Penname: Robsblueeyes [Real name: Jane
Member Since: 10 Dec 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hi,


My name is Jane and I'm a 44 year old single mum from Manchester in the UK. I'm a stay at home mum at the moment but I'm looking for a job, need to pay the bills. I discovered Twilight when the film came out and everyone was raving about the books. The books weren't well known in the UK at all, in fact, you may have found it difficult to find them at all, the film fuelled their popularity. Anyway, I bought the books for my daughter who wanted to know what all the fuss was about. That was 4 years ago and she's never read the books, not one word...I can hear you all gasping in disbelief...I however, devoured them. I couldn't get enough, completely absorbed was an understatement it was the best diet I've been on. I was so consumed by these characters the bare minimum of housework was done, my daughter reminded me every day that she was hungry and I needed to feed her, laundry was done at the last possible moment and the ironing got done on a need to wear basis...my obsession was born.


I'm Team Edward, always have been and always will be but Jasper owns a place in my heart too. After reading the books countless times I found both FanFiction and Twilighted through Twitter, some ladies on there were rec'ing some fics and my curiosity got the better of me. One of the first fics I read was Master of the Universe and I'm sure you've all read that one too, another one was Clipped Wings and Inked Armour, another amazing story and thus began my second obsession. I can't get enough, I'm on both sites every day unless the 'puter breaks then I go into withdrawal. Twilighted feeds my need for RP Fics mainly Rob and Jackson, some Kellan works it's way in there too but I read all types. I love slash and polyamorous stories and I've found that you find more of those on here. I've started to write a story myself, the characters popped into my head one day and now they won't leave me alone. I'm not sure that I'm a good enough writer that I'd ever put it out there for others to read, at the moment I'm just enjoying writing it for me.


So that's me, feel free to ask my anything you want to know, you can follow me on Twitter @Janeybo send a request and I'll follow you back, I usually drop in there every day at some point, sometimes I just lurk other times I'll spout complete nonsense, I don't think my followers realise that Janeybo and Robsblueeyes are one and the same person. All the Robporn on there keeps me busy and of course there's 100 Monkeys, Kellan and Peter Facinelli. I'm beginning to think this all might be taking over my life slightly...what life I hear you all cry...ah well, you have to have some pleasures don't you? I may even say it's a guilty one, my daughter would die of shame if she knew all this. BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
Jane x


TWITTER - @Janeybo    


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Remarkable by evilnat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 40]
Summary: Past Featured Story

remarkable

Bella Swan has a thing for men in suits. She has an even bigger thing for men with tattoos. What happens when she encounters a remarkable specimen by the name of Edward Cullen? AH BxE

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read , TBR
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16520 Read Count: 31022
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So dazzled, she's going to need sunglasses, lol.  I loved their date it was perfect especially Bella's filter failure, "I want to see them all."  There's nothing like laying your cards on the table.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Lol, it's one of your worst nightmares, dinner arriving at the same time as your date, hahahaha!!  At least they had a laugh about it and look what it lead on to, stuff the apple pie (one of my favs) we got lemon meringue instead (another one of my favs). Hehe!!

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Their clothes are just complete foreplay, it's so hot.  What more can I say?  Lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow, in a rush much, Edward.  Lol.  That was effin hot.  Considering how much Bella likes ink, does she have any?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ha!  There's the answer to my question, Bella has a tattoo.  Lol, bunking off work to have a lovely lazy Friday, what better way to start a long weekend.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I love how they still just want to be on their own together even when they're surrounded by their friends. *sigh*

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue

Awww, they're married and now so are Jasper and Alice.  I have a picture in my head of Bella disco dancing to a slow song........crazy woman, lol.  They still can't keep their hands off each other and just about stay the right side of inappropriate.  I really loved this, thanks for sharing.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Hi Jane!

Thank you so much for your reviews!  They made my week!  

Im glad you liked it!

Nat

xx

Rescue Me by KellanCougar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

KC - Rescue Me

KC - Rescue Me outtake

KC - Rescue Me, long days hard nights

 

Summary: After his ex's betrayal, Jasper had withdrawn into a life of isolation. But one night, stranded by the side of the road, he finds himself rescued in an entirely different way.

WARNING - Adult themes

Banner 1 by vbfb1
Banner 2 by Nanadb

Banner 3 by Ellie Wolf

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Emmett/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22199 Read Count: 5131
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 20 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, no messing around there then........well, plenty of messin' but no hanging around with the idle chit chat get to know you stuff, hahahaha!!

A hot mechanic is just what the doctor ordered.  How stupid was Edward giving up Jasper to marry Bella?  Personally, I think he may have taken leave of his senses. *grins*

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Thank God Jasper sent Emmett all that stuff and the plane ticket.  I felt like banging their heads together, both of them nearly saying what they want but not quite.  I have no idea how they managed to go their separate ways a second time without saying something.  At least Jasper had the presence of mind to note Emmett's address, woohoo!!

