Penname: Robsblueeyes [Real name: Jane
Member Since: 10 Dec 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hi,


My name is Jane and I'm a 44 year old single mum from Manchester in the UK. I'm a stay at home mum at the moment but I'm looking for a job, need to pay the bills. I discovered Twilight when the film came out and everyone was raving about the books. The books weren't well known in the UK at all, in fact, you may have found it difficult to find them at all, the film fuelled their popularity. Anyway, I bought the books for my daughter who wanted to know what all the fuss was about. That was 4 years ago and she's never read the books, not one word...I can hear you all gasping in disbelief...I however, devoured them. I couldn't get enough, completely absorbed was an understatement it was the best diet I've been on. I was so consumed by these characters the bare minimum of housework was done, my daughter reminded me every day that she was hungry and I needed to feed her, laundry was done at the last possible moment and the ironing got done on a need to wear basis...my obsession was born.


I'm Team Edward, always have been and always will be but Jasper owns a place in my heart too. After reading the books countless times I found both FanFiction and Twilighted through Twitter, some ladies on there were rec'ing some fics and my curiosity got the better of me. One of the first fics I read was Master of the Universe and I'm sure you've all read that one too, another one was Clipped Wings and Inked Armour, another amazing story and thus began my second obsession. I can't get enough, I'm on both sites every day unless the 'puter breaks then I go into withdrawal. Twilighted feeds my need for RP Fics mainly Rob and Jackson, some Kellan works it's way in there too but I read all types. I love slash and polyamorous stories and I've found that you find more of those on here. I've started to write a story myself, the characters popped into my head one day and now they won't leave me alone. I'm not sure that I'm a good enough writer that I'd ever put it out there for others to read, at the moment I'm just enjoying writing it for me.


So that's me, feel free to ask my anything you want to know, you can follow me on Twitter @Janeybo send a request and I'll follow you back, I usually drop in there every day at some point, sometimes I just lurk other times I'll spout complete nonsense, I don't think my followers realise that Janeybo and Robsblueeyes are one and the same person. All the Robporn on there keeps me busy and of course there's 100 Monkeys, Kellan and Peter Facinelli. I'm beginning to think this all might be taking over my life slightly...what life I hear you all cry...ah well, you have to have some pleasures don't you? I may even say it's a guilty one, my daughter would die of shame if she knew all this. BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
Jane x


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Last To Know by TBandJelly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 214]
Summary:


Summary:  One day, three missent texts and four couples... secrets spilled and relationships kindled but who will be the last to know? A soap opera of fanfic proportions. Rated M for language and slashy lemons. Written for the Drabble Wars DYAC Prompt challenge.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Family, Friendship, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12626 Read Count: 13099
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2012 Updated: 28 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

God, these kids shouldn't be let anywhere near a mobile phone.  Do none of them check who they're sending a message to at all??  Lol.  I was half exptecting that one to have gone to Esme or Carlisle as well.

Jane x

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Erm, didn't Jake already tell his parents?  Have we gone back in time?  Didn't he say 'expect my mum to be wearing an I love my gay son t-shirt.'  I'm confused, I have a blank expression just like his parents, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

So, I'm taking it that we went back in time.  I love Billy's reaction and how he compares Emmett to Leah, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

It's a big thing to come out.  It shouldn't be, we shouldn't just automatically assume that people are 'straight' thereby forcing those who aren't to declare their sexuality.  Nobody has to stand in front of their parents saying 'Mum, Dad I'm straight.'  In a perfect world everyone should just be able to be who they are and be with a boy, a girl or both without any declarations.

Now, will Sarah rat out Alice to Esme without ever realising it?  I get the feeling I'm about to find out.  *sniggers*

Jane x

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Lol, Alice got more than she bargained for.  I'm so glad that they're all happy for Jake and Emmett and there's no animosity.

Jane x

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Lol, I get the feeling that there's going to be a lot more mickey taking from their friends and families, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh yeah, they're going to take advantage of every opportunity to make a show of these boys.  Lol.

Jane x

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Lol, well you know what they say....Don't come a knockin' when the van's a rockin'.  Bwahahahaha!!!

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Lol, Emmett is a horny and desperate man, good job Mike's always living in hope....I mean prepared, hahahaha!!

Jane x

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Jeez, he's not the only one that's dead.  I need to lie down, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

That's a big step for their relationship but they do really love each other and it's only natural to not want any barriers between them.

Jane x

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

What a fucking day indeed!  I loved this, it's absolutely brilliant.  Thanks for writing and sharing it.

