Reviews by Lud
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625035
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Contest Nomination

I have great admiration for you, choose a difficult subject, wrote a serious history, did not give up despite persecution.
Bella was a fighter, Carlisle was sick, insane even, but the worst was Charlie, because Bella was filha.Nós know their cases so unfortunately
happen, people who grow up in environments feel normal abuse.
It is good that these stories to light, as many girls start dating abuse and confuse and control of the boyfriend, with love.
Thanks for your detreminação to continue, I was happy to find you.

Author's Response:

Thank you for sticking with me thru the hard beginning of the story. It was a difficult story to write. I'm glad you liked the ending. Please check out my other works - they aren't nearly as dark. Love of My Obsession comes close, but not like this. I won't write another "in your face" story. It's too emotionally draining on me.

Take care!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 88020
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Surprise!I loved finish.Great story.Sorry,i am brazilian,my english is really bad.Thanks.

Author's Response:

Your English was perfect.  I'm so happy that you liked the ending.  Thanks for taking the time to review.

Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

I want to be devoured by a lion ...
Chapter amazing!
Sera that he will raise its walls.
I imagine the meeting of Jasper and Edward, will combine épico.Vamos, the lion is possessive.
Thanks.Por please do not let me suffer, but take your time.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 How Hard Could it Be?

"I just want you to know that I never intentionally drugs or maim you," I proclaimed with all sincerity.
Hilariante.Bella funny is the best.
Edward is falling for her.
Please continue, I'll make cookies, with or without marihuana, you choose.
Thanks.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 THE BOX

Wow! Edward finally had biscuits Bella.Pelo saw was too much. The interaction of these two is so funny.
I love chapter. Marihuana had in cookies?
Thanks, the chapter amazing.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

You're fantastic!
Bella, Edward course, want a cookie, go girl;)
I can not wait, I'm commenting to go racing next chapter.
Okay, you take a little updating, but worth waiting.
Thanks sweet.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Face Off

So funny, I love how you can make serious moments funny.I totally see how a movie in my mind, I am very graphic, only dizendo.Eu so sad because I'm running out and you see that it takes a while to update.
I love it.
Thanks.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 All that Jazz

I started reading your story now, I'm completely envolvida.Bella is a strength, I indentifiquei with it in various ways: I am fit of laughter at the worst times, many people have become angry, but I can not control.
I'm a bit impetuous, thanks shyness can not provide the craziness that my mind arquiteta.Eu loved the friendship of Bella and Jasper, it's beautiful, I give much value to true friendships.
Thanks.
Sorry my English, I am Brazilian.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 You Give Me Fever

I loved this chapter!
Does the lion is turning into a kitten?
Please fast, I'm dying here.
Thank you.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The Hungry Games

Bella is so funny, and perceptiva.Ela sees Edward well.
Both are moving slowly but moving.
I imagine the meeting of Edward and Jasper.
I think that Edward will not be happy, he does not know the concept of friendship, so do not understand friendship with Jasper and Bella, and he is so possessive.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

Eager for more! Bella is insanely funny, and hot without trying! Will be very funny Edward get in touch with the world of Bella, I hope he will soon know Jasper, I want to see him jealous of his friendship.
Kisses.
I would like to self defense classes :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I started reading this story, and could not stop, she is amazing!
I never thought I'd like a story where Edward died, a story in which Emmett is the villain, but I love this story so much.
Sorry my English, I am Brazilian, I just wanted to say how much I like your fics.
Kisses.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story. I try to do the unexpected so readers don't feel like they're reading the same story over and over.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So glad you're writing.
Jasper is a perfect gentleman, Bella will be safe with him.
I feel that Emmett did not give up on Bella.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Glad you decided to come back to this story.
I hope Emmett pay for his crimes, he is a monster!
Bella deserves to be happy, I hope she and Jasper loves.
Kisses.

Author's Response:

Emmett will get his. We just need to give Bella some time to heal...with the help of a certain cowboy.

Reviewer: Lud Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I missed you! Good that you're back.
Jasper is so worried about Bella, and Bella really needs someone to love her.
Kisses.

Author's Response:

Yes she does and a handsome, hardheaded cowboy will do just the trick. Thanks for being patient with me. Mic

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268881
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I know Bella's situation is difficult, but it is time for her to move.
She is hurting a lot to cultivate this pain.
Edward is a cute, little boys support both drama.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Bella is in a place so hard, so contradictory feelings, she hates the people she ama.No moment she is a pump, feels so guilty.
Well she had Edward and his family, who are outside the war zone, but I want to see it with Esme and Carlisle are so cute together.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I loved it!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

SWEET,SWEET,SWEET.I love it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129729
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)

You're killing me! Please more, I'm greedy.

