Penname: telaviv [Contact] Real name: mona
Member Since: 16 Oct 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

hi


iam mona


iam studying medicine n iam frm india


i enjoy reading and listening 2 music


iam a huge fan of twilight,HP & superman


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Uprising by allforkedup Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 424]
Summary:

Kidnapped into slavery, Edward tries his best to work diligently in order to avoid punishment and keep his wife safe.  Nothing about his life is his own, not even the intimacy between him and his Bella... and she, too, could be taken away at any time.  What happens when he has no choice but to make a big 'mistake'?  What will the punishment be?  Will it break him?  Inspired by the song 'Uprising' by Muse (which I think has a stupid video).

Contains adult situations and language; please do not read if you are under 18.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181405 Read Count: 60447
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

EAGERLY ANTICIPATING BELLA'S REACTION

MAN, THAT WAS A SIMPLY SUPERB SAVE OUT THERE-BURUNDI,WOW!

I NEVER GUESSED

GREAT WORK



Author's Response:

Gosh, thanks so much!  I really didn't know how I was going to accomplish the save; I actually did research into extradition treaties, LOL!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 127301
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)

Alien Attack!I really pity Humans right now;They are barely surviving with Vampires present,now with Aliens on loose........MWAH!



Author's Response:

Lolol. Hey! Those Vampyrcients are Vampires too!.

Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: A bit of a tease

WOOT!Short, but its better than nothing;

Is it disloyal of me that I can't choose between Lulkis and Edward?

(But if its absolutely necessary,I may be a good little Lamb and go for E;LOL)

Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Red Sky (Part Two-Mini)

Ok Ladies,Get ready to have your ass kicked if you don't update fast;)

That was a Evil Motherf***ing Cliffie;

Have Mercy on my poor nails.....! 



Author's Response:

*Laughs hard* WE'RE COMING WE'RE COMING!!!

Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Red Sky (Mini part 3)

:)

This chapter was soooo sweeet;

The relatonship between them,his tenderness....Awwww....!

You successfully captured the Romantic mood,inspite of the underlying Tense atmosphere;



Author's Response:

Thanks so much =) 

Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Urge

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS STORY

PLEASE UPDATE FASTER



Author's Response:

Thank you soooooo much!!!

I'm hoping to have a chapter up next week for this story.

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

I liked this chapter;Thanks for continuing this story;It has one of the most dominant motherfuckers i've read

Happy New Year;Party hard;Be safe;and update Very Soon

Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

UH OH! Emmett!Now how will Edward save Bella?

I never wanted to bitchslap Jasper as much as i do right now

Carlisle is so barbaric;That scene gave me the jeebees



Author's Response:

lmao I'd love to bitch slap Jasper. j/s

 

Carlisle is a twisted vamp. Very dark, but then again, you'll see that about Esme too... very soon.

 

Thanks for reading! We appreciate it!

 

Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

Yeah,but they still travel around in a spaceship,which makes them Aliens;LOL!

Summary: Past Featured Story


In August of 1931, almost two years after the disastrous stock market crash on Wall Street, Bella's wealthy family suddenly find themselves broke and homeless in New York City. She is sent to live on her birth father's struggling farm in Oklahoma and soon the pampered, well-to-do city girl is forced to face life as a poor country bumpkin. The transition will not be easy for the overindulged sixteen year old. To make matters worse, choking dust storms, a dangerous drought and the hiring of a handsome but hardheaded homeless man will complicate Bella's life even further.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 105878 Read Count: 23823
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2011 Updated: 30 Jul 2013
Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Oh Edward!Isn't he a handsome rascal?

We see very few playful Edwards;he is always being Emoward;

So seeing Edward in mischief mode is such a relief and a pleasant surprise;

I always keep checking my mail for your update;

Thank you for posting inspite of the shittiest week you had; 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, telaviv!

Even though I do enjoy a little Emoward myself, I wanted my Edward to be mischievious  :)

Hopefully, I will post the next chapter by the end of this week.

Thank you for reviewing :o)

Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Chants *UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE*



Author's Response:

Awww! Believe me, I'm working hard on it :o)

Make sure you read my chapter notes when I finally post Chapter 10.  All kinds of awful things have been happening to our family this week (don't worry -- nothing serious -- just lots of bad luck).

Hope your enjoying the story :)

Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

PHEW!Thank God you resolved their crisis immediately and not dragged it out for another 20 chapters,with them avoiding each other and using other people and keep getting jealous!It makes me want to hurl!

            And the moment with Charlie was like Awww! 



Author's Response:

LOL!! I know what you mean, telaviv!

However, to keep things interesting between Edward and Bell, there will be times when they are upset/angry with each other and will give each other the silent treatment.  Also, there will be no love triangles included in this story but jealousy will rear its ugly head occasionally on both sides........

Yeah, I think Bella is going to be a daddy's girl for sure :o)

Thank you for reviewing!!

Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15B

DON!DON!DON!The Plot thickens!

and Bella and Edward teasing each other in front of Charlie is so Awww!

