Reviews by Lud
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

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Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983420
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Bella is having competition, maybe she will fight for Edward now.
I miss the hot sex.
Kisses and thanks.

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Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

YES! They are going there! Edward and Bella are so hot and crazy together. Esme will be closer to achieving your beautiful grandchildren. They have to stay a secret, I feel that if the family will go crazy. I want more please!

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Date: 23 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I did not expect that he could not remember anything, he needs to go back and talk, Bella feel so bad about it. I want more lemons, sex was really hot.
Thank you.

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Date: 18 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

So sweet!

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Date: 24 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

OMG! Bella needs to love Edward, he's so sweet! Emmett is not the smartest, if he thought some would see it is that Bella and Edward fuck buddy. Bella wants taco bell, she is pregnant? I hope so.

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Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Poor Edward! I wanted Bella to come back now, Bella needs to be shaken, she loves Edward ... I think Emmett will not discover that the girl is Bella, but Alice is very perceptive, she will discover.

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Date: 07 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Bella please be good for our boy, I know you want it.
Rosalie is a bitch.
I'm looking forward to this trip, let them be together ...

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Date: 14 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Chapter so hot! They are so blind, they're so needy, they really want. I wish Edward was in Forks after Bella, Bella's parents surely would have their true feelings.

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Date: 04 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm looking forward to the prom, I saw the dress, it's gorgeous! I love your Bella, she is not whiny with low esteem, I love a woman who knows how to appreciate.
Kisses.

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Date: 05 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like to kick ass Rosalie, but I aho the idea of r03;r03;Edward and Bella
share the room is good.
I see a very entertaining action thanks.

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Date: 05 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OMG! Recorded snoring Bella , I'll do it with my husband, he did not accept that snores (laughs). Edward is in denial, I love to see how this relationship will change. My husband and I started out as friends, we were neighbors and I played on the street with his younger cousinsr03;r03;, he is six years older than me, I never had interest in him and one day he saw that I grew up and began to come to around, I never noticed, he asked me in dating and I was not interested and was afraid to ruin the friendship, I was also afraid of the expectation of the family, our families were very friendly ... he was so charming, I accepted dating and are now married for 15 years and 3 children.
People find it funny when we, were friends, he saw me as a child, until I was no more. I think I love your story so I had no faith in our relationship when we started, but he said that we were to be together and we are.
I want more please.

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Date: 06 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I am against violence, but I loved that Bella hit Rosalie!
Rosalie is a egopista and unvejosa cow. Edward and Bella are so fofod together.
Emmett will realize that Edward did not sleep in your room?

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Date: 07 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Rosalie is a horrible, Bella poor person, I want to see how Edward will not hurt Bella.
I want so much to see their friendship develop into friends with benefits, and then to love.

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Date: 07 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

WOW!! They are so sweet ... I love them! They are perfect, I want to see them get hot, I know it will be uncomfortable at first, but they are so cute.
I love it and every time I want more.
Kisses.

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Date: 09 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'm so excited! I can not wait to see them warm., They are perfect together!

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Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I missed you this weekend! I am so looking forward to the prom, I feel it will be a knockout Bella, Edward will not know what hit him when you see Bella.
Kisses.

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Yes! They are going to party, dance, drink, they might even get hot for each other ... I can not wait for more.

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Date: 16 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I feel that things will soon change for Edward and Bella.
They begin just like sex but there are already feelings.

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Date: 17 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I'm looking forward to most this chapter, things are heating up!
Thank you.

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Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Wow Bella and Edward are killing me here! I'm anxious for more, I want to see how they accept passion and love. They hide family relationships? I love it!
Kisses.

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Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

So hot!!!

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Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

OMG! It was very hot! I believe they will remember everything, they were not that drunk, they drank just to get rid of inhibitions and gain courage. I want to see how this relationship will agree after.
Thank you!

