Penname: Robsblueeyes [Contact] Real name: Jane
Member Since: 10 Dec 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hi,


My name is Jane and I'm a 44 year old single mum from Manchester in the UK. I'm a stay at home mum at the moment but I'm looking for a job, need to pay the bills. I discovered Twilight when the film came out and everyone was raving about the books. The books weren't well known in the UK at all, in fact, you may have found it difficult to find them at all, the film fuelled their popularity. Anyway, I bought the books for my daughter who wanted to know what all the fuss was about. That was 4 years ago and she's never read the books, not one word...I can hear you all gasping in disbelief...I however, devoured them. I couldn't get enough, completely absorbed was an understatement it was the best diet I've been on. I was so consumed by these characters the bare minimum of housework was done, my daughter reminded me every day that she was hungry and I needed to feed her, laundry was done at the last possible moment and the ironing got done on a need to wear basis...my obsession was born.


I'm Team Edward, always have been and always will be but Jasper owns a place in my heart too. After reading the books countless times I found both FanFiction and Twilighted through Twitter, some ladies on there were rec'ing some fics and my curiosity got the better of me. One of the first fics I read was Master of the Universe and I'm sure you've all read that one too, another one was Clipped Wings and Inked Armour, another amazing story and thus began my second obsession. I can't get enough, I'm on both sites every day unless the 'puter breaks then I go into withdrawal. Twilighted feeds my need for RP Fics mainly Rob and Jackson, some Kellan works it's way in there too but I read all types. I love slash and polyamorous stories and I've found that you find more of those on here. I've started to write a story myself, the characters popped into my head one day and now they won't leave me alone. I'm not sure that I'm a good enough writer that I'd ever put it out there for others to read, at the moment I'm just enjoying writing it for me.


So that's me, feel free to ask my anything you want to know, you can follow me on Twitter @Janeybo send a request and I'll follow you back, I usually drop in there every day at some point, sometimes I just lurk other times I'll spout complete nonsense, I don't think my followers realise that Janeybo and Robsblueeyes are one and the same person. All the Robporn on there keeps me busy and of course there's 100 Monkeys, Kellan and Peter Facinelli. I'm beginning to think this all might be taking over my life slightly...what life I hear you all cry...ah well, you have to have some pleasures don't you? I may even say it's a guilty one, my daughter would die of shame if she knew all this. BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
Jane x


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Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 151246
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning Of The Truth

I'm definitely intrigued with this story, the concept of Forks as a predominantly polygamist town is interesting to say the least.  I'm looking forward to reading more and catching up.

Jane x

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: What Happens Behind Closed Doors

After Rosalie's little display I'm wondering how she'll react to finding out that Edward thinks Bella completes him and would love for her to join their family.  I know Rose comes from a polygamous family but it doesn't automatically mean that you have complete control over what you become jealous of. 

Bella raised some good points when she was thinking of all the things she wants to know about this type of relationship and marriage.  Take Rose's punishment as an example, do all polygamous marriages have this sort of punishment when someone steps out of line?  Is someone punished just for disrespecting the head of the house or are they punished for disrespecting another wife?  I wonder how Bella's going to feel about this side of things.

Jane x

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: The Most Basic Facts

Bella certainly got a fascinating insight into what Christian Polygamy is about and a little more than she bargained for too, lol.  I'm glad that Rosalie has started to trust Bella a little.  Little does Bella know that she's the part that's missing.

Jane x

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Family Ties

It's so sad about Edward's Mum, he was so young when she died.  Family get togethers must be interesting, especially when you get into extended family with siblings partners and children, my God you'd have to hire a town for a party, lol.

Edward must be rolling in money to fund this lifestyle, I know both Rosalie and Alice work, but still.  What on earth has Alice been spending all that money on?  Will Bella find out about the punishment?  What will she say?

Jane x

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Money Problems

Wow, that was very brave of Alice to let Bella witness her punishment, I don't think that's something that I could do if I was in the same position, actually I don't think I could witness it either.  I thought it was amazing that Bella understood what the punishment was about, that Edward wasn't trying to humiliate his wife, it was very perceptive of her whereas most people would just view this as being humiliating and degrading.  Will she put this in the article? 

Jane x

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Explaining The Pain

Was Bella completely oblivious to what Edward and Alice were doing in the corner of the room?  Lol.  What I want to know is who punishes Edward if he steps out of line and breaks one of their house rules?  Surely he's not that perfect.

Jane x

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: A Woman's Perception

Oh my God!  Aro is a sick bastard.  How can he do that to his wives and children and call himself a Christian?  He should be jailed for the rest of his life and castrated which is way too lenient for someone like him.  I'm amazed that anyone in that family survives.  Rose is definitely a survivor, it's testament to her own strength and Edward's love that she able to lead a full life with him and Alice.  It's also amazing that the cruel torture she endured hasn't put her off the lifestyle at all.

I meant to mention this in my last review but got sidetracked.  As Alice mentioned she knew she'd get into trouble for breaking the rules and she still chose to do it.  We know that Edward becomes aroused during punishment and Alice is extremely horny aftewards so with that in mind, does Alice break the rules on purpose, either consciously or subconsciously, for a deeper sexual gratification?  Does she crave that dominant side of Edward which he mostly keeps in check?

Jane x

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Getting Personal

What Rose has had to say is bound to take its toll on everyone and she hasn't even finished her story yet, well I'm bracing myself for the rest.  I love the dynamics of all their relationships and how well they all really know each other.  Some people spend a lifetime together, just one on one, and still don't fully know their other half.

Jane x

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Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Emotions Involved

They've all had such vastly different experiences growing up.  Even Edward, though it seemed he had a good childhood despite his mothers death, the wealth his family has brought problems with making friends and his grandparents hatred of Carlisle formed a rift that a young Edward wouldn't understand.  Poor Bella got shunted from one place to another never staying long enough to put down roots and make proper friends and of course, we know about Rose.  What about Alice's childhood, was hers just completely happy and normal?

How did Aro move, undetected, with his thirteen wives was it and seventy six, well seventy five children after Rose left?  I can't say I'm sad at Royce and his cronies being murdered but I wish someone had got to Aro too.  I'm with Edward, Carlisle has more up his sleeve than he's saying.

Jane x

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Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Out In The Open

Rose's story is very touching and I'm glad that she finally got to confront Aro, she should have kicked him in the balls whilst she was at it, lol.  Her life after Aro with Edward has been one of discovery for her and now that she's completely unburdened herself and she realises that Bella truly thinks she is a strong woman and does not pity her, maybe she'll begin to believe it herself and she'll be ready for that baby.

That said, it doesn't seem that she's ready to accept another wife into their family.  Could Edward's feelings for Bella cause too much pain and jealousy for Rose to bear?

Jane x

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Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Suppression

I'm thinking that this might be the beginning of a very tough time for Rosalie.  Whilst I sympathise with Rose's past and that it's contributed to making her a selfish person, I feel that she may be playing on it a little to get her own way.  Edward knows she's selfish and has pandered to that side of her because of her past.  She has to learn to stop using it and deal with it in a different way, the release she gets from her 'sessions' with Edward makes her feel better but causes both Edward and Alice emotional pain, just another example of her selfish behaviour.

Rosalie's problems could cause so much more tension for the whole family especially with Edward falling for Bella, who Rose clearly doesn't want to accept as another possible wife even though she convinced Edward that she wanted a polygamist marriage and encouraged him to find another wife.  Surely even she should realise that with the many parts that make up a whole person, in this type of marriage, there are going to be many wives each bringing a unique part of themselves to make that person complete.

Don't get me wrong, I do have sympathy for Rose and I would in no way want to make it seem that what she went through was anything less than the pure torture it was.  What I am saying is that she has to learn to take charge of her own emotions and deal with them in a different way, she has to take that power that was taken away from her back not give it to someone else.

Jane x

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Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Charge

Poor Alice, I thought she might have had a bit more or a normal childhood but no, she was used as a show pony and then when she grew too old to be cute she was left to fend for herself.  Fair enough she wasn't abused physically but she was certainly mentally abused and neglected.  Thank God she found her way with the guidance of the hospital staff and made something of herself, she has to be proud of that and for everything she has done through her store as well. 

I'm glad that Rosalie seems to have reached a turning point in her life, let's hope that she finds the courage from somewhere to deal with her emotions and how she lets them go.  I think Rose is thinking that if Bella was to join their family that she's going to be pushed more to the periphery and then out, especially with both Alice and Edward on Team Bella.  Edward can say as often as he likes that he won't pursue Bella but sometimes things aren't that simple and easy.

Jane x

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Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Flashback

Oh my God, poor Bella!  It's hard enough to lose a parent in normal circumstances when they pass away from old age or a heart attack but to be killed right in front of you.  I'm sure it's took a long time for Bella to reach the place, mentally, that she's in now.  What happened explains why Renee felt that she had to leave and also why she kept moving around.  I'm sure she felt insecure and that if she stayed in one place for too long that something bad would happen again.  Will she tell her full story to all them?

Jane x

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Revelations Before The Fire

I'm so glad that Edward and Bella have talked about their feelings for each other and Bella wants to try dating Edward.  It really would be weird going into that sort of situation, I wonder how Bella will cope.  I don't think Rosalie's going to be happy about this.

