Reviews by crystanroten
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514585
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

love love this story! hott and sexy but also brings tears to your eyes and keps you on your toes. cant wait for more!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116427
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

i cannot wait for more! usually i do not read all human stories but took a chance with this one and i love it!!

Sinful Thoughts by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Sinful Thoughts

 

Edward is adopted by the Swans at birth. A growing attraction threatens to destroy a family.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84224 Read Count: 25615
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2010
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

loved this story! glad edward and bella got the hea!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

Summary:

1st place

Summary: Six Friends sit in a room and pass around a gun, who will make it out alive?

Submitted for the ‘To Kill a Cullen' Contest

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3051 Read Count: 322
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2010
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Russian Roulette.

BANG! even reading this i jumped! i love the way you write!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, that makes me so happy to read.

Summary:

Bella is on her honeymoon when a storm hits and she is tossed off the boat along with her husband. When she awakens on a desert island she is rescued by a beautiful angel with crimson eyes. Lemon included.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4808 Read Count: 892
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 01 Mar 2010
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Honeymoon in Paradise

really wish this would continue some!! loved it....what a twist!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm not sure what more conflict could happen if I were to make this one a full length story, but I appreciate the interest.

Summary:

To keep Edward--a freshly graduated police officer--from getting underfoot in a break in, Charlie sends him to 'baby sit' a barely legal Bella. Love ensues. Lemons. Lots and lots of lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130777 Read Count: 21097
[Report This] Published: 07 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Mar 2010
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

like this story but anal sex the first time? wow and no prep bella really tok to that well lol!

Summary:

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Banner by rpattz1990

Rockstar Isabella Whitlock seems to have everything but after an altercation with her agent, she realizes she needs to find her music again. So she goes back home and finds exactly what, or who, she needs. The question now is, will she let them in? NC-17 for lemons & language


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91606 Read Count: 117300
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2010 Updated: 10 May 2010
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

whoo hoo i loved this story!!!

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home

whew! i cannot wait for more i LOOOOVEE this story! pierced tattward is soo hott!! cant wait for more please update soon!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: All or Nothing

yay!!!! soo excited you updated 2 chappies for us!! great ! whew soo hott too!!

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Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Woman

yay finally!!! i was soo excited to see an update! love this chapter!!!! cant wait for more!!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Patience

ohh no gianna needs an ass whoopping!! loved this chapter though!!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Barracuda

what a great chapter! bella went all ghetto on her rant that was great!!! i always love edwards point of view never fails to make me laugh ad hes so damn sexy! cant wait for more and gianna to go down!!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 07 May 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Hit Me With Your Best Shot

hope everything is ok with you i really hope you update soon!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sequel to The Good & The Bad. Follow Bella & Edward as they mend their relationship & start their new lives in LA. Old friends & new enemies make life more interesting. With Twilight Records blossoming, Bella & Edward find their niche in the music industry.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55499 Read Count: 20188
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Nov 2010
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Good Boy Edward: Epilogue

sequel to bad ass bella and godie goodie edward...pretty good...

Summary:

Isabella Whitlock and Breaking Dawn have started their tour. Will crazed fans, a stalker, and who knows what else break them apart? E&B, J&A, Em&R NC-17 for lemons, language, and who knows what.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156016 Read Count: 38443
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 17 Jul 2010
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Seattle

so weird when i read the 1st story i clicked on your name and it took me to your page with all your stories but the last one and this one wenret one there? i had to search isabella whitlock to find them....glad i could find this!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Baby, one more time!

ohh i loved it!!! such a great story! so sad that its over!

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238914
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

very different story but i love it! cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm glad you are enjoying it.

I will be posting chapter 11 this week.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

~Jells

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

loved it! i really hope aro will allow bella to be turned into a half breed. hmm dominate and possessive edwrd if so hott!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Glad you like dominant and possessive Edward too. =) Yes, Aro....I hope he'll let Edward turn her too.

Thank you for commenting and reading. I appreciate it!

~Jells

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105119
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The faux pas

love this story. very hott ready to hear bellas story and will she ever find out edward is a vamp and how does she? and will edward figure out she is his mate any time soon?

