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I am a 55yr+ old Mother/Grandmother and avid reader. My daughter is the one who introduced SM's Twilight to me in 2009. I loved them; couldn't read them fast enough or enough times. I even had them on audible to listen while I worked.. Oh, yeah definitely obsessed. I found Fan Fiction after hearing a interview with Peter Facinelli once a few years back, talking about the Twihard fans and all the stories on the internet. I did some searches and found FanFiction.net and of course Twilighted and then TWC. I must say I have such an addiction now, can't you tell...
E.L. James - Fifty Shades Triology (FanFiction MOTU I & MOTU II) OMG!!! Love "My Fifty" Just saying! Movie coming soon, hopefully!!!!
Sylvain Reynard's Gabriel's Inferno Series (FanFiction UOEM) "Professor Emerson" he just couldn't be more tortured and sexy if he tried. I would love to see this made into a movie as well...
These Two Highly successful Published Author's, were first FF writers! I humbly join the Millions of fans world wide in offering my heartfelt love and good wishes for their continued success as well as love and encouragement to all those Writers/Authors who so unselfishly give of your creative minds with the use of written word. I however am not one of the lucky who have the talent to do so, but love love love reading.
╔══╦══╦══╗ I have been diagnosed
║╔╗║╔═╣╔╗║ with Obsessive Cullen
║╚╝║╚═╣╚╝║ Disorder put this on your
╚══╩══╩══╝ profile if you've caught it to!
I so totally borrowed that from Shannon aka mustlovertp YUP very OCD here
I have many many favorite reads and authors: Just a few shout outs would be
- Robshandmonkey - love ya Drea EEK/Shhhhhh/Taboo/ (Just on TWC)
- SexyLexiCullen - OMG can we say MobWard QS/WS or DoctorWard TSOU/INI
- CaraNo - too flipping many to count :-) (Just on FF)
- Sarges Girls - Deb and Jen OMG can we say check out drtuno for the sexiest Mercenary on the planet
- mustlovertp -- hot hot InkWard a new story posted 6/15/12
- justginger/peoplelikeus -- Such a awesome writer! Poeple Like Us and Hope Springs
- Savage7289 - When Michael Sheen did the reading of Unexpected Circumstances I was enthralled.. what a story ...
- rbsschess - House of Hope and Be My Master Headmaster and Human Sexuality 101 - it's not just the lemons but the humor, depth of story plot all around great reads
- lmlx8 - Diamond in the Rough - does she ever get inside our heads and Bella and Edwards.... Louise really makes one think...
- littlecat358 - Unplanned Perfection and The Demons in My Dreams (Just on FF)
- Jenny0719 - Everything again by her is just enthralling and endearing making you read them over and over (Just on FF)
- JenGreen03 - Everything she does is AWESOME (Just on FF, maybe on Twilighted)
Again just a very small handful of over the top talented writers. Sadly more and more have left the fandom because of various reasons, I just wish to voice I appreciate everyone for their Talents regardless of where they are in the development of their abilities; cultivate that Talent! You are all enormously talented individuals and THIS reader/reviewer definitely appreciates everything you write...
Please please don't be offended if your not on my list above, I love all the stories I read and review... and some I don't .... Yes, I'm also a closet perv ***giggles and chuckles at self***
Oh, I am very much Team Edward and Bella - Love Taylor - not a fan of Jacob and Bella - but fine with those that do, just not my thing.... I love the HEA's just because I didn't have that in my marriage(s) doesn't mean I don't wish that for everyone else.... See I'm charitable.... :-) Laters All!!! Muah! Kathy
FYI: Can't wait for next months release of Cosmopolis!
SWATH was wonderful! Canne was such a treat if your a Robsten fan as I am... Kristen rawked the Red Carpet in that Red Dress, Geez I couldn't believe it....Rob is alway killer in a Tux...OMG!!! Heartfail! LOL!
Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.
Banner by Mehek18
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123485
Date: 27 May 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
Yes still here and happy to see posting
Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes?
Rated: M (18 and over)
AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Thank goodness!!!! Wonderful Chapter
Set during Breaking Dawn from September to December, this is my story of Edward and Bella’s voyage of sexual discovery from the first night they go to their cottage in the woods. Follow Bella's first night as a vampire after her tumultuous introduction to vampirehood, motherhood and meeting the Cullen family as an equal.
Told mostly from Bella's POV, it will take you on their journey of learning about each other, loving each other as they've craved since the beginning. Watch their tender bonding with beautiful Nessie and their interaction with the Cullen family through the weeks that follow until the arrival of the Volturi. All the Cullens are in the story, helping them adapt, as is Jacob's wolf pack.
Rated NC-17: Explicit lemony scenes and language almost from the start.
Note: This story has migrated across from the FanFiction site and is now up to date.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 93814 Read Count: 13398
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - SHOWERING WITH LOVE
wowsy!!!
A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366383
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Halloween Hook-Up
wow this is going to be fantastic if the this ONE chapter is any sort of indication!
Date: 07 May 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Learning to Breathe Again
this was fan-flippin-tastic!!! I knew she would finally come around, and she is by gosh!
Can't wait for more I will check out the blog!!!
thanks again
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 54: More Than Words
this has been a pretty engrossing story! it's really good!
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Finding Our Way
I love this story! Yes, it's slow going for our little couple right now, but Rome wasn't built in a day either. Time!!! It takes time!
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 56: You Found Me
what a great story and I really loved this chapter! I loved that Bella (BB) knows now that Numb is Edward, wonder what he is going to think when he finds out that Bella is BB....humm this should be interesting, hopefully it will help her see that he has been being so truthful with her since the return AND that he loved her all along.....
Cant wait for more!!!! so engrossing
Author's Response:
You'll see how they both react next Saturday! I really think you'll all be pleased with the reactions.
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 58: If At First
well i am so glad they finally - finally told Alice and Jasper! I hope they aren't going to be ticked that they did not find out sooner, after all both of them especially Jasper has been with Bella and Alice has been with Edward... Must not have negative reaction Alice.... Keep calm, but yes, that is how you render Alice speechless!
Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 59: The Reason
amazing chapter Alice is so cute I DID It!!!!!!! that was hysterical
Author's Response:
*Snorting* Yeah, Alice was too cute with her "I did it!" Though, Edward wasn't nearly as amused. LOL
AH After Bella Swan's best friend releases a portrait of her, it is purchased at an auction by Edward Masen, famous photographer and notorious modelizer. Edward seems to have an irresistible draw to Bella. Can Bella accept Edward's attention? Is there more to Edward's attentions than meet the eye? Originally by xx.Nikteche.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, TBR
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161174 Read Count: 174120
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Wow! Just speechless!!! So wonderful! I am a fan of Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights and didn't know what to think of this one, so it took me awhile to get into wanting to read it. I must say this was awh inspiring. The detail you put into making you be able to see in your mind the photographs he took of Bella were just incredible. Like his showpiece for the "Heavenly Muse" you really could see the exquiste picture in your mind.
Well just many details you brought to life in this story, thank you for that and thank you for sharing your wonderful talents with us.
Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.
Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...
Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?
Or are they both to stubborn?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108986
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
love it!!!! I agree with E who wants a parent to ask about your sex life... arrrgggg
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
the bathing suit is so cute and the wonderful storyline over breastfeeding in public is wonderful I never have understood why people get so upset for that when the mother and child are covered. seriously!!!!!.
