I know he found them because of the chip in Victoria...but it would have been funny to see James point of view of him running round the country side chasing a rat thinking Victoria was running from him.  He could have put it in wrong and it got transfered to a rat somehow.  lol.  I could just see him running around saying come out come out wherever you are. 

i was hoping James would lose his phone.  Save the Girls!!!!

How can this story be done in 2 more chapters.  Is one of them going to be an epilogue?  It feels like the story is only 3/4 the way finished.  Whats going to happen to the school.   Will Carlisle reopen it?  What will happen with Bella and Edward?  Will Bella go to college like she always wanted to?  Will Edward continue with law?  Will Bella and Edward ever go back to the Training school if it is opened to either work there or participate as students.  I know Bella didnt like it there but she learned so much about herself therer.  What will happen with Victoria and her baby.  What happens to James?  Will Bella's father ever find out.  Lots of questions to be answered yet.  Please extend it just a little longer than 2 chapters. 

I did really love this chapter.  Glad Bella got to beat on James for a bit.

loved it. Couldn't help liking James in the beginning though. Not enough chapters with her and Edward being together but I really enjoyed this story.

Author's Response:

I loved James throughout this story... even when he was an evil SOB... but he had to end... I am writing another story that is B/James, with a little bit of E/B in between... but I love me some James and think it's time for him to be a good guy for a change. Keep watch for my stories.

I love this story. I have been trying to leave a review on other chapters but they never posted but I think I finally figured out why. So hopefully this one will go through.

I love that Bella dropped Emmett.

Next time Jacob teaches Edward some new words have him teach him something wrong. So he says something to bella that makes no sence at all. Jacob should do that to all the playroom words since he does not really agree with their playroom time anyway.
Just dont let bella be punished for it. lol

Loving this story. Please update soon.

ok she had to go to the office as punishment for calling him Edward so she acted out because he wouldn't listen. He is acting like an irrational child in this story and I'm not so sure I like this Edward

This is a lovely story.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Another Futuretake is coming. I just have to find time around christmas here to finish it

Poor Bella. Was Jacob secretly with Jared?

Come on Edward.... get your head out of your ass because Bella needs you! loving this so far.

Loved this story. we need an outtake of when bella and Alice went into labor. Did they indeed have them on the same day?

great chapter. I was waiting for Masen to pee on Edward while he was changing his diaper.

They need to ask masen. They keep saying he is so smart but no one is talking to him. Does he want a little bit of pain.

Cant wait for Charlie's reaction. I bet Sue will Shit a brick when she finds out!

Love the pictures.

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I just realized I could add pictures!

wow. Lots happened here. Renee finally left. Edward and Bella really need some time alone. Since they got back together they have had non stop company. I love what Masen did to tanya. Is she going to go to aro now? Was Masen happy and clapping because of what feelings he gave to tanya or because he knew his mom and dad were back?

lol Jacob is so funny. I was wondering about him and if he was back to see his girl yet.

mmmmmm Naked Edward.

Great chapter. Hope they catch victoria before she causes too much trouble. They should have jacob write down a new fake address for them so they can catch her.

I noticed in an earlier chapter that Bella said she had graduated already and then a while later Charlie said she had not completed high school and gotten her diploma yet.

Its nice to see that Rose is getting along with Bella. I always hated bitchy rose.

Author's Response:

Would love to know where it says she had graduated!  Thank you for reviewing!

Here is where it says she has graduated already. Second to last paragraph in this chapter.

"I'd do it. I'd do it for you, Jacob. Lets stop by my house so I can get some clothes. I've already graduated from school, I am 18 and a legal adult and there is nothing keeping me here. I'll leave Charlie a note."

I like that Edward and Jacob are starting out as friends. And Im glad that he can admit that he is is love with Bella but accepts that Edward is it for her. I just hope that once he starts to phase and he believes the legends he doesnt start hating Edward. I just like them as friends. Cant wait to see what kind of business Jacob starts.

I love these scenes where Edward takes bella hunting.

uh oh whats going to happen now?

Author's Response:

Some of my favorite chapters, coming up!

You would think for as much as they have sex she would have to walk around with a bucket stuck between her legs to catch everything. lol.

Thanks for writing about the magic kingdom. My husband and I went there for our honeymoon 15 years ago. It brought back some good memories.

"That's right, Jake. It's no different than you eating steak or venison or lamb. Same thing. You kill to eat as well. How many hamburgers and hot dogs, Jake? How often do you have bacon? They were alive once, did you ever think about what you were eating?" Bella explained to him defiantly

I love that bella explained it like this. I always thought that the vampires should open up a butcher shop. They could drink the blood of the animals and then sell the meats. No need to waste any of it.

Haha I hope Edward tells Bella what Charlie and sue are up to.

I hope Sam comes around and sees what an ass he is being.

I need to stop reading now and go to sleep! Just can't seem to do it. Can't wait to read more in the morning!

lol. Renee is going to be fun I think.

still loving it. Im glad that Edward heard the babies heartbeats.

Great chapter. I want to know what the kids ran into. lol.

I have to say this is one of my favorite stories that I have read in a long time. I felt like I had already read all the good stories and I was do happy I found this one. Great job.

Loving this story. Cant get enough of it. I'm so glad they finally got off that f'ed up island. How much story is left? I cant wait tor more.

Author's Response:

It really depends on how detailed I go and how I break out the chapters. It's not written out yet, so sorry I can't be more specific. I do know how it all plays out, I just haven't written it down. 

Wow. I absolutely loved this story. Thank you for writing it.

Great story. I kind of expected ana to ask Christian to demonstrate exactly what went on with the sub he hired.

I just read your book and loved it. I also enjoyed your pictures that goes along with the story. Is there going to be a sequel to this?

Author's Response:

yup. I hope to start writing it in August!

Oh my. Hope he does not go find another submissively to get back some control again. Always one step forward two steps back

Loving this story. Just looked at your tumbler pica. Hot hot hot.

Who is it? I don't usually read drabble figs because the short chapters make me feel like the story is going to end too soon or too much important info will be left out. But I am loving this and I feel like I'm not missing anything. Love the story. Love the lemons. Love the characters.

I am loving your stories.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying them. :)

Loving this!

Holy hell! Your stories are HOT and your pervy pica are even HOTTER! Love your stories! Keep up the awesome job!