Reviews by DrHannibalLedford
Salvation House by Indianprincess28, shawney cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary:

In a world of vices, wrongs and rights everyone will put those aside to fight for the right to live. Edward Cullen is a twenty five year old single father of a four month old baby girl named Katie. He lived with his older brother and sister in law in Hayward CA. Bella is a twenty two year old single female that has been living on an island for the last six months. They come with baggage, emotional struggles and a common goal. Strangers becoming family and fighting for a little slice of peace. Can personalities that clash survive the zombie attacks that are taking over the world? What is Salvation House and who will make it there alive?

 Rated NC-17 for language, limes and lemons in future chapters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93057 Read Count: 22392
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2010 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
Reviewer: DrHannibalLedford Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This story just keeps getting better and better. And I thought you handled the topic of God and religion quite well. In fact, I think Edward's last statement, " I would rather believe in something and find out I was wrong then to believe in nothing and have my soul pay the price" summed it up rather nicely. :) Anyway, as always, you did a great job and I can't wait to see where this all leads.

Cheers!

~Dr. H.  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for giving us your thoughts Dr.H. This was the one chapter that i have dreaded writing since this story idea came to me. Religion is always a touchy subject in a normal setting and Edward's belief system is honestly my own. I could have kept the bible and god out of this story, but I didn't believe that was right. I think that people would start questioning their faith if something like this were to happen. It is a normal human responce to question our beliefs when thrown into life or death situations. I am glad to hear that you thought that we handled it well. Shawney and I had talked about it a great deal before I posted this chapter. As always thanks for reviewing.

IP28 and Shawney

The Greatest Gift by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 231]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullen has the plane ride of his life when a mysterious flight companion changes his life in the blink of an eye. Edward will need the help of his wife, Isabella, to right the wrongs of his past before it's too late.

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Finished, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 249172 Read Count: 36371
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: DrHannibalLedford Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Fantastic story! The more I read of this piece, the more I find myself hoping that Edward will be granted a reprieve...not for his sake so much, but for Isabella's. Poor dear, she just got her Edward back. 

Anyway, this is one of my very favorite stories so, PLEASE, keep up the fantastic work!! 

~Doc

 



Author's Response:
Hi again~
 
Well, I hope you are feeling a little better about things as we go forward? I thought it was really important to show them reconnect with each other and rediscover the love that has always been there, especially for Edward. And, really, who doesn't like sweet, needy, intense Edward?
 
Next chapter we see the beginning of his day at work and get some information that will be important as we go forward. I do promise light for the next few chapters as Edward and Isabella spend some time just rediscovering each other. Edward has a lot of work to do, hard work, too, and it is coming. I know you are anxious to get to the other characters, and I do assure you...they aren't too far away. Just hang in there with me, okay!?
 
I've had a few comments about wishing the chapters were longer. I know a lot of you are used to the monsters of The Path We Choose (and really, I was INSANE to ever do that...lol...no matter how much I love you all!) but this story has a much different pace and feel to it. I just write and stop where it feels natural. I will tell you Chapters 9 and 10 are much longer than any of the previous ones, so you can look forward to that!
 
I will be posting on my regular days over the holidays...but only if you guys promise to keep reviewing! I have the chapters already written to post so I don't want to make you wait for them. My little gift to you all for being such fabulous supporters of me and my story!
 
Okay, now for your next peek into Seth...and a brief glimpse of Carlisle and Esme.
 
Enjoy~
 
~~~~OOO~~~~OOO~~~~
 
"Seth?" Gideon questioned as he approached.
 
Gideon couldn't help but frown at his most favorite pupil as he watched him. Seth was worried, that much was obvious, but Gideon had been around Seth for a long time now so he knew it was more than that.
 
"Look," Seth said simply.
 
Being angels allowed their kind to observe many things at one time. It was just one of the many benefits of being an otherworldly creature. Of course, it was kind of what they were known for, too.
 
Gideon glanced in the direction Seth indicated and he couldn't help but smile at the scene in front of him. As he watched Edward and Isabella discuss having dinner with Emmett and Rosalie, Gideon flushed with pride at the steps young Edward had already taken. Sure there was so much left to do and in all reality they hadn't even touched on the most difficult things yet, but progress was progress nonetheless.
 
"Seth, you should be..." Gideon began but then his attention was focused on what Seth was looking at.
 
"Good morning, Es," Carlisle Cullen told his wife affectionately as he entered a kitchen in a house only a few miles away from that of Edward and Isabella.
 
It might as well have been on the other side of the country considering the distance between the occupants of the two homes.
 
"Morning, dear," Esme Cullen answered her husband as she placed a mug of coffee on the table in front of him. She kissed his cheek and then walked back to the counter to get his plate of breakfast.
 
Ironically, she'd fixed the same meal as her beloved daughter-in-law.
 
Once she had placed Carlisle's plate on the table and had retrieved her own and a glass of orange juice, they sat in a companionable silence while they ate...as they had done every morning since they'd been married.
 
A few minutes passed before Esme said, "Edward should have gotten home last night. I hope he had a safe flight."
 
Esme, along with the two heavenly observers, watched as Carlisle sighed deeply and then allowed his mouth to form a tight line. It was always the same whenever Edward's name was brought up, and had been for too many years to count. By this time it was an unconscious reaction, but the action spoke louder than words.
 
"Carlisle," Esme said in a resigned voice. She should have known better than to expect a different reaction from him when she mentioned Edward, but he was their son and she loved him. She knew Carlisle did as well. She just wanted things to be different.
 
So much time had passed; so many things had been left unsaid by all of them. Grief, misunderstandings, anger...all had festered and grown, unchecked; until the family was in the disarray it was in now. At this point, blame or who said what first didn't even matter. Esme wanted it fixed, and she wanted it fixed now. Enough was by God enough.
 
"Carlisle William Cullen," Esme said in a sharp, fierce voice causing him to slosh hot coffee onto his hand. "You know, for someone who was treated as an afterthought by his father, you would think you would try to be different with your own children," she said and then stood to carry their dishes to the sink.
 
"I'm having lunch with Emmett today," Carlisle answered lamely.
 
Esme turned her green eyes, the same one's Edward had inherited from her sister, and let them smolder at her obstinate husband. "That is not the son I am referring to, and you damn well know it. If something had happened to Edward on his flight home yesterday, just think how you would feel. I've lived for twenty years with the regret of not reconciling with my sister and there is not a day that goes by that I am not pained by that fact. I'd hate for you to have to live with the same regret, Carlisle."
 
With that, she turned and left the room, leaving Carlisle to ponder what she said. His heart did truly ache for his son and for the distance between the two; he just didn't know how to fix it. He didn't even know where to start.
 
The two unseen observers looked toward each other, both with the same pained expressions on their faces.
 
"So much hurt," Seth said as his heart beat painfully in his chest. While this assignment was one he had wanted, in fact he'd wanted it more than any other; it did not come without its own personal, painful reminders. Seth's life before he began his new one as an angel had many similarities to Edward's. Not exactly of course, but enough that it made it easier for Seth to understand Edward than anyone else.
 
"Yes, but so much forgiveness and love and joy when all is said and done," Gideon said quietly. "You can do this Seth, you must. Not just for Edward, but for all of them."
 
With that he took his leave while Seth continued to watch over the family that had come to mean so much to him.
 