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
well with such a busy and hectic life you still have wonderful talent just so you know you stories are appreciated
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
what a sweet and wonderful chapter
**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**
Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.
A dark journey of love, power and death.
All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD
Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.
A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Finding Purpose
oh so happy for the updated chapter. bless your heart for another wonderful and heart warming look at our characters, you are a very talented writer hope inspiration continues and again thank you for this wonderful story.
i see Charlie trying to Dad up with Bella but Edward does have it right Charlie and Renee were the ones who started with the abandonment issues for Bella
til next chapter happy writing Laters BB Kathy xoxoxo
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: We Gonna Run This Town
Wow!!! I'm not a violent person; HOWEVER, I loved this chapter!!! OMG Edward!!!! Fist Pumps for Bella and Triple Fist Pump for Monster!!! it's about time Demon Monster came around to Team Bella!!! Your a awsome writer I must say!!! On to the next Chapter.. (oh, and I think Esme is leaking information on the Clan to Aro)
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: I'll Always Come Home
That Tanya is such a vial Biotch! I am very hopeful that she will get what's coming to her eventually. I am very hopeful this is NOT a set up for dear Edward. Where is our beloved Emmett? Haven't heard from him lately, Oh I guess we did he had to take over for Seth right before the Ball and then this is the day after right... okay...I think i'm aware now of the time lines... The meadow scene Awhhhh!!! perfection!! Thanks for incorportating that into the story, even him having her on his back and running through the woods pretty cool!! Love Love Love the story, yes, i'm hooked!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Blood is pumping
Yes, I knew that it had to be Esme!!! Interesting! humm.... Well, I knew that Bella was going to break through Edwards defenses and it was wonderful! You really do have a way with graphics with this story!!! Yea, but I'm really hooked on this story however.... Can't wait for more....
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: I Would Die for You
I just love your mind, sometimes there is almost too much violence and gore; HOWEVER, then you have this inner monologue with the Demon's and Monster's and you can't help but laugh, so I say....BRAVO!!! you're just FanTabUlous~!!!
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Mothers, Fathers and Everything in Between
you just have to feel the sadness for the relationship from Hell that Our Emotionally detached Killing Machine Edward has with Esme and Carlilse!!!
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Becoming Whole Again
sometimes Monsters need something to redeem with them, and here is a Angel to assist with the Redemption
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: First Impressions are Forever
2nd time through the story again. Here I go!!!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Finding Purpose
Yay!!! Yay!!! Yay!!!! You are back with another wonderful Chapter!!!! So happy! Yes, RL can get busy, so glad things are calming down some. This was really a fantastic Chapter too, can't wait to hear more from Bella and see what she unleashes on E. Well we know that she is going to be too emotionally drained for sometime to deal with his return but our Bella is a fighter... we know this... look what she has endured thus far for Pete's Sake.
The Demon is continuing to rake him over the coals in regards to his treatment of Bella too I see, Love the Demon getting on him about how he is acting.
Bless Alice's heart, so happy she kept after him. Jasper was right in telling him about Bella moving out of the main house, surely when E has more time to think about it he will understand that she just couldn't bare to be inside with all the memories of a man that she saw and felt hated her, first for the betrayal (I don't think she betrayed him, but he does) and secondly for being pregnant with his child. Demon needs to remind him that it took two to tango in order to make that little angel Aidan and after all Aidan is his saving grace. Carlilse surprised me in a nice way with the feelings he shared in regards to Bella and reminding E about Redemption!
So Looking forward to more and then a Sequel.... Oh, I am just beside myself with anticiaption. So glad your back to writing and getting support from family and friends and hopefully fans too!!!!
Take care till the next update,
Laters B Kathy xoxo
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Happier Times
Hi Mandy -love love love this FF. You have done some superb work.... Although I can only image that it must have been difficult at times writing something so dark. However, I love it! TY so much for this chapter and glad that your back to writing. I totally have faith that you will finish the story and will remain patient as you have always assured us that you would finish this and I know you will.... so no worries that this fan will flounce... Not gonna happen.....
Okay so now we start the chapter off with humor if you ask me, Emmett and the Priest - Bless his "Godly heart" had no clue what he is getting himself into for the $300K he is being offered but hey, at least there will not be a dull moment in his travels. I am sure that he will never have the pleasure of something like marrying our wonderful Edward and Isabella again. LOL!
Really appreciated and enjoyed Tanya's end. Even though it might have been ghastly and perhaps gruesome it makes no difference to me nor did it to Alec, so it appears.. her end was how does one say??? Rather fitting? Yes, that's it. Rather fitting indeed! I know that you will have something wonderful FITTING as well planned for the demise of Mr. Devil Dommer wannabe Demitri.... Yes, like Bella said, our Edward is smarter than Demitiri, so I can't wait to see what Demon/Edward does to him.
Now for the Carlilse and Bella conversation well.... that was greatly anticipated and very rewarding I must admit, it was perfect. We can not expect Daddy C to just roll over and be Mr. Nicey Nice all of a sudden regardless of what transpired, he does see alot, and has opened his eyes to things like he said, but he is still Carlilse....
I love how the Demon loves Bella too... for some reason that is what has always endeared this story to me... well along with many, many other aspects but that something so demonic could have goodness and love, well it does give one hope, right!
I just think it is so cute and comical that Aidan only says Dada.... come on now everyone that is pretty funny considering... And Loved Loved Loved the fact Edward went to Ireland to get a Priest to marry them for Bella's benefit since she loves Ireland so much.
Okay so I've written my own novel here so I will sign off!!!! Happy Holiday's dear one and Happy New Year... till next time ALL THE BEST!!!! Kathy twifan1228
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Authors note
So excited to have this note from you....Totally support your need to recharge your batteries so to speak!!!! Can't wait for the next posting and all the very best in your own novel.... till next time!!! :-)
Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way. He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995705
Date: 25 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76
wow what another amazing chapter!!! phew! so happy the girls worked through that, I couldn't figure out what Alice's problem was honestly!!! Bella has grown in so many ways... Thanks so much for the wonderful chapter!!!
Author's Response:
thanks so much for the review
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70
Michele - What a chapter... OMG I could not believe that they first were plotting to make Esme jealous.. Now I get where they were coming from but seriously that is not Car and Essie!!!! I really loved how you let us catch a glimpse of what the early relationship of Carlilse and Esme were and how Esme has such similar issues of self as Bella did. Look at the way that Esme dealt with the realization that Carlilse was DONE so to speak, she took to her bed and depression not so unlike our Bella, right?!
I said you go Esme when she decided to follow Carlilse, Edward and Bella to Forks, well I just loved the entire chapter...
Baby Boom here we come.... yes sir're!!!! Can't wait for more. I clicked on the ROAR link... I had been searching high and low for "This Hungry World" I knew I had read all of the trilogy and couldn't locate it anywhere, well that's because lolashoes is no longer writing... But at least I knew I had not dreamt that series. LOL! Her stories were wonderful!!!!
Okay till next chapter you have the best of days!!! and of course NIGHTS too!
