Reviews by Plumcrzy62
Summary:

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Dancing with the Devil cost Bella a piece of her soul. Will she earn her redemption? Or be lost forever. Sequel to Carlisle's Gift.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76020 Read Count: 33909
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2015 Updated: 27 Aug 2022
Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Leah is bad news!

Summary:

 

BANNER BY: FemmeCullen

SUMMARY:  Little Lucy Swan is turning five and her birthday wish is to sing with hot country star Edward Cullen. When her momma wins tickets to see him in concert, will little Lucy's birthday wish come true?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26153 Read Count: 28879
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2015 Updated: 27 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

My guess is Doctor Carlisle and Esme....

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love Lucy so much!!!

Sharp Left Turn by fyrebyrd89 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 295]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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In an instant your life can take a sharp left turn. Can you find the strength to lose it all and gain the unknown? Lives will be shattered, including your own.  

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155558 Read Count: 62544
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2015 Updated: 26 Jan 2016
Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Changes Ahead

Love that it is all working out for you.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Roundabout

Yes, he loves her. 



Author's Response:

He does and he's a smart man, he'll get it! Thanks so much, see you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Danger: Falling Rock Zone

Oh what a cliff hanger....little ears obviously picked up on something they shouldn't!



Author's Response:

Oh yeah, at the end of chapter 17, they heard Edward in the hall before reading to them ;) Thanks for reading! see you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Green Light

Cooks, cleans and looks like a God.....that is heavan isn't it?



Author's Response:

Hmm, Edward is a catch, but you can bet he's gonna have to work a little harder to land this Bella completely ;) Thanks!

Fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 43: Construction Zone

Seth and Jake are so cute I want to steal them.  



Author's Response:

Aww, they are little cuties! Time to tell the family, see you next week :)

fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 7: No U Turn

Wow, so glad I found this story and I can't wait for an update.  



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you found it, too, and can't wait to share it with you. Next update is Tuesday, although it will be later in the day than on FF, I'll still get it here as soon as I can. Thank you so much :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Sharp Right Turn

Well he is a big romantic at heart.



Author's Response:

He is, let's just hope he can pull it off! See you soon :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Steep Ascent

Woo hoo!!! I like it when Bella get possessive!



Author's Response:

LOL, and she did too. That's her man! see you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Dip

Disappointment....not sure I can see where Bella is coming from.  She has the world by the tail she should relax and take hand on.



Author's Response:

She'll explain exaxtlybwhatvshe means next chapter. See you tomorrow!

Fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Dangerous Curve Ahead

How scary that would be for a parent.  I hope little Jake doesn't go through the rejection they discussed.



Author's Response:

I know, such a scary time they're facing, but it has to be done. I hope I do it justice. See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Full Speed Ahead

If she doesn't say yes she is crazy!!!!



Author's Response:

*zips lips* see you soon :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 31: One Lane Road Ahead

Wow, that was some wedding!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Everyone seems to love the wedding and I'm glad I did it justice! See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Wrong Way

I bet it is Edwards Ex



Author's Response:

Guess we'll see next chapter ;)

Fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Keep Out

I love littel Seth and Jake.  Maria is a queen B who needs to be promptly dealth with. 



Author's Response:

I agree and hopefully Charlie'splan will work! See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Exit Only

Glad they got the Queen B.  I think Bella might be pregnant......



Author's Response:

They so got her. She will definitely not mess with this family again! As for Bella, we'll see what's up with her next chapter. See you then :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Rest Area

He is so sure it is a girl. I love little Seth and Jake.

Renovations by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 312]
Summary:

Renovations

Banner by Mina! 

 

Isabella Swan, thirty-six, is reeling from her recent divorce from the man she thought she would be spending her forever. Her mind and heart shattered, Bella purchases a home, but in need of repair near Seattle. Bella hires two men, Edward and Garrett to complete the repairs of her new home. Will these men renovate Bella's new home or is more in store? AU/AH Full Summary inside.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Garrett
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Renovation Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28282 Read Count: 72872
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 30 Aug 2015
Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Bella's Ex was an ass.

Crowned by cristina Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 280]
Summary:

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A playboy prince and an unwilling princess. An unusual match, brought together by strange circumstances. Will they find love or are they doomed to hate each other? 