~~~~OOO~~~~OOO~~~~
 
Well? What did you think? Seth has his work cut out for him, that is for sure. I'll continue to give you glimpses of things I'm not showing in the chapters themselves and before too long we'll get to Seth's story, too. So, as long as you all like getting the little peeks, I'll keep writing them. I want the story to focus on Edward and Isabella, but there are things happening in the background that are important, too.
 
Let me know what you thought of this if you want, or let me know if you have any questions. Send me an email or a PM...I promise I'll answer.

If you didn't get the bonus scene for chapter 6, send me an email~ les_sh_16(@)yahoo(.)com
 
Or, find me on twitter...les_sh_16
 
See you Sunday with the next chapter. (Psst...for all you TPWC readers, the next outtake is done, watch your inbox for notification for when it posts!)
 
Hugs and Love,
Erin~ (les16)

Red Ribbon by MujerN Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

He is infamous. Everyone knows about the terrorizing murderer who leaves behind bloody scenes and corpses at night while the city sleeps. Bella, a journalist, investigates and finds her fear turning dangerously into love.

–Red Ribbon
One-shot, Finalist to Tattward and Inkella Contest

On Fanfiction.net: Red Ribbon | Ruthless and Ivory multi-chapter


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7499 Read Count: 727
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2011 Updated: 29 Jan 2011
Reviewer: DrHannibalLedford Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Wow...just...WOW!

'Nuff said. ;)

Cheers!

~Dr. H.

Broken Time by LFC Hotstuff Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

 

 

Edward loses the best thing in his life due to his addiction.  Bella cannot take the lies anymore.  Its over.  There would be no chance that Edward could get her back as his Special Forces Unit was shipped out to Afghanistan.  Nearly a decade passes by and Edward decides to call Bella where they reconnect and Edward tells her he has only loved her.  Bella is thrilled but stunned when Edward refuses to meet with her in person.  How can you tell someone you love them and yet not be with them?  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6847 Read Count: 566
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2011 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: DrHannibalLedford Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful, wonderful story! I don't think I have ever enjoyed reading a one-shot more than this one. Well done!

I sincerely hope to read more from you soon. Cheers!

~Dr. H.



Author's Response:

Thank you Dr. H. 

If you would like to read more of my writing. Feel free to start with Walk With Me or Shake (another o/s).

I appreciate your taking the time to comment.

~Hotstuff

Heart of Glass by edwardsisobel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Banner

 

 

 

Two shattered hearts. Bella is lonely and scared after escaping a violent marriage with two children and a mountain of debt. Edward is jaded and lonely after a stinging betrayal. Can caring for a sick little boy be the glue that puts them back together?

 

 

 

Written for the Fandom against Domestic Violence fundraiser.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11889 Read Count: 1172
[Report This] Published: 20 Mar 2011 Updated: 20 Mar 2011
Reviewer: DrHannibalLedford Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Heart of Glass

Wonderful story! Can't wait to read more from you, edwardsisobel.

Cheers!

~Dr. H.

No More Tears by Runs with Vampires Rated: M [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

 

stories/21404/images/b2.jpg

On the day Bella's daughter turns three, she cant help but remember her life and certain events that lead her to this day, do birthday candle wishes ever come true? One can only hope. Now includes Edward's side of that day! R&R please.                

Bella and Edward Pairing.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10396 Read Count: 1080
[Report This] Published: 10 Apr 2011 Updated: 10 Apr 2011
Reviewer: DrHannibalLedford Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: A Soldier Coming Home

Wonderful story! I will definitely be checking out your other work, Runs with Vampires. :)

Cheers!

~Dr. H.