I'm curious how will Edward and Emmett solve this problem in the scene

piora.Pensei that Jasper would be nice to fight for Bella, but I see it

Bella uses to destroy Edward.Espero more grateful

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: A bit of a tease

These terrifying creatures have arrived!
They will be more cruel that vampires exist.?
Please, I'm curious.
Thank you

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Red Sky (Mini part 3)

As Edward will be affected?
The old parents (who adopted the vampire Bella) will never look for it?
I love controlward.
Grata.Desculpe me for my English, I am Brazilian, I speak Portuguese.

Author's Response:

Bella's adopted parents may come in soon =)

 

Thanks for reading =)

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Red Sky (Part Two-Mini)

Say it was not Bella, favor.Como these new characters will affect the story and how you will use them anciosa.Grata me.Sorry for my english, is not the 1st language, I am Brazilian, I speak português.Tchau.

Author's Response:

It's okay honey! a reveiw is a reveiw no matter what language. I just hope in whatever language you prefer you enjoy the story. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Lud Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Grand Funk

I read and thought what the heck is that!
I was already writing and asking you to put your story
on the right track, because I loved the way that Edward wants Bella, but do not want you either, because he feels inferior.
I thought you had surtado (I was almost freaking out)
I thought that kind of date, that's when I remembered: April 1.
Fuck my life!
You got me, only to over two chapters, the anguish ;)
Kisses.

Author's Response:

LOL!!! 

 

Hey *waves*

 

Yes, we are evil little.... lmao

 

But we have 98.9% of the next chapter completed so we will be able to post this week, possibly later today or Thursday. =)

 

Hope you'll like, it's quite a big chapter.

 

Thanks,

 

Hugs and kisses

 

Jells

Reviewer: Lud Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

They are in so much trouble, I hope you find the plans of Edward Jasper.
I love this story (like dark stories) and look for updates.
And not to mention that even though Edward is an ass to Bella he's hot.
Thank you.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!! We hope that you'll continue to enjoy this story. Lots of twists and turns coming up!

 

Jells and Tyggy

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

I really like this fics.Gostei as it began, Edward too arrogant, mad with the need for a human being. Bella was sweet, naive, but smart inteligente.Jasper, saw that it would fall in love with Bella, who was an object of vengeance.
What in the beginning was enough to move the story and drama.
But at some point you put so many elements, the story lost sentido.Continuo following the central plot, I'll see where dar.Só think the way you began the story was so grande.Essa, which has been crossed aliens, vampires, could be used in other fics, just thinking aloud, the story is yours, but would really like to go back to the beginning.
Ps.A way Edward loves Bella and contempt is very interesting.
Thank you.
I am sorry my english;)

Author's Response:

Well thank you babes! We loved that you honestly gave your opinion and here is mine. 

I think that a lot of people in fandom are use to bland straight forward, (predictable) story telling. I mean think about it, everyone, expected us to follow through with a vengence story when, we said from the begining, this was a sci-fi fic as well.  As an author, we both have spent hours upon hours discussing, planning, and writing something to give our readers that would keep them on there toes. We wrote something that no one could (steal), predict, or mimic without it being linked back to us.We used out imagination to write something so fantastic that we were excited to write it. Contrary to belief, writing isn't easy but reading is. So I think it's really easy to judge a fic, and not like it because there isn't a tumultuous amount of E and B once the central plot starts to roll out.

 

I think this fic is honestly for a free thinker. We both think that this is something that can and will be enjoyed by people who enjoy movies or books that make them think. We're clever individuals and just because you can't see the connection that will lead to one of the climaxes doesn't mean that we can't. Call us... M. Night. Shamabishes *laughs*

Just think about it like this. 

 

We started off with an invasion. 

We introduced E and B. 

 

We introduced Caius and E's parents. 

 

We introduced how strong Edward was in comparison to his twin Jasper. 

 

We cultivated a breed a vampires so vicious and sexual that 3 stories were made on twcs with the same attributes. Some people even changed their stories around to match our type of breed.

We began threading a complicated plot (like most authors do outside of fanfiction)

E and B with their rocky relationship. 

Jasper with his vengeance. 

Carlisle and Esme with their evilness.

Caius with his plans..(wait)

Tanya. 

The story of aro. 

Demetri. 

The red world.

Vampyrcients

The power.

The introduction of the planet they came from. 

And you are and will discover the whys and why they are there, which is essential to Edward and Bella's relationship and Jasper's issues. 

I'm sorry that we're story tellers. I'm very sorry that we can write a story with more substance than Edward up Bella's ass 24/7.

But true to our hearts and as talented as we are, We can't bring ourselves to write what people want us to write. There will be twists and turns and things leading to plots and sub plots. We want people in the future when fandom dies down to be able to come to our story and eat popcorn and get so entralled because what we cultivated is more Unique than some 30,000 stories that happen to be across the web. 

