Membership status: Member
Bio:
Isabella Swan visits the wrong side of La Push Beach. Jacob and Paul have something lemony to say about it. But when their little three-some games continue, and feelings are caught, what couple is left standing? Rated XXX. My first threesome.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob, Bella/Paul
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 108.9
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166105 Read Count: 96110
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Goodbye
Ok, what can I say, first of all, hey, I am a fan of you since you were in fanfiction.net. I can't believe that they made you erase the story, truthfully I find it BS, considering that most of the other M-rated stories have lemons as well and they are still up in the site, but whatever... their loss.
I definitely LOVE your story, and it breaks my heart to think that she will have to choose between one of them, since both of them are the sweetest ever.
I got so mad at Paul it wasn't even funny, well... no, actually it was, my parents were asking me why I was yelling at the computer and I just couldn't spare anything more than a glare and myself resuming the scolding to Paul.
And I'm SO glad Jacob finally made Leah leave, god I hated that b*tch. Buuut it annoys me that he doesn't notice that Bella loves him too!!! Urgh and the fact that Jacob and Paul are so stubborn and don't want to answer their phones annoys me even more, I mean Bella is at home PREGNANT with one of them and they're away... I mean urrrghh! But I love it so much, I can't even begin to find words to explain every reaction you've gotten outn of me with this story.
I just adore it, keep up the GREAT work :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for following me over hon. :) i hate that they made me move it too. its caused me a great deal of stress this weekend. sigh.
Lol I'm frustrated with the boys too. but dont' make guesses about the endings. You never know what might happen. ;)
Hugs.
Cam
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Drama, Love and Lationships
OMG OMG OMG OMG... when I saw that Paul was going back to Forks I had this hunch that he'd run into Jacob in the airport and I was right!!!!! :D
But OMG OMG OMG OMGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!! CLIFFY!! T_T... I want to know what Bella will doooooo!!!! I NEED to know what Bella will do!!! And I hope she chooses Combo No. 1... Paul and Jacob.. I don't want her to choose the single pieces. They are way too adorable to be rejected!!! I mean... just look at those cute faces!!
And FFS I HATE Tanya, seriously, the only character I hate more than her is Leah. But OMG OMG OMG!! I need to know how she will react to having her two gorgeous boys back and I need to know how she'll tell them about the pregnancy!!
I can't wait until your next chapter, you seriously have me on the edge. Did I mention I LOVE this story with all my heart and is like... one of the only stories I look forward to having update alerts every week?? Well I do. I love it so freaking much, thank you for writing it! :D
No pressure on updating though XD :D I can wait a couple more weeks... I think.... :)
Author's Response:
lol i've given worse cliffies.
I agree with what you've said. and you only have to wait a week for Bella's big choice.
Big hugs! :)
Cam
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Never Gonna Be Alone
I LOVE YOU!!! o_o
Here's your combo 1, A sizzling sandwich of Paul and Jake. thank you for coming, please come again!!! OMG Yessss!!!! she chose bothhhh!!!! -dances around happily- I love you more and more with each chapter!!! I'm so happy. and the guys are THE best. I envy Bella SO much!!!!
I can't wait for the baby shower part and the epilogue and the sequel.
And Bella Jr will be the happiest baby alive!!! And the cutest baby!
I just seriously hope that tanya's baby isn't Paul's or Jacob's after some drunk loving. I don't care if its any other guy but if its theirs... -twitch, twitch-. Anyway, i'll let you do whatever you were doing before reading the review, just wanted to emphasize how much i love you for not making her choose one or the other and for putting up this chapter and this story and everythinggg!!!!! *-*
Author's Response:
i LOVE THE COMBO. thank you so much! :D
i can't wait for the updates next week either. and yes the new baby is going to be simply adorable.
tanya's baby is not paul's or jacob's. its someone else's! ;) ;)
big hugs!
xxoo
Cam