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A reader who at her musing will jot down a few sentences in a semi-logical order, but only when she see fit. Also known as having the time... and her Beta willing. I love words, I love to read them and one-hundreth of a percentage more than I love to write them so thus more reading.
Jessi
15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC
Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
Date: 01 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Life
Wow... this carries a strand of memory from The Perfect Wife already, but it is only the first chapter. I can't wait to read on!
~JessiCullen
Date: 01 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Blessings
Whoa whoa whoa red flags are shooting up so fast I can't count them all! No no no they did NOT decide Renee could stay just becase she had a daughter!!! I have to read chapter 3!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 01 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Promises
WHAT! They did not just give her something to put her out! This is just wrong who are these people!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 01 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Sins of a Mother
So the same thing that happened to Bella has now happened to Renee! On to the next chapter! GAH! This is too much! I love it in a scary I can't beilieve this is happening kind of way.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name
Wow... I want to cry for her. These insane people. But wow you have me on edge here. I have to know what I happens!
Jessi Cullen
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation
This is the first time I have ever liked Felix. You made him come alive through the chapters thus far, and this only made that stronger. I was surprised to see he was a mercenary not one who was apart of their Order.
I have my theories about Edward. Bella will have to be paired with someone. I had almost... almost thought Felix, but he's out of there. Perhaps Felix will be the one to inform Charlie. Since I think his role in this story is yet to come.
You have me greatly anticipating what will happen next!
Jessi Cullen
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth
This is scary. Poor Bella she is... I don't even know. GAH! I want to cry for her. I can't wait to see what happens next!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands
Wow. Umm... that was more than creepy enough. I think my skin started crawling. This was good though. Not everyone can portray events and emotions and just make us readers feel like we are there. Great chapter and I can't wait for Chapter 11.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own
This is screwed up royally. Yet, this is so addicting. It's so different than the run of the mill average stuff everyone writes. I can't wait for your next chapter.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace
Whoa! I am fully captured by this story. It is fascinating. I can't wait to see where you will take this. It is so good it is creepy. SHE FINALLY MET EDWARD! GAH! Some parts of this story are so disturbing... okay a lot of parts. But it is so good I couldn't stop reading. It is so different. I love it! I can't wait for your next chapter. RL happens what can I say. Writers have lives too!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others
Well... another great chapter. We got a full dose of just how creepy Aro is. I can't quite get to the point where I find him funny. However, I think you have ruined my favorite member of the Voultri for me. He makes my skin crawl. I loved how you developed Carlisle and Esme's characters here. And as always I can't wait for your next chapter.
~Jessi
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement
I wasn't sure how I felt about this not being a Bella chapter... but I loved Edward's POV. I think it was greatly needed especially for what you have set up to come next. I can't wait!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment
Is it so terrible of me to love this story even more with every chapter? yes, Aro is one sick puppy, but the whole story is just... so intriguing. I can't wait to read more!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession
Well... that was a bit scary. She had a memory, and she didn't even know it. How sad. This whole thing and is just sad or creepy. I can't stop reading it. I can't wait to see what else it going to happen!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser
Loved this chapter. It did answer a lot of questions. The way you are weaving this plot is fascinating. I can't wait to see how it all plays out!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family
Wow! The way you write is so descriptive! Besides who could come up with all this?! You make it sound to real. Love Alice already, but this whole punishment thing... whoa. Great chapter to a great story!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation
OhMyGod! WHAAT??!!! This was so sad! I wanted to cry. Poor Charlie! I can't wait for your next chapter. I DID NOT see that bit coming with Felix, I was just like DAMN!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You
It's almost rude to keep me hanging like this! Fantastic chapter though. I wonder if it's Felix? Aro cam first to mind, but it could be possible.
~Jessi
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us
Wow, this was an interesting chapter. Aro still gives me the creeps. He wasn't even in this chapter, and he still did. I can't wait for your next chapter ladies!!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple
Wow, this is just so... wrong. Yet, I have to know what happens. I knew Bella was going to snap at some point. Great job ladies!
~Jessi
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey
WOW. You wrote Aro to a T once again here! Amazing job ladies!
~jessi
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....
Oh, I can't believe you left this here! Excellent chapter. I wanted to cry for Charlie!! I can't wait for your next chapter chicas!
~Jessi
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Loved it! I have gotten sucked into this warped world here, and I can never wait for more!
~Jessi
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling
Oh dang. I have no more nails. They're gone. I can't wait to see what will happen next!
~Jessi
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Oh, my goodness! This was an intense chapter. Yeah, I knew it had to have been bad, but still! I had little tears in my eyes. Excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more!