Author's Response:
thanks so much for the review and the comments - I couldn't believe that after all this time RAOR is not going to be posting again!!! I was shocked, so please go into the completed fics and get the links to all the stories that you want. Be sure to read the postings and the comments, I have read such great stories from rec's that other readers posted after the reviews.
xoxo
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
Wow that was an amazing Chapter!!!! Thank you! Loved it when she told Renee off, I couldn't believe that witch!!! Edward, seriously dude, when will he listen about Bella's weight! **chuckle chuckle** Amazing story I have really enjoyed this very much and hope that you have more to come and other stories as well!!!
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
Thank you so much for this wonderful chapter, I just could not figure out where Edward was coming from over his Anger with Bella, when she did not telling him about being sick that one day, UNTIL he went on to explain about her well-being in relation to the playroom. However, this was something that Bella should have known, I'm so glad that Kate seems to have gotten through to her. Wow when Kate laid the law down that was something.. Can't wait to see what more is coming. Yes, I can see that this is going to need to go on further, I would think much further, there is still lots and lots to cover. Thanks again for the wonderful story that keeps me vey addicted... till next update!!!!!
Author's Response:
Bella will learn more and more - thanks for the review and the comments.
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
Awesome Chapter!!!! Boy, we can really see the growth in Bella can't we! I laugh so much sometimes at your writing of Alice and her Pixie personality... Just call up Don and say "Yes, can you just UPS tha dress over to me Please!" LOLOLOL!! That was pretty funny. Oh and how Harry!!! Harry her lovely "friend" set her up! That was pretty hysterical...I laughed and laughed and laughed over that one. I am alway so happy when I get an e-mail alert on my cell phone showing me another Chapter update for your story.. This is aweome!!!!
I have ready "Edward's Eternal Kiss" you are very right and accurate in your recommendation of that Story!!! The latest Chapter we really see a evil minded VampDon!
Thanks again for your wonderful engrossing story!!
Author's Response:
thank you - the UPS comments had me in stitches! I tried to imagine what Bella would say and then I thought of Alice's response - well - I got some funny looks at home with all the snorting that I did
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
Wow!!! That was something right off the bat Esme and Riley!!! Holy Cow! Never saw that coming at all always wondered if Riley would openly hit on Bella since she has herself together now, but I really think that we have indeed covered this fact, he likes blondes right!? Anyway, this was pretty good. I think I would still like to see some of Edwards jealous side come back out where Bella is concerned; with that being said, this is your story and it's ABSOULTELY marvelous and enthralling. You do with this story as YOU see fit. Yes, I would love to see a OUTTAKE out what happened with Andersen's encounterdiscussion if you will, with Riley, as well as Carlilse and Esme!!!
I loved it when Bella asked Carlilse if he wanted to borrow her bristle brush!!! LOL!! Then his response was no he had things to use. Hummmmm!!!! What has Daddy Cullen learned from the Edward, Jasper and Garrett!?!? I'm just saying, it was cute, you know we all laughed and went hummmm go Carlilse!!!
Is Bella ever going to feel like he's pushed her to far? Sometimes I feel sorry for her, like when he became pretty irate at her when she almost hit the desk, "she was thinking he wouldn't let anything happen to her." I guess I didn't fully get why he got so angry with her. I understand her head wasn't where it needed to be and she could have been hurt, but she was being honest and truthful with him.
I can't wait for more of the story.. They should be getting ready to go to CA for the awards right!?
Again, Happy Holiday's and thanks for the recommends I think I will check those stories out. I'm with you I've kinda leaned away from the Gay Edward and Sub Edward Stories; but I will check this one out since YOU recommened it.
Have a good one, and happy writing and being inspired....
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
Merry Christmas to you too!!! Loved the chapter, was not sure where we were going with Bella's attitude in the very beginning of the chapter, but it became very clear shortly. The Carlilse and Esme phone call was interesting!! LOL! I look forward to reading the outtake on that one, it should be very interesting, and yummy!!!
So Riley has a black eye!? Do we know that Andersen did that? Or someone else!? Doesn't exactly matter but glad that Riley finally saw Bella's work, and so excited to see what happens when she has her showings. Things are moving right along for our little couple.....
You have a plateful it appears and I for one appreciate your dedication to the integrity of this story and desire to do yourself and the story justice by NOT forcing yourself to continue overdoing!!! Sorry about the car issues you have recently experienced, hopefully they will all work out for the best!!! Take a deep breathe and know that you have prayers of encouragment being sent your way!!! till next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Hi there!
We will find out who hit Riley. Promise.
Check out the outtake next week
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
Hi Michelle-
Well Mercy to answer your Q: Edward was much harder on Bella, or don't you think he was hard enough?? Hell Yes, he was harder on her. I was throwing the tantrum for her, since she was wise enough not too. I know that he wa only doing what he was suppose to be doing, but it's not like she was throwing a fit that he was gone or anything, she was working. I whincing thinking about the 20 more she gets tomorrow and 15 more on Monday... Ouch, Holy Hell, and FUCK!!!
Oh I suppose that I am just being whinny myself but I thought all of them totally over reacted in this instance, BUT she had agreed to be is submissive and all that it would entail, so she was fully aware of the consequences would be and she became unware and of the negelect she was in fact allowing to take place. I was going to Safeword for her if she didn't, but I guess it just wouldn't have the same effect now would it?! Guess not!
I loved her trip to Seattle to see Charlie, Sue and Seth. That was sweet and a very necessary part of the story, even though was anxious for her to arrive in LA to find out what Master had in mind. I also was glad to see the closure between Billy Black and Bella, it's not like she took a gun or a bottle and said, I'm gonna kill you it was something that happened in Self Defense, so that was nice that Billy came to terms with it and had the chance to voice that to Bella personally. I also hope that Charlie, Sue and Seth do have the chance to make it to her Show in San Diego at least, as that will be the truly 1st Night and how special that would be. I am still wondering though if Edward and Jasper are going to be able to make a strong appearance at those events - because my conern is that it would detract from Bella and make it more about the "Stars" themselves, see where I'm going with that?!
This is such a great story and love how you keep us so entertained and wanting more and more of them. I hope this goes on forever. JK, no really I'm not, I Really like your writing style so please write more...
Happy New Year to you and hope that 2011 turns out to be a Awesome year for ya!!!
Thanks for reading my ramblings in this review.
Kathy
Author's Response:
Kathy, you keep me entertained! I was laughing so hard when I read your take on the punishment! Now come on, it's not like he left her high and dry!!! He did make sure that his girl was taken care of and like he said, her ass would remember, but they were still going have some fun! I think you will like the next chapter - we will finish the weekend and then it's off to Lake Tahoe with the gang.
It is good to see her blending with her new step family as well and I will see what I can do about getting them to see her work.
Talk soon Kathy.
Love,
Michele
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57
Michelle-
What a wonderful Chapter!!!! So sorry we all became a little verbal regarding the prior Chapter! I loved the Chapter, I was just feeling for her and TOTALLY Engrossed in the story! Whew just thinking about it makes my backside tingle. But Everyone must admit he made the point apparently, she has been remembering to care for Her Master's Little Girl!
Poor Emmett & Rose, I am sure that alot of husband's have felt that way from time to time, bless their hearts.....
Oscars: Hrmpfff Heidi when are you going to get it Edward Cullen is NOT interested in anyone but Isabella Swan (EEEEE soon to be Cullen) Loved how Bella stood up and just plainly stood her ground! Really cool how you used Twilight and Jackson along with Ashley LOL!!! that was totally cute! Now he has proposed awesome, so happy! Yay! Yay!