Jane x

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Fire's Blazing

Time for Rosalie to grow up and face the music.  It's madness having a timescale for everything.  How can you possibly agree to being married for a year and then say you'll start trying for a baby?  The timing could be all wrong, as obviously it was for Alice.  Rose isn't the only one that might have plans and because of one thing or another those plans have to change.  It was hard for Rose to hear but she has been extremely self centered.  Does she automatically get to be head wife because she was the first, is that how it works?  I would still imagine that in a polygamous marriage that it's still a partnership, one made up of equals.

It saddens me that Rose's sisters are so ready to step in and cause problems for Bella so that Rose can keep her family just the way it is.  It says so much about their upbringing and I am glad that Rose turned them down, I would have thought so much less of her if she'd agreed to their help.

Jane x

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Alice have been friends with benefits for ten years. When they meet Edward and Jasper, they find their missing peices. How will their families deal with their relationships? NC-17 for Lots of lemons: E/B, A/J, B/J, A/E, A/B, E/J, E/B/A/J

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102919 Read Count: 293441
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Bwahahahaha!!  Poor Sam, it's a wonder he hasn't gone blind but at least he can see the funny side now and he isn't calling them perverts anymore, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Lol, if only Sam knew what went on during that flight.  I can't believe Peter and Charlie got caught in the mens room giving blow jobs, hahahaha, how mortifying.  The tables really have been turned, it's usually the kids getting caught doing stuff like that not the parents.  I love how Bella keeps teasing them about it.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Woohoo!!  Jasper's a Cullen now, I'm glad his family didn't mind him changing his name, I thought they might have gone down the double barrelled route.  I would love to go on a helicopter tour like they did, it would be amazing.  I need a lie down after that session.  I really think Bella loved being blindfolded and tied up judging from her reactions and the amount of orgasms she had, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Lol, I don't know what it is but I'm getting the feeling that both Edward and Bella love a bit of danger and exhibitionism, hehe!

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Well thank God Lauren's gone and hopefully those photos of her and Jessica's threesome will stop her doing anything stupid to get back at Bella.  I'm glad they have a supporter in Seth and it sounds as though the Volturi's are okay with their relationship as well.  I think Bella got home at just the right time, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I think they secretly love shocking people with their PDA's, lol, I know I would. They've definitely laid the ground from when Charlotte, Peter, Carlisle and Esme arrive to begin their new lives with  Charlie, Renee, William and Catherine, perhaps the town will have got used to the idea because they'll have been gossiping about Bella, Alice, Edward and Jasper.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I think that may just be the quietest sex they've ever had, lol.  Ben and Angela were suitably shocked but they took it well.  I think Angela's going to enjoy having two poly families in their quiet town and with all four sets of parents being in one place it will mean that she'll get to see much more of Alice and Bella.  I think she'll be a great supporter of all of them if things start getting a bit rough.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Lol, there's nothing like addressing the elephant in the room, bless Angela and her curiosity, hahahaha, that's what I'm calling it anyway.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Lol, Charlie made me laugh.  'If I'm not getting any then neither are you.'

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

There will always be those who are ready to judge and just can't live and let live and unfortunately most of them will never change.  I'm not too sure though that shouting at each of them is going to be very productive, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

God, they're so hot together.  They should film their time together for the boys, I'm sure they'd love to see what they get up to, Bella and Alice would have them begging for more or would that be mercy?  Lol.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I think Bella's reaction to taking over Carlisle's company was a natural one.  It doesn't matter how many letters are in those files or how many files there are, it's an unfortunate fact of life that when a woman gets a high powered job there will always be those who say she's slept her way to the top.  Like Alice said they know it's not true and that's all that matters but still it doesn't make it any easier to hear the whispers and know what some people are thinking.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Like I've said before it amazes me that they ever get out of bed, damn!!  They could certainly give their parents a few pointers, lol.  I love how Bella embarrasses them all when she starts talking sex with their parents, it's usually the other way around and I love that she turns the tables on them, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

They did organise a wedding for them and on such a romantic date as well. Edward and Jasper really got cool presents from Bella and Alice, no wonder Garrett was a little jealous, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Have they gone and arranged the intrepid fours wedding for them?  I want to know what was in Esme's box. *pouts*

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Having an architect in the family is the best, you never have to look for another house as long as you live, they can just design and build it for you, well get the contractors to build it for you, lol.  It sounds as though Garrett's going to need time along with Kate to rebuild that trust in people, they'll both get there.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Say what you think Bella, don't hold back, lol.  It seems that this family just gets bigger and bigger by the minute.  Do  Rose and Emmett feel a bit hypocritical?

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

This lot just turn heads wherever they go, I'm not sure they should be allowed out in public, lol.  Charlotte was really worried about Bella's reaction to her relationship with Renee and Charlie, I can understand that but I think deep down she knew that Bella would be okay with it.  You have to be who you are. Now, will Carlisle and Esme be making a foray into poly territory or are they strictly just a couple?

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

God Lauren is so desperate but obviously Danie and Jack aren't, lol, I bet that pisses her off even more. They haven't shown their parents their rings yet, in fact no one has mentioned their engagement.  I know they were slightly distracted by their parents fucking on the couches but still nothing usually gets in the way of that girly squealing 'let me see your ring' moment.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Bwahahahahah!!  Couch sex for the parents, a bit of wife swapping and caught by the kids, lol, all in all an interesting start to the day. *falls about laughing*

Oh, and I'm so glad they said yes, was there ever any doubt?  Back to the drawing board for me, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Awww, aren't they a pair of old romantics, lol, that was a lovely proposal and their parents are all really happy for them.  In fact it seems that the intrepid four are giving everyone the courage to explore their own sexuality and boundaries.  They better say yes, it they don't, then I will, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Well I think the whole house now knows how much these four love each other, lol, there could be a lot of red faces at breakfast in the morning.  I wonder how Charlie, Renee, Charlotte and Peter are getting on, hehe!

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

That was hilarious, all of them slowly catching on to what type of party it was that they met at but oh my, I'm thinking that this family dynamic is about to get a bit more complicated.  Would Charlie and Peter really be open to this type of relationship for themselves?

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Okay, so if you didn't hear it, the penny just dropped.  Jasper's mum, Charlotte is the Renee's best friend isn't she?

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh my effin God!! *runs to next chapter*

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh my God, poor Bella, when is she going to stop being everyone's target.  I'm glad Alex is gone, he won't be able to hurt anyone ever again and now Kate can come home and begin to rebuild her life with the love of her family.  Are Jessica and Lauren going to cause problems for them all at work?  Are people going to be thinking that they can just come on to them because of the lifestyle they lead?

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

It's so good that Bella was able to help Kate.  Women who are abused are not weak they just can't see a way out and other people need to remember that not only is the abuse physical but is mental abuse as well and that's how women end up staying, I'm so glad she's got out and I hope that she never contacts Alex.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Well I didn't expect that at all.  Didn't Carlisle or Esme have any idea what was going on?  Sometimes parents have a sixth sense about these things and they obviously notice a difference in their childs behaviour.  It's sad that Bella had to go through that but thank God Jacob won't be rearing his ugly head.  It seems that Bella's attracts unwanted attention what with Jacob and now Alex, she really is going to need to be careful.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Well so much for the quietest sex they've ever had.  I think they need to go back to drawing board with that one, lol.  What on earth is going on with Kate and Alex?

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

They can't start fooling around now, they'll be late for dinner at Mike's, lol. Finally he penny has dropped for Renee.  Like I've said before, religion has a lot to answer for.  I'm just glad that after her own experiences both with her best friend and her parents, Renee was able to take things back to basics and really work out what she thought about it.  I love how Charlie and Renee cringe when they see the bedroom where, nearly all, the magic happens.  I wonder how much they'd cringe if they knew what happens of the couch as well, bwahahahaha!!

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Well, it looks like Renee is finally getting there.  Maybe, if Jasper's parents don't take the news well, she'll be able to offer them some advice and support.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Damn!!  How do they even get out of bed, never mind put clothes on and leave the house.  I need a lie down, lol.  I can't wait to find out what they bought the boys.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Three out of four isn't a bad result.  Hopefully, given time Renee will accept Bella the way she is.  Lol, this lot are going to fade away, they haven't had anything to eat since breakfast.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Well Rose and Emmett are dark horses aren't they and maybe that's why they disapproved of Alice and Bella so much, they were embarrassed and ashamed that they enjoyed what happened with Amber a little too much and they thought it was wrong.  Religion has so much to answer for.  I'm glad that Charlie's finally sticking up for Bella.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

What!?  What does she mean "Let's go find out."  Does this have something to do with her and Carlisle or Kate and Alex?

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Lol, I've always wanted to be adopted by Carlisle and Esme, hahaha!!

I'm not sure how this confrontation is really going to work out but it looks as though Charlie's been suffering since everything went down.  It serves him right though really because if he doesn't agree with Renee he should have spoke up and fought for Bella.  Personally, if my parents had said all that to me, I wouldn't make any effort and I'd cut off all contact with them to the point of asking Rose not to talk about me to them, but then I'd cut my nose off to spite my face.

