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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254898
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
i enjoyed reading this chapter, thanks for writing
Author's Response:
thanks for reading ...lml
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
Nasty storm a brewing. I hope the end was not the eye of the storm & worse is yet to come.
I'm wondering if Edward even knows what James looks like to look out for protecting her from him.
Thanks for the update
Author's Response:
i think you are right and it is the eyes...lml
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
Woe! Well I guess that setteled how things are going to go:D)
Author's Response:
i guess it does ....
Thanks for reading ... I have a teaser for you....lml
Bella pulled back after placing one more soft kiss against my lips to look in my eyes while her hips wiggled against my dick. She smiled as the hiss left my mouth. “Little Eddie wants to play hide and seek”
“Oh he’s not hiding…” my hips thrust forward “…and he defiantly knows where to look”
“Well then…let him come find it” Her legs loss their grip as she slide down my body but I held her back firmly keeping her against my chest.
“Are you teasing me again?” the last time she tried this I ended up giving her a spanking over the kitchen counter, the memory alone made me throb.
“I wouldn’t think of it” stepping away the hint of a smile formed on her face, my girl was up to something. I eyed her speculatively but she gave nothing away as she moved towards the house telling me she was chilly and going in to get ready for bed.
While Bella opened the door to go back in the house she stopped “Edward…” the somber look on her face was a direct contrast to the playful one she held just a minute before. “…do you trust me?”
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
Well that was exciting;b) or hot is probably a better descriptive.
The shadow's are getting to me & the sounds that go bump in the night.
Author's Response:
I hate sounds that go bumo in the night and as far as Edward knows it was the tree...
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
Thanks for the update:D)
you tease
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
Their usual was slightly unusual…but in a good way, I'll say!
I gotta know if she's pregnant, squeal, the getting more sleep than she thought, emotionally labile, and is anyone checking the calender for her menstruation?
I'll be making cookies too, or else if everything doesn't get done, buying some at Costco for the cookie exchange;D there's soo much fan fic to read, what else is a girl to do?ha happy holidays!
Thanks for writing, awesome reading.
Author's Response:
OK ...lol ... no Bella is not pregnant...the sleep is from ...shhh...she is having lots of sex and she is feeling secure for the first time since her mother died..(gasp) you just got some inside information....
I love baking ....Thanks for reading here is your Thursday teaser...lml
Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.
“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.
“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish
“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”
“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment
“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
Pinky mouse that's nasty, I thought one of our friends eating one of the gold fish from our aquarium from a bet was bad, turns out the goldfish thing is kinda common. Yuck, I'm so glad I'm not a guy, saying stupid guy would be redundant huh?
Hope your holidays are great! Thanks for the update;D)
Author's Response:
Give a bunch of young men some booze and Lord only knows what they will come up with ...lol ....thanks for reading. I have your teaser ..lml.....
“Hey” my thoughts had taken over my attention so much that Edward’s voice startled me causing me to flinch.
“I’m sorry babe…” he chuckled “…I didn’t mean to scare you” My eyes moved towards his they were warm and bright making me smile.
“It’s ok. Where have you been?” Edward sighed
“Ahhh…well while some of us get to lay around in the tub others leave the dog out, hang up their clothes and talk to irate fathers from Forks” the auditable gasp left my throat and I couldn’t mask the horror in my voice.
“You talked to Charlie?”
“Hmm...Yes I did” Edward sat down on the floor with his back against the wall of the tub pulling the cork out of a bottle of wine that I didn’t see he had.
“What did he want?”
As I sat up straight turning with my arm lying on the wall by his head, Edward handed me a glass before he started talking. “He was just concerned about you Bella and he wanted to make sure that after what happened you were safe.”
“And?” I knew there had to be more
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
I wonder sometimes if Bella is mentally challenged & if she took too many hits to the head from James,hehe
Actually I'm guessing she's wanting punished;D)
Author's Response:
not that kind of punishment ,,, Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you..lml
Leaving out a long sigh I focused really hard on opening the twist tie that held the bread wrapper closed. Edward moved with me and as he passed by to get the wine out of the cooler his hand ran down the length of my arm. The extra sensation from his touch made my muscles clench tighter and I think I let out a whimper because Rose glanced at me with a smirked.
Bastard!
I needed something else to occupy my mind and it didn’t matter what it was “Jasper” I looked up from the two loaves of bread “could you turn on some music?”
“Sure…anything in particular?” he asked moving to a panel in the wall. Before I could answer Emmett made an observation.
“You alright little Bella, you seem a kind of jumpy tonight” Edward’s voice came from behind me.
“Isabella’s been jumpy all weekend”
“I have not!” the words left my mouth without any thought of the repercussions they might cause. Emmett chuckled and a small giggle came from Rose who was standing next to me, but my eyes went to Edward. His face became stone cold hardness while his eyes widened as they turned dark.
Oh Shit
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73
Yes, I think Edward does have a bug up his ass. Could it be that Bella is so gaurded in what she shares with him? She seems to have to formulate everything in her head before she can share things with him, which in my opinion is not indicative of being trusting as a submissive would, of course she's still learning.
Thanks for the update, can't wait to find out what comes of their talk, go Bella.
Author's Response:
Bella's editing is part of the problem,,,and the other thing is that Edward is a man who always has a reason (good or bad) for everything he does... thanks for reading...louise
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
Yes, I liked it, I've liked all the chapters. Edward has great imaginative consequences. I think the punishment was fitting, it had quite the effect on Bella.
Did she just tell him the same alarm code she had at her previous place?
Thanks for the update & enjoy your jam packed holidays!
Author's Response:
No ,,, she sugggested the same code that she was going to change her's to ....Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you..lml
Leaving out a long sigh I focused really hard on opening the twist tie that held the bread wrapper closed. Edward moved with me and as he passed by to get the wine out of the cooler his hand ran down the length of my arm. The extra sensation from his touch made my muscles clench tighter and I think I let out a whimper because Rose glanced at me with a smirked.
Bastard!
I needed something else to occupy my mind and it didn’t matter what it was “Jasper” I looked up from the two loaves of bread “could you turn on some music?”
“Sure…anything in particular?” he asked moving to a panel in the wall. Before I could answer Emmett made an observation.
“You alright little Bella, you seem a kind of jumpy tonight” Edward’s voice came from behind me.
“Isabella’s been jumpy all weekend”
“I have not!” the words left my mouth without any thought of the repercussions they might cause. Emmett chuckled and a small giggle came from Rose who was standing next to me, but my eyes went to Edward. His face became stone cold hardness while his eyes widened as they turned dark.
Oh Shit
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
Yes, but what's else is going on?? Was it Heather that broke into the house? I don't like that the police officers got to see the play room.humhh
Thanks for the update;D)
Author's Response:
Well ... I guess Edward could have refused to show them that area, but that might have made them more suspicious and remember that Edward is not embarassed about the playroom....
Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml
Walking into the house all the cares that had been forgotten came crashing back as he told me that the locksmith would be there in about a half-hour. I used that time to tell him what I had learned about Heather.
“Do you think that could have been her on the video?” He asked me as we sat outback playing fetch with Seth and a tennis ball.
“It could have been. But how would she know where you lived. I mean really Edward if she knew where I was why go to the center?” He thought about that for a few seconds as he once again threw the ball into the grass.
“I’m going to call Mr. Weiss and let him check on it, I’m also going to see if he can check on your Officer Hawk.”
“My Officer Hawk?”
He smirked “Well he’s not mine besides he didn’t really care until he found out who you were, and I’m not taking any chances. I don’t know how it will work with him being a cop and all but…” I cut him off because I had gotten an ingenious idea.
“I could have Charlie do it.
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
Who? I feel like I should remember.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and I have this weeks teaser for you.....
“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.
“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”
I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”
“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.
Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.
“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.
“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
Yummy, now I'm starved. ha
I thought maybe at first he'd over reacted to the peen kiss, but as it played out it seemed perfectly appropriate & it wasn't until he withheld her punishment that she took any of it very seriously, it was starting to seem.
I'd never heard that turn of phrase before, nonce lance, I had to look it up. Thanks for the challenge, your clean writing style[& sexy scenes] are part of why it's always a pleasure to read your writing;D)
Author's Response:
Thanks ...nonce lance ((my mother use to say that all the time )) I have a few more phases that will be coming out in upcoming chapters ....
Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment...I have a teaser for you...lml
Edward was pulling into the parking lot that was across the street from the main entrance. He didn’t say anything else until he held my door open for me taking my hand and pulling me closer to him. “I am sorry about my behavior”
I smiled at him “You girl forgives you”
His face moved closer to mine as he spoke “My girl is more tolerant then I deserve”
“Never” as I said the word his lips brushed against mine, it was a sweet chaste kiss. When he pulled back his eyes held a tenderness in them as he palmed the side of my face.
“Remember your task and speak to no one other then family members”
“Yes Sir”
“Come let’s get this over with so we can get home” I nodded in agreement following behind him with my eyes down. As we approached the entrance Edward spoke with the guy at the door.
“Tyler, how is the night going?”
“Edward, actually it’s been busy, it’s game night”
Edward groaned “damn I forget about that”
Tyler chuckled as we moved into the club telling us to have fun, I wasn’t sure what game night was but it appeared I was about to find out.
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68
I really liked the chapter, a great read as always. I really don't like the idea of Bella playing with Tanya or Jessica however she might like to torture them. I'm sure you were just using that as a device to add to the Bella- Edward interaction/hissy fit.
So, yeah tongue with Lautner would of been good. And i actually liked that he got the 'mother fucker' joke wrong, I wonder if it wasn't intended so that Resse could get up & make the 'm f' joke which I thought was perfect.
And I really like how Rpat was dressed in that head board crushing scene, very nice;D)
Author's Response:
Bella doesn't want to play with Jess or Tanya either, she was just musing about getting revenge...lol....thanks for readding and leaving a comment, until next time...louise
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
I'm furious, okay maybe just a little disappointed, that no one [ie Rose] spoke up about what a viscous bitch Jessica was & the physical assault she dished Bella and prompted B's response. The way Edward handled it made it seem like Jessica was the one needing to be consoled & was wronged & Edward was the one to provide it. He didn't inquire anything about what prompted it or what had happened, he didn't seem very supportive or a very considerate protector of Bella & was way too sympathetic to Jess and not to Bella as if she brought this on herself. He's been pretty lame when it comes to any interactions with other dom's & subs as far as protecting Bella when they're out of their private bubble. I'm pretty disappointed, I guess I want some noses broken & some hair pulled or better rejection of his ex-subs. His ex-subs are having a hay day belittling & disrespecting her & it's always when Bella is basically ball gagged by Edward. Like Newton says, "I don't like it."ha never thought I'd be quoting Newton. he he I get that Edward is not stooping to their level by not reacting or being defensive to Caius. But really, calling the family incestuous & Bella a whore, yuck. Enough, IMO
Author's Response:
Rose wasn't asked and once you read EPOV maybe you will understand why and what happened......Nose breaking will not happen in the club...it's really only Jess and Tanya causing problems and really it's jealosy and the fact that ((with Jess)) Bella is not sharing, but Jess has her own problems that she alluded to and I was surprised no one caught on to.....thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have your teaser for you....lml
“Are we going to talk about it?”
“About what?” she truly didn’t know what I meant, so I held up her arm. Bella’s face fell “Oh”
I kept staring at her while she sat back down in her seat, waiting for her to start talking. Whatever happened she didn’t want to tell me, but I wasn’t giving her a choice I wanted, no I needed to know. Finally she sighed and started talking.
“I don’t know what you want me to say Edward I handled it, ingeniously I thought, I let her know that I wasn’t going to take any of her shit while still obeying you. Did I do wrong? Were you mad at me?”
Was I mad at her?
I figured I would let her answer her own question “Did you get punished?”
Bella shook her head at my question so I asked another one “Were you rewarded?”
The sweetest smile and blush broke out over her face “Several times” she admitted, making me chuckle, but I needed her to know something.
My fingers laced with hers on top of the table while I explained “The fact of the matter is…” I looked in her eyes “…Bella you shouldn’t have to handle shit.”
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
'Ok…lemony goodness a plenty and they are exhausted – but in a good way'--"I'll say, I couldn't agree more." I love the creative punishments Edward comes up with for Bella so that he doesn't break the agreement of not striking her as her punishments but only for foreplay;-{o)
I loved the leash in that it did show he was owner of her but he didn't degrade her with it, for being on a leash I thought he did it quite tastefully. I have to say a little bit of me was excited about the idea of him taking her out with it on but didn't think that would serve well for going back to that community anytime soon or if they ran into people they knew but going to the club with it sounds sexy.
So, questions for Jane, what is her favorite kinky thing Aro does to her or what is her favorite part of being a 24/7 sub?
Author's Response:
hmmm....I think that you will see that Bella fells the same way....and thanks for the question...
Thanks for reading ...I have this weeks teaser for you..lml
Edward took the lid off his coffee while I took a bite of the danish moaning as the sweet gooey goodness melted in my mouth. The mixture of berries was a perfect balance between sweet and tangy with a thin layer of warm yummy cheese and sweet drizzle.