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Poor Jasper, I can't believe what's happened to him and that his band mates all but abandoned him, thank God he had Paul around to help him.  This has really knocked his confidence out of him, I should imagine he's feeling a whole shed load of emotions right now, I think he's scared of leaving that hotel and going outside.  It's been his sanctuary for a couple of weeks and now it's turning into his prison, Emmett really needs to work out a way of getting him outside.

After everything that's happened they still can't say that they want a relationship.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm so glad that Jasper's on the mend and that Emmett convinced him to go home to his family for some love, rest and recuperation. 

Emmett's so confused with their 'relationship' he doesn't know what he is to Jasper or how Jasper feels about him.  His family are under the impression that Emmett's his boyfriend.  These two really need to talk and I hope they manage to do that before Emmett slips away back home.

So just in case you aren't able to update I hope you and yours have a Merry Chistmas and a Happy New Year.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Awwww, I'm so happy that it all worked out for them.  I got worried when Emmett was talking about leaving and letting Jasper get on with his life and the band. Thank God they managed to sort that out.

I really loved this story, thanks for sharing it.

Jane x

ps. I'm obviously late for Christmas and New Year but I can say Happy Easter, I hope you had a good one.

xx



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I loved that people stuck with these two despite their inability to see what was right under their noses! 

Happy Easter to you too :)

~KC

Summary:

KC - All I Want to Hear 2

 

Summary: A voice can change everything; it can consume your waking hours and weave its way into your dreams. In the end, what happens when it's all you want to hear?

 

WARNING - Adult themes

 

Banner by Stephanie LVT NcNutty


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Carlisle (Slash)
Genre: Angst, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61556 Read Count: 6204
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 09 Oct 2018
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh my God!  What's on the paper??  They can't leave it like this, they can't ignore the connection they have.  I can't believe that neither of them said anything when Carlisle was leaving, I wanted to shout at them, lol.  I am pleasantly surprised that there is only a four year age gap between these two, from the way Carlisle thinks and behaves I was expecting him to be older around mid thirties.  Anyway, I'm off to find out what's on that piece of paper.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow!  That was amazing.  Finally, they're back together again with all the nervousness and anticipation that a new relationship brings with it, you could almost touch the awkwardness that they felt.  I'm dying to find out about Carlisle, what makes him the way he is.  I'm really glad you're back, I've missed this story.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this, I'm intrigued to find out what happens and also why Carlisle has become such a recluse.  Why did he impose this on himself?  Is this something that just crept up on him or did something happen to make him withdraw more into his own safe world?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Why would Edward regret getting to know Carlisle?  What happened to Carlisle in college to make him this way?  Why does he feel shame and why would he feel that he's going to disappoint Edward?  God, it's like the ending of Soap, lol.  You're probably too young to remember that.

The voice is a very powerful tool and both Edward and Carlisle are using theirs amazingly, I need to lie down, haha!  I hope you update soon, I need my questions answered.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Thanks Jane! These two boys are a constant surprise to me and don't follow any plan I try and set down for them.
I know Carlisle's back story, but I have no idea how and when that will come out. They only talk to me in the dead of night so, when they do decide to talk, I let them.

This story will be a slow update because it is so unlike anything else I write and requires a certain mindset that is impossible to force. I can tell you thought that this story is 100% guaranteed to continue. I adore them and I want to see where they take me. Hopefully my lovely readers will stick around for the ride :) 

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Poor Edward, with all Carlisle's insecurities coming to the surface I think he thought he may just walk away and not want a relationship with him. Carlisle's really going to need to talk to Edward and I'm glad he's made a start. I think he should just pick one insecurity at a time to address and let Edward in.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh, thank God he went back.  It had to come from Carlisle, it had to be his choice.  He's starting to change and I think Edward's love and confidence have been the catalyst he needed to take that step.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Baby steps indeed and Carlisle has took quite a few of those, I'm sure he'll be toddling soon.  I love how protective and perceptive Kate is.  She's laid out her stall and Carlisle knows what to expect from her should he put a foot wrong but on the flip side he also has her support.  I have to say I wouldn't mind being woken up the way Carlisle woke Edward, it really wouldn't matter what time was, lol.

Jane x

Learning to Fly by KellanCougar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 51]
Summary: Past Featured Story

KC - Learning to Fly 2

KC - Learning to Fly 1

Should a fantasy ever become a reality? When an obsession with a customer consumes his every waking thought it looks like Edward might have to redefine his own boundaries.

