banner by Readergoof...she even found a white bikini!  Thank you!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57546 Read Count: 31181
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2011
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story

loved it!!!! such a great story!

Summary:

Getting the Hell Out of Dodge

Banner by LunarEclipse1

Immediately following the battle with Victoria's newborns, Bella learns that the Cullens were using her in a most malicious way.  With the Volturi wanting her to be dead or changed, time is ticking for poor Bella.  Will someone get her the hell out of Dodge?


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9423 Read Count: 3774
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 25 Aug 2011
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i loved this!!!!!! usually one shots leave me wantin more and not really lovin it but this was perfect! i was soo excited when i saw another story post by you heehee hope you do more as i love the way you write  and love your versions of peter, char and the major!!!!!



Author's Response:

I've got tons of oneshots in my brain that I'll eventually write.  XOXO

Intensity by mama4dukes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 299]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Intensity

Twelve years have gone by since Paul and Bella walked away from La Push and reached for success. When they unexpectedly run into each other, the pack suddenly comes trickling back into their lives. Time changes people but can it change traditions? AU/OOC

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Paul
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 325149 Read Count: 64982
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2011 Updated: 23 Feb 2024
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

heehee poor bella and paul getting the third degree bout kids! but wow its hard to think they are alredy 31 even if they arent aging....cnt wait for the pack! and will they ever fun into the cullens?



Author's Response:

Paul and Bella are very career oriented at the moment so kids are the last thing on their minds.  The pack's coming next chapter.  As for the Cullens, you'll have to wait and see.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  Thank you for your review!  XOXO

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i love this story! it is just so differetn from all the other imnprint stories! cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks, I strive to make it different.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

wow! such a great informing chapter. paul and bella are going to change many lives...so great they are heping sam and jareds familys and giving them jobs..as usual cant wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Paul and Bella are providing their friends with opportunities, not handouts.  They really are stand up citizens. Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow so more shifters! thats cool! and another peaceful group of vamps....what a great chapter!!



Author's Response:

Yes and it's ironic how Carlisle created the peaceful group of vamps, isn't it?  XOXO



Author's Response:

You know, I just got confused for the first time...too many stories in my head...these vampires were not created by Carlisle, they were created by the God of the Underworld.  XOXO

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

loved it! haha and stupid angela what the heck lol an alpha imprint order? haha  cant wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

I know, right?  What is an alpha's imprint's order?  

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

paul was very slick and generous in supporting the charty like that....and wow angela has let the alpha power go to her head...and wow jake phasing in the hosue and going after kim and bella hmmm cannot wait to see the outtcome of that!!!



Author's Response:

Paul was very slick, but he truly meant it when he said that the charity means a lot to him.  Remember, he had to pay his own way through college.  Angela's head is more than a bit enlarged.  And Jake?  He did a big no-no.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

glad jacob had a change of heart and poor angela is just so jealous she needs to work on that...and wow now paul is leader of basically everyone! can wait for more



Author's Response:

Jacob was severely mislead and he's just coming to his senses now.  Angela holds grudges for too long.  Paul needs the new employees, his company is expanding.  XOXO

Summary:

daes

People can't eat people alive, and frozen men don't exist. Bella's secret knowledge of vampires is inadvertently brought to surface when she & her friends are all thrown in the path of fate.

Banner by the awesome LunarEclipse1

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90817 Read Count: 20308
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2012
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

loved it!! perfect pairings too!! cant wait for more...looks like jess will get her frozen man after all!! cnt wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

Jess will definitely get her frozen man.  And they'll soon find out that people do eat people alive as well.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

love it so far! cant wait to see what happends...hmm bella/jasper...angela/emmett..lauren/carlisle and jessica/ peter? hmm cant wait to find out!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hmm...I wonder who is with whom?  Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

loved it and cant wait to find out what happed to bella steakhouse



Author's Response:

I love a good steak, don't you?  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO