Reviews by Marrojeanne
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There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84269
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 13 May 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Prevention

These two are incredible. Both fighting for dominance, each one alsways wants to have the last word, provocation the other and than the tension/chemistry between them.

It definetly isn't getting bored.

Till the next chapter.

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Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Play Date Part One

Wow, it is really getting hotter. The club will probably be a whole teasing from both sides and I can image, that their friends will be perhaps not so nice and keep pushing Bella and Edward together.

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Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two

Great chapter and they had their fun with toying/teasing with each other.

It is always a pleasure to read this story, even if it has some grammar/spelling mistakes. I am also a not-native-english speaker and I think your english is good, just with a few mistakes. The main content is understandable and the story is well written. There are far worse stories out there, which are written by native-english speaker and sometimes horrible to read because of the spelling/grammar errors.

See you next chapter, whenever this might be :)



Author's Response:

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - The Peepshow

Edward is somehow really evil, but I guess they are both too deep into their game, that it is really hard to come clean and work on the differences.

But someone has to crack first or make the first move. Somehow I can't imagine, who it will be. Perhaps Bella, because it is to much for her and she will break down and hopefully Edward will be there to pick her up and not be indifferent towards her.

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Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - The Pick-up line

Great chapter, with lots of ups and downs, like a rollercoaster. When one thinks he/she has the upper hand, the other show immediately that this is not the case. The little subheadings were really great, especially the last one.

the plot twists with each chapter and now some truth is revealed.

I can't imagine how close Bella and Edward now have to work with each other, now that Bella is Edwards editor for his book. I guess there will be more sparks between them, perhaps also some flames ;). Just hope that they will not be burned.

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Date: 26 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - The Progression Part Two

Nice sexy time of these two lovebirds. Although I liked the beginning with the kitchen scene, I like more the bedroom, where Bella has some kind of epiphany. They both lied to each other and hurt the other. I just hope that they can forgive each other the deceit.

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Date: 17 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - The Pleasure

Great that these two can be productive without annoying the hell out of each other ;)

I am curious, when they say "I love you" to each other. But perhaps they wait a little bit more and actually be in a real realationship with each other.

Pretty intense chapter, but also really great.



Author's Response:

Thank you for sharing your thoughts!  They mean a lot!

I soooo agree - NO I LOVE YOU'S until the characters have convinced the readers that they are actually capable of feeling THAT for each other!  I hate it when fics jump the gun on that declaration!

xoxo

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - The Pants

The confession game, which Edward played with Bella was funny, especially how it ended for him with only half his clothes.

I guess they are on their right way to make their relationship work, I mean they know how the other ticks and everything and even than they like/love each other.

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Date: 19 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - The Plumpkin

Such a great chapter, especially with the humor but also the many sweet moments between Bella and Edward. These two complement each other really well.

Also their true feelings for each other are shining through, I can't wait for the "I love you"s. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for sticking with these two.  :) 

Just a couple more chapters filled with some fluff and sweetness before shit gets real. 

Keep well until then!

xoxo

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Date: 27 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - The Proof

Funny and sweet as always. The conversation with Charlie was funny, especially the resulting texting with Bella.

Who would have known, that dry humping can be so much fun, but these two should know with the lot of teasing they did already.

Somehow I am a little bit concerned what drama will be happening to these two. Either her parents get to know, that it was first a "business arragment" that Bella and Edward are a couple or some drama at the wedding of Jacob.

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Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - The Parting

It must have been very frustrating for Edward to not hear the question/statement from Bella he longed to hear. But Bella finally figured it out that she can't be without him.

Jabobs wedding should be an interesting.

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Date: 19 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - The Prowling

A little bit drama and more drama is coming, but Edward and Bella are stronger than before. Jessica was great, although she threatend Bella to expose her relationship with Edward.

I am pretty excited for the wedding.

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Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - The Past Part One

Finally the wedding day is there. I had to laugh with all the ridiculous nicknames Edward gave Angela.

Bella and Edward are so cute together and now the wedding is going to be hilarious. I mean Edward already (more or less) insulting the the groom and the bride.

Loved it.

Summary:

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Isabella Swan has never had an easy life; she's haunted day-in and day-out by the demons of her past.  Believing that she can never trust a man with her heart and definitely not her body after Charlie, her father, and only living relative is killed in the line of duty.  She decides to become a mother by In Vitro Fertilization... Dr. Edward Cullen is a pediatric specialist.  After suffering a tragic loss of his own, Dr. Cullen closed himself off to everyone in the world, including his 7 year old daughter.  Can an extraordinary twist of fate and a rambunctious 7 year old help bring two broken people, who've given up on love, together?

 

Will Isabella finally have a real family of her own?

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58003 Read Count: 32307
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 May 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: The Aftermath of a Nightmare...

So Bella is back from her coma, which is great and somehow back to normal. That she tries to keep her distance from Edward is somehow understandable, although to have them back all lovey-dovey would not have been realistic. She just wants to protect herself from more pain, at least for the moment. I just hope that they get a chance to have a talk, without the kids and than be the family they can be.

Definitely worth the wait, hopefully the next chapter will not be such a long wait ;)



Author's Response:

I assure that Bella may be being a bit stubborn now, but she will get the help that she needs!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo Here´s a little sneak peek at the next chapter:

 

“Hey there, buddy,” I cooed softly while I swayed Parker back-and-forth in my arms.  “Daddy sure did miss you.  Did you miss me too, P?”  I asked, sitting down in the glider that was in the corner of his hospital room.