“MMMmmmmnnnn” I think my eyes rolled to the back of my head. When I opened my eyes Edward was looking at me licking his bottom lip. “What?”
He kind of shook his head as if trying to come out of a daze before taking a drink of coffee. “Last night was good?”
“Uh huh…” I nodded as I swallowed “…last night was great. I was a little worried when I saw the leash”
Edward cleared his throat “Well you shouldn’t have been looking, your eyes are to remain down not searching the room.”
I sighed “I know but when you put it down on the table all I could think about was when you were going to put it on me.” He looked…stunned, so I figured it would be a good idea to explain. “ Not that I wanted to walk around in public and I will admit it panicked me a little but it kind of excited me too.” taking a drink of coffee I asked the question I really wanted to know.
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
Of course Edward was doing the best he could in a bad situation, he's the best, but still I guess I'm just bothered by his dirty dick & I guess there's just no changing the past.
Alright, I've tried & I can not visualize how that deep throat game went. I just kept imagining it going the rest of the way down her throat{the condom} & it being swallowed or if you squeeze it then the liquid shoots out of it & down the front of you. Is there really such a thing or did you make this up?
Author's Response:
No you can't change the past. Besides I am a firm believer that everything in your past forms you into the person you are today....The thing wasn't a condom it was like a condom I got the idea from a can cozzie in the shape of a condom...i just thought if it was smaller it would be possible to use it as i discribed ((we should invent them - deep throat condom shooters... we could make a fortune...lol)) Anyway I'll give you the link.
http://www.ripnroll.com/candoms.htm
By the way, thanks for reading and leaving me a comment, here is this weeks teaser...
Excusing myself I went into the kitchen to check in dinner, everything was done so after pulling the chicken out of the oven - to allow it to rest - I started putting the other stuff into serving bowls. The sound of the kitchen door swinging open made me turn to see who was there, and I smiled as Aro joined me.
“Isabella I don’t wish to disturb you, but may I speak with you for a minute?”
Not wanting to be rude I stopped what I was doing. “Yes Sir, do you need something?”
“No..no, please continue, I can talk while you work.” I asked him to give me a second while I took the Corn Pie out of the oven because I didn’t want him talking to my back. Once it was out I gave him my attention.
Eyeing the pie I had just removed he smiled at me warmly “It’s nice to see you so carefree around everyone. You seem much more confident and I must admit it does me good to see that. You are young and need to laugh more.”
I giggled “Emmett is easy to laugh with”
Aro agreed with me with a slight nod of his head “And Edward?”
“Edward is easy to laugh with too.”
“Good, it truly brings me joy to see you happy and carefree.”
“Well I don’t know about carefree…”
Aro spoke before I could finish “Yes well that is wanted to talk to you about.
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65
Thanks for writing;D)
They sure are a very tight nit group. It is rather surprising that James could get away with the shit he pulled on Bella but they must off all cooled off their relation ship when she was with James.
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
Yeah, good job with the Paul character, he's truly a diabolical little shit. haha Very funny though. I was wondering how their fight was going to go, then it made sense that leah had thought all along that Bella wouldn't go for the BDSM thing. I wasn't understanding how she was supportive one minute & then not the next. Especially after having met Edward & seen their interactions.
THanks for the update!
<3 <3
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
There were some plot development revelations, many of the characters seem more defined & yes, that Edward was finding out about them the same time as us. So, I didn't really think Caius would be the cause of break-ins and such if he's been with the club & all for such a long time, but how does he know about Aro's donations to Bella and why doesn't Edward realize the financial provisions that Aro provides Bella are the donations to the women's center. But how does Caius know about Aro's donations to Bella, he shouldn't be privy to Aro's financial business unless maybe he's messing around with his books?
Thanks for the update, looking forward to getting to the bottom of Leah's avoidance.
Author's Response:
hmmmm...how does he know that? Rumor, speculation. I can tell you it's all in the story and the OT"s ...You might be able to figure that out and I have to say I'm dying and want to give you the answer so bad ...but I can't ..at least not right now..all I can say is that you will have that question answered ...I look forward to settling this thing between Bella and Leah also ... I hate when sisters fight ..lol.... I sent you a seperate e-mail as a way of saying thank you for leaving a review ....I hope you like it ...lml
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57
Yes, serious cliffy. Geesh that was rather foreboding. And still we don't know what awaits us in FORKS...da dunh da dunhh
Thanks so much for the update. What a fun read, these two are so sweet & happy together.
Author's Response:
glad you liked the last chapter... sorry this is so late in getting out, but here is this weeks teaser...louise.