I'm so happy that both Carlisle and Esme consider all them their children.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Hmmm, that is confusing.  What's Kate and Alex's problem?  I think Alex has thought that Jasper and Edward are gay and possibly wonders about Bella and Alice but why is he taking extra interest in Bella and why's Kate so frosty with her?  I love to see how Edward and Jasper's relationship is blossoming.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm not sure that Bella really needed any more confirmation of what her mum thinks of her.  I can understand why Rose put her on speakerphone, all of them now know the type of vitriol that their mother spews and Rose got to have more of her say and defend Bella, but was there any need for her to hear more of the same and worse?  No, there wasn't and it just made her hurt and misery more acute.  At least, out of all this, it's brought Rose and Emmett closer to them all and they're beginning to realise that love is the most important thing and it doesn't matter whether it's two girls, two boys, a girl and boy or all of the above.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

It was such an emotional day for them all but especially for Bella and Alice, I'm glad they all have each other and that Rose and Emmett are going to try to understand and accept their different relationship.  I bet their faces were a picture at the airport, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow!  That was a bit turn around for Rose and Emmett but I imagine hearing your mum talk to your sibling like that is enough to open anyone's eyes.  Alice and Bella's parents were beyond awful to them.  How can you say things like that to your child?  Well, they've paid the price now because Rose and Emmett have walked away from them too.  I'm glad they've all apologised to each other and promised to start afresh.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

It sounds as though Bella's on a hiding to nothing with her family.  The star of the show is obviously the blue eyed, blonde haired married Rose and if you don't fall into that category or play by the same rules then you're obviously stupid and idiotic.  I don't think they have a snowball in hells chance of being accepted by their respective families.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I think it's really sad that Rose and Emmett can't just be the brother and sister that Alice and Bella need.  Religion gets in the way of so many things when it's really supposed to teach love, tolerance, acceptance and so many other valuable lessons, people use it the wrong way and turn it against family members, friends, Joe Bloggs down the road.  Those people who believe in God should know that he loves everyone no matter what, sins may have to be atoned for but he still loves everyone.  I don't necessarily believe in God but at the same time I don't believe that God would teach and agree with the judgement, bigotry and hate that people use on others in his name. There endeth the lesson, lol.  Seriously, I'm not here to bible bash or force my views on anyone, I just find it really sad that a person can't be accepted for the way they are and who they are when they aren't causing harm to anyone else.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Lol, I think Edward's in for a surprise when he reaches the promised land, hahaha.  Mike and Tyler were a turn up for the books, no wonder they were such a disappointment in the respective back seats of their cars. *snort*  I love how Jasper and Edward's relationship is developing and that they are comfortable enough and feel free enough to enjoy each others bodies.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm really surprised, I thought that Jasper and Edward would have been together fully.  Could Carlisle feel the attraction they all had for each other?  I think that maybe he could.  I'm glad they've had a bit of a talk already, agreed to dating and set a rule.  There's no point dancing around what you want, it just wastes time, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Lol, Edward's lost in his visions, mind you he really liked watching Bella and Alice at the party.  So, Carlisle did notice, the wiley old dog, lol.  I didn't realise that Rosalie and Emmett are actually married.  Is the apartment theirs or Rose and Bella's parents?  How old is everyone, because I'm thinking that it's rather childish of a married woman to be threatening her sister with their parents? She's working for God's sake, it's none of her parents or Rose's business what she does in her sex life.  If she doesn't like it and it's her apartment then she should ask Bella to move out, if it's not her apartment then she should move out herself.  I can see why Bella and Alice like making them squirm, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lol, that was one heck of a 'Hi, how are you?'  They didn't mess around with the preliminaries did they, hahahaha!

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hahahaha!  Well none of them were expecting that.  Just wait until Alice finds out and they find out about Alice.  Let's hope they can hold it together and not embarrass themselves in front of Carlisle.  It sounds as though Emmett and Rosalie are pair of prudes, or is it just a case of 'not in my back yard?' either way they need to get over themselves.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow, things are really moving fast for them all.  I think they should spend some time actually getting to know each other normally and not just carnally, lol.  Rose will be glad for her and Emmett to get the place to themselves.  I think we can safely say that Esme is on to what's going on between Edward and Bella and Jasper and Alice, but does she have a clue that they all like being together at the same time?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh my God!  It's a wonder these four even manage to get dressed.  Lol, with all the fucking they're doing they're going to need afternoon naps like Rose's pre-k kids.  Rose and Emmett have no room to talk, they can't take back what they did by saying ther realise it was wrong.  I hate it when people shove their beliefs down your throat.  They can believe what they like but they should keep it to themselves and not be so judgemental.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm glad Bella's moving out, I don't know how she's stood living there that long with Rose and Emmett's attitudes.  They really need to stop shoving their beliefs down Alice and Bella's throats.  I get that they're concerned for them and don't want them to get hurt but let's face it, you could have the straightest relationship going and still get hurt.  There are no guarantees in life.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I think it takes more for a man to get out of an abusive relationship.  It's harder for them to admit that a woman is doing this to them.  It's pride and stereotyping that does a lot of it but it's just as bad for a man as woman.  I'm glad that Garrett got away and now he has Kate, Emmett and Rose.  Lol, Sam will never be the same again and I think Emily is loving his embarrassment, hahaha!