Jane x

Summary:

Beautiful Banner moved to chapter 1 comply with Google requirements

 

One is the mayor, happily married to the perfect woman, adored by the townspeople.  The other is the sheriff, distant, gruff and feared. They both have secrets that can only be shared behind closed doors.  Written for the pick a pic challenge.

 

Banner made by vbfb1

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4664 Read Count: 2358
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2012 Updated: 30 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww, I'm glad that it worked out for them both.  They found the courage to be themselves.

You were right at the beginning about groaning about Jacob but I really enjoyed this.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Thank you for "enduring" Jake for me... hehe... glad you liked it darlin' and thanks for reading!

xoxo

tb

Summary:

banner

 

Two men, lifelong friends, set out on their journey as lovers as they travel to Scotland for their honeymoon.  Will a secret wish they made so long ago come true?  Birthday shot for nmydreamz.

Thank you to Arc Morpheus for making the banner on such short notice!


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4472 Read Count: 963
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2012 Updated: 17 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww, that was so sweet and fuck hot all at the same time.  I love Edward and Jasper together.  I've always thought a Rob and Jackson slash story would be beyond hot but I'm not sure people are ready for that yet, *shrugs* maybe I'm just the biggest perv around, lol.  Anyway, your friend Cheryl is a girl after my own heart and I'm glad that she let us share in her birthday present.  Loved it.

Jane x

Summary:

Secret Longings (Banner)

Emmett and Bella fool around behind the Cullens' back. This is a collection of one-shots and two-shots, based around a human Bella and a vampire Emmett.

WARNING: OOC, lots of lemony goodness and bad language!

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3413 Read Count: 9413
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Story 2, Part A

Damn!  As hot at these two are together I can't help thinking they're going to get caught.  Is Bella still a virgin?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Story 2, Part B

Oh my God!  That was crazy hot but I'm still thinking the pair of them are crazy. Surely they won't be able to hide their feelings now they've taken their - relationship one step further.  Would you even call it a relationship?

Please write more, you have me squirming in my seat both from the hotness of the pair of them and from the uncomfortable situation they're in.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Story 1, Part A

Lol, is Bella going to get more than she bargained for?  What's going on that's made Emmett and Bella cheat on Rose and Edward?  I'm feeling sorry for Edward, not Rose though, I've never liked her, lol.  How is Alice not picking anything up or even Jasper, wouldn't he be able to feel their changing emotions?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Story 1, Part B

Edward seems more prudish than ever.  Is that why Bella's letting her feelings for Emmett out?  I still can't believe that a houseful of vampires haven't spotted what's going on right under their noses.

Jane x

Summary:

Ms. Dally: Cupid's Flame (Banner 3)

Who ever said friends with benefits was a bad thing?

WARNING: AH, OOC, multiple pairings, femslash, slash, threesomes, kink, polyamory, lots of lemony goodness, and bad language!


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Rose, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Femme Slash, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ms. Dally
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8260 Read Count: 22558
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2012 Updated: 20 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Our One Rule

Hmmm, siblings and cousins, lol, definitely sensing something, most probably disaster.  This is interesting but I notice it hasn't updated in a while.  Please say you're going to finish it.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Keeping Calm

Oh dear God!  Who is this calling Jasper "Jazzykins"?  I think I want to be sick, lol.  Bella can come and live at my house and cook for me all the time, I hate cooking, lol.  This might seem like an odd question to some but knowing your other fic (which I love) I don't think it is; do Emmett, Alice, Rose and Jasper enjoy 'sexy times' together as well or is there nothing between the siblings and cousins?

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Frisky On the Floor

Oh my God!  Cynthia is vile, chuck her out now!  So if she's Alice's sister are Alice and Emmett half siblings then?  My head is spinning but not as much as Emmett's and Bella's with the verbal tennis that's going on, lol.  Just wait until Rose gets home I'm thinking there might be more fisty cuffs, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: You Are Mine

Lol, Bella's having a busy day, bwahahahaha!!  I'm glad they threw  Cyanide Cynthia out she's beyond vile.  She only wanted Alice to come to the wedding to rub her face in it, she's jealous and wants what Alice has but I bet if she got it she still wouldn't be happy.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Just Some Dress

Lol, I really love this Bella, she's so confident, thoughtful, loving, snarky, funny, protective and probably a dozen other things as well as definitely flirty, she wasn't kidding with that one.  I'd love Edward to appear.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: A Day's Work

Oh my God, Bella!  What are you doing?  Put that man down.  Walk away from the hottie.  How stupid is Tanya?  I've just realised the month that this stopped updating.  Please say you'll finish it, I, for one, really love it.

