God, these kids shouldn't be let anywhere near a mobile phone.  Do none of them check who they're sending a message to at all??  Lol.  I was half exptecting that one to have gone to Esme or Carlisle as well.

Jane x

So, I'm taking it that we went back in time.  I love Billy's reaction and how he compares Emmett to Leah, lol.

Jane x

Lol, Alice got more than she bargained for.  I'm so glad that they're all happy for Jake and Emmett and there's no animosity.

Jane x

Oh yeah, they're going to take advantage of every opportunity to make a show of these boys.  Lol.

Jane x

Lol, Emmett is a horny and desperate man, good job Mike's always living in hope....I mean prepared, hahahaha!!

Jane x

That's a big step for their relationship but they do really love each other and it's only natural to not want any barriers between them.

Jane x

Awww, I'm glad that it worked out for them both.  They found the courage to be themselves.

You were right at the beginning about groaning about Jacob but I really enjoyed this.

Jane x

Damn!  As hot at these two are together I can't help thinking they're going to get caught.  Is Bella still a virgin?

Jane x

Lol, is Bella going to get more than she bargained for?  What's going on that's made Emmett and Bella cheat on Rose and Edward?  I'm feeling sorry for Edward, not Rose though, I've never liked her, lol.  How is Alice not picking anything up or even Jasper, wouldn't he be able to feel their changing emotions?

Jane x

Hmmm, siblings and cousins, lol, definitely sensing something, most probably disaster.  This is interesting but I notice it hasn't updated in a while.  Please say you're going to finish it.

Jane x

Oh my God!  Cynthia is vile, chuck her out now!  So if she's Alice's sister are Alice and Emmett half siblings then?  My head is spinning but not as much as Emmett's and Bella's with the verbal tennis that's going on, lol.  Just wait until Rose gets home I'm thinking there might be more fisty cuffs, lol.

Jane x

Lol, I really love this Bella, she's so confident, thoughtful, loving, snarky, funny, protective and probably a dozen other things as well as definitely flirty, she wasn't kidding with that one.  I'd love Edward to appear.

Jane x

Poor Sue having to explain sex to a seven year old boy who's not even hers, lol.  Emmett's pretty curious for such a young boy, mind you, I only have a daughter and if she was curious at seven she never said a word.

Jane x

Bit of a shock for Emmett there but given how close their relationship is, especially at that age, it was bound to happen.  It sounds as though they have been left completely to their own devices and Renee hasn't been their to say that they shouldn't shower together.  It's only now that Emmett has had a sexual reaction to his sister that the thought could be entering his head that this is wrong.

Have you read Flowers in the Attic?  If you haven't you should, fantastic book and due to their circumstances they developed and incestuous relationship.  Like you I don't condone this but it seemed right in that situation.

Jane x

Emmett's really struggling and trying to ignore his feelings for Bella.  Pretending that the girls he takes to bed are Bella is probably not the best idea he's had, but then he's a hormone riddled teenager who's just trying to make sense of everything.  How would you ever be able to tell anyone about this?  He's so alone.

Jane x

Their relationship has developed in such a way that for Emmett it almost seems like he's dating but without any kissing or sex.  I'm still wondering whether Bella's as oblivious as Emmett thinks she is.

Jane x

Oh dear God, Bella's going on a date.  I get the feeling Emmett's going to get all possessive, jealous and protective of her.  In a way that's what Bella's been with him by keeping all the 'sluts' away.

Jane x

Oh so not a good move, a payback date.  Then again, maybe this is what it takes for one of them to confess their feelings.  God, I can't believe a wrote that but there it is.  They can't go on like this much longer, no matter what happens something has to be said.

I know this must be hard to write, I wouldn't even know where to begin but I'd love it if you could make your chapters a bit longer.

Jane x

Wow!  Will Bella run scared or will she embrace this?  They both know this is wrong and they've tried not to give in but when you feel love this deeply and you've had no guidance from being small, well what can I say, I hope she embraces it, they deserve to be happy and loved.  What they feel for each other is far beyond familial love.  This is such a sensitive topic but you write it so well.

I can't believe I missed this update but the good news for me is that I still have another chapter to read, woohoo!!

Jane x

You're back, woohoo!!!  Please don't forget about us, we may not be many but we love this story.

