Bella is trying to move beyond her bubble-gum image. I wonder how that will be received?

Oh, imagine that......after the three previous reviews of the chapter I've thought of another question.
Will we be invited to the premiere of Bella's movie? Will we fins out who you cast as our beloved couple and the surrounding family members?
I just want more! Greedy fan that I am! lol.

love everything you write. So the must mean I have an unhealthy fixation with you and your intriguing mind. Is there a cure? Haha

Kristi

Author's Response:

Kristi,

I can just imagine the awkward silence as Edward and Bella spot each other. Edward with Emmett and Jasper alongside for emotional support; Alice, Rose and Sky keeping Bella safe from her parents.
Who will accosted Bella first? Her mother or Edward? Thinking she is playing some sick twisted game. I can see a confrontation that includes Renee stating Bella should gave gotten all her reckless activities out of the way while in Florida for her summer break. Confusing Edward as to her presence in the DR.

Surprise me!

Author's Response:

Hi, I think you will like the direction the next chapter will be taking our favorite fictional couple in and the realizations they are both coming to.

Chapter 13 will post on Friday and below is a teaser for ya.

Thanks for reading,

EA

"Kelsey, you know I really wish I could believe you," I told her, not making even the slightest move towards taking her hand.

"I promise you can, Bella."

Yeah right. Maybe when pigs fly.

"Really? Because I'm pretty sure I see things a little differently than you do. See, I know that the truth is you had no idea Edward wasn't already aware of my last name and who my father is. But I don't believe for one second that you have one ounce of sincerity in you when you tell me I should keep fighting for Edward."

"Come on, Bella. You're my friend. Of course I want that for you."

"No, Kelsey, we are not friends. Maybe we could have been. But that ship has sailed. See…" I took a couple of steps closer to her. "Friends don't relish in the fact that their friend's boyfriend may be on the verge of breaking up with her. A friend wouldn't be sitting there waiting for the perfect opportunity to swoop in and steal said boyfriend away. I see right through you, Kelsey. I see that you want Edward for yourself. And you know what?"

"What?" she sneered with a huff.

"I don't blame you. He's an amazing man, and yes I **ed up. I know I've hurt Edward deeply by not being completely honest with him. But I want you to remember this. You may have won the first round, but I intend to win war."

Awe, our favorite clumsy-ella sets herself up for another embarrassing moment with pre-med-edward.

Author's Response:

It was a totally embarrassing moment.  Although, I'm not so sure Edward minded. LOL

Each time I tried the link to the blogspot it came back, 'not found'. Is this not an accurate link?
Like your storyline so far. Need to continue reading.

Author's Response:

HI, sorry the link was not accurate. My fault.  Glad you like the story so far. Here is the correct link to my blog.

WooHoo, roomies, tent buddies......there is no way they will be able to limit their physical interactions to kissing and holding each other at night. Will this Bella mumble in get sleep?
Both attending the same university in the fall. Wonder if Bella will find herself residing at his apartment once the semester is underway?
It would seem that Edward's patents have been discussing his infatuation with Bella.

Author's Response:

Woo Hoo is right. Who wouldn't want to be a tent buddy with Edward. LOL  As far as their physical iunteratcions, only time will tell what happens. Yes Carlisle and Esme has been very observant when it comes to their son's growing feelings for Bella.

Feelings of rejection would be over-whelming me if I were in Bella shoes.
There could be so many reasons why Edward's phone has been disconnected. His Grandfather could have pulled some strings to get it cut off. Edward could have chosen to run away from some strange reason not wanting to be found.
Their plane might not have made it back, crash landed somewhere.
Not really sure what direction you are taking this. I'll just have.to wait.

When you have scheming friends like Alice and Skylar, you're bound to be exhausted but grateful for their distractions.
I have a feeling Edward is unprepared for this meeting and will say something that will give Bella the impression he is on to the next thing in his life. Hope he can at least get out the words lost phone and your number. Weather he is convincing is the next concern.
Luke is going to find a way into Bella's life. Will Edward be able to handle the competition?

So disgusted by Renee's parenting skills!
Glad Edward overheard a portion of their argument.
Luke may know his sister and what motivates her but he is also blinded by his desires to be with Bella.
Hope Esme and Carlisle have given Bella an ounce of hope to cling to as she fights for Edward.

I guess we'll see his decision in action at the party hosted by Rose's parents.
What will Alice dress Bella in to get every guys attention?

Author's Response:

Hi! Edward's decision will be coming very soon!!! 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, chapter 16 will be up by the end of the week. Below is a teaser to get ya until then.

See you then,

EA

I watched as my best friend's head snapped around so fast I was sure she was going to have a massive kink in her neck from it. Her face then lit up like the brightest star in the sky, causing me to follow her gaze and see what had her so damn excited.

I shouldn't have been surprised to find her eyes glued to Jasper. From what she'd told me, they had spent a lot of time together and she was falling fast and hard for him. I had never seen Al so completely enraptured by a guy before. However, Jasper wasn't alone. He had Edward, Emmett and Rose with him.

"Gah," Al groaned before exhaling in a long sigh. "I swear if there was such a thing as swagger patrol, all three of them would be put behind bars."

Well, spitting out the 'I love you' sure captured her attention.
Now he needs to barrel through this mixed up thoughts that delayed this realization.
Edward is fortunate to have a cousin like Rose. She knows him well enough to call him on his indecisive reasoning; pointing out his true feelings yet allowing him to moments of inward reflection.
I'm glad the night didn't pass into day before he got the chance to express his love and all that has been plaguing his mind the past ten days.

Author's Response:

I think you will like the next chapter. Thanks so much for reading the next chapter is finished and with my beta. Up next we'll get to see how Bella responds to him as he fills her in on everything. I'll post it as soon as I get it back form her and have it all prettied up. Until then I've added a teaser to get ya by.

See ya soon,

~EA

Chapter 18 teaser:

Her brows furrowed slightly as she stared at me, probably trying to gauge whether or not I was being honest with her. There was more that had to be said before she would believe me.

"I mean it, Bella. I love you. And I'm not telling you this because you said it earlier, or because I'm worried you'll walk away if I don't. I'm telling you so that no matter what happens between us from this moment on, you will know how I truly feel about you."

EA,
I hope you and your daughter are safe and well. Considering the circumstances.
As much as we love your story, your well-being (and your daughters) is more important!

We will gladly suffer through longer periods of time between updates.

Take care!

Well, Renee didn't show her hand per se; but left us all believing she is directly involved with the negative image photos. Let's think about the actual value these pictures could have for Edward and Bella. Maybe the photos could be released to the press under the guise of 'young love knows no political boundaries', 'but shares a common desire to serve people through the world of medicine'. That would beat Renee to the punch or anyone else for that matter trying to discredit the two young lovers.
I have a feeling Edward was right on the money when he mentioned Charles Swan not being truthfully informed of his wife's threats against his only daughter. What will the fallout be for Renee when all this is revealed?
Where is James?

Author's Response:

Hi! First I want to thank you for the awesome review and then second I want to thank you for the amazing idea.  Your idea about releasing the pics to the media in a positive way is awesome and I've decided to run with it.  But I also want to give you the credit you deserve for the idea. So I can do it a couple of ways. One would be to use your name or a name of your choosing in the chapter as the reporter who gives releases the stroy to the public. The other would be to thank you in my authors note where I would let everyone know it was your idea I ran with in the chapter. Either way is fine with me as long as you don't have any objections to them. Just let me know which way you'd prefer and I will go with it.

Congratulations on becoming a grandma! I thought I was too young at 48 to carry the title, but the past three years have been a delight to share with the beautiful little girl that calls me grandma. She has a brother on the way in November. Another bundle to hug and spoil! I'm not so leary of the distinguished title any more. I hope you are blessed with several more to fill your family with joy and endless energy.

Can't believe we are nearing the end if this endearing story! Thank you again for not only sharing your talent but for including a reviewers random thoughts into your work!

Wow, Renee really did self-destruct.
Charlie disappointed me in his inability to reconcile with Bella.
How very appropriate is it that a little girl who lost nearly every relative, found a Place To Belong. They have come full circle.
Beautiful story!
I've listed you as a favorite author so I won't miss any of your plotbunnies hopping into existence. Happily awaiting another story.

She may fantisize about a man with that much intensity but I'll bet she will be shaking in her shoes if she gets to see it in action.
Why would Dr. Cullen refuse the chance to train his perfect submissive. Unless he prefers an already experienced sub.

Ungh, I'm curious how far the delicious Dr. Cullen will take their first scene.
Bella appears to be well read on the potential outcomes of her desires to please Sir, yet, I wonder will his lust for her young body push her too far this first time?
Can't wait for more!

I really like your Sue. So neat that you gave her and Bella similar occupations to bond over the changed their men brought to their lives.

I'm with you, sad to see this story wrap up.
I will enjoy any fun it you wish to share in the form of out-takes.

Now that Bella's past has been covered up, will Edward complete his term?
How selfish were Tanya's motives?

Worth the wait!
Such an all encompassing love!

Their reparte is every easy and fun to read.
I also like the fact that Edward is equally ready to share parts of himself and not shy about asking for things to make his life easier.

So the loss of Tanya is another reason for Edward never to return to Chicago!

I'm really enjoying the pen-pal status between Edward & Bella.
Will we hear any more from Emmett or Jasper or even Alice and Rose for that matter?