Jane x

Summary:

Twisted Fascinations (banner)

 

It's natural to feel attracted to someone. It is not natural, however, to feel attracted to your sister or brother.

WARNING: AH, OOC, incest, lemons, and bad language!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20775 Read Count: 94345
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2012 Updated: 07 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Connected

Poor Sue having to explain sex to a seven year old boy who's not even hers, lol.  Emmett's pretty curious for such a young boy, mind you, I only have a daughter and if she was curious at seven she never said a word.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Daddy's Dinky

Lol, a skin coloured cucumber, hahahaha!!  Oh my, that's one way of describing it.  I almost expected her to say something but her curiosity got the better of her and she stayed quiet.  I think most kids have seen their dad's dinky. *snort*

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Don't Be Like Me

Bit of a shock for Emmett there but given how close their relationship is, especially at that age, it was bound to happen.  It sounds as though they have been left completely to their own devices and Renee hasn't been their to say that they shouldn't shower together.  It's only now that Emmett has had a sexual reaction to his sister that the thought could be entering his head that this is wrong.

Have you read Flowers in the Attic?  If you haven't you should, fantastic book and due to their circumstances they developed and incestuous relationship.  Like you I don't condone this but it seemed right in that situation.

Jane x



Author's Response: Thank you for all the reviews - I'm glad someone else understands that, while wrong, this situation can happen under Bella and Emmett's circumstances. I haven't actually read Flowers in the Attic. I looked it up; it sounds slightly too gruesome for me, but it does have some very interesting concepts. That is why I like writing this story - and because it brings out rather funny reactions in some people ;] Happy reading xxx

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Natural

Aww, poor Bella she's so confused, she just doesn't understand why her brother would pull away from her.  She truly does not think that there was anything sexual happening to cause that reaction.  She really is a product of her upbringing.  Neither she nor Emmett are to blame for this, they have lacked parental guidance at a crucial time in their lives.  It's good to be curious when you're young but there comes a time when those shared bath times should stop.

This is so confusing for them both.

Jane x

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Pretending

Emmett's really struggling and trying to ignore his feelings for Bella.  Pretending that the girls he takes to bed are Bella is probably not the best idea he's had, but then he's a hormone riddled teenager who's just trying to make sense of everything.  How would you ever be able to tell anyone about this?  He's so alone.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Help Me

Listening to her brother though those thin walls must be unbearable for Bella knowing that he doesn't want her to be like him.  Has she started to have feelings for Emmett like he does for her?  I can't work out whether she's still feeling her normal close sisterly love for him or whether things have started to move on.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Dangerous Line

Their relationship has developed in such a way that for Emmett it almost seems like he's dating but without any kissing or sex.  I'm still wondering whether Bella's as oblivious as Emmett thinks she is.

Jane x

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Heady Aroma

So I got my answer, she was oblivious until Emmett had his face buried in her panties.  Now she's having the same feelings as Emmett but she doesn't feel quite so guilty about imagining it's Emmett that's touching her.  How long will it take Emmett to realise that things have changed?

Jane x

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Popularity

Oh dear God, Bella's going on a date.  I get the feeling Emmett's going to get all possessive, jealous and protective of her.  In a way that's what Bella's been with him by keeping all the 'sluts' away.

Jane x

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Lying

Oh yes, jealous and possessive Emmett is in the building.  Is it Bella's own feelings for him that's stopping her from telling him about the date or the fact that she know's he going to be all possessive and protective?  Maybe it's both.

Jane x

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Visitor

Oh so not a good move, a payback date.  Then again, maybe this is what it takes for one of them to confess their feelings.  God, I can't believe a wrote that but there it is.  They can't go on like this much longer, no matter what happens something has to be said.

I know this must be hard to write, I wouldn't even know where to begin but I'd love it if you could make your chapters a bit longer.

Jane x

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Gentlemen

Emmett and Bella really need to talk.  One of them is going to have to be brave and explain what they're feeling.  I know Emmett's jealous and angry but still I don't know how he could let Rose talk about Bella like that, she might be beautiful on the outside but she's ugly on the inside.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Believe In Me

Wow!  Will Bella run scared or will she embrace this?  They both know this is wrong and they've tried not to give in but when you feel love this deeply and you've had no guidance from being small, well what can I say, I hope she embraces it, they deserve to be happy and loved.  What they feel for each other is far beyond familial love.  This is such a sensitive topic but you write it so well.