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Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Edward can not do without Bella, he's addicted to it. I expect him to remember everything, Edward was not as drunk as Bella, she was really drunk.
I loved the pictures, they were very educational ...;-)

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Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Bella is so naive, she can not rule your heart, and she has intimacy with Edward, she can kiss him. I like that they keep secret, the family would be involved in the relationship.
Great chapter, clear that Edward will accept, I'm so excited.

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Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

YES! He accepted, Bella did not play clean, but I forgive because Bella in love and war, anything goes!

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Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I'm afraid of Rosalie now! Alice will realize that things have changed so she sees Edward and Bella.

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Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

WOW girl! These two can not keep his hands to each other. I do not know how Bella can get without kissing, she will end up kissing.
I'm so excited to see them interacting with the family.

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Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

WOW! Bella is very lucky, I think Alice will notice the change when you see them, they are very touching.

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Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

The sofa is definitely ruined, they are so addicted and unnoticed, the rule of no kissing is not preventing involvement.

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Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Edward is madly in love and addicted to Bella's body.
I hope Bella gives room for him in his bed.

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Date: 01 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

OMG! They are getting closer, Bella let him kiss, he is so sweet.
I'm anxious for more.

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Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Chapter so hot, I love the way that Edward cares for Bella.

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Date: 04 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I knew Edward would be the first to fall in love, I hope Bella open your eyes and allow yourself to love.
Chapter incredible.

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Date: 28 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

I'd like to kick away from Bella for Edward, he's amazing, I know she is scared of a relationship, but in life nothing is guaranteed, so she should take a chance.Eles need to come back, I miss them.

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Date: 28 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Edward is on a mission, I support Edward, totally!
I hope Bella does not hurt our boy.

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Date: 01 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Bella is best to take the head butt really fast! OMG, I know she's afraid of losing a good thing, I went through this, my husband and I were friends and neighbors, our mothers worked together he had feelings for me and wanted to date first, it took me a lot to give a response afraid to ruin the friendship and the family pressure, in the end I said fuck it and gave a chance for us, we're married and have kids and I have the best of everything ... my friend who is also my husband;) Bella will pick up the poor boy!

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Date: 04 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

I hope Bella get your head out of your ass and go get your man!
Kisses.

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Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

I'm anxious for more, they need to be together, you write great lemons and I miss.
I feel that Rose is still around and will cause problems.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

I loved it, they are so adorable, they are on holiday to forget the problems and loves.
kisses.

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

YES! YES! YES! They finally succeeded, I thought someone would have beat the shit out of these two. I understand the secret, if Alice knows she has organized the whole wedding.
Kisses.

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Date: 23 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

I love these two when they are hot, but I also love it when they are sweet. I feel they will not be able to hide for long your love.

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Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

I had missed these two! They are so hot ... I want to see how they will hide the family that they are dating ...
Rose, the bitch, she will be making an appearance?

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Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

OMG! You killing me here! I imagine this will be bad ...

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Date: 29 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

WOW!Poor Emmett!I hate Rosalie!

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Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

So cut!!!

Relentless by StillDreaming85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 576]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by OTB

Bella meets Edward and sparks fly. She thinks he's a charming businessman, but he's not. He's in the Mafia. How will she handle it when she finds out? Will an innocent girl like her be able to survive in his world? Darkward / Mobward / Possessiveward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2817 Read Count: 185510
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2014 Updated: 16 Jul 2015
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2014 Title: Relentless

I really love it!
I understand that Edward is wrong and abusive, he has a strange way of showing love, but it is who he is, men are like the mafia, he can not soften as it has much in your hands, then I read stories of Mobward I do not want it to be all flowers and birds.
Kisses.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like Edward the way he is, you're right it comes with the life he leads x x

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2014 Title: Relentless

Bella should not go home and now she knows it! She will return to Edward, which is where it belongs.
Kisses.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. She is heading on a course towards him, she has no where else to go x x

Summary: Past Featured Story

PUTP

Isabella Black lost her husband in the cruelest way possible. He wasted

away and was ravaged by the evil, silent killer, cancer. Five months after his initial diagnosis, he died, leaving Bella with their two young children, John, seven and Grace, five. A year after his death, Bella packs up her home in Phoenix and drives back to Forks, Washington to be closer to her family. Will she finally find a way to pick up the pieces with the help of her family, friends and a green-eyed cop?