 

P.S. If you think the story lost sentido, then open up a blank document, use your own material (not ours) and come up with your own story, something you'd want to read, (that's how we started) and see just how far you'd stay within your E and B plot. I can tell you now. You won't. The mind is clever little thing and i'm almost positive that once you start writing nothing you can say, or come up with will be the same once it's written out lolol.

 

Thanks for the review dollface. 

 

Reviewer: Lud Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Unbelievable Right?

I'll be reading, and if it is actually plagiarism, I will withdraw, because I love their crazy stories and dark.

Author's Response:

Her story was taken down by fanfiction.net. I hope she won't plagiarize again. Beware of her. Her penname is:  Tear you to pieces 

 

Thanks for your support. I'm working on the new chapter. =) 

 

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2672316
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Bebella

I love Bebella, she is hilarious, I always have to read Quiet, I love this story.
Kisses.
Great story!

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

thanks.Great chapter.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

wow!She is live!Bella is better.

Summary:

My piece for Fandom for Tsunami releif. When Bella goes with Edward to meet his long time friend, Jasper Whitlock, she finds what she least expected.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10554 Read Count: 7481
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2011 Updated: 03 May 2012
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Edward should have talked to Bella before, I feel betrayed to learn that way, Bella really surprised by accepting me and shit was hot girl ...

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really wanted to see how they do the job, it will be interesting, I would not accept as well, but Bella is happy. I think a relationship is unhealthy to three, there will always be preferences and jealous, I want to see how they do it.
Kisses.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532878
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 29: To Be Announced

What is it about men loving their wives pregnant? Seriously! My husband is delighted, I say enough! I love your historia.Está in my favorites and jump as a 15 when I see (I'm 29, so sue me). I know as real life sucks and you can not know how I'm grateful for every capítulo.Bella know Edward as well, of course he wanted to do something with their pills. we have babies on the way.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Beach Blanket Bingo Part One

Esste chapter was so sweet!
Bella deserves a break.
Carlisle does not learn, hitting on the girlfriend of Mauro.
Edward I hope you change your mind, and do not kill Esme.
Thank you.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Breaking Dawn

Hi Lexi!This is freak hot,thanks.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 48: End of the Day

That sex was hot! Please no more Alex, please.
I wish Bella returned his friendship with Alice and Rosalie, they were fun and real friends.
Poor Aro, I wonder how you feel, and feel that Bella.
Perhaps it would be better if Bella had something else to do, it just stays at home, should be so limited, I do not know, I always worked, so I do not know how to just stay at home with children, should be good to dedicate only the house but I do not know if I could.
Edward already preparing Bella for the end of dating, and Leese and Aro, or, Aro do not really like it Leese.
I had hoped that Aro join her sister Bella.
Love, as always amazing.

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100868
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 7: VIP party

Edward is really an idiot, but I think Bella will give you a lesson.
I hope life is lighter voce.Adoro with this story is so hot and Bella is really funny.
Tell Drinou grande.Obrigada as it is.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263184
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: First Sight

This story is getting so mysterious.
Sera Aro's mother dead?
I'm anxious to see E and B know each other, she looks so young and scared.
Thanks.

Author's Response:

HI, we are sending out this reply to everyone, and answering any questions above and beyond what this does not cover along with it.  First in the story right now Bella is 18 years old and will be turning 19 in September.  The twins are just turned 7.  Bella’s mother died when she was very young.  Charlie, Bella’s father is dead, and Sue, Bella’s step mom is the one who left Bella with the twins when Bella was age 13.  We don’t want to give away anything else about Bella at this time, it would ruin parts of the upcoming storyline if you learned it too fast.   As for Edward, he is our dark and troubled man with a horrid view on all women.  He and his story and back ground are coming out, over a few chapters, there is a lot to learn.  I have to tell you that while working on chapter 5 of this story I myself was so mad at Edward, I wanted to rip off his balls and feed them to him.  Ultimately Both of us are HAPPY EVER AFTER KIND OF WRITERS.  We are both extremely proud of this story and the reviews, readers, and following it is getting.  We have had a few people ask if we minded if they pimped us out and the answer is of course, please do.  It is an honor to have other authors think our story is worthy of reading, reviewing, and recommending too.  Thank you again for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  Zafrina is Aro's mother, she is also the person who cares for Leah and Seth when they are not in school or in the playgroup Bella enrolled them in.  Bella is 18, but she is very uneducated and therefore she does and says things that most women would not do or say.  There are a lot of twists and turns in this, can't wait until you can review again. 

Kasi (&Nikky)


Here is the teaser for chapter 4, of course it is subject to change during the BETA process.


Today is Friday; I know that I have about twenty minutes or so before Isabella comes out.  I head over to the café that is still open to get a coffee, it’s thirsty work stalking someone.  After getting flirted with by the waitress, I walk back to my car with my cardboard cup of coffee.  I see that the security guard is locking up.  Checking my watch, I see that Isabella has about five more minutes before she will be done for the night.  I run over to him, worried that he is accidently locking her into the building.