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Woohoo, Mike and Tyler made it and surprised them all, it's such a shame that Ben and Angela couldn't be there with them.  

I think when they decide to have kids, if they're just going to leave it to chance, then when the baby's born they should have DNA tests to find out which one of the boys is the biological dad so that the child will always know even though they will all parent the kids together. They'll need to find out anyway because they'll have to arrange for the non biological parents to be able to consent for things like medical treatment, etc. Everything will work itself out.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Wow, waterfall smexy times are hot, hot, hot.

I love that they all get their family time before they get married to each other, I think they need this time together.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Oh my God!  Surely they won't be making it out of bed this time.  The parents may have to send out a search party, lol.  It was a beautiful ceremony, I love that they all included and it wasn't just a straight ceremony between Alice and Jasper and then Bella and Edward with the four of them thrown in at the end.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Aww, Alice is pregnant, I did think it was Bella because she was so starving hungry, lol.  I can't believe this has happened when they're all so happy.  Has Bella been in a coma for six months or is the sequel set six months in the future?  She can't remember Edward and Jasper, what about Alice, doe she remember Alice?  Their parents, what about them?

Jane x

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 194103
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: First Impressions are Forever

I'm so glad I put this in my favourites.  I'm going to be playing catch up for a while but I really like this start.  Edward may have been groomed for this life since he could walk but he still has a heart.  You write a very different Esme, that should be interesting, lol.  I'm not a fan of Jacob and very rarely like him in a story, so whatever you do to him is fine by me especially as he seems to be a sick psycho anyway, lol.  Oh, by the way, that house is amazing, where is it?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Mothers, Fathers and Everything in Between

I can't wait to find out what Esme did that caused the rift between her and Edward.  I'm intrigued that Carlisle doesn't know the full story of what happened.  Why doesn't he try to stop Esme from drinking and taking drugs? The first paragraph made me smile and I think you identify with that paragraph as well as I do.  As a single parent of a daughter that once she learned to talk she never shut up, I revelled in her bedtime and the quiet it offered me, my brain needed the break.  What makes me laugh is that she even talks in her sleep, lol.  Needless to say I related to that paragraph even though I'm not an assassin, hahahaha!!

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Becoming Whole Again

Oooo, things are gatting interesting.  Bella's having quite a profound affect on everyone, well everyone apart from Carlisle that is, maybe he'll fall under her spell when he gets to see her properly.  Will Bella be the person that helps Esme out of her spiralling demise and re-unite her and Edward?  It's a lot to ask of one person, but who knows she's had a big affect on almost everyone else. Edward spends so much time arguing with himself, it's a wonder he doesn't drive himself crazy, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Introducing The Demon

Carlisle's not a happy bunny is he?  He didn't seem to fall under Bella's spell but I live in hope, lol.  Alice is like a giddy little girl at a party.  She's already got Bella and Edward paired up, I know Edward's done that in his head too but actually hearing someone say it out loud is completely different.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Blood is pumping

I knew it!  I knew Charlie was still alive and that the insider was Esme.  Her judgement has been so clouded and now she's putting everyone at risk. Edward's going to go nuclear when he finds out what she's been doing.

I'm so glad that Felix is dead.  It's just a shame that Emmett and Jasper arrived when they did or else Demetri would be dead too.  Bella's so much stronger than Edward gives her credit for.  Oh, and I didn't need the sick bucket, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Vacations and Nightmares

Oh my God!  Demetri is truly a psychopthic schizo, he needs to die and die now. Poor Charlie, he survived Jacob and now he's in the clutches of Aro and his sickos.  Will he get the chance to see Bella again, apologise to her for his neglect throughout her life?  I hope so.

Lol, I can't believe Bella and he insistance on her engagement ring. Edward's getting more than he bargained for but I think he's getting used to it now what with his laundry mishap and kitchen incident, hahahaha!!  Will he buy Bella another ring and say it's for something else?  He desperately wants to give Bella the best but she doesn't need that from him.  She's not a material girl and he's going to have to find a different way to give her what she needs and show her that she has it.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 24: I Would Die for You

In training Edward to be the best assassin ever he destroyed his son.  I can't even begin to think what Esme thought of it all.  Did she not argue with Carlisle about what he was doing?  Surely she must realise that Edward is the way he is mostly because of her husband.  Bella is definitely good for him, she's making him human again and that's what Carlisle can't stand because he beat it out of him.  I'm glad Edward had his word vomit, he redeemed himself and his proposal, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 23: My December

Oh my God!  Poor Charlie, he's going to be wishing he died when Jacob attacked him.  Demetri has completely lost the plot and Alec is more scared of him than ever, if he had any sense he'd either kill him now or run.

