Alice is probably the first woman that Wisp/Bella sees, that does not kneel at the feet of men or that walks in generall. Or Bella was always surrounded by men, so that she doesn't know that women exist in general.

Oh nooooooo. They can't do this to her!!! that is just cruel, but I guess that is how the system works. I just hope, that the Cullens find something really quick so that Bella does not have to stay in the institute. That would be not fair to her.

Rosalie is awesome. Always there with the right advice.

I hope the new sleeping arrangement helps Wisp a little bit, to be more comfortable on furniture.

First when James started to talk, I thought that her parents maybe sold her for decreasing some debts or for alcohol, but now I am not so sure. perhaps her parents just think she is dead or something. But it seems that Wispella was going through a lot, when James regards her as a piece of art, that she doesn't talk, walk.... I don't really want to know, what is view of the world especially towards women is. That can't be really good.

Wispella is soooooooooooo smart. Starting a bath for Edward, because he was all sweaty/smelly from his work-out. hehe. And with each day, she learn a little bit more words to say. Although these are mostly names of persons, but at least she reconises the faces and can associate the name to the face. Definetly a huge step in the right direction.

:)

It would have been to easy, if the social worker arrived alone. But now the drama is going high. Hopefully the case worker turns a blind eye on the issue, that Wisp is in Edwards lap (due to a nightmare ;) ), and not takes her away again. How this ended, we had already seen.

Hopefully you find your writing mojo again, and as long as you update, I will wait :) Because it would be tragic if this great story is left uncompleted. 

I guess, if it would could be possible, Wisp would stay in the hot tube forever and perhaps become a little mermaid ;)

Anyway it is nice to see her in a different environment as Edwards home. And perhaps it is good for her, when she changes her places every now and than. It could improve her recovery.

She said her name! Although in a wrong context, but at least she talked. it was just a matter of time for her to get sick. No real inner devense, due to lack of nutrition and than most of the time nacked.

It was so moving, when she wanted Esme to be her mother. I guess she never had a mother and her Daddy could only be a sick bastard to allow his daughter being so badly treated. But if he was a member of some sect/cult, than I don't want to know, what they did in addition. Fortunately Wisp/Isabella could "leave" this people.

Hopefully the can Wisp/Isabella make her get better without going to the hospital.

I am so glad, that you post this story here also, after it was removed from ffnet.

Such a great story as well as it is really well written :)

Bellas childhood was really fucked up. It was sooo heartbreaking to read it from her point of view, after already reading it from Edward. It is a wonder that she got out of this so loving and forgiving.

It is really something for Bella still see something good in Edward, even when he was treating her pretty bad.

To hear other charavters thoughts of the main story would be great. But not particularly from Sue/Charlie/Harry I think. Because their opinion was really clear in both stories (Edwards and this chapter of Bella). I personally don't need to read more of their sick minds.

Such a sweet chapter, like the other ones too. That Bella gets help and now has lots of friends on her side is sooooo great and now she admitted to herself and her journal, that she is in love with Edward is just a bonus.

I am curious, when Bella meets Rosalie and their friendship is blossoming.

You definetly know how to create cliff hanger. Who would have thought, that this chapter ends sooo dramatically. Hopefully Edward is in time to save Bella (and perhaps hear her confession, which she didn't thought but spoke).

I wouldn't be suprised, if Jane/Jenny bribed the police to deny Bellas request to go see the accident place, just to "help" Bella. Thankfully Bella didn't tell her the whole truth, although Jane knows now a little bit more about Edward and Bella.

Awww, pooooooor Tanya had to go alone to bed, poor little thing. 

Not really :P

Great that Bella and Edward are spending their evening together, despite of Tanya. 

And that they pretty much ignored her during the dinner was priceless.

Now that Edward has seens Bella (nearly) naked on the bed, I wonder how long it will take these two until it happens again, but with Edward on top ;)

Anyway, great read.

Personally I don't know, what to think of this chapter. I mean on one hand both try to get on with their lives without the other, but on the other hand, both have too much to loose. Especially Bella.

And Edward falls prey for a seemingly good idea, just because he has a broken heart, and can not think clearly.

Perhaps when Bella is in Italy she encounters Aro and Jane at some point and hears/eavesdrop a converstation of them and their plans for the publishing company. And is either fast enough to warn Edward or strong enough to stand against these plans.

Althought perhaps she could interprete this, that Edward wants an out of the company and this is his easiest way.

Lots of potential for more drama, because they don't talk.

Apart from the heartbreaking content of the chapter, great chapter.

Seems that Bella and Edward need nearly a week to really talk about their issues, after both have calmed down from their anger and hurt. 

Hopefully Rose can now talk some sense into Bella and also kick Riley out. I fear, that this is not the end with Riley, and we will see him some more. I just hope that he has no hidden agenda to get Bellas shares for Swan Publishing.

Somehow it seems, that they have nearly always sex, with alcohol in their systems. I wonder what will happen, when they are sober and have sex? Perhaps then at least Edward will acknoledge his emotions and feelings for Bella and can start to really love her, like she loves him. But I guess this is a long way for Edward, after his declatation in the beginning.

Somehow he can really be a dick, but I guess he tries to keep some kind of control he lost, when Bella arrived from school and turned his world upside down. Although treating her as a business arrangement is also not the solution.

Cool chapter :)

Really heartbreaking chapter for Bella. All she ever wanted was to be loved by Edward, but all he seems to do is breaking her heart further, just because he doesn't look very closely and ignores all the signs, that Bella loves him. And if one rejection is not enough, he has to always deepen the hurt, with an aditional comment.

I guess Rose needs to wash his head, or slap him a few times to knock some sense into him.

Lauren and Jessica are also not really helpfull, so Bella is really on her own, in a different country, no friends (besides Rose), poor, poor girl.

Edward had such a turn around. From something he despised to becoming the rightful heir of Aro's. It is such a shame. In the middle I really thought, that Edward an Bella can make it. Flee from the insanity, once Aro is dead. But than everything changed.

I guess, wouldn't have Bella told Edward about Jacob, he might have let her go, but once a fiancé was in the picture, Edward lost the last of his brain cells. Poor Bella.

I wish you and your family all the best.

ps: you miss-spelled Stephenie Meyer in your Disclaimer ;-)

Great inside to in Wisps mind and how she sees the world. It is interesting, that she can somehow form sentences or thoughts and has a mind of her own. I guess the years in captivity (which she probably was) has limited her a little bit, but she is still very bright. 

Another interesting point is, that next to James and Dr. Gerandy there are at least 2 more people involved in her previous misstreatment (daddy and father). The question is now, is it the real daddy and father or some different people. perhaps her real father, who sold her for money or something. But where is her mother (dead?). 

The excerpts of Peter Pan were also great, and that Wisp sees Edwards home as her sanctuary or Neverland is nice. Hopefully it stays this way and she is not taken away from Edward.

Edward is really something. From one woman to another. But his "change of heart" with a little seed of doubt of Alice is in my mind a little bit to early. I mean he just met her for 2 minutes and already he thinks to open his heart for her?

Nevertheless it will be interesting to see his change and how Bella enjoys her stay on the island.

Thank god, Aro is a lying asshole and Bella is really the daughter of Charlie. Now her recovery should improve significant, because now she calm herself for that matter and heal a little bit better.

So happy to see this story again. I read it a few years ago (until it was removed) and quite sad, that it was no longer available.

And now it is there again to read.

Was it ever finished? Can't really remember, but I don't think so.

If the story is already completely finished, I would love to get a copy of the pdf-version.

To read all the sexy times, between them again, will be lots of fun :)