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Hi,
My name is Jane and I'm a 44 year old single mum from Manchester in the UK. I'm a stay at home mum at the moment but I'm looking for a job, need to pay the bills. I discovered Twilight when the film came out and everyone was raving about the books. The books weren't well known in the UK at all, in fact, you may have found it difficult to find them at all, the film fuelled their popularity. Anyway, I bought the books for my daughter who wanted to know what all the fuss was about. That was 4 years ago and she's never read the books, not one word...I can hear you all gasping in disbelief...I however, devoured them. I couldn't get enough, completely absorbed was an understatement it was the best diet I've been on. I was so consumed by these characters the bare minimum of housework was done, my daughter reminded me every day that she was hungry and I needed to feed her, laundry was done at the last possible moment and the ironing got done on a need to wear basis...my obsession was born.
I'm Team Edward, always have been and always will be but Jasper owns a place in my heart too. After reading the books countless times I found both FanFiction and Twilighted through Twitter, some ladies on there were rec'ing some fics and my curiosity got the better of me. One of the first fics I read was Master of the Universe and I'm sure you've all read that one too, another one was Clipped Wings and Inked Armour, another amazing story and thus began my second obsession. I can't get enough, I'm on both sites every day unless the 'puter breaks then I go into withdrawal. Twilighted feeds my need for RP Fics mainly Rob and Jackson, some Kellan works it's way in there too but I read all types. I love slash and polyamorous stories and I've found that you find more of those on here. I've started to write a story myself, the characters popped into my head one day and now they won't leave me alone. I'm not sure that I'm a good enough writer that I'd ever put it out there for others to read, at the moment I'm just enjoying writing it for me.
So that's me, feel free to ask my anything you want to know, you can follow me on Twitter @Janeybo send a request and I'll follow you back, I usually drop in there every day at some point, sometimes I just lurk other times I'll spout complete nonsense, I don't think my followers realise that Janeybo and Robsblueeyes are one and the same person. All the Robporn on there keeps me busy and of course there's 100 Monkeys, Kellan and Peter Facinelli. I'm beginning to think this all might be taking over my life slightly...what life I hear you all cry...ah well, you have to have some pleasures don't you? I may even say it's a guilty one, my daughter would die of shame if she knew all this. BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
Jane x
TWITTER - @Janeybo
It starts with Edward's birthday and the very special present he gets.
Categories: All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27272 Read Count: 5941
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: A Very Happy Birthday-Edward
Damn! That was hot. Thank God Jasper wasn't some psycho, just a man who knows what he wants, lol.
Jane x
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Another Birthday-Jasper
Well from that little insight I don't think Alice would be approving of public sex. She seems to be struggling with her twins relationship.
Jane x
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 3: A Merry Christmas
Awwww, such a perfect Christmas and now Alice is finally comfortable with Jasper.
Jane x
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4: A Very....Interesting Move
Awww, they're so sweet, I love them to death, lol.
Jane x
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 5: A Very.....Interesting Night
Oh my God, I'm melting from this love fest.
Jane x
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 6: A Very....Long Day
Lol, I loved Jasper's text message. That was some epic teasing.
Jane x
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 7: A Very.....The end to A Very Long Day
Definitely a perfect end. I was a bit confused, I thought Jasper was teasing Edward not the other way around, lol.
Jane x
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 8: A Very.....Interesting Encounter
I'm melting again. *sigh* Poor Garrett.
Jane x
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: A Very..... Unusual Request
I loved Esme's reaction and how shocked Carlisle was at Jasper's formality. I'm sure he never expected to be asked permission for his sons hand in marriage, awww.
Jane x
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 10: A Very.....Surprising Question
Woohoo!! I swear to God I'm going to be a big puddle at the end of this, lol.
Jane x
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 11: A Very.....Special Day (The Wedding)
I loved the thought that went into the button holes. I loved Carlisle's little speech as well.
Jane x
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 12: A Very... Happy Honeymoon
Damn, they're hot together.
Jane x
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 13: A Very.....Happy Anniversary
If you ask me they're both lucky to have found each other and a love like theirs.
Jane x
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Déjà vu, A Very.....Special Look Into the Past
Wow, I really loved this. It was so sad that Peter and Garrett didn't get to spend longer together on earth but at least they were together in death. I think Garrett would have died from a broken heart. I loved that his father knew, and probably Peter's father too, and accepted their relationship.
Jane x
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 15: A Very.....Romantic Vacation
I loved it! Their trip to Italy was amazing. I loved how they both fell for the superstition of vampires in Volterra but wouldn't say anything, lol. I really loved this story, thanks for sharing.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all the lovely reviews. a86;a039; I'm glad you enjoyed the story. 💕
Maura
What happens when you think the man you love is in love with someone else? An Edward/Jasper slash fic.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Drama, Romance, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70706 Read Count: 4444
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow! I didn't see that one coming at all I just thought Jasper was being a complete git but I did wonder what had happened to make him treat Edward that way. I'm with Edward, it never would have crossed my mind that Jasper was scared of Edward rejecting him or leaving him because of his relationship with Garrett, especially after he heard Jasper tell Garrett he loved him, I would have thought the worst.
I'm looking forward to getting Garrett's view on all this, see what his explanation is. Did Edward really hear Jasper's voice around his apartment building or was it his imagination? No doubt I'll find out.
Jane x
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Well that was unexpected as well. For Jasper to have known right from the beginning who Edward was and not say anything, but then if his intention was to just hurt him then he wouldn't need to tell him. He should have told him though as soon as he knew their relationship was going to go further. It makes more sense now why he pulled away from Edward, but as he learned you can wait too long to say what you need to say.
Is this Garrett on the phone now? I hope it is.
Jane x
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
So Garrett disappeared with a new man called Seth, isn't he the fast worker, lol. I'm glad that he's found his soul mate but it's sad that it came at the expense of his marriage and Kate's happiness.
At least now it's clear to Edward that Jasper and Garrett aren't going to be together and Jasper's beaten him to it and turned up to see him. Who was it that called him, one of Edward's family?
Jane x
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Ah, it was Tanya on the phone. I'm glad that Jasper went to find Edward and they've talked, it will take work and patience to build up that trust again.
Jane x
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Hopefully this dinner with Garrett won't be as awkward as it sounds.
Lol, Peter didn't waste any time getting to know Charlotte did he.