WARNING - Adult themes

**WINNER**
Best Carlisle - Sunflower Awards 2012
Best All Around Story - Hidden Star Awards 2012
Most Promising Slash Fiction - Energize Awards 2012  

Best Slash - Wordsmith Awards 2012

Best Other Non Canon Pairing - Non Canon Awards 2012

Best Carlisle/Edward - Non Canon Awards 2014

 

~xXx~

Banner 1 by Kristina Lea
Banner 2 by Nanadb

 

WINNER HSA Award Banner

WINNER non-canon awards best other non canon pairing

WINNER non-canon awards 2nd pl best romance

WINNER Non Canon LTF Best Carlisle Edward

 

WINNER Sunflowers - Carlisle

WINNER Wordsmith  best slash

WINNER The Energiser awards - best Slash

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Carlisle (Slash)
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 123409 Read Count: 9330
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh wow!  What an epiphany for Edward and now it's followed by the shock of finding out that his man's daughter is his soon to be ex-girlfriend, oh dear, lol.  This is going to be a little awkward, to say the least.  I hope Edward doesn't let this stop him from going for what he wants.

I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Hi Jane! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I hope you continue to enjoy the story :)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh my God!  Trust Lauren to turn up at her Dad's house.  I was wondering at the end of the last chapter and the beginning of this how Carlisle would react to the fact that he's unwittingly fallen for his daughter's boyfriend.  Whether he would be of the same mind as Edward and want to forget the whole thing or if he'd want see where this new relationship with Edward would lead and risk losing his daughter.

I think the only thing that Lauren can take from this to console herself is that Edward realised he's gay and did the right thing by breaking it off with her.  It's going to take time for her to get her head around it all and get over it.  I don't think I've said this but, poor Lauren I really do feel sorry for her.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh my God!  (I'm sensing a theme developing here, lol)  What's happened?  Edward and Carlisle just, hopefully, got things sorted out.  Has Edward been attacked for being gay, even though he says he's not gay?

Lauren surprised me with her maturity over this and how naive she is as well.  Lol, I wonder if she'll be having sex when she's 36.  I'm sure her Mum will also be glad to hear that she's over the hill and sex is disgusting at her age, hahaha!

Jane x 

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Okay, I take back what I said about Lauren and maturity.  Carlisle's right that Lauren's playing a dangerous game with Edward's memory.  She's hurt and she's being very silly and she's only going to be more hurt by playing this game.

Thank God Edward's going to be alright, I don't think Carlisle would have been able to cope if he'd lost him even though it's only been a couple of days they have such a connection which Edward is aware of though he doesn't remember.  I'm not sure how right Carlisle was to answer Edward's question but I'm glad he did.

Rose and Emmett have met, hehe, I get the feeling Emmett will be moving in to Edward's room for the foreseeable future.

Jane x



Author's Response:

You're making me giggle with these reviews! Keep 'em coming! And yeah, Lauren's seen an opportunity and is grabbing it, regardless of the outcome. Silly, silly girl.

And bless Emmett - he was long overdue for some love in his life! :)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh Lauren's a silly stubborn girl and she's going to get her heart broken all over again if she doesn't apologise.

I love Carlisle and Edward's date, so perfect.  I'm glad that Edward's worked it out for himself that Carlisle had his number before the accident and now he knows that he's stayed in his bed.  I'm hoping that sleeping surrounded by Carlisle's scent will trigger his memory.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Awww, their date was perfect and Edward got to play the piano.  It looks as though Demitri and Irina approve of Edward, just a bit, hahaha.  Please let Edward get his memory back soon.  I'm sure that when he said it hurts he wasn't just talking about physical pain but also the pain of not being able to remember the time he's spent with Carlisle.  Although, when he does remember, he might want to forget certain parts of it again, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Woohoo!  Edward's remembered and he's told Emmett about everything.  Now when are these two going to say their 'I love you's'?  I know Carlisle already said it but I think Edward was already asleep, lol.

When did Emmett get so wise?  He made some good observations there and gave fantastic advice.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

How low is Lauren going to stoop?  I know she's hurting but this is seriously going too far.  It's a good job that Carlisle knows the truth but still this must really hurt hm that his own daughter would play games like this with someone's life.  Now, as Edward said, she's hurt her Dad and herself with her actions.  Girls are bitchy and only true friends will understand and forgive her actions, the rest of them will rip her apart visciously.

What are they all doing in a bar anyway, I was under the impression that the legal drinking age in the US is 21?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Well I hope that phone that was ringing when they left wasn't anything important.  These two have been through enough for the time being.