Summary:

A Bella/Edward Story

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(Banner by AngelGoddess1981) 

Bella loves Edward, much more than she should. Edward is an addict. Bella deals with it. Years of this cycle begin to take its toll, and Bella is fed up. A near fatal accident forces Edward into a coma, and Bella reexamines her previous decision. Will Bella stay, or is it all too much? OOC/AH

The story is based on events that happened to me in real life. I've just changed the situation some and adapted it to fit Stephanie Meyer's Characters.

(New Banner by DivineInspiration)

Warning:

This story is not intended for anyone under the age of 18. Some themes include underage drug abuse, adult drug abuse, violence while under the influence, poor judgment while intoxicated, graphic medical scenarios, graphic sexual situations that are consensual, explicit language, and extreme angst. Be advised, this work of fiction is not suitable for everyone. If you are under 18 or find these situations upsetting or uncomfortable, please move on. Otherwise, I urge you to read with caution.   

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148282 Read Count: 31012
[Report This] Published: 29 Oct 2010 Updated: 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 24: State of Love and Trust

i also have had seizures and you did a great job at writing it. it didnt seem fake like lots of other authors...

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389456
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

loved it! so hott! hmm bet we havent heard the last from tanya....and the dog is soo cute!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

loved it! so glad  edward punched jacob and yess bella bitched sla[ped leah! whoo hoo! such a hott chapter! and WOW another little dog? uh oh is someone in trouble or will bella looove it? cant wait for more!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

You'll Find What You're Looking For At Walmart

What happens when a lonely and betrayed vampire meets his mate at Walmart?  He claims her, of course.  Join Peter and Bella as they band together with their ragtag team of friends to creatively exact revenge on those who did them wrong.  Peter x Bella pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 301749 Read Count: 81571
[Report This] Published: 07 Mar 2011 Updated: 12 Mar 2018
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

funny! alot of info in this chapter! loved it and cant wait to see wht happends next!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  There's a lot more coming.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

loved it! it just keeps getting better and better! love your stories they are all so different and original and you have such a great sense of humor! cant wiat to see what you come up with next!!!



Author's Response:

More to come and I'm glad you're enjoying my stories.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

ohh that carlisle gets worse every chapter! i cannt wait for peter and comapny to end the evil cullens!! and ohh no hope the other wolves can get to bella and peter in a hurry! cant wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Carlisle is horrific and there's a long line to assassinate him.  The taming of the wolves is coming up.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

oh wow brain overload! haha great chapter....vamps, shifters, children of the moon...wow everyone getting along....and man carlisle and alice are just eveil and old! i cant believe they kept up the secrets of who they really were  for soo long esp around jasper, rose and emmett....cant wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

Carlisle and Alice are evil.  In two chapters, Maria will have an explanation as to why she believes Peter is actually more powerful than Jasper is...  That might give you an idea as to why Alice and Carlisle were able to keep secrets around him.  

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

love it as usual!! hah edward is gonna freak over his volvo.. and glad at least 2 of the enemies are down and they have som intell now..cant wait  to see whats next forour fav vamps...and hermosa is a superwoman!! haha



Author's Response:

Hermosa is an A-okay lady.  And the Volvo served an honorable purpose, it gave Emily a brand new ride.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

loved it.'ugh hate carlisle more and more....poor'kebi tough so manipulated and brainwashed. cant wait for more!!



Author's Response:

We should feel sorry for Kebi, but unfortunately she's mated to a monster.  Carlisle is atrocious.  More coming soon.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Closet by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

What happens when Edward and his date are caught at Make Out Point by Chief Swan? How will Chief Swan feel when it's his child in the car with Edward? Read and find out.

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Emmett (slash)
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2926 Read Count: 1629
[Report This] Published: 09 Mar 2011 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW was not exspecting that it would be emmett!! haha loved it though whata shocker to readers!!

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2671222
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Poker Face

another great chapter...looks like bella will be gettin some major lovin comin up! and edward should let bella beat the hell outta jane for tellin ppl that she was edwards woman! cant wait for more!!!

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Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Get It

this is my fav fic! jeez i wanna just beat carlisle that man needs to keep it in his pants! love it when bella and edward say "get it" durin sex lol cant wait for more!!