I can't believe I missed this update but the good news for me is that I still have another chapter to read, woohoo!!

Jane x

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Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Euphoria

Oh poor Bella, she ran and that was only natural.  It seem she did a better job of convincing herself that Emmett wouldn't want her that way than I thought and now all of that's been blown out of the water.  I've said it before and I'll say it again, they really need to talk.  I think it's time for Emmett to man up and tell her how he feels but, of course, he's going to be sat downstairs hating himself and thinking that Bella will think he's some kind of sick monster whilst Bella is upstairs thinking that she's sick and twisted.

Please update soon, I really love this story it's most definitely fascinating.

Jane x

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Date: 20 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Heartbeats

You're back, woohoo!!!  Please don't forget about us, we may not be many but we love this story.

So, Emmett finally cracked.  It was bound to happen and I'm glad that it has. Emmett's laid his cards on the table and voiced what Bella's been thinking about their feelings being wrong for each other.  I wonder how Bella will react once she's had time to process what Emmett has said.  Their circumstances, growing up, were so different from the norm, it's not surprising that they find themselves in this situation.

Please update again soon.

Jane x

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Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Dreams

Oh my, that was some dream, but was it really a dream?  Bella's subconscious is screaming at her, was Emmett helping it along?  Surely she can't deny how she feels about Emmett any longer, can she?  I can't wait for the next chapter.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Accept It

Oh my!  Things are moving on and dreams are becoming reality.  I wonder how long they'll be able to keep this secret before someone gets suspicious or jealousies rear their heads again.

Thank you for continuing to write this, as taboo a subject as it is this is a brilliant story.

Jane x

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Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Morning

Renee has been absent from her children's lives for so long, even when she was there she wasn't much of a parent. I'm wondering if she'll suspect that Emmett and Bella's relationship has changed in that way or whether she just thinks that Emmett has turned into Bella's parent.

I'm glad to see you're back. :)

Jane x

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Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Wound Up

Possessive Bella is peeping out from behind her hair, it seems those girls were just the push she needed to make up her mind.  I thought she was going to get caught in the toilet cubicle.

So happy to see this update. :)

Jane x

Summary: Past Featured Story

chemistry

banner made by: ME !!

Bella is in her senior year of high school.  She hated all science until she met Mr. Cullen, her biology teacher.  He is older, she is just 18. Will their chemistry last past the doors of the classroom?

This a B/E story line

I should have been patient and waited for my Beta  she is great !!

fs

 

 

 

This has been Beta'd by RAH07890


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14159 Read Count: 54327
[Report This] Published: 23 Aug 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I can't believe I nearly missed these last two chapters, I've no idea how they nearly got past me.  Well Bella's a virgin no more and about to start her new life with Edward, she's going to miss her dad.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Awww, poor Charlie.  Not that Sue can replace Bella but at least he as someone to turn to.  Bella's so eager to start her new life, when you're in love it's like that though, everything is so exciting.

I've really enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing it.

Jane x

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Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Hormones are raging making Bella rather brave.  Mr Cullen didn't mind his student suddenly calling him Edward in public either, did he even notice?  Did anyone else in that coffee shop notice anything?

Looking forward to more.

Jane x

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Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

So Edward thinks that inviting her to his place for dinner won't raise any suspicion or start any rumors?  How long has he lived in a small town?  Doesn't he know they are the breeding ground for gossips and there are eyes everywhere, probably even in that coffee shop?  They are going to have to be sooo careful.

Jane x

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Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Hmm.  Is she in trouble or is Edward trying to hide his relief that she's actually turned up?

Jane x

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Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Ooooh is Jasper a little jealous of Edward's and Alice's relationship or is he just a little overwhelmed by them?  I love how he calls her a little spaz, such a lovely brother, hahahahah!!

I'm glad you're back.

Jane x

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Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I hope she's sent it to the right number.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I think it's only natural to have doubts, he wouldn't be human otherwise, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

'My Bella' Edward's so far gone already.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Remember he has seen her before

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well it sounds as though you've been through the mill lately, I'm so glad you're all better.

Soooo, Biology just got a bit more interesting then.....bwahahahaha!!

Jane x



Author's Response:

Yes real life sucks alot sometimes  would be great if we could live in the life we write about sometimes !!

Glad you are enjoyng this I normaly don't write drabbles but it is a good way to get me back into writing !

check out my other storys I will get them finished  !

Enjoy and thanks for the review's .