Jane x
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Oh my God! What happened to Seth was beyond disgusting. He must have been so scared when he thought he was going to be saved by his cousin and then he just joins in. What his Mum did is beyond words, how can she disown her son like that? At least now he has Garrett and he'll have a big extended family with Edward, Jasper and everyone else.
I can't believe either that Kate did what she did. She laid down the law to Garrett and then didn't tell him anything about the person she'd been seeing. What makes it worse is that she married Garrett knowing that she was also seeing someone else and didn't really love him, she's such a hypocrite. She should have told Garrett everything when he came home. I wonder what would have happened then......hmm.
Jane x
Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness.
A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner! Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief
Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!
Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!
Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door
Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389482
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: A Lesson in Learning...
Well I don't know how I missed this update......welll maybe I do. I'm glad I caught up with it now though. I'm holding my breath about what's going to happen with Peter. I'm glad that Edward admitted to his own mistake and tried to make Bella understand that not everything is her fault. Hopefully they'll both be able to communicate better and allow their relationship to grow.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Here's a peek at the next chapter! As soon as I get it back from the betas and pre-reader it will be updated! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Krazi
xoxo
Before knocking on the door, I took a moment to get in the right headspace. Once I walked through that door, I would no longer be the confident Dom I professed to be, my submission would belong to my mentor and former Master. Resigned and ready, I wrapped the heavy wooden door three times. “Come in,” Master Peter’s deep voice called from inside the room.
As if walking before a firing squad, all three of us entered the room with our heads tucked to our chests, and our hands clasped behind our backs. At first glance, one would think that we were three naughty students summoned to the headmaster’s office.
“Edward,” Master Peter said solemnly. “As good as it is to see you again; I am by no means pleased at the circumstances. Do you have anything to say for yourself?” Master Peter and I had already had this conversation, but he was still following protocol for the sake of the others that were present.
“Master Peter,” I started, swallowing around the sudden lump in my throat. “This one has failed to remember his teachings, and in doing so, has failed his collared submissive. This one comes before you fully aware of the ramifications of such an offense, ready to receive whatever punishment Master sees fit to dole out upon him.”
Try as she might, Isabella could not help but to react to my revelation. Her sharp intake of air came as no surprise, and did not go unnoticed by Master Peter. “Isabella,” Master Peter asked, addressing my submissive for the first time. “Is there something you’d like to say?” Just like I knew she would, Isabella remained as quiet as a church mouse. Peter, who had yet to get up from his chair, hummed in appreciation of her obedience before saying, “Well, Edward, you haven’t failed her too bad, she’s quite the respectful little one.” He then returned his attention to my girl. “Thank you for your obedience and respect for this Dom Isabella. Now, little one, you may look at me and speak. Having heard your Master’s declaration, do you have anything you’d like to to say?”
“Yes, Sir, Master Peter,” Isabella said in a quiet yet respectful tone. “This girl would simply like to say that she trusts her Master blindly, and if Master has chosen to bring this girl here with him tonight, for this purpose, then so be it. Master knows best, and would never knowingly or purposely put his girl in harm’s way. Master knows what is needed for me to become a better submissive, and this is it.”
“After hearing that, Edward, there should be no doubt in your mind that this little one is meant for you.” My heart clenched at his words, I couldn’t have said it better myself. “Come; let us not waste any more time.” With that, Master Peter led us all downstairs to his dungeon.
No stranger to Master Peter’s playroom, I made my way to the large ensuite bathroom to change. A modest black leather thong that would leave my ass bare was lying on the counter, and I wasted no time shedding my clothes and encasing my now deflated dick in the less than comfortable black pouch. As I made my way to the whipping bench, I could see Isabella and Charlotte kneeling on each side of the room.
Master Peter didn’t speak a word as he tended to the cuffs that would hold my wrists and ankles. Since we previously discussed what my punishment would be, Master Peter’s explanation was for his audience’s ears only. “First, I will warm up the flesh with my leather paddle, and then the real punishment will commence. Edward has already chosen a rattan cane for his punishment, so once the skin is warmed and ready, I will administer ten licks which Edward will count out loud.” Returning his attention to Isabella, Master Peter gave her a command. “Isabella, for no reason are you to take your eyes off of this whipping bench. If at any point and time you feel unable to continue, you are to use your safe words. And they are…”
“Red, yellow, and green, Sir,” was Isabella’s quiet response.
“And what color are you now, Isabella?”
Silence hung thick in the air and for a moment, I thought she was going to say red.
Trust me, Isabella!
You need this!
I need this!
We need this!
I was having a mini meltdown when a sudden calm washed over me, almost as if I could feel Isabella touching me from the other side of the room. But it was her strong and steady voice that sealed the deal. “Green. I’m green, Sir. My Master knows exactly what we need.”
My girl was fucking awesome, and would rival any seasoned submissive with the way she carried herself. There was nothing left to do, but take our punishment and put this whole unfortunate ordeal behind us; if nothing else, Isabella and I had definitely grown in our relationship, both vanilla and D/s.
“Very well,” Master Peter said matter-of-factly. “Shall we get on with it?”
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Cat´s Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...
Bella may not have been truthful with Renee and Phil but I don't think it gives her the right to summon Bella back to New York to explain. She is, as Edward so rightly pointed out, a grown woman and all she really needed to say was that Jake was a cheating, lying bastard who fucked a guest at the reception. Personally, I think that's enough of an explanation and would suffice over the phone. Can you say pissed off with high handed Renee? Yes, I think you can, lol. God she's annoying. I feel better now, hehe!
Bwahahahaha, it's so inappropriate but I love how pervy Edward is over Mojo getting some doggy pussy.
Jane x
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2
Bwahahahahaha!! God I love Emmett, he is the perpetual teenager. Lol, I wouldn't mind knowing how Rose controls him in the playroom. Everyone's so happy for Edward and Bella, it's so lovely. I'm just wondering whether everyone will be happily thinking about Edward getting his BJ when they all get up in the morning, hahaha! There goes Bella's filter again, Edward should have brought one of his many gags with him for his pet, lol.
I love the new puppies especially Brownie she's so sweet and she's already crushing on Daddy C. I think it's wise of Edward to do some further checks on Tanya.
Jane x
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1
What's Jake been up to now. They've only just got back and he's bugging Bella. Does he not remember Edward's fist making contact with his kisser? I should imagine it still hurts, lol. I really think Bella should move in with Edward, she couldn't bare being away from him that night.
What the hell is Tanya up to now? Does she think that by ignoring what happened, one shredded contract and the safe word that ends the relationship, that she can somehow convince Edward that they still belong together? She's in for a big surprise and unfortunately I think Bella may become the target for her wrath as well.