“I think someone is still in there,” I tell him as I approach him. 

He looks at me strangely.  “Hey professor Masen, are you feeling better?”  The guard asks as he continues to lock the doors.

“I am feeling much better, but I really think that one of the cleaning girls is still in there.  Did you check, I never saw her leave?”

“I have checked all of the rooms, and corridors.  There is nobody in the building Professor.  The last cleaner has just left, and she always leaves last.”

I close my eyes, and run my fingers through my hair.  “Okay, do you mean the small girl with really long brown hair?”

He nods his head and points off the direction she always walks, nodding his head as he walks away.  I’m sure he thinks I have lost my mind.

I move quickly over to my car, and start to drive down the road that she walks.  I come up to the park she cuts through, and don’t see her anywhere.  I park and get out of the car, slamming my door shut as I head down the trail she takes.  I hope I can catch up with her.  I have really lost it, fuck I don’t know what is going on with me right now.  This whole stalking thing is really not been good for me, fuck in a strange way I will miss this when I go back to work on Monday.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Warning Signs

Bella is the janitor? I loved the scene of restaurante.I like to know the relevance of Bree in this story, I thought that the hoodie girl was Bella.I am anxious next chapter.Grata

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Bree will play a small part in the future, but she is not related to Bella at all.  If things keep going this well the next chapter will post next Thursday. 

Kasi (&Nikky)

 

Chapter 3 teaser, subject to changes during the beta process…
Fuck my life! I have been here in a hospital room all night, on a heart monitor.  They made me turn off my cell phone.  I was in so much stress; I should have had them call Emmett last night.  I am sure that I am in hot water with them all, for not showing up.  I am waiting for the doctor to come in with my test results.  It felt that I was having a heart attack, or something.  I really hope that was not the case, I mean come on I am only twenty-eight.  I am an overall healthy man.  I exercise and don’t eat a lot of fattening foods.  I mean people my age don’t have heart attacks, do they?

“Good morning Mr. Masen, I am Doctor Hall,” he says holding out his hand for me.

“Good morning,” I say shaking his hand.

“Well I read over your case notes from last night and this morning, how are you feeling now?” his face is giving nothing away.

“I feel a lot better than I did last night, everything has returned to normal.”

He nods his head writing notes on my file in his hands.  “How long have you been getting suffering from heartburn?”  He looks at me questioningly.

“On and off for the past three four months,” I say letting out a breath before talking again, cutting off Dr. Hall.  “Look I don’t mean to be rude, but what happened to me last night?  Did I have a heart attack?  That is how it felt, can’t you just tell me?  I mean really let me know what was happening, and then I will answer all your questions?”

He put down my file and stops writing his notes, as he sits back in his chair.  “I am sorry Mr. Masen I tend to get ahead of myself.  Last night you suffered a rather harsh panic attack,” he says. 

All I am thinking is this guy is off his rocker.  I mean really where did he get his medical degree, Mickey Mouse Club House, or the bubble gum machine?

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Walls We Build

Edward is an idiot but an idiot is hot!
I thought he was making an indecent proposal to Bella.
I wonder what the connection from Bell and Aro, looking forward to capitulo.Obrigado.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing our story.  You will learn a lot more about Bellas background including Aro's involvment in coming chapters.  Nikky and I are very proud of this story and it takes a lot to write things sometimes that even upset us.  We really needed to show just how darkly tainted Edward is, and unfortunately right now many of you hate him.  I know it will take a lot for you to relinquish those hatred feelings, but we hope that we are great enough writers and story tellers to achieve making you like him again.  We know it is always easier to burn a bridge than it is to rebuild it, but we promise to put forth the effort in doing so.  We want to thank you in advance for your votes, support, rec’s, and for just being on this twisted journey with us.  This story will be somewhere around 30 chapters when all is done and said.  We hope that you continue to read and review and share with us your thoughts.  From the bottom of our hearts, and to the moon and beyond... Thank you.

Kasi (& Nikky)

Chapter 6 Teaser… All Subject to change during the beta process…
The shitting feeling is still there, and I have no idea what the fuck I can do to get rid of it.  I head over to Jasper’s office hoping to see him.

“Jasper says that you can go in now.” I look at the woman speaking, and I give her a curt nod as I head into his office. “Edward,” I look at him and he stops talking, and tilts his head to the side.  “Okay, what is going on, what happened?” He asks as he waves at me to sit.  I sit down on the seat across from him and rub my face.  I sigh unsure where to start, so I jump up and start to pace the floor.