I loved Edward telling Emmett all about Carlisle and then Emmett confessing that he wanted what Carlisle and Edward have together.  I think that we all want to be loved and feel love and Emmett is no different, he's been so lonely since his last relationship ended.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh my God!  After such a perfect and relaxing time away they come home to a message like that.  I suppose that was the ringing phone that was heard before they left.  I suppose it's not going to be as simple as the fact that Edward wasn't Carlisle's patient and that Lauren is acting like a jealous, petty little girl who'll seem to stop at nothing to destroy her Dad's happiness and try to get Edward back.  What part of 'it's over' does she not understand?

Back to reality with a bump.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Lauren really needs to grow up.  At 18 she would know what effect her words would have, she obviously realises that a doctor having a relationship with his patient is the biggest no, no ever, then to add to the mix that this is a gay relationship she would know how devastating this would be to her Dad.  I believe she acted on impulse and truly didn't think through the full consequences of her actions, (I'm trying to find some redeeming features here) that it would go as far as smear campaign and that lawyers would be involved.

Lauren's done so much damage not only to the people she loves but to the wider community.  She needs to be taught a lesson, maybe her own embarrassment at being outed as the person that fuelled all of this will be enough, who knows.  What she needs to really think about is that if she'd just accepted things when Edward finished their relationship and after finding out he and her Dad were together, there might have been a little bit of gossip but the humiliation and embarrassment she feels wouldn't be a tenth of what it is now.  Stupid, stupid girl.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Yes, Jasper is the whole package and Alice is going to be the lucky girl to be in reciept of said package, bwahahahaha!!

Poor Esme, she's always the last person to know what's going on.  I'm sure that she'll start to dread Carlisle's visits as he always seems to be bringing more bad news of what their daughter has been up to.  What else could possibly be prompting Lauren to act this way?  Is it some sort of personality disorder, or is she simply unable to live in the real world?  I definitely think she could use some help especially after the way Esme said she'd been behaving.

I'm glad that Esme already accepts Edward and his relationship with Carlisle, I think it will put Edward more at ease knowing that she's not going to attack him on sight for everything thats happened. Lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

What does Lauren mean, her life has already ended?  Has she done something else stupid or is she just being overly dramatic?  Poor Esme is at her wits end.  It's the worst thing to have a child that won't talk to you, it breaks your heart and it makes you feel like a failure as a parent.  You feel that you can't be what they need but they won't tell you what that is.  It's like you failed a test that you didn't know you were taking and then not being told what you failed on.  Like I said heartbreaking and frustrating beyond words.  I hope she gets the support she needs for everyone's sake.

It sounds as though Emmett's heard something about what's been going on, I hope he won't be too pissed off that Edward's kept him out of the loop, he didn't do it intentionally.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Ooooh Jasper's thinking about a date with Alice, awww, of course she'll accept him for what he is, she has to he's her destiny, lol. 

I keep forgetting to say but the lemons in this story are amazing, not only are they completely hot but so loving at the same time. *sigh*  The love that Carlilse and Edward share just oozes off the page (screen).

Jane x   

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Awww, a drunk Carlisle is so cute, I love him to bits.  I'm so glad that everyone at the party was happy and respectful.  Carlisle has so many good friends and colleagues to support him and now Edward.  Jasper turned up for Alice, it's a shame that Emmett couldn't be there.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Who said that?  Was that Esme talking to Elizabeth?  I know Elizabeth has a lot of revelations to get her head around, but I hope she comes round soon.  She has to let Edward make his own mistakes, not that this is, but she has to learn to let go and trust that Edward's knows what he wants.  He's a grown man now and he definitely knows what he wants.  It almost seems like she's pushing Edward to the side and reinforcing with Emmett and Rosalie what a 'normal' relationship should be.

I wish that either Carlisle or Edward would say something about how lonely they are without the other.  This is such a new relationship and in a strange way they should still be at the stage of 'should I keep calling him, should I text him, I want to be with him all the time, will he think I'm being pushy?' but because of all they've been through they are way beyond that and it seems right that they should be talking about moving in together even though they've only been together a few weeks.  Does that make sense?  I know what I mean, lol.

Oh, and that bar lemon........they well and truly squeezed the juice out of that one, phew!

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

So it was Esme speaking to Elizabeth but still, despite what she's seen and everything she's been told, she still doesn't be able to accept Edward's choice of relationship.  Perhaps, over time, as she see's how much in love they are she'll come round.  I hope so.

I loved the karaoke and Emmett's special present was just hilarious.  Could this be the start of their own personal porn collection?  Lol, I bet Emmett had to bleach his brain after that, bwahahahaha!!

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Damn that was hot!  I need to lie down and have a rest after a cold shower that is, phew!!

I'm glad that Edward's Mum said what she did about wanting Edward to be happy and that she'd get to know Carlisle.  He would have been heartbroken if he lost his Mum over his choice of relationship. 

Finally they're going to live together, woohoo!!