Jane x
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...
Lol, has Edward bought Mojo a girlfriend to make make little Mojo puppies with? More babies to look after but then Mojo could be less attached to Bella so Edward won't have to bribe him with food so he can get some alone time with her, lol.
I'm so glad Bella remembered everything she felt, I mean, after all that and being that worked up you really wouldn't want to be denied your orgasm. Mind you she might just have exploded anyway and then there'd be trouble, bwahahahaha!
Jane x
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: What´s Done in Forks... Stays in Forks...
Finally, Jacob's got a fist in his face.......not that I condone physical violence but sometimes you just really have to get your point across. It sounds as though he's playing Leah. When will she learn that she's better off without him. I really feel sorry for Sue and Seth, the way Leah treats them is disgusting, she should just disappear back to where she came from, I'm sure Jake has some more money......unless his family has cut him off. Bella should definitely use Jake's money to set up a trust fund for Seth.
I think Bella's mastering control of her mouth is going to cause her more problems than mastering control of her orgasms, lol.
Jane x
Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...
I think the Mystery POV is Mack, I'm assuming he was invited to the party being Edward's resident assistant and Edward singing his praises. I hope Bella tells him how Mack makes her feel.
The little snippet you left us with isn't a snippet at all, it's an epic tease.....is Bella using cuffs on Edward? I'm going to be giddy with anticipation. :)
Jane x
Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...
I'm not liking the fact that Edward has a resident assistant he didn't ask for and his name is Mack Jameson, this can only be trouble with a capital 'T' in a white coat with a pocket protector. What even is a pocket protector anyway? It sounds hideous, lol.
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Oh my God! I wish my dreams were as good as Bella's, lol, I'm surprised her panties didn't just melt away. Well, hasn't Alice been a busy little pixie. Does she know about the crushes these two have for each other? Edward and Bella are going to be in for a big surprise......eventually, gah!
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
So Alice does know about Bella's crush. Now the question remains as to whether she knows about Edwards? It sounds to me as though Jacob's just dying to get his grubby mitts on Bella's dosh. I bet, whenever he sees her, his eyes light up with dollar signs. I can't wait to see how she gets her revenge.
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
So, Alice the psychic pixie does know about Edward's crush on Bella, well it's really a bit more than a crush bless him, lol. Nothing is sacred with that girl around.
Poor Edward, I can't believe that he thought there was something wrong with him when he finished with Claire because of the way he felt. Thank God he had Jasper to talk to and he pointed him in the right direction.
I think Edward safe worded. I don't think his heart is really in punishing Tanya anymore, he can't be bothered. He should just end their contract and be done with her. It sounds like she likes to be punished to to receive nothing at all and have her contract end would be more punishment than anything.
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
Lol, Bella should know that she can't keep anything from the psychic pixie, it didn't take her long to put two and two together. What's Bella going to do with the ten million she gets from Jake? How thick could he be, not only, to think that he wouldn't get caught but also to shag a girl at his wedding reception, obviously he was thinking with his little head instead of his big one, lol.
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Edward was the responsible Dom and carried on with looking after Tanya even though it was making him physically ill to do so. I'm not sure that I could be so giving. Tanya is a complete psycho bitch! She basically sold herself to escape her home life and then, it sounds like, she either assisted Mr Brandon in committing suicide or she 'helped' him on his way without his knowledge. Now she's sat there hugging the wedding dress she bought to become Mrs Edward Cullen. Edward and his family need to run and run fast from the crazy woman!
I love Edward and Esme's relationship, it's so damn sweet my teeth are rotting, lol. Even though Edward is a total Mummy's boy I love it. In fact I love the relationship they all have with each other. Emmett's so funny and he's hardly said anything, it's just the way he acts and reacts to whatever Rose is putting him through, hahahahaha!! I loved hearing from Esme, all she wants is for her first born to be happy and for Bella to finally be part of the family. It's a good job that Edward wants the whole kit and caboodle now.
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...
Lol, I forgot about Bella's sleep talking. Well, if she didn't even give it a thought what chance did I stand, lol. I can just imagine Alice's face sitting there watching Bella have an orgasm to a dream fantasy of her oldest brother, bwahahahaha!! I'm glad she's going to help her and that Bella's going to let her, she'll need her friend to help guide her through.
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...
Wow! That was long, but then I was distracted for quite a while by that gorgeous piccy of Rob, lol. Alice has certainly thought this out. How surprised was Bella meeting Rose when she picked her car up, lol, Alice thought that one out too.
Edward really needs to get that restraining order on Tanya, especially now that he gave her false hope of possibly wanting a relationship with her after he's had his time and space and saying that he'd call her about drinks when he had no intention of going. She's already a psycho this is just going to make her worse.
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...
Oh my God! When Leah was first mentioned and that she had moved away I thought, I bet she's involved with Jake. Then it turns out she's with a guy called Will and she's having his baby, I breathed a sigh of relief, I mean the last thing Bella needs is for Leah to be involved with Jake especially as it would mean that he got Leah pregnant whilst he was with Bella. You had other ideas though. You lulled, yes lulled, me into a false sense of security and then dropped the J-bomb from a dirty great big height. Oh, you're evil, no wonder you're under the bed, lol. Poor Bella, Seth and Sue. I feel less sorry for Leah, I can be a hard cow, but she's blaming all of this on Bella and from where I'm sitting Jake's the one she should be blaming. Charlie and Sue will pick up the pieces and hopefully Leah will see everything for how it actually is eventually.
Awww, Seth's so cute and he adores Bella just as she adores him. I think these two will always share a close connection. I think that Bella should put the ten million she gets from Jake into a trust fund for Seth. I hope this doesn't completely ruin Christmas for him.
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...
Okay, that was hot. When these two find out who the other one is they're going to be so shocked, surprised, happy, mad and probably loads more things as well. Lol, I'm not sure whether I'd want to be Alice or not, maybe she should stand behind Jasper when they find out. Was Edward calling Rose? What's he planning for his Pet?
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...
Wow! Bella's been on one of the steepest learning curves of her life and she's going to be on it for a while. It seems she's finding out just how exhausting her chosen lifestyle can be. I loved it that Sir reassured pet that she was right to use her safe word. If Sir was there he would be learning his pet's body and reactions and be able to judge when she was reaching her breaking point, he'd be able to make it so that his pet didn't have to safe word.