         Nancy

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Lol, there goes Bella stating the obvious. *snort*

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ooooh they're playing with fire but let the games begin.

Jane x

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Lol, Jakey the sometimes stupid puppy, hahahaha!

Jane x

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love Bella's e-mail address, lol.  Bella gets her own desk?  Is this away from where she'd normally sit?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Well, well, well, Mr Cullen has been spying on Bella, lol.  He's sure been biding his time if he thought she was older, good job he didn't approach her and ask her out.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Bwahahahahaha!!  Explain that one Bella.  I suppose she could always say the water was too hot, soap in her eye or she stubbed her toe......yeah, right. *snort*

I love that we're getting both POV's.

Jane x

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Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Edward is so besotted with Bella.

Jane x

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Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh my God!  Bella's going to kill him looking like that, lol, he's either going to be a gibbering mess or all over her like a rash.  Mind you when she sees him in those jeans and that jumper, well all hell could let loose, hahahaha!  I love a man in a cable knit jumper.

Jane x

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Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oooh Bella, forward much?  Lol.

Jane x

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow, that's some house.  I love Bella's lack of filter, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Longer chapters are good for me, lol.  These two sure are moving fast.

Jane x

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Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Well, I didn't see Bella putting the brakes on, that was a pleasant surprise.  I'm glad they're going to get to know each other before jumping into bed.

Jane x

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Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oooh, what's he bought for her?

Jane x

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Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh no!  Poor Bella.  Is Edward going to panic because she doesn't show up at school?

Jane x

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Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm hoping that Edward will be deleting his e-mails.  Is it really a good idea to be using his school e-mail like this?  I can't wait to see what the surprise is.

Jane x

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Hmm, I don't know what to make of Alice coming home.  Is she going to go completely mad at Edward?  Hmmm.

Jane x

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Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Well thank God he realised about using his school e-mail account.  I'm still wondering about Alice though, how old is she?  Isn't she going to think this whole thing between Edward and Bella is weird?  I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Jane x

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Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh, my!!

Jane x

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Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Lol, I hope they didn't hear him either.

Jane x

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Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Bella's turning into such a naughty little minx, lol.  Edward will be a walking hard on all day after that message and picture.

Jane x

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Date: 23 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Oh my God!!  So hot!!  Lovin' the piccies.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Hmmm, what does Edward have planned?  Lol.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Oooh time to meet Alice and Jasper.  Will either of them be weird with Bella?

Jane x

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Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Lol, a little bathroom adventure for the pair of them.  I'm beginning to think I missed out at school 'cause none of this ever went on.......well not that I heard anyway, hahaha!!  I can't believe Bella left Edward soaked in his cum and hers, lol, good job everyone's gone home because he's going to look a right sight. *snort*

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Well I didn't see that coming.  I thought Jasper was a bit odd and it was odd that Alice was ignoring it but I never expected this.  Bella's made her mind up very quickly.  What will they tell Charlie?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

That last line, so funny, pure Bella in all her eighteen year old awsomeness, lol.  I feel sorry for Charlie, Bella seems to have left him behind very easily.  I'm looking forward to the next update.

Jane x

All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 785]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 166806
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11

Oh my God!  I can't believe he's there.  It's bad enough that his mum is Bella's doctor but at least she's bound by confidentiality.  She didn't engineer this did she?  I hope Bella can hold it together, it should be clear to Edward by now that Bella isn't going to be told what to do.  Irina ia a complete bitch and from what Alice has said she should be sat there thinking 'but for the grace of God there go I' because she could so easily be in Bella's situation.

I can't wait for the next update.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Outtake (Emily)

I lost my review whilst it was trying to post.

Emily is completely delusional, I think she's a brick short of a load.  In fact I'd go as far as saying she's a psycho and the rest of her family are the same apart from Esme and Eleazar.  Edward and Bella need to get a restraining order out against her, she's dangerous and Bella's in the firing line.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 20

Edward should have called the police, Emily broke into his house and assaulted him, she's caused so much trouble and she's still doing it, it's time she got her comeuppance.

I'm glad that Edward and Bella are getting on better.  They need to be together now more than ever.  Bella needs his support and Edward needs to part of the whole experience, it will help him bond more with the twins when they're born and also the support he can give to Bella will deepen their relationship.  You can't take things too slow when you have babies due in a few months time, they're going to need both their parents.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

She wanted the baby and Emily is her daughter!  I take it that as Esme doesn't know about Emily that Carmen had her before meeting Esme's brother and marrying him.  Does he know about Emily?  I bet Carmen was also after a shed load of child maintenance as well, nice easy life bringing up a child with all that money.  That baby would have been a massive cash cow for her, thank God her plans have been thwarted.  I thought the interview went well but I felt that Edward couldn't really say much because his reasons for behaving the way he did are all wrapped up with Emily.  I can't wait for him and Bella to talk so we can have the story there.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Lol, I remember that feeling as a teenager having a crush on an actor or pop star, mine was on Simon Le Bon from Duran Duran, hahaha, now I'm showing my age.

