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Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
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Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661146
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
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Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 64: Edward

My favorite line in this chapter:
Nothing about our relationship is disposable to me!

These days everyone thinks its easy to throw away a relationship and start over. Ha, what they forget is we take our SH*T with us where ever we go! Whining they say.....'it's hard work', really, you just figured that out? I'd like to cuff 'em up side the head for stringing the other party of the relationship along pretending to be in it for the long haul.
I'm off my soapbox for a while. I may jump back up there at any given time if the mood hits. hahaha.
Hope Edward got his point across!

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 65: Bella

I know Bella's not stupid and that she realized she reacted out of her fears and insecurities but she should have talked to her girls first and then explained to Edward what she was feeling. Avoiding this hiccup in their forward progress.
Edward was very determined to set her straight. Glad he expressed his insecurities about not being around as she goes to the bars and out with the girls. He has no control over those situations any more than Bella does while Sarge is in a foreign country.

Happy to read her teasing comments at the end.

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 66: Edward

Another reassurance from Edward that his need for her is greater than even he knows how to deal with it.
The heat is building once again!
I wouldn't consider that their first fight. Just a step in building the foundation for a strong and lasting love affair of the heart!

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 67: Bella

I'm just a disappointed in Renee as Bella is. To be last on a mother's list of priorities is a feeling I can relate to. It makes you want to do and be better with your own children!
A second job for Bella. Can't wait to hear about some of the stories she will be editing! Will she need to research some of the subject matter to become a better editor?
That master bedroom better have the furniture nailed to the floor. Haha.
It's going to be ridden hard and put away wet! lol

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 68: Edward

The clean bill of health wasn't even something I considered as a potential problem. Good thing the army is thorough!
The sale of middle names was a very funny addition to this chapter. Will Rose and Alice have to protect their girl, Bella, from their cranky hubands?
Edward's hands anywhere will do, GAH!
Hm, does Bella have ink hidden on her body?

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 69: Bella

Edward is gonna want to see that tattoo soon! Hm, I'm sure the Sarge has at least one tattoo, but piercings.....if his chest was bare of decoration.....hm, delightful thought.
Is Bella considering getting her bellybutton or nipples pierced? He would die. haha

Enough about the lazy, self absorbed Renee. She has been given enough time to fix her relationship with her daughter. Not happening!

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 70: Edward

Bella's color scheme was a nice touch.
Edward and his peanut butter cookies. You are tempting me with their crumbly goodness! I'm abstaining from sweets, my weakness.

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 71: Bella

June 20th, Edwards birthday, right.
Jasper is the only one who could pull this off without Edward finding out!
Emmett needs his soft boob pillows to fall asleep. haha.

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 72: Edward

Edward better have the unlimited everything plan or his bill will be outrageous! haha
Texting will now be the Sarge's mode of being teased by his sexy girl.

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 73: Bella

Great looking Swan tattoo!
Edward is speechless!
I'm sure he is trying not to drown in his own drool! haha
She got him good.
Is Bella ready for payback?

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 74: Edward

They are so combustible together, wow!
I think Jasper and Emmett knew what Sarge was up to! hehe

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 75: Bella

Such longing in her words!

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 76: Edward

Bella in a blue bow!
Will the other two couples leave them alone long enough for him to unwrap his gift.

Put Bella in a box in his doorstep! haha

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 77: Bella

The guys must be razing Edward all the time now that he is in constant text/sexting mode! haha
I could never shy dive.....jumping off a 50 foot cliff into cold Lake Michigan not that was a rush! Dry suit was very necessary!

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 78: Edward

Alice is multitasking, HAHAHA! Jasper is as needy as Edward is when it comes to his wife!
When is the next time jump?

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 79: Bella

That dream was so hot. Edward will take that and multiply it ten fold to fulfill his wildest fantasy.

Scuba diving is awesome. I was certified in the area of murky water dives, deep water dives (100ft) and wreck diving. My now husband was an instructor at the time of my training! Perks of knowing the teacher, hahaha!

Does Charlie know he is being used as an excuse to be out of communication range for awhile?

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 80: Edward

I think Rose's tough girl attitude is wearing off on our sweet Isabella. haha
They always seem to know just what the other is needing at any given moment. True hearts communicating through a difficult separation. Building a strong foundation!

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 81: Bella

They are just pushing the teasing limits. Their time together can't happen soon enough.

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 82: Edward

Lighthearted is very good!
That tattoo is becoming a permanent thought in Bella's head.....Will Edward find an image to capture everything he feels and enjoys about this amazing girl?

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 83: Bella

So Bella's not the delivery, lol.
Can't wait to read Sarge's reaction.
On with then......

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 84: Edward

Man, Edward is stubborn when it comes to going out and relaxing with his boys. Thanks to Alice and her pushy ways, he conceded.

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 85: Bella

Fear of the unknown has a way of wreaking havoc on our subconscious. No matter how self assured we are there are to many variables that could change to outcome. Glad Rose and Alice are with her.

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 86: Edward

Good thing Emmett didn't get his way or the evening would be ending very differently. haha
Again, Edward just knows what she needs from him.

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 87: Bella

So well planned out!
Love it!

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 88: Edward

The electricity was flowing full force between them. Beautiful!
Perfect choice in first dance music.
Glad the girls and boys were enjoying the fruits of this joint effort!

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 89: Bella

How long will the house be occupied by just E&B?
Let's Get It On! Is playing on a loop in my head. hehehe

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 90: Edward

Oh my..................
He is all that he has made himself out to be. A very attentive lover!

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 91: Bella

Oh yeah, that was worth the wait!
They were born to take care of every aspect of each others lives. This physical side is just the manifestation of the love built up through their time communicating and caring about the mind, soul and last but not least the body.
So worth the wait!

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Date: 17 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 93: Bella

My son-in-law uses the piano as a form of stress release. My daughter loves it! So does my granddaughter!
I like the way Bella understands his compositions, as if he is communicating with her.

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Date: 17 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 94: Edward

I'm sure "HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME" is playing on a loop in Edward's very satisfied head right now. Haha.
The drinking game didn't reveal anything new about E or B.

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Date: 17 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 95: Bella

I can't even fathom the anxieties experienced by spouses or the families of our soldiers as they risks their lives to defend us and the countries where we send them.
The girls will now be able to release their loss if closeness with Bella as she will need consoling as well.

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Date: 17 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 96: Edward

Oh how sweet, a group picnic at the beach on base. How many whistles will the three ladies attract?
No panties! Sexy Large has spoken!

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Date: 17 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 97: Bella

I'll bet the fear of God shook that poor unsuspecting young soldier. Was he on of the recruits that Sarge was training?
Emmett is going to have fun making these three move double quick!

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Date: 17 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 98: Edward

I would have expected nothing less than the commanding role Sarge laid out for the new recruits. Love Bella's ability to make him reign in his aggressive approach. She schooled him. She's such a good teacher. LOL.

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Date: 17 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 99: Edward

Not only sweet but very smooth!

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Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 100: Edward

Let's Get It On!
Will they make it out of the parking lot? Hehe.

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Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 101: Bella

Just as I suspected! They couldn't hold out!
Public enough for now. They are pushing each other in the direction of sexual explorations! How kinky do they want to become? Sarge loves to give orders......no panties all weekend!

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Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 102: Edward

What s perfect no pressure kind of day.
I appreciate that their desire to continue to learn and ask questions of each other has not grown stale or tiresome.

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Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 103: Bella

I was about to ask if the Charlie/Edward conversation would be an outtake? Along with the first week of training for Shown and his recruit buddies dealing with Emmett, Jasper and Large. They would be hilarious to read. Fifty percent isn't so bad. I'll take the father/boyfriend first.

Charlie talking to the gang brought home the limited amount if time remaining for the girls in Florida.

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Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 104: Edward

What else could Charlie say or ask from do far away? I'm just pleaded that he's willing to accept Edward for Bella's happiness is his happiness.
Washington, look out Sergeant Masen is headed you way!

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Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 105: Bella

I'm hoping Rose or Alice have already texted their husbands.
How did Tanya get Edward's relocation information? She's no longer his point of contact for emergencies!

How long before Tanya gets the picture she is no longer a part of Edward's life?

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Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 106: Edward

Garrett needs to reel his daughter in; reprimand her illegal behavior and then forward Edward's legal dealings immediately to Marcus!
I'm not upset with Bella's for fearing the worst. This is a very new side to their relationship and trust is still being established.

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Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 107: Bella

Bella will always attempt to put Edward's well-being ahead of her feelings or good judgements. That's just her nature.

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Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 108: Edward

Innuendo is very fun to read!
Emmett's going to loose another bet. Haha

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Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 109: Bella

Their teasing is encouraging the others to join in a couples form of fun. Haha

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Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 110: Edward

Sarge has his hands full!
Bella is just full of him! Yesssssss, please!

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Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 111: Bella

Gah, that scene was unbelievable! Loving the explorations these two are so willingly engaging in. Will it become more kinky? Sarge's commanding voice could make any girl cum!
His happy dance epitimizes both of their feelings of contentment.

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Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 112: Edward

I'm just glad this story is complete so I can read at my leisure. Huge grin!
Formal pictures, hm. What else are the ladies up to?
Emmett will get over it. Haha.

