Reviews by AngelGoddess1981
Summary:

A Bella/Edward Story

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Bella loves Edward, much more than she should. Edward is an addict. Bella deals with it. Years of this cycle begin to take its toll, and Bella is fed up. A near fatal accident forces Edward into a coma, and Bella reexamines her previous decision. Will Bella stay, or is it all too much? OOC/AH

The story is based on events that happened to me in real life. I've just changed the situation some and adapted it to fit Stephanie Meyer's Characters.

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Warning:

This story is not intended for anyone under the age of 18. Some themes include underage drug abuse, adult drug abuse, violence while under the influence, poor judgment while intoxicated, graphic medical scenarios, graphic sexual situations that are consensual, explicit language, and extreme angst. Be advised, this work of fiction is not suitable for everyone. If you are under 18 or find these situations upsetting or uncomfortable, please move on. Otherwise, I urge you to read with caution.   

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148282 Read Count: 31054
[Report This] Published: 29 Oct 2010 Updated: 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I Don't Need a Hero

hey there!

I'm glad you asked me to make the banner, because it has forced me to read the fic and I have to say I LOVE IT so far!!

You have a great writing style and I can't wait to read on!

xoxo,

AG1981



Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment. Being on this side, it's hard to know if people will receive it well or not.

BTW, love, love, LOVE the new banner. You do phenominal work.

I bow down to your artistic skills!

 

-shelikesthesound

Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: I am Inside

Another chapter well done.

I forgot to mention that I caught a canon parallel that impressed me. I am BIG into all things canon, and if you can twist an AH fic to use canon parallels, I will pimp it like nobody's business.

The canon parallel I am talking about is the use of Drugs being Edward's "vampire nature." I love that he "tried to keep it from Bella" and that she even got a little taste of it (tho she never changed in Twilight, she was bitten and therefore got a tiny taste of the transition, does that make sense) and then Edward took it away from her by telling her she wouldn't be allowed to do drugs again unless it was pot (just like he sucked the venom out, taking away her chance at immortality). Maybe I'm reading too much into it, or it was an accident on your part (some authors don't realize they've done it ;))

Anyway, i just wanted to say that I loved that, and this chapter!

xoxo,

AG1981



Author's Response:

The canon parallel was intentional. But I wasn't sure if I got it right or not. The reason I love Edward's character in the books is his protective nature. And, if I'm going to write about him and Bella, they have to keep some of their personalities. I hate reading any fic that portrays them completely out of character because why write fanfic then? They might as well write an original story. I want to at least recognize the characters I'm reading.

Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Roulette

HAHA! Victoria *gasps for air between the fit of giggles* is a *more giggling* MAN?! LMMFAO!!!

*wipes tear from eyes* Whoooo, that was awesome.

Another great chapter. I like that we are getting the flashbacks. I am a big writer of "the flashback" so I like seeing another author embrace them, too ;-)

xoxo,

AG1981

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389610
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

*waves*

Hi!

So, having a bit of time today, I was looking at a few of my reader's profiles, and having a hard-on for Domward, I picked your fic to read ASAP.

This prologue was awesome. I loved getting into the heads of B & E. The dream was...fuckhot, actually.

Their "meeting" was to die for. I loved that they know each other, but have no idea that they are about to actually enter into this...with EACH OTHER. I understand the logistics of that plan, and I can't wait to see it play out.

Can't wait to read more!

xoxo,

AG1981



Author's Response:

Thanks!!  It means alot that you enjoy it!  You may not need a Kleenex alert, but you might need fresh panties though... *winks*!  I love your story sooo much, thanks for the support.  Thanks for taking the time to review!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

hi again!

So this chapter had me wanting to casterate Jacob. Seriously.

Again, the dream (even if it was a punishment) was great. I'm a little bit of a sub-whore :-P For someone who doesn't deal in the lifestyle, I find you write it well. I'm no pro in D/s, by any means, so maybe you don't...IDK. I believe it ;-)

Thanks for another great chapter!

xoxo,

AG1981



Author's Response:

I know right!  I wrote it and he made me want to barf!  Trust he´ll get his, don´t you worry!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN

Well! This chapter had a little bit of everything, huh?

I felt bad when Edward found out about Bella's impending nuptuals...even if they aren't happening now ;-) The poor guy.

And Tanya. Man, the bitch gets a bad rap in FFdom. :-P I've written her as the villan, too, though. What can I say, she makes the perfect villan. Anyway, I don't like her, so I'm glad she won't be sticking around.

I wanted to say that throughout these first few chapters, I have picked up on a few canon parallels that get me super excited. I am a whore for all things canon and when an author can take something SM created and spin it to fit their story, well I get a happy. 

As for who safe-worded...IDK. I want to say Tanya as Edward is a Dom... but he is the one wanting to end it and I'm guessing that safewording from either of them is what gets them out of it...Hmmm...IDK!!

Great job! I have to go and get ready for work, so I'll hopefully be able to pick up later!



Author's Response:

We´ll just have to wait and see on the safeword issue.  Yeah poor DomWard is in a bit of a funk, but let´s hope that he won´t suffer too long.  Tanya is a bit of a nut job, but we shall see!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Krazi

xoxo