Reviews by Twilight123e
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625413
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Twilight123e Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Perfect ending.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I hope you'll check out my other stories.

Reviewer: Twilight123e Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41

Carlise is really fucking messed up. wow. He thinks its okay to share Bella with Edward and he plans to have a child with her, thats really sick.

This story is really great! I'm loving the new Edward and how he is with Bella, I hope she gets to write!

Esme is such a strong woman to take all the shit she had in her life. I want to know the secret to her garden.

CPOV was really intresting, i hope nothing bad happens with Demetri...



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked hearing what goes on in his fucked up brain. I hope you understand Esme's secret and aren't too disappointed.

Reviewer: Twilight123e Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Wow this story dark. If i was Bella I would kill Edward. Hit him over the head with a knife while serving him his 'dinner' and i Carlise needs to die he one twisted bastard. This story makes me relise about abouse and human trafficing and how we all think the slave trade ended with emancipation and Abraham Lincoln but we never know how many young women like myself might be in Bella condition. It makes me appreciate my family and the home I grew up in, with parents and a brother who support me in my decisions in life and let me be who i want, get any job that I want and love anyone I want.

I hope edward changes his ways and maybe sets Bella free, i just have to wait till the end. I like Jasper but why no one moved away from Carlise yet? And Emmett annoying and i hate that he so insecure about his own 'manhood' he won't let Rosalie work on cars. Your story shows the Charaters we all know and love in a totally diffrent way which is nice for a change.

I hope you read my review

xoxo



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story. Carlisle controls his family by carrying the loans on their businesses and Edward's education. If any of them were to move away or turn their back on him, he'd ruin them financially. Give them time.