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255357 Read Count: 101887
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2014 Updated: 29 Aug 2018
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

OMG! They met and it seems that Edward has his own problems.
I imagine how it must be difficult, Bella has not lost her love, she also lost her life that had already planned. Oh Renee, she reminds me of my mother, my mother always thinks she knows what's best for me and so is Renee, even when I say I'm not hungry she gives me food, I know sounds funny but I'm 30 and married,
I let my mother treat me like a child sometimes, I know she misses, but Renee was out of line, she received a serious warning and continued.
Great story.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I can not imagine the pain of Edward to see his sick mother, is very sad.
I'm looking forward to more.

Summary:

kob

 

 

 

Emmett, Benny C ,J-Action and Cullen conquer the streets, fatherhood, marriage and La Familia. The Bronx Bombers sequel. Thugmett/Mobward. 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 53175 Read Count: 7831
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2014 Updated: 02 Jan 2018
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The other side

I love to see more of Edward, he went through so much ... I like to see Bella with Emmett, but Edward did not match with Alice, I really do not like Alice.
The son of Aro is Riley? Riley appears again? I love a FF mafia.

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Date: 15 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - I'll be your Soldier

I loved Jasper! I do not really like Alice ... but I loved Jasper!
Alice does not seem to me a true friend, she did not give me confidence. I wish none of the Bronx died, but his story is and I'm here for the ride.
Kisses.
Ps. I hope Edward does not accept Alice, he deserves someone better. He and his son were very sweet and I loved how Bella helped.

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Date: 16 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - So much for my happy ending

Emmett and Bella are in a difficult place, they can not really trust anyone, Bella is right they should flee, all gang.
I hope for more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Detective Cullen has been married to his job for a very long time, and he doesn’t ever plan to change.  Bella Swan the overweight girl who gets used and tossed aside is his favorite waitress.  Can they make more out of this than friendship with benefits, or will she send him away when she decides she wants more?

(The use of the word steaks vs. stakes is a play on words - just FYI)


Banner by: Deebelle OneFic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 159803
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2014 Updated: 16 Mar 2014
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Date: 12 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

They deserve to be happy. I love that they have succeeded. But I think Jake and Leah show their ugly faces at some point.

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Date: 11 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'm glad that Edward opened for love, but I thought Bella agreed so easy, she is such a sweet person.

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Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

OMG! I hate FF now, I almost had a parade when acardiaca not found
this story in FF, I rescued here in TWCS now, I know you never give up on a story.
Kisses.

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Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I hate when removing FF stories that we love, they're getting worse, they haul the freedom of the author and the reader, each chooses what to read, I'll read it now here.
I'm glad that Edward loves Bella acknowledged that, I just hope that Bella believe, I think Edward will have to fight for Bella. I guess now he will not let Bella go home alone.

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I loved your story, love changed the lives of Bella and Edward. Jacob might like to Bella, but he did not love enough to overcome the prejudice he had on his weight.
I love your stories, please continue to surprise us with them.
Kisses.

Summary:

fvwl

A ruthless criminal detached from all emotions brought to Las Vegas on a job. A young woman trying to move on after escaping an abusive relationship.

 

One drunken night brings them together. Can they survive in a world filled with lies and deception? Mobward/Mafia.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136341 Read Count: 126193
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2014 Updated: 04 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Edward is my kind of Mobward, cold and mean!
He will remember the words of Alec now that he has found something he wants, but love will soften your heart?

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Date: 10 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great Mobward !!!
Edward is so fierce and hot ... Bella is also a good match for him.
I loved it.