“I screwed up, and I mean I really screwed up this time.  Jazz, I fucking hurt her, and I mean really fucking hurt her.  I don’t know how to fix it.  How I can get her to forgive me for what I have done?  I mean, fuck I’ll be lucky if she even speaks to me again.  Well really I know she will because she, fuck, I don’t want to say she is weak, but if I talk to her she will reply. How do I make right Jazz, without putting myself out there?  I don’t want to get hurt again, I could with her and I can’t go through that again.  Fuck, but I don’t think she do that, to anyone really.  She’s not made that way, but I have really gone and hurt her bad.  I never gave her a chance, I was still. . . no, I am to fucking scared.  In this case I think I made a new friend, but the dream. . . and I thought she stabbed me in the back like all the others.  I see her face in my dreams, the last two nights have been worse than all the rest.  I can see how much I hurt her, and the bad thing is she did nothing to warrant my anger.  All she did was fucking help me, time after time.  So many times, and she has been so hurt before and I know it’s been bad.  I can see it clearly in her eyes, the pain and the fear.  What if I push it what if she can never let anyone in ever again because what I did.”  I am still pacing and pulling my hair, I am so upset.  “Fuck Jazz I was a real fucking prick, and complete asshole to her.  Tell me what I can do?  Please I need to fix this, tell me how I can fix it please?”  I beg him as I feel my breathing speed up.  Jasper who was still sitting in his chair looks at me and suddenly comes out of his trance, as I feel the cold sweats start.  “Please Jazz you need to tell me how to fix this.”

 

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Making Amends

I also had doubts about the age of Bella.
Edward decided to apologize and help Bella.… great weight for a girl so young.
Ok, Edward said he did not want sex, but until when? Just wondering.
Thank you.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.
This story is not always easy to write, just as parts are not easy to read.  Edward does not know yet of course, but it is very true Isabella cannot read nor write.  She has never attended school.  Bella was never allowed to be a child, or experience a normal childhood, in any way, shape, or form.  Bella has nothing more than a glorified slave all of her life since her birth mother passed away.  We don’t want to give away more of her story than that, but feel free to keep asking your questions and we will continue to answer what we can.  Edward does have a long road yet to travel, and part of that is to get him-self healed enough so that he can love someone and trust someone.  Edward’s view is very tainted and with great reason, there is much more to learn about him.  He will continue to improve, but he will have his moments.  Keep in mind as of right now, Isabella has not lied to him, but she has withheld very important information.  She doesn’t correct him on her age, because she fears his reaction. 
Kasi (&Nikky)

Here is the teaser for chapter 7…Subject to change during BETA process as always.

I have written out everything, when I look at my watch seeing that it’s ten after ten.  I know that being on time is something she is normally good at.  I rub my face, fuck maybe she changed her mind about the job, or she just lied to me just like every other fucking woman I’ve ever known.

Or maybe you scared her, and she said yes to the job thinking that you wouldn’t let her leave the room unless she agreed.

Knock. Knock.

Thank god, she is here finally.  “Come in Isabella,” I say to the closed door.  The door opens, but it’s Taylor who is standing there. 

I frown at him.  “Hello, I see you beat me here,” he says smiling at me.  I wave at him to come in, but I am still frowning.  “I take it I am not who you’re waiting for?”

I shake my head.  “I was expecting someone, but I don’t think she is coming.”  I sigh, and throw my pen on the desk.

“Small pale girl, brown hair, looks a little lost?” I look at him, and nod my head.  “I think she is standing outside,” he says motioning his thumb toward the door.  I move toward the door, and Taylor stops me.  “Here, take this; it’s really coming down out there.”  He offers me his umbrella and chuckles as I take it and head out of the office.

I head to the front, and see Isabella standing outside in front of the window in the rain.  I open the door.  “Isabella,” I call to her standing in the door way, she turns and looks at me. I wave at her to come in.  “How long have you been standing outside, and why didn’t you come in the restaurant when you got here?”

She walks up to me, clearly worrying I am mad by the look on her face.  “I thought that…you said to meet you outside.  Didn’t you, never mind, I am so sorry…sorry.”

Looking at her, I see that she’s drenched to the skin.  The jacket she is wearing is paper thin, and clearly very old and well used.  I know that she been outside a long time.  I close my eyes, pinching the bridge of my nose.  “I am sorry I meant for you to come in, if I was not out here.”  She walks through the door; I know that she needs to get out of her wet clothes.

Summary:

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85715 Read Count: 62090
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 16 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I await your next capitulo.Achei following story, I could not stop reading, then I am sorry to upgrade now.
I think the situation is complicated, Bella will suffer when they find out that Edward is married, has been betrayed, so I think it will suffer much.
Thanks.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This Bella! You're strong, you can kick the ass of Tania.
I am totally against treason, but Tania is horrivel.Espero
to solve Edwrad tell Bella.
Thanks.

