Reviews by stinal102
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and the gang are the popular rich kids of Forks high, new teacher Mr. Cullen starts, B wants him right away. What starts out as a passionate affair ends up as a cataylyst for the obsession of a dangerous drug lord to take action. Lemons.

Be warned- this is not your average teacher/student story

Now completed- Thanks to all my readers and reviewers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88667 Read Count: 55121
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26-Epilogue

Wonderful story.  This had so many elements of real life struggles, romance, drama, suspense.  Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it.

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995723
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I've been thinking about getting one of those "things".  This chapter may have helped my decision.  As always, wonderful writing.  Thankyou!



Author's Response:

no harm in trying.. ;) glad I could help!

Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Remarkable chapter!  Darn that cliffy.

Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

That was a wonderful chapter.  Yeah, the cliffy wasn't nice, but this was very well written.  Jim is James Denali and he has to get back at the Cullens for being disowned.  As soon as he sees pictures of the family at dinner, he will know exactly where Bella is.  Try not to keep us waiting too long.



Author's Response:

I will never keep you waiting too long.

thanks for the review

xoxo

Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I am VERY angry with Edward, but he does tend to let his temper rule him.  I believe punishment should be individualized to the person and the crime.  With my children, I have to use different types of punishment because different things make an impact with them.  Edward should really get his EGO and tempter in check.  He already knows how insecure and unworthy Bella feels, and this will not be overcome in a few short months.  She felt rejected her whole life.  What caused Bella to run downstairs crying from her 'nightmare' was losing Alice and Edward's hatred and rejection.  She's already punishing herself for not coming clean sooner.  What if the situation was between Jasper and Edward?  Wouldn't they feel the same loyalty to each other that Alice and Bella do.  I agree that Bella was wrong and the group punishment is perfect.  Bella had a lesser part and was the one to finally do what was right.  Her punishment (if this is all she get's?)  of his hurt, anger, rejection... devastated her.  It is her worst fear.   This caused much more pain for her (much, much more) than Alice's punishment would to her.  It makes me wonder how much she is set back emotionally and the need to build her fragile self-esteem again.

O.K.  I think I'm finished venting.  This was a very well thought out and put together chapter.  I will have to say this is my favorite story.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review and all of your comments are valid! Thank you for the vote of confidence, honey, hang in there, we'll get there. xoxo

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40831
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: On the floor

I really like this story and appreciate the history of the characters.  I regret that I am not well enough to review very often; otherwise, I would review every chapter that I read.  I have very low endurance and extreme fatigue due to Multiple Sclerosis.  Reading doesn't take up near the energy that typing does.  I love reading these stories, so keep up the excellent writing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 7: The Royal Duties

This was a good chapter filled with lots of information.  I'm glad that it shows that Bella is still on Edward's mind.  Can't wait to see if he gets to see/talk with her when he returns to Seattle or does he have to wait until she gets to school in his country.  Good job.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: stinal102 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be

Edward has done it again.  Thinking he knows what's best for Bella and making decissions for her without her knowing.  I tell you what.  Some men need to learn that they can't decide what's best for others; and that someone else can be right.

This is a very good chapter.  I'm glad that this story is not over yet.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  Yes, to me this was very typcial of Edward -- and Bella too.  Two more chapters left to this story -- and an epilogue and maybe an outtake.  We have grand plans, but little time!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?

Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 64022
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2011
Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 17

Great chapter!  Rose sure is full of herself.  Emmet needs to tell her the real story with Edward, but it would awesome to see Esme go off on Rose.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254874
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Good chapter!  I feel sorry for both of them, although I think that it would be a very affective punishment.



Author's Response:

I hope it was effective, poor Edward cant take much more, he needed a nap..lol ...Thanks for reading a nad leaving a comment, I have a  teaser for you...lml

Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”

 

“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.

 

“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”

 

“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.”

Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

This is a excellent story!  I can't believe that I'm just now finding it.  I'm glad that it was rec'd.  In my family if someone is going to be somewhere that's not routine, they always tell someone where they will be.  My in-laws that are in their 80's still do this.  I've always believed this to be courteous and a great added piece of safety.  They can be located easier in case of a family emergency, and if someone doesn't show up when they are suppose to we know where to begin looking.  I can remember only once several years ago this was used.  State troopers were able to locate a spouse when someone went into labor. 

Bella should know better with her experience!



Author's Response:

My family is like that too. Even when my sisters go on a trip. They leave all their travel info...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you

“The phone Bella” I could see him trying to rein in his anger and I knew that had we been anywhere else but this room, I would have been Isabella at that moment.

 

“I turned it off”

 

“You…” Edward didn’t get to finish his statement because I continued to explain.

 

“On the way back, Sally was upset and we were talking and the phone kept ringing and interrupting us, so I turned it off.” He sat there with his head down running his hand through his hair for what seemed like forever before his eyes finally met mine again and he released a long sigh.

 

“Bella..” Edward sighed again “I’m going to give you one more chance to just stay in this room and relax tonight. I’ll bring your dinner up here; we’ll take a long bath and watch TV.”

Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

This chapter did NOT make me mad.  I'm sure it was just as hard on Edward as it was for Bella.  Consistancy and follow through with punishment is very important to children, as well as adults, to have the least amount of confusion.  This also helps create trust and one's security and certainty of their importance.



Author's Response:

Yes! You understand! ...lol...thanks for reading and for the comments ...lml

Summary: Past Featured Story

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New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131145
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life

Can't believe that I'm just now reading this.  Hilarious!!!  I about peed my pants!  Her trying to describe what may be wrong with her truck while he has a hat hanging on his...  I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: From Bad to Unimaginably Worse

Soooo funny!  He thinks she cursed him with man malfunctions!!!  

Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Departures

Wow!  To have three guys like that.  Can't get it out of my mind.

Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Espect

I can just see him scared of a giant dong jumping out at him!!!  Ha, ha, ha, ha...

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334502
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Best read I have had in a long time, and I read ALOT.  Thank you all for taking time to write and post these great stories.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

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Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983316
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

Can't wait for the next chapter.  I have really enjoyed this story.  I can't help but wonder how Alice and Jasper really feel about the trip turning out to be about someone else instead of their upcoming wedding.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478683
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Really enjoying this so far.  Thanks for writing and posting this.

The Wife by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 214]
Summary:

Bella and Carlisle are starting a new life in San Francisco with their adorable boys and supportive extended family. They've been through hell, but they're together. Aren't they? Will they be able to survive life away from Forks? NC-17, AU. The Wife, sequel to The Babysitter.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future , Read Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76251 Read Count: 43325
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2014 Updated: 08 Oct 2017
Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This is a good chapter.  I am disappointed in all of their friends.  If any one of them had been in Bella's place they would have made the same sacrifice.  Michael's behavior is understandable for a child his age.

Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Dr. Gerandy is a piece of work.  He didn't show up for HOURS to check on her condition and then never made the tiniest effort to examine her injuries.  It's a wonder he hasn't been sued years ago.  I don't blame Bella for going after Jake like that.  He nearly didn't check up on the call.  Wow, the professionals in this town need to be replaced.                 I do love this story.

Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

The treatment that Bella is receiving from thier "friends" is completely uncalled for.  Some friends they are.  I can just imagine this making Bella suicidal due to depression.  I think that she would stick around for Tyler.  I hope you cover some of these concerns soon.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Summary:

lci

 

Desperate times call for desperate measures, but how far would you go to escape? How can three men help three girls out of their sticky situations, or help them into them for that matter? Canon, non-canon, everything goes. You have been warned. ExB

 

This will be the only warning given for this story: This story is based on a porn site. There will be plenty of sex. Mixed couples, slash, HET, bi, anal. Basically, anything goes. If you are easily offended, please do not continue.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 86216 Read Count: 192179
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2014 Updated: 06 Jun 2016
Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I am really enjoying this story.  This scene would be a good one to be on camera.

Summary:

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Dancing with the Devil cost Bella a piece of her soul. Will she earn her redemption? Or be lost forever. Sequel to Carlisle's Gift.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76020 Read Count: 33911
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2015 Updated: 27 Aug 2022
Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I want to start by saying that I really like this story.  Bella is right.  Who is taking care of her?  She did what she set out to do; but she is completely destroyed.  I believe that no one knows what to do or where to start.  With Carlisle videoing everything, Edward has to be aware of at least some of the horror she went through.  I'm sure we're suppose to be feeling some rage for Bella at this point.  I can't wait to see how you have everyone help her deal with her reality.

Summary: Past Featured Story

SYTYCD

 

The competition is fierce. Dreams are at stake and a budding romance between All-Star, Edward and contestant, Bella are the talk to of the competition. Not to mention jealousy and bitterness from fellow contestants. Will Bella's dream become a reality or will her dreams be dashed before she even gets a chance to compete? Will Edward open his heart to the sweet brunette who captured his attention at the auditions?

 

"And America's Favorite Dancer is..."

 

 

Banner by the talented Mina Rivera

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ON HIATUS


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 209773 Read Count: 45865
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2015 Updated: 30 Nov 2016
Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Nightmare Come to Life

I love this story, but why did you have to do that to Bella?  She worked hard only to lose everything (as far as she is concerned).  Renee probably doesn't care that she is going to prison, just that she stopped Bella from dancing.  She could have just caused the accident and killed a man.  Just not ended in Bella's injuries being so drastic.  That would have upset Renee.  I know that this gives a big hurdle for Bella and Edward to overcome, but DANG.