 

I´d stripped, and took a quick shower in the on-call room, donning a pair of dark blue scrubs and a yellow disposable hospital gown before I entered Parker´s room.  You could never be too careful, and I didn´t want to expose my little guy to any unnecessary germs that could possibly prolong his stay. 

 

I knew that Bella was anxious to our little guy home, but for me, Parker´s release would be bittersweet.  Parker going home meant that I wouldn´t be able to see him everyday.  I hadn´t realized that I was crying until a tear splashed against his little blue cap-covered head separating into what seemed like a thousand individual molecules.

 

Feeling the need to explain to my son why I wouldn´t continue to see him every day, I slipped my finger in his tiny hand, relishing the way his little fingers wrapped around my large one, and started to speak.  “Well, P,” I paused, fighting with the lump that was clogging my throat.  “You´re getting so big, daddy´s so proud of you, sweet boy, proud that after everything he did to your mommy that you´re healthy, growing big and strong, and soon you´ll get to go home.”  I bit the inside of my cheek, trying in vain to hold back my sob.  Unsuccessful in attempt, “I´m so sorry, son” fell from my lips in a broken cry.  “It´s all my fault that you´re in here; I will never be able make it up to you, but by God, I plan to die trying.”

 

Parker´s eyes fluttered open, staring up at me as if he was offering me a tiny piece of absolution.  Though some may not agree, and argue that it was gas, I´ll swear to my dying day that he looked up at me and smiled.  Beaming up at me with rose-colored cheeks, and a twinkle in his eye, in me, my son saw no wrong. 

 

I was his hero! 

 

Just the mere thought of that made my heart pump wildly in my chest.  Not that it was even remotely possible, but in that moment, my love for this tiny innocent creature in my arms seemed to quadruple in its intensity.  Clutching his delicate little body to mine, I held him as tight to me as could without causing him harm.

 

All too soon, my phone was vibrating.  Without even looking at the screen, I knew that our time was up for today.  Once Bella returned, she and Mac would be here for the rest of the night.  Bella was such a good mother, making time for both of our children. 

 

Even though it was against hospital policy, she insisted that Mac be allowed spend the night in her brother´s room; having me for a father and  Carlisle Cullen as your grandfather came with many perks that we had no problem using.

 

Parker´s suite was state of the art, and if not for the obvious knowledge that this was a hospital, you would think that you were staying in a suite at the Fairmont Olympic Hotel.

 

Being a children´s hospital, we had several rooms that were setup for long-term care, making families feel like they were at a home-away-from-home when their child was hospitalized long-term for chronic illnesses. 

 

Bella and Mac were able to sleep in a comfortable queen-sized bed and the room even had a small kitchenette complete with a microwave and nice-sized refrigerator.  That way, Bella had plenty of liquids at her disposal to keep her hydrated for breastfeeding, and Mac could have juice and snacks to tide her over during the day.

 

Like I said, it was the perfect set-up!

 

Reluctantly, I stood to my feet, trying not to jostle the sleeping infant in my arms.  Taking care with his wires and IV, I placed a lingering kiss atop Parker´s head and gently laid back in his bassinette. 

 

The door opened, and I didn´t even have to turn around to know who it was.  I knew that when I didn’t immediately respond to my mother´s text, she would send my father looking for me.  A strong hand gripped my shoulder, giving it a light squeeze.  “I´m sorry son, but it´s time,” he whispered solemnly. 

 

Even though he didn´t agree with my actions, he was still my father. 

 

And when I hurt, simply put, he hurt too!

 

Leaning down one last time, I brushed my lips against his cheek.  “I love you son, be a good boy for mommy and sissy tonight.  I´ll see you soon,” I promised, praying that it was one I could keep.  “I hope...”  Unable to stomach the look of pity that was sure to be in my father´s eyes, I turned and walked out of the room without so much as sparing him a backward glance.

 

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 May 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Somethings... You Can´t Take Back...

Wow, long time no see. Pretty heavy chapter, but we cought up with the prolog. I keep my fingers crossed, that Edward gets his shit together to help his family. Thank god, he he finally found out, that Bella and her son, belong to his family like his own daughter.

 

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Definitely diffrent than FtloD but a nice start. It seems also pretty sad and heartbreaking.

Let's see how the rest goes.

Great writing by the way.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Memories of the Past... and Uninvited Guests...

This story seems to be really promising and very interesting. Also the little images in between are great.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: What Happens... When the Fog is Lifted...

It seems to me, that Edward has not really someone  to give him advice how to deal with this situation with Bella and his emotions. But I guess that is due to the fact, that he closed himself off of everybody and didn't let anybody near him.

I just hope he gives himself the chance to heal or more than one person will be in pain.



Author's Response:

Me too!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

Edwards behaviour is really strange. Who lets his child alone with a woman, who he barely know? Bella is wonderful, that is out of question but still this is really unresponsible. Especially without any explanation for Bella.

I can't wait, till we get to the prolog. This should be interersting.



Author's Response:

I promise you´ll get answers soon.  It won´t excuse him, but it will give us a view from his vantage point! Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: When the Music...

Wow Esmes POV was very emotional and heartwrecking, especially what happened in the evening. But it is great to see that Bella is accepted and welcomed in the family. Hopefully Edward will get this also in his really thick head, that he and Bella belong together with their children.