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Lol, I knew they'd have to watch the DVD, I mean, it was just too hot and sexy not to, they should run it on a continuous loop, lol.

I'm so glad that Edward's all moved in now and they can be together fully.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh Lauren, you silly, silly girl (I'm starting another theme, lol).  The mind can be a magical place but it can also be the cruelest place.  How long has Lauren been bullied at school?  That's all I can think that she meant when she said it didn't matter what the girls said about her and that Edward kept her safe.  Now a baby or is her body playing tricks with her?  It's possible that all the stress has caused all her symptoms unless, of course, she's done a test.

There are decisions to be made here but Lauren needs to understand that there's nothing that can't be put right and no situation that can't be made the best of.  That last part sounds so crass, but if she really is pregnant, then she has to decide what she wants to do.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Crisis averted!  Step away from the ice cream!  Lol. 

Thank God Carlisle got through to him.  Edward can't be held responsible for someone who doesn't tell anyone she's being bullied, or for the way that person reacts to bad news.  The stress of it all caused Lauren's grip on reality to slip and she made some very bad decisions but that's not Edward's fault and, of course, Carlisle recoginsed that.  Now, in the same way, Carlisle and Esme can't think that this is all their fault either.  I know they will because they're her Mum and Dad but if your child won't speak to you and nobody else is coming up with anything all you can do is be there when it all goes pear shaped.  I'm so glad she's not pregnant, it was the last thing she needed.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Hmmm, what's Carlisle up to?  Web site alerts for what?

I'm so glad that Carlisle and Edward talked got things back on track and also that Edward and Esme were able to clear the air.  Esme was right a while back when she said that Edward was too old for Lauren, it's not in age but definitely in maturity and the way in general that Edward conducts himself.  It's going to take time but I'm sure eventually Lauren will be able to accept Edward as Carlisle's partner.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Whale watching!  Wow!  Such a great surprise for Edward.  I'd forgotten all about that, I'd love to go whale watching.

Carlisle's birthday surprise was brilliant.  Edward's gift was so thoughtful.  Lol, his well kept secret is out and thanks to Emmett another well kept secret was nearly out, hahaha!!  I'm so glad that everything is settling down for them

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Awww, so perfect. *sigh*  They're so happy and in love surrounded by friends and family they love and adore who love and adore them in return.  I'm just a big puddle of sappy goo, you and your boys have melted me, lol.  I'm going to miss these boys as well.

Loved it, loved it, loved it!  I've loved every bit of this story, the lemons are so juicy but most of all, as I've said before, the love Carlisle and Edward share just oozes off the page (screen) lol, I wish I could bottle it.  You have an amazing talent and I love your style of writing.  Fabulously amazing story, thank you so much for sharing.

Jane x

Watch by amandac3 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

"I can't believe I just watched that. I wonder if I should tell them?" Jasper is watching something he shouldn't be, but he won't stop, he can't stop. Things aren't always as they seem. Everyone has secrets.
One-shot entry for Beyond the Pale 2 contest.

**Judges Choice, SweetDulcinea - Jasper I'd Love To... Watch

banner by YellowGlue


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4405 Read Count: 2000
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my God!  That was insanely hot!  Lol, I wonder if Jasper will get free shows at home now, bwahahahaha!!

Jane x

Within Reach by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 150]
Summary:

For years she's wanted him, fantasized about him, wanting more than he could ever give. He was never within reach... until now.


Who wants to play doctor?


BDSM/Kink/Olderward/Doctor!Kink 


Within Reach


banner by SoapyMayhem



banner by JA Mash


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21814 Read Count: 43772
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prom Night

I love this already.   I can't wait to find out how Bella intends to put herself 'out there'.  I'm not sure I could be that brave or brazen but if you know what you want you should go out and grab it, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Always Be Prepared

Lol, I'm going with obsessed with a dash of crazy, in fact Bella'a obsession knows no bounds.  I still can't wait to see what she has planned.  If it was me I'd die a thousand deaths if Dr C told me eff off and grow up but I'd probably throw up on him first just to make my humiliation complete, hahahaha!

I wonder if he'll be pleased with all her prep, or whether he would have preferred to 'school' her himself?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Dr. Cullen's Office

Holy fuck!!!

I should imagine Dr C's thinking all sorts of things from the law suit he could face to downright uncontrollable lust, lol.  Is Bella too naive?  Knowing what we know I think he would be underestimating her if he thought that she was more than just a little naive.  I do think she's a little naive, he's already said he can't give her hearts and flowers, Bella's ignoring that side of herself in order to get what she wants but Dr C knows that there will come a point that she will begin to want that side too.  She's already put her trust in Dr C and from his point of view he can completely mold her into what he wants her to be.