Love this story so much; Kudos!! Keep them coming! Till next time, stay inspired!
Laters BB
Kathy xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comments and the review Kathy. and you guys inspire me so much (hence the almost 27000 word chapter) - I figure if you have to wait 2 weeks for a chapter, I need to make it worth your while!
lots of love,
Michele
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
I don't even know where to begin with this review. EXCEPT Wonderful, Amazing, Outstanding, Incredible!!! Just to mention a few. :-)
I will say the Carlisle and Esme stuff was pretty full on surprising to me, that they really are getting into the lifestyle, I mean.. I mean I get that they were sort of ..hm.. um... experimenting with different things, but now Esme is Collard, love it. This could be very interesting in a Sequel!!! Hint Hint... Yes, my vote, if you will.... is definately MORE!!! of this wonderful story. I still think there is much remaining that can be covered.
Love when Photo's are used, it just gives the story that little extra. After all most people are visual individuals. I personally love all the house pictures that you get alot of times with some of the FanFic's... Your story here really Rocks and I love it totally!
Gotta run, can't wait for the next installmentchapter....Oh and I get the thoughts and feelingss that both Bella and Edward seem to experience over their craft, Bella and selling her Art and Edward with his Movies... Yes, that was great to cover this!
Okay, Laters BB Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
Hi Kathy,
thanks so much for your feedback, it's really helpful and encouraging. Outtake up sometime this week. xoxo
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
Michelle- As usual, you our amazing author have out done yourself with this Chapter! I loved the attention and devotion that Domward showed to Bella the day before they left on the trip to LA, Fantastic, this truly shows what a in tune and extremely adept Dominate that he is. The tethering of her for the day was perfect! Giving her the choice of Coffee, or sucking his cock her two FAV things... well that was pretty Sweet and cruel *snide chuckle* if you ask me. But hey, that's what makes this such an amazing story.
I cried and cried and cried when Bella was having her moments of doubt with herself and abilities @ the hotel while Edward was gone... *sniffles* When Brian helped her understand about tipping and such well that was very sweet and kind of Brian to help her and not make her feel bad. Then... when Bella comes to the conclusion that E was angry with her over Money! Oh, I just cried when she said if I pay for things then he wouldn't hate her and want to leave her like her. Then when she feared that she could become like Charlie! Wow! This was really a powerful chapter.
Okay till next time. Laters BB Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Kathy - I just couldn't gloss over the gaping differences between them, Bella has a lot to learn and accept about their life together. Brian really came into his own this chapter and he will be having that conversation with Edward. It will come out and it should because although Edward and Bella came to an arrangement about their finances, he doesn't quite understand that there are lots of things that she doesn't know and understand about the way he lives.
Thanks for your review. I appreciate your comments.
Michele
xoxo
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74
wow lots and lots going on with this chapter!!! bambino's are here along with new little cousin yes the group is certainly becoming quite prolific with all the little ones... this is such a great story I would love to see what happens with all the children.... Bella will never cease to be Bella that's for sure as we see in this chapter she was like a hormonal tazmanina devil of sorts... But she got through it. when she was having issues with the exercising from less than a day following delivery I was thinking Holy Cow Domward is going to NEED to pay a visit.... Esme and Maggie are so wonderful wouldn't we all have been so fortunate to have someone like them in our lives!!!??? Well thanks for this Fan-freakin-tastic chapter!!! See you next update and take care in the interim!!!! LatersBB Kathy xoxoxoxo
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
Wow - you have had your hands full recently with RL, bless your heart.. This was a awesome chapter, I was so appauled by the rantings of Renee, I was just totally blown away at the nerve and the down right cruelness of such a MONSTER that produced Bella.. that was truly something. So proud of Bella for hitting her. Can't wait to see what was in Phil's letter.
Locations for the Wedding...hummm...I know that they have time restrictive schedules BUT I think if you look at this story in it's entirity and how it all began, the most ideal location would be The house @ Lake Como on the Yatch, if they are having a intimate affair or Rent a Larger Yatch to accomadate the number they need, then they can also charter a Jet for the friends and family to get there. See simple and very symbolic of where they began their relationship. Hawaii would always be nice and wonderful too, again time contraints...hummmm!!! Hope other's have some wonderful ideas.
As for the demonstration at the play party huh! That's a difficult one! Can't personally wait to see what other readers say too! Sorry no suggestion from me. :-(
You have wonderful days ahead and will anxiously await the next update... Your one of the best of the best when it comes to creative writing and BDSM stories... I have found myself sometimes so frustrated with Bella, but you always manage to bring me around and make me understand her. What can I say Edward Domward is just... gosh makes me gush..hehehehe!!! Something about that man with his hands on your scalp washing your hair, and showers with him! Holy Hell!!! well.... NUFF said right!!!
Later BB Kathy xoxo
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
Holy Shit Michele ~ So awesome! Lets back up to Heidi and Felix - Bella, you go girl that was powerful!!!! 8 "O's" Edward, shit what were you trying to do kill her?! Just kidding she deserved them that's for sure.... hehehehehe! We know how much joy he got out of that, seriously! The trip was such a wonderful thing for them to do, what an adventure and stress reliever too! Way to go Emmett! I was right there with the 3 ladies rolling with laughter at the thoughts of the doctor asking if Bella and Edward needed diagrams for sexual positions.... that shit was hysterical! I'm surprised that Edward didn't fall out in the Dr's office over that one, but then again, he was still pretty upset, so yea, guess he didn't find it too comical at that point...
Now that shit with Renee... hum... gotta think about that! Charlie is the Father of Bella and Renee isn't???? WTF? How is that even possible that this would be something that Charlie wouldn't be aware of? I'm confused!!!! Can't wait till the next chapter update...
You are so rocking with those Rec's Robshandmonkey "Ssssssh" is an incredible BDSM read; this one has me so engrossed... no kidding! and Chefward - "Wild by Peppahlouie" well there is another sick-sex-o-fantic Renee for you! Great story there too! I have a recommend for you, over on FF it's "Firefly in Summer by PrimaryColor" This one is a WIP and its really something, really! Several author's are recommending it too! Please have a inspiring week, once again loved this long chapter it was Fantastic. TTFN Kathy xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
thanks darling - now if you can tell me or anyone can why I can't post my chapter on FF - I will be thrilled! I tried to all last night, and it's now 5 a.m. and I got up early to post before work but nothing is happening@ Grrr
All will be revealed and it is so believable you will kick yourself xoxo
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63
Well that was HOT! (the munch) loved the jogging suit and the fact that he made her scream his name so everyone could over hear! yep that is our Caveman DomWard and personally I love this trait in him. It's so reassuring to Bella once more showing how they TOTALLY are Soulmates in everyway, they each need this sense of ownership of each other, they truly are that final piece of the puzzle if you will. He was not and can not be happy without her and likewise Bella is totally lost without him.
I do see that still with all the growth she has managed to achieve, she does not see herself clearly and I am not sure that it will come easily or soon, I think that is only to be expected though.
The location of the wedding is totally incredible...unbelievably fabulous! The Great Uncles are too much!!!! Honestly every story needs Great Unc's like them, they are such a riot! The overprotectiveness of Charlie was really cute... I had to snicker too when Edward said, "For Fuck's sake we live together, what does he think goes on? We play TWISTER or something?" So sorry but that was so true and comical...
