Reviews by Celebrityhound
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
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Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears

Emmett is such a dork, seemed like a short chapter, but keep on going I know you are working on at lease two



Author's Response:

it was a little shorter than usual.  I wanted Mother's Day to being the next chap.  Thanks very much!

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Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments

great



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thanks!

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Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

just curious if this story will go beyond the wedding and how Bella will adjust to being Mr. Movie Star's wife?



Author's Response:

i plan for it to extend a few months beyond August.  Also, a sequel wouldn't be out of the question....it definintely has to be a second story though..because the title would have to change!  Thanks so much!

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Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

ok



Author's Response:

thanks

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Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Iron Man & Safely Home

finally home



Author's Response:

yes, what a relief!  Thanks!

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Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Outtake - Magnum Farce

cute

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Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Joy Rides & Clown Masks

another great one



Author's Response:

thanks very much!

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Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

I love Chasng Cars

 

Hopefully these two are heading for their HEA with minimal angst



Author's Response:

me too.  i love pimping music.  Thanks

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Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Hallelujah & Zombie Dances

Loved the chapter

Loved the song Halleleujah, one of my faves

The Thriller part was cute

and I am glad Bella is finally starting to love herself as much as Edward loves her



Author's Response:

she's getting there.  Thanks so much!

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Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Making Plans & False Allegations

not sure why he pushed her away just now but I am sure you will enlighten us



Author's Response:

yes i will.  he's kind of a mess where she's concerned.  (just like the Edward of the books)  he thinks Bella should be insulated from everything.  i'll update as soon as possible.  Thanks!

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Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

well once again I am telling you how great you are so write those fingers to the bone.



Author's Response:

lol.  thankfully it's just my fingertips so far! Thanks very much!

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Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

I trust you but please hurry back. Can't wait to find out who it is I have a couple of guesses.

BTW why don't these two exteriment a little, hands, mouth even virgins experiment a little



Author's Response:

lol...okay...i am so behind with these review responses....lalalalala....Thanks!

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Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Boot Heels & Body Bags

great chapter except too darn short

I would have flown out the door it it was anyone I loved so I don't blame Bella, dying to know why the Ranger was so obsessed with her



Author's Response:

every time i'm writing a chapter and i'm almost finished but it's less than 5000 words...i think of you lol....You'll like the next V&V..i think it's over 9000.  I posted a sneak peek on the blog and on the facebook.  Thanks!

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Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Reality Shows & Apparitions

you deserve every award you are nominated for!



Author's Response:

Thanks you so much!  I don't expect to win,....but I'll bug everyone to vote anyway. lol.

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Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Strange Days & Sucker Punches

I hope Edward destroys Victor



Author's Response:

we shall see if they ever meet again...  Thanks!

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Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Scenic Views & Meeting Duke

GREAT



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

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Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Ultimatums & Quality Time

great chapter

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Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

such a whore, we want a wedding dammit!!!!

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Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Vcards & Vows

EXCELLENT JOB I had goosebumps and tears, the first time was a mild lemon but of course it was their first no doubt these two will get tarter as they do.

 

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Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 82: Fairytale Cottages & Happy Tears

such a great story, shouldn't be long before there is another addition to the family, very pleased to hear about a sequel



Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you like it!

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Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 83: Good Friends & Fireside Picnics

I WAS HOPING SHANE WAS GAY TO FIX UP WITH CHRIS



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Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Time Warps & Slow Motion

I thought this was a very good chapter and happy to hear there wll be a sequel



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Date: 04 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Blessed Events & One Little Year

enjoyed it very much, the beginning freaked me out could not believe you had killed him glad it was only a dream



Author's Response: sorry about that... just wanted to make sure I had everyone's attention..lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing! the future take is now posted!

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Date: 14 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Kelly Kapowski & The Cougar

great so far

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 135059
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 06 Nov 2010
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Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

damn the hysterectomy means a doctor had to be involved too

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Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

poor Bella

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Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

as parents they are probably terrified to let her out of sight and what about the other men who used her?

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Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

sad, and so many people feel guilty

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Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

scary that things like this actually happen

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Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

liked it, unlike so many others you made a different POV something new and just not a complete rewrite in order to buy time

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Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow

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Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

great

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Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

she needs someone to give her a break, what is wrong with the people of Forks

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Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

finally some help for them

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Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

sounds like she will get the help she needs

 

this is an excellent story

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Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Garrett is definately a good guy

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Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

awesome

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Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

this will be scary

 

this story deserves so many more readers

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Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I thought you did an awesome some and the Edward character you have created was perfect

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Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

She is making a brave new world for herself and I hope she kicks Laurens and Jessicas skaky butts

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Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

they were kids too at the time and obviously have their share of guilt even though they handled it badly

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Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

seems like Bella is now helping everyone else heal

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Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Bella should become a shrink for troubled kids herself just like Garrett and Kate

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Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

well at least they found one of the rapist can you find a few more

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Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

yes I was surprised

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Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

glad she was able to handle it without trauma

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Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

a great story

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Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Epilogue