“You did your father’s wash?” that sounded like something a kid shouldn’t do.
“Yeah…since I was ten or eleven.” there must have been some kind of bewilderment on my face because she justified herself. “I told you this. Charlie worked all kinds of weird hours; mostly he would sleep during the day and …”
Breaking in to her train of thought I made the assumption “You did all the chores”
She shrugged “Someone had too”
I truly couldn’t imagine any ten year old taking it upon themselves to be responsible for keeping a house. I suppose that would be another reason why at the tender age of eighteen Bella thought herself ready for marriage. It seems so clear to me that she had hopes and dreams for a regular life, college, career and all the other things that eighteen year olds dream about. However in her advanced maturity she pushed her own happiness aside and took on the responsibility of trying to please someone else. I had thought Bella to be a natural submissive and it would seem like she was.
The mistake she made was in her choice of partners. I have no doubt that had he not been abusive she would have been a perfect wife. Bella did everything within her power to see to his happiness even to the point of losing her own.
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
I have a bit of a rock collection too! I never thought about dating it though, great idea;D), I might steal it.
So hello Charlie. he he What's with Leah blabbing her mouth in front of her little brother & Paul? Jealous much?
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
Gained weight? Baby!
Edward is so good for her.
love reading this story --great characters;-)
can't wait for more!
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
Nice;D) Yeah, I really wanted Edward to lay into him.
I'd still have a grudge against Jared, I'm obviously not as mature as Bella & I totally get that Edward's not a fan of his.
Author's Response:
Your not the forgiving kind...No forgive and forget???
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63
I thought it was an awesome chapter, your Domward seems so in tune with Bella, always taking care of her needs.
I didn't care for her going against Edward's wishes & baring her boobs. To me E. is possessive, that's his weakness & it seems 'his needs' would be better met if she helped him out with that & didn't share what he felt was his to enjoy[boobies]hehe. You could say that another persons jealousy is there problem & that is true but it's not a very sensitive or sympathetic attitude to take, IMO. Anywho, it's nice to see her being feisty, just don't care for the disregard of Edward's wishes. I'm thinking unless Jared's gay, that Edward is probably right on in his take on Jared.
Looking forward to reading more, thanks for update!
Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
Thanks for writing. Great chapter.
Bellas' lack of sharing has been unintentionally hurtful to Charlie, I'm glad Sue said something to her about it and that it sunk in.
Author's Response:
Bella means well with Charlie, have you ever done something that you felt was the ciorrect thing only to find out later that you totally screwed it up? That's what Bella did,,,,Thanks for reading and I have a small teaser for you...lml
“Stay still Isabella” I told her placing my hand on her knee letting my fingers glide softly up the inside of her thigh. “You are to speak freely and tell me about this morning”
Bella’s brow furrowed, I thought that meant she was confused as to what I was talking about so I prompted “At breakfast, you gave Claire a bite of food, something happened, tell me about it”
“This one doesn’t know what you mean”
Bella was over thinking she needed to let go of her inhibitions and tell me what was at the root of her reaction. My fingers drifted over her outer lips while I tried to coax the answer from her “Picture it in your head, the fork coming out of Claire’s mouth…”
“She did what your girl said”
“Yes she did and what did that do to you?’ I asked while my fingers became more insistent in their movements.
Bella whimpered opening her knees a little wider “It made your girl want to tell her to do something else”
“What would my girl have her do?”
She answered without thinking “She don’t know”
That might have been an honest answer, it’s not like Bella has had any training in being the top, hell she was just learning the roll of the bottom. But I wanted to make sure so my question became more direct. “Would you have Claire do something to you?”
Date: 08 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81
I loved the club punishment, her sighing drives me crazy too. I loved that he has limits for her & has constructive ways for helping her break annoying habits.
I'm not sure what to make of the cum slut talk?/name calling and if the shoe fits wear it application of that whole situation. Can't wait to read more &learn what it's all about;D)
Thanks for the quick updates it's been great reading lots of DitR.
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67
Nice chapter. Their relationship just continues to grow stronger. I didn't realize there was some BDSM function they were going to on this vaca.
Looking forward to next chapter as always;D)
Date: 08 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70
Great read, thanks for writing it;D)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and leaving a comment ....louise
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71
Great chapter. Yes, what was going on with Jane?
I liked how you had E relate their relationship or play time to Jasper.