~Jessi
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning
DunDunDun! Whoa I had forgotten about this little piece of information. GAH! I can't wait to see what happens!
~Jessi
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First
Oh my. So the plot thickens. I can't wait to see what happens. Poor Edward. He is finally realizing exactly how sheltered he his. Great job ladies!
~Jessi
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Oh my goodness! I was about an inch my the screen of my laptop this was intense! I can't take this! I wanted to cry and yell and scream and murder Aro all in the same breath! I can't wait for your next chapter! ~Jessi
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Oh my God! This was so sad! Who is it at the door? Did Edward find her or is that too much to hope for too soon?! This is going to drive me nuts until you update again. Lovely job ladies! This one had my skin crawling!
~Jessi
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Wow. This chapter was amazing. I wanted to keep reading, and cry and throw something. You have me holding my breath!
~Jessi
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega
WHAAAT?!! NO! This just is SO wrong on so many levels. Is is also wrong that I love this story?! This little tale you have woven is amazing. I can't wait to see how things go from here.
~Jessi
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us
Did I love it? What an insane question. Of course I loved it! I couldn't get enough of it. I'm here biting my finger nails off. Can't wait to see what happens! Who flicked on that light?! Thanks ladies for writing such an amazing story!
~Jessi
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption
Whoa. Intense chapter, what more can I say. Fantastic job ladies! Had me glued to the screen the entire time. I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!
Jessica
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Oh my goodness! I think I fell off my chair and died. This was an amazing chaprer. Fantastic job ladies!
~Jessi
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Exodus
Another fantastic job ladies. They may have made it out of the compound, but this is far from over. I can't wait to see what happens!
~Jessi
Edward is a foster child who is constantly being shipped from home to home. He attempts suicide daily. One night Charlie is sent to arrest him during a break in. What happens when Charlie finds out his real story? AH, OOC, Rated M for language/themes.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36910 Read Count: 10095
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I want to begin crying right now. This is so sad. I can't wait to read more!
Jessi Cullen
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
This is an amazing story and I can't wait to continue it. You capture the essence of Edward so well!
Jessi Cullen
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I h ope you enjoy the rest of it!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Aww... Go Bella! I love this story... O can't wait to see what happens. Your Edward is so dark and different, but a normal teenager beneath it all. I'm glad you didn't do Bella as the typical klutz and uncoordinated little girl who can't stand up for anything. It makes this story and your characters more believable.
Jessi Cullen
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you so much! That means alot!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Dun Dun Dun! Whoa nothing like getting feelings out in the open! I like this bold Bella. Poor Edward he is being bombarded with all these feelings he can't even name because no one has ever showed them to him before. I can't wait to read on!
Jessi Cullen
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Cute. Edward is finally beginning to change is views of the world.
Jessi Cullen
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
He is entering the joys of being a teenager. Poor guy he has to get the crash coarse in just a few days.
Jessi Cullen
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Who is it!??!?!?! GAH! I'm gonna die! This is so nerve wracking!
Jessi Cullen
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
YAY! You had me so nervous here! It ended happy though. Bella just has to not screw this up for him.
Jessi C.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Awww... how cute! I can't believe this story is already going to be coming to an end.
Jessi Cullen
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
This was a cute ending. A happy ending. It needed one. I loved it, and can't believe it was over so fast. This was a fantastic story.
Jessi Cullen
Author's Response:
Thank you SO much! I'm happy you enjoyed it!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Fandom GIves Back Eclipse Edition-Out take
I was so excited to see this story had updated! I had always loved it. This was another great one!
~Jessi
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514758
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23
Progress... this is good. They finally have help. James is going to do something I just have to wait and find out. I am so nervous for them all!
Jessi Cullen
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23
FINALLY! Okay I sense that at this point I need to fasten my seatbelt. This is just starting up. I can't wait to see what happens!
Jessi Cullen
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
You have me on edge chicas! I don't know how much I can take here. I can't wait to read your next chapter.
Jessi Cullen
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
WHAT! NO!!! I can't handle this! No, nope I am a goner! I just died right in front of my computer screen! You can't do stuff like this! Deep breathes indeed! GAH! I can't wait to read your next chapter!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
This was definitely the worst I could have expected. How exactly did both of them get out of the house with Bella and Victoria in tow? Was Edward blasting music or something? It was all very intense and I think I was about to die... again. But... HE KILLED JAMES?!?! He is so going down! Now that Aro is in on it... I think that was all very confusing... I want answers so bad. This was a turn of events I wasn't expecting... and for a fraction of a second I thought this story was winding down. GAH! I hope they are all right.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
So some long to be answered questions. And ones that still need to be answered. How are you going to play this out? I can't wait for your next chapter!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
YES! I forgot about that damn tracking device TWICE now! I feel like an idiot.