It was an amazing journey thank you for sharing it with me

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Date: 07 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 50: Epilogue

amazing

Firsts by midnightlove87 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 210]
Summary: Past Featured Story

first

 Bella and Edward have been best friends forever and they've shared a lot of firsts. Now Bella wants to share one last one together. AU/slightly OOC Cannon pairings B/E And rated M for language and lemons!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331144 Read Count: 104695
[Report This] Published: 10 Oct 2010 Updated: 31 May 2012
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Date: 30 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great so far

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Date: 02 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I suspect that Dr Perv would have been James had you not named him after your friend and I also think Edward has buying a house on his mind

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Date: 02 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

this is a good story too bad you had no one to proof it for you

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Date: 03 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

This ciuarette crap is BS, having Bella romanticize it is socially irresponsible of you and then to lose all progress in their communication by Bella not confronting him is bs too

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Date: 07 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

sad ending, would love to proof it for you but good story

Prophecy by VampaliciousCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 125]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Prophecy

Can Bella overcome the destiny that has been laid out for her and find the Promised One in time?

The Prophecy

The one with balance will seek out the Promised one.
She shall find him in a forest of rock and steel.
This warrior is a child of the Goddess, yet will be raised far away.
He will return and aid his people in sweeping the darkness from the land.
He will place the one with balance upon her throne and will stand by her side for many years.

OOC for some characters

Some Human, Many Mythological creatures, not the world you are used to.

Complete 01/07/2011: Prophecy; Part One

Up Now: Part Two; True North

Character List for Part One & Two

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103125 Read Count: 31122
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2011
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Date: 17 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 1: C1 Prologue

wow great start

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella is divorced and heartbroken. Lonely and broken four years later she is in a tragic accident. Can her Greek god heal ALL of her wounds? OOC/Cannon pairings. Rated M for lemons! Lots of lemons...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 111950 Read Count: 47923
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2011
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Date: 23 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great start

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Date: 24 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

communication is really a good thing

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Date: 24 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

if sex was what kept me coming back then I would have stopped early on when you implied there might not be any at all

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Date: 24 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

that sucked, sorry I love the story but that was just mean

Summary:

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 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77198
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
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Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged

where's Bellas post this week doesn't it usually come first



Author's Response:

nope...Edward is still behind Bella.  the next chap for V&V is number 57.  Epov is completed  thru 54 now.  Getting closer.  Thank God!  I hope you liked it...tried to add more stuff in Edward's that wasn't already covered by V&V.

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Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: CPR for The Dead Heart

from EPOV he seems a little more arrogant



Author's Response:

he is arrogant.  He just doesn't act like that around Bella.  Thanks!

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Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Mixed Signals for The Fortunate Son

cute I am wearing Christmas pjs  as I read



Author's Response:

winnie the pooh?  lol  Thanks!

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Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Higher Love For The Marked Man

sex even if self-gratification is not vulgar and not unusual so am I to assume there will be no lemons in this story?



Author's Response:

the lemons are coming.  When they finally do the deed all that pent up sexual energy will probably cause a power outtage.  I know EXACTLY when it will happen...if that helps.  Thanks!

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Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Making Plans For A New Start

was expecting more to justify another story just for EPOV's



Author's Response:

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Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Crash And Burn

GETTING BETTER



Author's Response:

thanks.

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Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: That Which Doesn't Kill Us...

A+



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

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Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: A Boisterous Farewell To SoCal

ANother good job



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

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Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Return To The Scene Of The Crime

like seeing more into his head insteaD of repeats



Author's Response:

i try not to repeat all the dialogue when they are together.  I like Edward's POV a lot better when they are apart.  Thanks.

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Sweet Torture For The Lovesick Fool

Well I am leaving my review, type an extra word or two for me. I think these two are adorable can't wait for their wedding and night.

 



Author's Response:

i can't wait either.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: The Ugly Truths

poor eddie everyone knows he is a virgin



Author's Response:

hopefully the press won't find out...lol

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Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Heart To Heart For The World Traveler

you are awesome and so it your stories, is that motivation enough?



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I needed that!

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Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Symbol Of Eternity For The Anxious Suitor

hurry back



Author's Response:

i'm here!  lol  just posted another V&V for your enjoyment.  back to LRM...still trying to catch them up.  Thanks!

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Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed

great stories are almost caght up to each other



Author's Response:

yes, i can't wait.  Here's the link to the sneak peek again, in case you missed it:  http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

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Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: A Perfect Plan Comes Together

bella get brave when she is drunk



Author's Response:

that she does.  I think she's starting to get more self-confidence when sober too.  Thanks!

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist

you go girl



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing...here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap: 

 http://www.facebook.com/#!/notes/virgins-villains-fanfic/sneak-peek-vv-chap-53/141470895917050    

If you have any probs...let me know.