I love this, I totally got swept up in their excitement.  I can't wait to find out how Lauren gets on with Riley, lol.  I bet she was like a screaming banshee at that studio door.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Is it really hurt and disappointment that she thinks she sees in her family's eyes or is she mistaken?  Do Esme and Carlisle actually know she's running away or has she lied to them?  I wouldn't really expect them to be condoning this behaviour or helping Bella like this, unless there are other things we don't know about Bella's family, but she said she has the greatest parents.

Great start, intriguing.

Jane x



Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I hope that you enjoy this story. I really enjoy reading all reviews and there is a lot of drama to come. here's a teaser to chapter 2 Teaser for chapter 2 of All Alone. Esme kept looking at me while she put about 4 pancakes onto my plate. I just couldn't get the smile off my face. "I would be smiling too if I won the kind of prize that you won" she laughed. Just then Alice came running in wearing the latest fashion. "Mum, can I use daddy's photocopier?" Alice's father was the head of the pediatric unit in Forks generel hospital. "Yes dear" Esme replied. Alice ran into her father's office with a note or letter in her hand. What is the little pixie up to now? She came back 5 minutes later with a small bag filled with copies of the note or letter. "Ali, what is all this?" "Well Bella, you know just as well as I do that Lauren is going to try and get out of this bet. So what I did was photo copy the agreement 200 times to either hang up on the lockers or hand them out to anyone that will take them, just so that she knows that she has to go through with it. Otherwise she will be labeled a coward, she smirked obviously pleased with herself. I was surprised. I can't believe that I have never thought of that. It was beyond brilliant. "OK you little pixie, lets get to school and put this plan into action," I grinned.

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Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Oh dear!  Bella has already got to Edward, he can't sleep with any other girl that's a brunette.  He's in denial about how much he's actually fallen for her, by his own admittance she is his dream girl.  I just hope that when he sees Bella he's not going to be a total dick.  I can understand his reaction to the news of the baby and why he would feel tricked, I mean it that age of 16 if you asked someone if they were taking contraception you would expect them to know what you were talking about.  Edward can't be held responsible for Bella's naivety.

Jane x



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Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14

Is Edward there?  Surely Jasper and Alice wouldn't let that happen.  Alice is way too protective of Bella and I get why, I really do, but she's forever telling her what to do and wear so I can't see her letting Edward get, knowingly, within a mile of Bella.  I'm thinking it's either Charlie or Bella's twin.  Edward had a bit of a melt down didn't he.  At least his mum knows how he really feels about Bella now.  The question is, will Bella listen to anyone that tries to tell her Edward's changed?  I hope she does but she when she finally talks to Edward she really needs to make him work for her forgiveness.

Jane x

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Date: 19 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13

I knew Carmen was up to something.  Now what about Jake?  I know I was giving him the benefit of the doubt but now he's turned creepy, I don't like him. What does Edward have that Carmen wants?  What are her plans that Esme and Carlisle could spoil them?  Is she planning on some sort of bizarre kidnapping plot of Bella and Edward's baby?  My mind is running wild.  I believe that Edward does truly love Bella.  He's thought about her constantly since he first met her and he's been slowly changing the way he thinks and that's affected how he lives his life.  He can't do a one night stand anymore or any sort of casual hook up.  Bella and the baby have completely taken over his life.  I can't wait to find out what happened with Emily.

Jane x

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Date: 22 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15

I'm glad that Alec's turned up to support Bella, family is just what she needs at the moment.  I'm also glad that Jasper is recognising his friendship with Edward and that he's not all bad.  Whatever Emily did has had a major effect on Edward and unfortunately Bella has paid the price so far.  Bella has her head screwed on a bit more now and realises that she needs to listen to why Edward did what he did, so now it's up to her to decide on how hard she's going to make Edward work for her forgiveness.