Edward proposed!  I didn't expect him to do it so quickly, I thought they might be further into their holiday before he did.  Will she say yes?  I never think anything is really a given with Bella.  If she does say yes, will they marry before they get home? Alice will kill them if they do but I think she'd understand.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Holy Night

Okay, so between the last chapter, this one and two episodes of The Tudors I've really over done it on the sick torture, blood, guts and gore.......I feel physically sick.

I can't wait for Edward to get his hands on Demetri and Felix.  I'm thinking it will be a torturefest blood bath and so I'm getting my sick bucket ready for the occasion.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Silent Night

Oh my God!!  Poor Peter, how is he ever going to get past this?  He's going to hear his mother's screams every night, in his sleep, probably for the rest of his life.  What about poor Charlotte?  I hope Felix didn't make her watch but he's just as big of a sick fucker as Demetri so he probably did.  How did they find out about the kids?  I suppose this all goes back to whoever it is on the inside of The Clan.  Will Edward and Bella keep the children now and bring them up?  If they're place with other families there's nothing to say that Demetri and Felix won't find them again and kill them.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 9: My List

Edward has more humanity than he gives himself credit for.  I'm glad they've talked and laid their cards on the table, so to speak.  In Edward's line of work you really can't sugar coat things and Bella has to know what she's getting herself in to especially after what she's been through.  I'm really glad as well that she was able to be honest with Edward and tell him that she wants him. She's a strong woman and she's going to need to be to be a part of Edward's life, I think as well that being direct with each other is going to be key for them instead of skirting around a subject or a problem.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 10: What Is Normal Anyway?

Oooo, did Esme and James have an affair and Edward walked in on them?  I like Carmen she's very perceptive and she's right when she says that Edward still has a heart, he should listen to that where Bella's concerned but I also think Bella will work her own kind of magic on Edward as well.  I loved the pillow fight, we caught a glimpse of the fun loving and carefree Edward that he probably was as a child before his 'responsibilities' took over.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Somewhere in the Middle

So James and Esme did have an affair and Alice was the result. Oh my God!  If Alice found out she would be devastated and it could destroy her relationship with her mum completely.  I feel a little sorry for Carlisle being decieved and betrayed in that way by his wife and his brother.  I still have to wonder about Carlisle's attitude towards his wife.  Why does he stand by and watch her drink herself into oblivion every single day?  Does he know?  Did Esme cave in under the weight of her guilt and confess to Carlisle?  There has to be something going on between them for this to be allowed to carry on.  You try to help the ones you love, not turn a blind eye.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Same In The End

The secret's out.  Edward really was in a no win situation with this where Alice was concerned.  Hopefully, given time, she'll realise that he did what he thought was best for everyone.  Carlisle took the news better than I thought he would, I'm amazed he's standing by Esme but then they've been together for alot of years and I should imagine more of them were good than bad.  James obviously has never been taught the most valuable lessons of all or he didn't care, never bite the hand that feeds you and don't pee on your own doorstep. So now Edward has all this to deal with and his demon.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 May 2013 Title: Chapter 13: I Trusted You

The demon got some of his way then.  I'm not sure it's a good idea to beat your employees to a bloody pulp, surely that would leave them severely lacking in man power.  Edward's demon's going to need a different outlet for his frustration and anger with Edward for not paying attention, maybe Edward should take him for anger management classes, lol.  I hope Alice talks to Edward soon, lets him explain why he didn't tell her when he found out.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 May 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Sin

Damn!  Edward has some stamina, I thought it was funny how he just carried on when Rose burst into his room, lol, she might knock next time.  'Roll Bella a 'Doobie'' lol, I suppose it will chill her out for the drive.  I'm so glad that Alice has forgiven Edward, she made some valid points but I this was different, it involved their parents and their relationship, there was more at stake for everyone involved in this.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 May 2013 Title: Chapter 15: All My Daughters For a Son

Bella's independence is going to get her into big trouble if she doesn't watch out.  You'd think she'd know by now that if Edward or Jasper tell her to do something that she'd do it, that she'd realise it's to keep her safe but no, she has to stand there, question why and argue the toss, she's so infuriating.  I'm on the demon's side with this she really needs to be shown what she's got herself into and then maybe she'll start doing as she's told without question. She also needs to be taught how to defend herself properly.  I think Alice and Rose need to stop all the girly stuff for a while and make it clear to Bella in black and white what she needs to know, do and why.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 May 2013 Title: Chapter 16: We Gonna Run This Town

