Reviews by cina24
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995705
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Loved it. I was shocked to her alice compare Bella to a stepford wife but to an outside it might have appeared that way. I can't believe that Edward sent Bella out shopping in a skirt with no panties... I'd be afraid to bend over. So glad to see the twisters back together. Thank you for sharing.

Author's Response:

Hmmm - Edward sure loves to push the boundries!  Thanks for the review

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Wow that was something else. For a minute there my first thought that it was Renee. The wedding couldn't have been any better. Tho I could have kicked Edwards ass for the way he treated Bella. Thank god you had him wake up at the end of this update. As always you are such a great writer and thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Wonderful as always... So afraid of might be in that letter. If carlise couldn't tell her it must be heart breaking. On to the next update.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Boy if Edward wants her be honest and talk to him he has to calm the fuck down.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

So good. Please tell me Jacob and James will not get their hands on Bella

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45

You did an amazing job on this chapter. I can't begin to tell you how much I love this story. It has a bit of everything and just the right amount of each. Thanks for sharing

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

It think Edwards punishment was on the verge of too much. I loved bella's time with Charlie and I agree there was closure needed with Billy. I look forward to so much more. Happy new year

Author's Response:

thank you so much for your review and comments.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

That was so good I read it twice.  Loved everything about it.  Really loved it when Bella put Heidi in her place.  can hardly wait fo rmore.



Author's Response:

thank you so much, yeah, I thought that it was about time for Bella to put Heidi in her place, it's horrible to feel intimidated by someone's sense of superiority.

thanks for the review xoxo

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

That was one amazing update...  from the wedding to the baby announcment you did an amazing job.  Love your story... thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

thank you for your very kind words xoxo

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Another great update. Loved everything about it... From their play time to Andy and Brian. A drunk Bella is pretty funny. Glad to see our two favorite people get closer every day. Thanks for sharing

Author's Response:

Thank you so much sweetie

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Wow I think I am going to go back and read this chapter. It was truely amazing. You are such a gifted writer from the labor to delivery and the shower in the hospital to bella's first night alone. This by far is one of my favorite stories. I love how there is angst but it is very short lived. I got frustrated when angst goes on chapter after chapter. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Loved how you brought our couple back together. Edward was such an ass... I thought my husband was bad when he was sick.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

I'm not sure who was crazier... Alice or the uncles. Thank god Bella was able to calm everyone. The wedding was wonderful and I loved all the dresses and tuxes. Can't wait to see what Edward has planned for their wedding. I absolutely love you story and want to thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

What is Bella up to now. Glad Edward got a clean bill of health health. I must say that Renee is one evil bitch and I sure hope she gets what she deserves some day. Love it

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

You are such a great writer. That whole birthing scene was wonderful. Poor daddy carlise just wanted to protect his little girl and Talk about timing... Couldn't have been any better then when Rosalie got off the lift to a half dressed Em. And now we have a pregnant Bella. Such exciting times ahead. What's this about only 5 more chapters? I don't want this to ever end. Love your story. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response:

Hey there! Thanks so much for the review - 5 chapters isn't going to cut it is it?  We'll see ....

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Your updates are ways sooooooooo good. A lot going on, but that's the best part... My favorite wZ when Edward left Bella in the car after their first obgyn appointment and she didn't even realize it. I can hardly wait to see what you have in store for Carlise and Esme. My favorite story.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

That was an amazing chapter. Your writing is wonderful you make us feel everything they are wheather it is happiness, pain , sad good bad... Ect... Wonderful how you ended the chapter with all the baby news. I hope Esme gets the help she needs and together maybe Esme and Bella could help each other.. Thanks for sharing your amazing chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review and comments.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Amazing. Love Bella and how fast she has a melt down. Edward was crazy to try and confront Charlie... Thank god for Em and jazz. The ranch is going to be so exciting. Thanks

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Oh my that was so good... I am going back and read it again. I was so proud of Bella when she told those bitches off. And loved how Edward showed her how much he loves her. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

I must say that I am a little concerned about the new arrangement. It would seem a little weird to me to see Bella not talking in public. She really had no choice because if she rejected the offer Edward would have taken it very bad. Oh I really hate to see my favorite story come to an end. Love your writing and appreciate all the work you do to bring us such great updates. Thank you

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

I got a stomach ache reading this chapter. I have a feeling it's only going to get worse. I have faith in you because with everything they have been through you won't break them up... The same goes for Kate and garrett.... Right?!?!?

Author's Response:

Relax cina24, I promise that everything will be alright.  You know that I would never let anything happen to any of our family.  We love them too much. xoxo

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Are you kidding.... Of course we want you to continue until they are old and have great great great grandchildren. Oh I loved the uncles they are so cute and no they didn't go too far. Would have liked to see how Irene groveled at Bella and Kate's feet. Love the things you come up with you are so talented. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

I loved BD... Yes they left out something's and adlibbed a bit but it was still great... They get better and better with each movie.

I love your writing and the stuff you come up with. The pantry mess was so funny, even if Bella didn't think so. I was so scared during the delivery, but our master took over and all was well. I am excited a out the academy awards... That should be so fun to write. Thanks again for sharing this wonderful story.

Healing by LizzieHopscotch Rated: T [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Sequel to Doll and The Letter.

She's woken up and left the Volturi, but where will Bella go now? Will she go back to the Cullens? Or will she stay on her own? And how will she move forward in her life when Felix just won't let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12277 Read Count: 1623
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 13 May 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I loved this series. So happy Felix is gone along with Victoria. 

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254861
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

That van he saw while running has always been in the back of my mind.  Shit maybe she doesn't remember.  Poor Emmett I feel so bad for him having to just sit by and watch.  Bella and her tantrum hahahahaha.  Loved it. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

I absolutely love this story and hope you start posting again.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

I absolutely love this story and hope you start posting again.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

I absolutely love this story and hope you start posting again.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

That van he saw while running has always been in the back of my mind.  Shit maybe she doesn't remember.  Poor Emmett I feel so bad for him having to just sit by and watch.  Bella and her tantrum hahahahaha.  Loved it. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

What a GREAT update.  Loved that Bella finally got her fruity pebbles.  Conversation was interesting to sat the least.   Who is the bother?  I don't believe that Charlie isn't Bella's dad.  Can't wait to read the next updat... off I go!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Oh my....  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Theat was so good.  I am afraid James and Tanya are going to show their ugly sides. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Too funny!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Absolutely love your story. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh my that was such a great chapter.  And we finally met Tanya.... The bitch that she is. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Why does Bella not have Seth with her at all times?  He could be a big asset to the center and protect and warn Bella of any harm. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

If feel the Bella does about God....  I know there is a higher being but I come from a bad childhood and have a hard time with "free will".  Why does God let bad things happen to child.   What is with Bella's gym bag????  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Loved it

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Omg that's just crazy.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Too funny "emmie".  Love it. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Very sexy having Bella dress Edward.  Where in the hell is Stehan getting his info?  James is lurking around.... Is he the friend Felix wants an application for?  Not sure what Leah's problem is.... Jealousy?  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Ofcourse 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Wow that was so emotional.  Great writing.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Loved it as usual. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Ok the only thing I don't like is having Bella suffer in public.  That's just mean. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Ewwww pinky mouse description was so nasty.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I'm thinking Heathe is really Victoria and she is doing his dirty work. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Office Hawk is an ass. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Mike or caruis 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

No not a leash and collar. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

We go to different beaches on our vacations and we look for sea glass.  Can't believe Paul said that infront of Charlie.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Yes I definitely can see Leah's side. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Ewwwww we finally meet it. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Loved Edward and Leah's talk.... I think they both needed to clear the air between them. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Not sure why Edward would care.... he will be golfing. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

I thought he was a bit harsh.  But I'm not hating him (yet). 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is gone and Charlie is worried. Hoping to snap Bella out of her slump he organises a trip to the middle of nowhere.

Unfortunately for both of them a certain family of vampires has had the same idea.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14297 Read Count: 5724
[Report This] Published: 27 Aug 2010 Updated: 09 Nov 2010
Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 14 May 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Loved it. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet as their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Edward and Bella? Or will they become more than friends? AH&NC-17 for language and possible lemons.

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Banner by busymommy

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Finished, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145690 Read Count: 204571
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2011
Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Love this story.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

That was one lemony update. You did a wonderful job. Love the story and thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Talk about an emotional day for Bella. From the move to her book and last was the mural. With Edward by her side she can do anything. Loved it

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

You are such a great writer. Love this family and look Forward to more

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I just love your story and do hope they have a little girl someday.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Ok is she pregnant? Loved it

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

That was so emotional... Not many stories make me cry but this chapter sure did. The anxiety that Bella felt before the wedding was just radiating off of her. I can understand with losing Brody right before they got married. Looking forward to "moving forward"

Summary: Past Featured Story

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banner by lvtwight09

 

When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268823
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

That was a very emotional chapter. Wonder what is going to happen next. Thanks for the update

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Loved it. Great story

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This is such an amazing story. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Well this is such a touching story. Look forward to the next update. Thanks for sharing

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

That was a great chapter loved that Bella finally was able to voice her side.

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Can't imagine what it would be like to be Bella....  hopefully going to talk to a 3rd party will help.  Love your story thanks for sharing



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wow the ending brought tears to my eyes.  What a touching story you have and I can hardly wait to see how it unfolds. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. The end got to me, too.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Glad to see Bella have time to herself with Edward. Looking forward to see how you unfold this story with both families.

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wow the last two updates were very emotional. This story is so heart wrenching. Love it

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Looks like bella's talk at breakfast must havE shaken up her brothers. So glad they are all trying. Greet job

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

It was a hard chapter to read. Loved it

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Intense chapter. I am afraid for Bella she needs to come to terms with everything before she ends up really hurting herself

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

These last two chapter were just wow. I loved Esme's and Renee's POV. It's sad how it takes something this horrible to bring everyone together. Poor Edward must feel awful. Thanks for the fast updates.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Poor Bella she is is trying if just the town snoops would leave them alone. Loved it

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I am really torn between calling Bella a whiny bitch and calling her a girl in pain trying to find a happy medium. She is so torn between the two families that I not sure what will help her. Love the story.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

OMG you are evil... 18 wheel vs a Volvo are they even going to survive. Poor Edwards mother I feel for her the most. Please update soon.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Ok I understand she has been through alot.. But enough already. She should be happy she has so many people that love her and be happy about what she has now not dwell on what might have been. I feel very sorry for Angela because she bad to grow up in the shadow of a sister. Sorry if you don't agree but I can't stand poor Bella anymore. I hope she figures it out soon.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Bella needs a swift kick to the ass. Wake up and see what you have.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 59: outtake part four

That was a hard chapter to read... Amazing story. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 60: Outtake part five

That was an amazing chapter. 

Summary:

 

Heartbroken when Tanya told him she cheated on him with his best friend after he proposed to her, Edward vowed to give up on love and women. Bella Swan, they shy freshman at the Univ of Wash, catches his eye.  He fights to stay away, but can he? Love can heal many wounds if you give it a chance.  Travel with Edward to see if he gives into temptation while dealing with his tainted past.

 

Rated NC-17 for language, dark themes, adult content and future lemons! Enjoy

Stephanie Meyers owns everything Twilight, but I own the plot! This is my first story I hope you all like it!!

There is now a group site for my story on facebook.  If you want to keep with with updates and fellow groupies, feel free to come find me... ;)

http://www.facebook.com/home.php?sk=group_152421278164462&ap=1

The first few chapters were reviewed by the Project Team Beta, Betas - thank you to them for their assistance.  But I am very proud and excited to have Woodlily and itsange helping me with revisions and future chapters.....THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH!!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 146797 Read Count: 15151
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 12 Aug 2015
Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Breaking

I really feel for Edward. And if James has Tanya why is the slime bag asking Bella out. Can hardly wait to see how this unfolds. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Love your story.. thanks for the update

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Love the update. Can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

Thank you.  Hopefully it will be up within the week, I'm working on it now!!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Edward stop fighting the feeling.

Author's Response:

He's still a little gun shy about everything.  He's still healing, give him time....but those feelings are making themselves known slowly but surely. I'm glad your enjoying, please stick with me - so much more is in store for our little group!!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12 - Dealing with the past!

I understand where Bella is coming from... but they are going to smother her if they don't watch out.  Loved the interaction with Bella and Big Brother.  Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

You're right...that's why Bella is already trying to distance herself. I love Emmett, he's one of my favorite characters in Twilight besides Bella and Edward.  There will be more with them soon.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13 - Memories are best left in the past!

Wow I am having a hard time with Edward not stopping James... Maybe he can make it up somehow. Love your story and glad to see Edward so protective of Bella. Yeah he is falling fast. Love your story

Author's Response: I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. Edward is definitely very protective of Bella and as far as James, humm, we'll see how Edward handles him *EG* stay tuned!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14 - How do you help one who is in hell?

Yes James is one twisted fuck... But I agree with Bella.. What comes around goes around and james' days are numbered

Author's Response:

Heehee...oh yeah...I'm glad to see you're sticking with me and enjoying my story.  I should have an update soon since re-vamping is going slow and ff.com isn't cooperating with me.  Thanks again for reading my story.  

** Next chapter is going to have Edward telling his family, all of them!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15 - Facing the Music - Part I

Thanks for the update. Are we going to find out what happened to Tanya. Loved it

Author's Response: Oh yeah, she's coming back in a few chapters in the future. Going to be a very angsty arch in the story, so stay tuned! Still trying to get Edward's stuff out in the open and have him deal with his "feelings" for Bella. So much more inshore for everyone.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 15 - Facing the Music - Part II

I love Edwards family. It was good to see them all rally behind him. Bella was his strength and now he needs to be hers. This chapter had a bit of e everything.... From laughter to sadness to hatred and love. One thing is clear Jasper and Alice need to get their heads out of their ass. Loved it all.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the kind words....I'm glad it had a little bit of everything....I do have to say, in my story, Jasper and Alice are very, very stubborn -  more so than Edward...lol and that is saying a lot!!! Stay tuned!!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 16 - Moving Forward?

A lot going on... Never expected the reasoning why Jasper was holding off on a relationship with Alice. His childhood hit home for me.

Author's Response:

Unfortunately, this hits home for a lot of people.  I'm very against spousal, child or animal abuse, and I won't/don't take it lightly in my story.  I'm glad to see yor're still with me, you are one of many faithful readers, thank you.  There is still so much going on and hopefully I will have an update soon.  I hope I don't scare you off with the topics that have come up or will come up later on.  Thank you again. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 18 - Facing Reality Head On

Poor Edward wonder how much he can handle. I sure hope its not his kid. Loved it. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, Edward has and is goog through a bit. It'll get better soon, in a good or bad way. ;-) I'm very happy that you've stayed with me. I so appreciate it. I'm hopin to have an update in 2 weeks. Hope to see you there! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 58983
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 06 May 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings

Loved it

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings

Gosh you scared me for a moment with bella thinking her water broke. Loved the comment in the end. Love your story

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Bad Company

OMG is Renee for real. She doesn't want anything to do with the baby, she just wants to hurt bella. As a grandma myself I sure hope neither one of these women get to be any where near the baby. They can spew their hatred somewhere else. Thanks for sharing

Author's Response:

thankyou... first one so far to see her motive, thankyou so much for your review

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss

Renee is lucky Charlie only had her arrested. How a mother could be so vilecas to send her daughter such a letter.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Stolen Innocence

So happy it wasn't Jacob that raped her. But hate how she won't tell her parents the truth.