Sad sweet Bella, one can only imagine what the ramifications of that Letter are. I wonder what on earth Phil could have said in that letter!
I am sorry that i have to ask this, but can a get a clearer understanding of what Bella's gift of Edward was. sorry I just didnt get it, unless it was something from her Submissive collar.
Okay ready for some wonderful Wedding yummies as well as honeymoon and then to find out about the terrible travesty of that Crazy letter...
Oh, I hope it goes without saying.... Another Rocking Chapter!!!!!
Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Hey Kathy, thanks so much for your great review and comments. There will be pics of their wedding gifts to each other, her dress, as well as wedding reception, cake etc.
The letter will be up soon. I love Charlie - he is such a contradiction - all gruff and sweet at the same time! update soon xoxo
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64
OMG - Thank you so much for NOT leaving us hanging with the ending... You rock!!!! I have to come up with a better term... Needless to say your on the top of my FAVORITE list today!!! **snickers and giggles**
Okay the wedding sweet and lovely everything E & B are! Just perfection! Simplistic and Elegant! Thanks for the photo's loved the gifts they gave one another. I really liked what she did for him with the gold cuff links. His gift to her was total perfection! The fight they had on their honeymoon was in keeping with BD that's for sure, just made it applicable to our story here ~PLU~ so, kuddos, good job! Thank you for showing our Bella continuing to use all the wonderful lessons that she has learned over the past months since being in therapy with Jared, she had NO meltdowns that was perfect, she truly is a strong woman.
Jazz what would we do without your wonderful Texas horse sense?! You make Edward our hard headed; sexy as hell; obessively over protective Dom finally come to his senses and call his wife to apologize... thank you Jazz!!!!
Hello ~~~ thank you Brian for sensing something was up with "Tory"
Man alive Felix, damn I hope he thinks with his NEXT celebrity client before ATTEMPTING to block the instincts of a security person, who I might add is entrusted to Protect said Celebrity Client.... Thank goodness for Brian's instincts!!!! Hope he gets a wonderful reward in this story for his heorics.. :-)
Okay I won't rail on the Nurse, she didn't know Edward was married after all he is a celebrity and it wasn't really out there yet. Way to stand up for yourself Bella! Thank heaven's for a great team of Dr's and Nurses!!!!
Yay! He's awake ~ will be oh, so.... ready for the next chapter...... Way to go!!
Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your awesome review Kathy, you are making me blush!Yeah our boy sure knows how to throw a spanner into the works! and he isn't a good patient so he is going to try Bella's to the hilt. Update soon (next week - this was a bonus) xoxo
Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67
well my gosh that was such a twist with Bella's birth mother... still not sure why Renè would do such a thing to someone but at least Bella knows that she is not biologically connected to that wicked woman in any way at all.
Edward did ramp it up in the playroom, im not sure why he has started calling her his little slut, BUT thats something for him and his pet, not me. im just used to seeing and feeling the tenderness he feels for her in everything that he does even the punishments he can still feel the tenderness whether its the hurt and disappointment that he experienced or just frustration and anger.
as for whats up with Bella at the end and her conversation with Alice, i think she either has a show that she much be on the road for or she wants to start a family
Author's Response:
thanks for the comments and the review - update soon xoxo
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US
I don't think I have ever laughed so hard at Edward and Bella than I did in this Chapter Especially when he went straight from the car to his office out got out the Patron Silver all the while leaving Bella sitting in the car... Damn that was funny LMAO!!!!
Dang now for more serious story line issues I hope the doctor gives something for the nauseau remember how sick Rose was everyone, Bella will get through this too!!!! Sick Momma C and Daddy C are heating up the drama that's for sure.. this just keeps getting better and better...
Author's Response:
Hi,
I will admit that I had a few laughs during the writing of this chapter as well. Bella will be well taken care of, don't worry, in fact with how Edward tends to over react, she will probably be over taken care of.
more up in a couple of weeks.
Michele
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69
Holy Shit Michelle~ I do see why you reposted the chapter and THANK GOD that is all I can say, I laughed all over again in the same places over the Patron Silver and then the TANTRUM BELLA threw well that was just priceless...Perfection however, was when she threw the pencils and hit him in the head.. OMG!!!!! Then she tells him that her aim was off, SHIT!!!! LMAO! (Pure fucking genius in the writing of this chapter)
Carlilse and Esme well the shit's gonna hit the fan next chapter I can already see it now... Holy Hell those two are even MORE stubborn than Edward and Bella, but then again C & E are a little older and are not as easily humbled after all the years together, sometimes that does happen in a relationship - I think it's called entitlement.. One person thinking they are more entitled to feelings or emotions more than the other one... We all know they will get through this with the love of this wonderful family... But damn the drama is so engrossing, LOVE the drama.... and still get the hot sex of the wonderful E & B..... Second trimester should be fantabulous with E & B.... *snide smirk* **hiding under the covers and giggling**
Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Hey Kathy,
You had me giggling over your review! Thank you so much for investing the time to re read what I wrote and I am so glad that you liked it! Fun and games and loving next chapter.
thanks again,
Michele
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72
Oh Michelle - Outstanding, Exquisite and Fuck Hot! just a few words to describe this fantastic chapter. Yea Edward just a little bit of overkill with the Armored SUV; but yep I can see that ou Edward would come up with that. Honestly I am so excited about the Ranch and can't wait for it to be complete and know that your going to have some kickass pictures for us..
The Spa retreat, OMG loved how Dan-Dan was based off of RW, Love her so much! Suzy and Lauren well that was so hurtful to see Bella go through but then to see Bella face Lauren and Suzy in such a woderfully empowered way, well just goes to show us once more how far Bella has come. She may still struggle daily simply because it may very well be a lifelong struggle but she has her greater inner awareness that Edward her children and family are what is important and nothing more. I just love this entire story and can't wait for more. Selfishly I hope it never ends....
Have a good weekend and days ahead till next update - Leaving you with my heartfelt praises of your talents and abilities.... Later Kathy xoxoxoxo
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75
wow this was wonderful.. I really LOVED the pics.. Yes lots going on in this chapter. I was not surprised by the fact he wanted to do the 3month arrangement like he did, Bella has to get control and the only way she seems to be able to do that is by letting Edward take full control of her in everyway... Wow large family ... yes I can see this for them...I know this story has been so special and close to your heart, but I just wanted you to know your fans, this one in particular is very attached to this story and the characters too!!! Sometimes I find yself crying right along with Bella or hurting with Edward.. You certainly have a special gift and talent, not just for writing but for pulling your readers in, and making them feel so attached and invested in the story... I am sooo... looking forward to the new Story too!!! I know it will be incredible!!! Have a rockin week and weeks ahead.. until the next chapter all the best ... Kathy xoxox
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your very kind comments and your review, I really feel quite humble! Thanks Kathy,
Michele xoxo
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
okay reality is that I am sure things like this do happen im the movie Industry, but this Edward and Bella this entire story we have known how deeply in love and devoted Edward is to Bella... the boy needs to pull his head out and remember that Skank -vs- devoted Submissive wife and mother of his children, who puts everyones needs first... I think when we look at it from that POV we have a clear winner... And definitely total Faith in the author **You Ms Michele**
Kate and Garrett too will overcome these trials and come through stronger... It's just trying for couples trying to do so much sometimes... what shocks me is how with all the money all these people have get some Nanny help folks...LOL!!!! This was a great chapter and I love this story Please don't think I was bashing.. I wasn't I was just surprised that Edward kept things from Bella...