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72
cute, thanks for the update;D)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading ...lml
Date: 02 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74 (1st half)
great chapter & yes, it feels like she's not been completely forthcoming with Edward & I think that is part of where he is feeling something is so remiss. and inable to be a proper Dom to Bella.
Author's Response:
yes, that is exactly what happened to the point where she had himm doubting his abilty...
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76
I did not cry reading this chapter at all, but I was practically, ok I was, bawling last chapter when she said, "PAY-chuh." It was so emotional and such a deep revelation for Bella what her stuborness was creating or not allowing to be created, lovely vase or greatest relationship ever but I was right there with her, great writing. It was killing me to imagine that Edward was aware that yes the sub has the power and that it could destroy this other part of their relationship from the inside out and potentially killing an important part of who Edward is because I don't think he would choose being a Dom over being with Bella. I was so relieved when she called "red" and put a stop to it.
I loved EPOV too, how he's considerate, wanting to take care of her fragile confidence and growth that she's made and the parallel to the "Twilight" series always careful of her fragile physical state.
You write great lemons, it's nice that they are able to show each other physically the magnitude of their love for each other, but in the a.m. when there wasn't time to connect physically that was okay too, showing their relationship isn't just physical.
Great chapter! You are an awesome writer & so generous to write this for us;D)
What is this Rose reference? Can't wait to find out.
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85
Louise I find it very disheartening that someone would blame you for the ill's committed by disturbed people and or fault your ability to parent. Mean people, huh? Go figure or their is no figuring it out, just figuring out how to not take those things/comments personally.
I feel Barney Rosset, if he were still alive, would be a fan of your writing and your ability to write as you see fit, as there are people like me out there that are fans;-)
Keep up the good work and remember Barney Rosset.
Author's Response:
Do you think they even know who Barney Rosset is?? ..lol
Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79
Thanks for the update, and now we know some of the rest of the story.
Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
Yes, there were a lot of surprises, great chapter. What is up with Karen, coincidence? Bella is euonymus naive., IMO
Date: 08 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80
I think he's teaching her a lesson about her selfishness or greed to have orgasms seems more important than holding off on them when he directs her, thereby not putting his wishes before hers. He's got a sweet way of teaching her a lesson if that's what it's about.
Date: 20 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83
I am absolutely the furthest thing you could get from being an Edward hater. I think he's a genius with his lessons, she definitely needs a mirror and spot light shined down in her behavior and he's the Dom man to do it. Super Dom. She's coming along though, slowly but surely.
Thanks for the update;-)
Date: 03 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84
Great chapter, loved the sappy ending--just perfect closure to that tumultuous lesson.
Looking forward to the next update. So, what is up with Alice, does she secretly harbor D/s desires? I'm glad Edward is taking a proactive approach to keeping Alice s attitude in check. Thats sad and surprising that Esme would behave that way, but it's just as surprising that Alice is.
Date: 16 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86
I'm not clear about when Tanya is referencing to, when she demeans Bella by saying she talks back to him? I don't remember her dng that.
Thanks for the update, yes, I was wondering about the hand off to Demetri?
Author's Response:
I believe that Tanya was being factious, she had been close enough to hear the conversation E&B had about hanging the picture over their bed – vs it being his bed. That was a conversation that 2 years ago when Tanya was Edward’s sub would not have happened. There would have been no discussion or anything brought up about the bed being mutually owned or shared. I’m going to give you a hint at an upcoming Tanya OT – the girl has heard that Bella lives with Edward – but in her mind she believes that they are in a 24/7 - D/s relationship. She is in total denial over the fact that they are Bf/Gf and in love. So when she heard Bella debating who's bed it was she assumed her to be ‘talking back’ Tanya is also implying that thanks to Bella - the Edward she served has gone soft… I hope that makes sense - it was just Tanya stickingfg her nose in where it don't belong and trying to cause trouble --- or maybe she is just trying to figure out 'what the hell is going on' why is Edward acting so differant... and she's justifing his actions with her own beliefs ... ok ... i'm giving you more information on the OT then i wanted ...lol...lucky you ...LOL...thanks for reading - ooh and Demetri - he's a good guy...and someone dward trust and wants Bella to trust too... ok thanks again ... see ya next time, which should be in a few days ...louise
Date: 16 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87
Is he realizing she hasn't menstruated in like forever? That's crazy I'm sure but I keep wondering if she's pregnant.
Great chapter, can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
As a matter of fact Edward hasn't really thought about it, but the subject is coming up in the next chapter which should be posted in a day or so... it all depends how long it takes M to get back to me .... thanks for reading ...louise
Banner by MsRason
All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87537
Date: 15 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Thanks for writing.