Emmett's so funny, but poor Mojo. Lol, I'm surprised he didn't turn on Emmett for fondling his balls. How's Mojo going to cope with all this change in Bella's life? He wasn't happy when he was left on the couch without his pyjamas on for a few hours. When Sir and pet get together it'll be for a lot longer than that and I'm sure he's not going to be invited into the Playroom even if he's dressed appropriately. Lol, is that weird? Hahaha!
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...
That was so worth the wait. I could do with a lie down, preferably in Edward's bed, whilst he's still in it, lol. Edward's subconscious is screaming who pet is at him. I'm still wondering how they're both going to react when the secret is revealed.
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...
You're under the bed again, lol, at least you took your vodka with you this time, hahahaha!!
I can't believe that when Bella and Edward were sat at Esme's dinner table that they didn't recognise each other's voices straightaway. Maybe it was because the two situations are so vastly different and it was out of context. I'm not sure how pleased Esme's going to be about Edward and Bella running out on dinner but she's going to be ecstatic that they're together, finally.
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Bwahahahahaha!! That was a bit of shock for Edward wasn't it. I thought you'd be hiding under you're bed again with Mojo and bottle of vodka. Bella's a virgin and Edward should be imagining all the possibilities this brings with it. This should suit his possessive side right down to the ground. He's going to be exploring places no man or cock has ever gone before. His Pussycat will truly only ever be his, that's if he plays his cards right. I think they should sit down and talk properly. Bella needs to tell her story from start to finish not just he edited highlights.
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....
I like that Edward's not scared to admit when he's wrong, now he just needs to address the way he's running hot and cold and switching between Domward and Edward at a moments notice, it could get very confusing for Bella.
Lol, Bella will never have any secrets with her sleep talking. I think it's the right thing to do for Edward to lay his cards on the table before he and Bella go any further. Hopefully, it will prompt Bella to tell Edward that she loves him whilst she's still awake, lol. At this rate my washing machine will never be off, hahaha!
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Oh my God! It will be a miracle if anyone ever sees these two again what with all this mind blowing sex and all. I'd never leave the house again if I was Bella and I'd make it a rule that no clothes were allowed to be worn indoors, bwahahahahaha!!! Seriously though, it's going to take super human effort for these two to get back to a normal every day working life. I bet Mojo's missing Bella too. He and Alice will be fighting over spending time with her, lol.
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...
Jeez, Bella's going have a lot of cleaning up to do if she keeps squirting like that all the time, lol, Edward's like a man with two dicks, he's that proud, hahaha!!
I'm glad they're talking a bit more and both have them have said their 'I love you's'. They still need to talk lots more though, unless I've missed it they still haven't confirmed their boyfriend and girlfriend status even though Edward's asked Bella to move in. She has to move in, to me it's a no brainer, even if it is quick. When you know, you know. Thank God her annulment is through. I'm dying to find out what happened between Jake and Leah and whether he's still around. If he is Edward will be growling all day, every day at him.
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Bestfriends... Girlie Cars... and Roadside Service...
I can't believe some people complained and you got a warning about the pics you post with your story. I've read other stories on this site with far more graphic pics than yours. Personally I love the pics but then I am a perv, lol. Seriously though, I'm with you, if people don't like them they can read on FFnet where there aren't any.
I'm amazed Sir didn't crash the flaming car, all I can say is that he has superior control. Lol, whose knocking on the car window? I think Sir should have pulled up a little closer to the freeway than Charlie's gates. I hope he doesn't have CCTV at the gates that can see into the car. *raises eyebrow*
Mojo and Edward are funny. I think Mojo knows that his mummy will always side with him, lol, he is her baby after all.
Jane x
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…
Sir is evil and poor pet is going to be left wanting, lol. At least Sir isn't as evil as this other fucker who's now after Bella. Who's coming after her now? It seems that Mrs Cope is like the all seeing eye, hahahaha!! Nothing's getting past her.
Jane x
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: I Am Woman... Hear Me Roar...
Oh wow! Wasn't that a surprise, Sir will do anything to have playtime with his pet. Bella's daydreams will the undoing of her, lol. I'm so glad that Renee turned out to be nice and understood what happened with Jacob, I thought that she was going to do her best to get them back together again. Is Bella going to be punished for buying and using the 'pretty' butt plug?
Jane x
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Settling In...
Damn! That was intense. I'm effin' exhausted, I need a shower and lie down, lol. He's calling the Chief, he's going to propose isn't he, I can't wait.
Jane x
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Training Day...
Poor Bella, she's had the week from hell and it's about to get worse. Is this prior to her being collared or after? I'm a bit confused with the timeline on this chapter. I'm thinking it's after but she calls him Master in her head so much that it might not be. She really shouldn't have done what she did but then it's an important lesson learned. Just because she's a submissive it doesn't mean she can't talk to her Master/Edward about how she's feeling, even if it was just a text to say that she was close to failing, I'm sure he would have found at least five minutes to talk to her, pull her back from the edge. Ahhh well, the damage has been done now.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, I really love this story and I'm glad to see some pictures back, lol. *winks*
Jane x
Date: 14 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Mishaps... Misunderstandings... & Make-Ups...
Damn, that was hot! I'm glad that Carlisle was able to talk some sense into Edward about delegating. It's hard to get the balance right but, as he discovered when he got home, he needs to start working on that.
I'm glad you're back, I missed this story.
Jane x
Author's Response:
First, let me start by thanking all of you who have been with me since the birth of this story or who have picked it up along the way, but continue to stick by me even when life gets in the way and updates are few and far between. Have no fear, tomorrow you will get what I hope is a much anticipated update, pics included! I noticed that there others still putting up nude or highly risque pics, so I won't deprive you guys of any devious pleasure either. I just have to make them smaller. Lol... Thank you all for your kind words of encouragement, and for sticking around to see this thing through to the end. As promised, here's your teaser:
Master had stepped out of my line of sight, but I knew that his glorious cock was out. Not only could I smell his unique musky scent of arousal, but I could feel the heat of his exposed flesh burning my skin. As if reading my mind, Master rubbed the tip of his silky, yet firm flesh against my cheek, awakening the wanton whore buried deep within me. “Mmm...” Master hummed thoughtfully. “So close, yet so far away, my little pussycat.”
My body remained stock still; the only indications that Master’s touch was affecting me was the way I swallowed thickly and the heaving of my chest. If this was a test, which I know it was, I was going to pass with flying fucking colors.
Nevertheless, it was still pure torture!
He was right there!
Right fucking there!
Suddenly, I felt overdressed.