Summary:

 

 

Edward Cullen is a cocky bastard.  He believes because of his family’s wealth, his devilish good looks, and his ridiculous book smarts it makes him God’s gift to women.  Between his repetitive schedule, his 3-piece suits, and an over-confident attitude, Bella Swan seeks the chance with great delight to put him in his place and enjoys every minute of it.  ExB – M-Rating – Drama/Angst

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3449 Read Count: 1777
[Report This] Published: 27 Feb 2012 Updated: 27 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I wanted more, this plot has so many possibilities.
Thanks.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Join Bella in her million dollar life. All she wants is one night with sexy barman Edward, desired by every female who enter's Twilight nightclub, but Bella soon learns she is playing a dangerous game and may end up with more than she bargined for.     

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124180 Read Count: 50296
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2012 Updated: 28 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I am so proud for Bella to defend Edward.
She found an excuse to get away from Alex.
OMG! B and E are so hot together.
Thanks

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Bella is pregnant?
Such lack of communication, Edward had no faith in the love of Bella, and Bella was not strong enough to resist the plans of their parents.
Alex is sweet to Bella, but I think this will change.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I really think Bella and Jacob so hot , but so wrong for her to use it that way.
I think Bella will learn a lesson from Edward, and Edward learn a lesson from Bella.
The two are a bit presumptuous.
I loved your story.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward having more than one night with Tania, I hope she nãopersega Bella.
I think it is so hot Bella and Edward.

Summary: Past Featured Story



Edward Cullen, former Confederate soldier, begins a journey from his home in Tennessee, to that of his only living relative in Texas. Along the way, he meets a girl. He's running from the past. She's running from a future she doesn't want. drabble-ish

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75743 Read Count: 123073
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2012 Updated: 28 Feb 2013
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 May 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Edward knows how sweet it is?

Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 May 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Bella wants to marry Edward ... How can he not realize.
They are so cute, the way she plays with it, can not wait for first kiss.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! they are cute.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 May 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I prefer stories distressed, but his story is so sweet that captivated me.
Edward is absolutely captivating.
I hope that the two are safe.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So sweet!

Romany by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Set in England mid 1800's. Edward and Bella live in different worlds, ruled by class and money, where prejudices influence and dictate who you can love. Can they overcome the stigma and gossip to be together?

We can’t help who we fall in love with; however we are responsible for how we react to that knowledge or how we treat that person.

Thanks to fab betas RAH07890 & js18

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: To Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78582 Read Count: 45739
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2012 Updated: 05 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

His writing is so precious and the way you describe your characters me fascina.Espero Carlisle help Bella and Emmett.
I already love your story.
Kisses, Ludmila.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the lovely compliment.

Kisses britchick69, Michelle xx

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Do not let anything happen to Bella. I hope that the Cullens have someone to pick her up. Kisses and thanks.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Nice chapter! Edward is so charmed by Bella, I think he will fight against this much love.
Kisses and thanks.

Author's Response:

Not done with the angst just yet....lovely review thanks xx

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter gorgeous! So sad that Edward is going, but I'm sure that time will strengthen Bella.
At that time the differences would be sufficient enough to separate them, but certainly will not be far from Edward, he will fight for your love?
Thanks for the extra chapter.
Kisses.

Author's Response:

What a lovely review, thank you so much. I do like how you try to find the positive, even when things are looking bad. xx

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I am so happy that Edward came back, he will consiguirá resist his love for Bella?
Great chapter.
Kisses.

Author's Response:

....Resist his love for Bella- what a lovely way of putting it.

Glad you're still enjoying xx

You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104501
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

It seems so sad and true. This whole situation is very real difficulties of a marriage at the wrong time, even if you have love is difficult, much more if one of the spouses feels hurt as Bella.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad to read this! I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for your excellant rating!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1- That hot, drunken boy

Edward was an idiot, but both were careless. Indeed their marriage was impossible to work, they did not have a relationship. Kisses.

Author's Response:

Yup, it takes two to tango. ;) Both of them have their wrongs. And the fact that they didn't know each other even before wasn't going to help.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2- Dropping the bomb

Poor Bella, entering a marriage that way. I already love your story.

Author's Response:

thank you so much! *twirls you*

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3- Edward's side

So sad that the marriage caused so much grief, it seems that Edward never warmed up to Bella, and Bella must move forward, rebuild their life.Era Edward remarry.
I love your story.
Kisses.

Author's Response:

aww, I love reading your thoughts on this story. Just gonna say, it isn't always what it seems to be. will get more of Edward's POV in the next chapters, you'll see then if he never warmed up to Bella... or maybe he just never knew how to tell her...

;)

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4- Doing what's right

The decisions that led to marriage were wrong, but he had good intentions, that sometimes good intentions are not suficientes.Bella just wanted to feel loved when she asked him to choose between her and the music, the luggage would not be ele.Parece that goes with it was easy for him to make a new life. Kisses.Continue, please.