Oooh decisions, decisions.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Wishes Granted?

Grrr!! Cockblocked.

I've never been a Jake fan, at all, but I love him in this story.  Being the gay best friend suits him so much, hahahahaha!!

As much as Bella blushes she squashes her shyness and embarrassment well to tell Dr C what she's been imagining. *fans self*

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Awakening

Jesus, I need to lie down, how many orgasms was that??  Has Bella hit subspace?  When will she stop calling him Dr Cullen it's so distracting?  Lol.

I get the feeling Dr Cullen's going to be very pleased with Isabella.

Jane x

Summary: Past Featured Story

papi

 

Every political figure has their skeletons and this Senator just likes to play Daddy. Enter the call girl, a woman who gives men exactly what they want. "I would give him what he wanted and what he didn't even know he wanted; then, hook, line, sinker, he would be mine." Daddykink! Mature. ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215117 Read Count: 408926
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've just found this story and I have to say it's effin hot.  Lol, it sounds as though Bella's good at her job and the Senator enjoyed himself, bwahahaha!

Jane x

Summary: Past Featured Story

Non-Canon/Slash: Edward meets Jasper during his rebellious youth. A shared struggle draws them together as they fight to overcome their nature, and find love. What secrets are hidden in Jasper's past? And can Edward help him through his discovery?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Change, My all time favorites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161462 Read Count: 17463
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 09 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Deception

I'm so glad that all went well for them and that Demetri isn't aware of their individual gifts.  If he comes back for a longer visit it will be harder for them to keep their gifts hidden for a longer period of time and of course, now Demetri will have all their markers and could very quickly discover that they don't live separately.  Poor Emmett, he feels as though he's failed and let everyone down, it could have easily have happened to any of them and it still could.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Mending

It looks like Jasper's moving forward and beginning to come to terms with the loss of Michaela, Carlisle really helped him a lot.  I loved how them managed to fool Alice and her visions, lol, she's not a happy bunny which leads me to thoughs of Emmett maybe having to eat some, haha!!  Jasper's surprise for Edward was lovely and very thoughtful of him.  It is really sad that they can't show any affection in public especially when they love each other so much.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Laughter

Lol, Emmett is just the biggest kid ever but I think the rest of the family enjoyed his teddy bear more than him, haha!!  Alice didn't seem happy about being fooled, ah well you can't have everything your own way.  All of their gifts to each other were so thoughtful and even though the board games were meant to be a jokey present they worked out best for Emmett's inner child.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Beware: Empath Nearby

Hahahaha!  Will Emmett and Peter ever learn?  I don't think they will Emmett's too much of kid, lol.  Mind you Edward and Jasper did benefit from all that lust pinging around the house.  That was really lovely of Edward to compose a piece for Esme and Carlisle.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Hollow

Oh no!  This is so sad and there's nothing that any of them can do for Michaela or Jasper other than be there to love and support them both.  Will Peter go with them?  It's important to have that chance to say goodbye.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Confidence

It's been a trying time for them with all the slip ups.  Rosalie needs to get over herself, it could so easily be her slipping up and all she's doing is getting on everyone's nerves and causing anxiety.  Jasper doesn't give himself enough credit for what he's achieved.  I think they should just kill both James and Victoria and they they don't have to think about them ever again.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Tracking the Tracker

What has Edward seen and why does this boy seem important to him?  James and Victoria survive a bit longer but hopefully not too much.  I'm glad they got the werewolves and the worst injury was a bite to Demetri's arm.  Thank God he's still no wiser about all their gifts.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 14: The Boys

Bwahahahaha!!  I love how Jasper got his own back, it's a pity he couldn't keep it going for a bit longer, maybe got them to have a grope or two, lol.  What about Edward using Alice's visions to cheat on a bet?  Haha, it was hot though, Alice should have more visions like that one.  I hope Peter can get used to being part of a family and settle in more.  He really shouldn't worry about slipping up and ruining Alice's dream, she'll always forgive him because she loves him and has faith in him.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 13: The Past, Present & Future

Peter and Alice are together, woohoo!!  I'm glad they've all finally met up and they'll be part of the family.  Will James and Victoria be back soon or will they be off spreading rumours and lies?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Treaty

I can't believe they're going to be moving on again so soon, can't they re-negotiate the agreement, especially now they've helped to save Claire?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Emmett

Lol, I think Emmett might just nearly destroy their home in his newborn stage. He's doing very well with it all at the moment.  It's probably a good job that Rosalie has already got her revenge on Royce and his partners in crime otherwise there probably wouldn't be anything strong enough to hold Emmett back.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Never a Dull Moment

The KY Jelly has arrived, lol, I'm sure they'll find it better than the Vaseline. Poor Jasper, he's always going to worry, it's in his nature but at least now he feels a little better about his family being able to defend themselves and he really shouldn't worry about Esme, maybe just give her a few pointers teach her a few moves, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Michaela

Lol, when was lube invented?  