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Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Checks and Balances

yea edwards bad ass and now the boss. love it!

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Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Par for the Course

holy shit! goo bella!!! damn..cant wait for more!!!

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Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Skip's Day Off

loved this chapter...poor bella pregnancy hormo. are a bitch. and WOW  lauren pregnant hope aro goes to see her..and as usuall it was great and funny. cant wait for more..

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Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Oobotz

i dont think edwards concerns are messed up i would be pissed to...but i dont think bella would do that to him she loves him waaayy to much but with all the crap with carlisle and his dad i can see where that would mess with his head... and i loved the inside look to edwards job..hes a badass...cant wait for more and hopefully they get to spend some more time together and get back to some lovin!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Helluva Day

first of all why the hell do people want you off of FF.net? what the hell is wrong with them! this is the best story  mafia edward is soo dam sexy. this story is funny and has a great plot. soo glad edward and bella reconnected in this chapter. hope jacob doesnt hook up with nicole caius might kill him for it. cant wait for more!!!!

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Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Under Pressure

loved it!!! verry italian name..very fitting. cant wait for more and the sequel!! squeeee!!!

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Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue

oh i just about cried i loved it so much!!! i cant imagine what bella went through those yrs edward was locked up how aweful! and sonny is just like edward but so damn young! damion is too cute! when you start the sequel u should put in the authors not all the characters ages and then list their kids under them with ages to help us keep up!!! cant wait for sequel!!!

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Date: 28 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Everything Edward and Bella Outtake

loooved it!!!! 

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter One in Edward's POV

loved this so much!!!!! (rpattz luvor)

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Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Stars in the Sky Outtake

aww loved this. poor bella.  love that even in jail edward wanted a little taste! lol ( rpattz luvor)

Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 693]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wild

Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

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  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184400
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Big Balls

ahhhh!!!! great chapter! aro-very creepy and delusional..tnaya-needs a beat down alon with quil, mike and jessica! cant wait for more!!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Goodbye Renee

ohh i really hope that the transfer did not go through!! that is bellas money she should have smacked renee. man...hopefully the trip to forks is comming up..*wink wink*

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Adding Thickener

ohh i cannot wAit to find out thwta happens next/....im betting jessica and quil had something to do with the torn dress.....

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - Blanched

well first im soo happy for edward and bella and glad chelsea, mike, aro and tanya all got put in their places. now bella ohh no i hope  u update soon thats gonna drive me crazy!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Taken

ohh god! please let it be renee and not bella. i knew that bich renee would show up soon...but why the name tanya? any reason or just to throw them off a little thinkin tnya denali? cant wait to find out what happens!!

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Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place

knew that creep quill had something to do with it!!! cant wait for edward to beat the crap outta him. hope edward and carlisle get to bella fast!! and renee needs to go down bella or alice heck maybe esme should beat the crap outta her yea esme should doo it! cant wait for more!!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 - Caught

ohh lord... renee is so damn crazy!! so glad bella played along to stall adn glad quill helped bella some. did edward get grazed bya  bullet? or did he get shot? and pleaseee tell us what the heck jasper is!!! cia, fbi what???  and was the cold wind alice felt charlie andn jacob? ding dong the witch is dead! glad a tree fell on her crazy self!! cant wait for the next chapter.

Summary:

This is just your basic New York City love story. Crappy apartments, menial jobs, and low standards place Bella Swan in the pathway of love. Rated M. Canon couples with my usual OOC cast. AH. eventually E/B

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 71053 Read Count: 26605
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2011 Updated: 25 Jul 2011
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Edward Scissorhands

hahaha LOVED it edward and bella really need to just hurry the hell up and feess their feelings for each other...cant wait for more!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: They Shoot Single People, don't they?

I love it! your stories are all so diff and i love each one! this one chappie was funny please continue!!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Hoes in Different Area Codes

funny! LOL what is up with jasper? wow gonna cheat alice who just gave birth what the hell but funny! love the banter between edward and bella!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Odd Bird

no you are not wasting your time! i love it! i love all your stories.!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: The Matrix

damn !! soo cute. poor edward seems soo shy im glad bella took control a little bit with the cute quotes!! hopefully a lemon next chapter...