Banners made by  the very talented StillDreaming85 and FallingSnow Winter.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35361 Read Count: 32509
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2015 Updated: 04 Oct 2015
Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I beat Bella's Mom was Caroline

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh man, who is Caroline?  Can't wait for the update. 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Love it and here I thought he was softening, not!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I feel this turning around a bit.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Maybe he likes her a little more than what he lets on.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love this story so much.....can't wait for the next update. 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

The plot thickens.....

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So glad you are back.  Love it and I really would like to see her and Edward start softening toward each other.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Please update soon, I love this story.

Guns and Pies by acullengirl40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 154]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella a bakery owner in a small mountain town where she grew up has sworn off men as most of the men she comes in contact with every day are tourists, until one day a sexy bearded man walks into her bakery wearing camo. Will he end up being her prince charming or will another summer tourist win her heart.

Edward an Ex Army sharp shooter is sick of his current situation with his demanding vegan girlfriend. He is on the verge of breaking up with the green monster as he likes to call her. Will walking though Bella's bakery door make him see that he needs more sweetness in his life and finaly cut his girlfriend lose or will he keep her around out of fear of being alone

Will these two let their hearts finally decide their path in life or will they both let fear drive their hearts away from what they both need, each other.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44255 Read Count: 20430
[Report This] Published: 01 Aug 2015 Updated: 09 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper

SO GLAD HE KICKED TANYA TO THE CURB

Summary:

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It's always been said that they're three sides to every story- yours, mine and the truth. With all the forbidden sex, manipulation, lies, secrets, deceit, twists an turns around every corner, finding the truth proves to be quite a difficult task. Backstabbing and deception become commonplace... Warning: super lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 68959 Read Count: 17582
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2015 Updated: 14 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 10: The Proposal

Part of me wants to hope that Edward isn't enough of a creep that he'd rape her.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 9: All of the what ifs

I can't wait to get more details about the events.  We know Edward is capable of bad things based on what he asked be done to Nick and then offering up his assistance.  

Buying Love by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2001]
Summary:

Buying Love

Edward Masen is the most popular escort working for Esme Platt. He’s the best at what he does and no woman ever goes unsatisfied. He’s smooth, sexy, dangerous and in control. In many ways. His employer holds him to this job due to the debt he needs to repay her. He’s a slave to the job in more ways than one. He lives in the best apartments, dresses in the nicest clothes and drives the best cars. All of it, though, can disappear in a moment’s notice all because Esme knows Edward’s secret. 

Isabella Swan is an heiress to the Swan fortune. Her father, Charlie Swan, owns a string of high end hotels and resorts all over the world. Bella, as her friends call her, is also going through a nasty divorce from her husband, Riley. He cheated on Bella with the limo driver, the gardener, the pool boy and Bella’s assistant, Maggie. She’s bitter and angry, hating all men and abhorring her soon-to-be ex-husband. 

Charlie is having a grand opening for his newest hotel in Seattle, Swan Towers. Bella is expected there, with a date for the lavish party. Rose, Bella’s best friend, suggested that she use a male escort, handing her Esme Platt’s card. Bella calls and asks for the best. Edward arrives, all suave and debonair, but detached and cold. However, the attraction between the two is palpable. 

 

Will they succumb to their attraction? Will Edward pull Bella down the dark path in his need for control? Or will Bella be his light? Or is all of this a ploy for Buying Love?

 

 

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Banners by Mina! Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Spicy
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 101 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196696 Read Count: 307437
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2015 Updated: 30 Sep 2016
Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Great so far.  Anxious to find out what debt Edward is repaying.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

Well if she love him she better step on it before she is left with only a shell to rescue.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

Carlisle needs to pay Esme a visit to find out about Edward.  I month is a longtime to not hear from him, so I'm certain it is not of his own free will.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38

Love this story and glad Emmett, Sam and Carlisle are on the job to help.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

She should realize he was being forced to behave badly to her.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

Esme is such a bitch, I can't wait for them to take her down a peg or 10!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

He needs to ask Bella to help him get out now.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43

I don't think Esme shoul die, I think she should go to prison and be someone's prison bitch that like to inflect lots of pain in their partner!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

He should have let Bella know what was going on so she could help him get away from Esme!  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 59

Dumb dumb dumb Bellla.....you should rely on your firiends!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Wow, Esme is something else!  Poor Edward.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

This will be fun.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Edward needs to settle his debt with Esme so he can move on with his life.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

I really hate Esme, poor Edward. Glad he has some people who care about him.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Bella needs to just pay for Edward's debts and get him away from Esme.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Bella needs to get him away from Esme. 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44

Can't wait for Esme and Felix to get theirs in the end!