I'm glad that Michaela knew that Jasper was her brother and didn't assume he was his grandchild or something.  It seems that vampires creating armies are not hot on wanting to know the full names of the people they're chaning into newborns.  Jasper had no way of knowing he was related to Peter, he can't blame himself for everything.  I loved how Edward tried to help him by making a joke that it was Maria's fault that Peter was changed.  I hope he finds him and doesn't have any trouble.  Will he go to see Nicholas whilst he's there?

I think Michaela's taking all of this very well, but then she's always believed that Jasper would come home to her.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Family

He has to find her, I hope she's still alive.  I think in an odd sort of way, if she's still alive and Jasper goes to see her, even if they make a story up or tell the truth, it will put her mind at rest and Jasper will be able to keep track of the rest of his family.  It would give him more of that sense of belonging that Carlisle, Esme, Edward and Rosalie have already given him.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Riley

He's alive, they found him, woohoo!!  Riley's gift is amazing and now it seems to have added to Edward's as his has added to Riley's.  I hope they're both able to develop the new sides of themselves.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Gemini

Oh my God, Edward had a twin, or even still has a twin.  I hope he's still alive. Edward will have actual blood related family and it'll mean so much to him.  I hope if Riley is still alive and they find him that he's happy to see Edward and doesn't reject him.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Past Hurts

Awww, the story of Amelia is so sad.  It's no wonder Carlisle left when he felt that pull towards Esme, he must have wondered whether she was destined to the same fate.  I don't think that Edward's mum would have wanted to be changed, I think she was happy to join her husband knowing that Edward would live on in some capacity.  Good for Rosalie, getting her revenge on her attackers.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: A Rare Change

I love the connection they have, as fledgling as it is, they really balance each other.  Edward cancelled out his own argument when he said that family doesn't abandon each other for slipping up.  Carlisle would always welcome Edward back with open arms, he feels that he's the son he never had.  Carlisle would trust Edward's judgement about Jasper and accept him into his family as well.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Struggle

Awww, they love each other.  They really do balance one another.  Edward is more confident in the vegetarian lifestyle whereas Jasper is more confident sexually, they both have things to teach each other and give the other confidence.

I don't think Carlisle's going to turn him or Jasper away, Esme won't let him, lol. What year is this set in?

Jane x 

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Prodigal

See, I knew it would be alright.  Bless Esme and her mun radar, you can't fool a mother, lol.  I hope nothing happens to break Edward and Jasper's connection, I like how they love and tease each other.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: First Move

Poor Jasper, having to sit through the sex talk with Carlisle, hahahahaha, I would've been mortified as well especially when he brought out the Vaseline, lol. I think, between them, they're going to struggle to keep a lid on their desire for each other, hehe.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Unexpected

So Rosalie has joined the family and is not happy to see Edward and Jasper are together.  Is she going to make their life more difficult than it needs to be? Will she get her revenge on Royce soon or is she going to have to wait?  It's sad that they have to move again so soon, I think all of them liked their lives in Rochester.

Lol, I can't believe that Edward noticed it was the same tree that he and Jasper were having sex against as they did the time before. *snort*

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Wager

Awww, as funny as it was I do feel sorry for Emmett, he is just a giant child with no gifts and they all picked on him, lol, I hope he plans an epic revenge on them all.  I'm soft like that, lol.  I think Riley, Edward and Jasper spending time together will be good for them and they could explore their enhanced gifts together.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Visions

I love how Edward and Jasper are getting more playful.  Now they're with Riley and the rest of his family they all seem to have put the danger behind them and are just enjoying themselves.  I'm looking forward to their trip.  Will they come across the Volturi on their travels and what about James and Victoria?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 27: London

That was a really lovely thing for the boys to do for Carlisle.  I loved Jasper teasing Riley in the Gallery, lol.  Going back to his childhood home was very hard for Riley but I think it was something he needed to do.  It's hard for everyone to go back after the loss of their parents but you have to say goodbye.  I don't know whether it's a good thing or a bad thing for them to keep the house, if they lived in it they could start making new and happy memories.  I like it that Edward gave the cross to Riley.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue: A Journey's End

Awwww, they're so in love. *sigh*  What are Emmett, Peter and Riley like?  I think they're all just a bunch of big kids that never learn, lol.

I really loved this story and I'll be going on to read the rest or them.  Thanks for sharing.

Jane x

Blood Lust by Hanks Lady Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

21 year old Jacob finally admits to best friend and band mate Embry that he likes guys, leading to a trip to a club where he finds himself unexpectedly attracted to one of the acts there. Jacob's liking for one of the 'cold ones' quickly leads to complications for him and the Wolfpack.

