Reviews by phoenixhunter47
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625045
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: phoenixhunter47 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I'm glad that Carlisle got what was coming to him.

I find that I actually feel sad for Edward now. He's made changes in his attitude, and I know he's still made mistakes, but he's tried so hard, and he loves Bella so much - really loves her. She's not just property to him now.

It worries me a little that you say "Bella will have her happy ending"... Does this mean that she will get to have her real life back? College and her house in Phoenix? Her aunt and uncle etc?? But that she has to forfeit her Edward to have it?

That Edward has to sacrifice his happy ending so that Bella can have hers? *sniffle* That the remaining Cullen family will have to say goodbye?

The very possibility totally breaks my heart after all we've been through with these characters.

I'm looking forward to seeing how you end the story now. With one chap plus the epi left, I'm excited to see how the HEA(s) play out.

Thanks for the update, bb x