At His Command by dpdp2317 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 87]
Summary:

 

Isabella Swan, 21, a student at NYU, spends a passion filled night with billionaire Edward Cullen, 31. The next morning, he tells her that he wants her to be his submissive. She finds herself thrust into the world of BDSM, where pain is pleasure, and less is more. Follow Bella on this kinky journey, as she tries to be Edward's perfect little pet. But, is there more to the story?

Thank you BE1965 for the wonderful banner. 

I'm ever grateful to RAH07890 who is painstakingly beta'ing every chapter. She is an essential to the story, and I'm so thankful to her.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26137 Read Count: 26179
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2014 Updated: 22 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm glad Bella has the support of Rose, I understand her being scared of something
thus BDSM is very different from your league and even though it is a natural sub is necessary that she accepted his nature.

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Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! I love it! Edward is so hot ... I hope Bella accepted his proposal.

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Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Bella never see clearly! I'm loving your writing.

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Date: 08 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Edward is so intense and wants Bella in all senses. I'm excited to see how they will work dating and BDSM relationship.

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Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

WOW! That was really hot!

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Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

You are totally on the right track! She really needed to see how it worked
before accepting the proposal of Edward. I'm excited to see them together.

Summary:

lwoc

Summary: After her parents are murdered, Bella and her brothers flee to the protection of their Godfather. When Bella discovers information that puts her life at risk, her only choice is to marry a man that she hates. Edward is a hard man, one that wants nothing to do with his reluctant bride. Can this pair ever learn to love each other...before their enemies destroy them? AH E/B


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25286 Read Count: 66594
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2014 Updated: 22 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Bella was not exaggerating! Edward is a mobster, I understand his violence, but he needs to control himself. I love how they are getting acquainted, I am anxious that they discover their feelings.

Reviewer: Lud Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm so excited to Mobward!

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Date: 22 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love it !!! Bella is to Edward game, I'm looking forward to the wedding, they will be so hot, of course if they do not kill each other before (laughs), they are so stubborn, just Edward and Bella is not aggressive.
Edward jealous of Bella, or it aente possessive of it?
Thank you.

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Date: 03 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love it, Edward is falling for Bella.

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Date: 20 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm looking forward to more! Edward really is an idiot, but I like our mobward and Bella is a stubborn girl, she can defend herself.

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Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Bella kissed Edward !? They are so hot, two people so strong and stubborn ...

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Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Poor Bella! Edward is a jerk, but Bella will pick up this beast.

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Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Edward is thinking about giving? Bella is a strong girl they can fight and fight, but I hope they are well

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Date: 02 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love Mobward, I'm ready for the next chapter, I do not care if this will be a bad Edward has since HEA.
Kisses.

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Date: 14 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love this Mobward, it really is a bad boy, I want to see him when he falls for Bella. I'm glad Bella stood firm and not obdeceu our bad boy. The fights begin ...

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Date: 29 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

WOW! Carlisle knows how to give a news ... I'm looking forward to more!
I understand that Edward is an arrogant jerk because he is a gangster, he is the way a crime boss should be. Bella will have much work to do Edward wrapped around your little finger, he will be furious when he learns of his father's plans ...

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Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

They are getting close, Edward cares about Bella, but he did not realize he loves her.

Summary:

Charlie Swan made a deal with the devil. Owing a debt he couldn't repay, he took the cowardly way out and offered his daughter's services to pay off his tab. The rich and powerful Carlisle Cullen greedily accepts, and Bella finds herself at the mercy of a dark and violent man. Will she survive? Or will he beat the life out of her? Dark themes. NC-17 for violence and language. AU.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39293 Read Count: 72893
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2014 Updated: 19 May 2015
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm afraid of what Carlisle has planned for Charlie, but he deserves to suffer for having given his daughter ...

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Date: 03 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm also obsessed with this fic.

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Date: 03 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Carlisle is a sick bastard, Bella should make Charlie pay for their mistakes!