Story is rated for sex in later chapters and is M/M or slash, so if this isn't your thing, please don't read.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jacob/OC
Genre: Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 108.9
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65791 Read Count: 4576
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 21 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've never read anything with a Jasper and Jake pairing but I like this and I'm looking forward to reading the rest.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Jake is so taken with Jasper, so taken that he treated Jasper as a normal boy. It's sad that Jasper had to leave his family like that, they'll wonder and worry about him for the rest of their lives.  It's a shame as well that Jasper ran off like that, I hope Jake can find him soon.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Is Jasper using his empath power on Jake, does he even know he has a power. Embry has some valid concerns but I don't think Jasper's playing Jake.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Poor Jasper. Why has he let himself get so hungry? Was it because Jake didn't turn up when he said he would? I hope he doesn't turn him away and turn down going to live with the Cullen's, they could help him so much.  I'm so glad that Jake's dad is so supportive knowing what Jasper is.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well, Rose is her usual vile self. Jasper shouldn't have waited so long to feed, I hope him turning up means that he wants to be with Jake and he's not come to dump him because he feels guilty for what he did.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh my God, so he did play him - a little bit.  Now the big question for Jake is whether he can trust him again. Maybe Jasper should put on a sort of display for Jake so he can begin to recognise the feeling when Jasper uses his talent.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Hi Jane, thank you for reading and reviewing this story. Glad that you're enjoying it so far. There is more drama ahead, but also sweetness :)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 May 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Well he really did make his decision, although I think he'd already made it beforehand. What's Paul going to do now, will he insist on Jake choosing between the band and Jasper?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 May 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Damn, that was hot!  I love that Jasper's made Jake's breakfast for him, it's just such a normal thing to do for him given the vampire/wolf situation, of course it's so sweet too.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I actually thought the talk with Paul went well, as well as it could have, it could have been so much worse.  

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 May 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Uh-oh! Jake's just opened a whole other can of worms, the rest of the band might not be too happy about it but they can't expect him to live a secret life forever. I'm glad that some of the guys, at least, are okay with Jasper.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 May 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Urgh! Someone should put Rosalie down, she's so damn rude. Will the newspaper article lead Jasper's parents to him or is there enough distance between the two places that they won't see or hear about it?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 May 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Paul's such a dick. I think he may be like that for the rest of his life. I'm so happy for Seth, his dreams are just starting to become reality.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 May 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Well I wasn't expecting that, at all.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Jasper!!!! You can't kill him off, Jake wouldn't survive. Poor Leah, at least she'll heal really quickly.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Awww, they're moving in together. I'm really happy that both Paul and Rose have changed their attitudes towards Jasper and Jake. Now we need to find someone for Alice.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Awww, everything's working out for them and the band. I'm so glad that Seth got to sing and with a little help from Jasper he got over his nerves.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Awww, a happy ever after, the best way to end. I've really enjoyed this story, you're the only author that can make me like Jake and that's saying something as I am firmly Team Edward with Jasper a close second, lol.

Thanks for sharing.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews, I'm glad you enjoyed the story and liked my Jake.  He was my favourite at the time although I moved over to Team Edward eventually :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 322198
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer

I'm loving this new Edward he really is making an effort and keeping true to his word.  I can't wait to find out how they take down Maggie and how she takes her complete humiliation.

It sounds as though you've been through the mill lately, I'm glad you're starting to feel better and I hope you get back to full fitness soon so you can do all the things you want to do.  Take care flower.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication

Wow!  That was spectacular.  Finally the bitches have been taken down and managed to add extra charges on themselves at the same time.  Poor Bella, getting hit on the head with an award.  I think she should take up acting, she did an amazing job playing her part at winding Lauren up, hahahaha!!  The press are going to have a field day.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning

I'm so glad that things are getting better for them, they're talking, laughing and making plans, long may it last.  I loved Phil's dad chat, short but to the point and also Eric made his point too, lol.  I can't wait for Maggie to get what's coming to her.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown

Wow!  I'm loving feral caveman Edward.  I hope he comes out to play again soon.  Will he appear on Oscar night?  Lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter

Hmmm, interesting.  I'm looking forward to reading the rest and catching up.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Our First Outing

Oooooh a date.  I love their banter and when Bella remarked that he'd be able to do all sorts of sordid things to her, well lets just say I was mopping the keyboard after spitting my drink on it, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Our First Date

'Let's get married.'  'Okay.'  Bwahahahahaha!!  Oh my God, Renee's going to have a shit fit, lol.

I love these two, they're so much fun.  I love that dress it's so cute.

Jane x