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Inside the Box

aww so glad they finally made lvoe! it was a great chapter....i hate that this story is ending. love your work!!!!

A Fresh Start by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 588]
Summary:

Bella is a recent divorcee, reeling from the abrupt ending of her marriage. In walks a certain green-eyed stranger. Can he convince her trust and love again? Or will she just ignore his advances? ExB, AU, AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271752 Read Count: 339361
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2011 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Epilogue

love this chapter....i think you should focus alot on the dog nessie and marie. animals tend to bond well and help autistic children....

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob?  Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi?  canon

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181678
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2

i loved it!!! and loved the pic u posted of the restaurant  glad edward loved the waxing and the sexy time was beautifully written as usual! cant wait to see what happends next./....



Author's Response:

You were the first to review the chapter - thank you.  i was kind of afraid I went overboard with the sex, but it has a reason for being there!  lol  of coutse, edward kind of went overboard with millions of dollars on a diamond!  Wait till Bella finds out what it cost!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119 A Romantic Evening, Part 1

little mason is just so adorable!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad everyone is enjoying Masen!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120 Spa

loved spa day! wonder what edward is going to think  and how is he going to react about the waxing? hmm cant wait to find out!!



Author's Response:

Well, next chapter! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96 Breastfed

i hope the treatment helps his arm...what about bellas blood from the birth? can he not feed from it? and what is going to happen to sam?

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99 Restored

i knew it!! i knew bellas milk or her fluids would heal him! so glad and wow the venom healing her as welll and her not changing...clever....but could she get pregnant from him comming inside of her when he dranl her milk? i know that technically you arent suppossed to get pregnant when breastfeeing but it has been known to happen....

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95 Masen Charles Carlisle Cullen

loved it! i like how thye think mason's eyes will change just like his daddy most stories u read he has either edwards human eye color or bellas i like that they might change. cant wwait for more!!!



Author's Response:

I'm thinking he just might have amber colored eyes like the rest of the Cullens!  Not sure yet, though . . .

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?

i think they should ask mason. he might want to look just like his daddy in that way. emmett is always a trip he keeps me laughin! good idea with the werewolf claw. instead of edward biting it....now wonder if the topic of mroe kids will come up?

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108 Moms

loved it and your right ou dont mess with moms we are mama bears! glad esme took sam down like that it proves she is able to protect her family! ohh lord the visit with renee should be fun!..love your sayin in the a/n!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110 Plans

i would do maybe a few more chapters like maybe renee visit then start a sequel with europe. wow whatwhat fun and i am soo glad to hear atleast 50 more chapters!  im like bella i think of food when i think of traveling!



Author's Response:

Glad you're excited about more chapters!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105 Spying?

yay edward wants another baby too! hope thats where twins come into the picture!



Author's Response:

You just love those babies like I do!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97 Burned

ohm i hope edwards arm heals! and he doesnt loose it. and that sam he is just a lost cause. he is lucky edward is so caring and understanding and maybe edward wont kill him,....



Author's Response:

Edward needs to do what the doctor tells him.  He needs that arm!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111 Delusions

though it does suck about not gettin an update we understand RL so twice a week is reat! hmm renee is noticing alot so i am looking forward to seeing how that plays out!



Author's Response:

Thanks for understanding about RL!  I HATE it, I would rather just sit and write!

Renee is a trip, she is going to be fun!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123 Simple Question

hmm i think edward took it to the extreme. marking bella like that i understand being the vamp and all..... now bella has ever right to be angry but she should have  just yelled that she didnt let the man tough her but duhh edward why wouldnt you think to ask if she let him or not. now if i was bella i would be mad as hell at edward for taking off for the whole day then leaving again and taking mason! whew i have a feeling he is goin to be in some trouble!!



Author's Response:

I love your reviews!  Edward is in soooooo much trouble!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109 Alone

whew! after all that i would think she would get pregnant now!love needy edward as well!



Author's Response:

So glad  you love needy Edward.  I just had a fan tell me that the sex was gross and I;m kind of devistated right now!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130 Don't be mad!

poor little mason thought hewould be in trouble! such a cutie! and wow what a power....great chapter! loved getting inside masons head!