If I were Bella I'd be very angry and then distraught over Edward's explanation as to him not having anyone to give a shit if he makes it home alive or in a pine box. He does make up for it by appreciating Bella's need to communicate and check in via email.
Loss of any soldiers life is tragic!

Equal reaction from Edward! Playful, endearing and all male! Haha. Lovin it!
Skype oh yeah!

Awe, Bella has a smile from him attached to her email. Too cute!
Was Edward in financial straights after his father killed himself? Is that the reason he joined the army?

Edward sure closed that email off in a steamy fashion! Fanning myself!

Well the honesty just flowed from his finger tips!
I'm sure Bella's building lust/friendship and dare I.say love will show all over her face as well during this long awaited Skype date.

Unique circumstances allowed for all the B.S. to be put aside and their true selves to shine through. No wonder they fell in love so fast.

Oh so sweet and the anxiety they both felt was for not!
Let's play 20 Questions!

Good thing she has Rose and Alice!
His honesty is beautiful.

It was good to hear a verbal commendation, by the lieutenant, for Edward's efforts with his team.
The timing if finding the pictures of Bella was perfect!

I noticed they are both signing off their emails as "Yours". I like the progression in subtle words. They are definitely both in the same head space where their hearts are concerned.

Bella should be blushing a beautiful pink color after reading how Edward thinks about taking care of her and how well endowed he claims to be! Sarge has my attention. LOL

Edward's heart shows through every word he writes about Christopher and Bella's ability to continue to look after a frightened little boy.
I wonder if Charlie will email Edward to follow up as a father would hope to do face to face? That would be interesting to read!
The boys sure know how to put a smile on Edward's face. Loved the familial connection through the women they cherish!

We all know that you broke protocol when you let Edward discuss his conversation with a superior. Let's face it, a soldier's out bound conversations are monitored closely, especially electronic ones. Any way....I think there may be a leak in one of the squads....hmmmmm. That puts everyone in danger. Keep our boys safe through this journey, please!
Cookies as ninja death stars, HAHAHAH.
I enjoyed Edward's latest question in the game.

Is Edward really nervous about Charlie's thoughts on him?
Poor boy really has some rough teen memories regarding girls and coming to grips with his ability to act normal around them.
Good thing our past stays 'in the past'.
Nice tight end, sigh!

Oh boy, his words are becoming more and more laced with desire and want......
Would Bella be as bold with Edward if she were face to face? or is this method of communication allowing her to express things she would have normally waited until they were more intimate?

Bella needs to send him some of her shower gel or her lotion so he can smell her as he thinks about all the naughty things he wants to do to her. In the shower or an Elevator anywhere will do!

No Panties! Does he really want his girl waltzing around with no undergarments while he is thousands of miles away? Probably not. He can make those demands when he is standing in front of her. hehe
It's very clear that he is looking for the same love and devotion that his parents displayed. I hope Bella grasp this from his words.
Threatening Jacob was funny.

You just gotta love Emmett!
Hope Mike gets the picture now.

Wondering about that leak that was discussed earlier by the lieutenant. Is that the reason they lost the supply truck and three men?

That was way too close for anyone's comfort!

The chance of Edward not getting injured in some way shape or form was greater than him returning home unscathed due to the location of his detail.
Glad the ILY's have made an appearance!
time for them to prop up each others emotions for them to ride out the next four plus months.

Now Bella needs to lay it all out for him. In just the same open and honest fashion.
I would love to see a video of Emmett plastering Edward's face with smooches. lol

Edward's circus ramblings are hilarious.
His dreams of a family and future with Bella is almost tangible.

Photos, consequences??????? Can't wait to read his responses to her in Blue!

I'm still cracking up over Edward's comment about the doc keeping his measurement to himself!
So Edward didn't really answer his own question about craziest place for sex. Does that mean that he and Tanya were rather traditional in their copulations?

LMAO....ShamWow! Coffee Girls definitely need coodo's for that one!
The gang going to the shooting range is even better. I can just imagine how competitive Emmett can be. He lost his iPod. Rose is going to be pissed. LOL

That was everything I expected it to be!

Maybe the girls can see their boys when they go to Florida for Summer vacation!
A fall down drunk celebration is not going to be difficult for these ladies! The hang-over afterwards not so well received, haha.
Thanks for sending them home!

Glad Bella is still sending him treats!
Will Edward's level of leadership be increased once he is state-side? Lieutenant sounds mighty nice!
How about jasper and Emmett; will they get promotions before they are discharged?

I'll bet Bella is worried that her man will be attractive to the local women.
She should have let him reply!
Now he will worry that he has done something wrong.
That evil thing called Jealously just reared it's ugly head.
Hope Edward figured out he needs to email her immediately following his night out.
She went out, double standard? She's not thinking straight.