My clothes felt too tight, constricting.
All of a sudden, the room felt like it was being engulfed in flames, and I swear it felt like my body was being consumed from the inside out. I could feel sweat forming on my brow and at the nape of my neck. Never before had I wished to be naked more than I did right now. As a matter of fact, I cursed the day that they ever invented clothes.
I blame that bitch, Eve!
Master gently glided his cock from the apple of my cheek to the corner of my mouth and stopped.
What?
No!
Give it to me!
Don’t tease me!
Pleaseeeeeee!
At this point, I wasn’t above fucking begging for what I wanted, but I knew that would be the opposite of helpful right now. Master wanted to test my control, and I wanted nothing more than to please him.
One quick swipe of my tongue and I would be able to taste him, taste the delicious nectar dripping from Master’s cock. Stopping right at the corner of my mouth, Master paused. “Does my little pussycat want a taste of Master’s cock?” Again I remained quiet. “Good girl, open,” he demanded.
He didn’t have to tell me fucking twice.
Dropping my jaw, I moaned in delight when I felt the pressure of his thumb on my tongue.
Surely, this is just a preview of what was to come.
Right?
Wrong...
Taking his glistening thumb and tracing my bottom lip for a second time in less than five minutes, Master brought his lips to my ear. “I’m afraid that naughty pussycats don’t get rewarded, pet.” Stepping back, Master tucked the beast back inside his pants, sadly cutting off my view.
Once his pants were zipped and everything was back in order, Master returned his attention to me. “Your journal is on the patio, pet, along with your robe, and I suggest you strip for inspection before working on your assignment. You will find instructions inside and have exactly one hour to complete it, after which, I will come to retrieve you so that I can dress my girl for this evening. We have a stop to make before heading to the club tonight, but I’ll explain more and give further instruction later.”
Knowing that was all I was going to get for right now, I waited until Master was out of the room to remove my clothes and slip on my robe. It was a beautiful spring day, so I didn’t bother with the belt, letting the sun warm my naked flesh. Living in the penthouse had its advantages, and also, the idea of some nasty old perv getting a peek at my goodies from one of the neighboring buildings turned me on and had my already wet pussy glistening even more.
Hey, don’t judge me...
Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140942
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh my word!! Where do I find a party like this? Lol. Is Angela, Edward's wife? I know you're not going to tell me, but I thought I'd ask anyway. I'm surprised Eric said yes. Did he go just to please Bella or are they just not sexually compatible? Maybe Eric's always needed a bit......more but was afraid to ask, I mean look how he reacted to Bella's costume. It's usually the man moaning he never gets any, not the woman. A life without the 'O' is no life at all, I hope Bella gets all she wants and then some, hahaha!! Oh, and I hope they're all using condoms. *grins*
I'm really intrigued with your story. I only just found it and I'm looking forward to the rest.
Jane x
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Nooooooo!!! I know they don't know it but they just found each other and I had them skipping off towards the sunset together. Was that Eric on the effin phone, whining that he wasn't going to get any and he wanted to go home? Edward recognised Kitty on some level, I wonder how long it will be before the penny drops. Will they both go back again? Edward just needs to suck it up and get a divorce, it would be kinder to all concerned, especially Emmett, he won't have to keep babysitting Edward when he's near Bella, lol. Yeah, it's going to cost him but thank God there are no kids involved. Is he really aware that Ang is cheating on him or does it concern him so little that he hasn't made the connection? Bella needs to get a divorce as well, life's too short to stay in a loveless marriage.
Bella got two 'O's' and Edward didn't blow his load in the first ten seconds like a fifteen year old, hahahaha! I'd say that was a win, win for both parties. Now I have to pout because the sunset has faded to black and they didn't skip off into it.
Jane x
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Spartan Lover
Lol, I can't believe Edward's going round sniffing all the women, hahaha!! Emmett's obviously not caught him doing that one yet or else he's be using his non existent inside voice to tell him off. I love Bella and her snarkiness, rub and tug, lol, I nearly died laughing. Oh my God! Angela got Eric and felt drawn to him, well each to their own. I wonder if Ang would have said something had she heard that Bella was with her Spartan husband. Would she have been jealous? How are the going to make sure they are together at the party, are the going to break all the rules? Hehehe!!
Jane x
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Mirror's Reflection
WHAAAAAAT!!! What the hell? Is Laurent that desperate to get Bella he has to attack Edward to do it? Of course Bella's going to be blindfolded and if Laurent does knock Edward out, she's not going to realise until it's maybe too late. What was Bella arguing with Eric about? Will he find Ang again and be a bit braver? I'm so glad I don't have to wait for the update, lol.
Jane x
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Laurent
Oh my God! Thank God Edward was able to save Bella. What will Bella do now that she knows her Bronze God and Spartan are the same person? What will happen when she finds out he's called Edward and makes the connection to Angela? Oh you two are just evil, evil I say, lol. I have so many questions going around my head. Who the fuck was Laurent talking to on the phone? Was this planned well in advance? Has he been watching Bella? Argh!! I'm driving myself daft. *throws hands up in the air*
Jane x
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Fuck My Life
That was some dream. Angela seems to have done a complete turn around where Edward's concerned. I suppose nearly losing him in an attack would make you realise what you actually had but I'm not convinced that that's what it is for Ang. What did she mean"I learned to love you through everything you gave me." Does she mean monetary, emotionally or possessions? I was worried that Angela was going to steal Edward's sperm so she could get pregnant, especially after what she said in the hospital, in the hopes that he would stay with her but if they did divorce she would get more and also have a permanent link to Edward.
Woohoo!! Edward and Bella found each other but now Ang's there. I don't think this is going to go well. Will Bella get so pissed off that she lets it slip that Ang has been cheating on Edward?
Jane x
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Time To Think
Us girls are resourceful when we have to be. I'm dying to know what's in the not but if it's along the lines of 'I can't do this, we can't see each other anymore' then I'm sticking my fingers in my ears and not listening, lalalalalalala!!!!!
Erm, has Bella forgotten that Angela's been cheating on Edward for ages with her trainer, Ben? I have to agree with what Emmett said when he said that Angela didn't deserve to be cheated on, well neither does Edward, it doesn't just go one way. Angela's apologies for all she's ever done and said against Edward just won't cut it when he finds out and the penny drops, spouses and partners always find out in the end.