Jane x

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Date: 27 May 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19

Sandy is such a jealous bitch and she definitely deserved to be fired.  If I remember correctly didn't she, on at least one occasion, invite Edward into the copy room with her?  In fact, her behaviour was like a pavlovian response whenever she saw Edward, she'd arrange cover for reception and head to the copy room.  I'm glad that Edward went to talk to Bella, apologised and told her what he wanted.  I think Bella's initial requests were too restrictive to allow for much to grow between them, apart from the babies, lol.  What's Carmen up to now and surely if she's put something in writing that's threatening Bella or the babies then the police should be involved?  As for Edward's mystery guest. Well, I think that list is becoming a long one now and I'm rubbish a guessing, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I'm so glad that everything went well for Riley, it could have all gone badly wrong.  Now he seems to have found his feet and his voice, Lauren's so stupid she can't see that, or doesn't want to, that everything that happens to her is of her own doing.

So it looks as though Bella is going to manage to stay upright and not faint, well so far anyway.  Will Alice be squealing when she meets Jasper?  Lol.  How lucky is Angela getting to go to the party, just wait until Lauren hears about this.

BTW, I think it's weird that there are different ages of consent in the states, surely they should just all be able to agree on one age and stick to it.

Jane x



Author's Response: thank you for your review. Im happy that you are enjoying the story. I love reading them all. here is a teaser for chapter 4 "I want to brief you on what you can expect from tonight. The entire cast and crew will be there. Now as you know there was a lot of competitions for girls to win tickets to the premiere but Atlantic 252 gave away a big prize. The winner won invitations to tonights cocktail party, the after party and tickets for the premiere so you will be meeting the winner of that tonight," he grinned knowing that I hate these things. "I know about this Em. So some tennybopper is going to have her dream come true by attending a hollywood party," I sighed. He took a picture out of an envelope and handed it to me. "Does Isabella look like a tennybopper to you?" I looked at the picture in my hands and for a few seconds I forgot to breath. She was beyond beautiful. She had long flowing mahogony hair that framed her beautiful heart shaped face. She also has deep brown eyes that I could get lost in and a pouty mouth. My Jeans felt incrediably tight from imagining those lips wrapped around me. All of a sudden I'm very excited to attend this cocktail party.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I hope the bet with Lauren doesn't have a bad effect on Riley, knowing that he has a massive crush on her and then her kissing him, out of the blue, like that, well this could seriously mess with his head.  He might be the smelly kid at school but he still has feelings.  I didn't think that Lauren would actually go through with it.

All of a sudden Bella has a hundred new best friends, God kids are shallow and I'm so glad that she recognises them for what they are.  Lol, Mike was a bit desperate wasn't he.  At least Bella and Alice are now friends with Angela, I get the impression she was a bit of a loner.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter and hearing from Edward and his family.

Jane x



Author's Response: thank you for the review. i'm glad you are enjoying the story. chapter 3 is with the beta at the moment so hopefully it will be up sometime in the next day or 2. until then here is a teaser to keep you going. was suddenly getting very nervous thinking that somebody played a cruel joke on me and I was ready to run all the way back to forks and hide under my bed for the rest of my life. Somebody tapped me on the shoulder. "Miss Swan?" I turned around and saw a big man. He looked to be in his early or middle 20's. He was the size of a wrestler but some how I felt safe in his company. Y-Yeah that's me," I stammered. "My name is Emmett Masen. I am the assistant director of BITE. I wish to welcome you to the olympic." As he was talking the only thing I could think about was that his last name was Masen. "I'm sorry, did you say your last name was Masen?"

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: All Alone

The lemon was hot.  Edward really is a slut isn't he, but then when it's been handed to you on a plate ever since you started having sex what else could we expect.  Is Bella going to be the one that changes him?  Only time will tell on that one.  What did Bella mean, she didn't understand what he was saying about condoms and the pill?  Is she so naive that she knows nothing about contraception or was it that she couldn't seem to make sense of what he was saying through her champagne and lust induced need?  Silly, silly girl.  It's a hard lesson to learn, but never leave it to the man.  Anyway for such a man whore why didn't Edward have any condoms?......Huh, maybe I just answered my own question, lol.

Jane x



Author's Response: To answer your questions jane. Edward is used to been with women who always carried condoms so that's why he doesn't carry them. He only has sex with virgins without one on the condition that they are covered because he is clean and he knows that he is. when she answered his question about been on the pill she wasn't thinking straight. he was with her and all she could think was been with him so she wasn't really thinking. thanks for your review. I love reading them all. I hope that you continue to enjoy the story. here is a teaser for chapter 5 "Bella, what is wrong? Did you just come from Edward's room?" Jasper got up off the floor and put his arms around me. "What happened darlin," he asked. I started crying and told them both the whole story. Jasper eyes filled with fury when I told them that he was trying to think of a way to leave me so that I would'nt be little miss clingy. He got up and started pacing the room. "That bastard. I know that he is a manwhore but this is a new low even for him. I see the way he treats girls but they are experienced and they usually have a different guy in their bed every night and don't get me started on Tanya Denali. I turned a blind eye before but never again," he yelled angrily.