I gdont think it's a good idea to go but I hope she doesn't go against Edward.
Author's Response:
Thanks again, bb. ;)
Date: 14 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Yes I liked it. I'm dieing to know what the third thing is & am realllly worried about Bella's safety. F'ing James seems kinda scary mean. Aro too. Great chapter.
Thanks for the update & hope you can write more soon, missed reading this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks. =)
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
What an idiot, telling her he f*cked bunches of girls and came in them thinking about her. I think I'd shoot him or at least kick him a good hard one in the balls.
Author's Response:
Lol. Thanks bb. =)
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Interesting, looking forward to reading more & unraveling the mystery
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 03 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Thanks for the update, good chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you. ;)
Date: 15 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Thanks for the update, good luck on your o.f.
<3
Author's Response:
Thank you. =D
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Okay I guess I need to wait for the mystery to unfold, but am wondering just what could keep Edward from telling her that he's been pining away for her since he left her, he has right?
Author's Response:
Of course he has. ;)
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Serious honey moon action there, like over the moon;D)
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
What about that white rose? Is it from Jake? Does he have some sort of access to Bella & Edward's place?
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing every chapters as you read. I appreciate it. ;)
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
I also felt that E's instincts were right & that it was Jacob all along but I didn't know he'd be in with the Volturri, it crossed my mind but wasn't sure what he had to gain but revenge for Bella rejecting him.
Bummer, I'm all caught up now, looking forward to next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'll update soon. ;)
Date: 18 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Thanks so much for posting!;~D}
Hope your holidays are great & that you'll get a chance to post again, greedy aren't I?
Author's Response:
Thank you. Happy holidays to you, too. =)
Date: 20 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Yes. Please. Next chapter before Christmas;D)) If you get around to it, I would be so pleased.
So maybe Bella's pregnant? and what is Aro up to?
Author's Response:
Hopefully I can manage to post before or on X'mas. *crosses fingers*
Thanks. Happy holidays to you! =)
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Yes, the answer to the question more chapters is always yes. He said no kids but he's really good with them.
Author's Response:
Yeah, he'd realize soon he fucked up...but the problem is, Bella will make him grovel for what he did.
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Yeah I'm ready to have him forgiven or at least yelled at, so they would at least be talking.
Author's Response:
Yes, they'll have their talk next chap. Thanks.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Loved it.
Author's Response:
Thanks. =)
'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must.
Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story.
Doctorward is there too, just like the first story.
It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children.
Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one.
Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore
Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 467281
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Stupid Cupid
Can't wait to read more!:-))
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Mr. LoverMan
Great chapter, but EJ is a slut & a whore
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Road to redemption
Haha, have you been blackmailed by 'Team Jacob' fans to turn him into a good guy?
JK, great chapter;-))
Date: 06 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Rescue Me
Great chapter.. I gotta feeling we're going to find out who Roni's Dad is & it's going to be freakin Jake, hhaha
I love the kid drama:-))
Date: 06 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Long Day
Loved it, that diving over the table at each other was hilarious and the motor boating to boot, haha.
Date: 06 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Flanked by your side
Thanks for the Edward fix, loved it.
Date: 06 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Back to basics
You go Bella! Haha. I wish CC would just attack Natalie already, I think she'd attack him back:-))
Date: 06 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Baby Got Back
Fun chapter & yes, I'm a big fan of Natalie and her knowledge of musicals & old classics:-))
Funny about Edward trying to get Bella cursing mad,haha, cleaver man.
Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Holidaze part two
I am glad they broke up, nothing against Sheila, part of me wonders about her that she could be so into such a depressed emo though,ha but he did have a lot going on before with bands, his group & the plays. I like this Natalie girl for him.
Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Flowers in the Attic
That was funny, "cal me Daddy," Carlisle is a bit of an evil f£ck, haha with a great wicked sense of humor.
Date: 01 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Party like a Rock star
Great fun reading this chapter. Laughed @ the kids yelling for Bella to take off her top.
Date: 10 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Spring is in the air pt one
Hilarious sex scene, these two crack me up. Love this Edward.
Date: 10 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Imagine that
Loved it, kickin wing badass Bella, haha. Gotta love me some Biolove
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Romeo and Juliet
Loved this chapter, I'm so glad you gave Al his true love. I like the Leo reference too, always been a huge fan of his/Al's;-))
So I can't wait for the play, I hope no heads roll.