But I just want to broach this **don't throw rotten tomatoes** How would either Edward or Garrett feel if it was them with the shoe on the other foot?!?! I'm just saying to be true to this story we need to keep in mind the honesty and trust each of these couples have built and strengthened through the years.
Author's Response:
I loved your review! Geez, I didn't realise what i was getting into when I began writing Irina into the story. I gues I was just thinking about Brad and Angelina and how things happen, you know and then I thought "how would our hero handle it?"
They will all get through this and there is no way on God's green earth that I will allow Edward to cheat on Bella! I'm sure that ego's do get in the way when there are so many beautiful women around that want you and it's hard to focus are away from home, BUT I'M JUST SAYING - there is no way that he or Garrett will stray!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
You are such a beloved writer/Author!! Yep can totally see how Egos can be manipulated as well as mind sets when you are taking on a persona or role... thanks for the conforting words in your response... Faith in our Author :-)
Date: 21 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
Wow!!! what a wonderful chapter!!! Yes, relief abounds in reading this.. it makes more sense and understanding on Hearing Edward's explaination of his guilt over his bodies response to being aroused, not that he was aroused by the woman, but the warm soft body, while he was really thinking of Bella. This sort of thing can happen sadly enough in any marriage if one is not aware of staying AWARE open and honest with you partner... Great Fantastic chapter!!!! I loved how you pointed out and showed that Edward is selfish and he knows it, funny thing was Bella is the one that sill had to bring the topic up he was not willingly opening up, he put in her court by having her talk to him, rather than him just saying... Bella, I need to talk with you about issues I had while we were apart or something like that..so Kate had some Post Partum depression that too, explains alot!!! Great chapter!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your comments and your review
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79
Michele- Girl!!!! Oh, flip Uncles are so Amazing, Wonderful, adorable and extremely talented in the art of vengence...... what a vile woman, Irene was.... I was even shocked at some of the things that spewd from her mouth....but I must back up to the first part of the chapter and the Steaks... OMG!!! I know there were unlying things at play in Bella's mind but wholly shit this girl, when she's pregnant has no self preservation does she? Arguing with and showing disrespect and rudeness to THE Mentor of her Dom, Garrett, while she was collard by her Dom, wholly crow I was rolling with Laughter, but the poor girl couldn't really help her tantrum considering the pregnancy hormones and all. You must admit that sounded plausible anyway...... Darn I just love this story and I am so flippin happy about a sequel..... Oh yea I can definitely see baby Stevie growing into a Dom and may Tiffany with him or even Lexi.... Then You have Zoe's new baby too to work in that whole relm. Oh the possibilities!!! Loved the entire chapter and I really loved Lexy walking first and how much of a daddy's girl she is. I missed Anderson and Bryan in this chapter but they do have lives now... but still missed them.. Loved Charlie, Sue and Billy... what a wonderful and endearing time they had over the time they were all together... Yes a little Master Whitlock!!! excited for the next post....
Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80
Yes Yes BD Part 1 was so fantastic!!! I too, went Friday night with my daughter, I must admit I also found the wedding and reception to be perhaps some of my favorites of the movie.. It was well done all around... If there was anything I didn't like totally it would be the "look and texture of the blood and afterbirth" on the baby and Edward's clothing....Everything else was done wonderfully from the story line to the acting... Top notch!!!
You have out done yourself with another exquisite chapter!!!!! Thank you!!!!
This chapter had so much happening and I loved how they named the new baby after Uncle Nic, that's awesome and hearing more about Esme's story was just wonderful...loved how Edward thought he had the special touch when it came to having toddlers and a newborn...I guess little Jackson and Alexis taught you huh Daddy!!!! LOL! What a wonderful birthday present Edward gave to Bella that was preety awesome of him, but then again he seems to ALWAYS know what she needs before she does, I can see that see is putting her painting aside for the children and she truly does need another outlet aside from just the children, but this is what makes Bella such a good mother
Bella swan is the most popular of singers in Chicago. Edward is the drinking/ smoker/ handsome mob boss who walks into Bella’s fathers club to collect a debt. While Aro gets the money Edward and his associates wait and listen to the music, that’s when Edward first lay eyes on Bella Swan and was determined to make her his.
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Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
this is a interesting story! Kinda reminds me of the roaring twenties sort of!
Bella thinks she has her life figured out. She has the best father and brother but all too soon her life comes shattering down around her. Will Edward be able to help her? E/B, Em/R, J/A AH & NC-17 for lemons.
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Date: 24 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
omg 3 sets of twins I love it!
Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback. Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two? Rated NC-17 for language, lemons. An entry in The Sport of Love contest.
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Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
i love it what a interview
Author's Response:
Thank you! One for the ages :)
Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC
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Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: All or Nothing
Holy Shit 2 chapters! I love this story and have had ISP issues otherwise you woulld have seen me reviewing sooner.... You rock and so excited and things worked out.
I just love this sort of Bachelor Party!!!! Obviously our wonderful Lust filled Edward did too!
Going to the Chapel .......and we're gon......na get married......... Love my RockWard!!!!
Are we going to see a family for them? Just wondering, he's not getting any younger after all....
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
This is one hell'va story and I am hooked! You Rock!!! Boy, can't wait to read more!
Kathy
xoxo
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
I really enjoyed this chapter and the discussion that Edward had with Emilliano, that was pretty right on. I also think it was important for us to see some sort of inner struggle with Bella and Mateo because he was a close friend of hers since she was 6 yrs old, and they shared alot of special things, so she thought, together. This is exactly why we like and love Bella, she is loyal and cares for those around her, IF they show her kindness and consideration where she is able to develope a bond with them. She was also able to see that what she feels for Edward could never compare to any feelings that she could ever have witth someone else. Great story, looking forward to seeing what happens with the band, I hope for Heaven's Sake they all pull their Heads out and I mean Jasper (althought it pains me to say) and Emmett, I think Rose was already starting to come around. We shall see perhaps you have more drama in mind for this Band.
On to the next Chapter Oh I am really hoping that you are going to let Bella and Edward have kids soon too, well in accordance with what you see as an appropriate timeline of course. Your, the author after all... :-) :-) :-)
Kathy
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
Great Chapter, so glad they were able to hash things out. I was worried for a few minutes with my boy "J" that's just not like him. I did see where he was sort'a coming from, but at the same time, he was not clearly recalling or giving credit to Edward and everything that he had done all those years.. They worked it out and that's what matters.
Freudian slip hey!! Well I'm sort'a hoping that it's not a slip and that she is preggers, buts that just my hopes.. You have my thoughts on your in control and you say what's what in this plot line... HEHEHEHE!!!
Much love for your writing and story,
Kathy
xoxo
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
Let me just say I'm really pissed at the way Charlie Asswipe acted; and Loved when Capo pissed on Gianna, that was too priceless. Now Collin has to be stopped this is getting crazy!! I want to come through this computer screen and beat the crap ola out of him!!! Hey, I'm really not a violent person at all but this guy could and would do anything. Just a sick Bastard that's what I say!
On to the next Chapter...
Laters
Kathy xoxo
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
Okay now I feel like a Ass myself for calling Charlie a Asswipe, since he did Man up and made a mends with both Edward and Bella and appears to be doing all he can do to help.