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Bella's star struck and really shouldn't have jumped back into Edward's bed a second time without talking first, she should have insisted but then she wouldn't would she. 

Was that Lisa on the phone pretending to be Edward's fiancee?  I don't believe he's engaged for a second.  I think Jasper would have told her that Edward's engaged or he would have told Alice.  Either way Bella would have known before she jumped into bed with him the first time that he was unavailable.  So now, rather than confront him like she should, she's going to run away......again. *sigh*

Jane x



Author's Response: hi thanks for the review. I love reading them and i'm so happy for the response I get from this story. enjoy the rest of the story here is a teaser for chapter 6 I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging. "Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly. He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her. "What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

*throws hands up in the air*  They are all to blame for this situation.  I can't believe that none of them actually talk to each other, it's almost like they're 14, not older.  I'm beginning to feel sorry for Edward, he's getting all the blame for this and, although he's been a dick and up himself, it's not all his fault.  He needs to shout a bit louder to be heard instead of making throw away remarks about Bella dealing with the pregnancy herself. 

Alice!  What can I say?  A best friend should never be afraid of saying the hard things.  Bella may have been upset with her, angry even but like she said she could have gone to get the morning after pill.  Then again, Bella has no excuse for being so clueless about contraception at her age and knowing Edward's a player she should have insisted he used a condom.  Oh my God, I can't believe how stupid all of them have been.

Of course we all know how Edward truly feels about Bella but she just thinks she's been used.  She should really try contacting him to tell him she's pregnant but I guess she's going to do what teenagers do best, run and hide. *shakes head and sighs*

I'm looking forward to see what happens next.  Oh, and I'm so happy she threw up on Lauren and Jessica, lol.

Jane x



Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia. I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was. She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes. "Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice. I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do. "Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face. Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said. I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back. "Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: All Alone

I'm sooooo jealous.  Have a great time.

Jane xx

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Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

The sad answer to Bella's question is yes, the day could get worse.  Will her parents think he same as Edward, that she should get rid of the baby or will they have another plan?  The news would have been better coming from Bella but life's a bitch some times.  Edward's being such a dick about all this.  He has all these thoughts in his head and it almost seems like he might be able to have a rational conversation and actually find out the truth and reveal something of his true self as well.  But no, he just has to revert back to being a teenaged dickhead who has his head so far up his own arse he can't see what's right in front of him.

For all Bella's naivety and the rose coloured glasses she sees the world through, she doesn't deserve to be treated like this.  She's going to need to be a strong girl to get through this.

Jane x



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Date: 19 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

LA here we come.  I'm glad that they're going to have someone to stay with who are still related to Alice.  I can't believe Bella's parents were so cruel to her, they've made everything much worse than it needed to be.  I still think Edward's reaction is over the top.  Everyone gets their heart broken at some point in their life, yes he was young but is he really going to let that one experience dictate the rest of his life?  By his own admittance he had to make Bella his, he's denying everything he feels for Bella because of one experience and the possibility it might happen again.  He's going to be sad and lonely if he doesn't change.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

That saying is definitely true and it's something that you come to realise over time, well it was for me anyway.  Edward is such a prick, I'd love to be a fly on the wall when he gets to Forks and Bella's not there, I'd pay good money to see what Carlisle and Esme say and do, lol.  Did Emily do something else to Edward as well, his behaviour is really extreme?

I hope you have a Merry Christmas and a fabulous New Year.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: All Alone

Quick thinking by Esme and Carlisle to have recorded that conversation, now they have proof, from the horses mouth, of everything Edward's tried to do and that he's the daddy.  Edward's still determined though, he seems to be stuck with the idea that this is the worst thing to happen for Bella, for him and the baby.  So Edward got Emily pregnant but what else happened to have Edward so adamant that the baby shouldn't be born?  He's at war with himself over this as he's still thinking of Bella as an angel, beautiful and innocent, he's not as nasty as he's painting himself, more went on with Emily to make him feel and think the way he does.  You're such a tease, lol.  I'm glad that Edward's parents would be supportive of Bella as well given the opportunity.

Jane x