 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

They need to get Carlisle and other there to help protect Edward and have some go stay with his mother too.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 96

I can totally understand why they are both so mad at CHarlie but I really hope he makes teh attempt to try to repair their relationship as much as possible.  So glad that Edward it doing so wel.

Summary:

 

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Banner made by heartfortwilight

 

 

 


Statistics say arranged marriages have a better chance at lasting. Is that still true if the couple is chosen by a group of experts and married on TV with at least one partner in it for the wrong reasons?

 


A lost bet, the promise of money and a stranger for a bride. Will confirmed bachelor Edward Masen find a match made in heaven or hell?

 


~Inspired by the show Married at First Sight~

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3958 Read Count: 2262
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2015 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Original OS

I think this would be a great story, so I hope you decide to continue with it.  



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying my new project. As I'm sure you saw in the A/N for the next chapter, the full story will post as its own story. You can find it on my profile. Next update will be Monday and it will still cover Edward's preparations for the wedding. Starting with chapter 3, everything will be new, and there will be BPOV. See you over there.

Summary: Past Featured Story

lucky Charm

Edward Cullen's mother taught him that storms are beautiful. They make the air feel clean, while the day is refreshed, and it produces some of the loveliest of rainbows. He will find out they can also bring out your Lucky Charm.    

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10815 Read Count: 16688
[Report This] Published: 01 Oct 2015 Updated: 29 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

So sad



Author's Response:

Awww... thank you!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

This is so sad. 



Author's Response:

:\ I'm sorry! Thank you! 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

No....don't do it as she will be unhappy leaving Edward too.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Why would he do that.  Maybe she can stay of her own free will now?

 



Author's Response:

He thought it was the best thing for her? Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

So sad for them both. 



Author's Response:

Me too & I wrote it. lol Thank you! :) 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella, a young girl of seventeen has the world at her feet, but all that is torn away when her father forces her into an arranged marriage with a stranger. #mobward #bratella

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64912 Read Count: 171242
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2015 Updated: 25 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Wow, Garrett and Kate are a piece of work.  I hope Bella listens to Edward.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Glad Edward and Bella are starting to work together.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow, there has to be a good reason that Bella's family would just send her away like that.  I wish he woudl at least tell her something.  He was being an ass when he told her that he parents didn't want to come to her wedding,  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

She might not want to find out, but I think we all do!  (;

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Edward is cute when he is sweet with her.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

He has to go an blow it on the day of the funera;

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

About time their relationship starts developing to the next level.

Under Construction by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 275]
Summary:

Under Construction

 

Bella Swan, a divorced adoption attorney, is relishing her time with her two hot and attentive boyfriends, Edward Masen and Garrett Keyes. Never in her wildest dreams had she ever considered being with two men, let alone two men who adored her as much as they do. Their relationship is perfection. With all new relationships, they are trying to navigate the ins and outs of being together. Their little bubble of sexual exploration is threatened when Bella is sent to New York City for a high profile adoption proceeding.

With a heavy heart, Bella flies out to New York to meet her new clients, close friends of Aro Volturi, her former boss. Carmen and Eleazar D’Amato are finalizing the adoption of a child that they fostered for almost a year and a half, but dealing with them is easy. Running into her ex-husband is not. He manages to appear everywhere once he found out that Bella was in New York. His new marriage has crumbled and his estranged wife has taken their child, hiding him away from James. His job is hanging by a thread and he now blames Bella for everything.

On a whim, Edward and Garrett fly out to New York to surprise Bella. She loses herself with them, but they had an audience. But, who and to what end?

 

Banner by Mina


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Garrett
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Renovation Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33096 Read Count: 45259
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2015 Updated: 16 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I can't believe a security person would believe him without asking to see identification or calling someone. 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I wonder how long it will take her ex to show up trying to black mail her.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow, didn't see it playing out like this at all. 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow, she didn't even talk it over with them.  Harsh

Summary:

OliviaThoughtful Xander

Xander and Olivia have been through so much heartache and pain, but they've also experienced great joy as they share their immense love for each other.  A new challenge arises, once more testing the limits of their love, their trust and their faith in one another.  Are they strong enough to pass the test?


