Reviews by Moltz
Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324474
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - My Confessions

Did Damien's comment about Edward infer he thought differently about Bella's status as Edward's little sister?
Eric was a star struck hoot.
Carlisle seems to be coming around.
How will Charlie's visit go?

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving

I think it is Lauren that is assisting Maggie! Isn't there a time stamp on the use of an access code? Maybe a large wolf hound could attack her on one of her magical appearances? She needs to be set up in an embarrassing situation that causes her to go underground for a while.
Glad Charlie worked out as the catalyst to Edward revealing his past with his parents.

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva

Edward is having difficulty juggling all the special interest projects and his new home life. He often forgets that it is not just him any longer.

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Our Cracks

Who's going to step in and salvage this messed up situation? Maggie seems to have accomplished her objective.

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Our Downfall

I wonder if someone overheard their conversation?
Edward has a lot of groveling to do. He begged her to try and promised he would look after her. Broken promises are difficult to repair.

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Our End?

Will Edward fond a way to follow her?
Maggie and everyone else needs to be blocked from entering their home.

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness

You tell him, Carlisle!
Go Renee! Hand Edward his ass and let Bella rip off his balls!

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas

Not a bad job if groveling, Cullen.
I hope Maggie's movie costs her career! Edward better seal that deal, closed tight.
Again with the cookies......just makin me crave sweets!

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning

The lines of communication are opening up once again. No prom. Awe. Better yet, Carlisle is finally marrying his best friend.
Maggie's demise can't come soon enough!

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer

Can't wait to read the fall out of Maggie and Lauren's deception.

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication

I'm with Bella, not quite the way I pictured it going down. At least they were physically arrested with charges that will stick.
Poor Bella was a casualty of the attack. Will this out their marriage sooner than they had hoped?

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - His Parents

I pleased with Carlisle's reaction and responses to everything that has been swirling around Edward and Bella.
I like how quick thinking your Charlotte is in sticky situations.
I feel for Edward's mother as well. But she chose to defend a ruthless action(and man) against her own son.

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown

I wondered when Edward would need to express his anxiety over the upcoming reveal if his marriage to a much younger woman.

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day

Jennifer Garner welcomed the shy Mrs. Cullen. That was a nice touch.

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout

I'm surprised that the principals son was the accuser/attacker. Even in the elite world of Hollywood there are bottom feeders.
Charlotte and the lunch gang are pretty cool. Maybe Edward could host a pool party for them as thanks for supporting his special girl.

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation

The perfect little get away.
Will the paps that cornered Bella in the convenience store be slapped with harassment charges?

Amazed by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 570]
Summary:

amazed

 

They come from two different backgrounds and lifestyles, one simple, one fabulous, yet both know what it means to suffer.

Can they face the future together and learn to let go of their demons?

Can they find what it is to be Amazed?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 122 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29805 Read Count: 206087
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2012
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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That in interesting beginning.
The things we do (or the who) under the influence of alcohol should teach use to moderation. But humans are slow learners, or is it the learning curve is too high to reach? Lol

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

What makes this privileged asshat so special that his escapades are documented like an ABC back to school made for TV movie?

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ok, he's some sort of public figure that is in self destructive mode. What's on the horizon?

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Go Alice, work your magic.
Edward sure is full of excuses.

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Sounds like the self destruct button has been engaged.

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

One track mind.

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

His family sure has taken on a pile of garbage. What will it take for him to want something more out if life?

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Hope he gets stone-walled again!

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

If I were her, I'd wield a knife around so fast he would think twice about sneeking up on anyone ever again.
I don't recognize the song. Is it an old folk song?

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

He took her words as an invitation?
Hm, wonder if that was her true intent?

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Immature brat, that's what he is.
Will Bella confide in Alice Edward's un-gentleman behavior? Hope Alice reads him the riot act when she arrives.

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

No Edward, your just an insensitive asshat!

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I don't think she is 'just the cook'.
What is it that finally breaks him. When will he seek to learn what makes 'the cook' so desirable?

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Everyone must sense the change in Bella's behavior. Do they think Edward messed up again?

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

That's what I want to know!

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

What happened between Alice and Bella? Is Alice over reacting?