Author's Response:

Yup, he did try, didn't he. thank you again for your sweets reviews! I appreciate! :D

Kisses!

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Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

More, please.
Do not be cruel.
Kisses.

Author's Response:

sorry, im in disney world, and its really hard to update from here :)

Reviewer: Lud Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

How long will hold Edward away from Bella?
They are so hot.

Always on my Mind by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 196]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Written with Siobhan! He said I had no life before him. He said that he was my past present and future. I couldn't remember life before him so he must be right. He promised that he would never leave me, but one day that all changed.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159709 Read Count: 59807
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2012 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

The world of Bella rolling again.
She will remember everything now, and pregnant will be worse, I hope nothing happens to the baby.
Edward killed Charlie? Now I'll be super curious
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Poor Bella!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Edward Good to get away from their parents monstrous hit a child, is a covardia.Sinto things that were taught to Edward are firm in their soul, and it will be difficult for him to get rid of all teachings Carlisle.Mas see you accept a demand of Bella, is a change.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Loved! Realistic I thought that Edward continued obsessed with control, because no one changes so much.
Kisses.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward was 19.  Bella was 13.  They were next door neighbors.  Charlie was the chief of police.  Carlisle was a doctor at the local hospital. 

Edward’s little sister Alice was also 13 and Bella’s best friend. 

While home from college for the summer, Edward spent time with his little sister and her best friend so their parents could all go out for dinner.

Over the next several years, Edward and Bella became good friends, until the summer she turned 16 when she transformed before his eyes.

 

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AH, ExB, Mostly EPOV, sort of coming-of-age, hopefully a little poignant, with a splash of angst until Bella's at least seventeen.  Mature for language, eventual lemons and a very spunky Bella.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77808 Read Count: 67190
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2012 Updated: 08 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Playing Field

is your birthday? So, congratulations to you sweet!
I'm very curious about your story, Bella and Alice trust in Edward, because Charlie and Carlisle are so strict with him?
Although not romantically linked, is sweet to see Edward and Bella together.
Happy birthday, and do nothing I would not (laughs).
Kisses.

Author's Response:

Yep, it's my birthday!  And thanks!  Yeah, Bella and Alice trust Edward, and Charlie and Carlisle are so hard on him because of what he did in the past.  We'll get to that, I promise.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Race

You could hold me in your story, I'm so curious ...
When you're young is a difference of six years, but then this desaparece.Eu difference and my husband is six years apart, I started dating him I was 15, he was 21, then the difference was huge, he had a lot of patience, but everything went right and far between dating and courtship and marriage are 20 years together.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: 6 years ago . . .

What he did to piss so bad Charlie.Eles are so cute.
Kisses.

Author's Response:

That will be revealed with time.  This is part of the Angst.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Babysitter Blues

What happened between Edward and Bella to Carlisle to be so hard on his son?
Edward is so protective of Bella, I love it when this feature appears.
Kisses, anxious waiting.

Author's Response:

Well, it's not just Bella.  It was Bella and Alice, but Bella's a little more rebellious than Alice right now.  I'm trying to keep that under wraps until Bella's a little older, but there will be clues along the way.

I wish I could say more, but that's really all I can divulge at this time.  Pay attention to when Edward dreams.  The big clues are there.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Level Head

Poor Edward, he is so good because he feels in debt, which he did so wrong?
Kisses.

Author's Response:

Yeah.  But I promise he'll cut a break soon enough.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Insistence of Innocence

Parents put too much pressure on Edward, he is not obliged to look after the girls, he is a teenager, should take care of si.… clear that Edward loves them and cares about them.
Waiting to see where the relationship will change.
Kisses.

Author's Response:

You're right.  He isn't obliged to do it.  He does it because he wants to.  The change is not that far off -- at least not from where I am.  ;-)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Ignorance is Bliss

So sweet!
It's interesting to see their relationship grow and trust gradually.
I do not know what Edward did, but whatever it is I can see how he's sorry, then why Carlisle is so cruel.
I'll be waiting for the next installment.
Kisses.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  It's good to know we're in this together.

See you next time!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Never Say Goodbye

I watch as Edward and Bella get closer, I would see them at camp
must have been a relief to have gotten away from pai.Pobre Edward has had enough punishment.
What he put the tattoo? Confess I'm curious.
Garret seems to be the opposite of Edward, but seems to be nice.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Tattoo on My Heart

So beautiful!
Thanks.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: The Airport

I'm so anxious about this story, what may have happened.
I really want to see the friendship of E and B evolve into love.
kisses

Author's Response:

It's okay to be anxious.  I am.  And I'm writing it.  And don't worry, you'll see it soon enough.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Living Up to Expectations

So sweet! I like Renee.
What Edward may have done wrong? He is so young, and your parents charge him so much.
Kisses.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I like Renee too.  We'll see her doing more in the way of accepting Edward back into her life with Bella.  And there will still be many hints and clues as to what happened, while the actual event will be revealed in two different way.  I don't want to say too much, sorry.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: The Boy Next Door

I've had a crush like that, it was sweet, and my heart was always fast when the via.
Edward is so sweet.
Kisses.