Jane x
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Eyes of a Tragedy
Lalalalalalala!!! I'm not listening just like Edward. I knew she was going to do that. One weekend of loving attention does not a husband make. I would normally say fight for your marriage but both Bella and Edward have been miserable for so long I don't think there's any point. I hope what Edward's planning to do doesn't back fire on him and it is pretty shitty that he's giving Angela false hope that he's working on their marriage but then I think, well she has cheated on him and then I don't think what he's doing is that shitty but then again it is and he should just be a grown up and file for divorce. Argh! I'm just going around in circles, lol.
Jane x
This story picks up a year after Edward and Bella were married. He changed her on their honeymoon and there was no baby or confrontation with the Volturi. Bella realizes as they return from a trip to celebrate their first anniversary that the Cullens have been keeping a secret from her. Now, they want her to join in on the fun.
This story contains slash, fem-slash, polyamorous groupings…ah hell. It is a damned sexual buffet. If you are not into that sort of thing or if you are under 18, then just move along little ones. This story is NOT for you.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11296 Read Count: 13858
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Family Affair
God that was so effin hot. I need a change of underwear, lol, I'm such a perv I love a good polyamorous story and this was beyond good. Thank you so much for sharing your smutty mind.
Jane (another smutty mind) x
Author's Response:
Ahhhh Jane, I do so love to hear from the fellow smut minds out there!!! Thanks for the review and rating. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!
If you haven't already, come say hey on my author page on Facebook, Nickeyd26. :)
All my best,
Nickey
Bella is Domme who is in search of the right sub. After several profiles are searched she interviews two. Go through the interview with her, and see how her test weekend with her potential new submissive works out. Is he the right one? BDSM themes, Hard core Lemons. AH, very adult themes if under the legal age to vote please move on to another story. The top banner was made by the fantastic and awesome: Christagbanners ... You can see her wonderful work by checking her out at christagbanners (dot) blogspot (dot) com. The Black and Red banner, below is my First place award for Fans Vote in the Dommella's Dungeon Contest. Thank you to all my loyal readers.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 127084 Read Count: 48035
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Hump Day
Charlotte had some good advice for Bella and I think it prepared the ground for both of them to get to know each other better. Unfortunately, as confident as Bella is as a Domme she's still struggling to say and let Edward know what she's really beginning to feel for him other than being his Domme.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
There's no way on this earth that I could be a submissive. Getting up that early and doing all that excercise would kill me for the rest of the day, lol, I would have been punished just like Edward but for falling asleep in the playroom, not what you want really is it? Bwahahahaha!!
I was surprised with Edward's age but then by 40 I would expect a man to just be about grown up enough to know what he finally wants and needs, lol. Will his family find out what he is? Will they really care? I love that he's a successful man with his own business.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: His Scene
Wow!! That was amazing, I'm effin exhausted, lol. Does Bella feel the same as Edward? I know she felt the electricity the same as Edward did but does she want to beg him to stay like he wants to beg her to keep him forever? Awwww.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Search Is On
Wow, that was really hot, we'd all love a multi orgasmic man, lol, Bella's a very lucky girl and I can't see her chucking Edward into the street anytime soon.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Up to Hump Day
So she does have feelings for Edward other than as his Domme. It's going to be interesting seeing how they work out both sides of their relationship.
Both these two have had bad relationships previously, I hope they don't let that effect what they could have together.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
I think Bella was remarkably calm when Mike sat down next to her. If it were me I probably would've stabbed a fork in his leg, lol, not just thrown water on him. I hope Jessica's learned her lesson, she needs a long talk with Mike and not to bother setting him up with anyone, no woman deserves to be with a two timing arse like him.
I hope this weekend goes as well as Bella's thinking it will. Maybe she'll be able to talk about her feelings more if she gets a sense from Edward that he feels that same. I think, from the way Edward's so submissive, she may have to take the bull by the horns, so to speak, and bring it up herself.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
Oh my God!! That was so hot and intense I feel as weak as Edward. I need to go lay down, lol.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town
Bella's dream was hot, I would have been gutted to wake up, lol. What did Bella decide whilst she was at the spa? When will they finally confess their love for each other?
Jane x
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: A Naked Day
Wow, they had a full day, lol. I'm so glad that Edward has wrote in his journal what he's feeling for Bella. I think he's going to be in for a nice surprise, hehehe!
Jane x
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
Five years into her marriage, photojournalist Bella, is worried that she isn't enough for her bi-sexual husband. Can a meeting with a mysterious street artist allow them both to fulfill their undisclosed desires?
Lemons Poly/Slash Edward/Bella/Jasper
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9218 Read Count: 6224
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Undisclosed Desires
That was so hot. I love poly and slash stories, I'm such a perv, lol.
I love that they were able to discover and enjoy this side of their relationship and that they found Edward to do that with. That was the last thing Edward expected to happen when he met up with Jasper, lol.
Loved it.
Jane x
PostSecret Used: My downstairs neighbor and I have screaming matches to see who’s the loudest during sex, I usually win.
Summary: Edward is a player and rising pornstar who abuses his peen on a daily basis, demanding performance and the utmost behavior from it. Well, now it’s time for the tale to be told.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74658 Read Count: 41532
Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Lol, this is really funny. I love how he refers to the balls as his brothers and they all got a haircut, hahahaha. I would have liked him to have got his revenge by sticking to Edward's leg, ah well, maybe another time. Bless him, he loves his spa treatment and after all the work he puts in who could blame him, hahahaha!!
Jane x
ALERT: POLY & Bd/Sm Carlisle/Bella/Jasper
18 year old Bella has always been at the top of her class even graduating early from high school and getting accepted to Dartmouth on a full scholarship. She enjoyed two years of great grades and loved college. For the first time during her junior year she starts to struggle not in one class but two. She makes a plan to go and confront the two professors who just happen to be cousin and share an office even though they are in separate departments. What she did not know was that they have been scheming to get what they want the innocent Miss Swan.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Carlisle
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75116 Read Count: 57626
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
Although Bella's all hormonal and moody I do think she's behaving like a petulant child throwing a tantrum because she can't have her own way, her age is really beginning to show. She really should be able to reconcile in her mind the fact that not having sex for a few weeks means her daughter has a better chance of being born when she's full term with, fingers crossed, no health problems. Nothing is more important than that. The guys will survive, they might have to wait even longer after the birth as Bella might not feel like having sex for quite a few weeks, lol.
Jane x
Author's Response:
I was 22 when I was acting like this, it made people think I was younger than I was and that I wasn't old enough to be having a baby.