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Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 113: Bella

Bella's trying so hard to take care of the boys! I like the girls preparing her meals for them to eat in the future.
Pictures as a reminder of their first face to face meeting and weeks together. Love it!

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Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 114: Edward

There's always something interesting to see when at the beach, Haha!
Each of the boys are equally sad that the time with their ladies is almost over.

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Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 115: Bella

The memories created over the past two weeks are only going to make it more difficult for our favorite couple to separate when the time comes.

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Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 116: Edward

Yea, you're right. Sarge has a way of getting under the skin and melting anyone's resolve.
Bella's trying to be strong like Alice and Rose said they try to be for their man's sake. But this is Edward's first real heartache to deal with and I'm wondering if his new recruits will take the brunt of his frustration? Will Edward's superiors decide to send them on leave?

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Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 117: Bella

Ah, Lone Star, great sounding band!
More sniffels! No laundry getting done. Sigh, oh well.
Let's read on!

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Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 118: Edward

You captured guys bonding over beer chili dogs and gaming rather well!
Nice to see Jasper and Emmett pulling Edward through the rough patches by expressing past experiences.
The email routine re-starting was a nice touch.

Chuckling, boys and their fantasy dream girls!

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Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 119: Bella

I was a given that Charlie would want his girls present when he proposed to Sue!
Bella should have used more than a knee on Jake. Thanks for letting Charlie step up and represent himself as a protective father and as Edward's proxy, to protect his girl!
Oh my, we're back to suggestive emails.........wonder his Edward will respond to potential backdoor Lovin? Nude Skype........she is such a tease!

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Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 120: Edward

Were back to the awesome emails!
The flow of each letter is as if they are standing in front of the recipient. Such an easy nature exists between E&B.

Regarding your prior authors note.....I agree. Even if the relationship is strained. Make the effort to spend time with parents. You just never know. Then there will be no regrets.

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Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 121: Bella

I'm rather wishing Jake would have pushed further. Bella needed to make contact with her knees to his balls and her fist to his face!
The pick up lines you can up with were funny and cheesy. Lol.

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Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 122: Edward

Good thing the boys are still outside helping the neighbor!

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Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 123: Bella

These two are so good together. More, yes please!

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Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 124: Edward

Edward was having visual withdrawal symptoms.
Hope the sexy Skype chat helped.
Jello and dough......great visuals. Haha.

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Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 125: Bella

I laughed when I saw the colors you chose for the piano room. They are very similar to the colors my youngest daughter chose to paint her room approximately 5 years ago. She has long since moved out after university and now has her own home and next month she's getting married. Time flies by as your household is in constant flux.
Edward must be feeling a new sense if family as Bella prepares her place for him to move in.

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Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 126: Edward

Music teacher, I like it!
More easy talks and teasing, just so comfortable!

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Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 127: Bella

Any chance that the boys are heading towards Washington?

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Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 128: Edward

They are almost ready to play house together!
Irina's actions were those of close family. I hope Edward finds a way to stay in contact with her and Garrett. Maybe even introduce Isabella?

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Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 129: Bella

Love Miss Mary. Cheeky little old lady! Haha.
The gift box from Edward was so thoughtful.
The panties were funny!

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Date: 20 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 130: Edward

Did Edward just give a clue about Bella's b-day present? Will he call Charlie to help arrange something special?
When the boys leave the army, will they stay connected through continued training of new recruits at a base in Washington?
The three little boys in her class sound adorable.
Yeah, Angela and Jessica have joined the fold.

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Date: 20 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 131: Bella

Rose and Alice are so right in the fact that Edward will absolutely love the soft-porn look of Bella on his Baby Grand!

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Date: 20 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 132: Edward

Will Emmett and Jasper be joining Edward for the weekend in Seattle?
Alice will pull this off flawlessly.
I like Sarge's sentiment about staying away from the house until he's out of the Army!

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Date: 20 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 132: Chapter 133: Bella

The time apart is more than taking its toll on Bella. Her jovial spirit is waning.
Just a couple more days until she can freak out with joy.

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Date: 20 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 134: Edward

Mrs. Cope was too sweet for words. Enjoyed reading how she put both Mike and Lauren in their proper place!
Sarge and the kids was an adorable scene. So glad he answered Carrie's two questions!
Wonderful surprise for Bella. Will Edward see Alice and Rose so he can relay hugs and kisses from their men?

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Date: 20 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 135: Bella

Alice is a great collaborator!
So much for Edward's romantic plans!

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Date: 20 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 136: Edward

He really did owe her a good birthday surprise. I think he delivered the goods! LOL

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Date: 20 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 137: Bella

One minute.......
Then the good stuff starts!
Again!