Now Bella, Bella, Bella don't you go getting yourself into trouble, deep!!! I worry about this girl, but I am hopeful that she will be fine. Let's see!
Onto the next chapter
Laters BB
Kathy xoxo
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Miss You
what the heck...please dont leave me this way....I am on my knees begging for the next chapter.. petty please... this is great!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Desire
this is my second time through this story I did not review on all the chapters last time I was sooo engrossed in the story, but now I will take time and review. I absoutly love the characters and the way they are portrayed, Especially Edward and Bella, very strong Bella even though she can be vunerable at the same time. Awesome!!
Laters BB
Kathy
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
Okay now that was even hotter the second read through!! Holy Hell!!
Laters BB
Kathy
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
That was wonderful, Thank YOU, Thank YOU so very much for the newest chapter! I knew it was that rotten to the core worthless Gianna! I can't to see what you have in store for her in the form of KARMA! (insert evil smirk)...
Rose well, she was trying to help and you do kind of feel sad, NOT sorry, sad for her... Her is my reasoning, she is the one that is always pointing out to everyone else all of their short comings and imperfections, as well as making those comments about "settling" The only person that is settling is Rose! We ALL have imperfections and shortcomings - Those who live in Glass Houses should NOT cast Stones!!!!
Great Chapter, Love, Love, Love the story and Love our Hot, SEXY as HELL Rocker Edward, oh yeah love a CAVEWARD too!!!
Please have a great weekend and take care, till next update CHEERS...
Laters BB Kathy xoxo
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Woman
OMG I am so sad and sorry about your loss!!!!! That is horrible. Rebuilding can be a challenge, but your right, at least you were blessed with the survival of those that are most important your family and (pets)....
So very happy you are back with the story.... I was just getting ready to send you a email of encouragement for the story when I got the notice of the update... This was a wonderful chapter and Em and Jazz just suck... poor Ali for Jazz to talk that way, just makes me want to hit him..... Oh well... such is life, Bella's mom showed herself to be the wonderful piece of work that she can be didn't she..... Loved the song and how he sang it to her with her by his side.
Can't wait for more and good luck with everything. You are the best!
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Patience
what the F@@@ is up with that damn Gianna I don't recall the timeframe we have going here so not sure if this could be E's or not.. That wicked crazy biotch... Man Emmett get a grip keep your hands off of someone elses wife.. Love snarky fiesty Bella taking up for herself Love the story and so happy that you posted a update... You Rawk as always.... Laters BB Kathy
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Barracuda
it might be the law but it sucks. what a bitch Gianna is.. i knew she would pull that shit because its true she made the accusation knew she wasn't going to be forced into a paternity test and all she was needing was time cause people tend to think the worst of stars... so it will be assumed like Bella was thinking that Edward ignored thid other child for his and Bella's baby.. so not cool. Can't wait to see what you come up with..... Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Hit Me With Your Best Shot
well seriously one had to wonder just how long Bella could honestly take it before it all got to her and she blew.. and BLOW SHE DID!!! Wise words Lizzy, Edward does love her beyond all reason... But, Edward was right too he was being treated like dog shit by her... she may be hormonal, but what is all this doing to him?!?! Think about iit, he was known for being a Manwhore when it came to women, but he never was known as a liar... and thats just one more thing thats eating him up ... but Bella doubting him has to hurt like nothing else... take back of words are Not easily done, forgiveness of that can only come with time.... love this story and was so happy for this chapter
Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom. Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants. Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom. Can she get him? - Maybe!
My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.
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Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123434
Date: 15 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Be My Master
you are a tantalizimg writer that's for sure
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth
Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material
Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76139
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: TPOV
Tanya was always crazy and ths just proved it... sad, but true... Crazy that she thought that she could force someone into a fling and sad that she thought Edward wanted more from her.
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Oh so happy your back with another chapter! I know that RL can get sticky sometimes, but for whatever reason... its a non issue, I love this story and can't wait to see what you have planned... I have been patient and hope that all is well and your able to write now...
Jasper, no didn't think it was Jasper following her. Surprisingly Charlie believed her story. Hummmm didn't full understand that she did see his playroom and Yeah! I guess it could be scary if she was unaware... Edward is such a georgeous and good guy I hope she gives him a chance, I think he could bring her to great heights and pleasure, lets face it... Our Bella could use some pleasure in her life.
Anxious for more!!!! Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Edward Mason is the leader of Mason Corporations. Isabella Swan is set to take over leadership of Swan industries from her ill father Charlie Swan. He wants Swan Industries, she wants Mason Corporations, but their Father's have a different plan for the two to get what they want...how will they take it and how will it all work. SOME CONTENTS ARE FOR THOSE WHO ARE, AT LEAST, 17 AND OVER.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 237944 Read Count: 56378
Date: 11 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 17: The Next Step
I love this story
Author's Response:
thank you
After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!
AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297704
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue nr 1
I am so excited your doing a sequel!!! Jumping up and down clapping!!!!! Merry Christmas and HAPPY New Year! Loved the Epilouge!!! thanks!!!
Author's Response:
I'm excited, too! :D
I hope you have a great Holiday too!
xx
Gelix
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Purple Nurple
OMG!! I forgot to post on the last Chapter so I will cover both Chapters here. Our lovely Bella is true to form "she just doesn't see herself very clearly" does she? I think thats what we all love about Bella she doesn't know she is a beauty. Now for EPOV well Eddie Eddie Eddie dude you were hanging all over some chick and drooling over Bella.. Interesting. Can't wait for the next Chapter. Sorry really enjoy your writing style and love the synopsis of this story, seems pretty interesting and thanks for giving us all the chance to read it. Keep up the wondering writing. Happy Thanksgiving
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mrs. Cullen
LOL I love Edward!!!! "I now realized I had a 24 hour drive back to Seattle alone with Bella. A huge smile spread across my face." You just have to love a mind that thinks this way, your a wonderful writer and I hope that you stay motivated with this story and other's in the future. Great story line!!!
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Road trip
Yes, Yes, Yes!!! Loving this story!!!! One year here we go!!! Bless the 20 questions. Yeah, NO I didn't think they had sex, but very curious as to what was going on when she was crying that time Edward saw her. Hummmmmm
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Time goes by
Okay Okay so I got engrossed in the reading and forgot to post after each chapter. Im really loving the story. Ready for some more warming up with Bella and Edward, but I am not worried I know it's going to come, am I right? Sure I'm right!! Love your work and can't wait to read the rest.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Goodbye
okay just read the AN and yes, yes, yes!! I hope its the chapter I have been waiting for too. But let me just say before we move on to that chapter that the inner action with Bella Edward and Jessica was so cute!!! Loved it. I am sure it was very empowering for Bella! Great story
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Past
That was awesome!! I loved it when he thought she was going to Jump and he tells her not to leave him because he loves her. OMGosh I couldn't get over her telling him she wanted a kiss, and the sweet sorrowful story of Emily and the ALS. Very hard chapter to write I am sure. Then for Edward to go off on Jessica well, that was priceless his "call girl" hahahaha!!! Fabulous Chapter Thanks
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I love you
I have to say this was a fantastic chapter, I had been waiting for Bella to tell him. Anyway, when Edward asked about Aunt Flow at the table I seriously thought I was going to spit my drink all over the computer... that was classic and hysterical... Love Love Love it!!! Please stay encouraged and motivated
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Secrets
I Love your story and want more on to he next chapter
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Halfway to fifty
Loved the chapter!! As always! Very hooked on this lovely story. Yeah the cliffy ending of the chapter was a little (how should I say, umm) frustrating!! **chuckle, chuckle** I'm still trying to figure out what is wrong with Alice, wondering if she has found out that is not able to have children or something. Perhaps she miscarried and didn't share with the girls because of the timing or something. I just will wait and see what you have in mind and in store for us.