What is James going to do with Vicki if he finds out he doesn't have his phone? YIKES!
Please to not have Edward and Bella do a Romeo and Juliet. I can take a lot, but that is not one of them. This is sniffing like a New Moon scene coming up here, and I don't know if I can take it.
I can't wait to see what happens!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James
WHAT! HA! I knew they could do it! YAY! OhMyGosh! I can't wait to see what all happened and is going to happen!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella
WOW. I can't wait to see what happens! Whoa we are finally going to get to meet Edward. I think your ideas for the original work is great. I think to build suspense and really get people into Bella's character getting to background early is a must. Even if you start with her in the car and her walk into the door at the school as a prologue or something then back up and tell a bit of her and James... because personally I thought that beginning really was riveting and set the stage well. This story is amazing though. I wish you the best.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76
WHAAAT?!?!?! The next chapter is the last one!!! I can't believe this! But... I am sure it will be a fantastic chapter. I can't wait to see how you end this. I will most definitely be waiting for your announcements to come.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
Wow. I had been dreading the ending to this story for a long time. I didn't want it to end, but this... this was the perfect ending. I can't wait for the original Training School. This was fantastic.
~Jessi
After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625045
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46
OH MY GOD! Carlisle and his plan!! It's happening! I knew happiness wouldn't last long! GAH! Edward has to get her out of there! This is going to be be bad. What is Carlisle going to do when he finds out Bella is no longer a virgin? Was that even a concern to him... I think it was. I am going to die here. I can't wait to find out what happens.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47
I am crying right now. Like I can't see the screen I am trying to type on and am surrounded by tissues galore. I can't believe this. He has to tell her why. She has to know why. She loves him she would do it to stay with him and away from those true monsters. He would have to assure her he would come back to her. He has to prove to her that he won't stay a monster forever. He has to make her believe he will become her Edward again. Oh my god! This is more than I can handle! I can't wait for your next chapter!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48
This was good. You had me screaming at the scream like a crazed person before he came out and told her. Hmm... Esme's garden! I am excited now. This chapter was good. A happy-ish ending. Good. I can't wait for your next chapter!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49
Wow. This was not at all anything that I had expected from Esme's garden secret. It was so... fitting to this story. This was beautiful writing. I about nearly cried as I read this.
~Jessi Cullen
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. It was a hard chapter to write.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50
IS IT CARLISLE?!?!?! I have to know. I was wondering if something like this was going to happen! OhMyGod!!! I can't wait to see what happens! GAH!!!! I can't take this! He just kidnapped her?!? I'm gonna die! This is too much! Whoa! BELLA! This is so sad! Just when things were looking bright THIS happens! Amazing work!
~Jessi
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
WOW! I wasn't expecting this, but WOW. I can't wait for your next chapter. I wanted to cry right there along with Bella.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
Beautiful chapter. I so knew it was going to be Edward who was her date. Okay if it wasn't I was going to have serious words for you. You were right this was a happy ending for Bella and for everybody. This has been a fantastic story and I thank you for sharing this little piece of yourself through this amazing adventure.
Woman! Of course I would be interested in an original novel! Honestly you do not need little me to tell you this was a wonderful story. And with the prospect of new material you definitely got me interested.
I can't wait for your epilogue. And thanks for giving these two such a great ending. I am sure the next chapter will be just as good.
You also have me looking forward to your new ideas!
~Jessi
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked the chapter. I hoped everyone would like their happy endings.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue
Wow. This was a beautiful ending to a beautiful story. This ending summed it all up. You are an amazing writer. I can't wait to see what else you do.
~Jessi
Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes?
Rated: M (18 and over)
AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
WHAAAT?!?! How stupid can one man be?! GAH! He just expects her to go along with this program?!?! What is his problem!!!!????!?! I have to find out how this progresses!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Was he raised under a rock? Where is Esme? Didn't he learn any manners at all? I want to slap some sense into him!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Right now I agree with Bella... He's a sick bastard!