Hugs
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
I know Bella's frustrated and hormonal but can't she rationalise the fact that she has to slow down to make sure she has a healthy baby at all? It could be worse she could be on permanent bed rest and only allowed up for an hour a day. The sooner it's time for the baby to arrive the better, lol.
Jane x
Author's Response:
First I want to say sorry I didn't respond sooner I didn't get the notifications that you had left reviews. I know TWCS is having problems and I guess that is one of their problems, with that said, I will say.... OK Bella is acting like I did with my second pregnancy. I didn't like the fact my doctor made me quit working and stay at home all because I was dialating and not having contractions, for me I know most of that was because of all the snow and ice on the ground and I walked every where. I still didn't handle it correctly and took it out on everyone around me.
HUGS
Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow, a lot went on in this chapter, your story really moves fast. I was surprised by Bella being so forward at the beginning but she was a girl on a mission to keep her college place. I think she's probably done that anyway without the sexual favours, they just came as a major bonus, lol. Another surprise is Jasper and Carlisle's family being so open and accepting of their new poly relationship, well all but Rose. *rolls eyes* I get the feeling that Bella's parents will be disowning her in the not too distant future so it's good that she'll have her surrogate family. It saddens me that parents do that to their children, nothing on this earth could make me disown my daughter.
Jane x
Author's Response:
When this was first written it was a one shot for a contest and everyone asked me to continue it.
HUGS
Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Well I wasn't expecting that to happen. Poor Bella, even though they wouldn't have approved of her relationship with the guys they were still her parents and she loved them. I can't believe that Bella wasn't down at the clinic after their first weekend together. Is she going to be pregnant already when she finally gets there?
Jane x
Author's Response:
I'm not sure why I decided to have Bella's parents die, but it felt like the right thing to do.
HUGS
Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Poor Bella, she's grief stricken and feeling alone, she's just drifting in her own life and needs something to anchor her. Will Jasper and Carlisle be her salvation or will all of this now be too soon after her parents death? Time will tell I suppose.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Time will tell how everything goes.
HUGS
Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Out Take
If Bella's not pregnant by the time she gets to that clinic it will be a flaming miracle. I know she's got her mind still on the loss of her parents but she really needs to her head together on this one, unless it's a subconscious action so that she'll no longer be alone in the world. Of course you could be completely leading me up the garden path, lol, I hope you are. I think Bella's idea of being shown all the toys in the playroom was a good one and I'm a little surprised that, knowing how Bella had no experience whatsoever, the guys didn't do this in the first place or at least explain what they were using on her once they started to play.
Jane x
Author's Response:
They didn't want to scare here and for some people who have no exerience it would scare them.
HUGS
Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
I think Bella's showing amazing control to say that she's only just been introduced to the scene. How she managed not to orgasm with that bullet inside her all night, I have no idea, lol. Finally, it's clicked with her about her period and possibly being pregnant.
Jane x
Author's Response:
It's been so long since I've written this that I can't tell you what I was thinking or why I had her do certian things. I can say that I can hold off orgasms and cum on command.
HUGS
Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
No surprise there then, I am wondering which one is the Dad though, lol. I'm glad that they didn't get mad at Bella realising that they should have talked about birth control and what Bella was using, right at the beginning. Will the pregnancy cause problems for Bella at school, is she going to miss a lot of school as the baby will probably be due right at the beginning of the school year?
Jane x
Author's Response:
you will have to see what goes down.
HUGS
Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
You know some people could get jealous. Bella goes from being a virgin to having two guys at the same time and some hot sex. Is it me that's jealous? Lol, what do you think? *pouts*
Jane x
Author's Response:
I would give anything to have these two men blushes and runs and hides.
HUGS
Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
Mmmm, the wax play was really yummy. I love how Bella's so horny and she makes no excuses for it. Is it the pregnancy? I know I was like that when I was pregnant, lol. I'm so glad they've found Alice to be her doctor, someone involved in the lifestyle will be much more understanding.
My ratings are based on everything really, punctuation, spelling, grammar, plot, how the story flows. Overall you have a really good story that flows well and makes me want to carry on reading, which I personally feel is a major hurdle overcome. Now I might sound as though I'm contradicting myself because although your story does flow, sometimes it feels rushed and a bit choppy (does that make sense?) Sometimes grammar and punctuation are incorrect and your tenses can become muddled but it doesn't detract from your story. I hope this helps and please know that I don't wish to offend you, you're still a better author than me for actually posting your work and putting yourself out there and there's probably half a dozen punctuation and grammatical errors in this review, lol.
Jane x
Author's Response:
You have not offended me. I know I'm not perfect. tenses are my weakest point.
HUGS
Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
I can understand why Alice would not want to report James for what he's done given his position in the police. I would be scared as well. At the end of the day she has to do what's right for her but James will do this again to someone else and he'll carry on until someone says enough and either reports him or kills him. I'm so glad she felt secure enough in her friendship with Bella to ask her for help and Im sure the guys will help her too.
Jane x
Author's Response:
It's a very tough postion Alice is in.
HUGS
Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
kidnapped, lol, in the nicest possible way or course. It's definitely exhausting being spoiled with shopping, it always seems like a good idea until you're entering the fiftieth shop of that day, lol. I love how close the whole family is and how loved they make Bella feel. Is Alice going to be ready for another Dom so soon? It could take her a while to get over what happened to her never mind to actually submit to a Dom again. A lot of trust will need to be built up between them.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Only time will tell when Alice is ready, but you will get to read that hehe.
HUGS
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
Lol, didn't the Senator and Alice have a lot in common. *raises eyebrow* Carlisle and Jasper know their Doms. The swing is proving popular, lol, I wouldn't mind a go myself. *grins*
Happy New year.
Jane x
Author's Response:
I for one would love a swing, but I guess you have to have a sex life to have a need for one. Cancer took that and playing away from me. When you belong to a club and get to watch other Dom's with their subs you learn a lot about them and add in a friendship you start to understand them.
Happy New Year
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
Even though it's exciting that the baby's on it's way I feel sorry for Bella being in labour on her birthday. My daughter was born 2 days after my birthday, I wasn't in labour on my birthday and thank God for that because I wouldn't wish a birthday full of pain on anyone. Will they share the same birthday or not? I hope they don't. This will sound really selfish but as a parent you give up so much and it's nice to have a day for yourself and not to have to share.