Author's Response:

I had one too.  And even though it didn't really blossom into much more than that, I can still remember it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: The Passenger

So curious!
What's going on with Bella and Edward?
kisses

Author's Response:

I know, I know, but don't worry.  We'll figure it all out together.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Pain Killers

So cute!
Thanks.

Author's Response:

I know, right!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248473
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: Lud Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: September 13th 1843

This story seems so sweet!
Edward is a type bitter and closed?
I can not wait for the last chapter.
Kisses.

Offbeat by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 323]
Summary:

He's a cop. She's a student. A missed connection during a traumatic time leaves them both longing, until fate brings them back together again. Romance, humor, slight drama. Canon couples. OOC. AU. This is my version of Copward, and this is a working summary.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92614 Read Count: 42684
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Cop and Copper

New story!!
I already love, please continue, Bella needs Edward.
Kisses.

Summary:

Bella the teen mom. Edward the sexy olderman. How do they meet and can they have more? Lets stalk them and see...

Very little angst and as sweet as i can write!

 

thanks to christagbanners for the banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35295 Read Count: 95367
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2012 Updated: 15 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Only now realizes that Bella fell in love!
This story is so beautiful.
I just love a possessiveward.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Jake really is an idiot!
He rubs the face of how Bella likes Nessie, no regrets for all the suffering that Bella did pass, shows no real interest in Liam, just give it to Edward.Gostaria that Edward Bella socasse.Ainda criticism by departing from their parents.
I loved how Edward was only support.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That was hot!
I love your stories, I read them in FF.
It makes me sad to know that you will pause, but I imagine that writing takes a lot of time.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

He is falling for Bella!
It really is a bit bossy, but I think after everything that Bella now, it's good to have someone to care for her.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love your possessiveward, he really wants to control your life, in and out of bed.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

They realize now that this relationship is more than sex?
I think when Edward realize how much is involved he will be so angry.
I hope that Liam did not get hurt.
More, please.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

OMG! Boyfriend Ness is Jake!? This will be perfect, Edward will be insanely jealous.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Jake is a disgusting pig!!
Well that E and B are trying.
Love for Liam.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Will Bella pregnant?
Living together is really very laborious, requires effort and maturity.
Often makes you want to drop everything, but then you have to sit
and enter into an agreement with the other party.
The two are being immature, Bella is young, but Edward should have seen the difficulties.
More chapters, please.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Poor Bella, his family and ex-boyfriend are lixo.Jake is so insensitive
which showed that only cares about Nessie, Jake is a selfish pig who does not deserve to be a father!
He must envy the happiness of Edward, Bella and Jake, and lament over all that lost.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I loved the story, I still want to kick Jake, he is very selfish!
I'll miss you, and I will be anxious for the next story.
kisses :)

Summary:

10 Years

 

When I was 15, I only had eyes for one guy—Edward Cullen. Through the years we grew together and apart. We experienced loss, love, loneliness. We fought, we loved and we hated. When tested—sometimes we failed. But when I was drowning in my own tears, he was my life preserver. Helping me stay afloat when I had no one else. This is our story. Our HEA 10 years in the making. Banner by LOT 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74745 Read Count: 8399
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2012 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Junior Year

This story is so great!
I love it, really.
I am saddened by what happened in the life of Edward and Bella, everything was so confusing in their mentes.Bella is strong to get through everything, but this Edward sunk into trouble, he clearly loves, but is acting like a teenager (ops ! They are teenagers). then, Riley will fight for Bella, and, Edward? update please? Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Charlie is a hypocrite! Speaking of his daughter and cheating on his wife.
Edward was an idiot, but he's a teenager, so I understand.
Bella went through so many things, good that she and her mother talked.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Poor Bella, is in the middle of a situation as difficult, losing his best friend, ficsndo foot to another ...
And now I see more difficulties lie vir.Bella be pregnant? OMG!!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

They are sweet, Edward is trying to be all adult, but he is still so young!
I feel that they are separating, it's sad ...
But I know you will make everything better.
Kisses.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"So, you have a kid?" He asks. "And you live with your best friend? Who happens to be a dude?"

I nod, and answer, "That would be correct."

"Isn't that weird?"

I smirk. Wait for it! "No weirder than the fact he's also my son's father." Needless to say, my date comes to a screeching halt.

BPOV. Family/Humor. Drabble.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24443 Read Count: 102175
[Report This] Published: 08 Dec 2012 Updated: 06 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I wonder what caused them to have a child, of course I understand the mechanics;)
but getting involved with friends?
I love this story so far.
Kisses.