And Alice is such a cookie,with a crystal ball no less!



Author's Response:

Oh, the teasing.....Mmmmm. 

I am going to have fun with Alice's character.  She really is an oddball!!

Thank you for reviewing :o)

Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

UGH!Why doesn't he reassure her?!

Now,both must be thinking one regrets being with the other;

Please clear up the confusion soon!

I liked Esme's character;Carlisle,eh?

can't wait ;) 



Author's Response:

Ugh -- men! Don't you just wish they could read your mind sometimes???

As for Carlisle --- I think a certain midwife and the new doc are going to be crushing on each other very soon.  Mmm....mmm....good!

Thank you for reviewing :o)

Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

HAHAHA!Bella is such a Teenager!LOL!

and Edward deserves a BIG HUG!

Um.....Are you going to use Carlisle to make Edward jealous??!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!! Glad you enjoyed that chapter -- yes, Bella really does act her age, doesn't she???? 

No, Carlisle and Bella won't be getting it on (unfortunately). 

Thank you for reviewing :o)

A Motherīs Advice by maymay74 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 249]
Summary:

Bella met Edward. Then, after a few dates, she got pregnant and married him. But now they re fighting against their family and more people who just don't want them together. Bella feels she's repeating her parents story. Would a package from the past be the help she needs?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116319 Read Count: 37400
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 15 Mar 2016
Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Epilogue 1

Loved it!!!!

Please update soon



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Twenty five years ago the quiet town of Forks witnessed the massacre of the Cullen's cult. Now the FBI has a new lead, and rookie agent Isabella Swan comes to investigate. What will she find?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Mysteries & Thrillers
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46161 Read Count: 20703
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2014 Updated: 24 Feb 2015
Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue II

Loved it so much!!!

Murder in Forkshire by maymay74 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 69]
Summary:

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England, 1926. Edward just came back after his father's death. Isabella Higginbotham just finished her education. Both came back to the little town of Forkshire to begin what they consider will be a boring life, or so they believe...


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Mysteries & Thrillers
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31537 Read Count: 9199
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2014 Updated: 16 Jan 2015
Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue

Loved it!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Mister Fancy Pants and Busy Bee are like oil and water, they do not mix. They're competing for top academic spot at Forks HS when fate intervenes. Busy Bee has a secret and when it comes to light it changes everything. Bee's been doing it tough but this girl is no push over. Omniscient 3rd person (wtf that means). There's some humour in here too. AH, HEA, mostly canon.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102709 Read Count: 37028
[Report This] Published: 09 Dec 2014 Updated: 23 Feb 2020
Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 aftermath

Loved loved loved it so much!!!!

 

The Secrets We Keep by phillips Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 88]
Summary:

Little white lies never hurt anyone right? Especially if it's to protect the ones you care about from worrying. 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53036 Read Count: 14935
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2015 Updated: 31 Aug 2015
Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Loved it!!!!

Please update.....

Summary: Past Featured Story

Be'lah is a sorceress, and prophesy foretold her part in freeing Prince Ehd'Wyrd and his family from their curse.  She failed.  Now Ehd'Wyrd and J'spurr are no longer human, but fully dragon.  Be'lah died to destroy the dragon gateway, and she was reborn as the fiery fi'nyx.  

Again she is wrapped up in prophesy, as the displaced dragons need her to lead them home.  There is another gateway in the Faen realm, and Alyss is herself a fairy.  It should be a simple quest to map a pathway through Faen, and take the dragons back home.

Nothing is ever as simple as it seems.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102563 Read Count: 4300
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2015 Updated: 15 Dec 2015
Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Broken Door

Loved it so so much!!!

Hope  the sequel is in Bella's pov.....

Can't wait for it...

Summary:

WKiaS

From the moment of her birth, Edward Masen has had a soft spot for Isabella Swan, a servant taken in when tragedy strikes her family. As she grows, so do Edward's feelings, but life seems to throw up a string of impediments. When an opportunity presents itself, he must act carefully if they can be together in the light of day. Age of Edward 2015 entry.

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Historical, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11975 Read Count: 3070
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2016 Updated: 04 Jul 2016
Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it!!!

Summary:

A man who has seen to much in life to question, returns home to his family after serving his country. However  he can't forget what he saw. Sworn to secrecy, but unable to forget, He prepares his family  for dooms day,  even if at times  they  think he's crazy.  What would you do to prepare? 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61656 Read Count: 7426
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2016 Updated: 22 Mar 2016
Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Loved it a lot!!!!

Can't wait to read the next chapter.....

Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Loved it so much......

Looks like calm before the storm

Please update soon

Cullenworth Manor by phillips Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 235]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward is promiscuous and totally self absorbed. He is the eldest child, the heir to  his father the Duke of Bedford title. Because of this his parents turn a blind eye to his ways. They belief once he's married he will settle down.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44693 Read Count: 45886
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 13 Jun 2016
Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Loved it!!!

Reviewer: telaviv Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Has he decided already??

 Can't wait for tomorrow....