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 85 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 467292 Read Count: 17693
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2015 Updated: 21 May 2017
Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Great chapter.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'm really happy that Xander was finally able to figure out what really matter the most to him no matter what the outcome of the DNA test.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'm sorry but he is giving me whiplash with this and I am not sure what Olivia isn't getting to the point she just wants to tell him to pack a bag.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

His dad's story should have been enough for him to head the F12 Home!!!  I hope he can deal with this fast, or they might get to the point that Olivia decides there is no going back.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I wish on was on this private plan headed to Greece!  Great chapter and sorry about your surgery.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 30 May 2016 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

So glad everything went well and she is having happy dreams now,

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow, the doctor was way forward and stupid if she thought she could temp him away.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow, what is the chance that the doc would be one of his past playmates.  I suspected something like that from her reaction at the first meeting.  I feel for her having to go to court again.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I feel so sorry for these two.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

If Edward would have gone home with Bree, I would beat him to death.  Hoping it is his and they are just wrong.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh man, this was a hard chapter to read.  I have to admit that I would really like to kick Xander's butt right now.   I understand he is having a hardtime, but could it really be any worse then Olivia?   He is not acting as if his love is unconditional and I think the longer Olivia has to realize this the more she will realize his love isn't as deep and commited as he has professed.   I am sure he will lose the respect of many of others as well, because she deserves better.  

Can't wait for the next update!!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

This is heartbreaking.  I wonder what the test results are going to be.  Hopefully the doctor that Edward is going to talk to will get him to pull his heard out of his butt.

Stories about Hunter and Tess would be great.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Poor Olivia can't catch a break.  I keep hoping Xander will come to his senses soon, 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Glad someone pointed out in no uncertain terms how selfish he is being,

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Olivia is in denial if she doesn't know she should be worried.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Glad he finally wised up.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

What a dummy!!!!  She isn't going to forget this anytime soon!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 83

Seems like a final goodbye to me!  Kind of sad.

Deprivation by aliciaw68 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 162]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is deprived of Intimacy and Bella something far more private  can fate bring them together or not ?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 67 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160365 Read Count: 98047
[Report This] Published: 28 Oct 2015 Updated: 03 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

When he decides a girl is worth it he really knows how to romance a girl. 



Author's Response:

He does but it's built on very shaky ground at the moment x

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2015 Title: Deprivation

Glad they cleared that all up.  Go Edward.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

He is so wrong...



Author's Response:

Yep not thinking straight at all

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Hopefully she rethinks her stance and realizes that from the point Edward found out who she was he wanted to be Edward not MM.  Given he didn't realize SG would be someone he aleady knew, he didn't feel he could walk up and introduce himself as MM.  If he'd done that, I thing Bella would have suspected he'd staged what happend.  Frankly, Bella should stop thinking and follow the "Rose voice"in her head!   Soon please (;

Great chapter.  



Author's Response:

I agree I think rosalie gives excellent advice x

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Why is he still not telling her the truth....bad start that could lead to problems.



Author's Response:

Yep he really isn't thinking straight 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow, Garret is a piece of work to actually talk to "his date" while he is in the middle of that.  



Author's Response:

I thought that yet your the only person to comment on it .

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

So close, but so far.



Author's Response:

I know so please be patient they will meet eventually maybe.......

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Darn cliffie.  Can;t wait for the update.  



Author's Response:

It's up now so enjoy

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

So glad she will give him a chance.



Author's Response:

She will let him in x

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bad boy Jacob Black doesn't return Bella's crush, so she decides to date someone safer: a harmless nerd in her math class named Edward Cullen. Little does she know that he is secretly a powerful and ruthless gang leader enmeshed in a vicious drug war that will put her life—-and all her beliefs—-at risk.. AU, AH, E/B, HEA. Co-authored with Sophia Amador.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6456 Read Count: 88300
[Report This] Published: 15 Nov 2015 Updated: 02 Oct 2016
Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I think Edward will help give her an advantage to ensure she goes with him. 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

I am so glad that Edward has been able to redeem himself.  I am sad that Emmett had to die though.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I hope that Edward can find a way out of this as her really is trying to clean up his act.  I suspect she will learn more by a situation out of Edward control.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

He probably ordered on of his "crew" top stock the groceries.  I am thinking the foot steps might be James or maybe Jake.



Author's Response:

Great guess!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed
Date: 04 May 2016 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Does thsi mean there will be a sequel?  Loved it. 



Author's Response:

Thanks and we are working on epilogues and possibly a sequel. :)