Author's Response:

Really glad you liked it!  Masen is difficult because he has to have full powers, yet he is just an infant!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 Thanksgiving

loved this chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!  Glad you liked it and I hope I continue to hear from you!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 Confidants

!nope not looosing interest!! its still a great story! and wow bella and edward could end up with 3 kids!? that would be awesome for them. cant wait for the amusement parks next!!!



Author's Response:

the theme parks with the Cullens should be a riot, and three kids for edwad would be more than he ever hoped for, I'm sure!  Hope you continue to read and leave me opinions and thoughts on what you like and do not like!  Thanks!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51 Magic Kingdom

aww!!! how awesome for edward to plan such a cool dinner and overnight stay in the castle. and soo sweet of bella to help out  that family. and love how bella just accepted the ring and didnt fight him on it. so glad edward was able to feel the baby mve.....love this story and thank you thank you for you almost daily updates!!!



Author's Response:

I love daily updates as well, and you're welcome.  Glad you like the story!  thank you for taking the time to review, I really like hearing from readers!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 52 Cinderella

aww that was so sweet of edward to help that family but i shouldnt be surprised its edward! lokin forward to the confrontation with victoria. and what about the denali sisters? tanya going to be a problem for bella?  bella could put her in her place real fast i bet/



Author's Response:

Tanya is always a problem!  I love the Cullen generosity, too!  Thanks!  I really appreciate you taking the time to review!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56 Trees

ohh i hope they get victoria or she ends up turing a new leaf so to speak and decides to be friendly wih the cullens..but is she can see in the living room and in their windows wouldnt edward be able to hear her thoughts??



Author's Response:

She can see from some distance away, like 4 or 5 miles from her mountain perch - Edward can only hear familiar voices as far away as three miles, so hers would be a lesser distance.  I tried to consider all the limitations put forth in the book!  lol  It is fiction, so lets assume she can see farther than he can hear her mind!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59 Christmas Eve

what a great chapter! poor jacob i bet he is really freaking out but i bet bella will et him calmed down and when he phases he will be able to help with the victoria situation.. im glad charlie finally likes edward but i would be so embarrassed if my dad heard me screaming out during sex!



Author's Response:

Jacob will be around, but will he help?  The question is, will they remain friends or let themselves become the natural enemies that they are!

 

Thanks so much for leaving a review!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60 First Christmas

so glad jacob is going to continue being freinds with edward and jacob. and at the end will everyone laugh off bellas indestructable comment or did she accidently open a can of worms?



Author's Response:

SOOO Sorry!  iposted chapter 61 insatead of 60!  Please reread and it will make better sense!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61 Presents

this chapter did end up uploading! heehee



Author's Response:

SOOO Sorry!   I posted chapter 61 insatead of 60!  Please reread and it will make better sense!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62 Plans

loved this as usual! but that damn victoria ugh she makes me soo mad. i hope they end her and soon. i really hope she isnt able to get to bella but oif she does i know edward wil totally kick her butt!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review - it is about to get going on some drama!

So sorry about the chapter mix-up!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63 Purring

umm wow that was way hott! vamp edward comming out to play and commin again and aain over some breast milk just wow!! whata great chapter! lol u know renee heard it all! cant wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Yep, I love what her fluids do to him!  THE VAMPIRE TURNS TO MUSH . . .SORT OF! (after geting all fierce and all)

They just never stop expressing their emotions for each other, do they?

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67 Jacob

finally jacob phased. hope the friendship continues....and maybe sue can help some. looking forward to them caching victoria and the threat going away... as always a good chapter!!



Author's Response:

Jacob had tyo phase at some point, and what is he more passionate about than Bella!!!  That was my thought anyway . . .

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73 Games

good chapter. soo glad jacob is still friends with all the cullens. and victoria ugh hoping her time comes to an end soon...wonder how charlie will take the news of bella and the cullens being vamps and jake a wolf?



Author's Response:

Well, Charlie knows nothing . . . yet, though they all think he will because of Sue!  All are still friends, at least for now, and Victoria . . . well, she is still trying!  lol

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75 Fireworks

loved it! and seems like sue is starting to come around glad she is going to be there when sam arrives.....and poor edward he is just so scared for bella. ohh victoria is getting brave....cnt wait to see what happends next!!



