Wow, not sure what to say, but that I'm looking forward to next chapter;0)

This whole story is a bit of a cliff hanger

This is such a different story, don't know what to expect, which is making it fun to read. I know there are people (Jamestown massacre comes to mind) with really persuasive powers but how does he get people to go in with him for this? He can't do it all on his own. I'm thinking him giving the men slave virgins might have some motivating factor. Makes me think of the suicide terrorists on 911. Who knew virginity had so much power? ha ha just kidding but it is ridiculous to me. You'd think this is farfetched but sadly it's too close to reality & actual events that occur in RL.

Thanks for writing

Yes, getting crazy is right & pervy Aro, shutter of distaste over here.

Thanks for updating. I'm so looking forward to what happens when Edward enters the picture. Will his usual protective nature step forward?

Thanks for the new chapter, loving this story, just can't imagine where it's going. I like the mystery<3

Great chapter, thanks for the update, glad your get together was better than anticipated.  Can't wait for next chapter. Edward's insight was great, glad he's not completely brain dead and can think & feel some things for himself, even if he isn't capable of acting on his feelings.

What is with 2 chapter 12's?

Humnhh, the web of deceit weaves every which way. Thanks god, or I mean thank Father Aro

Thanks for the update, glad you are so pleased and proud with how the Gymnastic Events went;)

What does he mean,"I will cast aside her hand and every time you look upon that hand you will be reminded of your disobedience? Is he going to cut off her hand? How can she look at her hand if it's cut off?

Nasty punishments.

Looking forward to next chapter, thanks for update.

I hope it's not Aro, that would be deadly?? What did happen to Tanya?

Looking forward to next update, thanks for writing:)

What a tight spot the Cullen's have themselves in. How does E. get along in the outside world?

Yes, she's done for. Hopefully Edward, Esme & Carlisle will step in & save her. Probably not

Looking forward to next update. What a cliffy!

Thanks for the update. A flier, it's nice to think that maybe they do work, for all the families & the people themselves that go missing everyday.

I hope Carlisle fesses up to his true identity and history so they can get a better picture of Aro, the raping narcissist with the twisted version of Hitlers racial cleansing.

Yes, I'm guessing. What I'd like to read next is Edward grows a pair and fricking bashes Aro's head in.  Arghh   And what about Edward noticing the perverted stuff Aro had all over his walls & the flogging cross or whatever it was I thought I remembered he had in his room?

Hope you'll update soon;)

Happy New Year!

Thanks for the update;D)

Well, maybe Aro is less scrupulous than Carlisle & will deal with James as he should be dealt with;~)

Thanks for updating

James? Laurent?

Some how, I don't think James would use the word pleasure.

wow

If Jacob handcuffs Edward, I think I'll lose it, that's just James kinda crazy talk.

Looking forward to next chapter!

Thanks for the update, yes, James gets his just desserts;)

Yes, we're going to need a new chapter right away.haha This is a horrible development.

I think it's time to call Emmett, Jasper & the girls & get some shovels & guns & start feeding the rose garden;))

i did not see the garden as just therapy. Why doesn't Bella tell Esme abouut Carlisle's planned rape/abuse of her? 

Thanks for bringing closure to such an enjoyable read, twisted at times but still original, suspenseful & exciting read. And this was your first story? Awesome job, looking forward to more stories in the future from you.

I put you on author fav's not sure if that means author alert, like it does on ff or not?

Hope so.

Well, I hope Charlie gets in deep trouble for his macho misuse of his badge. Lord, $2,000. worth of tickets for a kid is almost a years worth of earnings from a part time job. That's crazy.

Thanks for posting, looking forward to next chapter!

Yeah for the update!  What can all this mean and why should it bother Carlisle? Plus that can't be what had him upset, he didn't see it before he came home and he was already upset, I wonder why?

Looking forward to a little ferris wheel fun!

Thanks for the update;~)

Wow, this is a different twist, I like it and am looking forward to the next update & some answers to what the heck is going on;D)

so the mix up begins. Interesting twist with Rene & Uley. O wonder if theyran away together?