Jane x
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
Awww, baby Jasmyne. The next one's going to Carlisle's then, lol, we'll let her get over this one first. The labour wasn't that bad apart from the frustrating part when the contractions stopped, Bella must have given a massive push for her to pop out so quickly, lol. I'm glad she arrived safely and Bella's alright. Mums get treated well in the US, in the UK after the baby's been bathed, Mum's delivered the afterbirth and baby's had a go at latching on then it's Mums turn for the slow walk to have a bath. It's quite the puzzle, after parting with an 8lb baby, to work out how to get into a bath without any help, lol. Wouldn't have missed it for the world.
Jane x
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
Hmmm, I hope Bella's sorted out her birth control or else there might be another little baby on the way soon. It's quite the juggling act they have going on and I think Bella just lost herself in the moment, she has so many roles now it's going to take a bit more time to compartmentalise each one.
Jane x
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
God, when can I go round for dinner? Lol. Bella should take comfort in her weekend of play not being the disaster she feels it is. She realised what had made her slip and now Carlisle knows they can do something about it. It''s bound to take time to re-adjust after being away from it for so long and, of course, everything else that's happened.
Jane x
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
That was hot! *phew* All anniversaries should be celebrated that way, lol. I'm really glad that Rose and Bella have developed a friendship. I'm glad that she's come to terms with the fact that it doesn't matter how or who you love but that you do love and that it's returned.
Jane x
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
Awww, another baby. It looks as though these three are going to be super fertile and double bagging will be the only answer, lol. The baby has to be Carlisle's, I know he'll love it no matter what but he'd be so gutted to have to wait even longer to have a biological child.
Jane x
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
Awww, another girl and so tiny but perfect and healthy and that's what matters. I'm so glad that both Jasper and Carlisle get to experience the joy of their own child. Little Jasmyne's going to be a fab big sister. Will the permanent morning sickness put Bella off having more and what about the wedding or commitment ceremony? I'm off to find out.
Jane x
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue
Wow, what a way to end! That was your hottest lemon by far, lol. I think the epilogue deserves an epilogue all of it's own to continue in the playroom, but then I can be just a tad greedy, bwahahahaha!! I'm so glad that everything has turned out for them, they've had their ups and downs but they've found their way through with the help of their family and friends. I've really enjoyed this story, thank you for sharing it.
Jane x
Covet – verb (used with object)
1. To desire wrongfully, inordinately, or without due regard for the rights of others: to covet another’s property.
After a rather debauched weekend, all that is coveted shall be taken. "Your ass has been mine for a long time, Darlin'. Now we're just gonna make it official." As featured on The Twinklings Blog! AH, oneshot.
Banner by MissKingAtYourService.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6717 Read Count: 1747
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Covet
Damn!! That was hot. I really wish it wasn't a one shot. I love Jasward stories, there just aren't enough of them around. *sigh*
Loved it!!
Jane x
Banner by lovely and talented Mehek18!
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Summary: 33 yr old billionaire tycoon, Edward Cullen is engaged to his childhood sweetheart and Chicago´s cutthroat DA, Isabella Swan; it would appear they were the perfect power couple, but everyone has secrets, some a little darker than others. Enter 17 yr old Jasper Whitlock, recently orphaned and emotionally troubled he leaves his home in Texas and moves in with his cousin Rosalie and her husband Emmett McCarty, he too has a few skeletons in his closet. As a favor to his friends; Edward hires Jasper to be his yard boy for the summer. What happens when just after two weeks more than just the hedges are being trimmed at the Cullen/Swan Esate? And just how does DA Swan fit into all of this? Poly/Slash/Kink, OOC, E/B, E/J, E/BJ
http://www.krazi4twisaga-thegrassisalwaysgreener.blogspot.com/
Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45044 Read Count: 36392
Date: 09 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...
That.....that was an amazing day at the office if you ask me. Why do mine never turn out like that? Lol. Oh my God, Alice! How long has she known? Do Edward and Bella know she knows? Is this one of their secrets? Oooooh so many questions and now I'm all caught up I'm hoping that the internet Gods and laptop Gods stop conspiring against you, get their act together and start working for you. Sheesh, I'm so selfish, lol.
Jane x
I have some recs for you:-
Headward Cullen, Jizzper Whitlock and Titlight by French Caresse
Never Forget by Jasper1863Hale
Lights, Camera, Interaction by TrueEnglishRose, texasbella
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Closer I Get to You...
I want a day like Bella's, I could really do with one like that right now. Even better though I'd love a night like Bella's, geez, I need a cold shower. Bless Jasper worrying about whether he'd be any good, awww. I think that's all any of us think about when it's our first time, yes even the girls. Lol.
Jane x
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...
Hmmm, what other secrets do Edward and Bella have? Was Edward adopted into Bella's family when his parents passed away? Will Edward and Bella get married? It seemed like it was real, then a cover and then real again, it's probably the way I read it. Ooooh so many secrets, I can't wait to find out more.
Jane x
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Coming Together... The Consummation of the Trinity...
Well I wasn't quite expecting a butt plug to be involved but then it's always a bonus, lol. Jasper's attack was traumatic and brutal and although telling Edward everything has unburdened him he may still need to talk to someone else. That was one hot lemon, I need a lie down, lol.
Jane x
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...
Lol, Bella really doesn't do well with surprises does she. I can only imagine what Edward and Jasper are up to and I'll find out properly in a minute. I'm still dying to find out more about their secrets. What did Caius do? So that was what Jasper and Bella were laughing at, their sexy time in the pantry. How sweet was Jasper, "Am I doing it right?" Awww, bless him. Hold on to your socks Jazzy you're about to be corrupted beyond your wildest dreams, hahahaha! Well, I'm assuming he's about to be. *grins*
Jane x
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 It´s Not Easy... Being Me...
Wow, there's a lot going on for Jasper. I love the relationship Jasper has with Riley although it's a little sad that their closeness developed from lost parenting in one way or another. I'm glad that Mike didn't manage to rape Jasper, it's bad enough that he attacked him causing Jasper to have nightmares. What a surprise for Jasper to find himself working for a couple that are more than interested in him joining them, possibly every bi-sexual seventeen year olds dreams come true, bwahahaha!! Just how loaded is Jasper? Things are about to get interesting, lol.
Jane x
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Two´s Company... Three´s So Much Better...
Well that's one way to fertilise the lawn, bwahahaha!! I've had this in my favourites for a while and now I'm wondering what took me so long to dive in and start reading. I love slash and poly fics and recently found myself enjoying some daddy kink, so what the hell, lets throw them all in there and have some mommy kink too. I'm intrigued to find out what happens with these three. Oh, and I love the blog as well. *grins*
Jane x