Author's Response:

Yes, Sue staying will be a big help with Sam, that's for sure!  he is such an ***

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76 Encounter

man i canot beliebe that victoria got away anger is only going to fuel jake and the cullens to oush harder ar catching her! great chapter!!



Author's Response:

That Victoria is crafty, and she has had all the time whe wanted to prepare for this!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77 Insurance

i was soo excited when i got the email that you updated again!! lad emily kinda seems to understand the cullens are good and i think she will be abig help with sam he is gonna flip when he sees bella pregnant and hears them having sex....



Author's Response:

True, and with werewolf hearing, there is just no way he won't hear them having sex!  lol

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78 A Winter Afternoon

whew what  a lemon!! wow! i could nnot imagine what it would feel like to have edward have a orgasm repeatedly inside me..must have been cold haha!



Author's Response:

Hope it was good for you!  lol

I love lemons on Sundays when there is nothing else to do!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79 Sam Arrives

emily is soo sweet! i think she will get sam under control quickly....i hope....cant wait for more!!



Author's Response:

It's killing me as well not to post another chapter today!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81 New Years Weekend

emily sure is trying to et sam straight! and mason is too cute!!! awesome he can communicate with edward! cant wait till he is born!!



Author's Response:

Sam is going to take some work - but Masen is coming very very soon!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83 Taken

ohh noo!!! ok let me start with the last chapter that i did not review bc i was in a hurry to continue on...great one as ususal!!! and loved sexy time with edward and bella at least now as he drinks her milk he moves in her so she also gets pleasure lol and emily is really setting sam straight at least he seems to try to be polite even though it is killing him!  now esme or alice should have stayed with bella in that dressing room hopefullythe cullens see the car and can rescue her quickly before victoria can hurt her and maybe masons power could help in some way..?? cant wait for more!!!!!



Author's Response:

Masen is very important in this, and they will look everywhere they can think of for her!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84 Frantic

oh gosh poor edward! hopefully they cant keep him together long enough to find bella! cant wait for more!!



Author's Response:

He really is about to loose it, he knows that her chances of staying alive past the first hour are slim and none!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85 Queries

hopefully sam is comming around after the talk with carlisle and man victoria is a sick and crafty vamp.!



Author's Response:

Unfortunately she is REALLY crafty!  Sam, well, he has a lot to learn!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86 Dispair

oh my word i bet bella is terrified but os doing great at keeping calm and tlaking to mason!!



Author's Response:

She does seem to be keeping her head about her, isn't she!  Edward is a little more frazzled!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87 Demands

i knew it!!! victoria wants to live like the cullens i knew she would ask for money but i bet she still tries to harm bella. i just hope poor mason can hold on a little longer! great chapter!!



Author's Response:

Yep, Masen and Victoria are the wild cards!  Wonder what Masen can do to help!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89 Storm

i really hope bella comes out of this alive! good going alice for putting in the tracking device i hope they find her soon but wont victoria and riley hear or smell the approach of the vamps and could possible go ahead and hurt or kill bella. though i really hope that doesnt happen!



Author's Response:

Yep. approaching Victoria and Riley makes it tricky!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90 Tracks

still loving it! great idea bella! just hope they can get to her without victoria killing or hurting her too bad! cant wait to see what happend next!!



Author's Response:

Bella really did have a great idea, didn't she!  Hope they can smell the trace of her in the burning hair!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114 Change in Plans

wow that renee is just wow heehee inviting herself on the vacation? lol that will be a fun trip!!



Author's Response:

It's going to be a challenge, that's for sure!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91 Fire

ohh no! well im glad victoria is dead but what the hell was sam thinking! im so glad that jacob was able to command him to stop!



Author's Response:

Jacob has come in handy a time or two, hasn't he!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92 Discovered

ohh wow!!! im so happy bella and bree got out! but poor mason must be frantic being sqeezed by the contractions! yay! poor edward though.....

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93 Delivered

ohh im just so happy they are back together!! and now mason wants out! cant wait to see how the birth goes!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!  One birth, coming up!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100 Morning

yay! what a good chapter, like always! and wow mason has grown! not sure what to do about sam he was just soo wrong.... ready for bella to verbally or physically beat tanya down!!!