;-))

Looking forward to reading more as the mystery is unravelled.

She's picked up his mind reading;D

Thanks for the update, I've missed reading about these folks.

I'm so glad Charlie's got her back & is being understanding;D

Thanks for the update, what a turn of events. So maybe as Bella has picked up some of Edward's powers maybe Edward has picked up some of Bella's and he is able to block them completly from Alice's vision?

Can't wait to read more, congrats on your book completion;D)

Thanks for the update

Thanks for coming back to update, I Ike reading this story. So she's turning vampire without going through the three day transition?

Looking forward to the next update, thanks for writing:-)

;-)

Thanks for the update, looking forward to finding out what's next!

Thanks for the update, been missing this story;-)

Yeah, I'm enjoying this story, I think. I find the whole unfaithful thing rather noxious. I don't get how you retain any self respect after the 1st time. I can imagine it happening once, but then to continue with it, it just is lying to yourself & everyone else.

So, what seems even more disturbing is to imagine that Edward still has Tanya there living with him, so he's cheating on Bella & on Tanya. ughh

Awe, nice chapter. Thanks for the update. I'm wondering where things are headed with these two love birds when they get to NY city?? marriage proposals?? How are they going to manage the Nawleans separation?? 

Hope you'll update again soon;~)

Yeah, so who is Aro King?

Thanks for the update & Happy New Year to you & yours!

AH? not sure

OOC, definitely 

and loving it<3

Yes, I liked it. I like the pace you set to this story. It moves along, a lot happens.

So, I'm wondering is Bella back at school, as you mention Garrett still being her teacher. And how is she finishing school, is she just going to test out?

Thanks for writing;~)

I'm feeling' a bit sorry for Rose. Her intentions were good:-/

There is definitely some mystery going on with Rose.

"go all Scooby gang" haha love the reference. They do kinda match up like scooby & the gang. The Fred & Daphne are Em & Rose, Velma is Alice, Jasper for Shaggy that leaves Edward as Scooby (we know the real life RP can have some pretty goofy looks) and Bella is the victim?

Ok, maybe I'm reading to much into it, still...

Sweet Christmas gift to Daddy C, brought tears to my eyes.  What creative gifts you came up with for everyone. Great chapter.

Thanks for the update. My wish would be either, ha just keep posting, but if I have to choose, shorter, more frequent would be my choice;~D)

Thanks for the update, still they haven't dropped the bomb of Bella & Edward, looking forward to reading that part of the story & her reaction;)

Okay, I feel like none of them mention {maybe slightly by Rosalie} the elephant in the room and that is jealousy & not wanting to share?

Thanks for the update, looking forward to next post!

Thanks for the update;D)

Awe, they've almost told each other how they feel or are at least trying to show each other.  They are pretty messed up though, I think Jacob's idea of getting the hell out of Dodge is a good idea, but how can she do that & be with Edward?

I'm excited they're back together though. Team Jacob? I thought that was like unicorns.

Soooo looking forward to next chapter, thanks for writing;))

Great chapter, thanks for the update, I've been going through some BDR withdrawals.

Great burn on Rosalie, she's so deserving of it.

I'm so looking forward to next chapter, let me help you out w/hangover cures:

3 Advil or NSAID of your choice. along with non-greasy cheeseburger[bread works great at soaking up alcohol & protein good for you]

And there's always the: 3 Advil & restart the party all over again, preferably not with the same thing you got soused on, don't want to get sick. Champagne & O.J or Bloody Mary in the mornings doesn't make you look like such a drunk either.ha But ya know, we love that saying around our house...get a little Sheryl Crow going on in the morning, ie "All I wanna Do" you know the rest if not well...

Awww yes, their figuring it out, with a little help from their friends.;D) Great chapter.

I'm so glad you updated, I really like these characters, I was missing them.

<3<3

No, I did not see that coming. WTF  is right, with Bella & her self sabotage, hope she can keep some sort of morale or self respect going & not do James.

Lucky you with the MN tix, enjoy!

Can't wait for next chapter, great chapter, missing E's pov. I hope u can update soon.;)