And Mac is calling Bella mommy, that was such a sweet moment XD

Hurry up for the next update and kick your internet in the ass, that it keeps workin g ;)



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…

Everything that could go wrong, did go wrong for Edward. Not only with his love for Claire, but also now with Bella. I don't say, that I excuse his behaviour, because, he has eaten all his guilt inside, without really talking about his feelings. But afterwards everybody is wiser, but at least he is getting help now and tries to get better for himself and for his family.

That he has a long way to go is clear, but perhaps Bella will somehow really need him, so that they can reconcile a little faster.

Summary: Past Featured Story

bcd

 

To their families, Edward Masen, and Bella Volturi hate each other. Their secret relationship isn't the only thing they are hiding.

 

*Will be part of a Multi-Shot Series*

 

Rated for explicit Lemons and Violence

 

Banner by the lovely ViiolentDelight

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10234 Read Count: 27907
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2011 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I just stumled over this story. Although it is short it is to the point and a great story in between.

I loved the theme of this story.

In the Wings by SaritaDreaming Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wings

 

Summary: Bella is a disillusioned cheerleader who jumps off a cliff into the churning water below and gets more than she bargained for when she's saved by the man who's been waiting in the wings. Popularity doesn't always equal happiness. AH, Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7440 Read Count: 1458
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: In the Wings: a One-Shot

A very nice written tale of two people finding each other.

Summary:

 

 

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Summary: 33 yr old billionaire tycoon, Edward Cullen is engaged to his childhood sweetheart and Chicago´s cutthroat DA, Isabella Swan; it would appear they were the perfect power couple, but everyone has secrets, some a little darker than others.  Enter 17 yr old Jasper Whitlock, recently orphaned and emotionally troubled he leaves his home in Texas and moves in with his cousin Rosalie and her husband Emmett McCarty, he too has a few skeletons in his closet.  As a favor to his friends; Edward hires Jasper to be his yard boy for the summer. What happens when just after two weeks more than just the hedges are being trimmed at the Cullen/Swan Esate?  And just how does DA Swan fit into all of this? Poly/Slash/Kink, OOC, E/B, E/J, E/BJ

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45044 Read Count: 36386
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

So this one was rected in a facebook-group, and finally I decided to give it a try. And I must say I am hooked ( I mean, I am already reading chapter 4 ;) )

Anyway, it is quite refreshing to read a Mommella story instead of a Daddyward. And now with some slash from Edward and Jasper I am curious, what will happen. Normally this is not really my genre.

I hope you will update your other stories (FtloD and ArFohO) aswell anytime soon and not abandon them.



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Coming Together... The Consummation of the Trinity...

OK, in the beginning I was slightly confused about the timeline of this chapter. I thought that Jasper already told Edward much earlier what happened to him and not just before the flight was.

It seems that the flight is going to be a fest for all of them.



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by JaimeArkin

How long can you lust after your best friend's brother before you give up hope? How do you reconcile an attraction for someone you've thought of as a little sister? How long can two people dance around their feelings before they dance together? E/B AH Banner by JaimeArikin.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Kit's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80259 Read Count: 56323
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2011 Updated: 24 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Bad Medicine

Moving in and the "I love you", much progress in this chapter. The bracelet looks really cute.

I am curious, how many weddings Bella/they have to attend until their own?!



Author's Response:

:) Thanks for reading. Glad you're still enjoying it. 

Hmmm...here's the count so far: 2 proms, 1 wedding expo and 6 and a half weddings - if you count the lunch she went to after Billy and Tiffany's wedding. LOL 

Thanks again - Sandra

 

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Only You

*dances the happy dance* They finally got engaded. ISomehow I didn't believe, that he is going to ask the question. But of course he is such a romantic, he want to wait for the perfect moment.



Author's Response:

LOL Yeah, he couldn't wait anymore and just asked her. He gave up waiting for the perfect moment. :) 

Glad you're still enjoying the story! 

Sandra

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: With a Little Help From My Friends

After reading these two chapters I think this is going to be interesting. Edwards actions somehow show that he cares more about her, as she thinks. I hope they get some alone-time together with some flirting, teasing ;).



Author's Response:

OMG - How did I miss seeing this for so long? Thanks so much for reading. Edward doesn't know what to do with his feelings - typical Edward. LOL I hope you can see the silver lining begin to peak through.

Thanks again - Sandra

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Where Are You Going

OMG, Edward is back, at least for a day he was. and they kissed, didn't see that coming. That he appears at her graduation is a huge step, but that the is all of a sudden so affectious with Bella was really surprising. But definitly welcomed. somehow it would be nice, to see in Edwards head, what brought this change on, or at least an explanation to Bella (perhaps in the future chapters).

I guess there will either be lots of flirting via texts or phone calls, or the month is passing pretty quickly and we get Edwards apartement hunting with Bella in the next chapter. Perhaps he moves in with her immediatly, because she is alone in her studio, it saves rent for both and they are together (more or less) in the next chapter.



Author's Response:

We're on the same page. :) I think you'll hear what you're looking for in the next chapter...And time will pass pretty quickly. I think you'll like it. Thanks again for reading.

Sandra :)

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Can You Feel the Love Tonight?

*where is a tissue, when you need one?, sniff* Anyway, really emotional chapter for Bella, but there might be hope for her, that Edward comes to terms. I hope he gets the stick out of his ass, before Bella starts a new serious relationship with someone new. Althought that would teach Edward a lessen, that he took too much time to figure his feelings out.

Till the next chapter.



Author's Response:

OMG - so sorry. I should have told you that tissues might be needed. :)

You may have read the update already and seen how prophetic your words were -- but just know that it's all working out. Sooner than later, really. :)

Thanks so much for reading.

Sandra

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Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Into the Mystic

Yep, I read the chapter, before your answer of the last one :)

The texts were a nice way for these two to stay in contact and learn more about one another.

First I was a little disappointed, when Edward didn't call or send a message to Bella when he knew he was coming home, but the meal was a really nice way for him to remedy himself in my eyes. that was so sweet.

Seems like a break up is coming in the future. But she should wait until Edward is there to see them together. Than the break up and Edward is there as a shoulder to cry on ;)

Just saying.

Until the next chapter, next week or so.



Author's Response:

Yay! Glad you liked the texting. They're a pretty modern couple, but they are in different time zones and on totally different schedules, so I figured skyping would take a lot of planning. LOL

A break up is definitely in the future. You'll have to wait and see how E&B end up reuniting, but I think you'll like it.

Thanks again for reading!

Sandra

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Home Sweet Home

So Edward is now back in Seattle and they could live a little like a real couple. Edward was jealous, when Bella had a boyfriend, now he knew what Bella felt all those years. But now they are together and happy, at least for the moment.

I am curious, what will happen next.



Author's Response:

Yup. It took him seeing her with someone else to get his act together. But now he's back in Seattle and they can be a couple. Thanks again for reading.

Sandra

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: By Your Side

Another wedding down, at least one to go and than it could be Bellas great day. Can't wait for Edward to pop the question.

It was sweet that Edward spend the night with Bella instead of the boys.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading! Glad you're enjoying it! 

LOL, when I got the idea that he should sneak back home to sleep with her, I loved it. I had to figure out  how to fit it in. :) Glad you liked it. 

Thanks again! - Sandra

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Lost in Love

So funny. Especially the many nicknames for "Russian Barbie". And what is the lesson if this chapter, right, talk and honesty/openness is the key for a good relationship. It takes time to get there, but even these two get it sometimes.

I can't wait, till Edward pops the "1 million question". It is just a matter of time. I mean they are practically already married, now they just have to make it official.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed all of the names for Russian Barbie - I had a great time coming up with them. SydneyGen got into it too. :) 

Thanks so much for reading!

Sandra

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Cowboy

Awwww, poor Edward is jealous.Well he got some of the same medicine that Bella got for all those years.

I hope this encounter will speed things up for the proposel. Why wait when they already have their forever/happily ever after.



Author's Response:

LOL You would think it would speed things up... :) 

thanks so much for reading! 

Sandra

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Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Forever and Ever, Amen

Such a great wedding of Alice and that Bella and Edward found so many tender moments with each other was just the icing of the cake.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Teach Your Children

We are getting ready for the big day. I hope for Bella that her mother gets her shit together and be there for ther daughter.That's the least she can do.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 18: All I Want is You

Finally they are married. That was a day, first the Breaking Dawn wedding and than reading your wedding. So emotional. Rennee with her antics is funny and now she seems to be engaged. I would say, that Bella has to attend at least one more wedding but this time will be with Edward as her husband. :)

The honeymoon should be fun, I am excited to see, where Edward is Bella taking.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: Forever Young

Truly an awwwwwwwwwww-moment. Bella is pregnant, although the way they found it on a quite brutal way (literally). But finally they have a baby.

Are there gonna be a futuretake or so with their life after the baby(s) is/are born?

Great story.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading. :) Glad you enjoyed the story. 

Hmmm I didn't have plans for future takes until you mentioned it...now I'm considering it. LOL I'm not sure though. I don't want to promise anything, but it could be fun! 

Thanks again! 

Sandra

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427774
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 **History**

Great story so far. Also with just these little glimpses of Bella. Edward really deserves someone to love and to be loved, hopefully it will be Bella. Her stay at his house is going to be interesting.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Experience

This chapter is so great. I am not sure if I already made a review for this story (I think I had) but this story is really great, with lots of intense feelings and the chemistry between Edward and Bella is really really great, and also well written. 

I guess Bella is figuring Edward out all on her own, that should make the "TALK" between them much easier. I am somehow curious how Edward will react when he knows of Bellas crush on him.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 **Playtime**

Wow this chapter was really hot and also sweet towards the end. And the little teasers in the facebook group are just awesome.

 

Sex Machine by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

 

In the year 2029, bio-mechanical engineer, Bella Swan, has created the perfect machine for Whitlock Robotics. Masen can be anyone or anything you desire... but who does Bella want her Masen to be?

 

This is a O/S

 

B/E M for Lemons/Language

 

Banner made by the fabulous Time_Lights

 

Special Thanks to Carsen Choi!

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9105 Read Count: 4482
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2011 Updated: 01 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Sex Machine

That is a very interesting idea for a story (and also for a sex toy). This one shot had really lots of great things combined: erotic, humor, angst, sadness and a happy ending.

Somehow while reading I thought that it would be nice to know what the real Edward thinks of this whole developement and than he returned.

Bellas backgroundstory about herself and Edward was really heart beaking and than suddenly he is there. Without much drama the forgive each other and than the real fun can start. One of the most funny lines was, "Edward and I both moan loudly when Masen sets his cock to vibrate".

So cool story.

Dying To Love by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

FBI coroner Masen, tries to find evidence to stop the Necromance Killer. With the newest ‘victim’ really alive, will her information help him catch the killer? One-shot for Halloween. Joint collaboration of: Weekitty and TeamAllTwilight.

The wonderful banner is SoapyMayhem Fanfiction.  You can find her on facebook under that name.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16554 Read Count: 3363
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2011 Updated: 31 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot For Halloween: Dying To Love

Really great one-shot. It was really thrilling to see how everything was developed. At first I thought, that Bella's spirit/ghost comes back to Edward to help find the bad guy, but this was so much better.

Bella was really in good hands, when she was brought on Edwards table, because he was so caring. And finally they could be together.

Altough sometimes in the middle I was a little bit confused with the timeline. After the first 6 month with the recap of what happend, first it was said, month later this and that happened. And then after the first week. Just slitely inconsistend but nevertheless a great plot.

I am curious, of what will be you next story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and I are very proud of this oneshot and how it turned out.  Watch for our up coming multi chapter story that will start within the next couple of months.  We just started out outline for it and it should be ready to roll by the first of the year.  we will also be posting a revised and beta'd copy of Nikkys story I am helping her with called Year of Hell. I have written two stories for the fan fiction called My Sisters 3 and A Sub Search both are completed and on here as well under the author name of TeamAllTwilight.  I am also co-writing another story with another author called Lipstick Kisses and Inked Virtuoso, the author name for that story is JessAndTAT.  The story we have coming up will be a great plot line, but I don't want to give away too much on it now.  I am sure that you will enjoy it, as it is goign to have the suspense, and romance that seem to fit well and we seem to both enjoy writing.  Thank you from the bottom of our hearts, Kasi (& Nikky).

Summary:

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Thanks to the lovely and talented vbfb1 for my wonderful banner!  Visit her page and checkout her amazing stories!

To the outside world, including thier friends and family, Edward and Bella are the perfect married couple.  Best friends, since junior high school, turned lovers... the inseparable pair married straight out of college.  They' ve shared everything from their first day of junior high, first school dance, first sexual experience, to the birth of their first child. Join Edward and Bella as the firsts just keep coming.  It will leave you asking, "Are things ever what they really seem?" 

This is my entry for the Twi Kinkfest!

Checkout all the prompts! (some are still unclaimed)
http: //twikinkfest.tumblr.com 

 

The Original Prompt: I´d like to see more lactation fetish fic – I only know of one fic about this, and I´m intrigued. ExB please, all human. Doesn´t have to be hucow, can be adult nursing.  Either or.

Rating: MA/NC-17

Warning: This story contains Infantilism and Erotic Lactation! If kink is not your thing, then you probably should move on!

18 and older please!

DISCLAIMER: TWILIGHT AND ALL ENTAILS, BELONGS TO STEPHANIE MEYER AND SUMMIT. ABSOLUTELY NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT WAS INTENDED!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21376 Read Count: 35389
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2011 Updated: 21 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Remembering How We Got Here...

*swoon*, such a lovely chapter with some lovely loving in the beginning. I liked the many pictures for visual stimulation. That part of Twilight Breaking Dawn 1 was so great. I can't wait to finally see it again and again on DVD (I still have to wait 4 weeks until it is released :( )

Anyway the pictures went really great witht he story and that you offered a little background story to their history was a nice bonus. Especially the quotations of Breaking Dawn, that you remodeled a little bit to fit this purpose.

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

CFoW

 

Lily O'Brien is a hopeful child. Will her special cups of hot chocolate and a new friendship with Dr. Edward Cullen make her greatest wish come true? Aaaaaw moments ahead.

 

*Edward, Bella, Alice, Charlie, Angela

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28639 Read Count: 8913
[Report This] Published: 22 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Really sweet story. Lilly is such a cute character.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This story is truely adorable. The interaction with each character is so sweet. Definitely something you need, when it gray, cold and rainy outside.

Something to warm the hears.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Edward finally maned up and dropped the question. Or slightly. Lily is going to have a real dad. Edward and Bella get their happily ever after, after so much uncertaincy, doubts, hopes.

Nice from Edward to ask Lily's permission to marry Bella.

 

Lets see what the last chapter will bring :)

Summary:

dinner

EPOV of Come Closer Chapter 7, Sugar and Spice.

Edward is late to Isabella's dinner because he fed his secretary an appetizer at the office. When he finally arrives, will he be an invited guest or an entree?

OOC, Characters: Edward, Isabella, Jasper, Emmett, Rosalie


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3432 Read Count: 1092
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 02 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Dinner at the Hales

Pretty interesting O/S. The banner for this and also the summary are pretty intriguing, also when I haven't read 'Come closer' (yet).

The dynamics are funny.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 262605
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Stalking

So they met and talked with each other, more or less.

Bella has really a big heart, when she gives Edward money, when she doesn't have much, cares for her brother and sister and is honest like no other. Like Edward said, not many people would have given the money back.

The "crazy women" (Zafrina) might by psychic but also spot on, what Edward should do. What I find a little bit strange, is Aro's behaviour, when Edward mentioned Bellas name. I first thought, that she might be working for him, but I hope really not.

 

Bella needs probably lots of cassetts, when she is listening to them. I mean normal audio-books have at least 6-10 CDs in a cut-version. For cassetts that number must be even higher.

 

It is going to be interesting, how they will meet/interact in the future.



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!  Nikky and I are proud of the whole story and we love reading the wonderful reviews.  Thanks Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Warning Signs

I just started this story and somehow Edward is really a prick to his family and every other persona. But he is very nice to his students (helping Bree and Riley). 

Hi other "activities" are his own, and at least he safe, that is good. 

Somehow I got the impression, that the cleaning girl might not be able to read, therefore she couldn't understand the notes on the board/desk, to not wipe it away or that it is broken.

 

I also guess, that she is the one that Edward now helped after his heart attack (?).

 

 

I guess it took me long enough to finally start this story, after always seeing the updates.

 

Anyhow great story idea and also very good written. It is a joy to read. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!  Nikky and I are proud of the whole story and we love reading the wonderful reviews.  Thanks Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Walls We Build

Personally I don't know if I want to hit Edward really hard for how he behaves and what he believes, or if I want to show him, not all women are like Tanya or his mother. And now he lets is frustration out on Bella, who isn't at fault at all. The poor thing has enough on her plate and no she is without her 2 jobs (possibly).

I don't know, how he wants to right things with Bella, a start would be giving her a job at his restaurant and pay her decently and perhaps let her clean his house, so that Esme doesn't need to do it and Bella can help her siblings more with the money.



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!  Nikky and I are proud of the whole story and we love reading the wonderful reviews.  Thanks Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Making Amends

To make amends, Edward could also pay Bella the 5 Dollar back, she gave him at the hospital including an interest of the borrowed money. It is not, like Edard can't afford the 5 Dollar including some.

At least he gave her a job (or two), now he can also start teaching her (to read, meaning of the world).

Somehow it is interesting, that Bella can't read but calculating and so is possible. I mean she gave earlier the extra change back, when she knew it was too much.

Bella is like a little guardian angel also for Edward, alsways there to help him and finally to help him, become a better person :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!  Nikky and I are proud of the whole story and we love reading the wonderful reviews.  Thanks Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise

Yeah, I was right, that Bella can't read. Although that is not something to be happy about. It is just tragic, that she never learned to read in todays time. Hopefully Edward can help her get through this.

It is nice to see them together and that Bella is somehow warming up to him.



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!  Nikky and I are proud of the whole story and we love reading the wonderful reviews.  Thanks Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: ABC Easy as 123

Wow, no it makes really more sense, why Edward does not like the company of Rose and Alice at all. Poor guy. Who needs enemies, when having "friends" like this?! And how Bella was treated, no wonder she shied away from everyone. I don't want to think, what will happen, when Alice and Rose learn about Bella and try to take her under their wings. I hope Bella is strong enough for them, and stands up for herself, when they go overboard. I guess with the tale of Edward, she has a good foundation, what is right, and what is wrong.



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!  Nikky and I are proud of the whole story and we love reading the wonderful reviews.  Thanks Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Nicknames

Haha, Edward wearing a bra to help Bella understand, how to put it on and how it works. So funny.

I would say, Edard tries Bella, to open the door to her mothers bedroom and perhaps move from the closet into the room. 

Somehow the 4 of them (Edward, Bella, Leah and Seth) start to become a little family ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!  Nikky and I are proud of the whole story and we love reading the wonderful reviews.  Thanks Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Balls and Bitches

Alice, Rose and Shioban are really some women... Only money counts in their opinion. Thank god, that they didn't know Bella earlier, that would have caused Edward a real heart attack while dealing with them. This Alice is really artificial, such an selfcentered bitch. No words about the desperate whore. There are no words.

Finally Edward realises his feelings for Bella and what she does to him, without realising it, is soo cute :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!  Nikky and I are proud of the whole story and we love reading the wonderful reviews.  Thanks Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: A Cowboy, a Princess, and a Butterfly

I can't imagine, what fun it ws, to right the last few paragraphs. Bella in her innocence doesn't realise what innuendos she is throwing at Edward and he is only a man.

I guess Edward should either set Jasper straight, that Alice totally lied to gain his attention when befriending Edward, or Edward should confront Alice about her behaviour.



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!  Nikky and I are proud of the whole story and we love reading the wonderful reviews.  Thanks Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Break In

Poor Bella, getting her apartement broken in and so many things are stolen. But I personally thing, that someone was on a vendetta against her, I mean, who steals food, the money okay, and trashing the furniture and everything but the food?!

Edward is doing great, is is there for her on her time of need and tries everything in his power to hellp her.

I just hope that Edward and the others can keep Alice and Rose in check. Probably Alice more than Rose, because Rose didn't show any interest in Edward before. But perhaps when Bella arrives with the kids, she warms up. I mean, she is still expecting.



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!  Nikky and I are proud of the whole story and we love reading the wonderful reviews.  Thanks Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Snow Storms

So much happened again. Funny thing, is, that Edward attempted to have the TALK with Bella, at least a little bit. And than the put theory into practice ;)

Hopefully Edward is not too late, so that Bella has no permanent damage.

Great Chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!  Nikky and I are proud of the whole story and we love reading the wonderful reviews.  Thanks Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: A Shocking Situation

This whole situation is really fucked up. I mean James = Harry, Tanya = Sue, Seth and Leah are Edwards children and in the middle is innocent Bella.

Edward should have told Bella probably a little bit earlier.

Sue is unfortunately not out of the picture and Paul has reentered it again.

I never would have thought, that this story would turn out like this. Great work :)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!  Nikky and I are proud of the whole story and we love reading the wonderful reviews.  Thanks Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family

Great ending for a really great story! This story would also make a great book to read over and over again.

The ending was so funny, everyone got their HEA in one way or another.



Author's Response:

This has been a fantastic journey and we are sad yet excited that we finally clicked completed.  Keep in mind to watch out for Enduring His Cimmerian View to update, there are a few of those yet to write and post.  There is not a real posting schedule for those, but they will be written. 

Nikky and I are writing a couple more stories at least together and we hope to see you checking them out too.  We have a stalker story coming soon, as well as a BDSM/Olderward story coming out.  We also have a pretty large one-shot that will post soon, that we wrote for the Forbidden Fruit contest.  We can’t tell you the name of it yet, but there are a TON of great stories entered in the contest.

I started posting the new story collaboration I am doing with Jess2002, it is called Bases Loaded and you can find it under the author name of JessAndTAT.

We again thank you all so much, Kasi (& Nikky)

Summary: Past Featured Story

pt

 

President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

Banner by the lovely vbfb1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Searching for Connections

Edward the possible farther of little Seth, that would explain the hatred Bella has for Edward. A one night stand (possibly drunk) and now she works for him and he can't remember her.

That is going to be interesting.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Career Move

Shoes, words, and probably passion and tension is flying between these two for a long time.

It is going to be fun to see how they treat each other.

I like your nicknames for the characters, which Bella gave Rosalie, Emmett or Jasper.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home

Just started the story. And it is so great. Especially the ending of this chapter. Seth vomiting over the President. The visual is epic. :)

Really funny. I am curious, what will happen next to them and if they will have their happy ending.

I guess it would be good looking, when they hook up for President Edward, with more votes from hopelessly romantic females ;)

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack

This stalker situation is somehow getting out of hand. I just hope, that Edward knows what he does to help Bella and Seth.

The paparazzis are also getting ruthless, but from them it is unfortunately expected.

 

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Demands

They almost kissed. *squeal* Can't wait for it to really happen, but until than I am happy with the high attraction these two have for one another! It is so hot. Alice got aquainted with Jasper, it can't be long until they marry ;)

Until than more verbal sparring from Edward and Bella. It is going to be funny.

I guess Bella does not realyl hate Edward or Prezward but is only trying to turn her true feelings 180° around. Perhaps she has a crush or more feelings for him.

Probably not.

Until the next chapter.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 PJs and Ringing Phones

Perhaps Edward now insists that Bella moves in (temporally) in the White House with him. That way, she has perfect security, he knows, where she and Seth are and Alice could be protected by "Surfer Ken" ;)

 

These nicknames Bella has for everyone are just great.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever  happened to them. ExB AH 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 141569
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A Little Help from My Friends

Nice idea or adaption of the original promt. Edward and Bella are also really cute together, can't wait for them being "together" with his family and the fun they will probably have.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29 May 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Bedroom Confessional

Carlisle and Alice are probably catching up on the meaning of the Claddahagh ring, on which finger it is and in which direction it points. I guess it will be very overwhelming for Bella, planning a theoretical wedding, when in the (near) future the theoretical part will hopefully be deleted.

So much love is already between Edward and Bella, I can't imagine, what will it be, when they know of each others feelings.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Much Ado

Whoho, they are finally enganged, and what a sweet proposal :)

The family will be pleased, now they have to find the perfect dress and everything.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Coffee, Tea or Me?

First kiss and already engaged. LOL at least in theory and a little bit in real life. This is going to be very interesting to see Bella and Edward getting to know each other as well as the romance flow. And I would say, these two have some little chemistry, to make this believable in front of Edwards family (huge understatement of course ;) )

Great chapter! I like your style of writing.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Nancy Drew (verb)

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Take a Chance on Me

We're moving forward, or at least Bella and Edward are.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 5: A Little Traveling Music

It is getting hot in here, especially the chemistry is near to overcooking, but not really just slightly above.

Great that these two get so good along.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 May 2012 Title: Chapter 6: I Trip Through Your Wires

Meeting the siblings turned it meeting the parents (at least half of them). It is really great, that Bella and Edward have connected so great with each other.

Loved it.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: One Down

Rose really knows, how to ruin the fun and get to know each other with her sceptism. 

If Bella and Edward come clean now about their plan, she would see herself confirmed, that their relationship is nothing but a fake.

But somehow they have to tell their family. But perhaps Bella and Edward can change the date, when they have met through the add. I mean they could tell everybody, that the inital idea was this, that Edward was searching for a "fake-fiancee" through an add, but it was long before the actual vacation (not just a week or so before ?) and during their time for dating, they got to know eacht other and somehow fell in love!

That would perhaps earn some romantic-points in the eyes of Esme and Alice and perhaps also of Rose.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Awake My Soul

The end is sooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet. 

I am curious, when they admit their feelings for each other. I mean they hint it all the time. A little talk should help (so I have heard ;) )

Loved the chapter.  :D

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: You're My Best Friend

These two are something else. 

It seems that both, Bella and Edward, had some heart-to-heart-convos with Riley or Rosalie. I hope that now things are clearer. 

 

So now the conversation between Bella and Edward about their feelings and future is in the queue in the beginning. ;)

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Kitchen Witch

A wedding to plan, a life to commit, feelings to communicate, a family get-together to survive. Bella and Edward have lots of things to do. 

 

Hopefully they can start their live in Seattle, where they now live and hopefully Edward can score the job at the hospital with Carlilse's collegue. 

 

Some alone time for Bella and Edward would be much appreciated ;)

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Silent Lucidity

They did it, after lots of cuddling and cute moments before :)

Now the romance can begin and on their wedding day, Edward can propose to her very romantically. And than she can say 2 times yes ;)

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Ring-a-Ding-Ding!

Carlisle is right, if they want to tell the family, how they met in reality they can say it, but if it is private, than nobody needs to know.

Somehow Alice is a little bit over enthusiastic. I mean Edward and Bella are barely engaged and she jumps already on the wedding-waggon. 

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Status

It is getting serious for Bella and Edward. Not much longer and everybody knows about their relationship. Than the engagement, than the wedding, than the pregnancy, than the cute little Bellas and Edwards ;)

 

Well first these two have to say the famous three words.

 

I am curious, how Charlie will react, when they break the news to him.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Executioner's Song

Finally caught up with these two. Well the meeting with Charlie went better than they thought. Hopefully this will stay forever and the harmony between Bellan and Edward will stay or grow.

So lovely. :)

Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411738
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Although I am not really a fan of drabble-fics, I like yours. Sweet short chapters for in between.

Somehow you keep the suspence even with short chapters and I always want more to read.

I guess when Edward spends more time with Bella, talking, touching more talking, that he can get through her mind. And perhaps some piano playing would also help her recovery.

:)

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Bella will not wake up for another week of updates or so. (I know evil), But my guess is, that Edward is able to "enter" her mind again, and they can meet inside of Bella's mind. 

Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Bella trying to prove that vampires don't exists, even in her mind is quiete funny. I just hope, with her run, she doesn't trip. That would be funny for Edward the first moment, until she snapped her ankle or so.

But at least she tried. Perhaps they should wish themself to a beach, so that Edward could show her some sparkling vampire skin.

Starlet by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 129]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan: movie star, beloved icon, and little girl lost. Edward Masen: rising star, former bodyguard and afraid of losing everything all over again. She loves him and he loves her but will their love survive drugs, fame and jealousy? AU/AH ExB

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 231110 Read Count: 71623
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Nightmares

Poor Bella, really to the wrong time at the very wrong place. But she stayed strong, that she didn't partake in the drug using. Edward as her wrong in these hard times is just a great support.

 

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Wrapping Metropolis

Despite what I said earlier about Bella she seems to be very vulnerable. At least she knows, what she does is not right, but doesn't know a way out. 

 

It is definetely going to be intersting how the relationship between Edward and Bella is going to develop.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Darkest before Dawn

Well it was really just a question of time, until Edward snapped. But hopefully they both get now their act together and can move forward. I guess the proposal was the right step in the right direction.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Auditions

Wow, Bella is really a bitch and a slut. Who would have thought. And also Jacob is somehow nothing other than a pimp. it will be interesting to see how Bella changes to the person, that Edward loves.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Bliss

That is going to be an interesting story. Can't wait to see the love between Bella and Edward blossom and how fucked up Jacob made Bella and her way out.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 30 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Things to be Thankful For...

Wow Rosalie is now getting the big guns out. But probably her antics will bite her in the ass, when everything is over and she will be just a sorry memory for all.

Edward and Bella have their plan for the next week out, with the many premiers, that Bella has to attend.

Great chapter. :)

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Around the World in Three Weeks

Finally caught up with this chapter, just took me roughly 3 days.

Anyway, nice that this story got also an update, it was fun to see these two on travelling the world to promote Bellas movie.

I guess, when they "survived" the whole travelling with being stuck to on another, than they should make it also in the future.

I am really excited, when Edward is popping the question of all question, what he as planned :)

Elf on Holiday by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

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Four months have passed since Elf met her Sir and they returned to England. That time has been spent training and preparing her for the next leg in her BDSM journey, which happens now, in the Chelsea Gardens in London. 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5043 Read Count: 3293
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So cool to see the story of Elf continued. It is a shame that some pictures did not work/were visible, they would have been great additional visuals. But the story/chapter itself was nevertheless damn hot.

To see their visit/stroll in the park continued would be great. I wonder what other things Edward has planned for Bella before the showdown, with Makenna.

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 922818
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Now that the "holiday" is over, they have to get back to their "real life". too bad, that they can't leave the island and on with their real lifes with their family and friends.

I really hope they find a way to flee from the island.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Arent't these two just cute. Finally they admitted, that they love each other. Hopefully their ordeal at Aro's Mansion is soon over, and they can also be together.

Within Reach by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 155]
Summary:

For years she's wanted him, fantasized about him, wanting more than he could ever give. He was never within reach... until now.


Who wants to play doctor?


BDSM/Kink/Olderward/Doctor!Kink 


Within Reach


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banner by JA Mash


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21814 Read Count: 44034
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Wishes Granted?

I totally forgot, that you had also this story on ffn. But now that you are posting it also here, it will be easier to follow without the fear, that it will be removed.

Great story so far. I can't wait for more Bella and Doctorward-action.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Awakening

Wow I finally found some time to read this chapter and it is hot, like chili hot. Pretty intense scene for Bella, and my guess is that it was probably not Dr. Cullens (are we talking about Edward Cullen? Because to imagine this with Carlilse is is something totally different) intention that she blacks out on him.

I hope it was not a dream on Bellas side, that would be cruel.

I think she will wake up in Dr. Cullens arms on a different bed, or in the bathtube where he holds her lovingly. Well that would be it for a romantic setting. But I let myself surprise from you.

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So I just started this story, but so far it is really great, well written and a joy to read.

I am really curious what happened to Bella (I guess we can assume, that "wisp" is her ;) ) and how she happen to be in James' Truck and the reason why. 

My guess would be some kind of kidnapping or slavery (?).

That she can't speak (hopefully at the moment) or at least understands what Edwards says is another issue. 

 

It is definetly a touching story and I can't wait to read more :)