Well, there's nothing like a practical demonstration.  Finally, Bella's got the message, I'm really glad about that.  What's Esme done, what's she up to?  If Alice and Esme were supposed to be watching the bathroom door whilst Jasper was with Carlisle, why wasn't Esme there when Alice was unconscious?  She's definitely hiding something.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 17: I'll Always Come Home

So Edward's off to the Congo and they'll be separated for a while.  I hope Bella does stay away from Carlisle and doesn't try to confront him in any way, we know how fiesty she can be.  So it was Tanya and Demetri that attacked Alice. I'm still wondering where Esme was when this happened because Jasper was under the impression that she was with Alice.  I think Edward needs to take it easy on the phones, at this rate they're going to need a room full of spares, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 18: None So Corrupt as Those with Power

I think Edward's developing a conscience.  The thought that his target could have been Bella played on his mind, it concerned him.  I'm glad that nothing happened to Edward or Bella whilst he was away, well apart from Jasper driving Bella up the wall, lol.  It's clear that Edward is becoming reliant on Bella to centre him and make him feel whole, let's hope that nothing ever happens to her.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Good to be Home

Aro is one sick psycho.  He truly has to be a psycho not to care what happens to his own flesh and blood at all.  Who has got on the inside of The Clan?  I'm thinking it's Esme but then I think thats too obvious.  Was James at the ball?  I can still see Carlisle's point about Bella making Edward weak.  He could become careless because he's distracted in some way by Bella but Carlisle has to ask himself how he managed to still do his job when he had Esme and two young children.  People learn to compartmentalise.

Jane x

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 142669
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Aww, didn't that go well.  Edward's a big old softy and Charlie wants to see Bella happy and if it's with a thirty eight year old boyfriend then so be it.  I've come over all warm and fuzzy, lol.  Trust Jacob to turn up for dinner but then again, the banter between the three of them is hilarious.  "A dick in a box" bwahahahaha!!

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

These two are made for each other and these next three weeks without each other are going to be torturous.  I think Bella should write a book and become the author she's thought about being or she could go into screenwriting.  She's missed so much with all her studying to keep her place in college and then to graduate early, I don't think she should carry her education on any further she needs to get out and live her life.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Lol, I think we should give thanks every day for mobile phones with cameras, phone sex and toys, and you know the kind of toys I mean. *winks* Bwahahahaha!!  God, I'd love to drive that Aston Martin, it's pure sex on wheels, I also like Edward's suggestion for the outside of the car and Bella as well, haha.  Will Edward say anything else to Ben about Jessica?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So things aren't always quite what they seem and Edward's not the womaniser he's made out to be.  Will their age difference be an issue for Bella?  I'm looking forward to finding out more.  I love how you've made Edward British.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Blond haired nancy boy - bwahahahahaha!!  Poor Edward he's put his life on hold for his career, he's let himself be controlled by his management and publicist for too long, it's time to get his life back.  There's going to be some people with their noses out of joint when he does claim it back.  Rose doesn't hold back does she, just straight in there with her undisguised disgust at what she thinks he is.  Why is that couples always have to set up their single friends? It's like couples tourettes, they just can't help it but it's so annoying, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Bloody hell, Edward!  Argh!!  I can't believe he made a move on Bella and then left her hanging before he even kissed her.  These two are going to drive me insane, I could knock their heads together, lol.  I'm glad Rose explained to Bella why she was so bitchy towards Edward.  How are these two going to cope being apart for six weeks?  It's going to feel more like six months.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm not sure what I'd do if my mum insisted on calling me sis but I know I wouldn't be pleased, in fact I'd be more pissed off about that than her being pregnant.  Is that weird?  Bella's fighting a losing battle with herself, there's no way she can turn Edward down she's already thinking 'mine' after making her mind up that there's no future for her and Edward, she's completely deluded, lol.  Edward's a mess isn't he, he could do with Bella throwing him a bone, something to hold on to.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I loved how Bella told Charlie about Renee being pregnant, lol.  I'm quite surprised that she talked to him about Edward, in a bit of round about way, but I'm glad that she can talk to one of her parents.  Charlie's a typical dad, it's alright for everyone else but not his daughter, awww.  Bella was a woman on a mission with those DVD's, hahaha!!  Finally, after all those weeks they're together and in love and now Edward has to charm Charlie.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Oh that's so perfect that they had their own child as well.  All Edward needs now is a little boy, lol.  They came through everything that life threw at them and came out the other side better more grounded people, their love cementing them together.  I do love a happy ever after.  I'd love to know what happened to Jane.  I really enjoyed this, you are an amazing writer, thank you for sharing your story.

Jane x