So, Emmett finally cracked.  It was bound to happen and I'm glad that it has. Emmett's laid his cards on the table and voiced what Bella's been thinking about their feelings being wrong for each other.  I wonder how Bella will react once she's had time to process what Emmett has said.  Their circumstances, growing up, were so different from the norm, it's not surprising that they find themselves in this situation.

Please update again soon.

Jane x

Oh my!  Things are moving on and dreams are becoming reality.  I wonder how long they'll be able to keep this secret before someone gets suspicious or jealousies rear their heads again.

Thank you for continuing to write this, as taboo a subject as it is this is a brilliant story.

Jane x

Possessive Bella is peeping out from behind her hair, it seems those girls were just the push she needed to make up her mind.  I thought she was going to get caught in the toilet cubicle.

So happy to see this update. :)

Jane x

Awww, poor Charlie.  Not that Sue can replace Bella but at least he as someone to turn to.  Bella's so eager to start her new life, when you're in love it's like that though, everything is so exciting.

I've really enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing it.

Jane x

So Edward thinks that inviting her to his place for dinner won't raise any suspicion or start any rumors?  How long has he lived in a small town?  Doesn't he know they are the breeding ground for gossips and there are eyes everywhere, probably even in that coffee shop?  They are going to have to be sooo careful.

Jane x

Ooooh is Jasper a little jealous of Edward's and Alice's relationship or is he just a little overwhelmed by them?  I love how he calls her a little spaz, such a lovely brother, hahahahah!!

I'm glad you're back.

Jane x

I think it's only natural to have doubts, he wouldn't be human otherwise, lol.

Jane x

Well it sounds as though you've been through the mill lately, I'm so glad you're all better.

Soooo, Biology just got a bit more interesting then.....bwahahahaha!!

Jane x

Ooooh they're playing with fire but let the games begin.

Jane x

I love Bella's e-mail address, lol.  Bella gets her own desk?  Is this away from where she'd normally sit?

Jane x

Bwahahahahaha!!  Explain that one Bella.  I suppose she could always say the water was too hot, soap in her eye or she stubbed her toe......yeah, right. *snort*

I love that we're getting both POV's.

Jane x

Oh my God!  Bella's going to kill him looking like that, lol, he's either going to be a gibbering mess or all over her like a rash.  Mind you when she sees him in those jeans and that jumper, well all hell could let loose, hahahaha!  I love a man in a cable knit jumper.

Jane x

Wow, that's some house.  I love Bella's lack of filter, lol.

Jane x

Well, I didn't see Bella putting the brakes on, that was a pleasant surprise.  I'm glad they're going to get to know each other before jumping into bed.

Jane x

Oh no!  Poor Bella.  Is Edward going to panic because she doesn't show up at school?

Jane x

Hmm, I don't know what to make of Alice coming home.  Is she going to go completely mad at Edward?  Hmmm.

Jane x

Oh, my!!

Jane x

Bella's turning into such a naughty little minx, lol.  Edward will be a walking hard on all day after that message and picture.

Jane x

Hmmm, what does Edward have planned?  Lol.

Jane x

Lol, a little bathroom adventure for the pair of them.  I'm beginning to think I missed out at school 'cause none of this ever went on.......well not that I heard anyway, hahaha!!  I can't believe Bella left Edward soaked in his cum and hers, lol, good job everyone's gone home because he's going to look a right sight. *snort*

Jane x

That last line, so funny, pure Bella in all her eighteen year old awsomeness, lol.  I feel sorry for Charlie, Bella seems to have left him behind very easily.  I'm looking forward to the next update.

Jane x

I lost my review whilst it was trying to post.

Emily is completely delusional, I think she's a brick short of a load.  In fact I'd go as far as saying she's a psycho and the rest of her family are the same apart from Esme and Eleazar.  Edward and Bella need to get a restraining order out against her, she's dangerous and Bella's in the firing line.

Jane x

She wanted the baby and Emily is her daughter!  I take it that as Esme doesn't know about Emily that Carmen had her before meeting Esme's brother and marrying him.  Does he know about Emily?  I bet Carmen was also after a shed load of child maintenance as well, nice easy life bringing up a child with all that money.  That baby would have been a massive cash cow for her, thank God her plans have been thwarted.  I thought the interview went well but I felt that Edward couldn't really say much because his reasons for behaving the way he did are all wrapped up with Emily.  I can't wait for him and Bella to talk so we can have the story there.