I was wondering how Edward was going to react to the Therapy Session, because after all HE DOES have a major part in what has caused her insecurities. This should be good.
Thanks for the chapters you have given us as well as the forthcoming ones. I know once this is totally complete this will certainly be one of those stories you go back and re-read over and over. Thanks again Happy Holiday's!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! :D
Alice will tell us her story very soon, so you don't have to wonder for much longer...
xx
Gelix
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Therapy
Great Chapter, you never fail to capture the interest of your readers that's for sure. Very happy to know there is a Sequel coming next year. I hope you get to finally address James in the same manner or similar manner as Jessica was addressed. Anyway just want you to know that I love the story and can't wait for more of the story, very excited to hear from our Lovely Alice!
Enjoy the new job and most of all enjoy being in the workforce once more, I'm sure it will be an adjustment, however, we all know you will be great... No nerves, no nerves... your boss and co-workers are just people, and hey! who knows they may be one of your Fans of your wonderful writing talents!!! :-)
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Alone Time
Hi Angelica;
Loved the chapter, it was sweet how both Rose and Bella tried to be reassuring to Alice, bless her heart 2 years she had been trying. Glad we finally found out what was going on with our littl Pixie!
When Edward arrived home to Emily still crying and Bella at her wits end, really brought back memories for this mother of a 27 yr old.... Yes, someday's they do that, and you do feel like your a HORRIFIC parent. Edward handled it very nicely!! Good job in writing that!
I really had to chuckle at the weekend away for them, reminds me of Rose and Emmett's weekend. However, when Edward had his mother send him a text pic well that was just PRICELESS!!!!!
I have thoroughly enjoyed this story and hope that you stay inspired with your writing and bring us more lively and loving stories of our EDWARD AND BELLA.
Hope your new job is going well, do not evny you the hour however, but one would certainly hope that means you get home early too!
Until the Epilogue have a great week ahead and Happy Holiday's to you and yours!!!!
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 46: S: First day in school
Geliix -
This was awesome, it so cute when Edward was being the overprotective parent and not wanting his little girl to grow up and go to Pre School; that was cute. Little girls do have a way of wrapping Daddy's around their little fingers don't they!?
I think she is preggers already. I love that you are doing these little Add-Ons to the story, and your right can't wait to see the Forks HS Reunion, that should be interesting to say the least.
Can't wait to read more stories by you and will keep watching for them.
LatersBB
Kathy
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 47: S: A Shocking Surprise
Gelix- Yea! This chapter was great!!! I'm with you can''t wait for next Saturday the 16th "The Reunion" chapter, I have been patiently awaiting for it. Gonna love seeing James and Jessica and all those mean folks, finally letting them see and know that Edward wound up with Bella Swan the girl he tormented all through his HS years because he was so infatuated with her it scared him, and instead of doing something he treated her horribly. Yes, this is going to be a awesome chapter. But you know the one thing you have to take from this story though is NOT the bad that Edward and the other's did, it was about Bella's ability to LOVE HIM inspite of those painful memories. Our Bella is some girl that's for sure.
Have great week and also really loving "WLHC" that is really a great read too.
Till next update
Kathyxoxo
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: S: High School Reunion
Gelix-
This has been a wonderful story!!! I was not disappointed in the reunion! You did them justice. Until next week!!!
Kathyxoxoxo
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: S: Father's Day
Gelix, You are so funny!!! Seriously when Edward passed out, I am still laughing!!! Priceless. Now for Father's day in the US it's the Third Sunday in June. But November is fine for the story, after all this is your Story and you live somewhere else. That is no problem for me.. I love your story. I really hope you stay motivated and encouraged in your futher creative writing endeavors and look forward to the next update. Are we going to see who little Masen looks more like Edward or Bella or a combination of the two.
Again love the story and have a great day!!!
Laters Kathy xoxo
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: S: Epilogue
You did a wonderful job with this story, sorry to see it come to a end, but WLHC is wonderful as well and I am very happy to continue on with the wonderful story as well.
Take care,
Kathy xoxo
When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?
Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 64022
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 15
I love the way this was handled with Little Bell, very sensitive and tender. Love the story keeps me motivated to keep going to the next chapter.... Please stay motivated and inspired to keep on writing. Thanks again for this Story!!
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 16
yes, yes, yes.... He is going to F_____g own it, he loves her too!! I love how Little Bell says Edward's name Ewoord!! That's just so cute. Love - Love - Love this story. Keep up the wonderful writing. Moving on to the next Chapter ------->
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23
Yes, I read the A/N and I am not going to be a Bella hater, but say that one can sympathize with her situation, yes, this is a story...one never knows what they would do given a situation !! With that being said, I am very addicted to this story and can't wait to read more, I have one last chapter to read before you have to update more chapters, I want you to know how talented I think your writing is and would love to keep encouraging you in your creativity.... Poor Little Bell, and Edward I just cried and cried as Bella was reading what he put together for her. Even Mr tuff guy Felix was feeling symphaty for Ewoord!!! Awwhh poor little family.. I say family because that is what they were so rapidly becoming...Okay nough said, on to the next chapter.
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 24
Great Chapter, thanks for the detail and letting us see what was happening from Edwards POV that is always wonderful. Now we're getting somewhere, I guess next Chapter we have to have the funeral. Hey didn't we cover several chapters ago that James got married again, I think that's who the lady is in the Blue Car!!! We shall see. Can't wait for the next InstallmentChapter.
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 25
Thank you very much for this chapter, it was wonderful "OF COURSE" each chapter is. So I think Bella and Ewoord are going to have a baby, she sure has been sick alot if she isn't... hummm and she needs to pick Ewoord not going back to forks, not a good move, well UNLESS Ewoord is going to follow her there. But then she wouldn't have the rest of the Cullen's. Your the author I'm just rattling. I love your creative mine and I'm sure whatever you see happening will keep us on the edge of our seats with anticipation. Happy Thanksgiving and can't wait till Next week for the next chapter....
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 26
I love your story. Full disclosure!! Okay Bella, she is just having a hard time! (I'm being soft right! Well it's true) Edward - Love my Edward sorry peoples I do regardless of any issues he might have.. I have a rather deep appreciation for our OCD Vegan...hahahaha!!! Carlilse - We all love him what more can you say. Little Bell well she is so flippin smart it's crazy how smart she is. Esme - Love her!!! Alice- is just being Alice what more can you say!!! Bless her heart she will figure things out with Jasper. Emmett has a point with what he said at the table, I love my Edward and Alice but Emmett made valid points now, I just think he needs to remember that Edward IS his family after all, now that's all I'm going to say on him. Rosalie - humpf I'm not even going to adress her...
Needless to say, this is a awesome story, love your mind and your writing abilities. Please hang in with all of US fans and keep on with this lovely suspensful story. Stay encouraged Please and motivated. You are wonderful!!
Hum... Just where was Leah when Jacob died? Now I still think its James or his crazy sister, but I wonder......