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 19: BIG girl panties
Okay that is physically sickening it's so disturbing, damn Randall! Great chapt by the way. Lord, but it's like what would I do if I was in that position, all I could think was immediately do the undercover thing, I'm glad Ali thought of that, I also like her meet him at the hotel to let them all kill his arse & bury him idea, haha.
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Half moon
Haha, what a funny chapt, I can't believe Bella did the Cyrano De Bergerac stuff with CC, I was sure they were going to get caught.
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Saint Corduroy
Michael & his getting into mischief brought a lot of stuff to a head:-))
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 15: At a loss
Wow, intense. A river of crocodile tears shed over that chapter:-))
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 14: So cold
Yeah, I feel bad for CC, but I feel bad for all of them. He can't confide anything in his Dad which only exacerbates Edwards distrust of CC. Loose,loose situation:-(
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Wild Thing
Great chapter. I know what you mean about real life being better than anything you can make up. My husband keeps saying, "alright that's going in book '2' , book '3'" and really there is enough for a few books. I love weird, it's right up my alley,yk:-))
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 37: love taps
Awesome chapter, loved the Em & Al relationship, that was very hawt. I want them together;-/
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 36: SOngs from the heart
Yay CC is right, no 2 pump chump for him, Hollah
Date: 11 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 47: The Best Years
I'm bawling my eyes out here. Thank you so much for writing this, I can't believe I put off reading this for as long as I did! Can't wait to go read the outtakes!
Date: 11 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Thor, Loki, and the gang
This story (ok, all your stories) are like fan fic crack for me. Can't get enough. I was crying my eyes out with that 'You are my Sunshine' song. Adorable;-))
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Shut up and Drive part two
Wow, I think he went to far with it, because there's a reason for that old adage that two wrongs don't make a right, they don't. And he maybe just fueled the hate of a person who's blood line is that of a person that goes psycho when relationships go bad. I also think it would probably hurt Cecelia;-(
Cant wait to read more, I love these kids story lines as much as B & E's.
Date: 10 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Testing Testing
Love that she's pregnant & I totally see an offspring sequel in the works, just in case you weren't aware;-D))
Date: 08 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 33: The Hills Have Thighs
Love that top gun scene, best meg Ryan ever.
Love this story
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Smells like Teen Spirit Part Two
Great chapter, total surprise with the Debbie deflowering:-))
Date: 10 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Spring is in the air part two
Another great chapter, loved the Woody & Bud dooking it out,haha. So I really thought EJ would be hooking up with E&B's old classmate friends Daughter.
This is sad, that I'm getting close to ending this story. I can really see a sequel with all these characters the kids as the theme, js, planting a seed, so to speak;-))
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Smells like Teen Spirit Part One
This has been another great chapter. I'm so glad CC found a new girl.:-))
Very funny adult bickering. Rose was funny too, she gets right to the heart of the matter.
Date: 10 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Happiest Place on Earth
That was some crazy Disney love there, haha.
And I love G'pa's baddass self.
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Kill Bill
I have to laugh at CC wanting to help Dad bury Bill, haha I got this visual of the end of "Hall Pass" where the Brit has had a hall pass with Stephen Merchant he ends up killing his date, her husband, grandma and the kids who were watching & going to jail it's funny too you should google it. Anyway, the end of that chapter seemed just like what the Cullen's could get up to, haha
Date: 08 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Shut up and Drive part one
Great chapter & not boring at all. But I'm wondering what Al is up to and what the juicy gossip is?
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Asshole
I'm so glad you don't like cliffys, they get me really anxious, I like reading them but I don't like having to leave it unresolved, that's distressing.
Thanks for writing;-))
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Peanut
Great chapter. I'm so glad they've made up and I really am into the kids stories now too.
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Choices
Wow, that was heart breaking & the fight escalated really fast to something very ugly when all thatEdward was saying (I thought) to Michael was he loved the sex with Bella so much he always wanted more.
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 3: That's Amore
;-))
Im glad EJ took a little break from the third person discussion. He's pretty adorable & Debbie seems like the one to tame the savage beast. I'm so glad this is a completed fic and I get to go read the next chapter now*=))
Date: 01 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A day in the life of Bella Cullen
Great start, I'm really excited to be reading more of these two & their 4 kids:-))
Date: 11 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Epilogue
I can't wait for the CC outtake. Too bad about him & Natalie but their break up rang true to the story.
I loved this story, thank you so much for writing it;-))
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Unchained Melody
Great chapter, the angst was getting to me thoug., I'm so glad they've kissed & made up;-))