Jane x

Is it really hurt and disappointment that she thinks she sees in her family's eyes or is she mistaken?  Do Esme and Carlisle actually know she's running away or has she lied to them?  I wouldn't really expect them to be condoning this behaviour or helping Bella like this, unless there are other things we don't know about Bella's family, but she said she has the greatest parents.

Great start, intriguing.

Jane x

Is Edward there?  Surely Jasper and Alice wouldn't let that happen.  Alice is way too protective of Bella and I get why, I really do, but she's forever telling her what to do and wear so I can't see her letting Edward get, knowingly, within a mile of Bella.  I'm thinking it's either Charlie or Bella's twin.  Edward had a bit of a melt down didn't he.  At least his mum knows how he really feels about Bella now.  The question is, will Bella listen to anyone that tries to tell her Edward's changed?  I hope she does but she when she finally talks to Edward she really needs to make him work for her forgiveness.

Jane x

I'm glad that Alec's turned up to support Bella, family is just what she needs at the moment.  I'm also glad that Jasper is recognising his friendship with Edward and that he's not all bad.  Whatever Emily did has had a major effect on Edward and unfortunately Bella has paid the price so far.  Bella has her head screwed on a bit more now and realises that she needs to listen to why Edward did what he did, so now it's up to her to decide on how hard she's going to make Edward work for her forgiveness.

Jane x

I'm so glad that everything went well for Riley, it could have all gone badly wrong.  Now he seems to have found his feet and his voice, Lauren's so stupid she can't see that, or doesn't want to, that everything that happens to her is of her own doing.

So it looks as though Bella is going to manage to stay upright and not faint, well so far anyway.  Will Alice be squealing when she meets Jasper?  Lol.  How lucky is Angela getting to go to the party, just wait until Lauren hears about this.

BTW, I think it's weird that there are different ages of consent in the states, surely they should just all be able to agree on one age and stick to it.

Jane x

The lemon was hot.  Edward really is a slut isn't he, but then when it's been handed to you on a plate ever since you started having sex what else could we expect.  Is Bella going to be the one that changes him?  Only time will tell on that one.  What did Bella mean, she didn't understand what he was saying about condoms and the pill?  Is she so naive that she knows nothing about contraception or was it that she couldn't seem to make sense of what he was saying through her champagne and lust induced need?  Silly, silly girl.  It's a hard lesson to learn, but never leave it to the man.  Anyway for such a man whore why didn't Edward have any condoms?......Huh, maybe I just answered my own question, lol.

Jane x

*throws hands up in the air*  They are all to blame for this situation.  I can't believe that none of them actually talk to each other, it's almost like they're 14, not older.  I'm beginning to feel sorry for Edward, he's getting all the blame for this and, although he's been a dick and up himself, it's not all his fault.  He needs to shout a bit louder to be heard instead of making throw away remarks about Bella dealing with the pregnancy herself. 

Alice!  What can I say?  A best friend should never be afraid of saying the hard things.  Bella may have been upset with her, angry even but like she said she could have gone to get the morning after pill.  Then again, Bella has no excuse for being so clueless about contraception at her age and knowing Edward's a player she should have insisted he used a condom.  Oh my God, I can't believe how stupid all of them have been.

Of course we all know how Edward truly feels about Bella but she just thinks she's been used.  She should really try contacting him to tell him she's pregnant but I guess she's going to do what teenagers do best, run and hide. *shakes head and sighs*

I'm looking forward to see what happens next.  Oh, and I'm so happy she threw up on Lauren and Jessica, lol.

Jane x

The sad answer to Bella's question is yes, the day could get worse.  Will her parents think he same as Edward, that she should get rid of the baby or will they have another plan?  The news would have been better coming from Bella but life's a bitch some times.  Edward's being such a dick about all this.  He has all these thoughts in his head and it almost seems like he might be able to have a rational conversation and actually find out the truth and reveal something of his true self as well.  But no, he just has to revert back to being a teenaged dickhead who has his head so far up his own arse he can't see what's right in front of him.

For all Bella's naivety and the rose coloured glasses she sees the world through, she doesn't deserve to be treated like this.  She's going to need to be a strong girl to get through this.

Jane x

That saying is definitely true and it's something that you come to realise over time, well it was for me anyway.  Edward is such a prick, I'd love to be a fly on the wall when he gets to Forks and Bella's not there, I'd pay good money to see what Carlisle and Esme say and do, lol.  Did Emily do something else to Edward as well, his behaviour is really extreme?

I hope you have a Merry Christmas and a fabulous New Year.

Jane x