~Jessi Cullen
Edward has to raise his three kids alone after his wife dies. Little does he know that she plans on helping him out every step of the way. All Human.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Edward/None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19973 Read Count: 3266
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Time to Fly
Wow. I will have you know I am crying right now. I couldn't hold them back. I don't know how anyone could. Excellent beginning. I can't wait to continue reading... no matter how sad it is going to be and how many tears will fall from my eyes.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Alone
Oh, my goodness. This is so terribly sad. I can't read this all at once. I need tissues. Now I know what everyone is talking about in their reviews to my story (Tortured Sole on FF) This is so sad. I want to cry. The way you convey emotions is so real. I can't wait to read then next chapter you have uploaded.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Learning to Laugh Again
Oh my goodness! This was perfection. I cried. I'm not going to deny it, I cried. Big fat tears rolled down my face. Of course that was after I had this huge grin on my face when I got the e-mail this story had upated. Fantastic chapter. It was breathtaking.
~Jessi
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: In Peace, At Last
Oh my goodness I cried. Not that I ever thought that a story like this could be anything but sad, still it was tough to read. Amazing job. Thank you for writing, and sharing this with us.
~Jessi
Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.
New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Interesting. Ah, being young and ever so naive. I can't wait to read more.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Okay Edward here is kind of creeping me out. It has me worried about Bella. I can't wait to read on and see what else is going to happen. I like that you didn't have the usual Cullen's paired up for them right away. Mixed it up a bit.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
WHAT! I did not see this coming!!! I am so glad there is another chapter waiting for me because I think I would die if there wasn't!!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Okay this new Edward you have created here is kind of freaking me out. In all honestly he sounds like a dom, but who am I to judge. All in due time. He does talk that way though. I knew Emmett had to come into thew picture somewhere. I like how you have made him Bella's brother. Okay I love this whole plot line so far. You are definitely getting me to come back for more. I can't wait to read on! The ending here had me laughing.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I'm glad Edward isn't going to change. Then what would be separating him from the average run of the mil Edward had shows up thousands of times in stories everywhere?
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Okay this Edward could be kind of annoying after a while, but still hmm... an entire weekend... what he couldn't do is more of the question.
~Jessi C.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Hmmm... Emmett's POV. Sure why not. I am anxious to know what else you will have happen though.
~Jessi C.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Whoa never saw this coming. GAH! Just when Edward thought he had everything all figured out.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Ha, three cavemen indeed. This will not end well.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
WOW. Good chapter. Bella needs to reap the fruits of her actions.
I know how it is like trying to please the mass of readers. Its difficult. I am happy to get chapters to read no matter when they come. If they can't understand about RL then they have none.
~Jessi Cullen
Bella finds out she's pregnant, but Edward wants nothing to do with it...it doesn't fit his plans! She moves on...Will time make Edward want to be in their lives before the baby is born? Will they find their way back to each other - AH/lemons later NC-17 RATING FOR VOILENCE IN LATER CHAPTERS.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56874 Read Count: 61051
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
For the first time in a very long time I want to strangle Edward! I have to keep reading though~
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
WOW. I'm getting out my gun and shooting him dead. Congrats to you for making me want to kill him. Not many could have done that. Not many try. This is so different it is refreshing.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
I liked this EPOV I want to murder him all the more now.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
Good chapter. I liked what Bella said at the end. This was good for her. Her and Edward made me laugh. Serves that boy right.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection
Awww... a girl... of course we already knew that. Loved it!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Heart to Heart
Wow. I am quickly getting sucked into this story. I just can't stop reading it. When I have a chapter of my own to get out!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Friends
This story is steadily growing on me.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Engagement Party
I want to kill that hussy! But that was just so... it was an Awww moment with her and Edward.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - One Flew over the CooCoo Nest
Okkkaaay. So this hussy has some mental issues!
Jessi Cullen
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Small Gestures
Finally. These two needed to work SOMETHING out!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
Whew. I thought for sure Jessica was going to make a presence here. I just have the git feeling that she is the one watching. But this was cute.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Stalking Tendencies
Yeah, my thoughts exactly. She just creeps me out! This is by far the most crazy Jessica I have ever read!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - A Mother's Nightmare
WHAAAAT?!? NO! This can't be happening! This is just so intense.~
Jessi Cullen
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
FINALLY! Let me just hope everything goes well... from this point forward. And I love the name Sophia.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
Wow. I'm crying. There is no longer any hope for my mascara. This was beautiful. I can't wait to read the end.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
GAH! Perfection here!
And of course I will continue reading your other stories. I am so glad I read this one... it took me long enough.
~Jessi Cullen
He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC
For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner
Banner by Mehek18
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Wow. I hate him! There is seriously something very wrong with him.
~Jess
Author's Response:
yes there is. He's psychotic and a murderer. There's nothing remotely redeemable about Emmett.
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Oh poor Bella she just has no idea does she.
~Jess
Author's Response:
She will soon.