Reviews by motherbeatrice
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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 76224
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: motherbeatrice Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Trying New Things

OMG I laughed so hard at Emments comment about lift off.  That is so funny1

Can't wait for these two to do the deed

Reviewer: motherbeatrice Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - A Day at the Cullen's

Love the story, its so intense, I can feel Bella's pain, it's worse than anything I have every read about before, good writing on your part. Can't wait to see how this unfolds.One can always be hopeful - can't one?

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995606
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: motherbeatrice Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

wow I really love this story.  I feel like Edward is really hard on Bella, I don't know anything either about this type of relationship.  Anyhow the story is great, I'm holding my breath because I know Jacob and Jim are big trouble - yet to come.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420500
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
Reviewer: motherbeatrice Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: The green eyed monster

LOve the story, hope Jacob stays away.

Poor jealousward,  I can't imagine him having to worry about anything like that-

but it makes for great reading

Reviewer: motherbeatrice Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Crawl inside you

I've been there in the past with the worry about late periods.  Love your writing, you keep things moving right along without all the extra blah blah some stories have.

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: motherbeatrice Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

ok, well these first chapters are really short, but you are introducing the charcters, and I love what you have done, parts Twilighty - but still different, will continue reading, looks really interesting so far



Author's Response:

sQuEaL!!!! OMG Thank you soooooo much, if you like the first 15 chaps you should love the rest, thank you sooo much for taking the time to review and I can't wait to hear what you think as things progress....

Reviewer: motherbeatrice Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

You are a great story teller, don't even mind some of the shorter chapters, you get the story told.  Love it. Continuing on.................



Author's Response:

YAY!!!! Thanks a bunch, I can't wait for you to get caught up on the whole story, I answer every review so feel free to ask questions if you are confused or unsure of anything.... MWAH!!!

Summary:

Edward is a medschool drop-out come pharmacist who hates his life. Almost every moment of it.

The light of his coldmedicine aisle is Isabella Swan, a frequent customer and constant source of escapist sexual fantasies; he is desperate for the courage and impetus to make them reality.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10542 Read Count: 1365
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2012
Reviewer: motherbeatrice Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think the Title is great.......it fits the story, unless he is leaving his job.......

it looks interesting so far.....



Author's Response:

Well, he does want to leave his job, but even if he does that is how they met. My boyfriend says that the title requires some ontop of the counter/bending over the counter sex... maybe...

 

Thanks for the review.

 

Summary:

What happens in the months after Ana is released from the hospital after her confrontation with Jack Hyde?  A glimpse into the life of the Greys before and after Teddy's arrival.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey, Anastasia Steele/Other Character, Jose Rodriquez/Anastasia Steele
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90526 Read Count: 39592
[Report This] Published: 20 Mar 2013 Updated: 07 Apr 2014
Reviewer: motherbeatrice Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it! anxious to read more.............

Summary: When 16-year-old Anastasia moves across the country to live with the godparents she never knew, the last thing she expected was to fall in love with angry and troubled Christian Grey. The only thing that stands in their way is a male best friend and an older woman who refuses to let go. Ana/Christian story. Forbidden Romance. HEA.
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32448 Read Count: 10646
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2015 Updated: 07 Mar 2017
Reviewer: motherbeatrice Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

well, how old is Christian?  yeah, 16 is a little young.....

Reviewer: motherbeatrice Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

love it.....looks like Christian is up to his usual tricks....grumpy....resistant to change......wonder what he will

think when he meets Ana......

Reviewer: motherbeatrice Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

yeah, well a bitchy Kate is okay....Ana put her down...can't wait for Christian to meet her....

Reviewer: motherbeatrice Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looks aweseome......