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Date: 20 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 138: Edward

Tour guide Bella.....she was more interested in her personal view than showing him the sights and sounds of his adopted home. Hehe

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Date: 20 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 139: Bella

How sweet, Edward blushed as he was kissed in gratitude for his boy scout effort in retrieving an old woman's hat. Too cute!
No panties.....that was Sarge's order afterall!
Smirking at Bella's follow through.

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Date: 20 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 140: Edward

She really does own him!
Wow, that was some intense possiveness displayed for all of downtown Seattle to see!

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Date: 22 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 141: Bella

Chocolate goodness!
Parting is such sweet sorrow!

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Date: 22 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 142: Edward

That wasn't so bad.....at least the wait will be at its shortest point and the the lifetime of fun begins. Bad aim, still chuckling. Good thing my husband doesn't mind cleaning toilets. A blessing!

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Date: 22 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 143: Bella

Argh, flight delays. They suck the life out of ya. It's the worst if you're on the red eye flight and still have to go into work the next day. Definitely an excuse to plead illness or working from home.
First official birthday wish. Too cute!

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Date: 22 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 144: Edward

Emmett, typical male roommate. Can't wait to hear Rose's reaction to his shannanigins.
Time is nearing their trip home!

Summary:

You spend your whole life watching someone; waiting for them to finally see you. But when they do, what would you say? What would you do? Would you dare to risk it all for what you've always wanted?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3589 Read Count: 374
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Only One I Ever Saw

I had the perspective backwards when I started reading this. Had to go back and get a feel for it from the opposite side of the relationship.
Very endearing story if neighborhood sweet hearts.

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324474
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?

Their day to day routines are settling in but the have yet to discuss their pasts and their families in detail.
The 'brother' rumors are a perfect cover at school for now.

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Date: 10 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - His Life

Well, that makes two potential threats to E&B's blossoming love. Which one will attempt to expose the marriage?

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter

Found this through a very unique web search. Sound interesting.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Our First Outing

Renee just dumped her 18 yo daughter in the lobby of a hotel and left to gamble. Gee that sounds like a great mom!
Edward to the rescue. I wonder if he was thinking about Bella during his meeting that first day they met?

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Our First Date

Does this Edward ever do things with out proper planning? This seems rather spontaneous for him. Bella will be in for a surprise well be for her night is ended.
What will Renee do when she finds out?
Who is this Edward Cullen that he is so happy that this little 18 yo doesn't know of him? Will he need a post nuptial agreement drawn up?

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Our Mess

Renee is going to be overjoyed! Then probably upset at the stupid action taken by her daughter. I hope Edward defends his new bride.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Our Predicament

Renee is always a whirlwind of surprises.
How will Edward's family respond to a new wife of eighteen still in her senior year of high school?

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Our Trip Home

Hm, I think Edward is beginning to like the idea of having a wife who isn't interested in his money!

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Our Home

Amazing home.
Bella plays piano. Did Edward hear her playing?
I think Esme already like Bella. She sees a feisty young woman that will keep Edward on his toes and won't clear out his bank account.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Our First Night

They have consummated their marriage!
Edward is going to be even more possessive of his new wife! No one has ever been where he has. He has staked his claim.
It was time for them to make this move to solidify their bonds of attraction and affection.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Our Name

Will Bella ever cook with Tanya?
I hope Carlisle will be pleasant when he meets Bella.
Alice is the perfect friend to Edward.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Our Family

I figured Carlisle would be the dissenting factor.
I think Esme needs to slap some sense into Carlisle and threaten his manhood for using such slander towards Bella.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Our Desire

At least Bella knows where she stands with the rest of the people involved with Edward's life.
I guess a young firm body leaving a pool with water dripping down sent Edward right off of the treadmill. HAHAHAHA

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Date: 10 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument

When does Bella go back to school to finish her Senior year and graduate?
Pregnancy might be a bit premature for this unconventional relationship.

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Date: 10 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Our Full Garage

Very sleek car!
Awe, Edward is go gentle with a very cranky menstrual Bella.
I can't believe Bella would not know her favorite movie had her husband acting in it.

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Date: 10 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - My First Day

Can't wait for Edward to see his wife in her school girl uniform! That should be a sexy romp!
Carlisle is being a royal bastard. Why would Esme put her in his class?
Maybe Bella can compose the music for one of Edward's movies. That would be cool. Keeping it all in the family.

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Date: 10 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion

It was inevitable that once Edward saw his young hot wife in her school uniform her would act out every man's fantasy! He just added his own flare of dominance. Bella's not complaining, Haha. Neither would I!

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Date: 10 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - My Confidant

Edward is loving the fact he has a wife at home that he can play with and fulfil all his fantasies!

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Date: 10 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes

Emmett, the big lug, could have sent Bella into a panic attack.
Will he keep his mouth shut?
Now I feel like baking cookies. Lol