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Edward is so clueless when it comes to others and the lives they lead.
That was such an arrogant statement.
You rip him a new one, Bella.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wow, didn't see that one coming.
How old was she when she got pregnant?
The circumstances surrounding it sound ominous.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow, that's a bit much to digest!
Has Bella been on her own since 14, a child, raising one by herself?
Can't believe her mother would not support her under the circumstances.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Snap out of it Edward. Stop Bella from running away. Alice needs to find out what Bella did to protect her. They need each other to begin the healing process.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

The perfect way to prove he loved more than her physically. They connected so much more than their bodies.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

Amazing bond between Ali-Mae and Edward.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

A great drabble love story about over coming obstacles that you thought were impassable.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

Painful first memories of how attracted they were to each other.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Alice need to sort this out!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

They all seem to need each other to get thru the hurt!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Interesting....Jenks? Why was he there?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Wow! Not sure where this could be headed.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I'd be just as stunned as Alice!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

How Bad are Bella's injuries.
Can't remember how old Ali-Mae is. 7?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Good thing Esme over rode Edward's reluctance to be with the family.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Reality is hitting Edward right where it needs to.....respectability and concern for others. this may be the turning point his family is praying for.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Doesn't sound like she is going to be up and around any time soon if at all.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Now who is the emotionally broken one!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

No Edward, you don't.
Do something with the chance you've been given to show Bella you can return back into the human being that you were intended to be.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Alice has some actions of her own that need to be taken to get her back to where she used to be just like Edward.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Together, they need each other in order to find the strength to press forward day after day. This is going to be a long haul.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Bella obviously talked a lot about her best friend to her daughter.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Did James have any contact with Ali-Mae?
Her apprehension with Jasper speaks volumes about her cautious nature just like her mom.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Even family support cannot prepare you for that image!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

A bit teary eyed.....'when' she pulls through.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Bonding between Ali-Mae and Alice will be interesting to watch.
Hope Jasper is successful in his efforts.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Thank goodness that Maggie has been an ever present force in Bella and Ali-Mae's lives.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Perceptive Alice. He can't pay penance by sitting in her room.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

What was Edward grasping on to? How did his presence affect Bella's recovery?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

The attachment is changing for Edward. His comments are sounding as if there will be a future for Ali-Mae in his life beyond Alice caring for her in the interim.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Where did they eat?
No wonder Bella was malnurished, she had no where to prepare food or store it for that matter. How did Ali-Mae get fed?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Thank goodness!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Go Team Cullen!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Just play your music to sooth her weary heart and soul.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

such a long process to endure and the hard work of recovery hasn't even begun.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

He is in love with the idea of her; the difference in her person from what he had become accustomed to.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Who? Was Maggie staying with the Cullens? Or was is Ali-Mae?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Sasha was about to give birth to puppies, right? Awe, a bonding moment for Edward and Ali-Mae.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Put on your big girl panties Edward and talk to her about the physical side of where puppies come from. haha!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

She didn't even care about his explanation of the 'other hole'. haha.
What names did she come up with?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

About time Charlie showed up! Perceptive as always.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Bella was under age. She must have been under the jurisdiction of one of her parents? If Renee gave up parental rights then Charlie had the next of kin thing going in his favor. By the courts directives he should have been her legal parent/guardian. How did that not happen?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

What a circus to wake up to!
Will Bella experience an loss of memories?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

where we go!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

What was Bella about to say?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Bella must have talked about Edward to Ali-Mae before the accident.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Great, add the stress of the paps to the little girls already upside down life.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Jasper just threw Edward to the wolves!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Team Cullen to the rescue again. Why do I get the feeling Renee has something to do with the paps being at the hospital?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Oh yeah, Renee has her hands all over this brew-haha!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Jasper will work his magic. Can't wait to read Maggie's take on this mess!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Just answer the question, Edward!
Bella deserves to know how you have grown in affection towards her.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Awe! Sweet admissions of infatuation and growing admiration for each other.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

The hair will grow back as a sign of her progress!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Slowly the bonds are mending between friends!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Who asked Emmett to be the spokes person on behalf of the 'Edward can't change' group!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

He's going to bolt all because they have no faith in him. Hope Charlie and Ali step up and read them all the riot act because Bella is going to have a set back in her progress!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

How can they not see it?
Will they be able to stop him before irreparable damage may be done?
Alice better fix this!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

They will not be able to fix this. Bella needs to stand up for herself and tell Alice she did it again. Saw something that wasn't there and made a snap decision hurting others.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

You tell them Bella. How will they tell Ali-Mae that they kicked out her best friend?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Carlisle has every right to upset with his wife. He knew his son was making the adjustments necessary to correct his mess up existence. They had no right to get involved at this stage of Bella's and Edwards friendship.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Can't blame you Edward, but you need to reach out to Carlisle. He will protect your where abouts.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Two months is a long time to hide. Decision time.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Good contact! How bad is the set back?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

What happen to Team Cullen to the rescue. Once again they did more damage to Bella and Ali-Mae and the pain they thought they were trying to prevent. Such a common mistake when loved ones over step their boundaries.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

She did the only thing she could think o to get him to come back to her! It worked.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

A much better care giver! Now Bella has to keep up her end of the plan to get Edward to stay.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Their status will reveal itself shortly.