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Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Prelude To A Proposal

I am enjoying both of them



Author's Response:

Glad to hear that.  thanks!  Here's a sneak peek of the next V&V, enjoy!  http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

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Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Sage Advice For The Overworked

catching up



Author's Response:

i know, i'm thrilled.  There's a sneak peek of the next V&V now posted on the blog.  Thanks!

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Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Night Terrors for the Fatigued

great job



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

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Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Two Steps Forward, Three Steps Back

as ever, another good chapter



Author's Response:

thanks much!

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Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

another great chapter



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!

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Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 44: The Stuff of Nightmares...

poor Edward can't wait for next chapter



Author's Response:

next one is now posted.  Thanks so much!

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Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 45: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

I have always enjoyed someone begging but in this case you deserve a reward



Author's Response:

thanks much! new V&V is posted.

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Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Tying Up Loose Ends

EPOV better than usual



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

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Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 48: A Shiner for the Birthday Boy

a very good chapter even if it was short



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 55: A Trip to Paradise for the Newly Wed

It seems like a very long wait for updates recently but this was a great chapter. I really enjoyed it. Hopefully one or both will be back before Christmas



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Intimate Ties by TellMeNoLies Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 122]
Summary:

Edward is a self-proclaimed Dominant and P.I. with a grudge. Bella and her brother are his target for revenge. Will he adhere to his mission for revenge, or fall in love with the one woman he shouldn't and bring forth her deepest desires?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95232 Read Count: 141812
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2016
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Date: 28 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

wonderful story hope youwrote others

Summary:

It starts with Edward's birthday and the very special present he gets.


Categories: All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27272 Read Count: 5941
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2010 Updated: 27 Jun 2011
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Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Very Happy Birthday-Edward

hawt

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Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Another Birthday-Jasper

quick

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Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: A Merry Christmas

will there be more of a plot?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 

As for a plot, well, not as such. Each set of drabbles is a view into their lives together. While there is some continuity and flow, especially in the later chapters, they can be read seperately.

 

 

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389611
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
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Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...

hurry back can't wait



Author's Response:

 Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Laterzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

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Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Bestfriends... Girlie Cars... and Roadside Service...

Mojo was cute but started to become a little much at times. All in all a great chapter

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Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

has been a while and you have been missed

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Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

this is a hell of a great start, very hot, thighs squeezed together. Usually don't don't read uncompleted stories so I am hoping you post regularly.

 

Cheryle



Author's Response:

Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Laterzzz:)


Krazi

xoxo

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Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

a little hard to follow, 1st their having a blind date, then he's fixing to punish her for being late a "second" time, then she's back engaged and fantasizing about Edward, hope it all starts meshing together



Author's Response:

The blind date was real and will happen soon, but aside from that, they are both having vivid dreams about the other one. So far Bella is still a virgin.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Laterzzz:)


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: What´s Done in Forks... Stays in Forks...

good job was hating him for a bit then he redeemed himself with Jacob



Author's Response:

Haha!  Don´t hate him... he has a plan!  He has to set boundaries or he won´t be a good Dom.  This weekend is still informal, almost as if you´re test driving a car.  You want to know what you´re getting right?  She wants a firm hand, trust me.  She craves both sides of him! Thanks for reading and reviewing

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...

Excellent Chapter, I would rather have more of this than an outtake or Mojo's point of view, you sound busy but I would sure like another chapter for a Christmas present.

 

Happy Holidays

Cheryle



Author's Response:

Ooookay, how about a New Year's present?  Lol!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

 Happy New Year!

Laterzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...

I have been loving the story but this just seems to be filler because I can't imagine that you intend on bring Jacob back into Bella's life and being Charlie is unaware of her BDSM tendancies I can't see all of this being relevant to the story. Get back on track and continue you great story.



Author's Response:

Sorry to inform you, but Jacob Black is now unfortunately tied to the family with this baby.  And now that Bella´s in Seattle, she wants to reconnect with Charlie.  Throw that cutie Seth in the mix, she won´t be able to resist. Yes she is getting into BDSM, but she still will continue normal familiar relationships, one has nothing to do with the other. Also, I didn´t want to let the New Year ring in without giving you one last chapter of 2010!  Lol!  I haven´t had alot of time to write, and I wanted to be able to do the phone conversation justice.  Plus I just think it will be better from Sir´s POV.  I promise you that it´s the next chapter and from here on out it´ll be nothing but floggin and snoggin!  Lol!  Also, I´m going to do my best to get it up in the next couple of days! 

Thanks so much for sticking with me, reading and taking the time to review!  Please make sure to check out the blog!  www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com


Happy New Year!

Laterzzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

Hell must have froze over because I did not think you would be back but Hallelujah so glad you did

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...

Damn can't wait for these two to get into the playroom, they are made for each other and are likely to combust.



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee!  So here´s to TGIF!  Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers!  Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!


Laterzzzz:)

Krazi and Mojo

xoxo

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...

I can't wait fir the next I am excited as Bella



Author's Response:

Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com


Laterzzz:)


~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo